16-01-2019, 07:08 PM
In Update number 10 you wrote...inhi dino komal ne ek naukarani....probabaly you meant Chanchal
(16-01-2019, 07:08 PM)komaalrani Wrote: In Update number 10 you wrote...inhi dino komal ne ek naukarani....probabaly you meant Chanchal
(17-01-2019, 03:55 PM)kamdev99008 Wrote: thanks dear for reposting of the magic mirror...Thank you dear.... But thoda bahut waqt hai is kahani ka.. bahut jald ye kahani khatm karke apni agli story ko aage badhaunga... Filhaal meri nyi kahani ki taraf readers ka koi khaas jhukav nhi aa rha ...Is kahani ka ant shayad mujhe mere readers se kitna support milega is baat ka andaza to de hi denge..
is kahani me bhi naye mod a rahe hain....
wo anjan shakhsh kaun hai aur kya chahta hai... naturally gusse me hai to ya to apna fayda ya chanchal ka nuksan chahega....
raghunath kya karega... kyonki uska jikr kisi khas wajah se hi hua hai
aur last me.... sameer .... ye to flirt hai... lekin chanchal impressed hai
dekhte hain
(19-01-2019, 11:41 AM)M¡Lf€@TeR Wrote: Wah vai wahh... maza aaya padke
dialogues kafi realistic aur natural thi...
(19-01-2019, 11:54 AM)Silverstone93 Wrote: Good update.. story ko achhe se build kiya hai. Waiting for new update
(19-01-2019, 02:08 PM)Black boy Wrote: Good update.gif bhi situation k anusar Dali h
(19-01-2019, 07:58 PM)kamdev99008 Wrote: badhia situation
chanchal ab sameer ki ore kadam badhayegi
abhi sarita ki kahani baki hai....
lata aur driver ke raj bhi khulne hain....
keep it up
(20-01-2019, 01:07 PM)Silverstone93 Wrote: Update kab tak aayega??