08-11-2024, 01:09 PM
Guys, I am starting a story and need your comments and suggestions on this
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Descent of Jeevan (Manvika)
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08-11-2024, 01:09 PM
Guys, I am starting a story and need your comments and suggestions on this
Comment reply or suggest
08-11-2024, 10:47 PM
(This post was last modified: 09-11-2024, 09:09 AM by Mf123. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
Manvika - Chapter 01
Jeevan..... I drove the car towards home lost in thoughts and didn't even realise I didn't switch on the AC until my shirt was completely drenched in sweat. It was a hot summer noon and obviously anyone who would get in the car would switch on the AC button as soon as they entered the car. But there is a reason why I didn't think of it. I was baffled in a sea of thoughts and didn't even want to accept that the woman I just saw a while ago was my wife. I stopped the car in the parking area and went inside our house. Once inside I took out the bottle of whiskey and started to sip one after the other rethinking the events that led to this. I blamed myself for being the one to pull things this far. If anyone was the reason for the situation I am in, it definitely is me. I finished almost half the bottle and didn't realise the time when I heard the door here dangling. I know it was my wife Manvika trying to open the door from outside and she didn't know I was home. Usually I would return from the office an hour later after she does. I laid there on the couch as Manvika emerged opening the door and I was terrified looking at Sohail beside her. He immediately took back his hand from her waist looking at me in shock with discomfort. "Hi jeevan, we were out for a client meeting. So I thought of dropping your wife" he smiled very confidently. I hate the way he always uses the word 'your wife' instead of her name referring to Manvika while speaking to me. I think that gives him some kind of wicked satisfaction. Manvika had an angry look on her face looking at the messed up table in front of me. I just lowered my head in shame when Sohail took the liberty of shaking hands with Manvika taking enough time to press her hands. I prayed in my mind not to let the situation go worse than this, when Sohail dared to move his head towards Manvika to kiss her good bye. Manvika moved away her head not to let him kiss her and almost pushed him out of the door playfully. Once Sohail is gone and the door is closed Manvika turned towards me and folding her hands ordered "Clean up the table" I looked up to look at her cover in a long coat. 'Who even wears a coat on this hot summer day?' I asked myself but I know the answer. I know what she was wearing underneath the coat. I saw her in a halter top just covering her boobs and a short mini skirt holding hands with Sohail exiting from a five star restaurant a few hours ago. I wondered where she might have changed the mini skirt to leggings although she might have been hiding the halter top under the coat. The only relief for me was, at least she kept my dignity in the society by covering herself while coming home. Manvika went straight into the bedroom and laid on the bed checking her phone while I changed up and finished dinner. She came and silently finished her dinner, then went back to bed with her phone again in her hand. When I got on the bed, she straight away jumped on me and undressed herself showing off her goddess beauty figure feasting my eyes. I quickly pulled down my shorts and let my hands all over her body. She raised herself and placed her pussy on top of my face asking me to tongue-fuck her. When my fingers reached her pussy, my heart skipped at the thought of finding Sohail's cum dripping out of her pussy. I opened her pussy lips wide with my fingers deep and felt relieved looking only the wetness of her juices. I put my tongue out and started to explore her wet pussy licking her while my hands reached to grab her boobs. "Say it" she demanded, lost in pleasure with her eyes closed. I know exactly what she wanted me to say but I don't want to. "Come on, say it" she ordered again" and I gathered some courage to put the words. "You might have had a nice lunch with Sohail" I said. "Ahh yess, we had a good time... I mean the lunch was great" she responded. I kept fondling her boobs hard and licking her pussy in between and said "I think you both went to lunch together in car and you both had lunch in private together" "Ohhh... ahhhh...yessss. We went in his BMW and it was a great ride. Then ahhh.... yessss... We get lunch in private. There were not much people at the restaurant" she said moaning in between. I hate talking about this guy when we have sex but this all was started by me and I can't stop it now and she enjoys the talk whenever we are having sex. She is not even cumming these days without the talk. "I believe he might have kept you fully satisfied.... I mean with the lunch" I said and she got down from my face and started to ride my cock. "Yessss, he was nice and kept me full but not completely" she said still riding on my cock and finally climaxed resting on top of me. Then she rolled to my side as I got on top of her and after a few thrusts, came in her pussy. She kept silent all the while and pushed me aside to sleep to her side facing hee back to me. I cursed myself for putting us into this situation. There was a time when my shy conservative wife who would wear only sarees and had been a faithful loyal wife. I just wanted her to explore the world not to be so naive and sent her to work. It all changed there when she was selected for job after the interview and got recruited directly under Sohail. To this day I am not sure how far she has gone with this guy. Whenever I tried to bring up the topic, she would just say "I too have a life and I want to live it". When I asked about Sohail, she would just reply that he is a good colleague and friend in office and not anything more than that. I was afraid if I push her more, she would not hesitate to leave me and go on with her life on her own. I love her a lot and can't live without her. 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08-11-2024, 11:04 PM
Very interesting plot
09-11-2024, 10:54 AM
Good start
12-11-2024, 07:53 PM
Manvika - Chapter 02
I got up to the continuous ringing of Manvika's phone on the bedside table. I opened my eyes to hear the noise of water as Manvi is in the shower. I took her phone to keep in silent mode and saw the call was from Sohail. The call ended and there were continuous WhatsApp messages popping up on the screen. When I tried to open the phone, I realised the chat was locked. I couldn't ask Manvi to unlock it as she would create a scene that I was doubting her. The notifications didn't stop and kept on coming. I took the phone to the bathroom door and tapped on the door. "Manvi, you have a call and messages" I shouted standing at the door. "Who is it?" "I think it's Sohail" I replied as a slight shiver unknowingly escaped in my voice. "Give me the phone" she said protruding her hand out of the door opening it slightly. My hands were shaking as I handed the phone to her. I tried to hear if she had made a call to him, but I couldn't hear anything. But I heard her voice calling me and the next words from her mouth shocked me. "Jeevan, can you hand me the bluetooth headset on the table" she asked in a very confident voice. "What? But why now?" I dared to ask. "There is an online training session from the client I need to attend and it's urgent. I totally forgot about the meeting invite. It is a mandatory session from the client. I'll hear it here itself" she said in a bit furious tone. I know she was lying but I can't push her more into details. So I gave her the headset and waited outside the door until she came after half an hour out of the bathroom. She came out wearing a towel, threw the heaset aside and keeping the phone unlocked went to get dressed. I took the chance and immediately grabbed her phone to check it out. As I half expected, she had deleted all the chat and call history from Sohail on WhatsApp. She got ready and was about to leave, she turned to me asked "Are you not going to office today?" "No, I informed the office today I'll take leave for the day" "Okay" she said simply shrugging her shoulders and left closing the door. After she left I sat on the couch thinking about how things used to be a few months ago. Manvika....... (Few months ago....) We stepped into a new flat owned by us (Jeevan and myself) as a young couple just married. I was brought up in a very conservative family and got married to Jeevan, my loving husband as a fully planned arranged marriage. I was very shy and hesitant just not even to talk, but to look at other boys until my marriage. There were a lot of love proposals before my marriage but I never even dared to care about such things. I was a virgin until our honeymoon trip. We had a nice honeymoon trip to Goa but Jeevan was not happy with me wearing fully covered chudidars and sarees even to such a place. Our sex life was great too for the first few months, until Jeevan wants much more than normal sex. He started to show me porn to encourage me for oral and anal sex which I was completely reluctant to. He tried to persuade me a lot of times but I simply said no. Things were going normal as Jeevan was going to office and me as a normal housewife would take care of the things at home until one night Jeevan started a conversation. "Maybe you should look for job. I know you are getting bored at home all day and I don't want you to be just a hom maker. I want you to explore the outside world" "I don't know if I could do that. I am just happy this way" I replied. "No Manvi, that's a big world outside and you will get to learn a lot of things out there. You are well educated and will easily get a job. I spoke to my manager and tried to get you into our company. Unfortunately we are not recruiting now but a friend of my boss had a start-up company that may hire you" he said pushing me to go for it. "No jeevan. I am not sure about this" "Nothing doing. You just go and attend the interview first. We will decide later about joining" he said. I went for the interview next day and aa the reference was strong enough, I got recruited with no questions asked. I tried not to join but Jeevan persuaded me to atleast go to work for a month and we can think of it later. On the first day of my job, I was sitting in the lobby and I was someone approaching me. "You must be Manvika" he said. "Yes, I am... Sir" I said a little bit tensed. "Oh, no formalities please, this is Sohail, your team lead" he extended his hand for a shake. It was the first time I saw Sohail. He is a very young, charming guy with athletic figure and he looked so confident. As I raised my hand, ge confidently grabbed for handshake and that touch somehow made my body quiver. Soon he introduced me to the rest of the team and I tried to blend in quickly. Few weeks passed and slowly I got into rythm with the office culture. Since that was a start-up, there used to be a lot of work especially on the weekends. But Sohail never pressured me to stay after office hours. Slowly I started to feel comfortable around him and the hand shakes have become a routine. Things were going well until one day the clients were visiting the office as we have missed the deadline and there is still some pending work. Unlucky for us, there were few employees of our team on leave today week and the load just got up on us. I was busy at my desk when Sohail came and said "It's already 6.30, you better leave Manvika" he said. "No problem Sohail. I'll close this ticket and leave" I firmly said. I sat there working and didn't even look at the phone. When the work was done and I looked around, there were no one in the office. I check the phone on horror and noticed it was 10.40pm and 7 missed calls from Jeeavan. I immediately called Jeevan but he didn't pick up and I messaged him to come to office to pick me up. 'Oh my god ' I thought to myself. It was then Sohail came near me with a cup of coffee. "Oh, seems like you are done" he said. "Yes, but you didn't leave" I asked. "How can I leave with you in office. You are part of my team and I have your responsibility on me" he said and I was pleased by his words. I hurriedly sipped the coffee and we both entered the lift. Once out of the lift, Sohail asked "Do you have your vehicle?" " No, I messaged my husband to come or I'll take a cab" "That's too risky to take cab at this time. I can drop you at home if required" Sohail offered. "No problem, thanks" I smiled and left. I stood outside the office and kept on ringing Jeevan but in despair. There stopped a cab in front of me and I was about to step in, I sensed the pungent smell of alcohol inside. Surely the driver is fully drunk and I don't want to take the risk. "Kya hua madam ji, aa jao. Hum aapko jaldi ghat bhej denge" the driver said and I was terrified looking at him not at all feeling safe I got down immediately but the cab didn't leave. He started to make noises and I i felt horrified. It was then I saw someone approaching me and felt relieved looking at his face. It was Sohail. " Is everything ok, Manvika" he asked ina concerning tone. I just looked at him and soon tears started to come out of my eyes. He looked into the cab and said "Kya bhai, kya hua. Gaadi theek hain na. Nikal jao yahaan se" he scared off the cab driver and soon he left. "Don't worry Manvika. I am here, right" he said putting his hand on my arm and I felt safe. "Let me drop you home" he said and I just nodded. We got into the car and Sohail put on some lame jokes just to get me out of tension and I felt relieved after sometime. I messaged Jeevan that I will be home in few minutes. We were just a few blocks away from our home, when Jeevan called "Where are you? Can't you just leave a message if you are late?" He started to shout on the phone. I just didnt say anything. As Sohail stopped the car at our apartment gate, I waved him bye and he extended his hand for shaking to which I responded sharply and wished him good night, shaking his hands and looked to see at Jeevan looking at us curiously from our flat's balcony on the fifth floor. Comment reply or suggest
15-11-2024, 12:27 PM
Very good start. Interesting plot
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