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You're welcome Maitri....
I'm sorry that you got me all wrong.... if you read my comment i have mentioned re-started not re-written.....
Yes the story was written in Hinglish... and maybe according to the writer it must be complete.... but it did feel like an incomplete end..... and good that you re-started the story again....
Generally people prefer to read in english or hinglish.... very few readers go ahead to read in hindi fonts..... I being brought up in Mumbai.... went to an english college where hindi was a subject.... so I'm weak at reading and writing hindi and its time consuming for me.... not that i cannot read and write hindi at all....
Please do not take the trouble of writing/commenting in hindi and english fonts just for me... hinglish or english any one is enough...
I will provide my honest opinion and comments till the end of the story its a promise..... keep up the good work.... all the best.

Thank you, friend.

The unfortunate truth for the BHARAT and for us is that we haven't yet freed ourselves from mental slavery (Bondage). (By "The BHARAT," means I include myself.) So please don't take this personally.

In the BHARAT, outside of North BHARAT and to some extent West BHARAT, I do believe that many people don't understand or can't read and write Hindi.

The English language is ruling over us. The shameful thing is that even Parliament and the courts (major Govt. Agencies) are accepted its servility; you and I are far away.

Well we need to overcome from English slavery.

Thank you again, friend.

As for the story, it could be enjoyable if it unfolds in its own way. It's available in the language of your preferred one.


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father-in-law and daughter-in-law game part 8

The father-in-law and daughter-in-law started fucking and Jabbar arrived

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Continuing from the previous part...
 
To understand the full story, read parts 1 to 7 of this story...
 
Now moving ahead...
 
Terms of words
 
Choot= Pussy, vagina
 
Lund= Cock,dick
 
PART 8
 
As soon as they were naked, they embraced and began kissing. Raja Saheb fondled and fondled his daughter-in-law's ample buttocks. Then, leaving his lips, Menaka kissed his chest, moving down to his Lund, and then, kneeling, began sucking it. Pressing his testicles in her soft hands, she sucked his Lund vigorously, leaving Raja Saheb moaning. Presented by Maitri.
 
He lifted her into his lap and went into the drawing room. There, he laid Menaka down on the sofa and began kissing her stomach. He began rubbing her clit with his finger.
 
"Oooh!" Menaka's sensual moans filled the deserted farmhouse. Raja Saheb's face leaned over her Choot, and he began licking her clitoris with his tongue. Menaka began to buck wildly and climaxed. Raja Saheb drank all the fluid that had come out of her Choot.
 
Then Raja Saheb stood up and stood behind her head. Menaka saw his Lund before her eyes, reached behind her hand and grabbed his buttocks. Tilting her head back, she took his Lund into her mouth once again and began sucking it. Raja Saheb moved his hand down and began squeezing her boobs and rubbing her nipples.
 
Just then, Raja Saheb had an idea. He removed his Lund from Menaka's mouth and ran towards the kitchen. Menaka was surprised, but by the time she got up, Raja Saheb had returned. He had a bowl in his hand. Raja Saheb sat down next to her and began spooning the contents of the bowl onto her boobs.
 
"Oooh!" Menaka moaned as she felt a cool wetness on her chest. She saw Raja Saheb covering her boobs with ice cream. Raja Saheb put his bowl aside and pounced on his daughter-in-law's ice cream-soaked boobs. Menaka went crazy. Raja Saheb licked her chest clean, then filled her navel with ice cream and then cleaned it with his tongue. written by Maitri.
 
Now it was her Choot's turn. Raja Saheb applied ice cream there too and then licked it clean. Menaka orgasmed twice with her father-in-law's ice cream-licking tongue. Now it was her turn. She got up, grabbed her father-in-law, and sat him down on the sofa. She scooped ice cream from her bowl and applied it to his Lund and testicles. Then she started licking them with her tongue. Sitting on the sofa with her legs dangling, Raja Saheb was in awe. As soon as Menaka licked the last drop of ice cream, he picked her up and, sitting on the sofa, placed her on his lap, on his Lund.
 
The two were now staring into each other's eyes. Menaka's Choot was locked with Raja Saheb's Lund, and she held his face in her hands, which she was kissing. Raja Saheb, too, held her body tightly in his arms, playing with her back and ass.
 
Menaka began kissing her father-in-law and moving her waist to fuck him. Raja Saheb's Lund was hitting her womb, and her Choot was flooded with fluids that were about to erupt.

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She held her father-in-law's head and bent it over her boobs. Raja Saheb also began sucking her boobs. Her boobs were now completely covered with the marks of his lips. Raja Saheb's testicles were also beginning to feel a mild ache. He grabbed his daughter-in-law's ass and, while sucking her nipples, released his cum with such force that Menaka orgasmed once again.

 
After they ejaculated, they both sat there kissing each other. "Is this farmhouse yours?" Maitri's creation.
 
"No, it's ours." He gestured towards himself and Menaka. Menaka looked down and saw his Lund, despite shrinking after ejaculation, still lying in her Choot as if it were still erect. She began to gently rub her Choot.
 
"This is one of those properties whose papers are in the study."
 
"You're going to donate it all, aren't you?"
 
"Yes, of course. But let's think about taking this farmhouse in our name and making it the home of our love. What do you say?"
 
In response, Menaka smiled and kissed his lips. The movements of her Choot made Raja Saheb's Lund hot again. He stood with his Lund still inside her Choot and moved towards the farmhouse bedroom. Written by Maitri.
 
Entering the bedroom, Menaka was shocked. The entire room seemed decorated for the wedding night. The room was filled with flowers, and the large bed in the center was strewn with red rose petals.
 
She looked at Raja Saheb questioningly. "I told the care tacker that someone I knew would be coming here with his new bride and staying overnight, so he did all this decorating for them. I also gave him leave on the pretext that the couple didn't want anyone to disturb them."
 
Raja Saheb laid down on the bed with Menaka in his arms and began to fuck her again. Menaka lay beneath him for a while, then, holding him; she turned him over, placed him under her, and began to fuck him from above, moving her waist. Her heavy boobs rubbed against her father-in-law's hairy chest, and her lips pressed against his lips.
 
 
They continued to fuck like this for a while, and then Raja Saheb turned her over, mounted on her, and began to fuck her. Their tossing and turning was crushing the rose petals and spreading a heady fragrance throughout the room. Menaka was flying high again. She tightened her legs around her father-in-law's waist and began thrusting from below. Raja Saheb pulled his Lund out completely, then inserted it all the way to the base in one stroke.
 
"Oooo... oooooo...!" Menaka screamed. Raja Saheb repeated the same action, fucking her harder. Menaka was completely out of control. She dug her nails into her father-in-law's ass, and her Choot began to squirt. The sting of her nails intensified Raja Saheb's waist movements, and he once again began to release his semen inside his daughter-in-law's Choot. Brought to you by Maitri.
 
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When Raja Saheb woke up in the morning, he realized he was alone in bed. Menaka was probably in the bathroom. He got up and went to the kitchen, put on his underwear, pulled out his pants, took out his mobile phone, and started talking to Dr. Purandare in Bangalore.


That's it for the day.

See you soon with another update. until then from Maitri JAY BHARAT.

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Jai Bharat Maitri...
Thank you for the reply and wonderful update..... Please don't get angry and take the below para personal.....

English version is much more better.....
Hinglish would have been excellent I think....
Even words like choot should be replaced with pussy/cunt/vagina  and lund with cock/penis/dick.....

What's your opinion Maitri ??.....

Thanks dost

Nothing personal here, Everyone has his own choice.

I do use those words in my stories......

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Yes very true here what you said..... 

It sounds really erotic hearing such words like lund and choot......

When is the next update going to be posted ??

शुक्रिया दोस्त

आज शायद एक अपडेट दे दूंगी

बने रहिये कहानी के साथ

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Let's moving forward in this story...............

Hope this episode may attract you ro post some feedback.

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When Raja Saheb woke up in the morning, he realized he was alone in bed. Menaka was probably in the bathroom. He got up and went to the kitchen, put on his underwear, pulled out his pants, took out his mobile phone, and started talking to Dr. Purandare in Bangalore.

Moving forward from here............



The news was good; Vishwa was trying his best to quit his addiction. Raja Saheb was delighted, but then the thought of Menaka brought the smile to his face. He knew he would have to stop all this if Vishwa came, but he had fallen in love with Menaka's beauty and love. That's why he had planned this farmhouse trip. He wanted to enjoy the pleasures of love with Menaka to the fullest before his son's arrival.
 
Lost in these thoughts, he called Dushyant Verma, "How are you, friend?" Maitri's creation.
 
"Everything is fine, tell me your latest."
 
"I'm fine, did you find out anything about the man in the photo?"
 
"No, friend, it seems he's a bit of a scam. We haven't found any trace of him. He doesn't seem to be connected to Jabbar either. Jabbar is out of town these days, after all. I don't know where he is."
 
"Friend, Jabbar isn't bothering us here. That's why we fear he's either plotting a big conspiracy or has already begun one. I don't know why my gut tells me he's responsible for Vishwa's drug addiction!"
 
"Don't worry so much now, friend. Everything will be fine. My disciple, Manish, will get to the bottom of this matter and solve all your problems."
 
"I have complete faith in you, friend."
 
After that, the two friends exchanged some random words and hung up. Everything will be fine. It will be, but what about the relationship between Menaka and me? What is the destination of this relationship? Raja Saheb's mind was abuzz with questions when Menaka arrived. Brought to you by Maitri.
 
She was wearing a bathrobe that reached just up to her buttocks. "I need clothes!"
 
"You're already wearing them." Raja Saheb's heart felt light and he was in a playful mood upon seeing her.
 
"Please, Yash, give me some clothes." Menaka fidgeted like a child.
 
"Okay." Raja Saheb, still wearing only black underwear, went out to the car and brought a packet and handed it to her.
 
"This! whether I wear it or not is the same." Menaka was holding a red two-piece string bikini.
 
"Hey, just try it and show me."
 
"I'll put it on, and you'll take it off in two minutes. You've been making me miserable all night. I don't have the strength to do it today. Please give me some decent clothes."
 
"Hey, darling! Just try it on and show me." Raja Saheb insisted.
 
"I'll wear it on one condition."
 
"What?"
 
"After I wear it, you won't touch me at all."
 
"What kind of strange condition is that? You'll enjoy making love even more after wearing it. Please, forget about this condition and show me how you look like."
 
"Un-hyung, I'll wear it if you agree to my condition."


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"Okay, I agree to the condition, but I also have one condition: you'll take off your clothes yourself, and then I'll make love to you for as long as I want."

 
"Okay, just wait, I am sure, I won't take off my clothes myself."
 
Menaka unzipped her bathrobe and slid it off her body. Now she was completely naked, only the chain hanging from her neck, caressing her boobs. Menaka picked up her bikini panties, pulled them up her legs, covered her Choot, and began tying the strings around her waist. Her eyes were fixed on her father-in-law's face, and a mischievous smile played on her lips.
 
Rajasaheb's lips were dry. He stared at his daughter-in-law with hungry eyes. Menaka picked up her bikini bra, put it around her neck, and reached behind her hands to tie the strings. Then, turning around, she presented her velvety back to her father-in-law, "Tie it, please! And yes, don't touch." Written by Maitri.
 
Rajasaheb was faced with his daughter-in-law's nearly bare back, and her ass barely contained in her swimsuit panties. He reached out and tied the strings. Menaka took out the food, signaled her father-in-law to sit, and began serving him breakfast, bending down, her boobs dangling in front of his mouth. Rajasaheb's hunger was nothing compared to his lust. As long as they continued talking, his eyes kept staring at his daughter-in-law's cleavage peeking out from under her bikini top.
 
Menaka was thoroughly enjoying teasing her father-in-law. She got up, turned around, and walked out of the kitchen. Raja Saheb followed her.
 
Menaka knew that her father-in-law was drawn to her by her beauty, and that his hands were tied due to the condition. She decided to tease him further and began walking with her buttocks swaying a little more. Raja Saheb's Lund was eager to tear through his underwear and come out.
 
Menaka came to the pool behind the farmhouse, "Wow! What a beautiful pool!" She dived into it and started swimming. Raja Saheb sat there and started watching the mermaid. As Menaka swam and moved up and down in the water, her boobs seemed to be eager to come out of her bra.
 
Just then, Menaka came and stood in front of her father-in-law in that part of the pool where there was only 4 feet of water. The drops of water on her fair body were shining like diamonds.
 
 
"What happened, Yash? Do all well?" She said, stretching her arms above her head. This made her breasts even more visible through the neck of her bra. Raja Saheb was in great pain, but what could he do? He had agreed to the bet. Maitri Patel's creation.
 
Menaka swam around the pool twice and then stood there, teasing her father-in-law with her antics. But this time Raja Saheb had already thought of a way to tease her. He stood up and took off his underwear. Raja Saheb's Lund emerged, throbbing. Raja Saheb took it in his hand and began stroking it.

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A new update posted


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Excellent Maitri ....
Super duper update....
Please post update on regular basis.... I know it's busy life for everyone.....

Thank you mitra.

Yes I will try the post on regular basisi if such comments come across.

Thanks again for such highlights and feel free if so.........

Thanks again

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Let's reveal something from the story........................

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Moving ahead from where we left............


Menaka stared at them in amazement. This was the first time she had seen a man play with his Lund like this. Her eyes were glued to her father-in-law's Lund. She had become obsessed with it. She had made the bet to tease Raja Saheb, but in reality, she just wanted to cling to him all the time, to feel his cock in her hands, in her mouth, or in her pussy. Presented by Maitri.

 
Her hand automatically went to her Choot (pussy) and started caressing it. Raja Saheb kept stroking his penis, and Menaka's choot was getting wetter. She was getting excited, and she no longer remembered any of the conditions. She untied the strings of her bikini with her own hands and let it fall into the pool water.
 
Raja Saheb's trick worked. He also jumped into the pool, embraced her, and began kissing her. Menaka held his penis in her hand and returned his kiss. Raja Saheb started pressing her buttocks, and Menaka, laughing, jumped away from him and started swimming in the water. Raja Saheb followed her and caught her shortly after.
 
Grabbing her from behind, he clung to her, placing his Lund in the crevice of her ass. Then, swimming, he brought her to a shallow spot, leaned against the pool wall, and began inserting his Lund into her Choot from behind.
 
Menaka turned around and embraced him. Now her choot was directly in front of her father-in-law's Lund. She spread her legs, inserted his Lund into her Choot with her own hand, and then tightened her legs around his waist. Both of their lower abdomens were underwater. Raja Saheb continued to fuck his daughter-in-law's Choot in this manner. Menaka, clinging to him, began to dive into the ocean of pleasure. She couldn't even remember how many times she had orgasmed from her father-in-law's fucking. All she remembered was that her father-in-law's hot semen had spilled into her Choot. After that, he picked her up with his Lund still inside her Choot, and she fell asleep in his arms, exhausted.
 
When Menaka woke up, she found herself lying on the velvet Iranian rug in the drawing room, her father-in-law lying next to her, lost in his thoughts. She looked at the clock, and it was 4:00 AM. She had been asleep for the past four or five hours. And why wouldn't she? Raja Saheb had left her at 3:30 AM yesterday after fucking her all night. She rolled over, rested her head on his chest, and began playing with his hair. "What are you thinking about?"
 
"Nothing." Raja Saheb began stroking her head.
 
"What's the matter that you're not telling me? That day too, you got a call and rushed to the city. What exactly is the matter? I want to know." Menaka rested her elbow on his chest, looking at his face.
 
"You won't like this."
 
"I still want to hear it."
 
"So listen, I was thinking about Vishwa."
 
Menaka turned her face and looked away.
 
"See, I told you! You would upset, aren't you?" He started caressing her cheeks. Brought to you by Maitri.
 
"Still, tell me why you went from city to city?"
 
"So listen." Raja Saheb turned over, and Menaka lay down too. Now, they both lay on their sides, looking at each other. "It's Vishwa's own weakness that he fell victim to this bad addiction, but who exactly was the person who supplied him with drugs? That's what I'm trying to find out." Then he told her about Dushyant Verma and their investigation.
 
He pulled her left thigh over his right thigh and placed his right leg between her legs so that his Lund was touching her Choot. He placed his left hand under her neck and began caressing her shoulder with the same hand, and her Choot with his right. Menaka placed her left hand on his ass, and right moved down and started rubbing his Lund and testicles.
 
"Why does Jabbar hate you so much?"
 
"I don't know the answer to that. At first, I thought he was doing this for money, but now it seems the reason for the enmity is something else. But I don't understand what. I didn't even know him when he tried to cause a ruckus in our mills." By now, his Lund had become erect and her Choot had become wet. He laid his daughter-in-law down and once again mounted her and began fucking her smooth Choot.
 
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Further to the previous one..........

Jabbar had arrived in Bangalore and had also inspected Dr. Purandare's clinic. Now the real work began. He had to go inside and find out how many people were inside and where Vishwa lived. Just then, he called Malika on her mobile phone; she was calling from the Bangalore airport. By the time Jabbar reached the airport to pick her up, his evil mind had already devised a way to get inside the clinic.

 
A short while later, a car was parked at the gate of the rehab center. "Please, I've come from Delhi, and it's very important to meet the doctor."
 
"I understand, madam, but you can't meet the doctor without an appointment."
 
"Okay, brother, just let me talk to him on the phone once, please! It's a research question."
 
"Okay, madam, I'll try." The guard went to his cabin, picked up his phone receiver, and began dialing.
 
"Here he is, talk to him."
 
"Hello, Doctor Purandare. Good evening, Sir! My name is Kavita Kapoor. I'm a reporter for Delhi's Healthy Magazine. I came to Bangalore on a personal visit and learned about your center and your day-addiction theories. Sir, I apologize for coming here without an appointment, without a phone call. But, Sir, what can I do? I can't leave without seeing your center and meeting you." Yes, it's Malika trying to get inside.
 
Jabbar knew that Vishwa recognized her and Kallan's faces, so they couldn't get in. That's why he used Malika. He knew that because it was Sunday, only trainee doctors were on duty until 6 p.m., and the seniors were on leave, so Malika was less likely to get caught.
 
"...Thank you, sir! Thank you so much!" He handed the phone to the guard, "he want to talk to you."
 
"Madam, your purpose is done. I'll show you Dr. Kumar's center. Go ahead." A smile of triumph played on Malika's face.
 
A short while later, Malika's car pulled out of the institute and began racing toward Bangalore. As soon as they reached the city, Jabbar and she sat down at a restaurant, "What did you find out?"
 
"The center's security is just at the gate. There are 30 patients on two floors inside. I don't know which floor Vishwajeet is on. But at night, there are only one or two staff members and a guard at the gate."
 
"Well done, darling!" Jabbar pressed his hand to her thigh under the table. "Now we're just waiting for Kallan. Come on, he'll be back by tomorrow."
 
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