20-11-2019, 11:44 PM
awseome story and screenplay
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Fantasy The Ultimate Power (featuring Multiple Actress)
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20-11-2019, 11:44 PM
awseome story and screenplay
21-11-2019, 12:25 AM
Super hot update. It's probably hard in a mind controlled setting where the women is probably not going to react how she would normally but it would be nice to have more descriptions of what's going through the female mind or like a more detailed description of the event going on(like the cock reached deep piercing her womb) or something like that. Thanks for writing this story!
21-11-2019, 02:29 AM
good update bro keep on going
21-11-2019, 06:57 PM
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21-11-2019, 07:01 PM
(21-11-2019, 12:25 AM)Smad1979 Wrote: Super hot update. It's probably hard in a mind controlled setting where the women is probably not going to react how she would normally but it would be nice to have more descriptions of what's going through the female mind or like a more detailed description of the event going on(like the cock reached deep piercing her womb) or something like that. Thanks for writing this story! Thanks for the detailed feedback, appreciate it. So far, the womens were closer to him hence they easily accepted their commands without much resistence. But that won't be the case always, soon enough our hero will try his power to a random stranger and watch what happens.
22-11-2019, 04:16 AM
(21-11-2019, 07:01 PM)MrGhostRider Wrote: Thanks for the detailed feedback, appreciate it. Oho just the thought of that is making me hard. Can't wait!
22-11-2019, 10:38 AM
22-11-2019, 07:42 PM
Buddy I'm like literally addicted to your stories man.. I keep shuffling between your two threads ....all the stories are monumentally mindblowing stories ;)
22-11-2019, 08:16 PM
Nice. Keep going on!
23-11-2019, 06:59 PM
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**moved**
23-11-2019, 08:05 PM
23-11-2019, 08:26 PM
Give us big update your update is so short
23-11-2019, 09:34 PM
24-11-2019, 07:27 AM
24-11-2019, 09:27 AM
26-11-2019, 02:34 AM
(24-11-2019, 09:27 AM)MrGhostRider Wrote: That's always one of my fears - If I leave too much gap between the updates, people will forget the story and move on. :-/ Please give us long update take if you want take 1 month between each update but short update are making me lose interest and also previous updates from old xossip |
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