[shailu4ever]

Hi Everyone
 
I think it’s time for me to say goodbye.
 
It has been 9 months since I started writing, and in this time, I have poured my time, my energy, and my emotions into every single scene and character. Writing was never just a hobby for me… it became a part of my daily life, a space where I could express, explore, and connect.
 
But somewhere along the way… that connection faded.
 
Very few people are reading my stories now. And even among those who do, there has been almost no feedback… no comments… no conversations.
 
Over the last few weeks, even the little response I used to receive has completely stopped.
 
And now… there is absolute silence.
 
For a writer, silence is the most difficult thing to face.

No appreciation.
No criticism.
No disagreement.
Nothing at all.
 
I have always believed that stories are meant to be felt, shared, and responded to. Without that exchange, it begins to feel like I am speaking into a void… and slowly, that takes away the very reason to continue.
 
So today, I am making a decision.
 
I don’t see a reason to continue writing on this platform anymore.
 
I would rather take this time, effort, and creative energy and invest it somewhere it feels valued… heard… alive.
 
To the few who stayed, who read, who silently appreciated, thank you.
Even for those who just read, I still thank you all.
 
Even your presence meant more than you know.
 
I don’t know what this is. I may stop writing completely, or find another platform to write. I have not decided yet.
 
But for this platform is concerned, I am stopping to write immediately. 
 
So... This is it… This is how it ends…
 
GOOD BYE
 
-- Shailu
 
 
 
 

[shailu4ever]

noo please we are big fan for your story please dont go shailuu we are eager for your story telling

HI LovePookie

Thank you for your support. Really appreciate your interest in my stories. 

With warm regards

-- Shailu

[shailu4ever]

Priya

Hi Opendoor Sir

Nice picture

Thank you for your support.

With warm regards

-- Shailu

[shailu4ever]

So shailu firstly let me say that you are an incredible writter, u expresses the feelings in writing such is way more beyond imagination.

What went wrong from my side i feel:

1)The story dragged unnecessary long,

      I know your story has twists and scenes which are plotted differently, but in Priya didi story we had so much expectations but it got delayed, so the same spark was not alive

2) short multiple updates. - i guess people here love big format means consolidated update

3) u use to mention the imagination (background voice) of characters which somewhere feels more and unnecessary. Except in hot moments

4) i know u don't like this- but u too know maximum audience come here to see intimacy. It should be more and bold. U did in your story but after a long time.



I mentioned what I felt. I didn't wrote more appreciation because u deserves always more..!! You are different from others. Hope you will introspect and will never give up!

Hi Amol Sir

I hear what you said about my writing style. 

Thank you for your support. Really appreciate your interest in my stories. 

With warm regards

-- Shailu

[shailu4ever]

Hi Shailu,
 
I’m truly sorry to see you go, it genuinely feels like a loss. Your writing has always stood out to me, and it’s sad that not everyone has had the chance to recognize the depth of your talent. You have a rare gift for storytelling, and your voice is both distinctive and powerful. If this platform hasn’t been the right fit for you, I completely understand your decision, but that doesn’t make your absence any easier.
 
You are, without a doubt, a remarkable writer. The way you craft emotion, atmosphere, and connection in your work is something special. Your ability to engage readers goes far beyond just one genre, you have a natural storytelling instinct that could shine in so many different forms of writing. I truly believe that if you explore other styles, including more general or mainstream storytelling, you could reach an even wider audience and achieve incredible success.
 
I would genuinely love to continue reading your work, wherever your journey takes you next. If you do move to another platform or continue writing elsewhere, please do let me know, I would be more than happy to follow and support your work there.
 
Wishing you all the very best for the future. Keep writing, keep creating, and keep believing in your talent.
 
You have something truly special, and I have no doubt it will take you far.
 
With admiration and best wishes,
Prasanna
 

Hi Prasanna

Thank you very much for your support. Really appreciate your compliments and your continued support. 

I have not decided where to write yet.  But I will definitely let you know when I start writing again. 

With warm regards

-- Shailu

[shailu4ever]

Wow Shailu

The movie scene setup is very exciting and erotic.

You are the best. Please keep rocking.

Hi Rajesh 

Thank you for your support. Really appreciate your compliments.

With warm regards

-- Shailu

[shailu4ever]

Hi Opendoor sir

Wonderful picture again. I truly appreciate your continued support. It really means a lot. 

Thank you once again 

With warm regards

-- Shailu

[shailu4ever]

I have been on vacation for a while so couldn't respond much but have also been investing what little time I have on one another story.

Having said that, Things that keep readers hooked here is speed in story telling. Read my notes below which can help you not just here anywhere else too....

Fast story telling is the key. Genres doesn't matter but adultery is important, you already know that but if story doesn't move its not a page turner. Feelings are very important but at the same time, feelings and expressions for every scene drag the scenes longer hence people will lose interest.
Imagine you are telling a scene where a man seduces a woman in a train while he is standing behind her, the touch, seduction and whispers and feelings all combined should be completed in 2 updates is necessary, In your case given the same premise you extend it to 10-12 episodes so solution is either write it yourself but consolidate into two episodes when you think the purpose is achieved then post it or small updates should move fast.

Another thing I noticed is your story doesn't have lot of depth as much as depth you show in writing it especially the thoughts of the characters and that's commendable and unique about your writing but without a story that engages the writing won't shine even if it is excellently written...take this story for example, Ravi befriends Priya, then two other women comes into his life and he learns many things from them, then he comes back to Priya and now gets her...story might have lot of other things in future but the rate at which it is written so far this is the story...Blend your unique style of writing thoughts into a story that moves fast and moves with a purpose then see how you will become a star with one story here....I insist that you have great talent and its unique as well, I have never seen a writer here who wrote some one's thoughts to such perfection..and I have been here for ages...even old site also taken into consideration.

So do not take my suggestions negatively but think please... easiest solution to in summary

1. Strong story with a screenplay already fixed
2. Longer updates, even though you write short, you keep accumulating it in your notes to take it until you have at least to an extent what 2-3 posts length wise xossipy allows you.

~RCF

Hi RCF Sir

Thank you very much for your compliments and suggestions. 

I truly appreciate your continued support. 

I understand what you are saying, I did what I could within the constraints I have. I acknowledge that I need to learn improve a lot in different areas.

Thank you once again for your support.  

With warm regards.

-- Shailu

[shailu4ever]

Bro, even though the question is not directed to me, let me share my views as this is a common issue for many writers ...

Why you become a writer in first place ? You like certain way of story telling character building which you might have not seen much in other writers..so you will start writing for yourself ..you are the first reader of everything you write...many times you write for yourself but not for others . You know others may not like this way but you have almost become addicted to your style you can't come out ..

If I don't enjoy what I am doing I won't like any profession...writing is also like that...as writers we can't change our style and hope readers will start aligning with our style ...when we both are not aligned we get frustrated..but can't help it

This is my 2 cents on this

Hi Opendoor sir

Thank you for your support and your thoughts. That really means a lot. I totally agree with you, sometimes it is difficult to change what we are. 

I truly appreciate your continued support. 

With warm regards

-- Shailu

[shailu4ever]

Wow Shailu,

I never read anything like this before.

A kiss described so sensuous, sensitive, erotic and feels so real and feels so good.


Her soft skin of her lips.
Her moist warmth of her lips.
The taste of her so close… yet so far.


Actually I never felt a kiss this beautiful even when I kissed a girl in real. Your narration felt more beautiful and more tempting than the real kiss I had ever.

Thank you for giving us this feeling.

Keep rocking

Hi Rajesh

Thank you for your compliments. 

I truly appreciate your continued support. 

With warm regards

-- Shailu

[shailu4ever]

That is fine, I am not expecting writers to change their style, here I am suggesting to keep the style and improve the story and consolidate the update for long one instead of small updates. 

Also my suggestions are only there because I appreciate what I read so far...

~RCF

Hi RCF Sir

Thank you very much for your compliments and suggestions. 

With warm regards.


-- Shailu

[shailu4ever]

Well said.

"
Writers like you are rare—diamonds more precious than a Kohinoor—
and we must preserve that brilliance.
"


She is a RARE DIAMOND.  We must preserve that brilliance.

Hi Rajesh

Thank you very much for your compliments. It is so nice of you to say that. 

I truly appreciate your continued support. 

With gratitude and warm regards

-- Shailu