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Avani's Journey to the North
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Hi, I'm going to start a Hindi story of a housewife Avani.

Title: Avani's Journey to the North


Avani ke baare mein kuch basic jaankaari-

·Avani ek 28 saal ki aurat hai, jiske pati ka naam Raaj hai aur woh mnc mein kaam krta hai...jiske karan uski life kaafi busy rehti hai, abhi tk avani ke koi aulaad nhi hui


· Avani bangluru mein rehti hai

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Woh apne mayke jaane ke liye nikli hai. Is safar/maayke mein uska kaise-kaise logon se samna hota hai, yahi kahani mein jaanenge.


Raat ke kareeb 2 baje the. Avani der raat office se wapas aayi thi, jabki Raj pehle hi ghar aa chuka tha. Jaise hi Avani ghar aayi, Raj ne pucha:


Raj: Avani, tumhe aane mein itni der kyun ho gayi?

Avani: Mat pucho Raj, maine aaj office se resign kar diya hai.

Raj (hairani se): Kya? Par tumhe toh yeh job bohot pasand thi, fir resign kyun kiya?


Avani: Raj, maine bataya toh tha na, mummy ne bulaya hai. Ek hafte baad chacha ke bete ki shaadi hai, toh mummy ke saath jaana hai. Office se chhutti nahi mil rahi thi, isliye resign kar diya.


Raj:  Fir v tumhe job nhi chhodni thi avani..

 Avani gusse se Raaz ko dekhti ha!!

Raj: Achha thik hai, toh shaadi kab hai aur tumhe kab nikalna hai?

Avani: 23 July ko shaadi hai, toh mujhe kal shaam ko hi nikalna padega.

Raj: Thik hai meri jaan, ab tum aaraam kar lo, Kal shaam ko safar par bhi toh nikalna hai.


Itna kehkar Raj bedroom mein chala jaata hai aur Avani fresh hone ke liye bathroom chali jaati hai.


Raat ko der se sone ke baad Avani ki aankh subah 10:30 baje khulti hai. Usne dekha ki Raj office ja chuka tha. Use pata tha Raj ne kuch na kuch nashte mein bana liya hoga, isliye woh bed se uthkar apne subah ke kaam karne lagti hai.


Dopahar ke kareeb 2:40 baje Avani ke phone ki ghanti bajti hai. Us waqt woh living room mein baithkar TV dekh rahi thi. Usne jaldi se phone uthaya.


Avani: "Hello Raj!"

Raj: "Hello Avani, mujhe aaj office se thoda late ho jaayega. Tum ek kaam karna, Kempegowda bus station pohonch jaana. Wahan Anish milega, woh tumhe bus mein bitha dega. Aur haan, maine AC sleeper bus book kar di hai, aaraam se jaana."


Avani: "Thik hai Raj, maine tumhare liye dinner bana diya hai. Office se aakar kha lena aur meri chinta mat karna. Main bus station pohonch kar tumhe call kar lungi."


Itna kehkar Avani phone rakh deti hai aur bag pack karne lagti hai.

Avani ne blue georgette ki saree pehni thi aur uske saath sleeveless white blouse. Woh hamesha saree hi pehenti thi, kabhi-kabhi salwar-kameez bhi pehen leti thi. Saree woh aksar nabhi ke neeche pehenti thi, jisse woh aur zyada attractive lage.


Jaise hi Avani bus station pahunchti hai, log use ghur-ghur kar dekhne lagte hain. Kuch auratein bhi hairani se dekh rahi thi, jaise soch rahi ho ki kaun itni khuli dress mein ghoomta hai. Lekin Avani ko in sab baaton se koi farq nahi padta. Woh puri confidence ke saath chalti rahi. Tabhi usne dekha ki Anish haath hila kar use bula raha tha.


Jaise hi Anish ne avani ko dekha, toh woh avani ki cleavage ko dekhta hi reh gya 

Avani ne Anish ko uski chuchi dekhte huye dekh liya aur turant apni saari ke pallu se apni cleavage dhak leti hai aur boli... Anish kaha khoye ho??

Anish ghabrahat mein bolta hai..


Anish: Namaste bhabhi, yeh aapki bus hai. Aaiye, main aapka samaan bus mein rakh deta hoon. Aap aaraam se baith jaiye.

Avani: Namaste Anish, yeh bag main apne saath hi rakhungi. Ismein zaruri samaan hai.

Anish: Thik hai bhabhi.


Itna kehkar Anish, Avani ko uski seat par bitha deta hai aur uska samaan rakhkar bus se utar jaata hai.

Halaki avani ko apne chuchiyon par is prakar Anish ka ghurna bura nhi laga tha woh jaanti thi usko dekhkar koi bhi mard aise hi krta, kyunki uske sath aisa pehli baar nhi hua tha use kaafi mardon ne aise ankho se compliment diya hai


Bus chal padti hai...

Bus ke andar chocolate color ke parde lage hue the aur kaafi jagah bhi thi. Avani apni seat par aaraam se let jaati hai. Kuch der baad bus chal padti hai.



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Karib raat ke 12 baj rhe they. bus apni dheemi raftaar se sadak par daud rhi thi. bus ke andar halki-fulki roshni thi, jo kabhi kabhi jhilmilati aur jyadatar yaatri apni seat pr Chadar taan kar so chuke they. Bus ke engine ki dheemi aawaz aur Andheri raat ki ek khamoshi si thi.

Avani adhi nind mein thi jb usse apne paas khade kisi ka ehsaas hua, usne light jala kr dekha toh ek dubla-patla 30-35 saal ka aadmi khada  tha neeli shirt aur white pajama jaisa budde log pehente hain aur woh apne muh mein gutka chawa rha tha, jo uske hoton par chipka hua tha.

Avani use dekhkar chauk jaati hai, lekin fir avani ne use gusse se kaha..


Avani- aap kaun ho ?? Aur itni raat ko meri seat pr kya kr rhe ho


Woh aadmi apna naam Raamu batata hai aur ek madad bhari aawaz mein kehta hai


Raamu : memsaab, humka gorakhpur up Jaana hai aur humri bus chhut gyi, toh hum iss bus mein chupke se Chad gya tha, kyunki raat bohot ho gyi thi aur E bus v gorakhpur jaa rhi thi, toh humka bebasi mein yahi ek raasta dikhai diya


Avani-yeh toh galat baat hai na

Raamu-(udaas chehra krte hue)haa memsaab par Humka aur kauno raasta dikha hi nhi, isiliye aa gya


Avani ko ab uss par Daya aa gyi kyunki woh bohot dayalu swabhav ki hai...


Avani man mein sochti hui: Agar maine ise bitha liya aur yeh koi chhor ya badmash hua toh...Nahi Nahi main ise nahi bitha skti lekin dekhne se chhor toh nhi lag rha 
Avani kuchh sochti hai...

Fir Avani halki si muskurate hue boli, thik hai raamu-ji aap yahan baith jayiye, kaafi jagah hai yahan


Raamu-thankuu memsaab thanku


Ab kuch der tak dono baithe rehte hn, aur thodi der baad avani raamu se puchhti hai

Avani- aap gorakhpur mein kahan rehte hain, raamu ji ??

Raamu- memsaab hum bilaspur se hun

Avani bilaspur naam sunte hi, aankhe badi karke kehti hai....

Areee sachhh mein!!! main bhi ratnapur jaa rhi hun.

Itna sunkar raamu bhi muskurate hue bolta hai aare wah memsaab aapka aur humaare gaw ka bazar toh ek hi hai


Avani- Haan raamu ji (muskurate hue) 

Yeh sb ho hi rha tha, ki achanak bus jhatke se rukti hai


Aur iss Achanak bus ke jhatke se Anita ka pallu thoda, sarak jata hai aur uski cleavage Puri dikne lagti hai jo pallu se dhaki hui thi abhi tak.


Raamu light ki roshni mein itni Gori cleavage dekhkar dang reh gya, usne aajtak aisi Ameer aurat ki cleavage toh kya dekhi hogi, usske saath baitha tk nhi hoga.


Ab raamu ka Lund harkat krne lgta hai aur uski pant mein hi lumba tambu ki tarah tan jaata hai, avani uske tambu jaise Lund ko pant ke upar se dekh leti hai aur man mein sochti hai kahin usne kisi galat aadmi ko toh nahi baitha liya, lekin fir woh apne man ko samjhate huye-

Avani(man mein): main bhi kitni pagal hun mujhe safety pin lagana chahiye tha....

Aur fir woh apne pallu se apni cleavage dhak leti hai

Raamu uss wakt toh kuch nhi bolta hai, Lekin uske dimaag mein ab avani ke liye tharak paida ho gyi thi


Bus fir se chalu Hui toh dono seat par hi baithe they 

Avani Raamu se puchhti hai

Avani- Waise raamu ji aap Bangluru mein kuch kaam krte ho kya??

Ramu- (Avani ki taraf dekhkar bolta hai) u memsaab hum yahan pey ek
Seth ke anaaz ke godaam pey ka kaam karta hun

Avani- Aare aap ko to bahut mehnat karni padti hogi na?

Raamu- Haan memsaab u baat toh hai, kaam naahi karenge toh kharacha kaise chalega

Avani- Han baat toh sahi hai aapki

Ab raamu kuchh yahan wahan dekhne lagta hai, toh avani samajh jaati hai ki raamu ko nind aa rhi hai 

Avani-Aapko nind aa rhi hai raamu ji aap yahan so jaiye

Raamu- memsaab aap so jaiye, waise bhi aap jaisi khubsurat aurat ne hum jaisan badsurat aadmi ko apni seat par baithne diya ee(ई) kaa kam hai

Avani (mazakiya andaaz mein)- aisa kyun bol rhe hain aap ramu ji, aap toh itne handsome dikhte ho ki koi bhi ladki aapke pyaar mein pad jaaye..aur fir halki si has deti hai "hehe"

Ramu (dukhi man se)- rehne dijiye memsaab aap humaara jhutha taarif kar rhin hain
Avani- raamu ji aapko kya ho gya hai, achanak itna sad kyun


Raamu- ek aap hain..aur ek humaari lugai thi,
Jo humka Roz badsurat bolti thi, lekin jab Humka pata chala ki uska koi Ashiq hai tab tak woh ghar se saara rupiya Paisa lekar apne Ashiq ke sath bhag gayi

Avani ko raamu par Daya aa jaati hai, aur woh ramu ko ek dost ki tarah bolti hai... Chinta mat kijiye raamuji ab main hun na aapke sath, aap tension mat lijiye, main ab se aapka khayal rakh diya karungi aur aapko Jo kuchh bhi chahiye aap bin Sharmye mang liya kijiye

Raamu gardan nichee karke muskura deta hai.
Aur kuchh der baad avni se puchta hi

Ramu- Memsaab kuch bhi mang skte hn kaa
Avani-Haan ramuji, maangne mein kya burai hai bataiye
Ramu- aur agar aapne mana kar diya toh...

Avani bina kuch soche bol deti hai...are ramuji maangne mein kya burai hai aap mangiye na

Ramu(dukhi sa muh banakar)- nahi memsaab rehne dijiye aap nahi dengi

Avani ramu ko fir se udass nahi dekhna chahti thi toh usne bina soche samjhe bol diya

Avani- Thik hai raamuji aap mangiye na, main mana nahi karoongi

Ramu ko toh isi mauke ka intezar tha toh usne fir se dukhi chehre se puchha

Ramu- ka aap humari lugaai banogi

Avani ramu ko ektak dekhti rehti hai jaise usko sanp sungh gya ho

Ramu-bola tha na humne memsaab ki ap mana kar dengi, hum badsurat ki lugaai koi nahi ban sakta hai

Avani ko ramu par daya aa jati hai aur woh bolti hai...lekin raamuji meri toh shadi ho chuki hai fir main aapse shadi kaise kar sakti hun aur apna mangalsutra dikhaati hai, 

Raamu bolta hai... memsaab aapka humse shadi thodi karni hai bas humri lugaai banne ka natak karna hai

To be continued....
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Update 3 ke baad story ka main part suru hoga
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Good one
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Story toh acchi hai bhai... lekin yeh sab scenes kisi na kisi story mein maine padhi hai..... sab ko mila kar aapne yeh story banai hai...... aapki talent ko salaam....
Sorry bhai bura laga ho toh.... main thoda kuch jyada hi straight forward hu.... jo mere dil aur dimag mein hai wahi meri zuban par hai.
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(22-02-2025, 10:44 PM)val.coutinho Wrote: Story toh acchi hai bhai... lekin yeh sab scenes kisi na kisi story mein maine padhi hai..... sab ko mila kar aapne yeh story banai hai...... aapki talent ko salaam....
Sorry bhai bura laga ho toh.... main thoda kuch jyada hi straight forward hu.... jo mere dil aur dimag mein hai wahi meri zuban par hai.

I like your review but it's just the beginning
Update 2 mein story aapko aise mod par milegi Jo aapne I guess bohot hi kam padhi ho
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Anvi lugai bankar ramu ke jhopdi me rhne lage
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Update jaldi De do
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(22-02-2025, 11:07 PM)Spnize Wrote: I like your review but it's just the beginning
Update 2 mein story aapko aise mod par milegi Jo aapne I guess bohot hi kam padhi ho

No problem bro..... its a good start though.... bas mere comments ka bura mat manna.... main jo bhi mere dil mein hai aur dimag mein hai wahi bolta hu..... agle update ka intezar rahega.... fir se comments dunga based on the update.
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Bhai agle update ka wait kar Raha hu
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Anvi ko lugai bankar ramu apne gau le jaye
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Don't worry you'll receive an update by 08:30 pm tonight
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Update 02


Avani sochti hai ki natak hi toh karna hai ismey kaunsi badi baat hai aur ramuji se jid karne se bhi koi fayda nahi hai fir woh ramu se bolti hai

Thik hai ramu ji abhi ke liye main aapki patni hun....aur hass kar bol deti hai ab thik h na ramuji.


Ramu-  Haan memsaab hum aapke pati hn aaj se

Avani-(haste huye) Thik hai baba, aap mere pati hain aaj se

Ramu- aapka sirf ek hi pati hai aur u hn hum, samjhi aap

Avani ko ramu ki harkate bachkani lagti hn aur Bo bolti hai

"Thik hai ramu ji mere pati sirf aap hain"  aur fir has deti hai

Avani- ramu ji aapko nind nahi aa rhi, mujhe toh bohot nind aa rhi hai, waise bhi bohot raat ho chuki hai

Ramu- Han memsaab, nind toh humka bhi aa rhi hai

Avani (ramu ko chhedte huye)- Achha ji toh konsa pati apni patni ko memsaab bulata hai hn?

Raamu- aisi baat naahi hai, humka aapko memsaab bulana hi achha laagat hai

Avani (hastey huye)- chaliye ramuji ab so jaiye aap

Fir avani apane bag se chadar nikalti hai aur takiye par sar rakhkar sone lagti hai, tabhi ramu bhi aakar avani ki chadar mein ghus jata hai aur sone lagta hai

Avani ko ramu ke apane paas letne se koi dikkat nhi hui...

Aur fir avani waise hi leti rehti hai

Kuchh der baad ramu bhi so jata hai


Subah ke 6 baj rhe the...

Conductor - jisko bhi fresh ya nashta-paani karna ho toh avi karle...bus ek ghanta yahan rukegi

Avani ki ankh bus conductor ki aawaz se khul jati hai...jaise hi uski ankh khulti hai woh dekhti hai ki raamu uski kamar mein hath daalkar aur uske upar pair rakhkar soya aota hai

Ab tak avani raamu ke sath baatchit se comfortable ho gyi thi toh usse raamu ka apne pet par hath rakhne mein koi buraai nahi lagi

Avani raamu ke kandhe par hath rakhne usse uthati hai

Itne mein raamu jaag jata hai aur uthkar baith jaata hai

Ramu- subah ho gyi memsaab

Avani (mazaak krte huye) :- aapko aur Sona ha kya ramuji. Aur dabi aawaz mein hass deti hai "hehe"

Ramu- naahi memsaab, Humaar uu matlab naahi tha, uu Humka hugne jaana hai aapko naahi Jana hai

Avani raamu ko uske hugne ki baat se Sharma jaati hai aur bolti hai

Avani-  Haan raamu ji mujhe bhi fresh hone jaana hai

Fir dono bus se niche utarte hn toh ramu dekhta hai ki wahan toilet likha hua tha aur bohot saare aadmi khade huye they...

Ramu avani ka hath pakad kar, bolta hai chaliye memsaab u rha latrine

Aur avani ka hath pakad kar wahan chal deta hai, raamu ke hath mein itani takat thi ki avani uske sath khichi chali jaati hai

jab dono wahan pahuchten hain toh dekhte hn wahan charo taraf aadmi aur auraten idhar udhar se jaa rahi thi

Ramu bolta hai, memsaab aap yahan iss wale sandas mein chale jaiye...hum uu waale mein jata hun

Aur ramu itna kehkar...ek paas wale
toilet ke andar ghus jata hai

Tabhi Avani ke bagal mein ek mota sa aadmi baitha tha.. usne avani ke nange pet par jor se chuti kaat leta hai

Avani- Ouccchhh!!!!!

Avani ashcharya se apne bagal mein dekhti hai toh ek mota sa kala aadmi uske bagal mein padi kursi par baitha hua daant dikha kar hass rha tha..

Avani- pagal ho kya aap!!

Tabhi woh avani ka hath pakad leta hai aur apne honto par jibh firakar bolta hai

Jyada bolegi toh yahin nanga krke sabke sandaas saaf karaunga

Avani dar jaati hai aur turant uske hath se apna hath chhudakar bhag ke saamne Wale toilet mein jakar jaldi se gate band karlrti hai aur ek gehri saans leti hai...aur fir man mein bolti hai

Kaise log rehte hn yahan baat karne ki bhi tamiz nahi hai inko

Fir avani toilet ki taraf dekti hai aur bolti hai.....aree wah, yahan kam se kam toilet toh saaf hain

Jyadatar dehati ilakon ke public toilets gande hi milte hn par avani ko toilet saaf Mila isse avani bohot khush hoti hai


Ab avani toilet seat par khadi ho jati hai fir apani saari aur petticoat ko kamar Tak utha kar ek hath mein dono ko pakad kar dusre hath se apani panty jangho tak khiska leti hai aur fir panty se sanitary napkin nikaalti hai jo uske menstrual waste se abtak pura laal ho chuka tha,

Avani usse paas rakhe dustbin mein fek deti hai..par uska menstrual waste uske pubic hairs mein chipk jata hai jise woh paani se saaf kar leti hai aur toilet seat par kamar tak saari uthaye hue baith jaati hai.

Jab woh vapis aati hai toh usse ramu ussi kursi par baitha milta hai, jispar abhi thodi der pehle woh mota baitha tha.
Ramu ko dekhkar avani thoda safe feel karti hai aur uski taraf badh chali....

Avani(apne pallu se hath pochhte huye raamu ki taraf aati hai)

- raamuji aap fresh ho gye?

Ramu (kursi se khada hota hai aur kehta hai)-

Haan memsaab humara toh pet bilkul saaf ho gaya

Avani(haste huye)- aree badi achhi baat hai raamu ji fir toh

Achanak ramu avani ki taraf aata hai aur uski kamar pakad kar chalne lagta hai

Avani-( chauk jaati hai aur ek flirt wale andaaz mein)
not bad-not bad raamuji aur has deti ha "haha"

Ramu- uu memsaab aap kuch khana khayengi?

Avani- lekin raamuji maine toh brush bhi nahi kiya hai

Ramu- aree memsaab, hum toh 4-5 din tak brush nahi karte hn toh ka hum kuchhu khate nahi hain

Avani- chhi raamu ji aap itne din Tak brush kyun nahi karte

Raamu- bas memsaab, kaam mein kabhi kabhi bhul jaate hain.....waise aapke liye hum Vada pav laate hn

Avani- thik hai raamu ji  le aaiye sath mein kha lene...aur itna kehkar avani bas mein chali jaati hai aur raamu dhabe se vada pav lene chala jata hai


Avani seat par pahuch kar bag apna senitary napkin pehan leti hai aur itni der mein raamu aa jata hai

Raamu- Yeh  lijiye memsaab aapka vada pav

Avani- aap abhi toh gye they...itni jaldi aa gye

Raamu- Memsaab apko humri Umar kitni lagti hogi??

Avani- 40-43 I guess ?

Raamu- nahi memsaab, hum 51 ke ho chuke hn

Avani (muh fadkar)- sach mein kya !!!

Raamu- aur nahi toh kaa; memsaab hum bas dekhne se hi duble lagte hn waise Hum do logo ko ek sath patak sakte hn

Avani (hastehuye)- thik hai raamuji thik hai; agar ab aapki taarif ho gayi ho toh nashta kar len warna thanda ho jayega

Raamu- ji memsaab waise aapki Umar kitni hogi?

Avani- 28 raamu ji aur has deti hai

Aur fir dono apna apna nashta karne lagte hn


Avani apani seat par ankhe band karke let jaati hai

Aur raamu apne phone ka volume badhakar bhojpuri ka ek gaane chalaane lagta hai...


? हो गईनी पूरा डेकोरेट बलम ?

? करिया ऊपर नीचे सेट बलम?

?सेट बलम?

?हो गईनी, हो गईनी?

?आरे हो गईनी पूरा डेकोरेट बलम?

?करिया ऊपर नीचे सेट बलम?

?बेरी बेरी सरके अचरवा, इन पिन लगा दिही अड़ि जाई?

?सड़िया प डालब नजरिया त सड़िया, फिर से पहिरे के पड़ि जाई?

?सड़िया प डालब नजरिया त सड़िया, फिर से पहिरे के पड़ि जाई?


Kuchh hi der mein "bus station" par bus ruk jaati hai aur raamu aur avani niche utar jaate hn
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Ramu anvi ko lugai bnakar apne gau le jaye
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Update 3

Raamu aur avani bus Stop par utar kar thodi aage chalne lage

Gaw ke paas ka bus stand hone ke kaaran wahan ka mahaul avani ko sahi nahi lag rha tha..
Chaaron taraf kachra tha aur kuchh mard, bachhe aur aurate avani ki itni morden saari aur sleevless blouse dekhkar usse hi ghure jaa rhe they

tabhi ek ladka avani ki gand ki daraar mein haath daalkar chala jaata hai avani ka toh dil jor se dhadak gya avni usse jaate huye dekh leti hai lekin kuchh nahi kehti hai

Avani- Raamu ji mujhe toilet jaana hai yahan koi toilet hoga kya??

Raamu- naahi memsaab yahan koi waisa toilet toh nahi hai par aapka mootne ki vyavastha hum kr sakta hun

Jaise hi raamu "mootna" shabd kehta hai avani ka dil jor se dhadak jata hai aur woh sharam se apna sar nichhe jhuka leti hai....

fir woh puchhti hai- kaise raamu ji??

Raamu- Memsaab dekhiye woh tuti hui dukaan ka malwa pada hai na aap udhar jaakar moot aaiye

Avani wha dekhti hai toh waha sunsaan sa ilaka tha 

Avani- lekin raamu ji aise khule mei....

Raamu- Lekin memsaab yahan aur kauno jagah mutne ke liye nahi hai

Agar aapko naahi Jana hai toh kam se kam aapko 1 ghanta apna moot rokna padega

Avani ne socha thik hai yahii kar leti hun koi hai bhi nahi yahan par aur woh raamu se chhupkar ek ped ke pichhe jaakr pesaab krne lagti hai

 Binaa deri kiye woh apni panty pehanti hai aur raamu ke taraf chali jaati hai...


Kuchh duri par raamu paani le rha tha usne Pani ki bottle avani ko di toh avani ne paani pikar puccha

Avani- Raamu ji aapako koi rikshaw Mila Kya ??

Raamu- Haan memsaab ek rikshaw badi mushkil mein mila hai jo ki apne gaw hi jaa rha hai...lekin uske rikshaw mein thoda saman hai memsaab


Avani- koi baat nahi raamu ji main adjust kar lungi aur usne Rahat ki saans li..

Fir dono rikshaw ki taraf badhte hain...

Raamu- Memsaab yeh Hain gajodhar ji

Gajodhar ko dekhne se hi lag rha tha ki woh 60 saal ka hoga, unke sar par baal naam ke liye they jo ki safed ho chuke the..aur unhone safed gandi shirt aur ek pajama pehna hua tha

Gajodhar- beti, yahan par rikshaw bohot Kam hi milte hn apne gaw ke liye woh toh hume Pradhan ji ke ghar kuchh zaruri saaman pahuchana hai

Bhala ho bhagwan ka hum mil gye warna...aapko paidal Jana padta.

Avani ko Gajodhar dwara apne aapko beti bulane par bohot  Garv hus

Ab raamu aur avani riksha mein aage baith jaate hn kyunki pichhe saara saaman pada hua tha aur Gajodhar bhi bagal mein auto rikshaw chala rha tha, avani Gajodhar aur raamu ke bich mein baithi thi

lekin, Auto rikshaw mein jagah itni Kam thi ki dono ke liye baithna mushkil ho rha tha...


Kuchh der baad auto rikshaw avani ke ghar pahuch jata hai

Avani ka ghar gaw se kuchh duri par tha, (ek tarah se farm house keh sakte hn)  jaha ek do ghar hi bane huye they

Avani ka ghar waise kaafi bada aur aalishan tha jo ki kheton ke bichh mein bana hua tha...in garmiyo mein avani ke pita ne tamatar ki fasal ugaayi hui thi.

Avani auto se utarti hai,,,,,

Avani- Gajodhar ji aapke kitne paise huye ?

Isse pehle Gajodhar bol pata raamu bol pada

Ramu- aree Memsaab aap uski chinta mat karo hum de denge aapka kiraya...aap yeh lijiye apna bag aur ab aaraam kijiye ghar jakar do din se aapne bilkul aaraam nahi kiya

Avani-(muskurate huye) Aacha thik hai raamuji, jaisa aap kahe

Aur ramu se apna bag lekar chalne lagti hai, tabhi raamu ki pichhe se aawaz aati hai... memsaab

Avani pichhe dekhti  hai toh raamu usse kehta hai

Ramu- ( dabi hui aawaz mein)
Memsaab uu aapse dubara milna ho sakt hai kaa...

Avani- (haste huye) aree raamuji yeh bhi koi puchhne waali baat hai...jab aapka Milne ka man kare tab aa jaya kijiye

Itna kehte hi raamu apani jeb se nikalkar avani ko apna number de deta hai aur bolta hai...jab aapko humaari seva ki zarurat ho tab yaad kar lijiyega

Avani muskurate huye bolti hai....ji raamu ji aapko seva krne ka puraa mauka diya jaayega aur khilkhilakr has deti hai

fir avani apne ghar chali jaati hai

Raamu bhi apne ghar ko chala jata hai

Avani ghar  pahuch kar dekhti hai ki uski maa bag pack kar rhi hain aur papa car ki chabhi dhund rhe they

Gaw mein Avani ke sirf mummy aur papa hi rehte they aur avani unki eklauti aulaad thi

Avani-( haste hue) kya hua Bhai dono logon ki Kahan jaane ki planning chal rhi hai

Avani ko dekhte hi uski maa daudkar avani ko gale laga leti hai aur papa bhi wahi khade huye muskura rhe they

Mumy- avani kuchh mat puchh, jaana kahin aur tha aur jaa kahin aur rhe hn

Avani- aur kahi Jaa rhe ho, kyun ?? Kya hua

Papa- aree woh hai na apna suneel, uska accident ho gya tha, jabtak hospital lekar pahuche tab tak woh bach nahi paaye....!!

Avani- aree woh apne Agra waale suneel chacha

Mummy - Haan avani, ab unke ghar mein koi hai bhi nahi kaam sambhalne wala toh hume lagbhag tervi Tak  toh waha rukna hi padega

Avani- lekin mera aana toh bekkar ho gya na ab ( aur bekaar sa muh banakar paas living room mein rakhe sofe par baith jaati hai)

Woh log kuch der batein karte hn

Papa- beta, kuchh dino mein tamatar ki fasal todne ke liye mazdur aayenge toh sawdhani se fasal tudwana

Mummy- aur Roz subah dudh Dene chhotu aata hai usse dudh aadha liter hi Lena

Fir avani ke papa aur mummy car gharpar hi chhodkar bike se Agra nikal jaate hn


Ab Tak Andhera hone ko aaya tha avani fresh hokar dinner karne ke baad bedroom mein chali jaati hai aur raaj ko saari khabar sunaati hai

Arrow Raaj- Ab aisi baat hai toh kya hi kar skte hain, tum aaram se raho koi problem ho toh batana, 
aur haan mujhe Australia mein ek research project Mila hai toh company ne lagbhag 5 mahine ke liye
Australia ka transfer kr diya hai
Agar ho sake toh mummy papa ke paas hi ruk Jana 
Avani- congrats my love waise 5 mahine toh yahan gaw mein main nhi rukne waali ghar hi chali jaungi Arrow

Raj- achha thik hai dhyaan rakhna darling

Aur itna kehkar phone rakh deta hai

Avani uss din bahut thak chuki thi toh woh bed pey girte hi kab so jaati hai usse bhi pata nahi chalta

Uski ankh dudh Dene waale ki aawaz se khulti hai...woh jaldi uthkar apni saari thik karke aati hai aur gate khol deti hai


Uske saamne 18 saal ka ek ladka khada hua tha jo dudh Dene aata tha

Woh jaise hi Avani ko dekhta hai, toh avani ki deep neck waale blouse mein uski cleavage kaafi dikh rhi thi....aur chhotu uski cleavage ko dekhe hi jaa rha tha

Tabhi avani bolti hai...

Avani- achha toh tumhara naam chhotu hai

Chhotu - Haan aunty!

Avani- (muh fulakar gusse se) achha toh tumhe main aunty dikhti hun?

Chhotu - nhi, didi!

Avani- Han!! Ab se mujhe didi hi bologe na? Aunty toh nahi bologe

Chhotu- Haan didi sorry main aapko ab aunty nahi bolunga

Avani- good boy!! Waise mummy ne aajse adha liter dudh lene ko bola hai toh adha liter hi doodh Dena aaj se

Chhotu- thik hai didi, laaiye koi bartan usmey aapka doodh daal deta hun

Avani kitchen se bartan lekar aati hai aur bartan mein doodh bharkar kitchen mein rakh deti hai

Ab avani ko ghar ke kaam karte karte subah ke 10 baj jaate hai fir woh naha kar red sleevless blouse pehen leti hai aur silver coloured saari pehen leti hai...aur livening room mein baithkar TV dekhne lagti hai....lekin woh ghar mein bore ho rhi thi

Tabhi avani ke gate par doorbell bajti hai,

Ring.....   Ring....

Arrow Aur woh sofe se uthkar jaati hai aur  gate  khol deti hai

Saamne uske raamu tha...sar par ek safed toliya aur ek pili t-shirt aur niche nili lungi lapete huye tha jaisi South India mein log pehnte hn Arrow
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Why sexypreeti giving me negetive ratings
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(24-02-2025, 02:02 PM)Spnize Wrote: Why sexypreeti giving me negetive ratings

I have no idea what you are talking about. I am also new here. Let me check and get back to you after figuring out what you mean...

Please give me time till then...
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Bhai anvi ko sirf ramu ke hi lugai banao itna char mat add kro phir majja nhi aayega
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Rumu usi dadi ke beta nikle
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Logic thoda Over the top ja rhi hy.. hy na? Thida realistic approach lao.. baki style mature hy. Sahi hy
** aur haa yr bohot kuch ek sath hote ja rha... charac aur incidences ko limited rkho to aur behtar
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Khali char mat add karo bhai please request hai rumu ki lugai ban ke anvi uske ghar jaye uske maa kuch din rhe whi gaun ke mandir me ramu ki maa shadi karwa de
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