19-02-2025, 11:47 PM
(This post was last modified: 22-02-2025, 08:49 PM by Spnize. Edited 10 times in total. Edited 10 times in total.)
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Hi, I'm going to start a Hindi story of a housewife Avani.
Title: Avani's Journey to the North
Avani ke baare mein kuch basic jaankaari-
·Avani ek 28 saal ki aurat hai, jiske pati ka naam Raaj hai aur woh mnc mein kaam krta hai...jiske karan uski life kaafi busy rehti hai, abhi tk avani ke koi aulaad nhi hui
· Avani bangluru mein rehti hai
·
Woh apne mayke jaane ke liye nikli hai. Is safar/maayke mein uska kaise-kaise logon se samna hota hai, yahi kahani mein jaanenge.
Raat ke kareeb 2 baje the. Avani der raat office se wapas aayi thi, jabki Raj pehle hi ghar aa chuka tha. Jaise hi Avani ghar aayi, Raj ne pucha:
Raj: Avani, tumhe aane mein itni der kyun ho gayi?
Avani: Mat pucho Raj, maine aaj office se resign kar diya hai.
Raj (hairani se): Kya? Par tumhe toh yeh job bohot pasand thi, fir resign kyun kiya?
Avani: Raj, maine bataya toh tha na, mummy ne bulaya hai. Ek hafte baad chacha ke bete ki shaadi hai, toh mummy ke saath jaana hai. Office se chhutti nahi mil rahi thi, isliye resign kar diya.
Raj: Fir v tumhe job nhi chhodni thi avani..
Avani gusse se Raaz ko dekhti ha!!
Raj: Achha thik hai, toh shaadi kab hai aur tumhe kab nikalna hai?
Avani: 23 July ko shaadi hai, toh mujhe kal shaam ko hi nikalna padega.
Raj: Thik hai meri jaan, ab tum aaraam kar lo, Kal shaam ko safar par bhi toh nikalna hai.
Itna kehkar Raj bedroom mein chala jaata hai aur Avani fresh hone ke liye bathroom chali jaati hai.
Raat ko der se sone ke baad Avani ki aankh subah 10:30 baje khulti hai. Usne dekha ki Raj office ja chuka tha. Use pata tha Raj ne kuch na kuch nashte mein bana liya hoga, isliye woh bed se uthkar apne subah ke kaam karne lagti hai.
Dopahar ke kareeb 2:40 baje Avani ke phone ki ghanti bajti hai. Us waqt woh living room mein baithkar TV dekh rahi thi. Usne jaldi se phone uthaya.
Avani: "Hello Raj!"
Raj: "Hello Avani, mujhe aaj office se thoda late ho jaayega. Tum ek kaam karna, Kempegowda bus station pohonch jaana. Wahan Anish milega, woh tumhe bus mein bitha dega. Aur haan, maine AC sleeper bus book kar di hai, aaraam se jaana."
Avani: "Thik hai Raj, maine tumhare liye dinner bana diya hai. Office se aakar kha lena aur meri chinta mat karna. Main bus station pohonch kar tumhe call kar lungi."
Itna kehkar Avani phone rakh deti hai aur bag pack karne lagti hai.
Avani ne blue georgette ki saree pehni thi aur uske saath sleeveless white blouse. Woh hamesha saree hi pehenti thi, kabhi-kabhi salwar-kameez bhi pehen leti thi. Saree woh aksar nabhi ke neeche pehenti thi, jisse woh aur zyada attractive lage.
Jaise hi Avani bus station pahunchti hai, log use ghur-ghur kar dekhne lagte hain. Kuch auratein bhi hairani se dekh rahi thi, jaise soch rahi ho ki kaun itni khuli dress mein ghoomta hai. Lekin Avani ko in sab baaton se koi farq nahi padta. Woh puri confidence ke saath chalti rahi. Tabhi usne dekha ki Anish haath hila kar use bula raha tha.
Jaise hi Anish ne avani ko dekha, toh woh avani ki cleavage ko dekhta hi reh gya
Avani ne Anish ko uski chuchi dekhte huye dekh liya aur turant apni saari ke pallu se apni cleavage dhak leti hai aur boli... Anish kaha khoye ho??
Anish ghabrahat mein bolta hai..
Anish: Namaste bhabhi, yeh aapki bus hai. Aaiye, main aapka samaan bus mein rakh deta hoon. Aap aaraam se baith jaiye.
Avani: Namaste Anish, yeh bag main apne saath hi rakhungi. Ismein zaruri samaan hai.
Anish: Thik hai bhabhi.
Itna kehkar Anish, Avani ko uski seat par bitha deta hai aur uska samaan rakhkar bus se utar jaata hai.
Halaki avani ko apne chuchiyon par is prakar Anish ka ghurna bura nhi laga tha woh jaanti thi usko dekhkar koi bhi mard aise hi krta, kyunki uske sath aisa pehli baar nhi hua tha use kaafi mardon ne aise ankho se compliment diya hai
Bus chal padti hai...
Bus ke andar chocolate color ke parde lage hue the aur kaafi jagah bhi thi. Avani apni seat par aaraam se let jaati hai. Kuch der baad bus chal padti hai.
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Karib raat ke 12 baj rhe they. bus apni dheemi raftaar se sadak par daud rhi thi. bus ke andar halki-fulki roshni thi, jo kabhi kabhi jhilmilati aur jyadatar yaatri apni seat pr Chadar taan kar so chuke they. Bus ke engine ki dheemi aawaz aur Andheri raat ki ek khamoshi si thi.
Avani adhi nind mein thi jb usse apne paas khade kisi ka ehsaas hua, usne light jala kr dekha toh ek dubla-patla 30-35 saal ka aadmi khada tha neeli shirt aur white pajama jaisa budde log pehente hain aur woh apne muh mein gutka chawa rha tha, jo uske hoton par chipka hua tha.
Avani use dekhkar chauk jaati hai, lekin fir avani ne use gusse se kaha..
Avani- aap kaun ho ?? Aur itni raat ko meri seat pr kya kr rhe ho
Woh aadmi apna naam Raamu batata hai aur ek madad bhari aawaz mein kehta hai
Raamu : memsaab, humka gorakhpur up Jaana hai aur humri bus chhut gyi, toh hum iss bus mein chupke se Chad gya tha, kyunki raat bohot ho gyi thi aur E bus v gorakhpur jaa rhi thi, toh humka bebasi mein yahi ek raasta dikhai diya
Avani-yeh toh galat baat hai na
Raamu-(udaas chehra krte hue)haa memsaab par Humka aur kauno raasta dikha hi nhi, isiliye aa gya
Avani ko ab uss par Daya aa gyi kyunki woh bohot dayalu swabhav ki hai...
Avani man mein sochti hui: Agar maine ise bitha liya aur yeh koi chhor ya badmash hua toh...Nahi Nahi main ise nahi bitha skti lekin dekhne se chhor toh nhi lag rha
Avani kuchh sochti hai...
Fir Avani halki si muskurate hue boli, thik hai raamu-ji aap yahan baith jayiye, kaafi jagah hai yahan
Raamu-thankuu memsaab thanku
Ab kuch der tak dono baithe rehte hn, aur thodi der baad avani raamu se puchhti hai
Avani- aap gorakhpur mein kahan rehte hain, raamu ji ??
Raamu- memsaab hum bilaspur se hun
Avani bilaspur naam sunte hi, aankhe badi karke kehti hai....
Areee sachhh mein!!! main bhi ratnapur jaa rhi hun.
Itna sunkar raamu bhi muskurate hue bolta hai aare wah memsaab aapka aur humaare gaw ka bazar toh ek hi hai
Avani- Haan raamu ji (muskurate hue)
Yeh sb ho hi rha tha, ki achanak bus jhatke se rukti hai
Aur iss Achanak bus ke jhatke se Anita ka pallu thoda, sarak jata hai aur uski cleavage Puri dikne lagti hai jo pallu se dhaki hui thi abhi tak.
Raamu light ki roshni mein itni Gori cleavage dekhkar dang reh gya, usne aajtak aisi Ameer aurat ki cleavage toh kya dekhi hogi, usske saath baitha tk nhi hoga.
Ab raamu ka Lund harkat krne lgta hai aur uski pant mein hi lumba tambu ki tarah tan jaata hai, avani uske tambu jaise Lund ko pant ke upar se dekh leti hai aur man mein sochti hai kahin usne kisi galat aadmi ko toh nahi baitha liya, lekin fir woh apne man ko samjhate huye-
Avani(man mein): main bhi kitni pagal hun mujhe safety pin lagana chahiye tha....
Aur fir woh apne pallu se apni cleavage dhak leti hai
Raamu uss wakt toh kuch nhi bolta hai, Lekin uske dimaag mein ab avani ke liye tharak paida ho gyi thi
Bus fir se chalu Hui toh dono seat par hi baithe they
Avani Raamu se puchhti hai
Avani- Waise raamu ji aap Bangluru mein kuch kaam krte ho kya??
Ramu- (Avani ki taraf dekhkar bolta hai) u memsaab hum yahan pey ek
Seth ke anaaz ke godaam pey ka kaam karta hun
Avani- Aare aap ko to bahut mehnat karni padti hogi na?
Raamu- Haan memsaab u baat toh hai, kaam naahi karenge toh kharacha kaise chalega
Avani- Han baat toh sahi hai aapki
Ab raamu kuchh yahan wahan dekhne lagta hai, toh avani samajh jaati hai ki raamu ko nind aa rhi hai
Avani-Aapko nind aa rhi hai raamu ji aap yahan so jaiye
Raamu- memsaab aap so jaiye, waise bhi aap jaisi khubsurat aurat ne hum jaisan badsurat aadmi ko apni seat par baithne diya ee(ई) kaa kam hai
Avani (mazakiya andaaz mein)- aisa kyun bol rhe hain aap ramu ji, aap toh itne handsome dikhte ho ki koi bhi ladki aapke pyaar mein pad jaaye..aur fir halki si has deti hai "hehe"
Ramu (dukhi man se)- rehne dijiye memsaab aap humaara jhutha taarif kar rhin hain
Avani- raamu ji aapko kya ho gya hai, achanak itna sad kyun
Raamu- ek aap hain..aur ek humaari lugai thi,
Jo humka Roz badsurat bolti thi, lekin jab Humka pata chala ki uska koi Ashiq hai tab tak woh ghar se saara rupiya Paisa lekar apne Ashiq ke sath bhag gayi
Avani ko raamu par Daya aa jaati hai, aur woh ramu ko ek dost ki tarah bolti hai... Chinta mat kijiye raamuji ab main hun na aapke sath, aap tension mat lijiye, main ab se aapka khayal rakh diya karungi aur aapko Jo kuchh bhi chahiye aap bin Sharmye mang liya kijiye
Raamu gardan nichee karke muskura deta hai.
Aur kuchh der baad avni se puchta hi
Ramu- Memsaab kuch bhi mang skte hn kaa
Avani-Haan ramuji, maangne mein kya burai hai bataiye
Ramu- aur agar aapne mana kar diya toh...
Avani bina kuch soche bol deti hai...are ramuji maangne mein kya burai hai aap mangiye na
Ramu(dukhi sa muh banakar)- nahi memsaab rehne dijiye aap nahi dengi
Avani ramu ko fir se udass nahi dekhna chahti thi toh usne bina soche samjhe bol diya
Avani- Thik hai raamuji aap mangiye na, main mana nahi karoongi
Ramu ko toh isi mauke ka intezar tha toh usne fir se dukhi chehre se puchha
Ramu- ka aap humari lugaai banogi
Avani ramu ko ektak dekhti rehti hai jaise usko sanp sungh gya ho
Ramu-bola tha na humne memsaab ki ap mana kar dengi, hum badsurat ki lugaai koi nahi ban sakta hai
Avani ko ramu par daya aa jati hai aur woh bolti hai...lekin raamuji meri toh shadi ho chuki hai fir main aapse shadi kaise kar sakti hun aur apna mangalsutra dikhaati hai,
Raamu bolta hai... memsaab aapka humse shadi thodi karni hai bas humri lugaai banne ka natak karna hai
To be continued....
Hi, I'm going to start a Hindi story of a housewife Avani.
Title: Avani's Journey to the North
Avani ke baare mein kuch basic jaankaari-
·Avani ek 28 saal ki aurat hai, jiske pati ka naam Raaj hai aur woh mnc mein kaam krta hai...jiske karan uski life kaafi busy rehti hai, abhi tk avani ke koi aulaad nhi hui
· Avani bangluru mein rehti hai
·
Woh apne mayke jaane ke liye nikli hai. Is safar/maayke mein uska kaise-kaise logon se samna hota hai, yahi kahani mein jaanenge.
Raat ke kareeb 2 baje the. Avani der raat office se wapas aayi thi, jabki Raj pehle hi ghar aa chuka tha. Jaise hi Avani ghar aayi, Raj ne pucha:
Raj: Avani, tumhe aane mein itni der kyun ho gayi?
Avani: Mat pucho Raj, maine aaj office se resign kar diya hai.
Raj (hairani se): Kya? Par tumhe toh yeh job bohot pasand thi, fir resign kyun kiya?
Avani: Raj, maine bataya toh tha na, mummy ne bulaya hai. Ek hafte baad chacha ke bete ki shaadi hai, toh mummy ke saath jaana hai. Office se chhutti nahi mil rahi thi, isliye resign kar diya.
Raj: Fir v tumhe job nhi chhodni thi avani..
Avani gusse se Raaz ko dekhti ha!!
Raj: Achha thik hai, toh shaadi kab hai aur tumhe kab nikalna hai?
Avani: 23 July ko shaadi hai, toh mujhe kal shaam ko hi nikalna padega.
Raj: Thik hai meri jaan, ab tum aaraam kar lo, Kal shaam ko safar par bhi toh nikalna hai.
Itna kehkar Raj bedroom mein chala jaata hai aur Avani fresh hone ke liye bathroom chali jaati hai.
Raat ko der se sone ke baad Avani ki aankh subah 10:30 baje khulti hai. Usne dekha ki Raj office ja chuka tha. Use pata tha Raj ne kuch na kuch nashte mein bana liya hoga, isliye woh bed se uthkar apne subah ke kaam karne lagti hai.
Dopahar ke kareeb 2:40 baje Avani ke phone ki ghanti bajti hai. Us waqt woh living room mein baithkar TV dekh rahi thi. Usne jaldi se phone uthaya.
Avani: "Hello Raj!"
Raj: "Hello Avani, mujhe aaj office se thoda late ho jaayega. Tum ek kaam karna, Kempegowda bus station pohonch jaana. Wahan Anish milega, woh tumhe bus mein bitha dega. Aur haan, maine AC sleeper bus book kar di hai, aaraam se jaana."
Avani: "Thik hai Raj, maine tumhare liye dinner bana diya hai. Office se aakar kha lena aur meri chinta mat karna. Main bus station pohonch kar tumhe call kar lungi."
Itna kehkar Avani phone rakh deti hai aur bag pack karne lagti hai.
Avani ne blue georgette ki saree pehni thi aur uske saath sleeveless white blouse. Woh hamesha saree hi pehenti thi, kabhi-kabhi salwar-kameez bhi pehen leti thi. Saree woh aksar nabhi ke neeche pehenti thi, jisse woh aur zyada attractive lage.
Jaise hi Avani bus station pahunchti hai, log use ghur-ghur kar dekhne lagte hain. Kuch auratein bhi hairani se dekh rahi thi, jaise soch rahi ho ki kaun itni khuli dress mein ghoomta hai. Lekin Avani ko in sab baaton se koi farq nahi padta. Woh puri confidence ke saath chalti rahi. Tabhi usne dekha ki Anish haath hila kar use bula raha tha.
Jaise hi Anish ne avani ko dekha, toh woh avani ki cleavage ko dekhta hi reh gya
Avani ne Anish ko uski chuchi dekhte huye dekh liya aur turant apni saari ke pallu se apni cleavage dhak leti hai aur boli... Anish kaha khoye ho??
Anish ghabrahat mein bolta hai..
Anish: Namaste bhabhi, yeh aapki bus hai. Aaiye, main aapka samaan bus mein rakh deta hoon. Aap aaraam se baith jaiye.
Avani: Namaste Anish, yeh bag main apne saath hi rakhungi. Ismein zaruri samaan hai.
Anish: Thik hai bhabhi.
Itna kehkar Anish, Avani ko uski seat par bitha deta hai aur uska samaan rakhkar bus se utar jaata hai.
Halaki avani ko apne chuchiyon par is prakar Anish ka ghurna bura nhi laga tha woh jaanti thi usko dekhkar koi bhi mard aise hi krta, kyunki uske sath aisa pehli baar nhi hua tha use kaafi mardon ne aise ankho se compliment diya hai
Bus chal padti hai...
Bus ke andar chocolate color ke parde lage hue the aur kaafi jagah bhi thi. Avani apni seat par aaraam se let jaati hai. Kuch der baad bus chal padti hai.
---
Karib raat ke 12 baj rhe they. bus apni dheemi raftaar se sadak par daud rhi thi. bus ke andar halki-fulki roshni thi, jo kabhi kabhi jhilmilati aur jyadatar yaatri apni seat pr Chadar taan kar so chuke they. Bus ke engine ki dheemi aawaz aur Andheri raat ki ek khamoshi si thi.
Avani adhi nind mein thi jb usse apne paas khade kisi ka ehsaas hua, usne light jala kr dekha toh ek dubla-patla 30-35 saal ka aadmi khada tha neeli shirt aur white pajama jaisa budde log pehente hain aur woh apne muh mein gutka chawa rha tha, jo uske hoton par chipka hua tha.
Avani use dekhkar chauk jaati hai, lekin fir avani ne use gusse se kaha..
Avani- aap kaun ho ?? Aur itni raat ko meri seat pr kya kr rhe ho
Woh aadmi apna naam Raamu batata hai aur ek madad bhari aawaz mein kehta hai
Raamu : memsaab, humka gorakhpur up Jaana hai aur humri bus chhut gyi, toh hum iss bus mein chupke se Chad gya tha, kyunki raat bohot ho gyi thi aur E bus v gorakhpur jaa rhi thi, toh humka bebasi mein yahi ek raasta dikhai diya
Avani-yeh toh galat baat hai na
Raamu-(udaas chehra krte hue)haa memsaab par Humka aur kauno raasta dikha hi nhi, isiliye aa gya
Avani ko ab uss par Daya aa gyi kyunki woh bohot dayalu swabhav ki hai...
Avani man mein sochti hui: Agar maine ise bitha liya aur yeh koi chhor ya badmash hua toh...Nahi Nahi main ise nahi bitha skti lekin dekhne se chhor toh nhi lag rha
Avani kuchh sochti hai...
Fir Avani halki si muskurate hue boli, thik hai raamu-ji aap yahan baith jayiye, kaafi jagah hai yahan
Raamu-thankuu memsaab thanku
Ab kuch der tak dono baithe rehte hn, aur thodi der baad avani raamu se puchhti hai
Avani- aap gorakhpur mein kahan rehte hain, raamu ji ??
Raamu- memsaab hum bilaspur se hun
Avani bilaspur naam sunte hi, aankhe badi karke kehti hai....
Areee sachhh mein!!! main bhi ratnapur jaa rhi hun.
Itna sunkar raamu bhi muskurate hue bolta hai aare wah memsaab aapka aur humaare gaw ka bazar toh ek hi hai
Avani- Haan raamu ji (muskurate hue)
Yeh sb ho hi rha tha, ki achanak bus jhatke se rukti hai
Aur iss Achanak bus ke jhatke se Anita ka pallu thoda, sarak jata hai aur uski cleavage Puri dikne lagti hai jo pallu se dhaki hui thi abhi tak.
Raamu light ki roshni mein itni Gori cleavage dekhkar dang reh gya, usne aajtak aisi Ameer aurat ki cleavage toh kya dekhi hogi, usske saath baitha tk nhi hoga.
Ab raamu ka Lund harkat krne lgta hai aur uski pant mein hi lumba tambu ki tarah tan jaata hai, avani uske tambu jaise Lund ko pant ke upar se dekh leti hai aur man mein sochti hai kahin usne kisi galat aadmi ko toh nahi baitha liya, lekin fir woh apne man ko samjhate huye-
Avani(man mein): main bhi kitni pagal hun mujhe safety pin lagana chahiye tha....
Aur fir woh apne pallu se apni cleavage dhak leti hai
Raamu uss wakt toh kuch nhi bolta hai, Lekin uske dimaag mein ab avani ke liye tharak paida ho gyi thi
Bus fir se chalu Hui toh dono seat par hi baithe they
Avani Raamu se puchhti hai
Avani- Waise raamu ji aap Bangluru mein kuch kaam krte ho kya??
Ramu- (Avani ki taraf dekhkar bolta hai) u memsaab hum yahan pey ek
Seth ke anaaz ke godaam pey ka kaam karta hun
Avani- Aare aap ko to bahut mehnat karni padti hogi na?
Raamu- Haan memsaab u baat toh hai, kaam naahi karenge toh kharacha kaise chalega
Avani- Han baat toh sahi hai aapki
Ab raamu kuchh yahan wahan dekhne lagta hai, toh avani samajh jaati hai ki raamu ko nind aa rhi hai
Avani-Aapko nind aa rhi hai raamu ji aap yahan so jaiye
Raamu- memsaab aap so jaiye, waise bhi aap jaisi khubsurat aurat ne hum jaisan badsurat aadmi ko apni seat par baithne diya ee(ई) kaa kam hai
Avani (mazakiya andaaz mein)- aisa kyun bol rhe hain aap ramu ji, aap toh itne handsome dikhte ho ki koi bhi ladki aapke pyaar mein pad jaaye..aur fir halki si has deti hai "hehe"
Ramu (dukhi man se)- rehne dijiye memsaab aap humaara jhutha taarif kar rhin hain
Avani- raamu ji aapko kya ho gya hai, achanak itna sad kyun
Raamu- ek aap hain..aur ek humaari lugai thi,
Jo humka Roz badsurat bolti thi, lekin jab Humka pata chala ki uska koi Ashiq hai tab tak woh ghar se saara rupiya Paisa lekar apne Ashiq ke sath bhag gayi
Avani ko raamu par Daya aa jaati hai, aur woh ramu ko ek dost ki tarah bolti hai... Chinta mat kijiye raamuji ab main hun na aapke sath, aap tension mat lijiye, main ab se aapka khayal rakh diya karungi aur aapko Jo kuchh bhi chahiye aap bin Sharmye mang liya kijiye
Raamu gardan nichee karke muskura deta hai.
Aur kuchh der baad avni se puchta hi
Ramu- Memsaab kuch bhi mang skte hn kaa
Avani-Haan ramuji, maangne mein kya burai hai bataiye
Ramu- aur agar aapne mana kar diya toh...
Avani bina kuch soche bol deti hai...are ramuji maangne mein kya burai hai aap mangiye na
Ramu(dukhi sa muh banakar)- nahi memsaab rehne dijiye aap nahi dengi
Avani ramu ko fir se udass nahi dekhna chahti thi toh usne bina soche samjhe bol diya
Avani- Thik hai raamuji aap mangiye na, main mana nahi karoongi
Ramu ko toh isi mauke ka intezar tha toh usne fir se dukhi chehre se puchha
Ramu- ka aap humari lugaai banogi
Avani ramu ko ektak dekhti rehti hai jaise usko sanp sungh gya ho
Ramu-bola tha na humne memsaab ki ap mana kar dengi, hum badsurat ki lugaai koi nahi ban sakta hai
Avani ko ramu par daya aa jati hai aur woh bolti hai...lekin raamuji meri toh shadi ho chuki hai fir main aapse shadi kaise kar sakti hun aur apna mangalsutra dikhaati hai,
Raamu bolta hai... memsaab aapka humse shadi thodi karni hai bas humri lugaai banne ka natak karna hai
To be continued....