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Desi Erotica is Love
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SHIDDAT
Writer/Author- Herotic
![]() Desi Erotica is Love
05-05-2026, 01:44 PM
(This post was last modified: 07-05-2026, 12:36 PM by Herotic. Edited 3 times in total. Edited 3 times in total.)
EPISODE 1
Jumme ki dopahar thi. Bahar bheed dheere-dheere kam ho rahi thi. Hina ne apne dupatte ko saleeqe se sar par odha aur bheegi hui seedhiyon se neeche utri. Bahar halki boondabaandi shuru ho chuki thi. Tabhi ek kaali SUV uske paas aakar ruki. Window glass neeche hua, aur Siddharth ki muskurahat dikhayi di. "Baarish ho rahi hai, bheeg jaogi. Aao, baitho." Hina thoda hichkichayi, aas-paas dekha, aur phir furti se agli seat par baith gayi. Car ke andar ki khushbu Hina ke liye bahut jaani-pehchani thi, wahi perfume jo Siddharth barson se laga raha tha. "Ibadat poori hui?" Siddharth ne car aage badhate hue puchha. Uski awaaz mein ek ajeeb si narmi thi. "Haan," Hina ne dheere se kaha, apne haathon ko aapas mein ragadte hue. "Par bahar ka mausam dekhkar lag raha hai ki aaj thodi der hone wali hai." Siddharth ne ek chhoti si muskan ke saath use dekha. "Shayad main bhi yahi chahta hoon ki thodi der ho hi jaaye. Tumse bahut kuchh kehna baaki hai, Hina." Siddharth ne dheere se car ki raftaar kam ki aur use sadak ke kinare ek ghane bargad ke ped ke niche khada kar diya. Bahar baarish ab tez ho chuki thi, jiski boondein car ki chhat par ek laybaddh sangeet paida kar rahi thi. Andar ka mahol bilkul shant tha, bas AC ki halki sarsarahat sunayi de rahi thi. Hina chupchap khidki ke bahar girti boondon ko dekh rahi thi, lekin uska dhyaan kahin aur tha. Siddharth ne seat se thoda peeche jhukte hue uski aur dekha. "Yaad hai Hina? Woh chhat wala purana kona?" Hina ke chehre par ek pheeki si muskan tair gayi. "Kaise bhool sakti hoon Sid. Hum ghanton wahan baithkar apni chhoti si duniya ke sapne dekhte the. Tum bade dhyaan se sunte the aur main tumhe apni adhoori kahaniyan sunati thi." Bachpan ki woh yaadein aaj bhi utni hi taaza thi. Dono ke ghar ek hi deewar se sate the. Jab bhi shaam dhalti, dono bahaane banakar apni-apni chhat par pahunch jaate. Samaj aur dharm ki deewarein tab itni oonchi nahi lagti thi jitni aaj mehsoos ho rahi thi. Siddharth ko yaad aaya woh din jab pehli baar unke beech ki dosti ne ek naya mod liya tha. "Tumhe yaad hai hamari woh pehli k….?" usne shararat bhari nazron se puchha. Hina ne sharmakar apna sir jhuka liya. "Wo kaise bhool sakti hun main, woh toh bas..." "Woh hamara pehla kiss tha, Hina," Siddharth ne uski baat kaat-te hue bade pyaar se kaha. "Patang udaane ke bahane hum us store room ke peeche chhipe the. Bahar tumhare Abbu ki awaaz aa rahi thi aur hum darr ke maare ek-dusre ke itne kareeb aa gaye the ki dhadkanein saaf sunayi de rahi thi." Hina ko woh ehsaas yaad aaya. Kaise Siddharth ne kaampte hue uske gaalon ko chhua tha aur phir bahut dheere se uske maathe aur hothon ko choom liya tha. Woh pal kisi ibadat se kam nahi tha. Uske baad toh jaise ek silsila hi chal pada tha. college ke peeche wala bageecha ho ya tuition ke baad ka woh khaali cafe, ve chhote-chhote kisses aur ek-dusre ka haath thaamna hi unki sabse badi taaqat ban gayi thi. Car ke andar ki chuppi ab gehri hone lagi thi. Siddharth ne apna haath badhaya aur Hina ki thuddi ko dheere se pakadkar apni ore ghumaya. Hina ki aankhon mein nami thi, jisme purani yaadon ka dard saaf dikh raha tha. "Siddharth, kya hum phir se wahi purane bacche nahi ban sakte?" Hina ki awaaz ladkhadayi. "Jahan koi yeh nahi poochta tha ki hum kaun hain, bas yeh maayne rakhta tha ki hum saath hain." Siddharth ne bina kuchh kahe uski aankhon mein jhaanka. Use mehsoos hua ki bhale hi waqt badal gaya ho, haalat badal gaye hon, lekin unki rooh aaj bhi wahin atki hai jahan unhone pehli baar ek-dusre ko mehsoos kiya tha. Usne dheere se Hina ke chehre se girti zulfon ko hataya. Hina ne apni aankhein moond li. Gaadi mein purani yaadon ki jo dhundh chhayi thi, woh achanak ek chhoti si halchal se toot gayi. Siddharth ne apni jacket ki jeb se phone nikaalne ki koshish ki, tabhi zor se haath lagne ke kaaran ek chhota sa chamakdar packet fisalkar seedhe Hina ke pairon ke paas ja gira. Bahar girti baarish ki awaaz ke beech, car ke andar ek pal ke liye sannata aur gehra ho gaya. Hina ki nazrein neeche gayi. Kaale aur neele rang ka woh Durex ka packet car ki mat par saaf chamak raha tha. Hina ke chehre ke bhaav ek pal mein badal gaye, pehle hairani, phir halka sa shock aur phir ek gehri khamoshi. Usne apni saansein rok li. Use umeed nahi thi ki Siddharth ke paas is waqt aisi koi cheez hogi. Siddharth ka chehra ekdam se safed pad gaya. Uska haath hawa mein hi jam gaya jaise woh us packet ko waapas jhapatne ki himmat na juta pa raha ho. "Oh... uh... woh..." Uske muh se bas yahi nikla. Hina ne dheere se apna chehra doosri taraf khidki ki ore ghuma liya. Bahar baarish ki boondein kaanch par fisal rahi thi, lekin andar uske gaalon par ek surkh laal rang utar aaya tha. Usne apni unglion se apne dupatte ke kone ko zor se bheencha liya. Uski dhadkanein ab car ke engine se bhi tez sunayi de rahi thi. Usne bhale hi chaunkne ka naatak kiya ho, lekin uske chehre par ek blush tair gayi thi jise woh chhupane ki nakaam koshish kar rahi thi. "Hina, dekho... mera matlab woh nahi tha," Siddharth ne hadbadahat mein packet uthaya aur waapas apni jeb mein thoons liya. Woh buri tarah hakla raha tha. "Woh asal mein... parson Rahul ki party thi na? Usne mazaak mein daal diya tha. Main... main toh bhool hi gaya tha ki yeh yahan hai. Sach mein!" Siddharth ne baat ko taalne ke liye steering wheel ko zor se pakda aur saamne khaali sadak ko dekhne laga, jaise woh duniya ka sabse zaroori kaam kar raha ho. "Waise, baarish bahut tez ho gayi hai na? Lagta hai humein yahan se nikalna chahiye... warna ghar par sab poochenge ki itni der kyun hui." Hina ne abhi bhi uski taraf nahi dekha tha, lekin uski dheemi awaaz mein ek shararat bhari mithaas thi. "Itni safayi dene ki zaroorat nahi hai Sid. Mujhe pata hai Rahul kaisa hai." Usne thoda sa ruk kar apni aankhon ke kone se Siddharth ko dekha, jo paseene se tar-batar ho raha tha jabki AC poori raftaar par tha. "Lekin tum itne dare hue kyun ho? Maine kuchh kaha kya?" Siddharth ne raahat ki ek thandi saans li, lekin uski sharmindagi abhi kam nahi hui thi. Woh jaanta tha ki Hina uski ghabraahat ko bhaanp chuki hai. Usne car start ki, par uska dhyan abhi bhi apni jeb mein rakhe us chhote se packet par tha, jisne is safar ki hawa mein ek ankahi bechaini aur ek ajeeb si nazdeeki ghol di thi. Siddharth ne jaise hi car ka gear badalne ke liye haath badhaya, Hina ne dheere se apna haath uske haath par rakh diya. Uski chhuan thandi thi, lekin usmein ek aisi zid thi jisne Siddharth ko wahin rok diya. "Abhi nahi, Sid... thodi der aur," Hina ne phusphusate hue kaha. Uski nazrein abhi bhi bahar sadak ke kinare bheegte pedon aur dhundhli roshni par tiki thi. Car ke kaanch par jamti bhaap ne bahar ki duniya ko aur bhi ojhal kar diya tha, jisse andar ka mahol aur bhi private ho gaya. Siddharth ne engine band kar diya. Sannata phir se chha gaya, jise sirf baarish ki boondon ki tap-tap tod rahi thi. Desi Erotica is Love
05-05-2026, 02:58 PM
(This post was last modified: 05-05-2026, 02:58 PM by rajeev13. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
All the best for your new story :)
05-05-2026, 03:58 PM
Desi Erotica is Love
06-05-2026, 07:21 AM
Please make it a mazhabi story
06-05-2026, 04:14 PM
Desi Erotica is Love
07-05-2026, 07:45 AM
07-05-2026, 12:01 PM
(This post was last modified: 08-05-2026, 01:17 PM by Herotic. Edited 2 times in total. Edited 2 times in total.)
EPISODE 2
Hina ne apni ungliyon se khidki ke kaanch par jami bhaap par ek tedha-medha nishaan banaya. Usne apni gardan nahi ghumayi, lekin uski awaaz mein ek aisi khanak thi jo Siddharth ne pehle kabhi nahi suni thi. "Woh... jo abhi tumhari pocket mein gaya..." Woh ruki, jaise sahi shabd chun rahi ho. Siddharth ki saansein atak gayin. "Hina, maine kaha na woh bas..." "Use aise hi rakhe rahoge?" Hina ne uski baat kaat-te huye kaha. "Mera matlab hai... kya uske expire hone ka intezar hai? Ya phir kabhi uska istemal bhi hoga?" Yeh sunte hi Siddharth ke kaan laal ho gaye. Use yakeen nahi ho raha tha ki yeh wahi sharmeeli Hina hai jo abhi kuchh der pehle ***** padhkar nikli thi. Yeh seedha-saadha signal tha, ek aisa ishaara jise samajhne ke liye kisi aur saboot ki zaroorat nahi thi. Siddharth ne ghabrahat mein ek baar phir apni jeb ko tatola. Uske haath kaanp rahe the. Usne koshish ki ki woh kuchh cool sa kahe, lekin uski zabaan ladkhada gayi. "Main... main... woh toh... matlab, agar tum..." Woh apni baat poori nahi kar paaya aur sharmakar apna sar steering wheel ki taraf jhuka liya. Uske chehre par ek gehri muskaan thi jise woh chahkar bhi nahi chhipa pa raha tha. Hina ne ab dheere se apni gardan ghumayi aur Siddharth ki ore dekha. Uski aankhon mein ek nayi chamak thi, dar aur chahat ka ek mila-jula ehsaas. Usne dekha ki kaise Siddharth jaisa bebaak ladka aaj uske ek jumle se paani-paani ho raha tha. "Itne sharminda kyun ho rahe ho?" Hina ne bahut dheeme swar mein kaha, uska chehra ab Siddharth ke kaafi kareeb tha. "Hum ajnabi toh nahi hain. Aur aaj yeh mausam... yeh tanhai... shayad yeh sab kuchh kehna chah rahe hain." Siddharth ne apni nazrein upar uthayin. Hina ke chehre par wahi noor tha, lekin ab usmein ek samarpan bhi tha. Car ki chhoti si jagah mein un dono ki saansein ek-dusre se takrane lagi thin. Siddharth ko samajh aa gaya tha ki ab shabdon ki zaroorat khatm ho chuki hai. Usne dheere se apna haath Hina ke gaal par rakha. "Hina, main nahi chahta ki tum kabhi kisi dabaav mein mehsoos karo." Hina ne apni aankhein moond li aur uska haath thaam liya. "Dabaav nahi, Sid... yeh mera faisla hai." Car ke bhitar ki hawa jaise bhaari ho gayi thi. Hina ne achanak apni seat belt kholi aur bijli ki tezi se Siddharth ki ore jhuk-kar use kaskar gale laga liya. Uski baahein Siddharth ki gardan ke chaaron ore itni mazbooti se lipti thin, jaise woh duniya ki tamaam bandishon se bhaagkar is iklaute surakshit thikaane mein chhip jaana chahti ho. Siddharth ek pal ke liye thithka, lekin agle hi pal usne bhi apne mazboot haathon ko Hina ki kamar ke chaaron ore lapet diya aur use apni baahon mein bheencha liya. Hina ka chehra Siddharth ke kandhe mein chhipa tha, aur uski ***** waali woh bheeni-bheeni khushbu Siddharth ke rom-rom mein bas rahi thi. "Sid..." Hina ki awaaz uske seene se takrakar goonji, "Mujhe darr lagta hai ki kahin yeh sab ek sapna na ho. Bahar ki duniya bahut zaalim hai, ve humein kabhi is tarah baithne nahi denge." Siddharth ne uske sar par apna gaal tikaya aur gehri saans li. "Jab tak main hoon, tumhe kisi se darne ki zaroorat nahi hai. Yeh jo baarish hai, yeh tanhai... shayad ***** bhi chahta hai ki aaj hum sirf ek-dusre ke hokar rahein." Hina ne apna sir upar uthaya. Uski aankhein nam thin, lekin unmein ek aisi aag thi jo barson ki dabi hui chahat ko bayaan kar rahi thi. "Toh phir der kis baat ki hai?" Usne phusphusate huye kaha. Siddharth ne apni ungliyon se Hina ki thuddi ko upar uthaya. Dono ki nazrein ek-dusre mein ulajh gayin. Dooriyan ab khatm ho chuki thin. Siddharth dheere-dheere neeche jhuka aur uske honth Hina ke kaanpte huye honthon se ja mile. Yeh ek gehra aur roohani lip-lock tha. Shuruat bahut dheemi aur naazuk thi, jaise do ajnabi ek-dusre ki sarhadon ko pehchaan rahe hon. Lekin jald hi barson ka intezar ek junoon mein badal gaya. Siddharth ke honthon ki garmi Hina ke vajood mein utarne lagi. Hina ne apni aankhein kaskar moond lin aur Siddharth ke baalon mein apni ungliyan phansa din, use aur kareeb kheenchte huye. Baarish ki boondein car ki chhat par shor macha rahi thin, lekin andar sirf unki saanson ki awaaz thi. Dono ek-dusre ke swaad ko mehsoos kar rahe the, Siddharth ke honthon par us chai ka halka sa swaad tha jo usne dopahar mein pi thi, aur Hina ke honthon par ek ajeeb si maasoomiyat. Yeh chumban keval shareerik nahi tha, yeh do alag-alag duniyayon ke milan ka elaan tha. Jab dono kuchh palon baad alag huye, toh dono ki saansein phool rahi thin. Hina ke chehre par ab sharm nahi, balki ek ajeeb sa sukoon tha. Siddharth ne uske maathe ko chooma aur dheere se kaha, "Tum meri ho Hina, hamesha ke liye." Hina ki saansein ab Siddharth ke chehre par garam hawaon ki tarah takra rahi thin. Car ke andar ka tapman jaise achanak badh gaya tha. Hina ne dheere se apna haath neeche ki ore badhaya, jahan uski ungliyan Siddharth ki pant ki zip se takrayin. Ek pal ke liye woh ruki, uski dhadkanein uske gale tak mehsoos ho rahi thin. Siddharth ne ek gehri saans li aur apni aankhein moond lin. Hina ne kaanpti hui ungliyon se dheere-dheere zip ko neeche khiskaya. Us zip ki sarsarahat ki awaaz us shaant car mein bahut saaf sunayi de rahi thi. Jaise hi zip khuli, Hina ki ghabrahat aur utsah dono charam par the. Usne dheere se kapde ko thoda hataya, aur Siddharth ka Lund uske saamne tha. Woh ek pal ke liye thithak gayi, uski aankhon mein hairani aur ek ajeeb si kashish thi. Woh haanfne lagi, uski chaati tezi se upar-neeche ho rahi thi. Uske gaalon par jo surkhi aayi thi, woh ab uske poore gale tak phail gayi thi. "Siddharth..." usne bas itna hi phusphusaya. Usne apni hatheliyon ko dheere se lund par rakha. Woh garm aur sakht mehsoos ho raha tha. Hina ne apni ungliyon ko uske chaaron ore lapeta aur bahut dheere se sehalane lagi. Uski chhuan mein ek maasoomiyat thi, lekin usmein ek chhipi hui chahat bhi thi jo ab dheere-dheere bahar aa rahi thi. Siddharth ke muh se ek halki si aah nikli, jisne Hina ko aur bhi saahas de diya. Usne apni pakad thodi mazboot ki aur upar-neeche ek lay mein use masalne lagi. Use mehsoos ho raha tha ki kaise uska sparsh Siddharth ke shareer mein ek bijli si dauda raha hai. Bahar girti baarish ki boondein aur car ke andar ka yeh nazdeeki pal, dono ko ek aisi duniya mein le ja raha tha jahan samaj ki koi bandish nahi thi, bas ek-dusre ko mehsoos karne ka junoon tha. Siddharth ne apna haath Hina ke sar par rakha aur uski zulfon ko apni ungliyon mein phansa liya. "Hina, tum jaanti ho na tum kya kar rahi ho?" Hina ne upar dekha, uski aankhon mein ab koi hichkichahat nahi thi. "Main bas tumhe apna banana chahti hoon, Sid. Aaj aur hamesha ke liye." Car ke cabin mein chhayi dhundh aur bahar hoti moosladhaar baarish ne un dono ke liye ek aisa sansaar rach diya tha jahan samay jaise thehar gaya tha. Hina ka haath Siddharth ke lund par sthir tha, lekin uski ungliyon mein ek ajeeb si halchal thi. Woh use bahut gaur se, lagbhag aascharya ke saath dekh rahi thi. Uske liye yeh sab kuchh naya tha, ek aisa anubhav jise usne keval kalpanaon mein hi socha tha. Hina ne apni ungliyon ki poron se lund ke upri hisse ko bahut komalta se chhua. Uski twacha resham jaisi mulayam lekin andar se faulaad jaisi sakht mehsoos ho rahi thi. Jaise-jaise woh use sehla rahi thi, Siddharth ke shareer mein ek siharan daud jaati, jisse Hina ka aatmavishwas aur badh jata. Usne apni poori hatheli us lund par jama di aur use dheere-dheere masalna shuru kiya. Desi Erotica is Love
07-05-2026, 12:18 PM
Lovely....
07-05-2026, 12:20 PM
Desi Erotica is Love
08-05-2026, 01:16 PM
(This post was last modified: 09-05-2026, 10:12 AM by Herotic. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
EPISODE 3
Hina ki saansein ab aur bhi tez aur bhaari ho gayi thi. Woh buri tarah haanf rahi thi, aur uski aankhon mein ek aisi chamak thi jo samarpan aur adhikaar, dono ka mel thi. Usne mehsoos kiya ki uska sparsh Siddharth ko kis kadar bekaraar kar raha hai. Woh apni ungliyon ko lund ki jad se lekar upar tak ek lay mein le jaati aur har baar Siddharth ke muh se nikalne waali dabbi hui sisakaari use ek naya romanch de jaati. "Siddharth..." Hina ne phusphusate hue kaha, uska chehra sharm se laal tha lekin usne apni nazrein nahi hatayi. "Kya main... kya main tumhe woh sukoon de paa rahi hoon jiski tumhe talaash thi?... haan?" Siddharth ne apna sar peeche seat par tika diya aur apni aankhein kaskar band kar li. Woh Hina ki komal kalaiyon ke utaar-chadaav ko apne lund pe mehsoos kar raha tha. Usne Hina ke haath ke upar apna haath rakha aur use ishaara kiya ki woh ruke nahi. Us chhote se band kamre jaisi car mein, un dono ke beech ki nazdeeki ab apne charam par thi. Hina ka use is tarah mehsoos karna keval ek sharirik kriya nahi thi, balki yeh un dono ke beech ke us atoot vishwas ki muhar thi jo unhone barson se paal rakha tha. Siddharth ne apni aankhein moond li thi, uska poora shareer Hina ke un komal haathon ke sparsh se sunn sa ho gaya tha. Use ek aisa sukoon mil raha tha jiski kalpana usne kabhi nahi ki thi. Hina ne uski aankhon mein dekha aur ek halki si jaanleva muskurahat uske hothon par tair gayi. Woh samajh gayi thi ki uski chhuan Siddharth ke bheetar kya toofan macha rahi hai. Baahar baarish ho rahi thi, lekin car ke bheetar ek alag hi ****** chal rahi thi. Hina dheere se neeche ki ore jhuki. Uske reshmi baal Siddharth ke ghutno ko sehla rahe the. Hina ne apne narm aur surkh hothon ko Siddharth ke lund ke kareeb laya. Usne ek gehri saans li, jisme mardangi aur us perfume ki mili-juli mehak thi. Phir, bahut hi dheeme se, usne apne garm hothon ko uske lund ke tope par rakh diya. Woh ek gehra aur lamba chumban tha. Jaise hi Hina ke hothon ki komalta ne wahan ke ehsaas ko chhua, Siddharth ke muh se ek dabi hui karaah nikal gayi aur usne apni ungliyon se car ki seat ko zor se jakad liya. Hina use choomte hue mehsoos kar rahi thi ki kaise uske lund ki nason mein daudta khoon use aur bhi sakht bana raha hai. Siddharth ne kaampte hue haath se Hina ke sar ko sehlaya. "Hina... tum..." uski awaaz jaise kahin kho gayi thi. Hina ne ek pal ke liye apne hoth hataye, upar dekha aur apni lajja aur chaahat ke sangam se laal hue chehre ke saath phusphusayi, "Aaj main tumhari har us cheez ko apna lena chahti hoon, Sid, jise duniya humse door rakhna chahti hai." Usne phir se apna sar jhukaya aur us sannate ke beech apne pyar ka izhaar apni harkaton se karne lagi. Woh pal un dono ke liye kisi ****** ya deewar se pare, sirf aur sirf rooh ke milan ka tha. Car ke bheetar ki hawa ab aur bhi zyada garm aur bojhul ho chuki thi. Hina ne ek gehri saans li aur apni jhijhak ko poori tarah peeche chhodte hue apni gulaabi naram jeebh ko baahar nikala. Usne badi komalta aur pyar ke saath Siddharth ke lund ke tope ko apni jeebh ki nok se chhua. Jaise hi uski jeebh ki nami ne lund ke tope ko sparsh kiya, Siddharth ke poore badan mein ek bijli si daud gayi. "Aah... Hina..." uske gale se ek bhaari sisakaari nikli aur usne apna sar peeche ki ore patak diya. Hina ne ab apni raftaar thodi badhayi. Woh apni jeebh ko neeche se upar ki aur le ja rahi thi, har ek nas ko mehsoos karte hue. Phir usne dheere se use apne muh ke bheetar lena shuru kiya. Woh bahut saavdhani se aur doobkar use choos rahi thi. Us shaant car mein Hina ke muh se nikalne waali gap-gap aur salap-salap ki awaazein goonjne lagin, jo Siddharth ke sanyam ko poori tarah tod rahi thi. Siddharth ki saansein ab bekaabu ho chuki thi. "Oh God... Hina... tum... tum bahut kamaal kar rahi ho," woh apni aankhein kaskar band kiye hue phusphusa raha tha. Uske haath kabhi Hina ke reshmi baalon ko sehlaate, toh kabhi car ki seat ke cover ko mutthi mein bheencha lete. Hina poori tarah is pal mein kho chuki thi. Uske muh se nikalne waali 'hmm... hmm...' ki dabbi hui awaazein yeh bata rahi thi ki use bhi is naye ehsaas mein kitna aanand aa raha hai. Woh apni jeebh ko lund ke chaaron ore ghumate hue use upar-neeche sehla rahi thi, jisse Siddharth ka shareer baar-baar seat se upar ki ore uchhal jaata. "mmmm…Sid... tum... tum mere ho," Hina ne ek pal ke liye rukkar haanfte hue kaha, uske honth geele aur surkh laal chamak rahe the. Phir usne dobara apna kaam shuru kar diya, is baar aur bhi zyada gehraayi aur junoon ke saath. Siddharth ko aisa mehsoos ho raha tha jaise woh hawa mein tair raha ho. Use yakeen nahi ho raha tha ki ***** ke baad itni saadgi se nikli Hina ke bheetar itna gehra pyaar aur bebaaki chhipi hui thi. Woh bas uski lay mein kho gaya tha, apni har aah aur har sisakaari ke saath apna sab kuchh Hina ke naam kar raha tha. Car ke bheetar ki khamoshi ab keval unki tez hoti saanson aur baarish ki awaaz se toot rahi thi. Hina ne khud ko poori tarah is pal ke hawale kar diya tha. Woh Siddharth ke lund ko apne munh ke bheetar gehraayi se utaar rahi thi, aur uski har harkat mein ek anokha samarpan aur tasalli thi. Sabse khaas baat thi Hina ki nazrein. Woh neeche jhuki hui thi, lekin uski aankhein upar ki ore uthi hui thi, jo seedhe Siddharth ki aankhon mein jhaank rahi thi. Woh ek gehra aur nasheela eye contact tha. Siddharth ne dekha ki Hina ki aankhon mein ab koi darr nahi tha, balki ek aisi jeet ka ehsaas tha jaise usne sadiyon ki pyaas bujha li ho. Hina ne apni jeebh ko lund ke chaaron ore lapeta aur ek gehri lay mein use choosna jaari rakha. Uske munh ke bheetar ki garmahat aur nami Siddharth ke sanyam ki aakhiri tukde ko bhi jala rahi thi. Siddharth ka shareer akad raha tha, uski ungliyan Hina ke reshmi baalon ko kaskar bheencha rahi thi. "Ohhhh... Hinaaaahhh... main... main ab aur nahi ruk paunga," Siddharth ne behad bhaari aur ladkhadaati awaaz mein kaha, uski aankhein khushi aur dard ke ek ajeeb mishran se aadhi michi hui thi. Hina ne ek pal ke liye use apne munh se baahar nikala. Uske honth geele aur surkh laal chamak rahe the, aur uske chehre par ek kaamuk muskurahat thi jo seedhe Siddharth ke dil par waar kar rahi thi. Usne apni ungliyon se lund ko mazbooti se pakda aur bahut hi pyar bhare, lekin uttejak lehze mein phusphusayi. "Toh phir rukna kaisa, Sid? Ise beh jaane do...mmmmm… mere andar…. Main chahti hoon ki tumhari rag-rag ka woh hissa aaj mera ho jaaye…. Apna saara veerya mere munh mein hi nikaal do...mmmm… main use apni rooh tak mehsoos karna chahti hoon." Hina ke in shabdon ne jaise aag mein ghee ka kaam kiya. Siddharth ki saansein ruk si gayi. Hina ne phir se apna munh khola aur lund poori gehraayi tak le liya, uski aankhein abhi bhi Siddharth ki aankhon se hati nahi thi. Woh use chunauti bhi de rahi thi aur nyota bhi, ki woh apni saari mardangi aaj usi ke naam kar de. Siddharth ka poora wajood kaampne laga. Woh ab us mod par tha jahan se waapsi mumkin nahi thi. Usne Hina ke chehre ko apne dono haathon mein bhar liya, aur uski aankhon mein dekhte hue us antim sukh ki ore badhne laga jo unhe hamesha ke liye ek-doosre ke bandhanon mein baandhne wala tha. Car ke andar ka mahol ab apne charam par pahunch chuka tha. Baahar ki baarish aur andar ki dhadkanein ek-doosre se hod laga rahi thi. Siddharth ka sanyam ab poori tarah jawaab de chuka tha. Usne apni seat se thoda upar uthte hue khud ko sambhala aur apne kulhon ki lay ke saath Hina ke munh mein gehre dhakke dena shuru kar diya. Desi Erotica is Love
08-05-2026, 04:41 PM
ekdom kamaal hai yaar, ekdom kamaal ka update!
08-05-2026, 08:35 PM
Desi Erotica is Love
09-05-2026, 08:52 AM
You are a fabulous writer mate. hats off to you yaar. Please keep writing!
09-05-2026, 09:25 AM
(09-05-2026, 08:52 AM)Faggot. Wrote: You are a fabulous writer mate. hats off to you yaar. Please keep writing! thank you so much. Desi Erotica is Love
09-05-2026, 10:02 AM
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EPISODE 4
Hina ne apni aankhein kaskar band kar li thi, aur uske muh se nikalne wali 'ghap... ghap... ummmm...' ki bhaari aawazein car ke sannate ko cheer rahi thi. Siddharth ka har dhakka Hina ke gale ki gehrai ko chhu raha tha, jisse Hina ki saansein aur bhi ukhad rahi thi. Siddharth ne madhoshi mein doobkar Hina ke kaanon ke paas jhukkar phusphusaya, "Hina... tum kamaal ho... aaahhhh… mujhe yakeen nahi ho raha ki tum mujhe is kadar apna rahi ho. Aaj tum sirf meri ho... meri rooh ki pyaas bujha rahi ho tum." Uski aawaz mein ek gehra mardanapan aur junoon tha jo Hina ko aur bhi uttejit kar raha tha. Siddharth ka shareer ab poori tarah akad gaya tha. Usne ek aakhiri sabse gehra aur zordaar dhakka diya jo Hina ke gale ke aakhiri chhor tak ja pahuncha. Usi pal, ek zordaar siskari ke saath Siddharth ka saara veerya phoot pada. Hina ne us garm aur gaadhe maal ko apne gale mein utarte hue mehsoos kiya. Woh bina ruke use nigalti gayi, jaise woh Siddharth ke vajood ki har boond ko apne bheetar samet lena chahti ho. Jab Siddharth ka lund dheela pada aur usne dheere se khud ko peeche kheencha, toh Hina ne apne muh se use bahar nikala. Hina ke gulaabi hothon ke konon par aur uski thuddi par safed veerya ki kuchh boondein abhi bhi lagi hui thi. Usne apni thaki hui lekin chamakti aankhon se Siddharth ki ore dekha. Chehre par ek sharmeeli aur kaamuk muskaan thi. Usne apni ungli se apne hothon ke paas lage us nishaan ko chhua aur Siddharth ko dikhate hue ek aisi nazar di jo keh rahi thi ki aaj se woh poori tarah uski ho chuki hai. Siddharth ne aage badhkar uska maatha chooma. "Tumne aaj mujhe mukammal kar diya, Hina." Hina ne sharmakar apni nazrein neechi kar li, lekin uske chehre ka woh noor bata raha tha ki yeh safar unke jeevan ka sabse yaadgaar aur atoot hissa ban chuka hai. Siddharth ab seat se peechhe tik gaya tha, uski saansein dheere-dheere normal ho rahi thi aur chehre par ek aisa sukoon tha jo shabdon mein bayan nahi kiya ja sakta tha. Hina ne apne dupatte ke pallu se dheere se apne hothon ko ponchha, lekin uski aankhon mein abhi bhi wahi shararat aur chamak barkaraar thi. Woh Siddharth ki haalat dekh rahi thi, jo abhi bhi thoda hakka-bakka aur behad thaka hua lag raha tha. Hina ne apni gardan tirchi ki aur Siddharth ke kaan ke bilkul paas jaakar apni garm saansein chhodi. "Kya hua Sid? Bade pehlwan bante the, huh" Hina ne dabi hui aawaz mein, ek behad kaamuk aur gandi shararat ke saath phusphusaya. "Abhi toh maine sirf thoda sa chakha hai, aur tumhari toh ghigghi bandh gayi! Mujhe laga tha ki tum ghanto tikoge, par tum toh mere gale ki gehrai seh bhi nahi paaye aur jhat se dher ho gaye… kya yaar… Agli baar apni taqat bachakar laana, warna mujhe lagega ki mere Sid ka engine thoda kamzor hai." Yeh sunte hi Siddharth ka chehra tamatar ki tarah laal ho gaya. Usne kabhi sapne mein bhi nahi socha tha ki itni ******* dikhne wali Hina, kaamuk baaton mein itni mahir aur bebaak niklegi. Woh buri tarah sharma gaya aur apni nazrein churane laga. "Hina! Tum... tum itni baatein kahan se seekh gayi?" Siddharth ne haklate hue kaha, aur apna chehra doosri taraf ghuma liya taaki woh apni sharmindagi chhupa sake. Hina uski yeh haalat dekhkar khilkhilakar hans padi. Uski hansi car ki chhoti si jagah mein sangeet ki tarah goonjne lagi. Usne jhat se Siddharth ke chaude seene par apna sar rakh diya. Uski hansi ke jhatkon se Siddharth ka seena bhi hil raha tha. Siddharth ne ek geheri aur rahat bhari saans li. Usne apni mazboot bahein Hina ke charon ore lapet li, use khud mein jaise sama lene ki koshish ki. Hina ka reshmi vajood uske seene se sata hua tha, aur bahar ki thandi baarish ab unhe aur bhi kareeb la rahi thi. Siddharth ne jhukkar Hina ke sir ke beechon-beech, uski maang ke paas ek bahut hi gehra aur bhavuk chumban liya. "Tum ekdm paglu ho Hina," Siddharth ne bade pyaar se budbudaya. "Lekin meri paglu ho." Hina ne uske seene par apni ungliyon se chhote-chhote ghere banane shuru kar diye. Us pal mein na koi darr tha, na samaj ki bandishein, bas do roohein thi jo ek safar ke dauran hamesha ke liye ek ho chuki thi. Siddharth ke seene ki garmahat aur bahar ki baarish ki aawaz ke beech, achanak Hina ki hansi gayab ho gayi. Uski aankhon mein ek ajeeb si kasak aur dard ubhar aaya. Usne apni ungliyon se Siddharth ke shirt ke button ko sehlate hue apna chehra upar uthaya. Uski aankhein ab bheegi hui thi. "Sid..." Hina ki aawaz achanak bhaari ho gayi. "Abhi jo kuchh bhi hua, usne mujhe ehsaas dila diya ki main rooh se tumhari ho chuki hoon. Par jaante ho, kabhi-kabhi mera jee chahta hai ki main bhi ek ******** patni ki tarah tumhari ***** karoon. Mera man karta hai ki tum apne hathon se meri maang mein ******* bharo, main maathe par ***** lagaun aur samaj ke saamne garv se keh sakoon ki mein tumhari ardhangini hoon." Siddharth ne use aur kaskar thaam liya, lekin Hina ka dard beh nikla. "Par main ek ******** hoon, Sid!" Woh phoot-phootkar rone lagi, uska chehra Siddharth ke seene mein dhans gaya. "Hamare ****** alag hain, hamari duniya alag hai. Main chahkar bhi woh ******* stree nahi ban sakti jiska sapna maine tumhare saath dekha hai. Yeh samaj, yeh deewarein... ye humein kabhi ek nahi hone dengi… kyu.. Kyu main aisi paida hui ki hum kabhi ek hi chhat ke neeche bina dare nahi reh sakte?" Hina ki siskiyan car ke bheetar goonjne lagi. Woh khud ko kosne lagi thi, apni kismat aur un lakeeron ko jo unke beech khinchi hui thi. Uske aansu Siddharth ki shirt ko bhigo rahe the. Woh baar-baar keh rahi thi ki woh kitni bebas hai ki apne pyaar ko woh mukaam nahi de sakti jo ek patni apne pati ko deti hai. Siddharth ne badi komalta se Hina ka chehra upar uthaya aur apne angoothe se uske aansu ponchhe. "Hina, suno meri baat. ***** aur reeti-riwaaz insaano ne banaye hain, Khuda ya Bhagwan ne nahi. Tum mere liye kisi bhi ******* patni se kahin badhkar ho. Tumne aaj jo samarpan dikhaya hai, woh kisi ******* ya ***** ka mohtaj nahi hai." Usne Hina ki aankhon mein aankhein daalkar kaha, "Duniya chahe jo kahe, meri nazron mein tum meri patni se kam nahi ho. Ye aansu mat bahao kyunki ye tumhari bebasi nahi, balki hamare us pyaar ki gawahi hain jo har zanjeer se upar hai." Hina ne dheere se apni siskiyan roki aur Siddharth ki baahon mein dubak gayi. Use pata tha ki raasta mushkil hai, lekin is pal mein Siddharth ka seena hi uska sabse bada ****** aur uski sabse badi ****** thi. Siddharth ne mehsoos kiya ki Hina jazbaaton ke bhanwar mein bahut gehra utar rahi hai, aur uski aankhon se girte aansu uski muskurahat ko nigal rahe hain. Mahol ki is bhaari udaasi ko todne ke liye Siddharth ne ek shararati chaal chali. Usne Hina ke gaalon ko halke se thapthapaya aur ek tedhi muskaan ke saath uski aankhon mein jhaank kar kaha... "Waise Hina, rona-dhona toh theek hai," Siddharth ne thoda rukkar dabi hui hansi ke saath kaha, "lekin ek baat toh maanni padegi yaar... jo suna tha woh sach hai ki ****** ladkiyan lund choosne mein waqayi mahir hoti hain. Tumne jis safayi se kaam kiya, mujhe toh laga main jannat ki sair kar aaya!", Yeh sunte hi Hina ki siskiyan ek pal ke liye tham gayin. Usne jhatke se apna sar uthaya aur Siddharth ko pyaar wale gusse se dekha. Uski aankhon mein abhi bhi nami thi, lekin ab unmein ek teekhapan aur shararat bhi aa gayi thi. "Achha ji! Toh aapko bada tazurba hai is baat ka?...haan?" Hina ne apni bhauhein sikodkar poochha. Woh Siddharth ke chehre ke aur bhi kareeb aa gayi, uski naak Siddharth ki naak se takra rahi thi. Usne apni un gusse wali aankhon se seedhe Siddharth ki aankhon mein jhaanka, jaise woh uski rooh tak pahunch jaana chahti ho. Desi Erotica is Love
09-05-2026, 10:15 AM
Wonderful, superb, awesome, extraordinary, out of the world.
Hats off my friend. eise hi likhte raho YAAR!!!
10-05-2026, 08:08 AM
Uffffff bht badhia... But make it more mazhabi please
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