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Thanks everyone… please expect a delay in the next update due to the winter holidays.
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Sorry I have been on holidays and spending time with family and various things going on. I disagree on the point about Kriti’s story being a time waster for me. I liked writing that a lot.
I will look to post updates after the new year. I am currently not able to write the story both from a time perspective and thought perspective.
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Hi ThodaNaughty... thank you for your comments... I really like reading and listening to feedback. It helps me a lot.
Two things I did want to clarify.
One, when I first started writing this story, I was still experimenting and learning how to write a good story. I made a lot of mistakes and learnt, and if I could re-write the story now, I would change some things, especially the first part of the story and cutting out some pieces or changing certain things. I have also made some more mistakes more recently that are troubling me, but I will try to figure those out. That is probably the drawback of writing and posting a story in episodic format, where you cannot go back and fix things if something comes to your mind later.
Second, sorry if I was unable to convey this properly, but there definitely has been some time that passed in the village before Supriya and Iqbal got close. Atleast 6 months in mind, maybe slightly longer. I should have better expressed this in the story, and that will fall into those type of things that I wish I could go back and change.
But after all of those changes, I would probably still be here where we are in the story. With some things expressed better and somethings cut out.
With that said, I think we are getting towards the end of this particular story, not immediately, but definitely its nearer that people may think. Like in the last hour of a 3 hour movie.
I would like to continue to write more stories about some of the characters that we met during the journey and there are atleast 2 distinct stories that have already formed in my head with lesser used characters (they are not who you would think they are). Even though I consciously started writing this story as a sex story, I discovered while writing this story that I enjoyed writing the story element side of it more than the sex scenes. I am still not great at sex scenes.
I would like to write those other stories as stories first where sex happens naturally as part of those stories, rather than sex being the key thing that drives the story. I think they might not be well received here (too boring), but I will see where to post them once I get along with those.
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Thanks Rohan. I totally understand that not many people like my story on this site. Like I said yesterday, I feel I am not that good at writing sex scenes and to be honest that is my least enjoyable part of writing. I would rather enjoy making up thrilling emotional human stories in the future.
I will try to finish this story soon (or get to a point where the possibilities are more open for future). And then try to find a different medium of sharing my stories, maybe alongside here. That would mean scaling back the sex write-up even further, which will obviously not be well received here. And rightly so, people come here to read sex stories, not novels.
And rest assured, no, you did not offend me at all, you are just sharing what’s on your mind and I am being transparent and sharing what’s on my mind. This has been going on in my mind for a while and its also draining for me to try to keep writing where I don’t enjoy it and the readers don’t either (I appreciate lots of people who do love reading this as well). I would rather write something that I would enjoy for people that might also enjoy reading it.
As for this story, I have a broad plot outlined in my mind which I will try to get through in the next 10-12 updates or so, and then leave it open ended to come back to later or for others to take it over their imagination. Somethings got a bit messed up in hindsight but we will see how to best address those, and there maybe minor revisions to some past updates.
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Thank you all for your comments. I wanted to let everyone know that I will be wrapping up this story within the next 3-4 updates. I will leave the story open ended with multiple possibilities and some open plot threads. If it becomes possible in the future, I will look to get back to it later.
If someone is curious I am happy to share in private the open plot ideas that I had in my mind for the future.
And maybe some day I will look to refine the full story again and fix the mistakes I made.
Thank you to everyone that supported me through the last year and kept me going. I will look to thank them again in detail after the last update.
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Sorry to disappoint, but its hard to put in another sex scene as I am looking to close out the story in the next 3 updates and reveal a bunch of emotional secrets. I would have added sex scenes if it made sense, but not going to do it as it doesnt.
After these 3 updates are done… it will open up the story nicely for a lot of different and exciting possibilities for sexual adventures for different characters. I will hopefully come back to it at some point, but not anytime soon.
So final warning, please do not expect any sexual stuff in the next few updates. If you were in it for the story… then yeah hopefully you will like it.
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Salma, Rohan - I will think about it again, but, I am not saying its the end of the story but pausing it at an open ended point to take a bit of break from it and open possibilities for people to imagine. I have thought about what happens next and would eventually like to write it. But I think taking a break for a bit would be helpful for me. I have already noted the reasons for those in the last 3 posts (non updates) so will not repeat.
Meanwhile will look to write other things.
I would also be open to someone else continuing this story and I can share the broad plot points I had in mind. But please don’t turn it in another sex fest where the main character is having sex with everyone.