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Ek shant se ghar ki dehleez par sab kuch bilkul theek dikhai deta hai… par kabhi-kabhi rishton ki khamoshi ke peeche aise jazbaat chhupe hote hain jo sab kuch badal sakte hain.
Shaadi ke baad jab Shatakshi is ghar ki bahu ban kar aati hai, to uski duniya naye rishton, naye sapno aur ek ajeeb si muskurahat se bhar jaati hai. Ghar ki sabse chulbuli aur thodi ziddi ladki Krutika— jo uski nanad hai — pehle to Krutika se door-door rehti hai, lekin waqt ke saath un dono ke beech ek anokhi si dosti banne lagti hai.
Magar kuch rishton ki kahaniyaan itni seedhi nahi hoti. Ek anjaana sa ehsaas, kuch chhoti-chhoti nazrein, aur ek aisa raaz jo dheere-dheere un dono ki zindagi ko uljha deta hai. Pyaar… jo shayad galat waqt par aa gaya. Aur jazbaat… jo kisi ek dil tak simat kar nahi reh paaye.
Ab sawaal sirf itna hai—
kya yeh sirf ek galatfahmi hai… ya phir ek aisi kahani ki shuruat jahan pyaar, wafadari aur rishton ki seemaayein ek dusre se takraane wali hain?
Kabhi-kabhi sabse khatarnak kahaniyaan ghar ke andar hi shuru hoti hain… jahan pyaar bhi hai, khamoshi bhi… aur ek aisa sach jo sab kuch badal sakta hai.
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Ghar mein party khatam ho chuki thi. Aditya ja chuka tha, lekin uski khushboo abhi bhi wahin thi. Shatakshi dhere-dhere bikhre hue phool samait rahi thi, uske chehre par ek anjani si muskurahat thi—wo muskurahat jo usne saalon se mehsoos nahi ki thi.
Tabhi Krutika wahan aayi, uske haath mein Aditya ka bhoola hua rumaal tha. Usne us rumaal ko apne chehre ke paas laya aur gehri saans li.
Krutika: "Bhabhi, aapne dekha Aditya mujhe kaise dekh raha tha? Mujhe lagta hai wo mere liye hi bana hai."
Shatakshi ke haath thak gaye. Usne mud kar Krutika ko dekha. Uske andar ek jalan ki leher uthi, lekin usne khud ko sambhala.
Shatakshi: "Krutika, wo mehman tha. Aur tum abhi bacchi ho, har kisi ki tawajjo (attention) ko pyar mat samjha karo."
Krutika ki aankhein chamki, usne ek kadam Shatakshi ki taraf badhaya.
Krutika: "Bacchi nahi hoon main. Aur mujhe pata hai ki aapki nazrein bhi aaj poori shaam ussi par thi. Lekin yaad rakhiye Bhabhi... wo mera hai. Aapke paas toh pehle se hi Bhaiya hain, phir bhi aapki pyaas khatam nahi hui?"
Shatakshi ka chehra safed pad gaya. Kamre mein ek aisi khamoshi chha gayi jo kisi toofan ke aane ka ishara thi.
.........................(KUCH SAMAY PEHLE)
Shatakshi ki shaadi ko abhi kuch hi mahine hue the, par ghar ki deewaron ko dekh kar aisa lagta nahi tha ki wo is ghar ke liye nayi hai. Usne apne saleeqe aur naram mizaj se poore parivaar ka dil jeet liya tha.
Shatakshi (25), ek primary college teacher thi; subah bacho ke shor-gul mein uska waqt nikalta aur dopahar ko wo ghar ki zimmedariyon mein rami rehti.
Shatakshi ke in-laws kaafi suljhe hue log the. Middle-class parivaar hone ke bawajood, unhone kabhi Shatakshi par naukri chhodne ka dabao nahi dala, balki uske kaam ka samman kiya.
Shatakshi ka pati, Saurabh (26), Railway mein Loco Pilot tha. Uski duty ke ghante thode mushkil hote the—kabhi raaton ko jaagna toh kabhi dino tak ghar se door rehna. Par jab bhi wo laut-ta, Shatakshi ki muskurahat uski saari thakan mita deti.
Lekin is ghar mein Shatakshi ki sabse pakki saheli koi bani thi, toh wo thi uski nanad—Krutika (22).
Krutika ne haal hi mein apna college khatam kiya tha aur ab wo competitive exams ki taiyari mein din-raat ek kar rahi thi. Dono ke beech sirf teen saal ka farq tha, isliye wo nanad-bhabhi kam aur dost zyada lagti thi.
Ek Dopahar ka Scene:
Shatakshi college se laut kar aayi aur seedhe Krutika ke kamre mein gayi, jahan kitabein bikhri padi thi.
"Krutika, thodi der break le lo. Subah se tumne dhang se kuch khaya bhi nahi hai," Shatakshi ne uske sar par haath rakhte hue kaha.
Krutika ne thak kar apni aankhein band ki aur Shatakshi ki god mein sar rakh diya. "Bhabhi, ye General Studies toh jaan le legi meri. Aap itna sab kaise sambhal leti hain? college, ghar aur phir mera nakhra bhi!"
Shatakshi hansi aur uske baal sawarne lagi. "Bas, tumhari tarah maine bhi kabhi mehnat ki thi. Tum dekhna, tumhari mehnat rang layegi. Chalo ab, kitchen mein chalo, maine tumhari pasand ki bhindi banayi hai."
Us waqt sab kuch kitna sukoon bhara tha. Shatakshi ki samajhdari aur Krutika ka naya josh, dono milkar ghar ko swarg bana rahe the. Kisi ne sapne mein bhi nahi socha tha ki isi dosti ki buniyaad par ek din aise jazbaat khade honge jo is rishte ki dor ko kamzor kar denge.
Kitchen ka Scene: Ek Meethi Chhed-chhaad
Kitchen mein garma-garam rotiyon ki khushboo phaili hui thi. Shatakshi badi tezi se hath chala rahi thi, jabki Krutika wahi counter ke paas khadi ek tamatar ke chhote-chhote tukde kar rahi thi—halaki uska dhyan kaam se zyada apni bhabhi ko tang karne mein tha.
Shatakshi ne muskurate hue kaha, "Krutika, padhai ho gayi? Exams ka intezar thoda lamba ho raha hai na?"
Krutika ne ek shararati muskurahat ke saath apni bhabhi ko dekha. "Bhabhi, mere intezar ka fal toh pata nahi kab milega... lekin haan, aapke intezar ka fal aapko zaroor milne wala hai! Kal Bhaiya jo wapas aa rahe hain!"
Ye sunte hi Shatakshi ke hath thak gaye. Usne koshish toh ki ki wo normal lage, par uske gaal surkh laal (blush) ho gaye. Usne nazrein chura kar tave par roti palat di.
Krutika kahan rukne wali thi? Wo dhere-dhere dabe paon Shatakshi ke bilkul kareeb aayi aur uske kaan ke paas jhuk kar dheere se fusfusayi, "Ab aapke paas hamare liye kahan hi waqt rahega... kyu Bhabhi ji?"
Ye keh kar Krutika ne peeche se Shatakshi ko ek zor dar pyari bhari 'hug' di. Shatakshi ne hansi rokne ki nakaam koshish ki aur dikhavati gusse mein apna hath chhudaya.
Shatakshi: "Hat badmash! Bohot bolne lagi hai tu aaj kal. Ja, mujhe shanti se khana banane de. Mummy ji ko awaaz de de aur... Papa ji kahan gaye hain is waqt?"
Krutika ne apni bhabhi ko ek baar phir chhedte hue aankh mari aur hansi. "Kahan gaye honge? Panwari ke yahan gaye honge chuna lagwane!"
Ye sunte hi dono nanad-bhabhi khilkhila kar hans padi. Poora kitchen unki hansi se goonj utha. Us pal mein Shatakshi aur Krutika sirf nanad-bhabhi nahi, balki do aisi sakhiyan lag rahi thi jo ek doosre ki khushi mein apni duniya dhoond leti hain.
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Ghar mein sannaata tha. Mummy ji aur Papa ji apna dinner karke apne kamre mein ja chuke the. Drawing room mein sirf TV ki madhyam roshni aur halki awaaz goonj rahi thi.
Shatakshi abhi naha kar aayi thi; usne ek naram nighty pehni hui thi aur uske geele baal uske kandhon par bikhre hue the, jinse ek halki si shampoo ki khushboo aa rahi rahi thi. Wahin Krutika apni loose t-shirt aur pyjama mein bilkul relax hokar baithi thi. Dono ke beech ice-cream ka ek bada pack rakha tha, jise wo dono bade maze se enjoy kar rahi thi.
TV par ek purani romantic movie chal rahi thi. Jab parde par hero-heroine ka ek gehri mohabbat wala scene aaya, toh Krutika ki nazrein screen par jam si gayin. Wo us scene mein itni kho gayi ki uske haath mein chammach wahi ruk gaya.
Shatakshi ne jab apni nanad ka khoya hua chehra dekha, toh uske dimaag mein shararat sujhi. 'Dopahar mein mujhe bada chhed rahi thi na, ab meri baari hai,' usne socha.
Shatakshi dhere se Krutika ke paas sarki. Krutika ki ek 'pony tail' bandhi hui thi, par kuch baal uske chehre par phisal aaye the. Shatakshi ne apni naram aur komal ungliyon se un baalon ko sameta aur bade pyar se Krutika ke kaan ke peeche kiya.
Shatakshi (fusfusate hue): "Waah Nanad ji! Lagta hai aapko ye movie sach mein bahut pasand aa gayi hai... ya phir hero?"
Jaise hi Shatakshi ki thandi aur naram ungliyon ne Krutika ke kaan ko sparsh (touch) kiya, Krutika ke shareer mein ek ajab si leher daud gayi. Uska rom-rom jese kaanp utha, bilkul waisa hi jaise koi thandi gulabi hawa ka jhonka chhu kar nikal gaya ho. Wo kuch pal ke liye sunn ho gayi, par turant khud ko sambhalte hue baat taalne lagi.
Krutika: "Kya Bhabhi... aap bhi na! Wese... pata hai aapko Bhaiya kal kitne baje aa rahe hain? Papa ji station jayenge na unhe lene?"
Shatakshi: "Arre, Papa ji kyun takleef karenge? Wo Loco Pilot hain, apna rasta khud dhund lenge. Tum bas apni padhai aur is movie par dhyan do."
Kuch der baad Shatakshi ne ghadi dekhi. "Krutika, bahut late ho raha hai. Ja, baaki movie kal dekh lenge. Tujhe subah jaldi uthna bhi hai padhne ke liye."
Krutika (bahana banate hue): "Arre Bhabhi, bas climax aane wala hai! Please... main uth jaungi subah, pakka!"
Shatakshi ne uski nakal utari, "Haa... 'uth jaungi', janti hoon main tujhe. Aur ye ice-cream pack mujhe de, warna ye yahin pighal jayegi."
Krutika shayad abhi bhi us sparsh ke khayalon mein thi. Usne bina dekhe ice-cream ka pack Shatakshi ki taraf badhaya, par uska hath thoda thithak gaya. Agle hi pal, phat! Ice-cream ka wo naram pack Shatakshi ki nighty par gir gaya.
Shatakshi thitak gayi aur usne apni nighty par giri hui ice-cream ko dekha. Kamre ki thandak mein wo pighalti ice-cream ab ek nayi kashmakash ki shuruat thi.
Ice-cream ka pack Shatakshi ki nighty par gira aur dhire-dhire pighalne laga. Krutika ne jaise hi dekha, uske chehre par ghabrahat aa gayi.
Krutika: "Sorry Bhabhi! Pata nahi kaise galti se ye ho gaya... I'm so sorry!"
Shatakshi ne muskurate hue apni nighty ko dekha aur kaha, "Arre, isme teri kya galti? Mujhe hi acche se pakadna chahiye tha. Koi baat nahi, saaf ho jayega."
Krutika ne turant tokte hue kaha, "Arre Bhabhi, aap is nighty ko change kar lijiye. Aap ek kaam kariye, jaake naha lijiye aur isse washing machine mein daal dijiye. Chip-chip karega warna."
Shatakshi: "Arre zyada nahi giri hai, bas dusri nighty change kar leti hoon. Isme nane ki kya zaroorat? Tu ruk, main bas change karke aa rahi hoon, phir movie khatam karte hain."
Lekin Krutika ke dimaag mein shayad kuch aur hi chal raha tha. Usne Shatakshi ko rokte hue kaha, "Arre nahi Bhabhi, aap naha lijiye... dekhiye ice-cream aapki nighty se hote hue aapke pairon tak lag gayi hai. Aur waise bhi... mujhe ab neend aa rahi hai, main toh chali sone!"
Shatakshi wahi khadi reh gayi. Usne mann mein socha, 'Arre kamaal ki ladki hai! Abhi toh bol rahi thi ki climax scene dekhna hai, aur ab ekdam se neend aane lagi?'
Lekin usne zyada dhyan nahi diya. Usne apni nighty dekhi jo waqayi gandi ho gayi thi. 'Khair, sach hi keh rahi hai, naha hi leti hoon... thoda fresh feel hoga,' Shatakshi ne socha.
Jab tak Shatakshi ye sab soch rahi thi, Krutika apne kamre mein ja chuki thi aur darwaza band kar liya tha.
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Shatakshi ke dimaag mein Krutika ka wo achanak badla hua vyavhaar ghum raha tha, par pighalti hui ice-cream ki chip-chipahat ne use hosh mein laya. Wo dhere se apne bedroom ki taraf badhi.
Jaise hi Shatakshi ne bedroom ki light on ki, kamre mein ek narm roshni phail gayi. Wo seedhe apne dressing table ke bade se aaine (mirror) ke saamne ja khadi hui. Aaine mein usne apni halat dekhi—uske geele baal jo abhi thode der pehle nahane ki wajah se naram the, aur uski nighty par gira wo bada sa ice-cream ka daag. Wo khud se hi thoda sharma gayi ki kaise ek nanad-bhabhi ki masti ne uski ye halat kar di thi.
Usne mudkar apni purani lakdi ki almari kholi. Usne ek nayi, narm satin ki nighty aur ek saaf towel nikala. Usne socha tha ki bas kapde badal legi, par Krutika ki baat dimaag mein baith gayi thi—ice-cream waqayi uske pairon tak fisal aayi thi.
Shatakshi bathroom mein dakhil hui aur darwaza andar se band kar liya. Usne nayi nighty aur towel ko ek stand par taang diya. Ab bathroom ki gehri roshni mein uske husn ka naya roop nikal kar aa raha tha.
Usne bade araam se apni gandi nighty ke button khole aur usse apne makhmali aur mulayam sharir se utar kar alag kar diya. Usne usse paas hi rakhi ek bucket mein daal diya taaki subah washing machine mein daal sake. Jab wo wapas mudi, toh basin ke upar lage mirror mein uski nazar khud par padi.
Shatakshi thodi der ke liye thithak gayi. Usne apne sharir se baki bache kapde—wo pink colour ki bra aur white panty—bhi ek-ek karke nikal diye. Is waqt Shatakshi ka badan kisi sange-marmar ki moorat jaisa lag raha tha. Uska rang itna gora aur twacha (skin) itni naram thi ki shower ki roshni usse takra kar chamak rahi thi. Uska husn us waqt aisa tha jaise koi swarg-lok ki apsara dharti par utar aayi ho.
Wo dhire se shower ke neeche ja khadi hui. Jaise hi usne shower on kiya, paani ki thandi aur narm boondein uske kandhon se hote hue uske poore badan par sawari karne lagin. Shatakshi ne apni aankhein moond li. Paani ki har boond jaise uske sharir ki thakan aur wo ajeeb si bechaini dho rahi thi jo usse thodi der pehle Krutika ke paas baith kar hui hi.
Bahar bedroom mein bilkul sannaata tha, sirf bathroom se girte hue paani ki "shhh-shhh" ki awaaz aa rahi thi. Shatakshi nahane mein itni mashgul thi, itni khoyi hui thi ki usse duniya-jahan ki khabar nahi thi.
Shatakshi shower ki thandi dhaar ke neeche aankhein moonde khadi thi. Paani ki boondein uske gore badan par aise fisal rahi thi jaise kisi ne makhmal par moti bikhair diye hon. Bathroom ke band darwaze ke peeche wo duniya se bekhabar, bas us thandak ko mehsoos kar rahi thi.
Lekin bahar, kamre ke sannate mein ek sarsarahat hui.
Isi sannaate ke beech, achanak bedroom ke darwaze par ek halki si aahat hui. Koi bahar se dakhil hua tha. Kamre ki light ab band thi (shayad Shatakshi ne sirf bathroom ki light chalu rakhi thi), isliye chaaro taraf andhera tha. Sirf bathroom ke darwaze ke neeche se ek patli si roshni ki lakeer bedroom ke farsh par pad rahi thi.
Shatakshi, jo is waqt poori tarah se be-parda aur shower ke neeche thi, usse bilkul andaza nahi tha ki koi uske bedroom mein dakhil ho chuka hai aur uske bathroom ke darwaze ki taraf badh raha hai.
Shatakshi ne shower band kiya aur ek gehri saans li, ab kamre mein sirf uske badan se tapakate paani ki "tap-tap" sunayi de rahi thi.
Usne turant stand se apna towel uthaya aur apne sange-marmar jaise badan ko lapetne hi wali thi ki usse darwaze ke handle ke ghumne ki halki si aahat aayi.
Shatakshi ko laga shayad koi bahar hai fir wo sachi sayad uska hi bhram hoga fir wo towel se apna sharir pochne lagi acche se fir usne uss towel ko whi pass k bucket me daal diya jha pehle se hi uski gandi nighty rakkhi hui thi fir wo dusri taraf jake pehle apna bra aur panty pehnti hai fir apni red satin nighty uske baad wo geele baalo ko picche krte huye bathroom k darwaja kholti hai aur room me dhakhil hoti hai, itna andhera wo khud bhul jati hai ki sayad usne hi room ki light off kr di thi.
Bathroom ki garmahat se nikal kar jab wo bedroom ke andhere mein aayi, toh ek pal ke liye thandak ne uske jism ko chhu liya. Usne wapas apne bed ke pass drawing table wale aine ke samne gayi aur whi uski side me rakkhe huye lamp ko on kiya, aur us lamp ki laal roshini chamakne lagi, laal roshni (red light) ne kamre ka mahaul hi badal diya.
Aaine (mirror) mein usne apni jhalak dekhi. Uska sange-marmar jaisa badan us laal roshni mein aur bhi nikhara hua aur pur-kashish lag raha tha. Satin ki red nighty uske jism se chipki hui thi, aur uske geele baal abhi bhi uske kandhon par paani ki kuch boondein gira rahe the. Shatakshi ne ek gehri saans li, wo khud apne roop ki taazgi mein khoyi hi thi ki achanak...
Andhere kone se do mazboot hath nikle aur dhire se magar ek jhatke ke saath uski lachakti hui naram kamar ko gher liya.
Shatakshi ka shareer tharr-thara utha. Uska chehra darr ke maare neela pad gaya aur saans jaise gale mein hi atak gayi. 'Kaun hai ye? Is waqt ghar mein kaun dakhil ho gaya?'—ye khayal uske dimaag mein bijli ki tarah kaunda. Par isse pehle ki wo cheekhti ya khud ko chhudane ki koshish karti, un hathon ne uski giraft aur mazboot kar di aur usse peeche ki taraf kheench kar ek chaudee chhati (chest) se chipka liya.
Shatakshi ne ghabra kar aaine mein dekha.
Uske peeche khada shaks koi anjana nahi, balki uska apna pyar, uska pati Saurabh tha! Uske chehre par ek shararati muskurahat thi aur aankhon mein apni patni ke liye be-intehaan chahat.
"Saurabh... aap?" Shatakshi ne ek gehri saans li, uska darr ab sharam aur sukoon mein badal gaya tha. "Aap toh kal aane wale the na? Aur ye kya tarika hai kisi ko darane ka? Mera toh dum hi nikal gaya tha!"
Saurabh ne uski kamar par apni pakad aur gehri karte hue uske kaan ke paas apna chehra laya aur dhire se kaha, "Surprise dene ka iraada tha. Station par kaam jaldi khatam ho gaya toh socha kyun na apni 'apsara' ke paas thoda pehle pahunch jaun. Par mujhe kya pata tha ki ghar aate hi mujhe itna haseen nazara dekhne ko milega."
Saurabh ki nazrein aaine mein Shatakshi ke gulabi gaalon aur un bheegi hui zulfon par thami hui thin. Shatakshi ne sharma kar apni nazrein jhuka li, par uske dil ki dhadkan ab bhi tez thi—ab darr se nahi, balki Saurabh ki nazdeeki se.
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Laal lamp ki madhyam roshni mein kamre ka mahaul behad nashaana ho chuka tha. Shatakshi ka darr ab puri tarah se ek meethe nasha mein badal gaya tha. Usne socha bhi nahi tha ki Saurabh is tarah achanak aakar use apni baahon mein bhar lega. Halanki uske dimaag ke ek kone mein sawal tha ki Saurabh andar kaise aaye, par uske sparsh ne saare sawalon par parda daal diya tha.
Saurabh, jo itne dinon se apni patni se door tha, uske liye Shatakshi ka ye nahaaya hua, mehkta hua badan kisi jannat se kam nahi tha. Red satin nighty ki narm satah ke neeche jab Saurabh ne Shatakshi ki lachakti hui kamar ko mehsoos kiya, toh uske sabr ka baandh toot gaya.
Usne dhere se apne hoth Shatakshi ke geele baalon se sarkaate hue uske kaan ki lau (earlobe) tak pahunchaye. Jaise hi Saurabh ke garam hothon ne Shatakshi ke thande aur najuk kaan ko sparsh kiya, Shatakshi ke jism mein ek bijli si daud gayi. Usne kas kar Saurabh ke baazuon ko pakad liya.
Saurabh ab puri tarah madhosh tha. Usne Shatakshi ke kaan ko halke se apne hothon mein bhara aur use dheere-dheere chusne laga. Wo pal itna intense aur madak tha ki Shatakshi ka sar chakra gaya. Uske hothon se ek halki si, dard aur sukoon se bhari siski nikli:
"Saur...abh... bas..."
Lekin uski awaaz mein koi manaahi nahi thi, balki ek dawat thi. Saurabh ne apni pakad aur majboot kar di, jaise wo Shatakshi ko khud mein jazb kar lena chahta ho. Aaine mein dikh raha nazara kisi khwaab jaisa tha—laal roshni mein do jism ek doosre mein khoye hue, jahan bahar ki duniya ka koi wajood nahi bacha tha.
Saurabh ne Shatakshi ko apni taraf modne ke liye uski kamar se pakad kar halka sa jhatka diya, aur ab wo dono ek doosre ke aamne-saamne the. Shatakshi ki jhuki hui palkein aur uski tez chalti saansein Saurabh ko aur bhi bechain kar rahi thin.
Saurabh ke liye duniya ruk gayi thi. Shatakshi ne dhere se kaha, "Saurabh ji please... abhi aap aaye hain, aa... ra... aam kar lijiye." Par Saurabh ko jaise kuch sunayi hi nahi de raha tha. Wo bas apni Shatakshi ke masoom chehre ko ghure ja raha tha, jaise use duniya ki koi parwah hi na ho. Usne Shatakshi ka chehra upar uthaya, jo laal lamp ki roshni mein aur bhi zyada khil utha tha.
Shatakshi ki dhadkanein tej chal rahi thi aur saans lete waqt uska seena upar-neeche ho raha tha. Saurabh uske chehre ke aur qareeb aaya. Usne Shatakshi ki aankhon mein dekha aur phir uski nazar Shatakshi ke hothon par gayi—kitni hi mulayam gulab ki pankhuri jaise hoth. Wo unke behad qareeb aaya hi tha ki tabhi Shatakshi ne aankhen kholi. Wo toh jaise pani-pani ho gayi, chehra tamatar jaisa laal pad gaya. Usne turant side se hokar nikalna chaha.
Uss waqt Saurabh ne kamar par pakad thodi halki kar di thi, lekin Shatakshi jaise hi dusri taraf jaane wali thi, Saurabh ne tezi se uski kalayi pakad li. Usne Shatakshi ko apni taraf khincha aur kalayi ko halka sa moda, jis se Shatakshi ke muh se ek meetha aur dard bhara sisak nikla—"Ohhh... aaaaah!"
Jaise hi Saurabh ne use apni taraf khincha, dono aise takraye jaise Shatakshi bilkul Saurabh ke seene mein ja lipti ho. Is takkar se Saurabh ka balance bigda aur dono bed par ja gire. Saurabh neeche tha aur uske majboot seene par uski mehbooba—wo komal aur najuk Shatakshi.
Jab Shatakshi Saurabh ke upar giri, tab uske saundarya ki garima aur uske wo bade, mulayam vaksh Saurabh ke seene se ekdum chipak gaye. Wo aakarshan ka ek behad katilana roop tha. Shatakshi aur Saurabh ke beech ab duriyaan poori tarah gayab ho chuki thi, jaise unke beech koi faasla hi na bacha ho aur hawa bhi paas na ho sake.
Saurabh ne apna ek hath Shatakshi ke peeche rakha tha, aur apne dusre hath se usne Shatakshi ke kaale ghane baalon ko hatate huye us 'chaand' jaise chehre ko dekha. Uff! Kya masoomiyat ki jhalak thi uske chehre mein, Saurabh toh bas wahi dher ho gaya. Dono ek-dusre mein is qadar khoye the ki ab Shatakshi ko us modi hui kalayi ka dard bhi mehsoos nahi ho raha tha. Wo dono bas ek-tak ek dusre ko nihare ja rahe the.
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(Song Started Playing in Background Jab Saurabh aur Shatakshi ek dusre me khoye huye the........)
Tumko paaya hai to jaise khoya hoon
Kehna chahoon bhi to tumse kya kahoon
Tumko paaya hai to jaise khoya hoon
Kehna chahoon bhi to tumse kya kahoon
Kisi zubaan mein bhi woh lafz hi nahi
Ki jinmein tum ho, kya tumhe bata sakoon
Main agar kahoon tumsa haseen
Qaynat mein nahi hai kahin
Taareef yeh bhi toh
Sach hai kuch bhi nahi
Tumko paaya hai to jaise khoya hoon
Shokhiyon mein doobi yeh adaayein
Chehre se jhalki hui hain
Zulf ki ghani ghani ghataayein
Shaan se dhalki hui hain
Lehrata aanchal hai jaise baadal
Baahon mein bhari hai jaise chaandni
Roop ki chaandni
Main agar kahoon yeh dilkashi
Hai nahi kahin, na hogi kabhi
Taareef yeh bhi toh
Sach hai kuch bhi nahi
Tumko paaya hai to jaise khoya hoon
Tum hue meherbaan, to hai yeh daastaan
Tum hue meherbaan, to hai yeh daastaan
Ab tumhara mera ek hai kaarvaan
Tum jahaan, main wahaan
Main agar kahoon hamsafar meri
Apsara ho tum ya koi pari
Taareef yeh bhi toh
Sach hai kuch bhi nahi
Tumko paaya hai to jaise khoya hoon
Kehna chahoon bhi to tumse kya kahoon
Kisi zubaan mein bhi woh lafz hi nahi
Ki jinmein tum ho, kya tumhe bata sakoon
Main agar kahoon tumsa haseen
Qaynat mein nahi hai kahin
Taareef yeh bhi toh
Sach hai kuch bhi nahi
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Next Part: Darwaze Par Dastak
Dono issi madhoshi mein the ki achanak bedroom ke thode se khule hue darwaze ke paas kisi ki parchhayi dikhi. Krutika, jo kitchen se pani lekar laut rahi thi, wo laal roshni dekh kar wahi ruk gayi. Usne jab darwaze ki daraz se andar jhaka, toh uski saans atak gayi. Usne dekha ki Bhaiya aa chuke hain aur wo Bhabhi ke saath bed par kitni nazdeek hain.
Krutika ke dimaag mein ek pal ke liye wo ice-cream wala hadsa aur Shatakshi ka wo naram sparsh ghoom gaya. Uske chehre par ek ajeeb se bhav (expressions) aaye—dukh, hairani ya shayad jalan?
Aap batayein, kya Krutika darwaza khatkhatati hai ya wo chupchap apni jalan dil mein liye wahan se bhag jati hai? Agla mod aap batayein!
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Jab Krutika ne ice-cream ka pack Shatakshi par giraya aur turant sone ka bahana karke apne kamre mein bhagi, toh uske peeche ek badi wajah thi. Jaise hi usne apne kamre ka darwaza band kiya, usne chain ki saans li aur apna phone uthaya.
Darasal, Krutika ko pehle se pata tha ki Saurabh aaj raat hi wapas aa raha hai. Dono bhai-behen ne milkar Shatakshi ko surprise dene ka plan banaya tha. Jab Shatakshi kitchen mein fridge se ice-cream lene gayi thi, tabhi mauka paakar Krutika ne dhere se ghar ka main door khol diya tha taaki Saurabh bina ghanti bajaye andar aa sake. Usne turant Saurabh ko message kiya:
"All Clear! Bhabhi bedroom ki taraf ja rahi hain, aap aa jaiye."
Lekin jaise hi wo bistar par leti, use neend nahi aa rahi thi. Wo baar-baar karwatein badal rahi thi. Uske dimaag mein abhi bhi wahi scene ghoom raha tha jab usne Shatakshi ko 'hug' kiya tha aur baad mein jab Shatakshi ne uske kaan ke peeche se baal hataye the. Wo naram sparsh Krutika ko bechain kar raha tha. Use samajh nahi aa raha tha ki wo apne Bhai ke liye khush hai ya Bhabhi ke saath bitaye un palon ko yaad karke use kuch ajeeb lag raha hai.
Kafi der karwatein badalne ke baad, Krutika ko pyaas mehsoos hui. Usne side table par rakhi bottle uthayi, par wo khali thi.
"Uff! Paani bhi abhi khatam hona tha," wo budbudayi.
Ghar mein bilkul sannaata tha. Wo dhere se uthi aur apne kamre se bahar nikli. Poore ghar mein andhera tha, siwaye ek kone ke. Jab wo kitchen ki taraf paani peene ja rahi thi, tabhi uski nazar Shatakshi aur Saurabh ke bedroom ki taraf gayi.
Usne dekha ki darwaza thoda sa khula hai (wahi rasta jahan se Saurabh dakhil hua tha) aur andar se ek madhyam laal roshni (red light) bahar corridor mein aa rahi thi. Wo roshni itni aakarshak aur pur-israr thi ki Krutika ke qadam apne aap us darwaze ki taraf badhne lage.
Uske dimaag mein sawal tha—ki kya surprise kaam kar gaya? Kya Bhabhi khush hain? Par uske dil mein ek anjani si kasak thi jo use kitchen jaane ke bajaye us darwaze ki daraz (crack) se andar jhaankne par majboor kar rahi thi.
Krutika darwaze ke bilkul paas pahunch gayi thi. Usne apni saans rok li aur darwaze ki thodi si khuli hui jagah se andar dekha.
Andar ka nazara uske hosh udane ke liye kaafi tha. Wo laal roshni, bed par Saurabh ke upar giri hui Shatakshi, unki nazdeekiyan aur wo khamosh magar gehra ishq. Krutika ki aankhein phati reh gayin jab usne dekha ki kaise uske Bhaiya, Bhabhi ke geele baalon se khel rahe hain.
Laal lamp ki roshni mein doobay us bedroom ka mahaul itna madhoshi bhara tha ki bahar khadi Krutika ka dum ghutne laga tha. Usne darwaze ki daraz se dekha ki Saurabh bhaiya ne badi nazakat se Shatakshi bhabhi ke geele baalon ko hataya aur unke masoom chehre ko apne majboot hathon ke pyale mein bhar liya.
Shatakshi ki aankhein band thi aur chehra laal roshni mein tamatar jaisa dhab-dhab kar raha tha. Krutika ne dekha ki Saurabh dhere-dhere aage badha aur usne apne hoth Shatakshi bhabhi ke un komal, gulab ki pankhuri jaise najuk aur rasile hotho se mila diye. Ek gehra aur lamba chumban (kiss)... dono jaise madhoshi ke aalingan mein ek-dusre mein simat gaye the.
Bahar khadi Krutika ko ye dekh kar ek bahut bada jhatka laga. Usne pehle bhi movies mein aise scenes dekhe the, par haqiqat mein apne hi ghar mein itne kareeb se ye sab dekhna uske liye naya tha. Use samajh nahi aa raha tha ki uska badan aise react kyun kar raha hai. Uske sharir mein ek anjani garmi daudne lagi, jaise khoon ki raftar tez ho gayi ho. Uska gala sookhne laga aur darr ya excitement, na jaane kis wajah se uske maathe par paseene ki boondein chamakne lagi.
Wo itni bechain ho gayi ki usne apne kaanpte hue hathon par se qaabu kho diya. Uske haath mein pakdi hui paani ki khali bottle sarak kar seedhe farsh par ja giri.
'TADAAKKK!'
Sannaate ko cheerte hue bottle ke girne ki awaaz poore corridor mein goonj uthi.
Andar bed par Shatakshi aur Saurabh, jo ek-dusre ki mohabbat mein poori tarah khoye hue the, is achanak hui awaaz se buri tarah hadbada gaye. Shatakshi ne jhatke se Saurabh ke seene se khud ko alag kiya aur ghabra kar darwaze ki taraf dekha.
Shatakshi (dabi hui saans mein): "Saurabh ji... suna aapne? Bahar koi hai!"
Saurabh ne bhi gehri saans li, uska nasha thoda hiran hua par aankhon mein abhi bhi wahi khumaar tha. Usne Shatakshi ki kamar ko thoda dheela chhoda aur darwaze ki taraf ghoora.
Wahin bahar, Krutika ka dil halkaq mein aa gaya tha. Usne jaldi se jhuk kar bottle uthayi, par uski saans phool rahi thi. Use samajh nahi aa raha tha ki wo wahan se bhage ya wahin jam jaye.
Isse pehle saurabh bahar aake dekhta krutika jaldi se wha se bhaag gyi, Krutika apne kamre mein ghusi aur jhat se darwaza lock kar diya. Uska dil kisi hathode ki tarah seene mein baj raha tha. Uska poora sharir paseene mein nahaya hua tha, aur saansein aise chal rahi thi jaise wo milo door daud kar aayi ho.
Jo kuch usne abhi darwaze ki daraz se dekha tha—wo Saurabh bhaiya ka bhabhi ke hothon ko chumana, wo unka ek-dusre mein simat jana—usne Krutika ke andar jaise koi soyi hui chingari sulga di thi. Wo bhi ab jawani ki dehleez par thi, aur jo ehsaas abhi tak kitabo aur career ki baaton ke peeche dabe hue the, wo aaj achanak be-kaabu hokar bahar aa rahe the.
Usne kaanpte hue hathon se apne kamre ki light on ki aur aaine (mirror) ke samne ja khadi hui. Aaine mein dikh rahi ladki ko dekh kar wo khud dang reh gayi.
"Ye main hoon?" usne dhere se budbudaya.
Uska chehra garam tha, aankhen kuch keh rahi thi aur uske hothon par abhi bhi wahi scene ghoom raha tha. Krutika hamesha se kitabo mein chhipi rehne wali ladki thi, par aaj usse mehsoos hua ki wo bhi kisi bala se kam khubsurat nahi thi. Wahi gora rang, wahi jawan sharir jiske liye college ke kayi ladke pagal the aur roz proposals bhejte the. Par Krutika ne kabhi kisi ki taraf mud kar nahi dekha tha, uska focus sirf padhai par tha.
Lekin aaj, usne jab apne bhaiya aur bhabhi ke beech ke us junooni sparsh ko dekha, toh uski apni jawani jaise usse bagawat karne lagi. Use samajh nahi aa raha tha ki wo kyun itni pareshan hai? Kyun uska gala sookh raha hai?
Kya ye jalan thi? Ya phir Shatakshi bhabhi ke liye uska wo purana lagav ab kisi naye mod par aa gaya tha? Usne apne bistar par girte hue takiye mein apna muh chhupa liya, par us laal roshni mein bhabhi ke rasile hothon ka wo manzar uski band aankhon ke samne se hat hi nahi raha tha.
Raat bhar Krutika karwatein badalti rahi. Agli subah jab suraj ki pehli kiran ghar mein dakhil hui, toh mahaul badla hua tha. Saurabh ghar aa chuka tha, aur Shatakshi ke chehre par ek alag hi ronak thi.
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14-03-2026, 03:36 PM
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Subah ka suraj ghar ki khidkiyon se dakhil hokar dining table par apni roshni bikhair raha tha. Ghar mein ek alag hi raunak thi, kyunki ghar ka beta, Saurabh, itne dinon baad lauta tha. Halanki sabko yahi lag raha tha ki ye sab ek ittefaq hai, par koi nahi janta tha ki is "surprise return" ki asli master-mind Krutika thi.
Krutika apne kamre se nikal kar dhere qadmon se aayi aur chup-chap dining table par baith gayi. Uska dil abhi bhi thoda bhari tha. Uske dimaag mein bas yahi chinta khaaye ja rahi thi ki kahin kal raat uski taka-jhaki pakdi na gayi ho. Kya Bhaiya-Bhabhi ne use dekh liya tha? Ya wo bottle girne ki awaaz ne sab pol khol di thi?
Tabhi kitchen se Shatakshi bahar nikli, aur use dekh kar jaise waqt wahin tham gaya. Subah ki taaza roshni Shatakshi ke chehre par pad rahi thi. Wo abhi-abhi naha kar aayi thi, uske geele baal uske kandhon par bikhre hue the jinse paani ki halki boondein uski pink saree ko bhigo rahi thin. Uska nahaaya hua naram jism, wo gulabi hoth aur gehri aankhein—wo is waqt kisi khwaab jaisi lag rahi thi.
Shatakshi ne sabse pehle Saurabh ko chai ki pyaali di. Dono ki nazrein mili, aur Shatakshi ne ek halki si sharmili muskurahat di, jo kal raat ki madhoshi ki yaad dila rahi thi.
Phir Shatakshi aage badhi apne Sasur ji ko chai dene ke liye. Sasur ji apne akhbar (newspaper) mein doobe hue the. Jaise hi Shatakshi ne chai ki pyali aage badhayi, Sasur ji ne bina dekhe hath badhaya. Usi pal, unka sakht hath apni khubsurat jawan bahu ke naram aur komal hath se touch ho gaya.
Wo 'chhuwan' (touch) itni achanak thi ki Sasur ji ekdum sakpaka gaye. Unhone jaise hi nazrein uthayi, samne Shatakshi ka wo masoom aur nikhra hua chehra tha. Geele baalon se tapakta paani aur uski saadgi ne unhe thoda hairan kar diya. Unhone chai ka cup toh thaam liya, par unki tirchi nigahein ab akhbar se hatkar apni bahu ke us katilana roop par tik gayi thin.
Shatakshi, jo in sab baaton se be-khabar thi, dhere se palti aur Krutika ki taraf badhi.
Shatakshi: "Krutika, tumhari chai. Raat ko toh tumne movie bhi poori nahi dekhi aur sone bhag gayi... kya baat hai, neend bahut zyada aa rahi thi?"
Krutika ne jab Bhabhi ki awaaz suni aur unke chehre par wahi purani masoomiyat dekhi, toh uska gala phir se sookhne laga. Usne darte-darte nazrein uthayi...
Krutika abhi Shatakshi ke sawaal ka koi ulta-pulta jawab dene hi wali thi ki Saurabh ne nasta karte hue beech mein hi tok diya. Uske chehre par ek shararati muskurahat thi, jaise wo Krutika ko bacha raha ho ki kahin wo darr ke maare kal raat ki saazish aur us "surprise return" ka sach na ugal de.
Saurabh: "Arre Shatakshi, chodo na usse. Kal raat usse waqayi neend aa rahi hogi, tabhi toh jaldi bhag gayi. Krutika... ek kaam kar, jaldi se ja aur mere room mein wo laal wala bag rakha hai na, usme se ek file nikaal kar laa."
Krutika ne jaise rahat ki saans li. Wo turant kursi se uthi aur bina Bhabhi se nazrein milaye andar ki taraf lapki.
Saurabh ne table par baithe apne Mummy, Papa aur phir Shatakshi ki taraf dekha. Usne Shatakshi ki aankhon mein dekha jo abhi bhi subah ki taazgi mein doobi hui thin.
Saurabh (khush-mizaji se): "Mummy, Papa... aur haan Shatakshi, us bag mein tum sab ke liye ek surprise hai!"
"Surprise?" Shatakshi ek pal ke liye chaunk gayi. Uski gehri aankhon mein hairani aur utsukta (curiosity) saaf dikh rahi thi. Usne apne patidev ko ghoora, jo kal raat se hi use ek ke baad ek jhatke diye ja rahe the. Pehle unka achanak aana, phir wo bedroom wala madhoshi bhara pal, aur ab ye naya surprise?
Shatakshi ne chai ka jag table par rakha aur apne geele baalon ko ek taraf karte hue pucha, "Ab kaunsa surprise baaki reh gaya hai Saurabh ji? Aap toh kal se bas hairan hi kar rahe hain."
Sasur ji, jo abhi bhi tirchi nigahon se apni jawan bahu ki us pink saree aur uske komal roop ko nihare ja rahe the, unhone bhi apna akhbar thoda neeche kiya. Unki dilchaspi bhi ab Saurabh ki baaton mein badh gayi thi.
Pura parivaar ab Krutika ke wapas aane ka intezar kar raha tha. Unhe kya pata tha ki us laal bag mein kuch aisa hai jo shayad is ghar ki raunak ko aur badha dega, ya phir koi naya mod layega.
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Saurabh ki baat sunte hi dining table par ek pal ke liye sannaata chha gaya, sabki nigahein us laal bag par tik gayi thin. Krutika jab kamre se bahar nikli, toh usne pura bag hi apne kandhe par latka rakha tha.
Saurabh use dekhte hi hans pada aur chiddhate hue bola, "Arre waah! Tujhe ek file laane ke liye bheja tha aur tu toh poora bag hi utha layi? Chal, la idhar."
Saurabh ne bag apne paas rakha aur usme se badi nazaakat se ek chamchamati hui file nikali. Usne Shatakshi ki taraf dekha, jiski aankhon mein is waqt hazaaron sawal tair rahe the.
Saurabh: "Shatakshi, tumhe yaad hai? Shaadi ke waqt maine tumse ek waada kiya tha... ki tumhari mehnat aur tumhare sapnon ko main kabhi tootne nahi doonga. Tum hamesha se ek bade aur behtar college mein padhana chahti thi na?"
Darasal, Shatakshi ka bachpan se hi sapna tha ki wo sirf ek teacher na bane, balki ek aise muqaam par pahunche jahan uski kabliyat ki pehchan ho. Shaadi se pehle se hi wo bacho ko padhane ka shauk rakhti thi aur isi junoon ki wajah se wo shaadi ke baad bhi ek private college mein primary teacher ke taur par kaam kar rahi thi.
Uske in-laws ne bhi kabhi use roka nahi, balki hamesha hausla badhaya. Par Shatakshi ka dil kisi bade aur prestigious college mein padhane ke liye tarasta tha, jiske liye wo chup-chap taiyari aur interviews deti rehti thi.
Apni bhabhi ki isi lagan aur mehnat ko dekh kar hi toh Krutika ne bhi zindagi mein independent banne ka faisla kiya tha. Krutika ke liye Shatakshi sirf ek bhabhi nahi, uska "role model" thi.
Saurabh ne file kholi aur ek letter nikaalte hue kaha, "Shatakshi, tumhara sapna sach ho gaya hai! Is shehar ke sabse bade aur prestigious college mein tumhara selection ho gaya hai. Ye wahi college hai jahan bade-bade gharanon ke bache padhne aate hain, aur iski kayi branches hain... ek branch toh hamare ghar ke kaafi kareeb bhi hai!"
Ye khabar sunte hi Shatakshi jaise thithak gayi. Uske chehre par pehle hairani aayi aur phir wo khushi ke maare jaise uchhal padi. Uske gulabi hothon par ek aisi muskurahat khili jo usne khud bhi shayad pehle kabhi mehsoos nahi ki thi.
Shatakshi (khushi mein doobte hue): "Saurabh ji... kya ye sach hai? Mera matlab... sach mein mera selection ho gaya?"
Usne kapkapaate hathon se wo letter pakda. Uske nahaaye hue sange-marmar jaise badan mein jaise ek nayi urja (energy) daud gayi thi. Pink saree mein wo is waqt khushi se itni chamak rahi thi ki Saurabh hi nahi, balki table par baithe Sasur ji bhi unhe takte reh gaye.
Wahin khadi Krutika apni bhabhi ki khushi dekh kar ek pal ke liye sab kuch bhul gayi—wo kal raat ka laal lamp, wo chumban, wo bechaini... sab kuch peeche chhoot gaya. Usne turant aage badhkar Shatakshi ko gale laga liya.
Ghar ka mahaul is waqt jashn jaisa ho gaya tha.
Saurabh ki mummy ki aankhon mein khushi ke aansu aa gaye aur wo turant ghar ke mandir ki taraf bhaagin taaki bhagwan ka shukriya ada kar sakein. Saurabh abhi bhi us laal bag mein jhuka hua kuch zaroori saamaan nikaal raha tha, uske chehre par ek sukoon bhari muskurahat thi.
Shatakshi ki khushi ka toh thikaana hi nahi tha. Jab usne Krutika ko gale se lagaya, toh dono nanad-bhabhi ki dosti aur bhi gehri dikh rahi thi. Krutika bhi apni bhabhi ke liye behad khush thi, use lag raha tha ki poora parivaar aaj ek saath itna khush hai.
Lekin khushi ke us gubaare mein Shatakshi itni madhosh thi ki usne bina soche-samjhe, jazbaat mein aakar apne Sasur ji ki taraf kadam badhaye aur unhe kaske gale laga liya.
Sasur ji ki halat us pal kaabil-e-deed thi. Unhone kabhi khwaab mein bhi nahi socha tha ki unki itni khubsurat aur jawan bahu unke itne qareeb aakar unke seene se lipat jayegi. Unhone ek sarsari nazar Saurabh par daali, jo abhi bhi bag mein vyast tha. Krutika wahi khadi muskurati rahi, use laga ki Bhabhi bas apna pyar jata rahi hain.
Shatakshi jab khushi se uchhli, toh uski pink saree ka pallu sarak kar niche gir gaya. Sasur ji ne dekha ki unki bahu ki gori aur nangi peeth unke bilkul samne thi. Unhone ahista se apne sakht hath badhaye aur Shatakshi ke naram baazuon se hote hue uski nangi peeth par rakh diye.
Ek pal ke liye, Sasur ji ne Shatakshi ko thoda aur kaske apni baahon mein jakad liya. Shatakshi, jo pehle toh sirf khushi mehsoos kar rahi thi, jaise hi uski nazar samne baithe Saurabh par padi, use achanak kuch ajeeb ehsas hua. Use apni nangi peeth par apne sasur ke hathon ki tapish aur unki ungliyon ka jism tatolna mehsoos hua.
Shatakshi ke andar ek pal ke liye asamanjas (confusion) paida hua. Uska shareer thoda thithka. Sasur ji ne shayad mahsus kar liya ki hadd paar ho rahi hai, isliye unhone turant Shatakshi ko apni qaid se azad kiya. Khud ko sambhalte hue unhone bade naajuk tareeke se Shatakshi ka chehra apne hathon mein liya aur use badhai di. Unki aankhon mein ek ajeeb si chamak thi—agar Krutika wahi khadi na hoti, toh shayad wo Shatakshi ka maatha hi chum lete.
Tabhi andar mandir se Saurabh ki mummy ki awaaz aayi: "Saurabh ke papa! Zara mandir ke upar rakha ye baksha utaar dijiye."
Sasur ji ne ek aakhri baar Shatakshi ke nikhre hue chehre ko dekha aur wahan se mandir ki taraf chale gaye. Dining table par ab sirf Shatakshi, Saurabh aur Krutika bache the. Shatakshi ne apna pallu dobara kandhe par rakha, par uske dimaag mein abhi bhi peeth par mehsoos hua wo 'touch' ghoom raha tha.
Saurabh ka chehra thoda gambhir dekh kar Shatakshi ki khushi ki lehar thodi tham si gayi. Usne bade pyar se Saurabh se pucha, "Kya baat hai Saurabh ji? Aap aise kya soch rahe hain?"
Saurabh ne file ko dhere se table par rakha aur kehne laga, "Shatakshi, selection toh ho gaya hai, par abhi ek aur kadam baki hai. Tumhe aaj hi college ke administrative department ja kar apne documents verify karwane honge aur sath hi apni posting ka preference bhi bharna hoga."
Usne thodi fikar ke sath aage kaha, "Wese toh poore chances hain ki tumhe apna yahi shehar mil jaye, par agar kisi dusri branch mein job lagi toh? Main wahi soch raha tha ki..."
Saurabh ki baat poori hone se pehle hi Shatakshi bol padi, uski aankhon mein apne parivaar ke liye chinta saaf dikh rahi thi. "Kya? Aisa kaise? Nahi-nahi Saurabh ji, main apne parivaar ko aise chhod kar kahin nahi jaungi. Yahan aap hain, Mummy-Papa hain, Krutika hai... Main sabko chhod kar kahin nahi jane wali. Mujhe aisi job nahi chahiye. Wese bhi main job kar hi rahi hoon na."
Saurabh ne Shatakshi ki baat suni aur bade naram hathon se uske hath ko thama. Usne Shatakshi ki aankhon mein dekhte hue kaha, "Main kabhi nahi chahunga ki mere ya mere parivaar ki wajah se tumhara sapna toote, Shatakshi."
Shatakshi ne uske hath par pyar se ek halki si chapat lagayi aur muskura kar kaha, "Accha? Aapka parivaar? Kya ye mera parivaar nahi hai?" Dono ek-dusre ko dekh rahe the, aur mahaul mein thodi si tension aur dher sara pyar ghula hua tha.
Tabhi Krutika, jo ab tak sab kuch dhyan se sun rahi thi, achanak bol padi. "Arre Bhaiya-Bhabhi! Aap abhi se itna tension kyun le rahe hain? Ek kaam karte hain na... abhi aap dono ja kar documents verify karwa lo aur preference bhar do. Baad ki baat baad mein dekhi jayegi. Agar is shehar mein nahi hua, toh mat karna join. Itna kyun sochna!"
Saurabh ko apni behen ki baat bilkul sahi lagi. Usne Shatakshi ki taraf dekha aur kaha, "Krutika sahi bol rahi hai. Haan Shatakshi, tum pehle ja kar dekh toh lo. Kya pata hum log yun hi pareshan ho rahe hon aur tumhara isi shehar mein ho jaye? Phir toh koi problem hi nahi hai."
Shatakshi ko bhi ye sujhaav pasand aaya. Akhir itne bade prestigious college mein kaam karna uska barson ka sapna tha. Usne mann hi mann faisla kar liya tha ki wo is mauke ko haath se nahi jane degi. Uske chehre par ab dobara wahi purani chamak laut aayi thi.
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Saurabh aur Shatakshi apne bedroom mein documents arrange karne mein lage hue the. Shatakshi badi hoshiyari se apni purani marksheet aur passport-size photos ek file mein laga rahi thi, wahin Saurabh uski madad kar raha tha. Dono ke beech ek sukoon bhari khamoshi thi, jo kal raat ki hulchul ke baad ab thodi shaanti mein badal gayi thi.
Tabhi Saurabh ke phone par ek notification ki awaaz aayi. Saurabh ka dhyan file mein tha, par Shatakshi ne turant kaha, "Dekhiye Saurabh ji, shayad aapke phone par koi zaroori message aaya hai."
Saurabh ne phone uthaya toh dekha ki uski mummy ke doctor ka appointment confirm hone ka message tha. Darasal, Mummy ji ko kaafi dino se kuch takleef thi aur unka checkup ek bahut hi mashhoor doctor se karwana tha, jinka appointment milna namumkin jaisa tha. Wo doctor shehar mein sirf kuch dino ke liye aaye hue the aur ab jaakar unka waqt mila tha.
Saurabh ne ghadi dekhi toh thoda pareshan ho gaya. "Shatakshi, ye toh gadbad ho gayi. Doctor se milne ka samay aur tumhare college jane ka waqt lagbhag ek hi hai," usne fikar se kaha.
Shatakshi ne bina soche turant kaha, "Arre isme pareshan hone wali kya baat hai? Aap Mummy ji ko dikha dijiye, unki sehat sabse pehle hai. Main khud chali jaungi, its fine."
Lekin Saurabh ka dil nahi maan raha tha. Wo apni patni ki safalta ke har ek kadam par uske sath rehna chahta tha, uska hath thame rakhna chahta tha. Usne ek pal ke liye socha ki Krutika ko Mummy ke sath bhej de, par phir use laga ki Krutika akeli shayad doctor se thik se baat na kar paye ya Mummy ko sambhal na sake.
Shatakshi ne uski duvidha (confusion) dekhi toh muskurakar Saurabh ka hath thama. "Accha chaliye ek kaam karte hain... main Krutika ke saath chali jaungi. Aap aaram se Mummy ko doctor ke paas le jaiye, thik hai?"
Saurabh ko thak-haar kar halat se samjhauta karna hi pada. Use dukh tha ki wo Shatakshi ke itne bade din par uske sath nahi hoga, par uske paas koi aur chara bhi nahi tha. Shatakshi ne use hausla diya, par uski apni aankhon mein ek ajeeb si chamak aur ghabrahat thi.
Uss raat Shatakshi ko bilkul neend nahi aa rahi thi. Wo bistar par karwatein badalti rahi, bas subah hone ka intezar karti rahi. Uske dimaag mein naya college, naye log aur nayi shuruat ke sapne ghoom rahe the.
Lekin Shatakshi ko kya pata tha... ki ye subah sirf uske career ki nahi, balki uske aur parivaar ke bahut se logo ki zindagi badalne wali thi. Wo 'prestigious college' uske liye kya naya toofan ya nayi khushi lekar aane wala tha, ye toh waqt hi batane wala tha.
Subah ki sunheri dhoop ghar mein nayi umeedon ki tarah phail rahi thi. Dining table par sabhi nashta kar rahe the, par Shatakshi ke dimaag mein sirf uska naya college aur documents verification ka khayal tha.
Saurabh ne apni chai ka aakhri ghoot bhara aur Shatakshi ko tokte huye kaha, "Late mat ho jana, time ka dhyan rakhna. Aur Krutika, tu bhabhi ki poori help karna. Shatakshi, saare zaroori documents check kar liye na?"
Shatakshi ne muskurate huye kaha, "Arre aap fikar mat kijiye, maine sab rakh liya hai. Aap bas aaram se nashta kijiye aur Mummy ji ko doctor ke paas le jaiye." Saurabh ne "haan baba" keh kar nashta khatam kiya aur Mummy ji ko lekar nikal gaya.
Idhar Shatakshi ne ghar ka kaam nipatane mein thodi jaldi dikhayi. Usne ghadi dekhi toh thodi hadbada gayi. "Ohho Krutika, kahin der na ho jaye!" Wo turant apne kamre mein gayi aur ek simple magar suthra salwar-kameez pehen kar bahar nikli. Uska nahaaya hua chehra aur saadgi mein bhi wo kisi apsara se kam nahi lag rahi thi. Krutika bhi apni jeans aur t-shirt mein taiyar thi.
Dono nanad-bhabhi jaise hi nikalne wali thin, tabhi Sasur ji apne kamre se poori tarah taiyar hokar bahar nikle. Unhe dekh kar aisa lag raha tha
jaise wo bhi kahin bahar jane wale hain.
Krutika ne chiddhate huye pucha, "Arre Papa! Aap itna ban-than ke kahan ki sawari taiyar kar rahe ho?"
Sasur ji ne thoda sambhalte huye kaha, "Kahin nahi beti, bas soch raha tha ki tum dono bacchiyan itni dhoop mein akele kahan bhatkogi? Main bhi saath chalta hoon, ghar pe baithe rehne se accha hai tum dono ki madad ho jayegi."
Shatakshi ne lihaz se mana karte huye kaha, "Arre Papa ji, aap kyun takleef kar rahe hain? Bahar bahut dhoop hai, aap ghar pe hi rahiye na. Main aur Krutika manage kar lenge."
Sasur ji ne mann hi mann socha, 'Arre beta, madad karne de na... acche karm karunga tabhi toh tere jaisa... mera matlab hai, tabhi toh accha meetha phal milega.'
Baahar se unhone bade pyar se kaha, "Shatakshi beta, isme takleef kya? Tu kya parayi hai? Tu bhi toh meri apni beti jaisi hai na. Ab tu mana karegi toh main gussa ho jaunga. Chal jaldi, der ho rahi hai na?"
Shatakshi ne phir se ghadi dekhi. Waqayi der ho rahi thi aur wo nahi chahti thi ki itni badi opportunity hath se nikal jaye. Usne socha ki chalo, Papa ji saath honge toh shayad kaam jaldi ho jaye. "Accha thik hai Papa ji, chaliye."
Sasur ji ke chehre par ek ajeeb si khushi aa gayi. Unki nigahein ek baar phir Shatakshi ke nikhre huye chehre par padi. Teeno ghar se bahar nikle, Krutika ne ghar lock kiya aur teeno us naye safar ki taraf nikal pade.
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Amazing start....keep rocking.....
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