Adultery First Fire in Abhiram's Erotic Journey - Part 1

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A Sweet favor


“If it’s not trouble.”

He looked mildly surprised. “You trust me with directions?”

“I trust Google Maps,” she said sweetly. “But mostly, I trust you’ll keep me from getting bored.”

Meghana returned just then, wiping her hands with a towel. “Don’t ask him to babysit you,” she said, almost too quickly.

“It’s not babysitting,” Varnika grinned. “It’s city orientation. And breakfast buddy duties.”

Abhi laughed. “That I can handle.”

There was a pause. A soft one.

Then Meghana added, not looking directly at him, “Also... if it’s not raining tomorrow, we could do yoga on the terrace again. If you’re up for it.”

He looked at her, something catching in his chest. “Always.”

And then Varnika, ever the troublemaker, added lazily, “And if it does rain, you’ll just have to stick to indoor yoga.”

A beat passed.

Meghana shot her a subtle warning glance.

Abhi just smiled. “I’ll be here either way.”

The air grew still—not silent, just still. The kind of pause that made the sound of the rain outside feel like part of the conversation.

Meghana didn’t speak again for a while. She moved to the sink. Varnika stretched and stood, yawning theatrically.

“I’m going to crash,” she said. “Someone’s making me wake up early.”

She disappeared into the bedroom, but not before giving Abhi one last sideways look—a little mischievous, a little knowing. 

Then it was just him and Meghana, both moving slowly, neither eager to break the spell.

“I’ll leave,” he said eventually, rising. “You’ve been very kind.”

Meghana stepped closer. “It’s never about kindness with you, Abhi.”

That sentence sat in the air like a held breath.

He hesitated. Then, “What is it about?”

She met his eyes—steady, deep, a little vulnerable. “It’s about how I feel when you’re around.”

He didn’t respond right away.

Because words didn’t feel big enough anymore.

And neither did distance.

But he stepped back all the same. With a soft smile, he nodded. “Goodnight.”

“Goodnight,” she said, her voice almost a whisper.

As he walked out into the corridor, he didn’t look back.

But inside him, something had shifted again.


And somewhere behind the closed door, Meghana leaned against the wall and let the silence settle.

The kind of silence that only comes after wanting to say something… but not yet.

Not tonight.
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Hi everyone,

Get ready for the next session of Partner Yoga—now moving indoors!

You've seen Meghana and Abhi's amazing yoga flow on the terrace. Starting Tuesday morning, we’re bringing that energy inside. Just imagine how incredible it's going to be!

Special thanks to tweeny_fory for the thoughtful suggestion about Indoor Yoga. This Indoor Yoga is inspired by your input.

Looking forward to seeing you there!

-- Shailu
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Hi All,

I'm closing out Part 1 here, as it had a bit of a slow start. I’ll be starting "The Untold Story of Abhiram's Erotic Journey - Part 2" in a new thread, which will pick up directly from the Indoor Partner Yoga session.

At the beginning of Part 2, I’ll include a brief synopsis of Part 1 to help bring everyone up to speed.

I look forward to seeing you all there!

The Untold Story of Abhiram’s Erotic Journey – Part 2 : The Erotic Transformation

https://xossipy.com/thread-69239.html

-- Shailu
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(20-06-2025, 05:21 PM)Kamandalam Wrote:  Nice story. Wondering how I missed it all these days

Hi Kamandalam

Thank you for your feedback, I'm really glad you enjoyed it. 

Sometimes these stories do slip by unnoticed.

I have already started part 2.  

I would love to hear your feedback on Part 2 as well.

Looking forward to hearing back from you

-- Shailu
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(20-06-2025, 03:45 PM)Rocky@handsome Wrote:  I sincerely apologize for my inadvertent error in addressing you incorrectly. 

It was never my intention to misrepresent or disregard your identity, and I deeply regret the oversight. 
Please rest assured, I hold your work in the highest esteem and shall be more attentive henceforth to ensure such a mistake is never repeated. 

Once again I'm sorry ma'am

Rocky❤️

Hi Rocky

Please don’t worry; I didn't take it wrong.  I completely understand that it was an honest mistake.  That is why I just corrected.

I'm grateful for your respect and your generous words about my work.  I really appreciate your thoughts and feedback on both these parts. 

Looking forward to more meaningful exchanges ahead!

-- Shailu
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(21-06-2025, 03:57 PM)tweeny_fory Wrote:  Wow Shailu,
your writing is absolutely fantastic! You truly rocked it in detailing every single moment of Abhiram's interactions with Madhavi and Meghana. The description of their first kiss was particularly captivating - it was both deeply emotional and sensual. I loved it to the core!
A guy's first kiss is always a special milestone, and the way you've expressed it in your narration was simply mind-blowing. It was so engaging, I felt like I was right there with them.

I completely understand why you've started Part 2. I'm eagerly waiting for the next part and can't wait to see where the story goes from here!


Hi tweeny_fory

Thank you so much for your lovely message, it truly means a lot to me!

Apologies for the delayed reply; 

I think I might have missed your message somehow and only just saw it now. 

I'm really touched by your words. 

It’s so encouraging to hear that you enjoyed the writing, especially the moments between Abhiram, Madhavi, and Meghana. 

I'm especially glad the first kiss scene resonated with you.  I wanted it to feel heartfelt and authentic, so your feedback means a great deal.

It’s great to know you're looking forward to Part 2

Your support genuinely motivates me to keep going with the story!

Thanks again for taking the time to share your thoughts.


Warm regards

-- Shailu
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I have completed 2 months of writing.  

I started writing on 11th June 2005

Two months of learning to write,
Each word a step, each page a flight.
In the dance of ink and thought I roam,
Finding my rhythm, but not quite home.

I am a student, a learner at heart,
Treading this path where stories start.
Two months ago, with phone in hand,
I embarked on a journey I didn’t fully understand.

With each word written, each page turned,
I’ve stumbled, faltered, and slowly learned.
But in the silence, in every doubt,
The lessons whispered, shaping me out.

To those who’ve stood by with steady grace,
Your kindness, your faith, has lit my space.
Your words have been a lantern in the dark,
Guiding me, igniting that first spark.

Though I’ve traveled far, I know too well,
That the journey ahead is where true growth will dwell.
I am not yet a master, not yet complete,
Still learning the rhythm, still finding the beat.

So here I stand, with humble embrace,
Grateful for the lessons, and the endless chase.
For I am still a student, a seeker of truth,
Learning how to write, how to carve my youth.

Only two months, a student still,
In the playcollege of writing, learning at will.


Thank you every one for all  your support


-- Shailu


Namaskar Namaskar Namaskar


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(02-11-2025, 04:23 AM)Prakash1986 Wrote:  Nice start. I didn't read this story. Seems it's your first story.  I will read this to understand your journey.


Hi Prakash1986

Thank you so much. I’m glad you liked the start. Yes, it’s the first story with which I started to learn writing, and I hope you enjoy reading it and following the journey. 

Your interest really means a lot, thanks for giving it a chance.

With warm regards

-- Shailu
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Six Months of Storytelling: Thank You From the Bottom of My Heart
 
Dear Friends,
 
Six months ago, when I was in India, a small thought flashed in my mind: why not try writing a story? At that time, I had been reading some stories on this site, but not extensively. When that idea struck, I simply signed into the site and began writing Abhi’s Journey. That was the turning point of my life. Before that, none of you knew me, and now, I’m fortunate to have all of you by my side.
 
Today marks six months since I embarked on this incredible journey of storytelling, and I can’t believe how quickly the time has flown by. From that very first idea, to putting pen to paper, to now, having six stories that I’m so proud of, I’ve learned more than I ever imagined.
 
There are so many people I want to thank for their encouragement, support, and belief in me. Without you, none of this would have been possible. Every word written, every plot twist crafted, every character developed is, in part, because of the faith and energy you’ve shared with me.

  1. First Fire in Abhiram's Erotic Journey - Part 1
    The first story I wrote was a true leap of faith. I want to thank everyone who gave me feedback and helped me see the potential in it. Your encouragement made it all feel worth it. I will always remember the excitement and nerves I felt finishing this one. I introduced too many characters in that story and could not justify them, so I wrapped it up and moved on to Part 2.

  2. Antarvasana: The Forbidden Fire
    Writing my second story was an entirely different experience. I continued from where I left off in the first story. It picks up momentum with Madhavi, Meghana, and her sister Varnika. I paused this story when Varnika proposed Abhi. They are yet to get close and enjoy the romantic journey. I was amazed by how many of you were there to cheer me on, share your thoughts, and keep me going when it felt like the story was taking unexpected turns. Thank you to each of you for your unwavering support.

  3. Priya Didi
    The third story was an emotional rollercoaster. I’ve received the most feedback on this one, some good, some bad, and some harsh. I was feeling very down and could not write for a few days. I want to thank those of you who reached out with messages of encouragement and helped me heal. Your kindness meant the world to me. I can never forget your help. I want to thank those of you who shared thoughtful feedback, offering constructive suggestions and just being there to listen when I needed to talk things through. This story has been an emotional ride for you and for me as well.

  4. The Swamiji
    This one was a real turning point for me. I started this story thinking I wanted to write a novel. It wasn’t just another erotic story, it was something more. However, I didn’t get much engagement despite the time I spent on it. Each scene in this story took a lot of my time, but I haven’t written much beyond what’s already posted. I’ve put it on pause for now, but I hope to pick it up soon. I got some great initial feedback, but the momentum quickly faded.

  5. The Nine Nights
    The concept was simple: two people stranded on a remote island in Kerala after a tsunami wave. They spend nine days waiting for rescue. This story is about how they survived and how they grew closer to each other emotionally, and then physically. This story touches on every tiny bit of emotion. Thank you to everyone who kept believing in me, whether it was a quick message, a thoughtful comment, or simply asking me how the story was coming along. You made all the difference. This story is nearing its conclusion, and I hope to complete it very soon.

  6. Shhh... by Shailu
    And now, we arrive at my sixth story. I had this beautiful concept one night, and I put the plot together. But I need to spend more time to truly expand it into a complete story. I hope you’ll all enjoy it. I feel like this story is a culmination of all the growth I’ve experienced over these past six months. I want to make it exciting and naughty, and I can’t wait to share more with you.

 
 
 
Throughout this entire journey, one thing has remained constant: the support I’ve received from all of you. Whether you’ve offered a kind word, a helpful suggestion, or simply been a sounding board when I needed to bounce ideas around, I am endlessly grateful for your encouragement.
 
As I reflect on these past six months, I realize that my writing isn’t just about me, it’s about all of you who’ve helped me get here. You've given me the confidence to keep pushing forward, to take risks, and to explore new ideas. Every single person who has been part of this journey, in whatever way, holds a special place in my heart.
 
Thank you for believing in me, for being a part of my story, and for helping me bring these stories to life. I can't wait to see what the next six months hold, and I’m thrilled to continue sharing this journey with you all.
 
With deep gratitude and excitement for what’s next,
 
-- Shailu
 
 
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Happy New Year, My Dear, Mischievous Friends!
 
As the calendar flips and the clock does its dramatic “3…2…1…”, it’s time to dump the old year, flirt shamelessly with the new one, and welcome it with hope, laughter, sparkle, and a healthy dose of mischief. ;)  After all, behaving too well is so last year.
 
Now, a little heart-to-heart confession (don’t tell anyone ): )
I started writing in June 2025, and what began as a harmless affair with words quickly turned into a full-blown emotional entanglement—with all of you. And oh, what a beautiful mess that has been!
 
This journey gifted me so many wonderful friends, unexpected connections, and late-night smiles. For that, I am deeply, dangerously thankful to each and every one of you. Truly, meeting you all has been one of the best plot twists of my year.
 
May this New Year bring you fresh beginnings, unexpected thrills, good health, and plenty of reasons to smile… and blush. ;)
 
May your days be lighter, your nights calmer (or exciting, your choice  ), and your coffee or chai always strong enough to handle life’s drama and my story twists.
 
Thank you for reading, supporting, encouraging, nudging, waiting, and occasionally staring at your screen wondering, “Where is the update?”
 
Here’s to new stories, bolder emotions, deeper connections, and many deliciously memorable moments we’ll share in the coming year.
 
Now for the naughty truth…
Yes, when I was in the USA, updates were frequent and enthusiastic, and after coming back to India, the pace slowed down. Not because the fire died… oh no… but because business pressures, the holiday season, and massive families on both sides have completely invaded my personal space.
 
And as you know very well, I cannot open my browser and write these stories when curious eyes are hovering around me. I need privacy, silence, and a little solitude to let my imagination misbehave properly, and right now, that privacy is playing very hard to get.
Still, I promise to sneak in updates whenever I can. So please be patient, stay naughty, and don’t give up on me yet. I’ll make it worth the wait.
 
So now, raise a glass, make a wish, flirt with the universe, and step boldly into the New Year with confidence, curiosity, and a wickedly playful heart.
Let’s make this year bold, beautiful, slightly scandalous, and totally unforgettable.
 
Wishing you all a very Happy New Year filled with happiness, success, laughter, and delicious surprises!
 
With gratitude, warmth, and a mischief…
 
-- Shailu
 

 


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Happy Bhoghi




Wishing you a joyful and vibrant Bhogi! May this auspicious day bring new beginnings, prosperity, and happiness to you and your loved ones. As the fire of Bhogi burns away the old and makes space for the new, may your life be filled with peace, positivity, and abundant blessings. Enjoy the warmth, the celebrations, and the time spent with family and friends.

Happy Bhogi to You All 



With Love

Shailu








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Happy Sankranti and Happy Pongal 





Wishing you a joyous and prosperous celebration as we welcome this season of new beginnings. May the warmth of the festival fill your heart with happiness, and may the harvest bring you success, peace, and abundance.



As we mark this special time, may it offer you fresh opportunities, cherished moments with loved ones, and a brighter path ahead. Whether it's Sankranti or Pongal, let's celebrate the beauty of togetherness and the promise of a bountiful year.


Happy Sankranti / Pongal to you and your family.


With Love

Shailu














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KAVI9

Excellent narration, love the yoga chemistry -take it forward  without much breaks or diversions like her sister or building Aunties to dilute his character. You are excellent in creating a beauttiful love story with huge romance ..maintain that way. Keep his santity alive instead of bringining in some cheap sex. You narrate story much realistically, congrats. This one and Priya Didy story both narration is great n story too. Maintain same class. Love/romance/tease much sought than cheap sex, seduction/sex shall be top class to but between the main two  characters. Otherwise what is the differene between you and others who write hero f'ing n number after starting a good story.  - Vish

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Hi Vish
 
Thank you for reading so closely and for taking the time to share such honest and detailed feedback. I truly appreciate the care with which you’ve engaged with the story.
 
I’m really glad the narration, the yoga chemistry, and the romantic flow worked for you. That emotional and relational build-up is the core of the story, and knowing it resonated means a lot to me.
 
I also hear you clearly on maintaining class, sanity, and depth, especially when it comes to the main characters. For me, love, tease, and emotional intimacy must always come first. Any physical element should earn its place. Yes, I will keep your suggestions in mind.
 
Just to let you know this is my first story I ever wrote. This happened a little above 6 months and it is my pleasure to see your feedback on this story.
 
There is the continuation for this story and the link is in the same page. For your convenience I am giving the link for the next part of this story here:  Antarvasana: The Forbidden Fire – *** Varnika's First Surrender ***
 
Your mention of Priya Didi’s story and your trust in my ability to tell a beautiful, realistic love story is very encouraging. Thank you very much for your compliments.
 
Thank you once again for the encouragement, clarity, and straight talk. It’s feedback like this that helps a writer stay aligned and grounded.
 
With warm regards
 
-- Shailu
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Dear Friends
 
Wishing you all a very Happy Ugadi!
 
May this auspicious occasion bring new beginnings, fresh hopes, and abundant joy into your lives. May the year ahead be filled with prosperity, good health, and countless blessings. Let’s celebrate the start of a vibrant new chapter with love, positivity, and togetherness!
 
Enjoy the festivities with your loved ones and make the most of this beautiful time of renewal.
 
Happy Ugadi to you and your family!
 
-- Shailu
 
 
 
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