05-12-2018, 09:43 AM
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Fantasy NagMani---part 1
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05-12-2018, 09:43 AM
Dosto ye story xossip pe chalu thi...
Lekin mai yaha suru se start karunga... Taking sabko smj aaye...
05-12-2018, 09:44 AM
Dosto me jyada se jyada 2 din me 1 update de paunga....
Aur ha kal aur parso intro aayega... Uske baad update...
05-12-2018, 11:20 AM
Let's start the Story Harry.......................
All the best
Love You Guys
LOLO
06-12-2018, 09:22 PM
Intro...
Jaysingh Suryavanshi:-Hero Pratapsingh Suryavanshi:- Hero's Father Shalinisingh Suryavanshi:- Hero's mother Virendrasingh Suryavanshi:-Hero's grandfather Paramsingh Suryavanshi:-Hero's Brother... Varshasingh Suryavanshi:-Hero's Sister Surajsingh Suryavanshi:-(Hero ke chacha) Mamtasingh Suryavanshi:-(Hero ki chachi.) A.S.F(Antic security Force) (Note:-iski sthapna hero ke dadaji me ki thi kus deso ke sath milkar) (America, England, France, Russia, South Africa and India) Hero's Friends... (Ye sab bhi A.S.F ke Agents he Hero ke sath) Charles... (Mysterious character) Prakash Rathod Mrinal Rathod(ye dono pati patni he) Vishal Rajput Tanya Rajput (ye dono bhi pati-patni he) Tony Roy Rony Roy..(ye dono bhai he) Guest character... Dinu Dracula.. (W.S.F ka Agent he...aur hero ka dost he...) W.S.F( world security force) Heroin... Shivanshi(ye ek nagin he...) Avnisingh Rathod..(Heroin 2) Avnisingh ki family... Dr.Dadaji...(avnisingh ke dadaji) Bhai ka intro de chuka hu... Aur koi nahi he parivar me... (Uske mom-dad ki death ho chuki he) Villain... Shakal(mysterious character) Boss 2 (shakal ka gulam) Main Villain.. Chandravanshi.... Boss 1(inka gulam) Kevadsingh...(Hero ke fufa) Chayasingh(Hero ki bua) Rocky Singh(kevad ka beta) Nitasingh(kevad ki beti) Dilawar Singh thakur(mama) Kaminisingh thakur(mami) Rubalsingh thakur (dilawar ka beta)
06-12-2018, 09:24 PM
Intro 2
Chandravanshi... Raja Drushayntsingh.... Kunwari Bhairavsingh....(Drushayntsingh ka beta) Karuna singh....(Drushayntsingh ki beti) Mirajsingh....(Drushayntsingh ka Bhai..) Vanishing..... (Mirajsingh ki biwi) Kunwar pravinsingh....(mirajsingh ka beta...) Shivvansh(nago ka 1 vansh) Nagraj.... (Nago ke Raja) Vansh(Shivvansh ka Naag....jo Shivanhi se pyar karta he) Garudvansh(nago ka dusra vansh) Garuda...(garudvansh ka Raja...) Katani...(garuda ka senapati...) Kevad Singh family.... Maheshsingh Chaudhary.... (Kevad ka Bhai) Aartisingh Chaudhary..... (Maheshsingh ki biwi) Aayush Singh Chaudhary... (Maheshsingh ka beta) Sangitasingh Chaudhary... (Maheshsingh ki beti) Kevad aur dilawar ke dost.... Boss1.... Balvant thakkar... Karim Khan... Kalpesh mevada... Balvant thakkar ki family... Pooja thakkar...(balvant ki biwi. ) Naresh thakkar... (Balvant ka beta) Priya thakkar...(balwant ki beti) Karim Khan family..... Shabana Khan....(Karim ki biwi) Nadeem Khan....(Karim ka beta) Kalpesh mevada ki family.... Paresh mevada..(kapesh ka Bhai.. Paresh ki biwi ki maut ho Chuki he) Kailash mevada...(kapesh ki biwi) Kinjal mevada...(paresh ki beti..) Mayur mevada...(kalpesh ka beta) Abhi bhi character baki he... Vo kahani me intro aayega...
07-12-2018, 05:44 PM
Congrats for new story
Wating for 1 Update
08-12-2018, 08:34 PM
Update 1
1 jungle ke under karib 50 log ja rahe the... Unme se 40 guard the... 1 head tha...2 uske under kaam karne vale...baki ke 8 log mese 2 log history professor the... Baki 6 unke under kaam karne vale... Head....professor 1 kya hum sahi direction me he..???? Professor 1.....ha ... Professor 2.....(aapne antistant se.).... Tum pise mark kar rahe ho n???? Sab antistant.... Yes sir.... Head....nakshe ke hishab se hum manjil ke najdik he.... Professor 2 ...yes sir.... Head A1.....kya sir vo patthar me itni taqat he... Professor 1.....ha..aur aese 7 patthar he...agar in sab milaya jaye to is duniya ki sabse badi taqat hasil kar sakte ho.... Head....professor 2 Hume to abhi 1 Hi Milne vala he baki 7 kaha he???? Professor 2....sir vo sab alag alag jagah he...UN sabka naksha bhi alag alag he...ye patthar mil jaye to baki ke bhi mil jayenge... Aese sab aage badh rahe the...ki achanak mausam badlne laga...aage 1 pavan ki aandhi ban gayi thi.... Head.....professor 1 ye kya he..???? Professor 1....muje bhi smj me nahi Aa raha he.... Thodi der baad fir se mausam badlne lagta he...aur samne ki pavan ki aandhi me se 1 aakruti bahar Aa rahi thi... Dhire dhire vo aakruti spasht ho gayi.. Vaha 1 ladka khada tha...hath me talvar liye...face pe mask...kapde pure black... Vo chalta hua inke najdik pahunch jata he.... Head....kaun ho tum????aur ya kya kar rahe ho???? Ladka....mai jo bhi hu...bs itna kahunga ki aap sab ab yaha se vapas chale jaye...varna aanjam bhot bura hoga... Ye baat sunke pahle to sab bahot darne lagte he.. Lekin fir bhi head himmat karke bolta he.... Head....mere Charo aur dekho 40 bodyguard he...aur tum akele...kya kar loge.???? Ladka.....(haste huye)....vahi purana dialog ....hahahahahaha inme se koi muje 6u bhi nahi sakta....aur mai sirf ek baar bolta hu dusri baar nahi... Head....inke hato me dekho sabke hath me hitack weapon he...aur inka mukabla 1 talwar se karoge.... Ladka....sorry time up....ab khel suru... Itna kahke vo daud laga ke sidhe jo 4 guard najdik the unke paas pahunch ke UN Charo ke sar dhad se aalag ho jate he... Ye itni jaldi hua tha...ki kisiko kus malum Hi nahi hua... Sab dar to jate he lekin fir bhi vo firing karne lagte he... vo ladka kabhi is tarah to kabhi us taraf jump lagake aage badhte huye un ko khatam karta ja raha tha... Vo in sab ko Mar raha tha tabhi kus gurd 6upke pise jakar uspe fir karne vale hote he ki UN sab par goliya chal jati he... Vo side 4 ladke bhi goliya chalte huye UN guard ko marte huye Aage badh rahe the... Sab mare ja chuke the... Sivay head aur professor 1 ke... Unko vo 5 ladke Charo aur se gher lete he.... Ladka professor 1 ke paas Jake.... Ladka 1.....naksha.... Professor bhi dar gaya tha.. To vo chup chap naksha de deta he.... Ladka 1 vo nakshe ladka 2 aur ladka3 ki aur dete huye... Ladka 1.... Prakash aur vikash ise jala do.... Vo head ke paas jata he... Ladka1...bol ab Tera kya karu....???? Head....plz muje jinda sod dijiye... Ladka1 ....sorry ab vo to nahi ho sakta.....lekin agar tu batade ki tere pise kaun he...???? To sayad tuje sod sakta hu.... Head....muje nahi pata ki vo kaun he....??? Vo sirf phone pe Hi interaction deta he.... Ladka 1....to fir tum kisi kaam ke nahi... (Vo ladka 4 aur ladka 5 ki aur dekhkar)...rony aur tony khatam karke sab saman custody me leke vo saman mrinal aur Tanya ke paas bhejdo... Aur in sab lasho ko aag laga ke...sab kus sahi kardo.... Fir vo aapna Bluetooth on karke... Ladka1....mrinal jo saman he usko pahle puri tarah se check karna...fir head quarter le Jana ...smj gayi.... Mrinal.... Ji..aur 1 mission successful A.S.F ka... Ladka1....hmmmm Mrinal.... Congratulations jay.... Jay.....tnx....chalo tum rakho mai in sabki madad karta hu... Aur vo call katne vala hota he ki tabhi.... Tanya....wait...wait... Tumhare personal no pe tumhari Chachi ka msg aaya he.... Jay....kya he msg me????? Tanya.... Urgent... Bs itna Hi likha he.... Jay....thik he ...tum sab head quarter report kardo mai yahi se sidha ghar jaunga.... Ye kahke phone kat karte he.... (Abhi ke liye itna Hi)
29-12-2018, 07:47 AM
nice start aise hi likhte rahiye concept bhi mst he aapke agle update ka intezar rhega
01-05-2024, 10:44 AM
Nice starting continue
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