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dear Shailu ji....fabulous you are....to go with your sensibilities in sculpting characters, may  I suggest  a new story on the lives of a couple brought closer by tragedy in their individual li es...drawn to each other emotionally and later physically...eg., Air India crash tragedy ...the physical closeness to draw solace from each other ...the line has lots of scope for emotinal and psychological scars caused by the accident...to be healed through love and sex....bye for now

Dear PELURI ji,

Thank you so much for your thoughtful and encouraging words. I truly appreciate your kind appreciation of my writing and your insightful suggestion for a new story. The idea of two individuals finding connection and healing through shared grief is deeply moving, it offers such rich emotional and psychological depth to explore.

I completely agree that such a story offers immense scope to explore love, loss, and renewal. However, I personally prefer not to base my stories on real-life incidents or specific tragedies. Instead, I would love to create something similar in spirit, a story that captures the same emotional truth, but within a world born purely of imagination.

Your encouragement and engagement mean a great deal to me. Thank you once again for reading my work with such sensitivity and for sharing your beautiful thoughts.

With warm regards,

--Shailu

[shailu4ever]

Author kind request  if possible give some updates to this story too. I'm waiting.

Hi Siva

Thank you for your patience and support. I really appreciate your enthusiasm for the story. 

The delay has been because of the low response in this thread, but I’ll do my best to get back to it and share updates soon. Your encouragement truly keeps me motivated.

With warm regards

-- Shailu

[shailu4ever]

Your writing is truly amazing, loving all your threads, hope to see this one continue as well

Hi tting4tting4

Thank you so much for your compliments. I'm really glad you're enjoying the story and the other stories. 

I definitely plan to keep going with it, but I’ve paused updates on this particular thread for now due to the lack of engagement. Once I see more traction and interest, I’ll be sure to continue the updates.


Your support means a lot, and I hope you’ll stick around for what’s to come.

With warm regards

-- Shailu

[shailu4ever]

Hi ,
Who told you this is your first story?

Because I refuse to believe it.
Not with the way you write,
not with the way your thoughts unfold,
not with the way romance flows through your characters
as if it has lived inside you for years.
A first story usually walks with trembling steps…
but yours walks with grace.
A first story usually searches for its voice…
but yours speaks in a clear, confident tone.
A first story usually hesitates…
but yours breathes like something that has been waiting,
ripening quietly inside you.
It feels as though your mind was full—
overflowing, in fact—
and now that inner reservoir has finally found a doorway,
spilling itself onto the digital page
with maturity, clarity, and tenderness.

These are not the words of a beginner.
These are thoughts that have been
grown, shaped, seasoned,
long before they ever met the keyboard.

And the romance you created…
it reminded me of a sculptor—
standing before a block of stone,
chiseling gently, piece by piece,
not rushing, not forcing,
trusting the figure hidden inside.
Days, months, patience, precision…
until the sculpture finally reveals itself
in full beauty.
That is how your romance unfolded.
Slow.
Steady.
Measured.
Organic.
Growing in the middle like a blooming flower,
and finishing with a completeness
that only skill can achieve.

So forgive me,
but I simply cannot accept this as your first story.

And tell me—
how does one person stand on four platforms(different stories) at once?
How does one mind weave four worlds simultaneously?
It is almost magical.
Almost yogic.
The English word ubiquitous tries to fit,
but even that falls short of what you are doing.
There is something more in your writing—
a presence that lingers,
a touch that moves across stories
as if you live inside each one at the same time.
This story is flowing beautifully.

Your craft is alive,
your imagination steady,
your pen confident.

Keep writing like this.
Keep surprising us.
Keep growing into the writer
you already are.
I am expecting much more from you—
and not out of pressure,
but out of admiration.
Siva 

Hi Siva garu,
 
Reading your feedback left me completely awed and deeply touched. Honestly, I had to read it several times just to let it sink in. Your words are so vivid, so precise, and so full of understanding that I felt as if you were gently walking beside me, guiding my thoughts, noticing every subtle beat of the story and the emotion behind it.
 
I must clarify a small point, the story you just read is actually Abhi’s Journey Part 2. The first story is Abhi’s Journey Part 1, which I wrote earlier. So technically, this wasn’t my first story. But reading your words made me realize that, in spirit, every story I write feels like a first one to me, every time, I try to pour all my heart, all my attention, all my care into it, hoping it reaches the readers in exactly the way I imagined.
 
What amazed me the most in your feedback is how you noticed the flow of romance, the unfolding of thoughts, the presence of patience and precision in every scene. The way you described it, like a sculptor chiseling patiently to reveal the hidden figure, made me pause and smile. It’s exactly how I hope my writing feels, though I never thought anyone could truly see it that way.
 
And your words about standing on four platforms at once, weaving multiple worlds simultaneously… really struck me. Yes, my mind flits between stories and characters, sometimes all at once, but your gentle observation also feels like advice, that perhaps I should be mindful not to overwhelm myself with too many diverse storylines at the same time. That balance, I realize, is as important as the passion to explore everything at once.
 
Your admiration for my craft, your encouragement to keep growing, keep surprising, keep writing with confidence, has filled me with warmth and inspiration. You make me feel like I can truly reach further, explore more, and trust my voice, even when the path feels uncertain.
 
Thank you, Siva garu, not just for reading my stories, but for seeing them so completely, for noticing the layers I sometimes fear are invisible. Your words will stay with me, guiding me through every chapter I write, and every new story I dare to create.
 
With deepest gratitude, admiration, and respect,
 
-- Shailu

[shailu4ever]

Will Abhi fuck the sisters together? That's what I want

Hi Masti.bhai

Thank you for your question. But I cannot give you the spoiler ahead.  I hope you will enjoy the story. Please stay tuned, I will give the updates soon.

With warm regards

-- Shailu

[shailu4ever]

Shailu - hoping someday you will revive and continue this lovely story :)

Hi tting4tting4

Thank you so much for your compliments. It really means a lot to know that the story made an impact. 

I do hope to return to it soon and continue the journey. As you know I am actively working on Priya Didi and Nine Nights.  Those two are keeping me a bit busy, but I haven't forgotten it. I am about to finish Nine Nights story soon.  Once that is done, I will move this story up in the priority.

Your encouragement is the spark I need to revisit the world I created. 

Stay tuned, and thanks again for your support

With warm regards

-- Shailu

[shailu4ever]

Six Months of Storytelling: Thank You From the Bottom of My Heart
 
Dear Friends,
 
Six months ago, when I was in India, a small thought flashed in my mind: why not try writing a story? At that time, I had been reading some stories on this site, but not extensively. When that idea struck, I simply signed into the site and began writing Abhi’s Journey. That was the turning point of my life. Before that, none of you knew me, and now, I’m fortunate to have all of you by my side.
 
Today marks six months since I embarked on this incredible journey of storytelling, and I can’t believe how quickly the time has flown by. From that very first idea, to putting pen to paper, to now, having six stories that I’m so proud of, I’ve learned more than I ever imagined.
 
There are so many people I want to thank for their encouragement, support, and belief in me. Without you, none of this would have been possible. Every word written, every plot twist crafted, every character developed is, in part, because of the faith and energy you’ve shared with me.

1. First Fire in Abhiram's Erotic Journey - Part 1
   The first story I wrote was a true leap of faith. I want to thank everyone who gave me feedback and helped me see the potential in it. Your encouragement made it all feel worth it. I will always remember the excitement and nerves I felt finishing this one. I introduced too many characters in that story and could not justify them, so I wrapped it up and moved on to Part 2.
   
   
2. Antarvasana: The Forbidden Fire
   Writing my second story was an entirely different experience. I continued from where I left off in the first story. It picks up momentum with Madhavi, Meghana, and her sister Varnika. I paused this story when Varnika proposed Abhi. They are yet to get close and enjoy the romantic journey. I was amazed by how many of you were there to cheer me on, share your thoughts, and keep me going when it felt like the story was taking unexpected turns. Thank you to each of you for your unwavering support.
   
   
3. Priya Didi
   The third story was an emotional rollercoaster. I’ve received the most feedback on this one, some good, some bad, and some harsh. I was feeling very down and could not write for a few days. I want to thank those of you who reached out with messages of encouragement and helped me heal. Your kindness meant the world to me. I can never forget your help. I want to thank those of you who shared thoughtful feedback, offering constructive suggestions and just being there to listen when I needed to talk things through. This story has been an emotional ride for you and for me as well.
   
   
4. The Swamiji
   This one was a real turning point for me. I started this story thinking I wanted to write a novel. It wasn’t just another erotic story, it was something more. However, I didn’t get much engagement despite the time I spent on it. Each scene in this story took a lot of my time, but I haven’t written much beyond what’s already posted. I’ve put it on pause for now, but I hope to pick it up soon. I got some great initial feedback, but the momentum quickly faded.
   
   
5. The Nine Nights
   The concept was simple: two people stranded on a remote island in Kerala after a tsunami wave. They spend nine days waiting for rescue. This story is about how they survived and how they grew closer to each other emotionally, and then physically. This story touches on every tiny bit of emotion. Thank you to everyone who kept believing in me, whether it was a quick message, a thoughtful comment, or simply asking me how the story was coming along. You made all the difference. This story is nearing its conclusion, and I hope to complete it very soon.
   
   
6. Shhh... by Shailu
   And now, we arrive at my sixth story. I had this beautiful concept one night, and I put the plot together. But I need to spend more time to truly expand it into a complete story. I hope you’ll all enjoy it. I feel like this story is a culmination of all the growth I’ve experienced over these past six months. I want to make it exciting and naughty, and I can’t wait to share more with you.
   

 
 
 
Throughout this entire journey, one thing has remained constant: the support I’ve received from all of you. Whether you’ve offered a kind word, a helpful suggestion, or simply been a sounding board when I needed to bounce ideas around, I am endlessly grateful for your encouragement.
 
As I reflect on these past six months, I realize that my writing isn’t just about me, it’s about all of you who’ve helped me get here. You've given me the confidence to keep pushing forward, to take risks, and to explore new ideas. Every single person who has been part of this journey, in whatever way, holds a special place in my heart.
 
Thank you for believing in me, for being a part of my story, and for helping me bring these stories to life. I can't wait to see what the next six months hold, and I’m thrilled to continue sharing this journey with you all.
 
With deep gratitude and excitement for what’s next,
 
-- Shailu
 
 

[shailu4ever]

Happy New Year, My Dear, Mischievous Friends!
 
As the calendar flips and the clock does its dramatic “3…2…1…”, it’s time to dump the old year, flirt shamelessly with the new one, and welcome it with hope, laughter, sparkle, and a healthy dose of mischief. ;)  After all, behaving too well is so last year.
 
Now, a little heart-to-heart confession (don’t tell anyone ): )
I started writing in June 2025, and what began as a harmless affair with words quickly turned into a full-blown emotional entanglement—with all of you. And oh, what a beautiful mess that has been!
 
This journey gifted me so many wonderful friends, unexpected connections, and late-night smiles. For that, I am deeply, dangerously thankful to each and every one of you. Truly, meeting you all has been one of the best plot twists of my year.
 
May this New Year bring you fresh beginnings, unexpected thrills, good health, and plenty of reasons to smile… and blush. ;)
 
May your days be lighter, your nights calmer (or exciting, your choice  ), and your coffee or chai always strong enough to handle life’s drama and my story twists.
 
Thank you for reading, supporting, encouraging, nudging, waiting, and occasionally staring at your screen wondering, “Where is the update?”
 
Here’s to new stories, bolder emotions, deeper connections, and many deliciously memorable moments we’ll share in the coming year.
 
Now for the naughty truth…
Yes, when I was in the USA, updates were frequent and enthusiastic, and after coming back to India, the pace slowed down. Not because the fire died… oh no… but because business pressures, the holiday season, and massive families on both sides have completely invaded my personal space.
 
And as you know very well, I cannot open my browser and write these stories when curious eyes are hovering around me. I need privacy, silence, and a little solitude to let my imagination misbehave properly, and right now, that privacy is playing very hard to get.
Still, I promise to sneak in updates whenever I can. So please be patient, stay naughty, and don’t give up on me yet. I’ll make it worth the wait.
 
So now, raise a glass, make a wish, flirt with the universe, and step boldly into the New Year with confidence, curiosity, and a wickedly playful heart.
Let’s make this year bold, beautiful, slightly scandalous, and totally unforgettable.
 
Wishing you all a very Happy New Year filled with happiness, success, laughter, and delicious surprises!
 
With gratitude, warmth, and a mischief…
 
-- Shailu
 

 

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Happy Bhoghi

Wishing you a joyful and vibrant Bhogi! May this auspicious day bring new beginnings, prosperity, and happiness to you and your loved ones. As the fire of Bhogi burns away the old and makes space for the new, may your life be filled with peace, positivity, and abundant blessings. Enjoy the warmth, the celebrations, and the time spent with family and friends.

Happy Bhogi to You All 

With Love

Shailu

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Happy Sankranti and Happy Pongal 

Wishing you a joyous and prosperous celebration as we welcome this season of new beginnings. May the warmth of the festival fill your heart with happiness, and may the harvest bring you success, peace, and abundance.

As we mark this special time, may it offer you fresh opportunities, cherished moments with loved ones, and a brighter path ahead. Whether it's Sankranti or Pongal, let's celebrate the beauty of togetherness and the promise of a bountiful year.

Happy Sankranti / Pongal to you and your family.

With Love

Shailu

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[shailu4ever]

Dear Friends
 
Wishing you all a very Happy Ugadi!
 
May this auspicious occasion bring new beginnings, fresh hopes, and abundant joy into your lives. May the year ahead be filled with prosperity, good health, and countless blessings. Let’s celebrate the start of a vibrant new chapter with love, positivity, and togetherness!
 
Enjoy the festivities with your loved ones and make the most of this beautiful time of renewal.
 
Happy Ugadi to you and your family!
 
-- Shailu
 
 
 

[shailu4ever]

Hi Everyone
 
I think it’s time for me to say goodbye.
 
It has been 9 months since I started writing, and in this time, I have poured my time, my energy, and my emotions into every single scene and character. Writing was never just a hobby for me… it became a part of my daily life, a space where I could express, explore, and connect.
 
But somewhere along the way… that connection faded.
 
Very few people are reading my stories now. And even among those who do, there has been almost no feedback… no comments… no conversations.
 
Over the last few weeks, even the little response I used to receive has completely stopped.
 
And now… there is absolute silence.
 
For a writer, silence is the most difficult thing to face.

No appreciation.
No criticism.
No disagreement.
Nothing at all.
 
I have always believed that stories are meant to be felt, shared, and responded to. Without that exchange, it begins to feel like I am speaking into a void… and slowly, that takes away the very reason to continue.
 
So today, I am making a decision.
 
I don’t see a reason to continue writing on this platform anymore.
 
I would rather take this time, effort, and creative energy and invest it somewhere it feels valued… heard… alive.
 
To the few who stayed, who read, who silently appreciated, thank you.
Even for those who just read, I still thank you all.
 
Even your presence meant more than you know.
 
I don’t know what this is. I may stop writing completely, or find another platform to write. I have not decided yet.
 
But for this platform is concerned, I am stopping to write immediately. 
 
So... This is it… This is how it ends…
 
GOOD BYE
 
-- Shailu