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01-09-2025, 05:29 PM
Docter mummy ke jajbaat
hello dosto ye meri first story hai aapko koi baat ya kahani likhne ka trika shi na lage toh mujhe maaf krna or chota bhai samjh ke guide krna;-
MY FAMILY INTRO
PAPA:-papa ka naam madan lal hai peshe se civil engineer hai kaam ki bhot tnsn lete hai jiski wjha se unki sehat bhi khrab rehti hai or aggressive bhi bhot rhte hai per shi post per hai jiski wjha se hum ek socity me ek flat provide hua hai papa ki height 5ft age 55 year pait nikla hua or dark complexion hai
MAI:- mera naam dev hai or mai college me padh raha hu or ghar me daily mummy papa ke jhagdo se preshan hu ye kahani jo mai likh rha hu ye ek sach hai, or shi maano toh meri koi icha nahi hai life se apne ghar ke haal dekh ke per meri mummy or mai kaafi frank hai
MUMMY:-mummy jo ki is story ki main heroine unka naam hai paramjeet kour ji haa mummy punjaban hai or Punjab se hai I know naam or Punjab sun ke tumne imagine kr liya hoga bhot kuch per abhi bhot kuch hai mummy ki age 45 hai papa se 10 sal age me kam gori chitti hai doodh ki trha bhara hua sharir 34c-32-36 hight 5.8ft hai lambi choudi hai or peshewar docter hai.
Update-01 (flashback)
Jaisa ki aapko maine btaya papa mere engineer hai toh wo achi company me hai papa ko company bar bar dusre sheher city me bheja krti thi aise he papa 20 saal phle Punjab gye the jaha flyover construction unke under me thi per rehne sehne ka koi shi intzaam nahi tha toh papa ne pass ke he ek ghr me rehna shi smjha jo kaafi chota tha or us ghar ki maali halat bhi thik nhi thi isliye wo parivar bhi papa ko rkhne ko raazi tha parivar me maa baap the jisme baap pine ka shokeen tha or maa ghar sambhalti thi uski beti 25 ki pammi (paramjeet kour) or 2 bhan bhai or the 10-11 saal ke pammi sunder thi padhi likhi thi per paisa or koi link na kr ke unhe koi khaas kaam nhi tha padhai se aake wo maa baap sab mil ke kisi ke kheto me chota mota kaam krte or usse ghar chelate
Per itne me unke ghr kale or kam height wale engineer sahab yaani madan lal ki entry hoti hai madan lal phle bas unke ghr rhna chhata tha toh wo 5 hjar dene ka wada krta hai per kuch dino me whaa barish aane lagti hai barish ke mousam me jiski wjha se unhe khaana bhi wahi khana padta hai or papa enginner hai toh is professional me rhne wale almost drink krte hai toh madan lal yaani papa kbhi kbhi daaru laate the pammi ke papa yani mere nana unke sath baith ke peete or apne dukhde batate aise madan lal unhe 5 se 15 hjar dene laga or nana ke ghr ke halaat thode sudharne lage mummy khana bana ke sabko khilaatii or ab mumy pdhai per focus jyada krne lagi wo docter ban na chhti thi dekhte he dekhte us time unhone sab kaam chor diye or 15 hjaar se ghar ka khrcha chalane lage per 2.5 year me almost pammi ka collage pura hone me 1 saal baaki tha nana ko laga tha ki abhi madan lal ke paiso se ghar chal jata hai baad me beti doctor banegi usse chal jayega per sab kuch humare sochne se nhi hota ye wo bhul rhe the..
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Kripaya doctor ki spelling to theek kar den.
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Au@RAT KI THUKQI HOTI HE AUR MUMMY KI BHI JABARDAST CHUDAI HONI CHAHIYE
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very short update but i like it.
next update come fast and agreesive... with hot pics
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Update -02 (sauda)
madan lal ko 2.5 saal bad kahi or project per shift kiya jaa rha tha or uski jgha koi or engineer aana tha 10 din me toh wo aas paas he 20-25 km me already rehta that oh usne pammi ke papa ko btya ki aapka parivar kaafi acha hai mujhe acha pyar khana or izzat mili per kuch dino me mujhe khi or jana hoga toh mai yaha se 10 din me shift kr jaunga ye sun ke pammi ke papa tnsn me aa gye the ki ye chala jayega toh humara ghr kaise chlega 3no bacho ki pdahi kaise hogi toh raat ko pammi ke mummy papa ne salah ki ki wo kisi se paise maang le intrst per lekin ye kaam bhi ulta pada ksii ne naa toh paise diye bina koi cheej ya guarantee ke na he kam intrst per almost koi help nhi mili upar se jalil or hona pada ki teri beti ke liye toh engineer hai usko usse chudwa or paise kama le nahi toh humse chudwa le or paise le jaa
pammi ka parivar garib jrur tha par izzat daar tha toh next day pammi ke papa ne pammi ki mummy se baat ki :- ki ye madan lal chala gya toh hum road per aa jayenge sab khrab ho jayega ye wo toh kuch armano ka kuch armano se sauda kr lete hai
pammi ki maa :- kya matalab kaisa sauda ji
pammi ke papa:-mai soch rha hu kyu na pammi ka viyah madan lal se kr de
pammi ki maa:- aise kaise wo toh humari biradri ka nhi hai duniya kya kahegi
pammi ke papa:- duniya humari beti ko aaj bhi randi kehti hai madan lal ki jab ki hum or humara rabb janta hai ki hum aise nhi hai
pammi ki maa:- per madan lal kaha ka hai parivar kya hai uska ye wo hume kuch nhi pata
pammi ke papa:- madan lal apne parivar ka ek aakhri aadmi hai uske mummy papa bhot phle marr chuke hai wo bhi humari trha rishtedaro ka staya hua hai
pammi ki maa:- mai soch nhi paa rhi kuch
pammi ke papa:- socho humari pmmi uske paiso per raaj kregi
doctor ban jayegi
ghar ki or humare baaki 2 bacho ki jindagi achi ho jayegi
humara budhapa acha ho jayega
pammi ki maa:- kuch sochte hue per kuch ulta ho gya toh
pammi ke papa:- maine sab socha hua hai mai sauda kr lunga madan lal se behla fusla ke
ab baat aati hai pammi ke papa or madan lal ki :-
madanlal- namste uncle
pammi ke papa:-namste beta madan lal mujhe tumse kuch baat krni hai
madanlal- haanji uncle bolo
pammi ke papa - aise nhi aram se jao fresh ho jao mai khana leke tumhare kmre me he aa rha hu
pammi ke papa after 10 minute bad madanlal ko khana dete hai
pammi ke papa- maine socha hai madan lal tum meri beti pammi se shadi kr lo
madanlal:- khana khaate hue ek dum se shock ho gya kya keh rhe ho uncle
pammi ke papa- sahi keh rha hu tum akele bhi ho or achi post per bhi isse meri beti ka future bhi ban jayega or tumhe bhi ek achi jindagi mil jayegi
madan lal ki toh lottery nikal gyi thi waise bhi chaand se sunder biwi mil jaati
itne me pammi ke papa ne saude wali baat kr di
madanlal:- kaisa sauda ji
pammi ke papa- meri beti ko docter tum banaoge or wo jo bhi kmayegi khud rkhegi ya hume bhejegi us per tumhara koi haq nhi hoga
madanlal ko isse koi dikkat nhi thi kyunki wo paise ka lalchi nhi tha usne is profession me bi kabhi dokha nhi kiya tha or uska koi tha bhi nhi jo paise ka use kre
toh inhi bache kuch dino me madanlal or pammi ki shadi ho gyi
Update-03 (armano ka katal)
Shadi hone ke bad pammi urf paramjeet ka naam prerna ho gya court marriage ho gyi or jaisalmair jaisi jgha madanlal ka naya transfer tha to wo waha aa gye madanlal ab bhi fulle nhi smaa rha tha ki uske hath ek apsara lag gyi toh naye ghar aake prerna (mummy ka after marriage name) ne khana bnaya or haa Punjab me mummy bhot nonveg khaati thi Punjabi ke pehchan ki khul ke jeeene se or khaane peene se hoti hai per yaha aisa nhi tha shadi bad prerna ko nonveg na khaane per pabandi thi jise wo maan gyi
Phir raat aayi suhagrat ki har aurat ki ichaa hoti hai ki uska husband lamba chouda mardana takat se bhara jangali janwar or ghoda ho (per maine kaha tha jaise sochte hai waisa hota nhi )
Prerna lal saree me saj dhaj ke room me aayi or baith gyi doodh rakh ke thodi der me madan lal nashe me dhutt hoke aaya kacha baniyan phn ke room me or aate he prerna par cadh gya anjaam wahi hua kuttay ko ghee hajam nhi hua or wo jhad gya bina chode phir usne thodi der me dubara koshish ki kpde utare prerna ke or ache se boobs ko raagad ke chussa kata prerna pagall ho gyi ab uski chut me maano bhatti jal rhi thi ab baari thi madan lal se chudwane ki toh jab madan lal nanga hua toh uske 4 inch ka dubla patla sa lund dekh ke prerna jal bhunn gyi madan lal ne jab uski chut me lund dala toh wo jyada ander nhi gya prerna virgin thi isliye ushe pain bhi hua or bleeding bhi hui iski wjha se madanlal kbhi us per puri jindagi me shaq nhi kr paya or isi raaat ki nisshani mai paida hua
Beet te dino ke sath prerna doctor ban gyi cancer specialist papa bhi shi post per aa gye or bhot jgha transfer hone ke bad at present time hum Mumbai me 2 mhine phle shift hue hai papa ki company ke hume 100 gaj ka flat provide kiya hai jo papa ki similer post per the unhe aisa he milta tha samay ke hisaab se mummy ke chhere per rounak khtm ho gyi thi unhe koi bhi dekhe samjh jata tha ki ye insaan jindagi jee nhi rha kaat rha hai or sach bhi tha kyunki unka pati daily unke sath ladta tha peeta tha marta tha time nhi deta tha aurat aadhi yahi marr jaati hai or baaki wo ghar ke kaam or hospital me kaam krne se marrr rhi thi kyunkki unke mayke ke liye wo ek paise kamane ki machine thi bas or kuch nhi
Toh aise he time beet ta gya
To be continue………
Update-04 (hero’s intro)
Toh ab hoti hai story he hero ki entry naam jai Shankar gaikwad sab ushe jai jai kr ke bulaate the 6.2 hight 100+ weight gym ka shokeen achi khaasi body or bilkul gora handsome boy
Sab ushe jai bhai keh ke bulate hai wo gribi me pala bada hua anath aadmi tha uske maa baap bachpan me chal base the kisi ngo ke through usne padhai ki or engineering ki bhot badi post per wo 28 ki age me aa gya aise he us ngo me uski ek bhan bani jise wo or wo ushe bhot pyar krte the jaha madanlal ko company se 100 gaj ka flat mila tha temprory condition me waha jai gaikwad ko 500 gaj ka duplex alishaan mila tha company se or wo madanlal ka senior tha jaha mdan lal imandar tha wahi jai ek number ka harami badmash or corrupt tha kyunki uski beeti gribi or akelepan ki jindagi ne ushe itna majboot bana diya tha ki ab uska koi barabari wlaa nahi tha kehno ko engineer tha per shant or samjhdari se wo raaj krta tha duniya or logo per
Uski shadi aise he ek ladki se hui wo ushe bhot pyar krta tha care karta tha per wo kehte hai na achi cheej jyada din nhi chalti ye wahi tha uski wife ko cancer tha jo ki unhe bhot time bad pata chala jab baat kaafi aage badh chukka thi
Update-05 (jai Shankar wife)
Jai Shankar ki wife ka naam madhuri tha or wo sunder thi per bimari ke chalte uska jism or wo dheere dheere khatam ho rhi thi kuch dino bad jai Shankar ko pata chala uske junior or sath kaam krne wale madan lal ki wife docter hai cancer ki xyz naam ke bade hospital me or jaha hum sab rehte the socity same thi but engineers ne ache se bnaya tha aage 100 gaj ke flat the or thoda anderr aaye toh 500 gaj ke flat jisme jai Shankar rhta tha jai Shankar subha he humare ghar aaya papa ghar the ushe dekh ke papa ka behavior aisa ho gya jaise ek sher ko dekh ke kuttay ki gaand fatt jaati hai mummy bhi ghar me thi wo aaaya usne namste ki or madanlal ko bola ki tumahri wife cancer ki docter hai please help me save my wife mai tumhe jo bologe wo dunga rone laga wo
Mummy ko daya aayi ki koi toh hai jo apni biwi se itna pyaar krta hai aise time me bhi maii iski help jrur krungi iski wife ko jrur bachaungi uske jaane ke bad madanlal bolta hai ki dekh lena prerna tum jo kr pao mummy –aapko bolne ki jrurt nhi hai mai dekh lungi itne me papa ek kass ke thpd marte hai mummy ko ki mujhse bina puche haaa kregi tu kuttiya teri aukat pata nhi tujhe jaishankar ye dekh ke chauk jata hai or wo us samay waha se jana shi smjhta hai phir wo chala jata hai
Aise he din beet te gye uski wife ki halaat me kaafi sudhar aaya phir thodi down hui per sabko trust tha ki mumy ushe bacha legi but ek din shyd koi chaal thi ya sach kyunki itne bade logo me politics hoti hai aisa he kuch hua shyd or uska shikaar meri maa hui meri mummy ne jo injection lgana tha actual me wo kisi ne replace kr diya tha kisi or se or isme madhuri ki jaaan chali gyi turant he jai Shankar ko wajah pata chal gyi jaishankar maano pagal ho gya jai Shankar or uski bhan ne hospital sir per uthaa liya meri mummy ko bhot sunaya insult ki ilzaam lgyaa meri mummy jo unki life thik krna chahti thi unke he hath se sab khrab ho gya tha
Mummy- mummy ne kuch din jod se chutti le li or ghr me he baithi rehti khud ko kosti rehti ki ye mujhse kya ho gya maine dhyan nhi diya jaishankar ache hai warna ab tak mai security officer me hoti etc etc
Per unki bhan ne mujhe bhot gaaliya di ki mai randi hu ye wo
Per unka banta hai bolna because unki sabki life spoil ho gyi mere hatho phir aise he 20 din nikal gye socity me baat krte suna mummy ne or maine ki jai Shankar ne khud ko khatam krne ki koshish ki hai 3 bar or bhot shrab pine laga hai ye wo ye sun ke mai or mummy ghar aa gye ab mummy or mere beech bilkul khamoshi thi papa 10 din ke liye out of Mumbai gye the kaam se per mumy ko bura ab bhi lag rha tha ki ek jai Shankar hai jo uski bimar biwi ke liye marr rha tha or ek madanlal mera baap hai jo itne muskil samay me bhi meri maa ko akela chor ke kaam me chala gya tha
Khair raat ko humne halka fulka khana khaya jab papa ghar nhi hote toh mummy or mai sath me sote hai toh jab mummy raat ko sab kaam khatam kr ke aayi toh room mai or mummy khamosh the phir mere muh se nikla mummy kya hum ishe sahi nhi kr skte
Mummy- kar skte hum kuch sahi toh kr naa dete
Mai- mummy hume ek bar jai Shankar uncle ke ghar jana chhiye dekhe toh kya condition hai
Mummy- mai kal dekhti hu
Mai- mai bhi chalunga uncle ke pass aapke sath
Mummy- nahi tum nahi jaoge tum college jaoge
Phir hum sone lage per mummy ki aankho se nind kosso door thi
Subha mai college naa jaake khi chip gya kyunki mujhe tnsn thi ki kahi meri maa jai Shankar ke pass jaye or wo ushe kuch kar na de
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