Non-erotic SHUBHAM

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this story writer name is shusam

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Post by shusam on Aug 3, 2018 at 2:53pm


Hello friends

Mei iss site par ek dum New user hu....
Isse phele meina koi story nahi likhi hai but mei bhi apni imaginatory story aap logo ka samna rakhna cahati hu....

Ya story ek dum kalpanik hai aur iska kisi sa bhi koi sambandh nahi hai aur na hi ya kisi aur ki story sa lee gai hai.....

Mei aapko vala nahi kar skta ki roj update aayega par weekly 3-4 update aayega iska bharosa dikha sakta hu aur sath hi ya wada karta hu iss story ko pura jarur krunga agar aap sab ka sath raha to.....

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update 1

Humara . d crore saal phele iska nirman hua,  iss brahamand mei hajaro galaxy  hai jinka baramei hum janta hai aur aaj bhi na jana kitni galaxy hai jinka bara mei hum aaj bhi nahi janta hai.....

Earth humara ek khubsurat sa planet jisma crore tarah ki species (prajati) rahati hai..... Humara planet milky way naam ki galaxy mei aata hai, thik issi ki tarah ek galaxy aur hai jaha jiwan sambhav hai aur vaha hajaro planet hai jisma aaj bhi hmara jaisa na jana kitni tarah ki species hai ya humsa alag bhi.....

Iss dusri galaxy ka name hai small italina cloud.... iss galaxy mei ek planet hai Leharaniya, iss planet ko iss galaxy ka education hub bhi kaha ja sakta hai...... Ya ek chota sa planet hai jaha sabhi dusra planet ka log aakar apni taleem (education) ko pura karta hai.... Ya planet jitna chota hai utna hi khubsurat bhi hai aur iski khubsurti ko char chand lagata hua hai iss planet par bana duniya ka sabsa bada college..... THE college OF MAGICAL AND WEAPONARY ART .....

Jaisa iss college ka name hai usse ya clear hai ki iss college mei alag alag tarah ka weapon aur magic sikhaya jata  hai par sath hi yaha social class jaisa singing, dancing, cooking aur bhi bhut sari alag alag tarah ki education dee jati hai...... Iss college mei padhna ka liya is puri galaxy mei situated sabhi grah ka raajya (country) ka prince aur princess aata hai..... aur saath hi mei yaha unhi rajyo ka bade position ka logo ka bacha bhi padhna aata hai....(essa kaha sakta hai ki  har rajya ka senapati aur mantri aur mage(magician) (jinha raja apna mandal mei jagah deta hai) ka bacha bhi padhna aata hai)......

Issi grah sa suru hoti hai humari story jaha humari kahani ka hero ya devil Shubham rahata hai....

Humara hero aapki aur meri tarah earth par hi born hua hai aur vo bhi humari tarah ek human hai koi allien nahi.... to phir essa kya hua ki humara hero uss planet par pahuch gaya .... [Ek baat mei aap sabko bata du humara planet earth par sa koi bhi vaha padhna nahi jata tha kyunki hum iska bara mei abhi tak janta hi nahi hai]..... iss baat ka javab aapko apna aap mil jayga ki hero vaha kaisa pahucha aur vaha pahuchna ka baad bhi vo uss grah par kaisa survive kar gaya ...... Kya vaha ka environment humara planet ka environment ki tarah hi hai ya alag.... Essa hajaro saval ka javab iss story mei aapko milta rahaega........

[hello friends mera phela update aapko kaafi boring laga ho to uska liya maafi, par story ko aage continue karana ka lya story mei confusion na ho jada iss vajah sa iska plot tayar kara hai.... ho skata hai suru ka kuch updates aapko ekdum upto mark na laga par jaisa jaisa story aage badegi ya kaafi interesting hoti jayegi kyonki isma aapko har tarah ka rang milega.....]

Stay  tunned next update in process......

aapka agar koi sujhav ho iss story ko lekar ya meri writing ko kaisa improve kar sakta hu usko lekar to plz mjhe jarur apna coments dena.....

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update 2


[b]Aaj Shubham phele baar THE college OF MAGICAL AND WEAPONARY ART.... mei enter karna ja raha tha par gate par khade do guard na usko andar jana sa rok diya aur usse bolna laga ulta sidha ......

Guard 1: Oye ladka kaha andar ghusa chala ja raha hai..... tera jaisa ki aukat nahi hai ya iss college mei andar ghusna ki .....

Shubham: Mei yaha padhna ka liya aaya hu aur mujhe uska liya andar jana hai.....

Guard 2: Dekho bhai sunni iski baat ya yaha padhna aaya hai....... sala kya humara mathe par chutiya likha hua hai kya... jo tu huma bewakuf bana kar andar chala jayga ..... Apni aukat dekhi hai tuna, tu yaha ki ek din ki fees bhi nahi bhar sakta hai aur aaya yaha padhna ka liya.....
Tjhe to iss college mei koi saaf safai karna ka liya bhi nahi rakhega aur tu chala yaha padhna.... chal nikal ja tu yaha sa chup chap.....
aur itna kaha kar vo usko vaha sa dhaka dekar dhur gira deta hai, jisse humara hero gir jata hai....

Shubham khada hokar ek baar fir uss college ko dekhta hai aur vaha sa nikalna ka liya picha mudta hai..... Tabhi vaha kissi ki awaj aati hai jo usse hi rok raha tha.....Ya awaaj thi skul ka head principle aachariya Shramesh ki.....
(Yaha ab sa mei aachariya Shramesh ko AS likha karunga.......)
AS ki awaaj sunkar vo dono guard ek dum sidha tainat hokar khade hokar dekhna lagta hai par saath hi man hi man bhagwaan sa prathna bhi kar raha tha ki inki iss harkat ko AS na nahi dekha ho varna aaj inn dono ki remand lagi pakki hai....

AS bhagta hua gate ka bahar nikalta hai aur Shubham ka samna jakar usse kahata hai.....

AS: maaf karna beta..... meri vajah sa tumhara sath essa hua.... meina hi tmhai yaha bulaya tha aur fir bhi inn logo na tmhai kya kya kaha diya......

Shubham: koi baat nahi sir, aapko maafi maangna ki jaruart nahi hai.....aapki vajah sa mei iss college ko itna pass sa dekh saka yahi bhut hai mera liya.... vasa bhi inhona jo kaha vo galat thodi hai meri itni aukat nahi hai ki mei yaha padh saku......

AS: nahi beta aisa mat socho...... Tum aaj sa yahi par padhoga aur sirf kuch din nahi bulki jab tak tumhari padhai ka pura samay pura nahi ho jata ya phir tum khud nahi chod kar jana cahaoga tab tak tum issi college mei raha kar padhoga, jaisa baaki sabhi padhta hai..... vasa bhi jo tumna mera liya kara hai uska badla mei tmhara liya itna to kar hi sakta hu....

itna bolkar vo Shubham ko apna saath college ka andar chalna ka liya bolta hai aur aage ki taraf bad kar gate ka pass pahuch jata hai....jaha abhi bhi dono guard ek dum tainat khada tha.... AS unka pass pahuch kar dono ek ek khich kar thapad lagata hai..... AS ka thapad itna teej tha ki uski awaaj 500 meter dhur khada insaan ko bhi aram sa sunai de sakti thi aur uss thapad ki force itni thi ki dono guard ka muh sa khoon nikalna laga tha aur vo dono jamin par pada dhul chat raha tha.... jaata jaata AS unko bolkar gaye tum dono aaj ki duty puri karka shyam ko aakar milna mjhc mera office mei.....
Itna bolkar AS aage nikal gaye aur unka picha picha chal raha tha Shubham jo apna aap sa hi baat kar raha tha ....

Shubham (man mei): baap re ya insan hai ya haiwan kitna jor sa mara hai dono ko agar galti sa kabhi ya mjhe padh gaya tha to meri to batisi hi hil jaygi.....bhai jara sambhal kar rahna hoga aur koi galat kaam nahi karna hoga varna ya to apni wat laga dega....

Abhi humara hera apni hi soch mei ghum hokar aage aage chala ja raha tha bina samna dekha.... ki vo jakar sidha takra gaya AS sa... AS sa takrana ka baad ek dum sa hi vo vapas duniya mei aa gaya aur ek dum had bada kar unsa dhur ho kar khada ho jata hai

AS sa takrana ki vajah sa AS uski tarah dekhta hai aur uski halat dekh kar unko hasi aa jati hai aur vo usko apna pass bulata hai aur bade pyar sa muskura kar apni jeeb sa ek paper nikalta hai aur usko Shubham ko deta hua ek building ki taraf ishara karta hai aur usko kahata hai... Ya parchi lekar tum uss building ki tarah jao aur vaha par gate par ek guard milega usko jakar ya parchi de dena, vo tumhai vaha aage ka rasta batayaga jaha tum miloga Professor Mariana sa.... Itna kaha kar vo ek bar fir apni pocket mei haath dalta hai par iss bar dusri taraf ki aur uss mei sa paper bahar nikal kar usse deta hai aur kahata hai ya paper tm professor ko de dena baaki baat vo tmhai samjha degi.....

Itna kaha kar vo khud vaha sa chale jata hai... Shubham unka dhur jana ka baad ek lambi saas leta hai aur bolta hai bach gaya varna aaj phele din hi mjhe prasad mil jata... bhai isse bach kar hi rahana hoga.... fir bolta hai par ya bade ajeeb insan hai... mjhe bola us tarah jana ko aur khud hi chale gaye... chalo apna kya jata hai apan bhi chalta hai.....

Shubham abhi thoda aage hi bada tha ki usse ek talab dikhta hai..... jo ki bhut bada to nahi tha par kaafi acha tha aur usma tarah tarah rang biranga phool laga hua tha jiski vajah sa vo talab aur bhi jada khubsurat aur man ko mooohhhh lena vala lag raha tha.... Talab ki dusri tarah thi vo building jaha Shubham ko jana tha...iss talab ko paar karna ka liya iss par ek chota sa pull bana hua tha..... Shubham talab ki sunderta mei kho gaya tha aur bina samna dekha uss pull par chal raha tha... uska pura dhyan talab ki sunderta ko niharna mei hi laga hua tha.... Vo chalta hua pull ka ek sira sa dusri tarah pahuch gaya tha aur bus usse utarna hi vala tha ki vo samna sa aa raha ek student sa takra jata hai.....

Jisse Shubham abhi takraya tha uska naam hai Kairo, ya bhai sahab yaha ka dusra sabsa bada rajya ka raja ka beta hai..... bole to ya prince of Zamata hai... inn mahanubhav ka bara mei thoda aapko bata deta hai kyunki inka iss story mei aage bhut baar role aata jata rahaga.....
Prince of Zamata (Kairo) ki umar 15 saal ki hai aur ya dikhna mei kaafi handsome hai.... ya ek dum gora chita to hai hi sath sath inki height karib 5ft. 10" ki hogi..... inki body ek dum gym tonned hai..... Ya apna pita aur maa ka bhut hi jada dulara hai.. jaisa ki inka rajya ka bara mei meina upar bataya ki ya dusra sabsa bada rajya hai, jiska chalta inma kuch adhik hi ghamand hai.... Ya apna samna kisi ko bhi kuch bhi nahi samajhta hai.... Yaha par bhi koi bhi rajya ka prince inka samna apana aapko kuch nahi samajhta hai....Ya yaha par weaponary aur magical art dono sikhna aaye hai......

Chaliya dosto vapas story par aata hai.....

Jaiska ki meina bola Shubham Kairo sa takrata hai.... Jisse humara hero bhaisahab ka dhyan vapas sa pull par aata hai aur vo samna dekhta hai to unko samna aag babula hua prince dikhta hai..... Kairo bhi apna aapko vapas santulit karka samna dekhta hai ki kiski itni himat ho gai jo vo mjhc takra gaya.... jab vo samna dekhta hai to uska gussa aur bad jata..... par Shubham usko sorry kaha kar vaha sa aage nikalna lagta hai..... Ya dekh kar Prince ko ya sab apni bejati sa saman lagti hai aur vo gussa mei aakar, Picha sa dhaka dekar usko gira deta hai.....

Abhi yaha ya sab hua hi tha ki itni der mei Prince ka pass dusra rajya ka unka chamcha prince aur unhi ka rajya ka pramukh logo ka bacha aakar unko ghar leta hai aur prince of zamata ko puchta hai, Kya hua prince aap itna gussa mei kyu hai....

Kairo: Ya fatichar aakar hmsa takra gaya aur uska baad humsa maafi maangna ki jagah bus aaga nikal raha tha... Itna kaha kar vo ek bar fir sa vapas khada hota hua Shubham ka pair par mar ka usko nicha gira deta hai....Iss bar Kairo ka pair sa marna ki vajah sa Shubham ka ghutna mei lag jati hai jiska chalta uski dard ki vajah sa karah nikal jati hai..... Jisse sun kar vo sab hasna lagta hai.... par kissi tarah Shubham Khud ko sambhal kar vapas Khada hota hai aur Prince ki taraf ghum kar unsa maafi maangta ek bar fir sa usse phele beed mei sa koi bolta hai....

Awaj: Ary iss fatichar ka kapda to dekho isko dekh kar lagta hai iska rajya mei sab log bikhari hi hai... Ya baat sunkar sabhi log hasna lagta hai....

Tabhi vaha dusri awaj aati hai...

Awaj 2: Ary yr ya kisi rajya ka raja ka beta nahi hai ya to sahi mei ek bhikari hai.... Isse meina abhi thoda din phele vo college sa bahar nikal kar jo stall hai na vaha dekha tha.... ya vaha par jhuta bartan saaf kar raha tha.....
jab iska malik na isse pucha ki iska mata pita kun hai to kahata hai..... Mjhe nahi pata mera mata pita kun hai.... Iss sale ki to itni aukat bhi nahi hai ki ya do waqt ka khana kha saka aur chala aaya yaha....

Ya baat sunkar Kairo ko ek baar fir gussa aa jata hai aur vo gussa mei hi usse ek gandi nali ka kida kaha deta hai..... Jisse sunkar Shubham ki aankho mei do bund aaso aa jata hai...... Abhi Kairo itna mei hi shant nahi hota hai aur usko marna ka liya apna haath utha hai......


Par tabhi vaha ek kadak awaj gunjti hai....jisse sunkar vaha khada sabhi logo ka face par jo hasi thi vo ek dum gayab ho jati hai.... ya awaj ek dum bhut tej thi jiski vajah sa ya awaj vaha ka pura shant mahol mei fail gayi...... Ruk jao Kairo Varna anjam bhut bura hoga....

Jiss insan ki ya awaj thi vo chal kar aage aata hai aur uss circle mei aakar Shubham ka pass aakar khada ho jata hai..... YA awaj thi Professor Mariana ki...... Jiiiii ha dosto vahi Professor jisse humara hero ko milna tha..... Mariana ko dekh kar vaha khada sabhi logo ki jaan halak mei aa kar atak gai kyunki Professor ka bara mei ya baat bhut mashur thi ki ya kisi bhi insaan sa nahi darti thi cahaya vo AS ho ya fir kissi rajya ka raja.....

Kairo: professor aap iss matter mei bich mei mat aao.... Ya humara college mei ghusna ki koshish kar raha hai.... Ya ek chor hai....
Kairo ki baat sun kar professor ka cehara ka rang aur laal ho jata hai..... Unka gussa bhut bad jata hai par vo kissi tarah khudko shant karka bolti hai.....

Mariana: Kairo tmhai kaisa pata ya chor hai aur ya yaha ghuspait kar raha hai......

Mariana ki baat sunkar Kairo ek dum chup ho jata hai kyunki uska pass bolna ko kuch nahi hota hai aur vo aur koi jhut nahi bolna cahata hai, kyunki professor ko jhuth sa sakt nafrat hai aur vo jhuth bolna vala ko essa punish karti hai ki usski ruk tak jhuth bolna sa phele dar jaye..... Ek baar fir Mariana ki awaj aati hai aur vo bolti hai..... Tum sa bol raha tha na ki yaha vaha kaam karta hai....To kya galat karta hai.... khud mehnat karka kamata hai aur apna pait bharta hai, kissi ka samna haath jod kar bhik to nahi mangta hai na...... Tum sabki tarah apna maa baap ka samna haath to nahi felata hai na.... Aur tm do kodi ka prince hota kun ho ya Bolna vala ki ya gandi nali ka khida hai...... Tum sab kis nali ka kida ho ya baat tm khud nahi janta aur chale aaye yaha dusro ko bolna..... Mariana ki ya baat sun kar Kairo apna aapa kho deta hai aur vo Mariana ka upar talwar nikal kar taan deta hai.....

Mariana Kairo ki essi harkat dekh kar ek dum muskura jati hai aur bolti hai sahi baat sun ka lag gai mirchi Kairo...... aur itna bolna ka sath hi vo Kairo ka hath par ek chop marti hai jisse Kairo ka hath sa Talwar Putti jati hai, aur Kairo ka hath par jaha lagi thi vaha ek bada sa nila nishan ban jata hai aur usko bhut dard hota hai.... Mariana Kairo ko bolti hai abhi tum bacha ko phele talwar pakadna sikhlo fir mera upar talwar tanana ki galti karna.....

Itna kaha kar vo unsabko vaha sa jana ka liya kahati hai, uska bolta hi sara log ek second ka andar vaha sa bhaag jata hai.....Fir vo Shubham ki taraf mudkar uski taraf dekh kar usko bolti hai.... Tum kun ho aur yaha kya kar raha ho.... Kya tmhai pata nahi hai yaha kissi bahar vala ka aana mana hai.....?

Shubham: Mariana ki aawaj sa aur yaha jo hua usko dekh kar phele hi dar gaya tha aur achanak usse pucha gaye saval sa vo aur dar gaya aur haklata hua bolna lga ....
Mera na na na na na name Shu.. Shubh.... Shubham hai.....

Mariana uska iss tarah haklana ki vajah sa kuch samaj nahi paati hai aur vo ya samaj jati hai ki vo dar gaya hai.... Islye vo pyar sa uska sir par hath rakh kar uska sir ki saari dhul saaf karti hai aur fir usko pina ka lya apni pani ki bottle deti hai aur bade aram sa bolti hai.... daro nahi aur aram sa bolo....Ab shubham bhi kaafi sambhal chuka tha to vo bolta hai...

Shubham: Jee mera name Shubham hai.... Aur mei koi choor nahi hu aur na hi jabardasti ghus raha hu.... Mjhe AS na yaha bheja hai ya parchi lekar uss building ka guard ko dekhana ka liya, aur itna kaha kar vo apni parchi uski taraf bada deta hai......

Mariana vo parchi uska hath sa lekar dekhti hai to uspar ussi ka name hota hai..... jisse vo puchti hai ki ya to mera name ki parchi hai.... Tumhai mera pass kyu bheja hai AS na....

Shubham: Ya jaan kar ki usko inhi sa milna hai vo apni pocket sa dusra paper nikal kar unko de deta hai aur bolta hai AS na bola tha ya aapko de du....

Mariana ; Dusri parchi lekar padhti aur fir Shubham ki taraf bada dhyan sa dekhti hai....
jisse Shubham ek baar fir saham jata hai....

Jaana ka liya ki us parchi mei kya likha hai AS na aur Mariana na usko essa ghur kar kyu dekha aur ya Mariana kun hai jo kissi sa nahi darti hai.....

In sabhi sawalo ka javab aapko aaga milta rahega, jaana ka liya bana rahiya mera sath iss story par.....AApka coments ka intejar rahega..[/b]

[dahiya242]

yea story xossip par tha kuch agevi bara tha fir xossip band hua
or kisine story ko iyaha par restart ki fir band or abhi fir restart kar rahe ho
story khatam toh goga na????????????

BHAI MERE PASS IS STORY KAI 100  UPDATE HAIN, Baki Tab Tak AA He Jayengay Nahi to mai is story ko khud complete kar doonga

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update 3

[b]Pichle update mei aapna dekha ki Shubham ki phele din hi Kairo sa samna ho jata hai aur sath hi sath vo Professor Mariana sa mil kar usse AS ka dwara diya gya paper ko vo usse de deta hai jisse padhna ka baad Mariana usse ghur kar dekhti hai....
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[b]Ab aage ....[/b]

[b]Mariana ka essa dekhna sa Shubham samaj nahi pata vo usse essa kyu dekh rahi hai, islye vo badi himmat karka puch leta hai kya hua madam aap mjhe essa kyu dekh rahi hai.....[/b]

[b]Mariana : tm yaha kyu aaye ho....??[/b]

[b]Shubham: jee mei yaha padhna aaya hu...[/b]

[b]Mariana : kya padhna aaye ho tm yaha???[/b]

[b]Shubham : sabhi tarah ka hatiyar chalana[/b]

[b]Mariana: janta ho na isma tmhri jaan bhi ja sakti hai..... aur tmhai dekh kar to nahi lagta hai ki tmna kabhi weapon pakda hoga.... aur kyu sikhna cahata ho weapon chalana ....[/b]

[b]Shubham: janta hu ki ismei meri jaan ja sakti hai.... par agar meri jaan jana sa phele mei kuch kar saka kisi ka liya to bhut khushnasib samjhunga ki kisi ka kaam aa saka waisa bhi mera koi nai jo mera marna par roye, to farak kya padhta hai agar mei mar bhi gaya to....[/b]
[b]rahi dusri baat ha ya sach hai ki meina aaj tak kabhi bhi weapons nahi chalaya hai aur na kabhi haath mei liya hai, par mei apni puri koshish krunga ki mei sabhi ki tarah jaldi hi acha sa weapons chalana sikh jau aur vasa bhi iss duniya mei insan kabhi  na kabhi koi kaam phele baar jarur karta hai, to kyu nahi mei bhi ya karka dekh lu...... aur aakhri baat mei kyu sikhna cahata hu to uska reason bs itna sa hai ki yaha sa jab nikalu to kisi rajya ki seena mei shamil ho saku taki mei bhi baki logo ki tarah apna jeevan mei do waqt ka khana sahi sa kama kar khaa saku.... aur log mjhe nafrat ki najar sa nahi dekha.... itna bolkar vo chup ho jata hai aur uski aankho sa aasu girna lagta hai......
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[b]Itna sunkar Mariana ki aankh mei bhi do Bund aasu aa jata hai par vo khud ko sambhalti hai aur bolti hai chalo mera sath.... Itna kaha kar vo aage chalana lagti hai... Shubham bhi uska picha chalana ka liya jaisa hi phela kadam uthata hai uski karah nikal jati hai aur vo apna pair pakad kar vapas nicha baith jata hai....[/b]

[b]Mariana uski awaj sunkar uski tarah dekhti hai to usko dard mei dekh kar uska knee par sa uska haath hatati hai aur dekhti hai to vaha sa uska knee dislocated ho gaya tha....Mariana usko bolti hai jara si chot lgi hai abhi thik kar deti hu bs thoda sa dard hoga....aur itna bolkar ek dum sa uska knee ka yaha sa uska par ko mood kar knee ko vapas sahi karti hai aur uska upar kaska kapda bhand deti hai.... Par idhar humara hero ki ek tez chikh nikal jati hai jab Mariana achanak uska pair mood deti hai...[/b]

[b]Shubham ki chikh sunkar Mariana usko bolti hai kya ladkiyo ki tarah chota sa dard mei chila raha ho abhi to pura 5 saal tmhai yaha isse kahi gunna jada dard milega samjh gaye na..... Chalo ab utho aur chalo.... Itna kaha kar vo vapas khadi hoti hai aur chalana lagti hai aur shubham bhi uska picha chalana lagta hai..... Abhi dono chalkar Professor Quater ki building ka bahar hi pahucha tha ki Mariana uska bahar khada guard ko bolti hai, Wilson ko msg kardo ki mjhe aakar office mei mila abhi , aur vo vaha sa aage aur shubham uska picha uska 4th floor par bana office mei pahuch jata hai....[/b]

[b]Office mei vo ek khali chair ki taraf ishara karka usko baithna ko bolti hai aur khud apna overcoat utar kar uska samna rakhi chair pr baith jati hai... aur usse bolti hai tmhara pass abhi bhi 5 minute hai yaha baith kar soch lo ki tm ya skul join karna cahata ho ya nahi.... kyunki ek baar tm ander aa gaye to uska baad tm bahar pura 5 saal baad hi nikal sakoga aur sath hi ya bhi bata du ki tmhai baki sabhi ka mukabla jada mehnat karni hogi aur vo mehnat tmhai sharirik aur mansik taur par bhut thaka degi....sath hi ya bhi bata du ki tmhai train karna ka jima AS na mjhe diya hai, aur mei yaha bhut mashur hu hard work karana ka liya..... Islye soch lo aram sa.....[/b]


[b]Abhi Mariana na bolna band hi kara tha ki Shubham bol utha..... kya aapki training ka samay ek insan pr garam ubalta oil dalna ka baad jo dard aur jalan hoti hai usse jada jalan hogi kya, ya insan ko tie(bandh) kar uska sharir par garam rod laga kar upar mirchi dalna ka baad jo jalan hogi usse jada dard aur thakan to nahi hogi na.... Agar aap ha bolti hai to mei abhi yaha sa chala jata hu aur yadi nahi to fir jo insan 5 saal sa ya jhel liya to aapki training bhi puri karna ki koshish krunga......Bus aap mjhe mera ek saval ka javab de de..... kya mei yaha sa jab bahar nikalunga pura 5 saal sikhana ka baad to kya log mjhe izzat sa dekhega aur kya mei kissi rajya ki sena mei sainik ki tarah jagah paa sakunga......?[/b]

[b]Mariana iss baat ka javab deti usse phele hi uska darwaja par dastak hoti hai aur bahar sa awaj aati hai, kya mei andar aa sakta hu madam.... ya awaj bahar khada Wilson ki thi jisse Mariana na pehchan liya tha, islye vo usse ander aana ko kahati hai aur usse baithna ka liya chair ki tarah ishara karti hai.....Wilson ka baith jana ka baad,[/b]

[b]Mariana: Wilson, ya hai humara group ka naya member no. 8th , inka naam hai Shubham...[/b]
[b]Shubham ya hai Wilson, jo tumhai yaha ka baramei aur tm kaha rahoga aur baki sabhi jaruri cheeja mei tmhari help karega....[/b]
[b]Wilson inhai yaha ka baramei kuch bhi pata nahi hai islye inha inka rehana ka kamra aur baaki sabhi jarurat ki chijo ko arranage karna mei inki madat karna..... Aur ya lo list jo saman inka college ka liya jaruri hai.... isma sabhi tarah ki kaam mei aana vali chijo ka bara mei likha hai.... sath hi inhai vo jagah bhi dikha dena jaha ya sab milta hai, takki algi baar tmhai pareshan na hona pade.... Shubham tm bhi sabhi chija sahi sa dekh lena kyunki aage sa apna kaam tmhai khud karna hai.... Itna bolkar Mariana chup ho gai aur apna samna ki desk par rakha ek khali paper par kuch likhna lagi.....[/b]

[b]Mariana ka chup hota hi Shubham bol utha, par madam mera pass to paisa nahi hai mei saman kaha sa kharidunga ...... Shubham ki baat ka javab mei Mariana vo paper ka tukda jispar vo kuch likh rahi thi Wilson ka haath mei de deti hai aur kahati hai ya paper Neel Gagan Tower ka head ko de dena, baaki baat vo tmhai samjha dega....[/b]

[b]Aur itna bolkar vo un dono ko vaha sa jana ka liya kahati hai....Dono uth kar bahar jana ka liya gate ka pass pahucha hi tha ki, Ek baar Mariana fir bolti hai, Shubham tmhara saval ka javab ya hai ki 5 saal baad mei tm duniya ka sabsa bada weaponary art mei mahir hoga aur duniya ka har rajya tmhai apna desh ka sana nayak banana cahayga, agar tmna mehnat kari to ya waada hai Mariana ka aur uski suruwat kal subha sa 7 baje trainning room sa hogi..... Aur Wilson isse kuch jodi acha kapda dila dena.... Itna sun kar dono vaha sa bahar chala jata hai....[/b]

[b]Unka jaana ka kuch 5 minute baad hi Mariana bhi uth kar apna overcoat uthati hai aur bahar nikal kar kahi chali jati hai......[/b]

Jaana ka liya ki Mariana kaha gai hai aur ya Wilson kun hai aur ya group ka kya matlab hai..... Ya sab saval ka javab jaana ka liya aaga bana raha story par.....

Aapka comments ka humsha intazar rahega.....

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Update 4


[b]Pichla update tak aapna padha ki Mariana Shubham ko Wilson naam ka ek ladka sa milati hai, Shubham ko uska sath jana ko kahati hai aur sath hi ek list de deti hai, aur Wilson ko ek paper kisi Neel Gagan Tower ka head ko dena ka liya kahati hai, aur khud unka jana ka 5 minute baad kahi chali jati hai.....[/b]

[b]Ab Aage....[/b]

[b]Professor Quater building sa bhaar nikal kar Wilson ek chain ki saas leta hai aur Shubham ki tarah mud kar bolta hai.....[/b]


[b]Wilson: Hello dost, chalo hum sab kaam karna sa phele tumhara saman le aata hai fir chalta hai hostel ki building jaha hum sab rahata hai, uska baad mei tmhai sabsa phele apna group sa milata hu, fir hum baaki ka kaam karta hai.... abhi humara pass bhut samay bacha hai din ka khatam hona mei......[/b]


[b]Shubham: Hello, jee mera pass koi saman nahi hai..... saman ka naam par agar mera pass kuch hai to bs ya.... itna kaha kar vo apni pocket mei hath daal kar ek mouth organ nikal leta hai.... aur usse Wilson ko dikha deta hai....[/b]


[b]Wilson : Shubham ki essi baat sa usse thoda bura lagta hai uska liya ki iska pass to jeena ka liya kuch bhi nahi hai..... par vo usse kisi tarah na hi nicha dikhana cahata tha aur na hi usko ya dikhana cahata tha ki uska prati usko koi sahanabhuti hai.... islye vo apna face par smile laakar kahata hai, chalo koi baat nahi to hum chalta hai, college ka bahar bani tea stall par jaha huma humara baaki ka 6 group member mil jayga.....[/b]


[b]Itna bolkar Wilson Shubham ka shoulder par hath rakhta hai aur usse apna saath lekar nikal jata hai tea stall ki taraf.....[/b]


[b]Chaliya dosto jab tak ya dono college ka bahar bana tea stall tak pahuchta hai, hum chalkar dekhta hai ki Professor Mariana itna jaldi mei kaha ja rahi hai......[/b]


[b]Mariana apna office sa bahar nikal kar apna horse par baith kar college sa bahar nikal jati hai, aur karib 15 minute lagatar horse ko puri raftar sa chalana ka baad vo pahuch jati hai ek baar aur restaurant mei..... Uss restaurant ka bahar khada aadmi ko vo apni jeb sa ek gold coin nikal kar deti hai aur khud ghoda par sa utar kar kheti hai iska dhyan rakhna baki tm rakh lena.....Itna kaha kar vo andar chali jati hai....[/b]


[b]Vahi picha vo aadmi gold coin ko dekh kar khush ho jata hai aur khushi khushi ghoda ko lekar baaki sabhi ghoda ka saath uska liya bani jagah baandh deta hai aur usse khana ka liya chana deta hai....[/b]


[b]Jab Mariana andar pahuchti hai to dekhti hai ki apni to vaha par ek bhi customer nahi hai..... Islye vo jakar baar counter par baith jati hai aur bar tendor ko ek large pack martini with ice ka banana ko bolti hai...... Bar Tendor abhi raat ka liya drinks ko arrange kar raha tha... islye vo ya sun kar bina picha muda bolta hai abhi baar band hai baad mei aana aur fir picha mudta hai customer ko dekhna ka liya...... Jaisa hi uski najar Mariana par padhti hai vo usse bolta hai sorry madam meina dekha nahi tha...... Nigro neecha hai aap vaha chala jaye mei aapki drink vahi lekar aa jaunga...[/b]


[b]Mariana Nigro ka bara mei sunkar vaha sa khadi hokar sidha nicha chali jati hai.......Jaha nigro abhi apna ladka logo ko kuch samjha raha tha, par jab uski najar Mariana par padhti hai to vo apni jagah sa khada hojata hai aur sabhi ladko ko baad mei baat karta hua kaha kar vaha sa bhaga deta hai.... aur Mariana ko bolta hai.... Ary Madam apna sa koi galti hui kya jo aap yaha chali aayi agar kuch kaam tha to mjhe hi bula liya hota....[/b]


[b]Mariana : Uski baat sun kar khati hai, ary nigro essi koi baat nahi hai bus tmsa milna ki icha hui aur socha bhut time sa martini nahi pee hai, chalo thodi si chak lungi islye chali aaye, par lagta hai tmhai mera aana pasand nahi aaya....[/b]


[b]Nigro: Ary madam essi koi baat thodi hai, aapka apna jagah hai jab man kara aaye aur vasa bhi aapka aana ka baad apun ka business ek dum badiya chalta hai.... Abhi nigro itna hi bola tha ki uska naya partner aa jata hai.... Jisse dekh kar vo bolta hai..... madam aap aaye aap idhar vala kamra mei baitho mei aapki favourate drink bhejta hu aap aram sa enjoy karo..... mei aapko 5 min mei join karta hu..... Aur itna bolkar vo Mariana ko ek kamra ka andar lekar jata hai aur vaha usse baitha kar khud bahar aa jata hai.....[/b]


[b]Partner: kya nigro bhai kya mast maal pakada hai aaj, lagta hai ab to ek hafta janat hi janat hai...... vasa bhai aapka jab man bhar jaye na to mjhe de dena mei bhi thoda taste kar lunga..... vasa sali lagti to upar sa ek dum pataka hai..... mast maja degi bistar mei.....[/b]


[b]Nigro: uski baat sunkar usse ek thapad marta hai aur bolta hai mother fucker, bastard, tu khud to marega mjhe jabardasti sath lekar marega...... sala tu janta bhi hai vo kun hai...... Uska naam hai Mariana Peter, jiska naam sa sara bura kaam karna vala apni paint mei tak moot visarjan kar deta hai..... Agar ek baar iski talwar kisi ka khatma karna ka liya nikal gaye to usse khud yamraj bhi jeevan dan nahi de sakta hai.........Agar usna sun liya na tu kya bola hai to teri nunni cut kar tera hi muh mei ghusad degi.... aur roj din mei 10 baar bina naga teri gaand duniya ka sabsa bada loda sa marwa degi.... samjha na chutiya.... ab tu apni salamati cahata hai to chup chap nikal le yaha sa aur jab tak mei nahi bolu vapas mat aana idhar....[/b]


[b]Itna sunta hi partner vaha sa 9 2 11 ho liya, aur itni der mei bar tender vala drink lekar aa gaya.... Jisse nigro na drink le liya aur khud uss room mei lekar chala gaya jaha Mariana baithi thi.... Nigro ka andar aana par Mariana usse drink leti hai aur Nigro uska samna vala sofa par baith jata hai, aur Mariana usse kisi ka bara mei baat karna lagti hai....[/b]


[b]Chaliya dosto abhi ab hum in dono ko thodi baat karna ki privacy de deta hai aur baad mei aakar pata kar lega ki aakhir ya kiska baramei baat kar raha tha...... Abhi hum chalta hai vapas Shubham aur Wilson ki taraf aur dekhta hai ki vo dono pahucha tea stall ya nahi....[/b]


[b]( Friends Aage ki kahani SHubham khud narate karega aur jaha third person ka behalf mei likhna ki jarurat hogi vaha mei vapas aa jaunga..... Tab tak ka liya alwida dosto, kyunki yaha sa Shubham hi sambhalega story.......)[/b]


[b]Shubham: Abhi hum dono college sa bahar nikal raha tha ki Wilson na mjhc pucha bhai ya organ tm bajata bhi ho ya ladkiyo ko bs impress karna ka liya rakhta ho....? Wilson ki baat sunkar mjhe bada aschariya hua ki ya insan to bada aadmi lagta hai fir bhi mjhc essa baat kar raha hai, jaisa mei isko bachpan sa janta hu aur iska aur mera level mei koi antar hi nahi hai....[/b]

[b]Abhi mei apna hi man mei soch raha tha ki Wislon mjhe hilata hai, jisse mei iss duniya mei vapas aata hu....[/b]


[b]Wilson: kya hua bhai kaha kho gaye...?? Agar mjjhe mouth organ baja kar nahi sunana hai to koi baat nahi par essa sath chalta huua gayab mat ho jao..... mjhe akela acha nahi lagta hai....[/b]


[b]Shubham : Bhai essi koi baat nahi hai, aur rahi baat mouth organ ki to lo mei abhi baja kar tmhai sunna deta hu yahi to ek chij hai jisse mei bhut khushi khushi karta hu..... aur itna kaha kar mei apna mouth organ bajana lagta hu, jisse sunkar Wilson ko bhut acha lagta hai.... aur essa hi hum dono pahuch jata hai tea stall par....[/b]

[b]Par tea stall par jakar humna jo dekha, usse dekh kar mera mouth shock mei khul gaya aur Wilson ka chehra par muskan aur badi ho gai....[/b]

[b]Dosto aaj ka liya bs itna hi jaana ka liya ki MAriana kiska bara mei baat kar Rahi thi aur meina essa kya dekha ki mjhe shock lag gaya bana raha humara sath iss story par aapki apni story par.... [/b]


[b]Stay Tunned aur aapka Valuable comments ka intejar rahega iss update ka bara mei.....[/b]

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Update 5


[b]Pichla update mei humna dekha ki Shubham aur Wilson dono tea stall ka pass pahuchta hai...... Aur andar ka najara dekh kar Shubham shock mei muh faada khada ho jata hai aur Wilson ki mushkurahat aur yadi ho jati hai.....

Ab aage.....

(Story shubham ki jubani hi chalegi....)

Andar ka najara hi dekhna layak tha , andar jab meina dekha to uss tea stall mei jaha baithna ki jagah thi vaha ka lagbhag sabhi furniture toota foota padh tha aur usse furniture ka bich mei kahi kahi kuch 5 aadmi bhi pada tha, unhe dekhna par hi lag raha tha ki inki abhi jam kar saaf safai ki gai hai..... Par jo aur jada shocking tha vo ya ki ek ladki jisse dekhna sa hi lagta tha ki agar koi isse touch kara to ya dar kar saham jaye.... Vo andar do ladko ko pakad kar maar rahi thi aur vo bhi proper combat style without weapons......... Jisma flying kick aur back flip kick ka to kahana hi kya...... Aur humara dekhta dekhta hi dono ladko ka muh mei sa samna ka daant bahar aa kar mera pair ka pass gira aur vo dono vahi behosh ho gaye.....Mei abhi shock sa nikalta usse phele Wilson mjhe khich kar uss taraf le gaya jaha phele sa hi kuch 5 log baitha tha aur vo ladki bhi unka sath hi baith gai.... Matlab vo 6 people phele sa hi vaha baitha tha....... Wilson sabhi ko vaha hello karta hai aur jiss ladki na ya sab tooda fodi kari thi uska samna hath jodta hai.......

Wilson : kyu mata, mita lee apna haath ki khujali......

Ladki : Ary kaha yr willy ya sala to sab bekar hi nikala, ek ek shot mei hi khatam.....

Tabhi ek ladka bola

Ladka: khudko dekha hai tera samna shayad hi koi aaj tak sahi sa lad saka hoga , jiss speed sa tu marti hai na bada sa bada fighter tjhc darta hai to ya bacha kaha thik pata......

Ladki 2 : ary band karo ya faltu ki bakwas , aur Willy ya batao ya ladka kun hai tmhara sath aur madam na tmhai itna jaldi mei kyu bulaya tha.....

Wilson : Ary ha yr, iski fight ka cahakar mei bhul gaya, inse milo ya hai Shubham humara group ka 8 member aur madam na islye hi bulaya tha ki isko humara group mei mila saka.......

Shubham ya hai humara group aaj tmko mila kar hum 8 log ho gai hai.....

Sabhi log mjhe hello bolta hai aur khushi khushi mjhe apna sath baithna ko bolta hai......

Abhi mei baithna hi vala tha ki Willy (Wilson) bolta hai ary ruko bhai tm yaha mat baitho abhi humko chalna hai.... Aur vasa bhi ab tm hmara group mei aa gaye ho to in sabsa shyam ko mil lena.....

Ladki 3: Tm kaha ja raha ho ab??? Bhul gaye humara mess ka tym ho raha hai.... Fir badmei kuch nahi milega.......

Willy : ary yr yaad hai par isko yaha ka bara mei kuch nahi pata hai.... Islye madam na mjhe iska sath jakar sara saman jo first year mei kaam aayega vo kaha milega batana hai aur sath hi NEEL GAGAN TOWER mei bhi madam na kuch kaam kaha hai vaha bhi jana hai...... Islye ek kaam kro tm sab jao.... Hum tumko raat mei humara group hall mei hi milta hai, vasa bhi ya ab ya sath hi rahana vala hai to baki sab baat vahi kar lena aur abhi hum chale......

Itna kaha kar Wilson mjhe khichta hua bahar lekar aa gaya......

Bahar aakar Wilson mjhe puchta hai batao hum phele kaha chala..... Wilson ki baat sunkar mei bs khada hua usko hi dekh raha tha aur soch raha tha mjhe jab ya hi nahi pata kaha jana hai to mei batau kaisa ki phele hum kaha chala..... Meri taraf sa kuch javab na sunkar Wilson khud hi bolta hai...... Chalo mera sath bs....

[/b]
[b]Mei uska sath chalna lagta hu aur abhi hma chalta hua kuch 5 minute hi hua tha ki vo ek building ka samna ruk gaya.... Aur meri taraf dekh kar chalo sabsa phele tmhara huliya sudharta hai..... Mei dhyan sa uss building ko dekha to me samaj nahi saka aakhir ya kaisi jagah hai, kyunki mei phele kabhi essi jagah nahi gaya tha.... Islye meina usse puch liya yaha kya hota hai.....[/b]

[b]Wilson: yaha tmhara roop sundariya karan hoga..... ek dum chikana kar diya jayga tmhai bilkul ladki ki tarah.....[/b]

[b]Shubham: Wilson ki baat sunkar mei ek dum bura sa muh bana kar mjhe nahi hona hai koi chikana vikana..... mei ja raha hu yaha sa tm karwa lo jo karwana hai...... itna bolkar mei bhagna hi vala tha ki Wilson na mjhe picha sa pakad ka utha liya aur mjhe andar lejata hua bola......[/b]

[b]Wilson: ary ary tm kaha chala, aaj to tmhara pura roop karan hokar hi rahega, vasa bhi tm ho itna chikna ek dum ladkiyo ki tarah.... aur mjhe ander lejakar ek chair par baitha diya.....[/b]

[b]Shubham: chodo mjhe Wilson mjhe nahi karana hai kuch bhi aur na hi mjhe tmhara sath kahi jana hai..... mei apna aap vo jagah jaha saman milta hai jala jaunga.... aur mei kuch karta vaha sa jana ka liya utni der mei vaha 6 aadmi aa gaye.... Unko dekh kar hi essa lag raha tha ki ya log koi gunda type log hai, kyunki unsabki height 6feet sa jada hi hogi aur sabki body ek dum essi ki mera jaisa 10 ko vo jaisa insan ek chiti ko faikta hai vasa hi faik dala....[/b]

[b]Unhona aata hi phele to mjhe pakad liya aur fir mjhe chair par bandh diya aur Wilson ki taraf dekh kar puchta hai iska kya karna hai.....[/b]

[b]Wilson: Ary jada kuch nahi bus isko aaj Special Royal Bridal Princess vala treatment de do.... itna kaha kar usna unhe aankh mar di jo mei nahi dekh saka aur vo log sir hila kar vaha sa chale gaye....[/b]

[b]Shubham: Kyu kar raha ho Wilson tm mera sath aisa, meina kya bigada hai tmhara.....??[/b]

[b]Wilson : Sorry dost par kya karu majbur hu tmhara par mera aur mera dosto ka dil aa gaya hai.....[/b]

[b]Abhi mei Wilson ko kuch kahata usse phele 7 ladkiya andar aati hai aur unmei sa jo head hoti hai vo aakar phele meri aankho par ek kaali pati bandh deti hai jisse mjhe kuch nahi dikhta hai aur phir Wilson sa kahati hai....[/b]

[b]Ladki: aap jakar inka liya kapda lekar aa jao, vasa bhi abhi inha 3 ghanta lagaga yaha par pura makeup karna mei...[/b]

[b]Wilson: thik hai mei 2:30 hour mei aata hu.... aur itna kaha kar vo chala jata hai jiska pata mjhe vaha ka gate ka khulna aur band hona sa pata chalta hai......[/b]

[b]Ladki: tm sab khadi kyu ho..... sabsa phele iska sara kapda utar kar isse nude kardo, kitni smell aa rahi hai iska kapdo mei sa.....[/b]

[b]Shubham: mei abhi apna ko bachana ka liya kuch nahi kar sakta tha kyunki mei bandha hua tha par fir bhi meina usse bola please mjhe chod do......kyu kar raha ho tm mera sath essa.... kya dushmani hai meri tm sabsa aur fir apna haath pair chalana lagta hu.....[/b]

[b]Ladki 2: Madam ya ladka bhut hath pair chala raha hai aur bolta to itna hai ki hum kaam hi nahi kar sakegi....[/b]

[b]Note: Yaha vali Ladki aur tea stall vali ladkiyo mei antar hai... tea stall vali ladkiyo aur ladko ka intro jald hi de dunga aap sabko...[/b]

[b]Head LAdki (upar vali Ladki aur ya same hai) : Ary kabutar jada fad fada raha hai,... koi nahi abhi iska ilaj kar deta hai.... itna bolkar usna mjhe kuch chuba diya, aur fir bolna lagi ab ya kabutar sab kuch sun sakta hai par iska sharir ab kisi kaam ka nahi hai....khol do iska haath pair aur aram sa apna kaam karo ya ab jitna marji cahaye agla 3 ghanta tak hil bhi nahi sakta hai......[/b]

[b]Uss head ladki ki baat sunkar sab ladkiya hasna lagi aur apna kaam karna lagi aur uski baat sunkar meina hilna ki koshish kari to bhi mei kuch nahi kar saka aur mera sarir hil hi nahi raha tha bus mei sab sun raha tha aur mehasos kar raha tha..... par apna ko vaha sa bachana ka liya kuch nahi kar sakta tha.....[/b]

[b]Vo log apna kaam karti rahi aur karib 2:30 hour baad Wilson ki awaj sunai di, ya lo iska kapda....[/b]

[b]Head Ladki: idhar rakh kar kapda aap bahar baitho.... bus ho gaya hai iska kaam bhi kuch minute mei aapko bulata hai... aur itna kaha kar Wilson ko bahar baitha diya....[/b]

[b]Kuch der baad un ladkiyo na apna kaam pura karna ki ghoshna kardi aur mjhe kapda pahana diya jo Wilson laya tha......[/b]

[b]Head Ladki: Jao vo jo bahar baitha hai iska liya usko bula kar le aao aur tab tak mei is chikni ko vapas thik karti hu.... aur itna kaha kar vo kuch karna lagi aur mjhe phir sa kuch chij chuba di.... Aur Ladkiya bahar sa Wilson ko bulana chali gayi...[/b]

[b]Head Ladki na meri aankh sa phele pati hatai aur mjhe khudko glass mei dekhna ko bola aur boli 5 minute mei tm phele ki tarah hil dul sakoga..... Itni der mei Wilson bhi andar aa gaya tha...[/b]

[b]Shubham: Apna aap ko glass mei dekh kar ek baar ka liya to mjhe vishwas hi nahi ho raha tha ki kya sach mei ya mei hi hu ya koi aur hai..... Mei bs baar baar khudko mirror mei hi dekh raha tha aur apna haath pair chala kar bs yahi vishwas karna ki koshish kar raha tha ki kya jo mirror mei hai vo mei hi hu ya koi aur hai.....[/b]

[b]Wilson bhi andar aakar jab meri taraf dekha to uska muh bhi shock mei khula ka khula hi raha gaya.... aur vo jaha tha vahi ka vahi tahar gaya aur bs mjhe hi dekhna laga.... [/b]

[b]Hum dono ki ya halat koi 5 minute tak rahi hogi ki head Girl na mjhe pintch karka kaha kya hua essa kya dekh raha ho ya mirror mei tm hi ho aur apna dost ki taraf dekho vo kaisa tmhai muh fada dekh raha hai....[/b]

[b]Uski baat sa jab meina Wilson ki taraf dekha to mjhe bs hassi aa gai aur uska pas khadi ladki na usse hila kar vapas duniya mei laya aur Wilson mera pass aakar bus mjhc gala lag gaya....[/b]

[b]Wilson: Ab lag raha hai tu ki tu iss duniya ka hai..... aur head girl sa kamal kar diya aapna to, ek jungli ko rajkumar bana diya...[/b]

[b]Head Girl: uski baat sunkar uska saman mei sir jhuka kar aur ek pair par baith kar bus itna hi boli..... Prince of Elf ko humara kaam pasand aaya yahi humara liya bhut badi baat hai..... Prince ka aadesh humara  liya sabsa upar hai...[/b]

[b]Head ladki ki baat sunkar mjhe bhi shock laga ki jiss insan ka sath mei subha sa ghum raha hu vo Prince of Elf hai, duniya ka vo jana mana rajkumar jiski bahaduri ka kisse aur bow aur arrow chalana ki maharath itni choti umar mei hi duniya ka har rajya mei bhut famous hai...... Mei bhi uska samna sir jhuka kar aur ek pair par baith gaya..... aur meri dekha dekhi vo sab ladkiya aur ladka jo vaha maujud tha sab vasa hi ho gaye....[/b]

[b]Wilson: Ary ya tum sab kya kar raha ho...... yaha mei koi rajkumar nahi bus tm sabki tarah ek aam insam Wilson hu aur mera pass aakar mjhe uthata hua, yar maaf karna meina tmhai jabardasti pareshan kar diya.... bus aaj Friendship day hai aur tmhai meina aaj hi apna dost man liya hai to socha thodi tmhari khichai kar lu...... kya tm meri dosti kabul karoga......?[/b]

[b]Shubham: Prince aapna mjhe apni dosti ka kabil samjha ya ,mera liya bhut bade saman ki baat hai, par meri aukad aapka rajya ka naukar ka naukar bana layak bhi nahi hai..... aur mei kuch bolta usse phele hi Prince of Elf bol utha....[/b]

[b]Wilson: Ary huma dosti tmsa karni hai tmhari aukad sa nahi,.... aur na hi tmhara paisa sa vo to bhut hai humara pass, bus huma tmhari dosti cahaiya agar hmari dosti kabul hai to ha bol do varna na kar do hum bura nahi manega, kyunki hum sirf sacha logo ka sath dosti karna pasand karta hai aur tm huma sacha laga.....[/b]

[b]Shubham: Prince agar aap sach mei mjhe apni dosti kabul karna ka option de raha hai.... to ya mera liya bus ek saman ki baat hai aur mei vada karta hu mera jivan ki aakhri lamha tak bhi ya dosti nibhaunga....[/b]

[b]Itna sunkar Prince of Elf na mjhe gala laga liya aur baaki sabhi logo ki taraf dekh kar kya aap sab bhi humara dost banana cahayega.....?[/b]

[b]Sab ek sath ha mei sir hila deta.....[/b]

[b]Wilson: to thik hai aaj sa hum sab dost hai humara bich mei kissi tarah ka rajya aur paisa bich mei nahi aa sakta hai.... aaj sa jo mera hai vo sab aapka hai aur aapka jo kuch bhi hai vo mera hai..... EK baat ka vada kara duniya ki buri parishthiti mei huma yaad jarur kara, humsa jo ho sakega hum aapka liya jarur karega.... Itna bolkar unhona apna pass sa ek chota sa bag jisma coins tha lejakar head girl ko de diya..... ya aap sabka kaam ki kimat aur humara sabhi dosto mei bacha hua coins baat le aaj friendship day ka din sa hum cahata hai humara sabhi dosto ki jindagi mei badlav aur acha din aaye....[/b]

[b]Itna kaha kar vo mjhe lekar sath bahar aa gaye.... Aur bahar aakar mera maja leta hua, kyu tmhai humara royal bridal princess treatment kaisa laga....[/b]

[b]Shubham: mein bs unki baat sunkar unki taraf dekha, jo meri taraf dekh kar bus has raha tha......[/b]

[b]Wilson: Chalo jaldi karta hai ab humara pass samay bhut kam bacha hai, vasa meina tmhara liya kapda kharid liya hai.... islye hum ab sidha Neel Gagan Tower Chalta hai.....[/b]

[b]Unki baat sunkar mei sir ha mei hila diya aur hum dono nikal pada Neel Gagan Tower ki Taraf.....[/b]

[b]Wahi dusri taraf Mariana bhi Nigro sa baat karka vaha sa nikal kar college mei aa jati hai aur apna office mei aati hai jaha usse phele sa hi koi baitha hua milta hai.....?[/b]

[b]Abhi ka liya bus itna hi, jaana ka liya ki ya person kun hai aur humara Hero ka sath Prince of Elf aur kya kya karta hai bana raha aapki apni story par....[/b]

[b]Stay tunned friends Aapka Valuable comments ka intejar rahega ....[/b]

[b]Note: Happy Friendship day to all aaj ka mera dono update aaj ka special day ko dhyan mei rakh kar hi hoga par uski vajah sa hum story sa bilkul nahi off track hoga.....[/b]
[b]Once again HAPPY FRIENDSHIP DAY AAP SABHI NAYE NAYE BANA APNA DOSTO KO..[/b]

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Update 6


Pichla update mei aapna dekha ki kaisa rajkumar meri taang khichai karta hai aur uska baad hum nikal pade NEEL GAGAN TOWER ki taraf, vahi dusri taraf Mariana apna office pahuchti hai aur vaha kissi ko baitha hua phele hi paati hai.....

Ab aage.....

Mariana samna baitha hua insan ko dekh kar muskuraate hua, kya baat hai aaj khud AS mera office mei......?? Kahi rasta to nahi bhatak gaye tm.......

AS : Mariana ka essa kahana sa has baitha aur bola kya apni patni sa milna aana ka liya bhi mjhe bahana cahaiya kya

Mariana: Oooohhhhhh to tmhai yaad hai kya ki tmhari shadi ho gayi hai aur tmhari koi patni bhi hai......?? Mjhe to laga tha ki tm bhul gaye ho mjhe aur meri jagah meri sautan ka sath apna jivan jee raha ho.......

AS: Apni jagah sa uth kar Mariana ko picha sa jakar pakad leta hai.....(Mariana ki uss samay uski taraf pith thi aur vo tea pot ko flame par chada rahi thi) aur fus fusata hua uska kaan mei kahata hai..... Meina kabhi tum mei aur tumhari sautan mei koi antar kara hai kya......?

Mariana: uski ya baat sunkar uska stomach mei apni elbow marti hai..... Aur picha mud kar usko dekhti hai.....

Dono ek dusra ko dekhta hai aur fir hasna lagta hai....

Mariana: baitho mei tea lekar aati hu..... Aur AS sofa par baith jata hai aur Mariana aakar uski tigh par baith jati hai.... Aur bolti hai......

Mariana : Bolo aaj iss samay essa kya kaam aa gaya ki tm yaha vo bhi aaj jab shyam ko college gathering aur reunion party hai.....

AS : uska hath sa cup lekar , ek sip lekar kahata hai...... Ek to tmhari ya special tea ko miss kar raha tha aur dusra tmhai ya kahana tha ki aaj jo ladka meina tmhara pass bhej tha usko duniya ka sabsa bada hathiyar mei badalna hoga......


Mariana : uski ya baat sunkar uski taraf dekhti hai aur uth kar samna rakha single sofa par baith jati hai aur puchti hai..... Aakhir essi kya baat hai jo AS aaj tak kabhi kissi student ka training ka liya koi suggestion nahi karta vo aaj khud ek essa ladka ka liya bol raha hai jo na kissi desh ka rajkumar hai aur na hi uska bara mei kuch janta hai.....

AS: Mariana samay par bharosa rakho ya tum hi humsha mjhe kahati ho na, to bus aaj ya kaam tu khud kro kyunki samay mei sach mei bhut shakti hoti hai, agar har saval ka javab sahi samay par mila to uska maja aur kimat bhut adhik hota hai...... aur samay par tmhai apna pucha gaye aur na pucha gaye sabhi savalo ka javab mil jayega...... kyunki samay ka gharb mei har saval ka javab chupa hua hai.....

Mariana: Essa kya hai AS jo mei nahi janti hu aur tmna mjhe nahi bataya hai aaj tak, aur sabsa badi baat tm cahata ho mai isse ek hathiyar mei badal du, jabki tmna khudna usse dekha hai vo yaha kuch samay sa jada nahi tik sakega.....

AS: Mariana tm uska bahari sharir ko dhyan mei rakh kar bol rahi ho par mei uska andar apna aap sa chal raha sangharsh ko dhyan mei rakh kar bol raha hu, chalo ek kaam karta hai tm usse kuch bhi mat sikhana phele saal, bus usko sharirik aur mansik taur par tayar karna.......

Mariana: Tm budha ho gaye ho AS, ab tmhai retirement le lena cahaiya....... kyunki vo ladka 6 mahina mei hi sharirik aur mansik tyari ki kathinai sa bhag jayga.......

AS: uski baat par bus mushkura deta hai, aur aage kahata hai...... mjhe lagta hai vo sharirik taur par duniya ki sabsa mushkil training karna sa phele ek baar bhi nahi picha hona ka sochega aur mansik tyari mei tmhara jadu ki pahuch kam ho jaygi aur par uski manshik shakti sahana ki shakti nahi, tmsa har din roj sa jada mangaga.......
Chalo dekhta hai Mariana kun sahi nikalta hai, tm ya mei...... agar mei galat nikla to mei apni position sa hmsha ka liya retire ho jaunga aur agar tm galat nikli to tmhai pura ek saal talwar sa dhuri banaye rakhni hogi, bolo tyar ho...... aur ha tm jeetna ka liya kissi bhi level tak ja sakti ho usse tayar karna ka liya......

Mariana: AS mjhe sach mei ab tmhari baat ko seriously lena hoga mei to abhi tak soch rahi thi tm majak kar raha ho, par agar tm apni lyf ki sabsa badi khushi daav par laga raha ho to iska matlab hai koi baat to hai jo mjhe nahi pata hai aur tmhai pata hai, par thik hai mjhe tmhari shart manjur hai, iss pura ek saal mei pata chal jayga ki kun sahi hai aur kun galat......

AS: Ha Mariana, bus iss baat ka dhyan rakhna tm jeetna ka liya kissi bhi level tak ja sakti ho mjhe koi dikat nahi hai, bus kabhi kabar agar jarurat hui to mei usse mil lunga, aur shayad isma tmhai koi dikat nahi hogi..... aur jiss din vo ruka mei usse college sa nikal dunga.......

Mariana: Thik hai AS mjhe isma koi dikat nahi hai, par mei ek saal ka liya talwar harna par isko sikhana par hi chodungi, kyunki meina usse vada kara hai vo jab college sa jayga to vo duniya ka sabsa bada weaponary art mei mahir insan hoga....

AS: mjhe sab manjur hai..... bus ab tm apni talwar sa dhur rhna ki aadat daal lo..... ab mei chalta hu.....

Itna kaha kar vo bahar nikalna ko hota hai, ki vo palat kar kahata hai, Mariana jiss kaam ka liya tm gai thi usse kuch din ka liya taal do, sahi samay aur jagah mei khud tmhai bata dunga, uss kaam ka liya..... aur bina kuch sunna vo vaha sa nikal jata hai aur chod jata hai kaafi sara saval Mariana ka samna jinka hal abhi ka liya uska pass nahi tha..... par fir bhi vo har baat ka bara mei sochna lagti hai aur kal mera saath kaisa start karna hai ya bhi dekhna lagti hai....

Chaliya Idhar Mariana apna mei hi kuch sochna lagi hai, to hum inhai akele chod kar chal deta hai vapas meri aur Willy ki taraf.....

Abhi hum dono ko chalta hua kuch 15 minute hua tha ki hum ek building ka samna khada ho gaye aur mei uss building ko bus apna sir upar utha kar hi dekha ja raha tha.......

Chaliye aap sabko bhi dikha deta hai ya kaisi building hai..... Hum ek Bhut badi Buidling ka samna khada tha jo ki pura neela colour ki tarah chamak rahi thi..... aur sabsa jada heran karna vali baat thi uski building jisma itna floor dikh raha tha ki mjhe to vaha nicha khada hona par uska chor (end) floor tak nahi dikh raha tha aur mei bus usse dekha hi ja raha tha....

Shubham: Prince ya building kitni badi hai, itna upar tak log kaisa jata hoga?

Willy: ary tm jo dekh raha ho vo iss building ki asliyat nahi hai ya sab magic hai.....

Shubham: matlab? mei to kuch samjha hi nahi....

Willy: Ya jo building hai na ya bus ek floor ki hai baaki sab to jadu sa logo ko ghumra karna ka liya kar rakha hai.....

Shubham : mei nahi manta aapki baat, ya building ek dum asli hai.....

Willy: Thik hai abhi sabit kar deta hu..... aur itna kaha kar vo ek pathar jamin sa uthate hai aur bus building ki taraf phek deta hai (Pathar first floor ka upar ka hissa mei fekha gaya tha)

Pathar ka faikna par vo pathar bina kissi chij ka takray uska paar ho gaya, jisse dekh kar mera muh sa apna aap hi nikal gaya...... sala faltu hi chutiya banata hai saala..... par baad mei mjhe dhyan aaya ki mei prince ka saath hu to mei unki taraf dekh kar maafi mangta hu apna kaha words ka liya......

Willy: Vasa jo tmna kaha vo sahi hai...... ya sala chutiya hi banata hai..... meina jab pheli baar dekha tha tab meina bhi same saval apni maa sa pucha tha aur mera muh sa galti sa same ans. bhi nikal gaya tha..... bus kismat achi thi ki meina bhut dhera bola tha jiski vajah sa maa na nahi sunna tha varna mera to looda lag jata......
aur rahi baat gaali ki to itni to chalti hai yaar dosto mei, bus bahar vala ka samna dhyan rakhna ......
Aur ab tm andar bhi chaloga ya sari baat yahi karoga....

Itna sunkar mei bhi unka picha picha andar aa gaya..... Andar sa Neel Gagan Tower dekhna par pata chal gaya sach mei ya ek manjila sa jada bani hui nahi thi..... vaha par kuch aadmi aur aurat kuch desk ka samna line laga kar khada tha, jo mjhe baad mei pata chala yaha sa log paisa jama karata hai..... aur kuch jagah machine laga hua tha vaha hi log khada tha jaha sa paisa nikalta hai..... mei abhi sab jagah bada dhyan sa dekh raha tha ki prince bolta hai, chalo huma samna chalna hai, vo glass chamber ki taraf issara karta hua kaha raha tha..... vahi milega yaha ka head..... Hum dono aage badkar uska samna jakar baith gaye aur Madam ka diya hua paper usse de dya..... Usna kuch der paper ko ghur kar dekha aur fir pucha tm dono mei sa Shubham kun hai.....

Shubham: mei hu Shubham.....

Head: Chalo mera sath...... aur Willy sa tm yahi baitho aur kissi chij ko chuna nahi.....

Mei uska picha picha chalna laga aur hum cabin sa bahar aa gaye, usna mjhc karib 6 jagah mera haath rakhvaya aur ek jagah mjhe aankh daal kar dhyan sa dekhna ko kaha (bio metrics aur retina impression collect kara gaya tha, jiska bhi mjhe baad mei Willy sa pata chala ki usko kya kahata hai.....) aur uska baad mjhe bola tm jakar baitho andar mei aata hu...

Itna sunna par mei vaha sa nikal leta hu aur Willy ka pass aakar baith jata hu..... abhi mjhe baitha hua koi ek minute bhi nahi hua tha ki vo aa jata hai..... aur mera samna ki taraf ek bada sa kuch aage rakh deta hai....

Shubham: Ya kya hai..... Mei kya karu iska.....

Willy: Ary yr isse Tablet kahata hai..... isma tmhara account ki sari jankari hai.... aur Head ki taraf dekh kar mei isse sab samjha dunga, bus kya ab hum ja sakta hai.....

Head: ha agar tm sab samjha doga to tm ja sakta ho ab....

Itna sunta hi Willy vaha sa bahar jana ka liya uthta hai aur nikalna lagta hai aur mei bhi uska picha picha chal deta hu.....

Uska cabin sa bahar aakar Willy mjhe kahata hai.... chalo ek kaam karta hai tmhara liya kuch paisa nikal leta hai, taki baaki ka saman kharid saka aur fir roj ka liya bhi tmhai jo thoda paisa ki jarurat hogi vo nikal leta hai..... Itna kaha kar vo mjhe apna haath ek machine par rakhna ko kahata hai..... mei bhi vasa hi karta hu..... jiska baad ek awaj aati hai....

Awaj (Machine Voice) : Kitna cahaiya......??

Willy : mjhe batata hua, dekho yaha phele par jitna likhoga utha gold coin milega, second sa silver aur Third sa bronze coin nikal kar aata hai..... to batao kitna nikala....

Shubham: mjhe kya pata kitna ki jarurat padegi..... aap dekh lo apna hisab sa aur nikal lo......
vasa ya paisa kaha sa aaye, kyunki mera pass to kuch bhi nahi hai....

Willy: phele to apna hisab sa coin ki entry karta hai aur fir bolta hai Madam na tmhara naam ka bank account yaha khulwaya hai, jiska matlab hai ki unhona hi tmhara liya paisa jama karaye hai yaha..... samjha aur kitna karaye hai ya jaana ka liya tm iss tablet par apna haath rakho aur yaha par press karo tmhai iss saval ka javab bhi mil jayga....

Shubham: Jaisa Willy na kaha mei vasa hi karta hu, aur uska samna jo hum dekhta hai, to achanak Willy ki jor sa awaj aati hai kya?

Shubham: aapko kya hua ab???

Willy : tmna dekha nahi kya tmhara account mei jo amount hai na utna to mera account mei bhi nahi hai even iss college mei padhna vala kissi bhi ka account mei nahi hoga....

Abki baar chilana ki baari meri thi...... kya???

Meri awaj thoda tej thi jiska chalta sab log meri taraf dekhna lagta hai..... Par Willy sambhal kar mjhe kheta hai.... chalo aage chalta hai humara coins humai aage milega aur fir hum vaha sa chup chal nikal jata hai...... aur coins lekar bahar aa jata hai.....

Shubham: kya aap sach kaha raha hai ki jitna mera account mei hai utna aapka mei bhi nahi hai kya...... aur agar essa hai to madam na aisa kyu kara  ??

Willy : yaar mei sach kaha raha hu jitna tmhara account mei hai utna iss pura planet mei AS, aur Mariana Madam ka baad shayad tmhara pass hi hoga.....aur rahi Madam na essa kyu kara, to uska javab bs Madam hi de skati hai.....
Par abhi humko yaha sa chalna cahaiya kyunki ab hum ja raha hai GALLERY OF ANTIQUES ki taraf.......

Shubham: Willy ki baat sunkar mei kuch nahi bola bs uska saath chal diya aur man hi man sochna laga aakhir madam na essa kyu kara, mei madam sa iska bara mei jarur puchunga.......

Chaliye dosto in dono ko pahuchna deta hai GALLERY OF ANTIQUES tab tak ka liya hum yahi ruk jata hai aur fir milta hai, jab ya dono apni manjil par pahuch jayga...... tab tak ka liya alwida.....

Kaafi sara raaj jama ho gaye hai iss update mei jiska  answer abhi kissi ka pass nahi hai..... Jaisa AS na kaha javab ka answer samay par mila tabhi maja aata hai..... so dosto huma bhi wait karna hoga inn sabhi savalo ka javab ka liya jo huma aage updates mei mil jayga...... tab tak ka liya bana raha aap sabhi log aapki apni story par....

Aur haa aap sabhi log apni soch ka hisab sa answer de skta hai, taki pata chala kun hum sab mei sa AS ki tarah soch skta hai...... AAP SABKA VALUABLE COMMENTS KA INTEZAR RAHEGA......MILTA HAI UGLA UPADATE MEI........
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update 7


Pichla update mei aapna dekha kaisa AS aur Mariana ka bich shart lagti hai mera liya, vahi dusri taraf mei aur Willy hum Neel Gagan Tower sa GALLERY OF ANTIQUES ka liya nikal gaye tha aur sath mei lekar chala tha ek aur saval.......

Ab AAge......

SHubham: Hum kuch der chalna ka baad ek choti si gali ka bahar khada tha jaha par ek bada sara board laga tha WELCOME TO THE GALLERY OF ANTIQUES...... mei uss jagah ko dekh kar Willy sa bola, kya huma iss gallery mei jana hai, isko dekh kar to nahi lagta hai ki yaha humara kaam ka kuch saman milega.... AApna to bola tha ya galli apna aapmei khaas hai, yaha duniya ka har saman milta hai.....

Aaye aapko bhi jo samna dikh raha tha uska bara mei bata de..... Actually samna ek 5ft chodi gali thi, jaha  do log ek sath bhi nahi khada ho sakta tha aur ussi gali mei baith kar kuch log kuch saman sell kar raha tha..... vaha sabhi jagah gandagi hi gandagi thi.... uss jagah ko dekh kar koi bhi yahi bolega ya to koi sadi si jagah hai....

Willy: Thoda sabar kro mera dost, abhi hum GALLERY OF ANTIQUES mei nahi ghusa hai..... phele hum usmei ghus jaye uska baad kahana kya meina kuch galat kaha tha......?

Essa kaha kar Willy aage bada aur mei uska picha aur hum uss laga board ko cross karka gallery mei khada tha..... vaha pahuch kar Willy na vahi rakha ek chota sa pathar ko do baar clockwise aur ek baar nicha daba diya,,,,, uska essa karta hi vaha sab kuch smoke mei badal gaya.... aur huma kuch dikhna band ho gaya.... smoke ki vajah sa meina aankhe band karli aur kuch ek minute baad Willy na mjhe aankhe kholnako kaha....

Shubham: Aankh kholta hi mei Willy sa kahana laga.... tm pagal ho kya, kya kar raha tha...... abhi itna bolkar mei samna dekha to mera dimak na kaam karna hi band kar diya aur mei jo abhi Willy ko kahana vala tha vo mera moooohhhh mei raha gaya aur mera moooohhh itna bada khul gaya tha ki ek baar ka liya to chota haathi bhi usma sama jaye.......

Willy : Welcome to the Gallery of Antiques mera dost, ab bolo kya kaha raha tha tm ki mera dimak kharab ho gaya hai ya yaha kuch saman nahi milega...... ha bolo bolo......

SHubham: Willy ki kahi baat jaisa meina suni hi nahi thi, bus mei to aankh faada sab kuch dekh raha tha..... mjhe to samaj hi nahi aa raha tha ki ya kaisa ho sakta hai.... jo mei dekh raha tha.....

Chaliya hum bhi dekhta hai essa kya khaas tha gallery mei....... sabsa pheli aur important baat ya ki jab hum gallery mei ghusa tha tab Sun ek dum humara sir ka upar tha, par ab jaha hum tha vaha abhi raat ho rahi thi, sooraj ki kirno ka koi namo nishaan hi nahi tha....( ya mjhe baad mei pata chala ki yaha humsha essa hi rahata hai..... yaha sooraj ki kiran kabhi nahi aati hai......), dusri baat jab hum yaha aaye tha tab sooraj nikala hua hona ki vajah sa kaafi garmi thi, par yaha hawa thandi thi aur saath hi baraf bhi gir rahi thi jo pura 2 mahina girti hai..... par sabsa chokana vali baat ya thi ki huma vaha sardi nahi lag rahi thi, kyunki vaha ka temparature hu sabko apni body ka hisab sa adjust hi lagta hai....... inn sabmei jo sabsa jada chokana vali baat thi vo ya ki jo gali abhi keval 5ft ki chodi thi ab vo kumsa kum 50ft chodi ho gayi thi.... aur vaha par chaaro taraf ujala ka liya lantern jal raha tha..... par ya lantern koi aam lantern nahi tha isma roshni aa to aag jalna ki vajah sa rahi thi par aag kiss chij sa jal rahi thi ya baat kisi ko nahi pata hai...... bus vo lantern humesha hi jali rehati hai....... humara dono taraf ki dewaar ab ek dum sa glass mei badal gayi thi aur usma sa dikhayi deti duniya ki ek sa ek besh kimati chija jo alag alag roshni mei chamak rahi thi..... aur sabsa badi baat vaha kissi bhi chijj ko dekhna yaha chuna ka liya aap bs uss chij ka samna khada ho kar aaj uss chij ka bara mei socho aapko yaha ehsaas hoga ki aap uss chij ko touch karka feel kar raha ho aur vo chij aapka haath mei hai.....

Abhi mei bs sab chija dekhna mei khoya hua tha ki.....

Willy :kya hua kaisi lagi jagah,,,, hai na ek dum khubsurat..... par abhi iski asli khubsurati dekhna ka samay nahi aaya hai..... duniya ka do khaas din par ya jagah itni khubsurat ho jati hai ki yaha sa jana ka man nahi karta hai..... Par chalo ab hum aage chalta hai..... kyunki huma kaam iss antique gallery mei nahi hai..... huma to phele jana hai Loham galli mei aur uska baad jana hai Chhaliya Gali mei.... aur itna kaha kar vo aage bad gaye aur mei picha picha..... aur vo aage chalta hua mjhe uss gallery ka bara mei aur bhi kahi baate batata ja raha tha.....

Hum chalta chalta ek choraye par aage..... vaha khada hokar unhona mjhe bataya dhyan sa dekhna aur yaad rakhna ab, sabsa pheli baat mera saath hi chalta rahana aur kahi bhi essa hi mat ruk jana varna tm yaha kho jaoga, ya jagah itni badi hai ki tmhai dhundta dhundta meri umar nikal jaygi par hum nahi mil sakega...... dusri baat jo tm samna vali gali dekh raha ho na kabhi bhi bhul kar uss gali mei mat jana kyuki vo gali choro, lootera, aur demons aur black magic ka use karna valo ki hai..... vaha jana ka baad tmhara kya hoga ya batana ka liya aaj tak koi vaha sa nahi aaya hai.....

Shubham: WIlly ki baat sunkar to meri fatkar haath mei aa gaye...... mjhe sach mei vo jagah dekh kar dhur sa hi ehsaas ho gaya ki agar mei kabhi galti sa bhi vaha fas gaya to kya hoga..... Sath hi sath meina soch liya mei kabhi bhi iss gallery mei akela nahi aaunga, kuch chaiya hoga to kissi ka sath hi aaunga varna mei to nahi aaunga....

Abhi mei sab soch rha tha itni der bhi Willy na aur na jana kya kya bataya uss gallery ka bara mei jo mei sun hi nahi saka... PAr last ki kuch baate sun saka vo ya thi ki jo galli mera left most side hai.... uss galli ko Loham gali kahata hai.... uss gali ka naam yaha ka famous Sword maker Mr. Loham ka upar rakha gaya tha..... iss gallery mei duniya bhar ki talwar, dhanush, chaku, bhala, armor aur na jana kya kya weapons milta hai..... phir dusri ek gali ki taraf dekh kar kaha ya hai, Challiya gali, iska naam essa isliye hai kyunki yaha par har tarah ka thag paaye jata hai.... aur yaha bhut sambhal kar chalna padhta hai..... par iss galli mei hi duniya ki sabsa acha writer ki kitaab milti hai jo duniya mei aur kahi nahi milti hai...... abki unhona mera sidha haath ki taraf vali gali ki taraf dekh kar kaha iss gali ko vasa to Maya nagri kahata hai, par iska naam hai Shalaka Nagar..... iss gallery mei duniya bhar ka magician ka kaam ka saman aur unki jaadu karna ki chadi milti hai..... iss galli ka bara mei hum baki baat aur kabhi karega aur vaha tmhai lekar kabhi aur chalunga, abhi hum yaha sa chalta hai,...... apni Lohan Galli mei, jaha huma tmhara weapons aur armor lena hai..... dekhta hai tmhai kiss category mei chunna gaya hai, abhi vo kuch bolta aur usse phele meina ek gali ki taraf ishara karka pucha iss galli ka kya naam hai aur yaha kya milta hai, bataunga par abhi nahi kuch der mei......
itna kaha kar vo aaga chal deta hai aur mei unka picha humsha ki tarah par iss baar mei ek dum savdhan hokar chal raha tha, meri najar sirf Willy ko hi dekh rahi thi aur mei bs uska picha chala ja raha tha, kyunki mei yaha khona nahi chata tha..... Loham galli mei essa kuch khaas nahi tha kyunki har taraf bs shops hi shops thi jaha par har tarah ka weapons aur unsa related material mil raha tha, Abhi hum thodi aage chale tha ki Willy ek dukan ka samna ruk gaya.... uska bahar naam Likha tha Loham Weaponary Store.....

Willy : Lo aa gaye hum iss market is sabsa badiya aur sabsa bharosa mand dukan par, yahi vo jagah hai jaha sa iss galli ka naam pada hai..... aur hum bhi andar ki taraf chal diya....

Humna andar jakar dekha to vaha koi nahi tha.....  bus tha to alag alag tarah ka weapons aur armor..... Vaha kissi ko na paa kar Willy na awaj lagai.....Mr. Loham Junior 200..... ya baad mjhe baadmei pata chali ki vo unki pidi ka 200 va person hai jinka naam Loham hai..... Willy ki awaj sunkar ek insan kahi picha sa aage aaya...... uss insan ko dekh kar lag raha tha ki vo kaafi young hai..... aur abhi abhi yaha join kara hoga....

Mr. Loham: Ary Prince of ELF aap phir sa yaha, kya baat hai koi naya dhanush lena aaye hai kya? aur aaj maharani nahi aayi.....

Willy : Hello Loham, mei aaj apna liya yaha nahi aaya hu...... mei to mera dost ka sath aaya hu..... aaj inko aapka weapons aur armor ki jarurat hai..... to jara bataye ya kiss category mei hai.....

Mr Loham: Kuch der unhona mjhe bhut dhyan sa dekha aur fir bola..... chalo dekhta hai tmhara liya duniya ka kunsa armor bana hai....... kunsa armor tmhai chunta hai.......
Itna kaha kar unhona apni chadi nikali aur ek wall ki tarf kuch mantar padhkar chadi ghuma di...... magic ki awaj sa diwar vaha sa khisakna lagi aur ek badi si jagah humara samna aana lagi..... puri diwar vaha sa hatna ka sath hi vaha par humna dekha ki har taraf glass ka cover kiya hua armor tha aur har armor chamak raha tha..... unko dekh kar hi lag raha tha ki inn armor mei magic hai......

Ek baar fir Loham ki awaj aayi.... chalo dekhta hai kunsa armor tmhai chunta hai...... aur essa kaha kar unhona ek glass mei sa ek armor nikala aur usse mjhe pehana diya aur khud mjhc dhur khada ho gaye..... uss armor ko pehanata vaha bhut shor hona laga..... jiska chalta Mr. Loham nai usse nikal kar kaha nahi ya nahi.... chalo kuch aur dekhta hai..... essa karta hua unhona mei 4 armor pehna diya par koi bhi mjhe set nahi kar raha tha.....ya dekh kar mjhe lagna laga shayad mera liya kuch nahi bana hai...... Par Mr. Loham na ek baar fir kuch mantar padh kar meri taraf apni chadi ghuma di, jisse mjhe kuch nahi hua par Mr. Loham ka face par ek mushkurat aa gai,,,,, aur vo chilata hua bola,,,,, tum yahi ruko mei abhi aaya.....aur vo ya kaha kar jaha sab armor laga tha uss taraf bhag kar jana laga.... aur kuch andar jakar ek gali mei mud gaye.....

Shubham: Inko kya hau??? ya to essa bhaga hai jaisa inko koi khazana mil gaya ho....

Willy: ha yar, meina bhi aaj tak itna khush aur essa bhagta hu Mr. Loham ko nahi dekha....

Hum bus vahi khada unka intezar kar raha tha ki koi 10 minute baad Mr. Loham aata hua dikha aur unka haath mei ek armor tha aur unka face mei ek essi khushi jaisa ki vo kisi competition mei jeet gaye ho....

Mr. Loham: Ya lo isse pehan kar dekho...... vasa to meina jabsa ya dukan sambhali hai meina aaj tak iss armor ko kisi ko accept karta nahi dekha hai..... par lagta hai aaj ya tmhai hi milega....

Shubham: mei unka haath sa vo armor lekar pehanta hua, unsa ya puch baitha vasa aap kitna samay sa iss dukan ko sambhal raha hai.....

Mr. Loham : jada nahi yahi koi 5000 saal sa.....

Shubham : unki ya baat sunkar mei to jaisa behosh hi hona vala tha, jiss insan ko mei abhi javan samaj raha tha vo 5000 saal sa bhi jada bada tha..... ya sunkar mei bs sochna laga sahi mei ya jagah kaafi khatarnak hai..... vahi dusri taraf Willy Loham ki baat sunkar hasna laga tha....

Meina jaisa taisa khud ko sambhal kar vo armor pehan liya aur uss armor ko pehanta hi vaha par tej hawa chalna lagi aur ek madhur sa geet bajna laga, ya koi 1 minute tak hua hoga aur uska baad sab shant ho gaya...... Iss Shanti ko bhang karna ka liya Mr. Loham ki awaj aayi..... Finally iss armor ko iska malik mil gaya hai..... ya armor bhut khaas hai....

Willy : Essa kya khaas hai iss armor mei....

Mr. Loham : Ya armor mei shield  ki koi jagah nahi hai...... iss armor ki tarah ek armor crore saal phele kissi ko mila tha, vo bhut bada yodha bana tha..... lagta hai iski kismat mei bhi yahi likha hai....., vasa ya armor isko Rakshak category mei chunta hai.....

Willy : Ya to bhut achi baat hai...... mera dost duniya ka sabsa bada rakshak bana maja aa jayega.....

Iska baad vaha kuch khaas baat nahi hui, Armor ki tarah mera liya koi 5 talwar aur 3 dhanush liya gaye..... par unko chuna mei jada samay nahi laga aur hum vo saman lekar vaha sa bahar aa gaye.....

ABhi ka liya itna hi dosto...... aaj raat mei ek update aur aayega jisma Willy aur uska baaki sabhi 6 logo ka introduction ho jayga aur sath hi kuch khaas logo ka aur thodi information college aur baaki chijo sa related jisse aage story samajhna mei dikat nahi hogi.....

Chaliya fir milta hai aage aur aapka comments ka intezar rahega bhaiyo.....

Agar ya story aapko pasand nahi aa rahi hai ya iska plot acha nahi lag raha hai to mjhe bata de mei isse band kar dunga, kyunki readers padh kar update ka bara mei nahi batata hai to lagta hai jaisa ya acha nahi lag raha hai.... agar essa hai dosto to bata de mei isse band kar dunga.....

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Nice update waiting more

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Update 8

Pichla update tak aapna padha ki hum gallery mei ghusta hai aur kitni ajeeb jadui thi gallery, humna mera liya armor aur baaki sabhi weapons jiski mjhe jarurat padhna vali thi apni training ka liya, vo sab lekar hum vaha sa bahar aa gaye...

Ab Aage....

Abhi hum bahar aakar khada hi hua tha ki, picha sa Mr. Loham ki awaj phir sa aayi, jiski vajah sa hum picha mud kar dekha to vo humara pass hi aa raha tha aur unka haath mei kuch tha....

Mr. Loham : Maaf kijiyega aapko essa awaj lagi, par mei aapko bus ya dagger dena cahata tha....... aur unhona ek bhut hi khubsurat dagger meri taraf bada diya.....

Shubham: Par ya aap mjhe kyu de raha hai, humna to iska liya aapko paisa bhi nahi diya hai aur mera saman mei dagger to already aa gaya hai na.....

Mr. Loham : Jee ya humari taraf sa aapka liya ek gift hai....

Shubham : Mera liya, par kyu?

Mr. Loham : Actually baat ya hai ki aaj humara shop ki anniversary hai, aur ussi khushi mei aaj ka din jo bhi humara dukan sa kharidi karta hai hum usse ya deta hai..... ya pratha saalo sa chali aa rahi hai..... aur ya dagger khaas hum hi banvata hai, iss din ka liya....

Willy : Yaar ya to cheating ho gai, meina kyu phele kharid liya saman, mei bhi aaj ka din hi kharidta to mjhe ya mil jata.....
Vasa Mr. Loham kitna saal ki anniversary mana raha hai aap aaj???

Mr. Loham : Rajkumar iska javab mera pass to nahi hai, par ha aap maharani sa puchega, unko pata hoga.... kyunki generation (peediyo) sa unka parivar yaha sa saman le raha hai..... unka pariwar phele customer tha humara....
Chaliye chodiya ya sab baate aur aap ya rakh le, ab mei jata hu....
Aur itna kaha kar unhona dagger mjhe de diya aur chale gaye....

Unka Jana ka baad

Shubham: Prince of Elf ya lijiye dagger, aapko ya pasand aa gaya hai na to isse aap rakh le....

Willy : Ary nahi nahi, vo to hum bas essa hi yaar, ya tmhai mila hai isse tm hi rakho..../

Shubham: Prince aap isse meri taraf sa humari dosti ki suruvat ka taur par ek choti si baith (gift) samaj kar hi rakh le, vasa bhi ya aapka haath mei bhut acha lagega....

Willy : Ary yar, tmna mjhe fasa diya hai..... chalo ab tmna isse humari dosti ki baith(gift) kaha hai to hum isse rakh leta hai.....par ab jab bhi hum tmko kuch dega to tmhai usse rakhna hoga.....

SHubham : jee thik hai....

Willy.... Chalo phir thik hai....chalo ab hum chalta hai challiya gali mei...... aur ab hum nikal leta hai... challiya gali ki taraf....

Chaliya dosto jab tak hum dono challiya gali tak pahuchta hai, aap sabko bhi mei uss khubsurat dagger ka bara mei bata deta hu....
Vo dagger ek sikhari chaku ki tarah tha.... bus jaha dhar vala hissa hota hai vo thoda choda tha aur uski dhar kaafi sharp thi.... ek halka sa chuan matr sa hi vo samna vala ko bada jhakam (injury) de sakta hai..... aur par jo uss dagger kokhubsurat banata tha vo tha uska uppar ka hissa aur jiss cover mei vo dagger rakhta hai..... phele baat karta hai upar ka hissa ki..... vo hissa par gold ki bhut achi aur barik karigari ki hui thi aur uska ek dum upar ki taraf do pathar laga tha, actual mei vo pathar do diamond tha ek laal colour ka aur ek green colour ka..... aur uss hissa ki shape kuch dragon ki tarah dikh rahi thi...... vahi jo cover tha vo pura leather ka tha aur uska upar gold ki haath ki baarik kaarigari karka uska upar L likha gaya tha, aur ha ek baat to batana bhul gaya vo dagger raat ka andera mei chamakta tha, un dono laga hua diamond ki vajah sa ....

Chailya vapas aa jata hai story par, hum dono baate karte hua pahuch jata hai, challiya galli mei jaha Willy mjhe ek dukan ka samna chod kar aur ek paper par kuch likh kar chala jata hai kahi, kuch kharidna ka liya.... jaana sa phele WIlly na mjhe kuch instruction diya tha......

Willy: ya jo dukan hai isma tmhai jo bhi kitab kaam aana vali hai vo mil jaygi aur ha yaad rakhna apni kitab lekar bahar aakar kahi bhi chale mat jana yahi mera intejar karna..... mei bus kuch minute mei aaya..... mei ek bhut jaruri chij leni hai vo lekar aata hu......

Shubham: Willy ki baat sunkar mei bhi kitaab ki dukan mei chal deta hu aur vaha par apna kaam ki kitaba dhundna lagta hu.... abhi mei kitaba dhund raha tha ki mjhe kuch do kitab dikhti hai jo bhut alag thi mei unhe utha kar dekhna lagta hu.... ki tabhi ek awaj aati hai....

AWaj : Ya awaj dukan ka owner ki thi..... kya cahaiya beta aapko..... laao mjhe dikhao mei dhund deta hu....

Shubham: Mei unka pass jakar paper unha de deta hu.....

Owner: vo kuch bolta hai aur chali table ki taraf ghuma deta hai.... to vaha par pata nahi kaha kaha sa udti hui kitaab aati hai aur usss table par aakar jama ho jaati hai apna aap....

SHubham: Udti hui kitab dekh kar ek baar to mjhe ajeeb laga, par phir meina socha yaar yaha to sab kuch hi magic sa hota hai.... islye yaha kuch bhi ho sakta hai......

Owner: Beta kya ya dono books bhi leni hai tmhai
Ya vahi do kitab hai jo mei dekhna ka liya uthai thi, aur ya mera haath mei hi thi...

Shubham: pata nahi kaisa meina haa mei garden hila di aur unhona vo dono kitab bhi mjhc lekar baaki sabhi kitaabo ka sath rakh kar usko acha sa pack kar diya....
Meina vo packet le liya aur unko paisa dekar bahar aakar Willy ka Intezar karna laga....

(Vo dono kitaab kunsi thi ispar sa parda aage uthega.... to abhi ka liya humara pass ek saval aur jama ho gaya hai.... jiska javab huma aage aana vala 10 update mei mil jayega....)

Mei Bahar khada hokar Willy ka intezar kar raha tha aur Willy koi 10 minute mei aata hai...

Willy : Maaf karna yaar mei thoda jada hi dhur chala gaya tha..... islye late ho gaya.... mil gai tmhai sari kitaab...

Shubham : Ary koi baat nahi mei bhi abhi hi aaya hu.... aur ha mil gai kitab....

Willy ; Vasa tmhai bhuk nahi lagi hai kya.... Mera to stomach mei haathi khud raha hai....
Chalo chal kar kuch khata hai, varna mjhe college tak utha kar tmhai hi lekar jana hoga....

SHubham: Ary nahi nahi, chalo hum chal kar kuch khata hai..... par kaha chale yaha to kuch dikh hi nahi raha hai jaha hum kuch kha saka.....

Willy : Ary chalo yaar mera sath, ab mei tmhai iss puri Gallery Of Antiques ki sabsa badiya galli mei lekar chalta hu, jaha tm stomach bhar kar kha sakta ho....

Ab hum dono phir sa aage chal deta hai aur pahuch jata hai vapas ussi circle par jaha sa humna suru kara tha....

Willy : Chalo ab hum MASKA galli mei chalta hai apni pait pooja karna ka liya....

SHubham: Maska Gali ya kaisa naam hai aur ya kaha hai.... aapna to phele nahi bataya tha.....

Willy : Ary ya vahi galli hai jiska baramei tmna mjhc pucha tha aur meina kaha tha ki tmhai iska andar bhi lekar chaluga aur baadmei bataunga ki ya kunsi galli hai..... Fir vo aur baat karna ko nahi ruka aur vo aage chal pade aur mei unka picha.....
Vo ek choti si dukan mei ghus gaye aur vaha jakar ek table par baith gaye, mei bhi unka samna vale seat par baith gaya....

Willy : Batao kya khana cahaoga.......

Shubham: Mjhe to yaha ka khana ka baramei kuch nahi pata hai..... kya acha hota hai aur kya kharab?? Aap hi kuch mangwa lijiye.....

Willy: Chalo to thikl hai.... Vo ek ladka ko do plate to Maksa aur do glass srirum lana ko kahata hai....
Ladka unki baat sunkar ek paper unha de deta hai aur khud chala jata hai....

Willy : yaar abhi to humara orderaana mei ek ghanta lagega.....

Shubham : Aapko kaisa pata ki ek ghanta lagega....

Willy : Mjhe paper dikhata hua, ya dekho ispar ek no. likha hai.... aur fir samna ki taraf ishara karta hua yaha ek no. hai....
ya jo paper vala no. hai ya humara order no. hai aur jo samna no. hai abhi uss order no. vala ka khana tayar hua hai.... samjha.....

Shubham : Jee smjha.... vasa ek baat to bataye.... aap kya lena gaye tha....

WIlly : Ary ha yar acha hua tmna yaad dila diya..... mei to bhul gaya tha.....
Itna kaha kar unhona apni pocket mei sa kuch nikal kar meri taraf bada diya aur bola.... ya lo tmhara gift humari taraf sa humari dosti ki suruvat par...

Shubham: Ary Prince iski koi jarurat nahi thi..... aapna mjhe dost maan liya usse jada kissi chij ki jarurat nahi hai.....

Willy : Dekho tmna vada kara tha ki hum jo bhi dega tm vo le loga.... to bus ab hum de raha hai to isko to tmhai lena hi hoga.....

Ab mei marta kya nahi karta islye meina usse le liya...

Willy : ARy isse kholkar to dekho kya hai..... kya pata tmhai pasand hi naa aaye ek to....

Shubham : Ary aap laye hai to jarur acha hi hoga..... Phir meina usko khola aur jo usma nikla usse dekh kar to mera man khushi sa jhumna laga tha.....

Willy : Kyu kaisa laga gift, acha nahi hai na?

Shubham : Ary aap acha ki baat kar raha hai..... ya to bhut acha hai..... sach mei bhut khubsurat chij hai.....
Par aap isse kaisa le aaye.....

Willy: Humna tmhai isse GALLERY OF ANTIQUES mei bhut khaas najar sa dekhta hua dekha tha, to huma tmhai kuch dena tha to le liya....

SHubham: Par Prince ya to bhut kimati hai..... aapko isse kharidna ki kya jarurat thi....

Willy : ARy yr koi chij kimati nahi ho sakti hai humara dost ki khushi sa badkar, tmhai pasand aaya humara isse kharidna safal hua....

Ary sorry friends aapko to batana hi bhul gaya ki vo aakhir kya gift tha..... Jo unhona mjhe diya tha vo ek mouth organ tha..... par jo khaas baat thi vo ya ki ek to vo pura sona ka bana hua tha aur usma karib 10 alag alag tarah ka diamond laga hua tha.... jiska chalta vo bhut sundar dikh raha tha aur ek khaas baat vo iss duniya ka sabsa sundar mouth organ tha.... iss duniya mei isse jada acha mouth organ koi nahi tha....

Willy : Ary yr chalo ab isse baja kar kuch acha sa suna do.....

SHubham : Kya yaha? yaha to itna log hai......

Willy : to kya hua..... sabka man bhi sunkar aur khusnuma ho jayega....

Ab unki baat ko na nahi kaha ja sakta tha, islye meina vo mouth organ bajana suru kar diya...... aur meina ek pura gana jo mjhe aata tha vo uspar baja diya..... Mei mouth  organ bajata samay humsha ek alag hi duniya mei kho jata hu.... aaj bhi mera sath essa hi hua..... Par jab meina bajana band kara aur samna dekha to sabhi log humari hi taraf muda hua tha aur apni aankhe band kiya hua uska anand le raha tha.... mera bajana band karta hi sabhi logo na mera liya taaliya bajai.....

Willy: Sach mei yaar tm bhut acha mouth organ bajata ho..... sunkar man ko bhut khushi milti hai....

Shubham : Thank you Prince..... Par mei aapsa kuch baate janana cahata hu.... to kya mei puchu....

Willy :  ha ha kyu nahi..... Jin sab baato ka answer mera pass hoga mei un sabka bara mei tmhai jarur bata dunga......


Chaliya dosto aaj hum yahi par ruk jata hai aur aage ka update mei jaanta hai ki essa kya saval puchna vala hu mei ......

Jaana ka liya bana raha aapki apni story par....

Aap sabka valauable comments ka inteja rahega....

Agla update mei bs ab sirf intro aur kuch info hogi par vo bhut jaruri hogi....

[abhi_mishra_91]

Nice story....
Continue.....

[Raj355407]

bhai bahut hi mast story hai....

[Raj355407]

ye story shayad xossip pe bhi chal rahi thi.....

[Raj355407]

please story complete jaroor karna

[dahiya242]

Update 9

Pichle update tak aapna dekha ki kaisa mei aur Willy sara saman kharid kar ek shop mei ghus jata hai kuch khana ka liya, jo ki Willy ka hisab sa yaha ki sabsa badiya jagah thi khana ka liya... vaha mjhe duniya ka sabsa kimati mouth organ milta hai....

Ab AAge....

Shubham : Prince kya aap mjhe bata sakta hai ya category ka kya matlab hai......?

Willy : Ha kyu nahi, dekho is duniya mei essa mana jata hai ki har insan ka janam kisi na kissi khaas kam ka liya hua hai.. aur sath hi vo kissi na kissi ek kaam mei mahir bhi hota hai.... par iska ya matlab nahi hai ki vo ek sa jada kaam nahi kar sakta hai.... vo ek sa jada kaam karna ki kabiliyat bhi rakhta hai..... par ya kuch hi logo mei hoti hai...... thik essa hi weaponary art ka logo ko bhi iss duniya mei alag alag category mei bata hua hai....

Category sa matlab yaha hota hai ki usko kiss kaam ka liya chuna gaya hai..... ya kaha sakta hai vo kiss kaam mei maharat haasil karega..... Weaponary Art mei hoti to bhut sari category hai, par in sab category ko agar ek jaisa group mei dala jaye to ya keval 4 tarah ka hi raha jata hai.....

Inka naam hai...

1) : Rakshak

2) : Yodha

3) : Ruler (raja type)

4) : Guptchar....

Shubham : In sabmei kya antar hai.... Ya sab to ek jaisa hi hota hai, sabka kaam to ek hi hai.....

WIlly : Nahi in sabmei bhut antar hai..... Sabsa pheli baat  to ya jaan lo ki iss category mei kun kiss position par aata hai....

no. 4 par aata hai.... Ruler
no. 3 par aata hai.... Yodha
no. 2 par aata hai.... Guptchar
no. 1 par aata hai.... Rakshak.....

Inn sabka kaam ko dhyan mei rakh kar hi inki ranking ki gayi hai.....
Iss duniya mei ek Rakshak ki bhumika sabsa important hai, aur bhut kam logo ko ya category milti hai......

Ya category duniya mei jo log kamjor hota hai unko dhyan mei rakh kar banai gai hai....

Ruler vali category mei sabsa nicha aana ka karan hota hai ki sabhi raja ek dusra ka rajya ko paana cahata hai jiska chalta yudh hota hai aur jo kamjor log hota hai unko sabsa jada nuksaan uthana hota hai islye.....
Inka kaam hota hai bus ek rajya ko sambhalna, jiska liya bhi usko manage karna ka liya inka pass hajaro tarah ka sadhan hota hai jiski vajah sa ya sabsa low category mei mana jata hai....

Yodha : inka teesra no. par aana ka karan ya hai ki ya apni desh ki praja ka liya jeeta hai aur unki raksha bhi karta hai, par sath hi sath ya ek raja ki baat par kisi ko bhi mar deta hai bina socha samjha.... islye ya iss position par aaye hai...

Guptchar : Inki category dusri isliya hai kyunki pheli baat to ya apni jaan jokhim mei daal kar alag alag jagah sa info collect karta hai aur usko sahi sa samaj kar vo khabar raja tak pahuchata hai jiska chalta raja dusra rajya ki kabhar rakhta hai.... ya iss information ka through hi na jana kitna logo ki jaan bacha leta hai ....

Rakshak : Ya sabsa upar islye aata hai kyunki inka kaam hota hai raksha karna, ya kisi raaja ya rajya ka liya nahi hota hai, inka kaam hota hai duniya mei sabhi log jo khud lad nahi sakta hai unki raksha karna aur iss duniya mei shanti banaye rakhna..... Ya kaam bhut mushkil hota hai aur ya bina kisi svarth ya fayda ka ya logo ka liya jeeta hai, ya apna jeevan mei jada tar apni har khushi kurban karka bhi logo ka chehra par muskan bani raha yahi koshish karta hai....

Shubham : Chalo ya to samaj gaya, par ya baat abhi bhi nahi samjha ki armor sa ya kaisa pata chalta hai kun kis category ka hai.....

Willy : Ya saval tmna bhut acha pucha.... actually iss duniya mei hajaro tarah ka armor hota hai ya baat to tmna dekhi hi hogi abhi ki vaha kitna tarah ka armor tha.... har vo insan jo weaponary art mei mahir hota hai vo har tarah ka weapons mei mahir nahi hota hai, tmna kabhi dekha ho to har tarah ka insan ka pass uska apna ek weapon hota hai jisma usse maharat haasil hoti hai, vo talwar kunsa hoga ya huma armor sa hi pata chalta hai.... har tarah ka weapons ko rakhna ka liya armor mei jagah hoti hai aur isse hi pata chalta hai kun kis weapon mei maharat haasil karta hai....  ab kaisa pata chalta hai ki kun kis category mei hai, to uska liya aapka armor ki power  kunsi hai bus ussi sa pata chalta hai kun kaha aata hai..... Actually jab armor banta hai to usko ek khaas tarah ki energy milti hai aur duniya ka sabsa acha armor ki energy LAND OF MOUNTAINS AND RIVER naam ka rajya mei milti hai......

Total Paanch tarah ki energy hoti hai iss duniya mei jo armor mei paayyi jati hai...... Jisma sa 4 energy to humari life elements hi hota hai.... Vo hota hai Water, Air , Fire, Earth..... Par jo paanchvi energy hoti hai vo ek dum alag hai, vo kya hai aur kya kar sakti hai ya kisi ko nahi pata hai..... uss energy ka armor aaj tak kissi na nahi dekha hai......

Jiska armor par fire energy hoti hai vo Ruler category hoti hai, Jo Water category hoti hai vo yodha ko denote karti hai, jo air energy hoti hai vo Guptchar ko denote karti hai aur sabsa aakhiri Earth denote karti hai Rakshak ko kyunki vo humsha land ki taraf sabka liya saman rahata hai.....

Jab hum armor pehan leta hai to humari energy jo huma iss jivan mei phele sa mili hai vo energy aur armor ki energy match hona par ek music play hota hai, jaisa tmhara armor pehnana par hua tha bs ussi sa pata chalta hai.... ek baat aur bata deta hu jisko jiss energy ka armor mila hai uska upar uss tarah ka magic kuch bhi harm nahi kar skta hai.....

Shubham : Ab samjha dhang sa ab ya bhi bata do mjhe kunsa weapon mei marath milegi .......??

Willy : Ya javab mera pass nahi hai, kyunki tmhara armor ek dum alag hai, essa meina kabhi nahi dekha hai kyunki ismei lagbhag har weapon ki jagah hai par jo sabsa alag hai vo hai ki ismei koi bhi shield rakhna ki jagah nahi hai.... mei to samaj hi nahi paa raha hu ki ya kaisa armor hai..... Mjhe lagta hai huma Isabella sa hi pata chal sakta hai iss armor ka bara mei......

Shubham : Yar ya Isabella kun hai ab???

Willy : Ary maaf karna meina to tmhai apna group ka intro hi nahi diya...... Chalo tmhai ab apna group ko uska naam bata deta hu......

Dekho humara group ka naam hai FUN ADVENTURER, Ya naam group ka Madam Mariana na rakha hai..... Yaha college mei sabhi logo ko group mei raha kar hi apni education puri karni hoti hai..... Sabhi logo ka apna alag alag group ka naam hota hai jo teachers rakhta hai..... Sabhi logo ko apni pasand ka teacher ka sath education puri karna ki permission hoti hai, aur agar koi bich mei cahaiye to vo group badal sakta hai, par uska liya dono group ka teacher usko essa karna ki permission de deta hai to..... har group mei maximum 12 log ho sakta hai.... ismei aap senior ka sath aur unka bina sabhi tarah ka logo ko ka mila jula group ho jata hai......

Ab aap karta hai apna group ki..... Jaisa tmhai phele hi bataya humara group mei 8 log ho gaye hai tmhai mila kar......

Chalo to sabka intro de deta hu ab tmhai...

1) Wilson ( Willy) ; Prince of Elf, iska physique bilkul perfect gym tonned hai, iski height 5ft 6" ki hogi, ya bhai sahab dekhna mei  ek dum doodh ki taraf safaid hai...... inka kaan thoda jada nikla hua hai.....inka bara mei sabsa khaas baat ya hai ki ya kahi bhi khudko adjust kar leta hai, inmei ego naam ki koi bimari nahi hai..... ya kissi ko apna dil de chuka hai par kisko vo aage pata chalega.....inka weapon vasa to Dhanush hi hai, jisma inko maharat haasil hai...... Inki category hai Guptchar ki.... inko weapon mei dagger bhi acha chala sakta hai par maharat hassil nahi hogi... Abhi inki umar hai 17 saal.....

2) Nisham : ya Prince of Dedo hai.... inka rajya bhut bada nahi hai, par bhut chota bhi nahi hai.....yaha ka log bhut khushal hai..... Inka bara mei baat kara to ya bhai sahab dikhhna mei average hai.... inki height 5ft 5" hai, ya dikhna mei dusky color ka hai.... inka weapon hai talwar..... aur inki category hai Ruler ki.... Ya bhai sahab apna padosi rajya ki rajkumari sa prem karta hai, jiska naam hai Rimjhim.... Inko cockroach sa bhut dar lagta hai..... inki umar hai 18 saal...

3) Jhiku : Ya Shanderabad naam ka rajya ka pramukh jadugar ka beta hai.... Ya dikhna mei ek dum kaala hai, par dil sa ek dum saaf hai, iski height 5ft 8" ki hai..... ya thoda shant svabhav ka insan hai.... par agar inko gussa aa jaye to ya bhut khatarnak ho jata hai..... Inka pas weapons ki koi shakti nahi hai..... par inka pass magic power hai apna pita aur maa ki tarah, par inki magical power bhut khatarnak hai...... ya apni magical power sa kissi bhi insan ka dimak sa khel sakta hai....
Inki bhi ek premika hai jiska naam hai Avantika.......ya bhai uski har baat manta hai......inki shadi usse honi fix hai.... inki umar hai 20 saal

4) Isabella : ya hai Princess of Land of Mountains and Rivers ki, ya dikhna mei ek dum barbie doll ki tarah dikhti hai, inko koi dekhle to yahi smjhega ki ya to ek dum chui mui hai.... jisko jara sa touch karo to dar jaye..... par ya hai uski bilkul ulti..... Ya ek dum fair color ki hai..... Inki height 6ft ki hai..... regular exercise karna ki vajah sa inka figure stats hai 34-24-36, ya madam bhi guptchar category mei aati hai..... Inka pass weaponary mei to dagger weapon mei expert hassil hoti hai..... par ya without weapon combat mei bhi ek dum mahir hai..... inko duniya ki sari non weaponary combat skill mei expertise hai..... Inko aaj tak koi essa nahi mila jisse ya pyar kar saka..... ya apna prince charm ki talash mei hai abhi bhi.... inki umar abhi keval 16 saal hai....

5) Rimjhim ; Ya madam Princess of Swarna hai...... Inka baremei baat kara to ya dikhna mei khubsurat hai... inka color thoda yellowish hai.... Ya madam ki strenght hai inka magic...... Inka pass healing magic hai jo ki bhut rare category magic hai..... ya weapons mei interested nahi hai..... Inki figure stats 32-26-34 ki hai.... aur inki umar bhi 18 saal ki hai....

6) Avantika : Ya madam Orion desh ka mantri ki beti hai..... Par inko vaha ka raja na apnibeti ki tarah ki mana hai...... islye ya kaha ja sakta hai ki ya vaha ki princess bhi hai..... Inka bara mei bata du ya wheatish color ki hai.... but inka facial impression bhut acha hai..... ya madam weapons mei talwar chalana mei mahir hai..... inki category Yodha vali hai..... Inki hi shadi Jhiku sa honi hai...... par ya abhi sa usse apna sab kuch manti hai aur iski har choti badi baat ka khayal rakhti hai..... Inki stats hai 35-27-34..... Inki height hai 5ft 5" aur inki umar hai 18  years...

7) Nancy: Ya madam Princess of Arington hai..... Ya dikhna mei bhut pretty hai.... Inka color fair hai par sath hi inka gaal humsha gulabi hi rehata hai..... Inki Height hai 5ft 9".... Ya magic bhi karti hai aur weapons mei bhi expert hai..... Inki category hai Yodha vali..... Inka magic hai water element ka..... inko jo weapon mila hai vo hai axe..... Inki figure stats hai 34-28-36..... Ya madam ki age abhi 18 hai..... Ya madam apna dil Prince of Tareham ko de chuki hai, par aaj tak na unsa kabhi baat kari hai, aur na hi vo inko janta hai..... ya ek tarfa pyar hai.....

Shubham ; Humm ab samjha...... Iska matlab jo aaj subh tea stall mei logo ki saaf safai kar rahi thi vo hai Isabella..... aur jo unka haath jod raha tha vo hai Nisham aur Ladki 2 thi vo hai Rimjhim..... sahi kaha na.....

Willy : ek dum sahi kaha tmna ......

Idhar ya sab baate khatam hi hui thi ki humara order aa gaya......

Willy : Lo yaar tmhai sab kuch batana mei pata hi nahi chala ki kab itna tym ho gaya hai..... Chalo ab hum khana suru karta hai....

Aapko bata du jo humna mangwaya tha vo tha Srirum aur sath mei MASKA...... Maska ko aap earth ka sizzler kaha sakta hai veg....... aur SRIRUM ek alag si drink hai vaha ki jo ki strawberry ka juice, mint, lemon, sugar, and some amount of red wine jisma alchool bilkul na ka barabar hota hai....

Chaliye dosto ab hum log khana kha leta hai aap sab bhi kha lijiye.... fir milta hai next update mei abhi Intro update pura nahi hua hai..... abhi huma college aur baki bhut si chijo ka bara mei janana hai....

SO stay tunned for next update...... aap sabka valuable comments ka intejar rahega...

[Raj355407]

मजेदार update

[abhi_mishra_91]

Nice update ....
Mujhe lagta hai Hero k Paas 5th type material ka Armor hai...
Waiting for next update