Request to writer - can you please update the index on Page 1?

(29-12-2024, 08:26 PM)erotichorny71 Wrote: Exclusivity of Shipra to just one guy is what makes the sex taboo and hot.
If she becomes available to every tom,dick and harry in the story,the magic of this story gets lost.
Let her be a reluctant participant,aroused by circumstances,in the sex episodes.

You didn't get me.. Shipra is not a character that is available to every one.. I had asked writer to create a situation in which there are intimacy between Shipra and Salim.. but tht situation should be justified..and I suggested this because I have faith in the incomparable talent of the writer.. Our writer is the only one on this planet who can do this magic.. May be when Shipra realize tht PATODE is just using her.. She herself moves forward in her aim and tekes the support of people like Salim.. and in return of support gives what every man craves for.. This story has so much potential..

Waiting for shipra's gaand opening ceremony

Very nice. Shipra is now free in all means.

Shipra should not be only exclusive to Patode... It is not a love story. It is Shipra's ordeal... Shipra should fuck multiple men

Update should be more frequent or long

Come soon with a detailed episode of how shipra outdoes namrata in making patode happy.

Everyone will expect for update today...
But I am sure we won't get it
This is the curse of tia website
Story will reach to high level and will be left on a high point after which we won't get any update on the story..

I hope and wish author dnt follow tat

If author plan to continue I will say shipra shd not be dominant..because till nw she was decent now if she became dominant it won't be nice to watch..shw shd be submissive

I would like to see shipra asking for more and more that patode unable to cope up and it hurts his male ego and finally give up saying you deserve to be a whore and nothing less and want to punish her by changing her as whore.

(05-01-2025, 08:15 PM)Victorjohnson Wrote:  If author plan to continue I will say shipra shd not be dominant..because till nw she was decent now if she became dominant it won't be nice to watch..shw shd be submissive

Just for a few moments,not for ever,to show how deviant she can be.
Spitting in his mouth,holding his hair hard,making him lick her armpits.....something like that.
Before Patode takes charge again and retains the balance.

Namratha

The author should be awarded an Oscar for legendary storytelling. I can't wait for the older characters like dhaba owner Salim and Mr toppo to fuck shipra and make her their own personal whore. Shipra is a unique slut and should be given an opportunity to taste older cocks because patode seems to be a bit out of her league after he ejaculated too early in a challenge in earlier chapters due to shipras committed blowjob. I'm sure Shipra is looking out for that specific dick that can satisfy all corners of her vagina. It's not about the length but the perfect dick and foreplay that matches shipras sexual prowess and perversion. I don't think Patode qualifies because Shipra needs a big old perverted dick to satisfy her hidden urges. She needs an experienced dick and not only a bigger one like patode's. Unlike Namrata who is a slave to patodes bbc, Shipra needs an older cock with experience who can not only mentally fuck her but also drip her pussy juices without any physical touch.

It will not be surprised  if we dnt get any update hereafter because this is the nature of this site

bro please put next update early i mean tonight or early in the morning tomorrow

(06-01-2025, 12:14 PM)Victorjohnson Wrote: It will not be surprised  if we dnt get any update hereafter because this is the nature of this site

It's disappointing for you to say that to Suraj... Till now he has been the best author update wise, time wise and story wise .

Author said he was busy with work all last week, Generally bank people are very busy with quarter and month end. Suraj seems a legit bank employee and writing his experience adding spice to it... Think he is matches Patode in real life ....

(06-01-2025, 08:24 PM)bittu0211 Wrote: It's disappointing for you to say that to Suraj... Till now he has been the best author update wise, time wise and story wise .

I didn't tell about a perticular person...this is the fate of this website..tats wat I said

(06-01-2025, 02:25 AM)maharsha25 Wrote: The author should be awarded an Oscar for legendary storytelling. I can't wait for the older characters like dhaba owner Salim and Mr toppo to fuck shipra and make her their own personal whore. Shipra is a unique slut and should be given an opportunity to taste older cocks because patode seems to be a bit out of her league after he ejaculated too early in a challenge in earlier chapters due to shipras committed blowjob. I'm sure Shipra is looking out for that specific dick that can satisfy all corners of her vagina. It's not about the length but the perfect dick and foreplay that matches shipras sexual prowess and perversion. I don't think Patode qualifies because Shipra needs a big old perverted dick to satisfy her hidden urges. She needs an experienced dick and not only a bigger one like patode's. Unlike Namrata who is a slave to patodes bbc, Shipra needs an older cock with experience who can not only mentally fuck her but also drip her pussy juices without any physical touch.

Yes I also think SHIPRA needs some old and experienced Milf hunters like SALIM.. And If the author also put some sexfull of Hindi dialogue between intimacy would be more kinky i think...

(06-01-2025, 08:28 PM)bittu0211 Wrote: Author said he was busy with work all last week, Generally bank people are very busy with quarter and month end. Suraj seems a legit bank employee and writing his experience adding spice to it... Think he is matches Patode in real life .... [image]

Sahi pakde ho.. ??