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Shital ka Samarpan (Alternate Plot)
#1
Shital ka Samarpan...yeh story bahut hi popular thi aur writer ne behat acha likha tha...writer ne story ko complete kiya toh tha but main story ko ek dusra angle k upar le jana chata hoon....is story main kuch existing character honge aur kuch naye characters...

Story k character:

Shital : Ek 23 saal ki jawan ladki
Vikas: Shital ka pati
Sanjana: Shital ki behan...Age 20 saal
Wasim: 55 saal ka buddha
Maqsood: Wasim k aage ka lekin bahut hi badsurat
Aslam: Wasim aur Maqsood se umar main badha
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WAITING next
VIsit my story  

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#3
Story Ab Tak:

Shital 2 din se Wasim se nahi chudi thi. Vikas 2 din ki chutti leke ghar aaya tha aur apni Patni k saath tha. Shital apni sareer Wasim ko soup chuki thik lekin apni patni ki duties nahi bhuli thi aur 2 din Vikas ki dekh bhal kiya. Shital chaati thi Vikas usse chode lekin Vikas ko time nahi mila. 2 din k baad chut bechain thi chudne k liye..chut se pani jharne ki tarha beh raha tha...Vikas k jaane k baad shital itni garam ho gayi thi ki use kisi bhi halat main lund chahiya tha...usne wasim ko phn lagayi lekin uska phone nahi lag raha tha.
Shital Wasim ko apne paas bulane chati thi taki Wasim use chod sake aur uski chut ki garmi thodi kam ho....2 din se Wasim ka virya bhi toh nahi mila tha usse....(Wasim k upar gussa hoke) Phone toh kabhi inka lagta hi nahi...kaha hai aap Wasim..aapko kaise batayu meri kya halat hain.
Kuch der aur try karne k baad Shital k phone rakh diya. Woh khud apni haath se apni chut ragadni lagi.
Fir Shital ko Maqsood ka khayal aaya. Maqsood bhi Shital ka paati tha aur usse bhi Shital ki jism pe pura haq tha. Maqsood ka phone baaja aur Maqsood ne phone receive kiya.

Maqsood: Arey meri jaan kaisi hai?
Shital: Bas achi hoon...aap ko toh meri yaad hi nahi aati.
Maqsood: Aisa nahi hai...yaad bahut aati hain...itni aati hai ki din main 3-4 bar mut marna padta hai....chaadi main safed nishan cha gaye hain
Shital: (Hasti hui) Aap bhi na
Maqsood: Sach main jaan tu yeha hoti toh dikha deta chaddi ka haal. Kya main abhi aa jao tere paas
Shital: Nahi Nahi...abhi aap yaha mat aiyye...bola tha aapko logo ko shaque ho jayega toh problem ho jaygi
Maqsood: Janta hoon jaan isiliye toh khud ko rok k rakha hoon.
Shital Maqsood se baat karte waqt apni chut ko khud hi ragad rahi thi
Shital: Acha aap nahi aa sakte toh kya hua main aaj aati ho aapse milne k liye
Maqsood ka lund khada ho jaata hai. Shital khud uske paas aa rahi thi chudne k liye....yani ki bina kuch kihe use chut milne waala tha
Maqsood: Sach meri jaan....tune toh is murde main jaan daal di. Acha toh sun main ek hotel main room leta hoon aur address bhej deta hoon zaldi se pauch jaa.
Shital: (Man hi Man soch rahi thi kaise main ek randi ki tarah kisi hotel main jane k liye taiyaar ho gayi) Thik hai..lekin kisi aise jaga milte hai jaha pe hume koi jaane wala nahi hoga
Maqsood: ok jaan
Shital: ok bye
Maqsood: Acha ek aur baat...
Shital: sun rahi hoon
Maqsood: Tuna kuch sexy kapde pehenka aana plz
Shital: ok dekhti hoon
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#4
Congratulations for thread
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#5
Contd:

Shital puri nangi thi aur ayene k samne khadi hoke yahi soch rahi thi ki kya pehne...kyunki uski pati ne usko khud sexy banne k liye kaha tha isiliye woh thodi aur soch main pad gayi thi...use bhi yeh pata tha ki kapde sirf use hotel main room ke ander jaane tak pehna hai fir toh nangi hi rehna hai....

Shital bahut soch k baad uske dimag main ek idea aaya jisse woh khud haas padi...uske almari main Sanjana k kuch kapde the woh nikalne lagi...Sanjana k sareer Shital se thodi choti thi aur agar Shital uski kapde pehengi usse toh woh aur short lagenge...
Shital ki najar ek skirt pe gayi...yehi ek short skirt thi...lekin koi dusre short skirt se alag thik kyunki uski behen yehi skirt pehenke apni boyfriend Rahul se chudne gayi thi. Shital ne skirt uthali. Kuch din pehli apni behen jo skirt pehenke apne boyfriend se chudne gayi thi aaj did bhi wahi skirt pehenke apne yaar se chudegi...yeh baat soch k Shital sharma gayi....

Usne woh Skirt aur ek top utha liya aur apni bra panty leke bathroom main chali gayi...usne shower on karke nahana suru kar diya...nahate waqt uske dimag main maqsood chaya hua tha....aaj toh wh khud Maqsood ko apna badan soup e gi toh Maqsood kya kya karega uska saath yehi soch k Shital apni chut sahla rahi thi..soch te soch te uska pani nikal gaya....Shital fresh hoke apni kapde pehenne lagi...Short Skirt and aur top main Shital qayamat lag rahi thi...bahut din k baad usne western clothes pehne the aur use bhi acha lag raha tha....

Fir woh ghar se nikli aur taxi leke Maqsood k bheje gaye hotel k liye rawana ho gayi...

Maqsood ek ghatiya sa hotel book kiya tha.. jaaga bhi bahut gaanda tha...us hotel main log randi baazi karne aate the. Maqsood bhi kya baar randiyo ko us hotel main laya tha chodne k liye...lekin yeh hotel aisi jaga pe tha ki koi kisi ko janta nahi tha isliys shaque hone chance nahi...shital k liye safe tha...

Maqsood hotel reception main pehle pauch gaya aur ek deluxe room book kiya. Hotel ka manager Maqsood ko achi tarah jaanta tha kyunki Maqsood bahut saadi randi ko leke waha jaata tha...

Hotel Manager: Kya Maqsood bhai bahut din ho gaye aaye huye.
Maqsood: Haan...woh kaam bahut tha na
Hotel Manager: Aaj koi nai chidiya aane wali hai kya
Maqsood: Haa...lekin special chidiya hai...samjha...chal ab jaldi se room ki chabi de
Hotel Manager: Fir toh mazaa hi mazaa...yeh lo aur aish karo

Hotel Manager yeh soch raha tha ki is buddhe kya chidiya milega use nahi pata tha ki Shital Sharma jo ki ek padi likhi house wife hain woh aa rahi thi Maqsood k liye...Shital jo ko godi thi behat khub surat thi aur sundarta ki misal thi woh aa rahi Maqsood se chdune k liye....

Maqsood upar chala gaya aur Shital ka wait karne laga...

Kuch he der main ek taxi aake hotel k saamne ruki aur Shital niche utri...Woh taxi wale ko paise dekhe hotel main ghus gayi...Maqsood ne use Room Number bhej diya tha isliye use direct room ne jana tha...

Hotel Manager toh Shital ko dekh k pagal ho gaya....ek godi jawan ladki jo ki sirf ek top aur skirt pehni huyi thi....skirt bahut hi choti thi aur shital ka jaange dikh rahe the...top bhi bahut chota aur nabhi se kafi upar tha....nabhi ekdum saaf dikh raha tha...yeh keh sakte ki Shital ka gora pet pura khula tha....

Shital reception pe aake ruki....
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#6
Super update
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#7
Awesome update bhai... yeh story msine bhi padi thi aur mujhe iss story mei maqsood hi sabse mazedaar character laga tha ...aapne sahi shuruvat ki hai...

Waiting for moreer
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#8
इस कहानी का पहला भाग उपलब्ध है ?
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#9
Update plz
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#10
nice point of view .. but small suggestion, you should keep your pace slow that we could enjoy the situation and her so called 'samarpan' that make the story more not just erotic but lively.
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#11
Maqsood ne ek hotel book kiya jaha woh aur Shital bharpur chudai kar saake....Aag barabar ki thi...Maqsood ne kahi dino se Shital ko nahi choda tha aur Shital bhi do din se bhukhi thi...Shital toh chahti thi Wasim se chude lekin Wasim ka phone nahi lag raha tha isiliye Maqsood se milne ka soch li...
Shital, Maqsood k diye gaye hotel pe pahuch chuki thi aur woh reception pe khadi ho gayi...Ab aage...

Hotel Manager: Shital ko upar se niche tak ghurte huye...kahiye Madam?
Shital: Ji Mujhe room 69 jana hai
Hotel Manager: (Muskurate huye...kyunki kuchi der pehle Maqsood Room 69 main jaa chuka tha) Ok aapka naam or number diary pe likh dijiye
Shital: Aage badke apni details bhardi aur room ke direction puchi
Hotel Manager: 1st Floor
Shital: Ok, thanks aur woh 1st floor ki taraf badi
Hotel Manager: Madam ek minute, hume aapka age verify karna hoga..aapka paas koi ID hain
Shital: kyun age kyun chahiye?
Hotel Manager: Ji yeh humara hotel ko rule hai
Shital: ok, yeh lijiye Voter Card
Hotel Manager: Card liya, fir woh ek najar Card pe lagi picture main dala aur Shital ko fir upar se niche ghurne laga. Uski najar Shital ki nabhi k jaake atki aur woh use dekhte hi reh gaya
Shital: Shital ne notice kiya ki Manager uski nabhi dekh raha hai lekin usne dakhne ki koshish nahi ki. Ho gaya verification?
Hotel Manager: Acanak se Shital k aawaz sunne pe woh ghabra gaya aur firse Card dekhne laga. Haan ho gaya yeh lijiye. Aab ja sakti hai
Shital: (Gusse main) First Floor ki taraf chal padi jaha uska yaar intezar kar raha tha

Room 69:
Maqood ne desi daru kharid k laya tha aur 2 peg mar chuka tha tabhi room ki ghanti baji...Maqsood ki chehre main khushi cha gaya...Woh daur k darwaaze k paas gaya aur darwaaza khulte hi samne Shital khadi thi....Maqsood ne Shital ko dekhte hi pagal ho gaya....Shital jaise gharelu ladki jo ki shaadisudha bhi thi ek short skirt or choti si top main uske saamne khaadi thi...Top toh uski kaafi choti thi aur pet pura dikh raha tha...Maqsood jaldi se Shital ko khich liya aur darwaaza bandh kar diya

Shital aandar aayi aur bag niche rakhte hi Maqsood se piche se uska haath khicha aur Shital ko apne taraf ghuma liya....Dono ek dusre ko dekh rahe tha aur fir dono k hoth judh gaye...jaise do premi barso k baad mil rahe tha....

Scene bahut hi garam tha....ek side pe Maqsood ek ghatiya insaan jsiki umar Shital ki baap ki umar ka hoga...ganja sir...aur kaala badan...aur badan se bhi badbu...abhi abhi desi daru k 2 peg mar chuka tha isliye uske muh se bhi baadbu aa raha tha aur aur dusri side pe Shital jaisi jawan ladki...jiski bali umar aur kasa huya badan...behat khubsurat aur komal badan...Maqsood Shital ki hoth choos raha tha...Maqsood k muh se gaanda smell aane pe bhi Shital bhi usko josh main chus rahi thi...done ki muh se hawa bhi na nikle...2 minute tak garam smooch chalta raha fir Maqsood ne Shital ko choda....Shital ka lipstick gayab ho chuka tha aur Shital k hoth pe Maqsood ne mohar laga chuka tha

Shital: (Aapne aap ko samalte huye) Aap ko aur koi hotel nahi mila tha kya? Kaisi gaanda jaga hai yeh?
Maqsood: ( Wapas ek peg banate huye) Arey meri jaan yeh sabse achi jaaga hai yaha pe koi kisika nahi jaanta hai
Shital: Woh toh thik hai lekin yaha ka Manager bahut ghatiya insaan hai...kaise mujhe ghur raha tha
Masqood: Ab tu aise kapde pehenke uske samne jayegi toh woh aapne aap ko kaise samalega
Shital: (Sharmate huye) aap bhi na
Maqsood: (3 peg hath main lete huye sofe pe baith gaya) Aaja meri jaan
Shital Maqsood k saamne khdai thi aur woh khub apni top aur skirt utardi...

Ek jawan ladki khud Maqsood k samne aise kapde utar rahi thi yeh dekh kar Maqsood ko lauda ekdum se khada ho gaya...Maqsood Shital ko dekh k pagal ho gaya....woh sirf ek bra aur panty main khadi thi...

Shital aage badi aur Maqsood ki godi main baith gay....Shital khud Maqsood ko kiss karne lagi...pehle uske mathe pe...fir gal pe aur pe hoth pe ek halki ki kiss diya....Maqsood ne apna glass table pe rakha aur Shital ki bra ka hook kholne laga...Lekin Maqsood thik tarike se khol nahi pa raha tha
Shital bananaHaaste huye) Aap bhi na...ekdum buddhu ho...aur khud apni bra k hook khol diye

Maqsood ne bra ko ekjatke main Shital ki badan se alag kiya aur ek kone main fek diya....Maqsood k samne Shital k gore boob khule padha the....
Maqsood ne bayi chuchi ko muh me le liya aur dusre haath se dayi chuchi ko masalne laga...Maqsood jor jor se Shital ki chuchi chusne laga

Shital: Aaaah Aaaaah, Zara dhire kijiye na kahin bhagi toh nahi ja rahi hoon
Maqsood bahut behrahmi se Shital ki boob chus raha tha....usne uska pura boob aapna muh main ghusane ka kosish kar raha tha....Aapni thuk se gila kar raha tha...chat raha tha...chus raha tha...usne nipple ko apne hotho k bich leke jor se chusne laga...aise chus raha tha ki jaise dudh abhi nikal laye

Shital garam ho rahi tah aur uski chut gili hone lagi...uska haath apne aap Maqsood k sir pe chale gaye...Maqsood k gaanje sir k upar hath sehlane lagi...
Maqsood k jee bhar k bayi chuchi chus ne k baad dayi chuci pe hamla suru kiya...dono chuchi ka buda haal tha...Shital ki aankhe baandh ho chuki thi aur sirf siskariya bahar aa rahi thi....Maqsood ka lund aab Shital ki gaand ko chune laga tha...
Maqsood ne Shital k dono chuchiyo ko chus chus k laal kar diya tha....Maqsood ne sir upar uthaya aur Shital k kandhe pe chumna suru kiya...
Shital ki ek kaan main halke se kaatne bhi laga...Shital ki chut puri taraf se gili ho chuki
Maqsood ne Shital k kaan k paas jake bol pada: Saali aapni Panty toh utar

Shital sharma gayi aur Maqsood ki kaan main jaake boli: Mujhe sharam aati hai
Maqsood: Sharam gayi tel lene...raandi apni panty utar aur aapne chut ko mere saamne pesh kar

Maqsood ki gaandi gaaliya Shital ko aur garam kar rahi thi

Shital Maqsood k godh se uth kar khadi ho gaya...Sirf ek Panty main Khadi thi khusurat jawan Shital Sharma....
Shital ne apne dono haath panty k elastic pe dali aur Panty niche kar di....Woh pura tarah Panty khol di...
Shital nangi ho chuki thi....Uski gori chikni shaved chut Maqsood k saamne tha....lekin Shital sir jukaye khadi thi....

Maqsood Ek haafsi darinde ki tarah Shital ki chut ko dekh raha tha...usne Shital ki chut ko dekhte huya ek haat aage badhaya...Shital aapni haath aage badhake apni panty Maqsood ki haath main thama diya....
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#12
Zabrdast kahani hai. Isko ab diffrent ho rakhna
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#13
Super update
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#14
Wink 
Bhai story super hain... No issue... But kya story pahala update bhi hain?
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#15
Bhai original story mil Sakta hai??
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#16
Mast!!!
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#17
Shital k haath se panty lene k baad Maqsood panty toh kuch der tak niharta raha...Shital ko yeh dekh aur sharam mehsus hone lagi...koi uski panty ko usi k samne aise dekh raha tha isse Shital ko thora ajeeb lag raha tha lekin chudai ki aag uske aandar bhi kafi thi isiliye use Maqsood ka yeh behaviour bhi garam kar rahi thi....
Maqsood ne panty ko apne nak k paas le gaya aur usse se sunghne laga...aise sunghne laga jaise ki ek nasha ka cheez ho...aur kyun na sunghe...Shital jaisi Jawan aur kadak mal ki panty thi....jisme chut ki mehek bharpur matra me tha...panty main Shital ka chut raas bhi laga hua tha...Maqsood 2-3 bar sunghne k baad panty toh chat ne laga...
Shital: chi yeh aap kya kar rahe hain...kyun usse muh main lagata hai kya
Maqsood: (Shital ki panty se uski chut raas chatte huye) Isne jannat ki khusbu hai meri jaan
Shital: Kya sab ajeeb harqate karte rehte hai...aur rakhiye usse...aise karne se mujhe aur sharam aa rahi hai
Maqsood: kisse rakh du?
Shital: Woh woh...meri
Maqsood: (Ek bar fir uski panty ko sunghte huye) bol na meri jaan kya rakh du
Shital: Meri panty ko (Aur khud aapne haath se apna chehra dhakh li)

Shital uski samne nangi khadi thi uski chikni chut ko pesh kar rahi thi lekin fir bhi sharma rahi thi aur yeh ada Maqsood ko aur garam kar diya...usne panty ko fek diya aur ek pal main khada ho gaya aur Shital ko apni godi main utha liya aur bed k pass jaake usko bed main lita diya

Shital usse gaur se dekh rahi thi...Maqsood bhi hawas bhari najar se use dekh raha...done k bich kuch baat nahi ho raha tha sirf dono ek dusre ko dekh rahe tha...Maqsood Shital ki shareer ko nihar raha tha....

Shital ne apne legs ko side kiya aur aur ek haath le jaake apni chut ko khud khol diya....Shital khud apni chut khol rahi thi Maqsood k liye...woh bhi apne pati ko apni badan ka sukh dena chahti thi...aur woh janti thi Maqsood ko abhi kya chahiye tha....
Shital apne ungliyo se chut ki lips ko alag karke Maqsood ko swagat kar rahi thi...
Shital: Aise kya dekh rahe hai...aiyye na
Maqsood aage bada aur aur Shital ki chut main apna gaanda muh rakh diya aur Shital aur Shital ki muh se aaah nikal gayi....
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#18
superb continuation....

keep posting
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#19
nice dear
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(22-01-2019, 10:18 PM)secretsanta Wrote: Shital ka Samarpan...yeh story bahut hi popular thi aur writer ne behat acha likha tha...writer ne story ko complete kiya toh tha but main story ko ek dusra angle k upar le jana chata hoon....is story main kuch existing character honge aur kuch naye characters...

Story k character:

Shital : Ek 23 saal ki jawan ladki
Vikas: Shital ka pati
Sanjana: Shital ki behan...Age 20 saal
Wasim: 55 saal ka buddha
Maqsood: Wasim k aage ka lekin bahut hi badsurat
Aslam: Wasim aur Maqsood se umar main badha


do u have the original story?
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