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Misc. Erotica Hawas Ka Ghulam - Part-2
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This Diwali, Hawas ka Ghulam Part-2 Get set Ready for Mega Update. It's pertinent  to mention that this story is not going to be posted regularly this is mega Diwali gift. Story will be continue From the chapter-1. It is requested to the new Readers please Read first chapter so you can connect with the chapter
बर्बादी को निमंत्रण
https://xossipy.com/thread-1515.html

Hawas ka ghulam
https://xossipy.com/thread-33284-post-27...pid2738750

द मैजिक मिरर (THE MAGIC MIRROR) ( Unexpected Desire of Darkness ) PART-II 
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Hawas ka Ghula - Part - 2
pichle chapter mei aapne padha tha ki saleem ne kaise MLA ke ghar mei ghus kar dhoom machayi thi. aur kaise MLA ke tower se signal khatam ho gaya tha. MLA hakeem ke ghar se apni dhoti sambhalta hua baahar nikal aata hai aur aakar apni gaade mi baith jaata 
PIchle chapter ke antim update ke kuch ansh
reshma ko dekhte hi mla aur saleem dono ke lund thuka marte hai lekin ye kya mla ne fir se apna paani nikaal diya..
hakeem : he he he he dekhe miya tum to aag lagne se pahle hi thande pad gaye. Aur saleem miya ko dekho? Ye koi saadhaaran tel nhi hai miya is tel ko lagane ke baad banda ghanti ghodi chad sakta hai. Aur tum to ghodi dekh kar hi jhad gaye?
MLA : BURI TARAH SE sharminda ho gaya
Saleem : hakeem kuch karna yaar mere yaar ke liye 
Hakeem : saleem miya kasam khuda ki murde me jaan daal du lekin ye to zinda laash hai? Na to ye mara hai na zinda hai to aise me koi bhi hakeem kuch bhi nhi kar sakta ?
Ab to iski aurat ko padosi hi khush rakh sakte hai chahe to tum rakh lena saleem miya hehehehe majak kar raha hin bhai  lekin mei iska kuch nhi kar sakta .. 
Mla turant dhoti pahan kar hakeem ke waha se nikal jata hai saleem bhi MLA KE piche piche aakar gaadi mei baith jata hai.mla ke kano me ab tak hakeem ki hansi gunj rahi thi. 
Ab aage..........
 
MLA aur Saleem dono hakeem ke ghar se nikal kar chup-chaap gaadi mein baith gaye.
Gaadi ke andar sirf silence tha. Hakeem ki woh hansi ab bhi MLA ke kaanon mein gunj rahi thi – “Zinda laash hai miya… murde mein jaan daal du lekin ismein kuch hone wala nahi!”
MLA ne khidki se bahar dekha. Sadak par bhagte bacche, chillaate sabziwale, aur hawa mein udti dhool – sab kuch ek kahani keh rahe the.
Uske chehre pe pehli baar makeup nahi, thakaan thi.
Saleem ne dheere se kaha,
“Maalik, itna dil pe mat lo. Kabhi kabhi body nahi, dil thak jaata hai.”
MLA chup raha.
Phir bola,
“Saleem… aadmi jab khud ko sabse bada samajhne lagta hai, tab uske andar kuch toot jaata hai.” Gaadi chalte-chalte unke bungalow ke gate pe ruk gayi.
MLA sidha apne kamre mein gaya, darwaza band kiya, aur mirror ke saamne khada ho gaya.
Usne apna chehra dekha – Ek neta nahi, ek aam aadmi nazar aaya.
Thoda sharminda, thoda bechain. MLA ne apni dhoti kholi to uske saamne mungfali jaise uski lulli MLA ne uska chu kar dekhna bhar chaha ki Mla ki taange kaamp gayi aur ek second me MLA ne aapna maal uagal diya. MLA ko Gussa aaya. MLA Gusse mei aakar bed par baith gaya aur dheere dheere let kar apne kamre ki chat ko dekhne laga. use apni ayiyaashi ke din yaad aane lage. use un sabhi ladkiyon ki surat nazar aagayi jinke jism se kabhi wo khela karta tha. jinke cheekhen kabhi MLA ke man ko purnoor sukun diya karti thi. aise hi sochte sochte achanak se MLA ki nazron ke saamne reshma ki chavi ubhara aayi aur fir kya tha MLA fir se maal ugal diya. lekin is baar MLA ko gussa nhin aaya shayad MLA ko reshma bhaa gayi thi. MLA aise hi sochte sochte so gaya.
saleem apne man hi man mand mand muskuraraha tha saleem ko acche se pata tha ki MLA ki batti to gul ho gayi ab uska ek lauta waaris bacha hai. MLA ko rah rah kar kaamya, Anjali or aarti ki bhi yaad hi rahi thi. lekinsaleem ka usool tha ek jagah ka kaam pahle kare.
isliye saleem ne sochliya tha pahle MLA ke ghar ko thikane lagana padega.
(Pichle kuch update mei meine prashant ko galti se sonu likh diya tha paayal ke bhai prashant ko ab se prashant hi kahenge )
raat ko.....
saleem:- prashant , chote maalik kuch kiya ki nahi..
prashant : kahan, behanchod lund ko daalne jata hun ki maal nikal jaata hai...
saleem : kyaa??? ye to bahut badi gadbad ho gayi hai maalik..
prashant: kaisi gadbad?
saleem : ek garam chut ko aap ne bina thanda kiye hi chod diya?
prashant : saleem ki girebaaan pakadta hua ... saale haramkhor, 
saleem: prashant ke haath ko hatate huye , mei aapke bhale ki baat kar raha hun agar ab paayal bitiya ko dam daar land nhi mila to kahi wo paagal na ho jaaye. ya ye bhi ho sakta hai ki paayal bitiya kahi aur muh maarne lage..
prashaant : thoda sa sahaj hote huye baat to tum sahi kah rahe ho lekin mei aaj din bhar se sainkado porn video dekh chuka hun ye khada hi nahi ho raha?
saleem : fir to aap apne kisi dost se bolo ki wo aapki bahan ki chudaayi kare?
prashaant : haan ye sahi hoga... (bina soche samjhe haami bharne ke baad) nhi nhi ye nhi kar sakta mere doston ke beech meri naak kat jaayegi mei naamard nazar aaunga mei apne doston se ye nhin kah sakta...
saleem: to fir aap apne kisi wafadaar se kahoki wo jaakar aaj raat paayal bitiya ki chudaayi kare nhin to aapko to pata hi hai kya ho sakta hai mei chalta hun maalik...
 saleem prashant ke man mei dar ke bhaav bun kar lata devi ke kamre mei chala jaata hai... lata devi abhi soyi nhin thi lata devi ne turant apni aankhe band kar li...
saleem : - maalkin so gayi kya....? saleem apni chaal chalte huye maalkin aapke bete ne aaj mujhe aapki cudaayi ke liye fir se kaha.. maalkin mei aapka gunegaar hun lekin aapka beta mujhse bhi bada hai... wo aapko har roj neend ki goliya dete hai mujhe to aapki fiqr ho rahi hai .. aise roj roj neend ki goli se sharir ko bahut nuksaan hone lagta hai maalkin.
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prashant : saleem kaha ho?
saleem : maalik aapke kaam ke siwa kya kar sakta hun kamre me hi hun.
prashant : chudaayi kar rahe ho ?
saleem : ji maalik
video call karke dikhao?
saleem video call karke lata devi ki saadi ko kamar tak upar uthata hai aur lata devi ki taange failata hai... saleem jaise jaise lata devi ki taang failata hai waise waise lata devi ki chut ke hont bhi khulne lagte hai joki ek bada hi kaamuk drishya tha
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video call prashant uthata hai to use nazar aata hai saleem ka bhayank lund aur ek khubsurat si chut jo ki khud uski maa ki hailekin prashant ko abhi ye maloom nhi tha?
prashant : daal land anadr
saleem : ek jhatke se lund andar daal deta hai 
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prashant: saale dheere daal aaj meine maa ko neend ki goli nhin di hai
बर्बादी को निमंत्रण
https://xossipy.com/thread-1515.html

Hawas ka ghulam
https://xossipy.com/thread-33284-post-27...pid2738750

द मैजिक मिरर (THE MAGIC MIRROR) ( Unexpected Desire of Darkness ) PART-II 
https://xossipy.com/thread-70677-post-60...pid6048878
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Waiting for new update bhai
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Update - 2

prashant : saleem kaha ho?
saleem : maalik aapke kaam ke siwa kya kar sakta hun kamre me hi hun.
prashant : chudaayi kar rahe ho ?
saleem : ji maalik
video call karke dikhao?
saleem video call karke lata devi ki saadi ko kamar tak upar uthata hai aur lata devi ki taange failata hai... saleem jaise jaise lata devi ki taang failata hai waise waise lata devi ki chut ke hont bhi khulne lagte hai joki ek bada hi kaamuk drishya tha
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video call prashant uthata hai to use nazar aata hai saleem ka bhayank lund aur ek khubsurat si chut jo ki khud uski maa ki hailekin prashant ko abhi ye maloom nhi tha?
prashant : daal land anadr
saleem : ek jhatke se lund andar daal deta hai 
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prashant: saale dheere daal aaj meine maa ko neend ki goli nhin di hai
ab aage....
Saleem : ko to pata hi tha ki lata devi koi neend me nhi hai. ye sab to saleem ka apna plan tha. saleem naatak karte huye... kya maalik ?
prashant : bakwas nhi udhar ka kaam khatam karke paayal ke room me chale jaana.
saleem: maalik mei paayal bitiya ke saath ??
prashant : dekh ujhe tujh par bharosa jyada hai tu hai to humaari ijjat safe rahegi. warna duniya waale mujhe aur mere baap ko naamard kahenge.
saleem ye sab speaker on karke lata devi ko sunata rahta hai. fir saleem ko lagta hai ki prashant baato baato mei bhanda fod sakta hai to saleem turant phone kaat deta hai.
saleem: maalkin ab to aankh khol dijiye. ab to aap jaag rahi hai.
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lata devi halke se aankh kholti hai saleem ko dekhti hai. 
saleem: maalkin hamari koi galti nhi hai ye to aapke bete....
lata devi saleem ko ishare se chup rahne ko bolti hai...
saleem chup ho jata hai... saleem ka lund ab bhi lata devi ki chut mei tha. lata devi saleem ke land ki motai aur lambaai apne pet mei feel kar rahi thi. use saleem ka ek dam se land daalne par diye dard ka ehsaas ab bhi tha.
saleem lata devi ke bhaavon ko acche se samajh kar man hi man muskura raha tha. saleem ab lata devi ko hosh mei laane ke liye apne uthne ki koshish kar hai aur isi bahane se apne aadhe se jyada land ko chut se baahar nikaal leta hai bus topa andar rahne deta hai fir chalaki se lata devi ke ek per ko apne baayen haath par grakar achanak se girne ka naatak karte huye apne pure land ko fir se lata devi ki gehraai mei jabardast dhakke ke saath sarka deta hai ye dhakka itna gahra tha ki lata devi ke garbhaashya mei jaakar thokar maarta hai. lata devi ko bahut dard hota hai lata devi saleem ko apni baahaon mei kas leti hai. aur halke se saleem ke kaanon mei bolti hai.
lata: aahhhh... aaraam se saleem...... ummm dard hota hai.
saleem: maaf kijiye maalkin mei gir gay atha to...
lata: lekin tum gir kaise gaye.
saleem : (yahi to chahiye tha use taaki apni gandi baaton ka jadu dikha sake) wo maalkin aapki tight chut mei mera musal land andar tha na to use nikaalne ke liye utha tha.
lata: lekin kyu nikaal raha tha.. (sharmate huye) 
saleem: maalkin hum aapki chudaayi...
lata : (saleem ko bina pura bolne diye...) aaam se aur dheere dheere karo..
saleem : maalkin aapko acha lagega?
lata: hmm
saleem : halke halke dhake lagane lagta hai . 
lata devi ko bahut accha lagne lagta hai lata devi ki chudaayi karte karte saleem bolta hai
saleem: maalkin aaj bade maalik ko hakeem ke paas lekar gaya tha.. unka land ab khada nhin hota hai aur hota bhi hai to turant maal ugal deta hai 
lata : (chonkte huye) kya?
saleem : ji aur aapke bete prashant ka bhi yahi haal hai maalkin
lata devi: ye dono baap bete bhi na agar apni harkat se baaj aajate to...
lata abhi itna hi bol paayi thi ki saleem khud ko adjust karte huye jor se dhakke lagane lagta hai ..
lata : aaah aah ummm salleeeeem dheere baba...
saleem : (apne dhakke rokte huye) maalkin ek baat kahe aap bura to nhin maanengi..?
lata: hmm bolo 
saleem apna land lata ki chut se nikal kar apna muh lata ki chut par rakh deta hai.. 
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saleem ki jubaan lata apni chut ke daane par mahsus karte hi akad si jaati hai..
saleem: (choot chaat te huye ) ham naa aapse ishq kar baithe hai ... aap hame bahot acchi lagti hai ... kya ham apni marji se aapke saath kabhi bhi chudaayi kar sakte hai ? kya aap hame ye adhikaar denge..
lata: chonkte huye saleem ki aankhon me dekhti hai aur sharma jaati .. hmmmmmmm (kaamukta ke saath)
haa diya aapko ye adhikaar 
saleem ye sunte hi jor se lata devi ko unki choot se nichodne lagta hai... saleem ki chusaayi se lata devi achanak akdte huye kuch kaampte huye ...  jhad jaati hai 

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lata devi abhi susta hi rahi thi ki saleem apna land lekar lata devi ke muh ke paas chala jaata hai..
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saleem: maalkin ek baar ise bhi thoda sa pyaar kar dijiye. taaki hamare pyaar ki shuruaat ho sake..
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lata devi halki si aankh kholkar saleem ke vikral land ko dekhti hai aur halke se uske tope ko chuma deti hai aur sharma jaati hai.. 

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fir halke halke saleem ke land ko apne haath mei pakad kar uski motaai aur lambaai par fidaa hote huye use apne muh me lene lagti hai.
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बर्बादी को निमंत्रण
https://xossipy.com/thread-1515.html

Hawas ka ghulam
https://xossipy.com/thread-33284-post-27...pid2738750

द मैजिक मिरर (THE MAGIC MIRROR) ( Unexpected Desire of Darkness ) PART-II 
https://xossipy.com/thread-70677-post-60...pid6048878
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lata saleem ke land ke tope ko muh me lekar apni jeeb se chubhlaane lagti hai .. 

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naa jaane kyu lekin lata devi ko ye behad accha lag raha tha. 
fir saleem hole hole lata devi ka muh chodne lagta hai .. 

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ab saleem ka land ek dam tigh tha aur fatne ko taiyaar tha.
saleem apna land lata ke muh se nikal kar lata dev pe sawar ho jata haiaur apne land ko lata devi ki chut ke muh par ragadne lagta hai..

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bina ki warning ke taabad tod dhakke lagane lagta hai in dhakkon ka tufaan aisa tha ki lata devi ka pura kamra aaah aahh mmmmm ummmm aah ki aawajon aur lata devi ki siskaariyon se gunj raha tha. lata devi aur saleem ki chudaayi ke chalte lata devi ka paani saleem ke land ke dhakko se jhaag ka rup lene laga tha.

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 aur sabse jyada aankhon ko bhaane wala wo drashya tha jab saleem ke dhakkon ke saath saleem ke maal se bhare gote baar baar har dahakke ke saath ye kah rahe the ki hame khaali karo saleem hame khaali karo..
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 saleem ki jaanghe lata devi ki jaanghon ke jod ko felaaye aisa thap thap ki aawaje kar rahi thi jaise aaj koi dhol bajakar saari duniya ko bata raha ho ki kila fateh ho gaya hai.. 

lata devi ka sarir uske apne hi bistar par lete lete upar niche ho raha tha aur lata ke unnat uroj wo mad mast chuhe aise hil rahe the jaise maano tufanon mei bade bade pe hilore kaate hai.. 

[Image: 5661.gif]lata devi aise haanf rahi thi jaise  naa jane kab se daud rahi ho aur achanak se ye daud samapt ho gayi .. 

achanak se lata devi jhad gayi aur lata devi ke saath saath saleem bhi lata devi ki chut mei apna maal ugal kar pura garbh bhar deta hai. ye antim dhakka saleem ka aisa tha ki lata devi ki chut ki gahraayi tak apne lad ko le jaakar apne maalki pichkaari maar raha tha .
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saleem apna land lata ki chut se jaise hi baahar nikaalta hai saleem kaa maal lata ki chut se bahar nikal kar bahne lagta hai.
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lata devi ke chehre par santushti ke bhaav saaf nazar aa rahe the. 

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saleem bhi pani kutil muskaan bikher ne lagata hai.
lata devi saleem ko apne gale laga leti hai...

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 saleem lata devi ko chumta hai aur maalkin ab ham jaate hai paayal bitiya ke room mei..

saleem itna bolkar dhoti pahnne lagta hai...

saleem jaise hi kamre ke darwaje par pahunchta hai 

lata devi: saleem

saleem piche mud kar lata devi ko dekhta hai

lata devi chahti to saleem ko rokna thi lekin pata nhi kya sockar saleem se kahti hai..

lata : saleem meri bacchi bahut massom hai.. wo tumhaar itna bada jhel nhi paayegi jo bhi karo aaram se karna
 
saleem: muskurata hua aap chinta naa karen mei use ek dum mast kar dunga aur aap ye bhi na soche ki tigh jawan chut milne par apko bhul jaaunga aap to mera pahla pyaar hai ..

lata saleem ki baat sunkar kuch santosh man mei aata hai lete lete hi saleem ko ek chumaa deti hai..

saleem lata devi ke kamre se nikal kar MLA KE KAMRE KI TARAF JAATA hai ab saleem apna agla paasa fenkne waala tha.

saleem: (darwaja khatkhatata hua ) maalik maalik 

MLA: kaun hai ?

saleem : mei hun maalik saleem

MLA: kya hua itni raat ko ??

saleem : aap darwaaja to khole 

MLA: darwaja kholte huye: kya hua?

saleem: maalik aapke bete prashant ka bhi tower gir gaya hai?
MLA: kya? (sadme mei) lekin kaise?

saleem : maalik aapke bete bahut nasha karte hai 

MLA: gussa hote huye.. are meine prashant ki shaadi DEVRAJ ki bahan kaamya ke saath tay kar di hai. aur ye bhosdika chakka bana baith hai?
saleem: (chonkte huye) kaun devraj saahab?

MLA: MERE GUNAAHON KA PARTNER HAI ek security officer wala acp devraj....
saleem: (man mei sala mere maal par nazar) lekin maalik ab kya hoga? 
MLA: ye baat baahar kisi ko pata na chali ki prashant..

saleem: samajh gaya maalik lekin shaadi ke baad ye baat saamne aaye tab aap kya jawab denge devraj ko ?

MLA: USI KA TO DAR HAI ? security officer wale ki dosti acchi na dushmani aur devraaj koi aisa waisa security officer wala nhi hai wo sala mantri ko udane se pahle nhi sochta aur uska dimaag itna tej hai ki udane ke baad wo ek dam safed collar nikal kar baahar aata hai tabhi to usse yaari ki hai meine.

Saleem: ek tension aur hai maalik?

MLA: ab kya hai?

saleem apna mobile nikalta hai aur ek recording play karta hai....

MLA: (RECORDING SUNNE KE BAAD) ye kya kah raha hai prashant... (sadme me)

saleem: ji maalik aapke bete ne nashe aur hawas mei apni hi bahan par chadayi kar di lekin wo safal nhi huye aur aapki beti aag mei jal rahi hai kahin wo baahar muh kaala na karle isliye aapke bete ne mujhse kaha ki mei aapki beti ke saath? (apni baat ko adhura chod kar mla ke haav bhaav samajhte huye) lekin meine aapka namak khaaya hai maalik isliye aapko batana zaruri bhi tha .. maalik agar mei aapki beti ki chudayi nahi karta hun to aapke bete ne mujhe meri gaand maarne ki dhamkee di hai...

MLA : ek dam gussa hote huye... gaand maarega wo?? MLA KUCH SOCH KAR .. saleem aaj se tum is ghar ke sadasya ho.. aaj ke baad tum is ghar ke nokar nhin ho mere muh bole bhai ho. 

saleem: maalik (chonkte huye) 

Mla: ab se is ghar mei tumhara faislautna hi maayne rakhega jitna ki mera

saleem: maalik mei kaise?

MLA: ab tum kya chahte ho mei tumhare pair padu 

saleem : nhin nhin maalik (saala ye to plan se badh kar ho raha hai)

MLA: tum paayal ke saath jo chaaho kar sakte ho saleem lekin dhyaan rahe is ghar ki ijjat par kabhi aanch naa aaye 

saleem: aap chinta naa karen maalik lekin aapke bete mujhe baat baat par gaand maarne ki dhamkee dete hai to.....

MLA: saleem ki baat kaat kar kal raat ko tum prashant ke kamre me jaaoge 

saleem: (TENSION MEI )maalik mujhe apni gaand nhi marwani.

MLA: (MUSKURATA HUA) MAARNI TO HAI NA ...

saleem: ji (chonkte huye) aap kahna kya chahte hai 

MLA: kal se tum prashant ki gaand maaroge aur uski cheekhe mujhe mere kamre mei sunaayi deni chahiye..

saleem: chonkte huye MLA ki taraf dekhta hai tabhi MLA apni dhoti pakad kar niche gir jaata hai 

saleem : maalik kya hua 

MLA : apne bete ki gaand marwane ki baat par sala mera maal kyu chut gaya

saleem aur MLA dono ek saath hansne lagte hai 

saleem MLA ke kamre se baahar nikal kar sidha sarita ke kamre mei jaata hai jahan sarita ghode bech kar so rahi thi....
saleem sarita ke husn ke didaar karta naa jaane kaha kho gaya tha saleem apne jeb se ek choti si bottle nikaalta hai aur use dekhte hue muskurata hai...
बर्बादी को निमंत्रण
https://xossipy.com/thread-1515.html

Hawas ka ghulam
https://xossipy.com/thread-33284-post-27...pid2738750

द मैजिक मिरर (THE MAGIC MIRROR) ( Unexpected Desire of Darkness ) PART-II 
https://xossipy.com/thread-70677-post-60...pid6048878
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आप सभी पाठकों को यह सूचित किया जाता है की कहानी पर अगर सही रेस्पोंस नहीं मिलता है तो मजबूरन कहानी को जल्दी खतम कर दिया जावेगा इसलिए कृपा करके साइलेंट पाठक ना बने और लेखकों की मेहनत को सराहने का कष्ट करें। इस कहानी को अभी पोस्ट करने का मेरा कोई प्लान नहीं था लेकिन सोच रहा हूँ तीनी कहानियों का अंत एक साथ कर दूँ तो ज्यादा बेहतर है। लेकिन अगर पाठकों का रेस्पोंस न मिले तो हमारा भी इन्टरेस्ट खतम हो जाता है
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https://xossipy.com/thread-33284-post-27...pid2738750

द मैजिक मिरर (THE MAGIC MIRROR) ( Unexpected Desire of Darkness ) PART-II 
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please jaldi end karne ki kosish mat karna

ye forum kisi time pe bahut active hua karta tha


lekin mod ke manmaani ki wajah se ab log nahi aate , mod bina bataye update hata rahe ,story hata rahe ,kisi ko bhi ban kar rahe

story ko apne pass save rakhe

me jaldi hi ye story padhunga

thanks ,and keep updating
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(22-10-2025, 11:34 AM)Rocksanna999 Wrote: आप सभी पाठकों को यह सूचित किया जाता है की कहानी पर अगर सही रेस्पोंस नहीं मिलता है तो मजबूरन कहानी को जल्दी खतम कर दिया जावेगा इसलिए कृपा करके साइलेंट पाठक ना बने और लेखकों की मेहनत को सराहने का कष्ट करें। इस कहानी को अभी पोस्ट करने का मेरा कोई प्लान नहीं था लेकिन सोच रहा हूँ तीनी कहानियों का अंत एक साथ कर दूँ तो ज्यादा बेहतर है। लेकिन अगर पाठकों का रेस्पोंस न मिले तो हमारा भी इन्टरेस्ट खतम हो जाता है

Writer bhai tumne baat toh sahi kahi hai agle updates se comment jarur karunga....

Iss kahani ka pahla part padhe hue bohot time ho gaya hai aur tabse aage ke kahani ka intezar tha ab jab shuru hua hai toh thora lamba likhna plz kyuki abhi bohot kahani ka hissa bacha hua hai
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(Today, 10:13 AM)red_devil_98 Wrote: Writer bhai tumne baat toh sahi kahi hai agle updates se comment jarur karunga....

Iss kahani ka pahla part padhe hue bohot time ho gaya hai aur tabse aage ke kahani ka intezar tha ab jab shuru hua hai toh thora lamba likhna plz kyuki abhi bohot kahani ka hissa bacha hua hai

Ye last part hai bro isi part me kahani ka end hoga
बर्बादी को निमंत्रण
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Hawas ka ghulam
https://xossipy.com/thread-33284-post-27...pid2738750

द मैजिक मिरर (THE MAGIC MIRROR) ( Unexpected Desire of Darkness ) PART-II 
https://xossipy.com/thread-70677-post-60...pid6048878
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