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16-01-2019, 05:11 PM
(This post was last modified: 16-01-2019, 05:12 PM by Rocksanna999.)
दोस्तों बड़ी मुश्किल से मुझे मेरी कहानी the magic mirror फिर से प्राप्त हुई है। इसे मैं यहां पोस्ट कर रहा हूँ। उम्मीद करता हूँ कि आप मेरी इस कहानी को उतना ही प्यार और साथ देंगे जितना कि आप बर्बादी को निमंत्रण कहानी को दे रहे हौ।।।
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In Update number 10 you wrote...inhi dino komal ne ek naukarani....probabaly you meant Chanchal
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thanks dear for reposting of the magic mirror...
is kahani me bhi naye mod a rahe hain....
wo anjan shakhsh kaun hai aur kya chahta hai... naturally gusse me hai to ya to apna fayda ya chanchal ka nuksan chahega....
raghunath kya karega... kyonki uska jikr kisi khas wajah se hi hua hai
aur last me.... sameer .... ye to flirt hai... lekin chanchal impressed hai
dekhte hain
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Wah vai wahh... maza aaya padke
dialogues kafi realistic aur natural thi...
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Good update.. story ko achhe se build kiya hai. Waiting for new update
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Good update.gif bhi situation k anusar Dali h
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badhia situation
chanchal ab sameer ki ore kadam badhayegi
abhi sarita ki kahani baki hai....
lata aur driver ke raj bhi khulne hain....
keep it up