[THE EVIL]

Shandar update bas ek shikayat hain itni jaldi nusarat sex ke liye taiyaar ho jaayegi years nahi socha tha wo bhi shadi ke ek din pehele,abhi tak bahot training baaki thi jaise ki bj aur kuch cheeze,so mujhe lagta tha itni jaldi years nahi hota.mujhe lagta tha Raghu aur blackmail karata nusarat ko.

Thanks, tumari shikayat is update ke sath dur hojayegi.

[THE EVIL]

Part 13

Nusrat ki ankhen yun lete lete badi hojati hain. Uske pure sharir men ek ajeeb si vibration ekdum se hoti jisse o puri hil jati hai. Uski kunwari chut ne aisa ahsas kabhi nahi kiya tha. Uffff ye kaisi feeling hai aur kaise o insab chizon se bachi rahi. Obviously o aisa dharm aur khandan se taluk rakhti hai jinme ye sab kafi had tak forbidden hai lekin o akhir kar ek ladki thi usne kabhi na kabhi to ye experience karna hi tha.

Nusrat ki ankhen ab apni kunwari chut par lage huwe us bade aur garam chiz par nazar dalti hain aur bapre ye kya raghu chacha ka oo oooo oo bada sa ling uffff kitna kala hai aur unlike mslms uske tope par skin chadi huwi hai uffff akhir kar o ek gair mazhbi jo hain. Uski pinkish chut par raghu chacha ka o kala lauda uffff behad kamuk lag raha tha.



Nusrat bhi feel karti hai ke uski yoni jaise tadap rahi thi raghu chacha ke us bade kale ling ko feel karne ke liye. Lekin lekin ye to galat hai na sirf raghu chacha ek gair mazhbi admi hai balke unke ghar ke naukar ke sath sath ek adhed umar bhi hai. Kahan raghu chacha aur kahan uska honewala shohar kabir jo behad gora chitta aur handsome bhi hai.

Nusrat ka jism uska sath nahi de raha tha ya yun kahen raghu chacha ne uspar ek jadu sa kiya tha. Otherwise uske jaisi shareef aur hayadar ladki raghu chacha ke changul kaise fans jati?? Wahin raghu chacha to pagal hochuka tha apne kale laude ko is bade mslm gharki itni khubsurt kunwari ladki ki behad saaf aur pinkish chut par rakhkar.

Uske maze ki seema nahi thi is waqt. Usne bhi kabhi nahi socha tha jis ladki ko choti si badi hoti huwi dekhta aya tha ekdin usi ladki ki chut par apna lauda ragad raha hoga. Raghu chacha dhire dhire apna lauda upar niche kar raha tha is waqt. Use pata tha use behad ahista se ye karna hoga warna nusrat itna zorse chillayegi ke sare ghar ko to kya sare shehar ko pata chal jayega.

Raghu usiliye firse nusrat ki nabhi par chumne lagta hai jhuk kar. Nusrat bhi firse apni ankhen band kar leti hai aur is ajeeb se sukoon ko enjoy karne lagti hai lekin raghu chacha ko awzar uski yoni parr uffff kitna garam aur bada hai. Kya kabir ka bhi itna hi bada hoga ufff uski kya halath hogi.

Yahi sab sochte huwe nusrat leti huwi thi ke uska mobile bajne lagta hai. Mobile ke ring ki awaz sunkar raghu chacha to nahi hatata lekin nusrat apna hath aage badhakar mobile dekhne lagti hai uspar uske kisii saheli ka call arha tha lekin raghu chacha jo kar raha tha uske chalte huwe o call ignore kar deti hai.

Ab usme nusrat ki kya galti o to zindagi ke anokhe aur chupe huwe raaz enjoy ka rahi thi jinse o aajtak vanchit thi.



Tabhi call bhi kat jaati hai lekin dubara se call bajne lagti hai. Nusrat abki baar call silent kar deti hai raghu chacha ye sab dekhkar khush hojata hai use pata tha nusrat ab khul rahi thi o jhijak nahi rahi thi kahin na kahin o bhi chah rahi thi ke raghu chacha uske sath ye sab kare.

Inhin sab men takreeban 5 minutes baad bedroom ka door koi khatkhatane lagta hai. Jiski sunkar raghu chacha bhi uth khada hota hai. Nusrat jo ankhen band karke leti huwi thi apni chut aur chuche chupa kar door ki taraf dekhne lagti hai. Raghu chacha ek baar nusrat ki taraf dekhkar window ke pas jakar bahar dekhne ki koshish karne lagta hai ke kon hai.

Wahin nusrat hadbadate huwe bed se utar kar jaldi jaldi apne kapde pehne lagti hai. Raghu bhi dara huwa bahar dekhne ki koshish men laga huwa tha tabhi...

"Nusrat nusrat darwaza kholo"

Awaz sunkar raghu chacha aur nusrat dono samjh jaate hain ke ye to munir shah hai. Nusrat apne abbu ki awaz sunkar behad dar jati hai ab o kya kre uska baap literally bahar khada hai aur o is waqt apne kamre men hai unke ghar ke nauakr ke sath o bhi shadi ke ekdin pehle.

Raghu chacha bhi munir shah ki awaz sunkar dar jaata hai isliye o jaldi se jakar ek taraf chup jata hai. Wahin nusrat jo abtak kapde pehan chuki thi o raghu chacha ko chupa ddekhkar thodi himmat karte huwe door kholti hai aur samne uske abbu khade the.

Nusrat...aa aabbuuu aaap is waqtt??



Munir...nusrat darwaza kholne men itni der??

Itna bolkar o andar aata hai aur idar udar dekhne lagta hai. Aisa nahi tha ke usko aisa koi shak tha lekin o uski beti ko ache se janta tha ke o hosakta hai kisi pareshani men ho isliye idar udar nazar daal raha tha...

Munir...kya huwa beti tumne jawab nahi diya itni der kyun lagi darwaza kholne men??

Nusrat...oo o abbuu main oo washroom mem thii oo isliye itni der lag gayi...

Munir...hmm acha tum soyi nahi abhi tak kal pata hai na jaldi uthna hai beti..

Nusrat.. haa abbu so hi rahi thi.

Munir..hmm thodi der ruk jawo beti o tumari ammi ko kuch baat karni thi tumse o arhi hogi...

Nusrat...ammii??

Munir...haan ammi ko..

Nusrat ko paseena ane lagta hai aur o ruk ruk kar raghu chacha jahan chupe huwe hain wahan dekhne lagti hai jise uske abbu somehow notice kar lete hain aur...

Munir...kya huwa betii kuch pareshani hai??

Itna bolkar o udar jane lagte hain. Nusrat ki to hawa tight hojati hai.



ab o kya jawab degi uske abbu jinse usne ye baat chupa rakhi hai kya kahegi o ke raghu chacha is waqt yahan kya kar rahe hain o bhi der raat? Jaise jaise uske abbu ke kadam udar badh rahe the waise nusrat ke dil ki dhadkan pure ufaan par thi. Usko paseena bhi kafi ane laga tha. Idar raghu chacha ki sitti pitti gul hochuki thi o samajh chuka tha ke uski to khair nahi thi ab kyunke o is chiz explain kar hi nahi sakta tha.

Akhir o kaise explain karega ke o is waqt nusrat ko kal dulhan banne wali hai uske kamre itni raat ko kar kya raha hai o bhi is tarha chupkar ?? Jaise hi munir shah wahan pohnchta hai tabhi darwaze par nusrat ki maa aajati hai.

Fairda...Ji aap abhi tak yahan hai salman aapko dhund raha tha jayiye aap main bhi aati hun thodi der men...

Munir shah wahan ek baar dekhkar hat jaata hai.

Munir...haa o main bhul gaya o kal ke bare men discuss karna tha ek baar acha aap dono maa beti apni batien khatam karke jaldi se nusrat sune do usko kal jaldi bhi uthna hai.

Farida..haa aap chaliye main aati hun thodi der men....

O fir wahan se chala jata hai aur idar nusrat aur uski maa kuch batien karne men lag jate hain. O bed ke dusri side face karke baithe isliye raghu chacha ko bhi chupi huwi jaga se nikalne ka mauka mil jata hai isliye o jaldi se bahar akar ek baar nusrat ko dekhta hai aur wahan se dhire se chala jaata hai aapna man markar.

Farida...o kya tha tumne awaz suni nusrat??

Nusrat...kk konssii awazz? Nahii too..



Farida...pata nahi kuch to awaz ayii..khair..

Fir wapas se dono apni baton men lag jaati hain. Raghu chacha bhi apni kismat ko koste huwe wahan se chala aya tha use pata tha ke uske hath se o chance gaya ab to koi na koi us room men aate hi rahega. Use bada gussa arha tha lekin o zabardsti bhi nahi kar sakta tha. Apni futi kismat ko koste huwe o chala jata hai.

Agla din nusrat ki shadi ka. Ek behad important din uski zindagi ka. O dulhan banne jarhi thi kabir ki. Aisa din jiska usko besabri se intizar tha. O akhir kar kabir ki honi jarhi thi. O aur kabir aajke baad ek sath zindagi guzarne wale the. Subha subha shadi ki tayyariyan dhum dham se shuru hojati hain. Sare log kam men lage huwe the koi kisi chiz ki kasrat nahi rakh raha tha akhir itni badi shadi jo thi.

Subha ki choti moti kasmo ke baad nusrat dulhan ki tarha tayyar hojati hai. Tayyar honeke baad kya bala ki khubsurt lag rahi thi nusrat. Aise jaise koi jannat se utri huwi hoor pari ho. Aisa ke koi bhi dekhe to uska dil machla jaye.



Udar ghnte baad kabir ki bhi baraat aajati hai nusrat ke ghar. Aisa karke dono stage par pohnch jate hain. Wahan un dono ek parde ke piche rakha jata hai aur fir nikah ka program shuru hota hai.

Insab ke bich bheed men raghu chacha khada dekh raha tha nusrat ko. Wahi nusrat jo dulhan bani hai aur kal raat usne lagbhag usko apne niche le hi aya tha aur billi shadi se pehli hi mari jati lekin shayad kismat ko bhi ye manzur nahi tha. Wahin bheed ke bich koi tha jise raghu dekh raha tha aur o shaks bhi raghu ko bade gusse se dekh raha tha.

Thodi der baad nikah ka function hojata hai aur logon ko khana khilaya jata hai. Dulha dulhan stage baithe huwe guest ke tohfe aue wishes receive kar rahe the. Dono ki jodi badi hi khusburt lag rahi thi. Ho bhi kyun na akhir itne bade khandan se jo taluk rakhte the. Unke aas paas rishtedar daron me sath gharwale bade hi sajhe dhaje huwe the.

Function khatam honeke baad bidayi ka waqt aata hai nusrat apne gharwale aur rishtedaron se alwida lekar kabir ke sath uski car men baithkar apne sasural ke liye chali jaati hai.

Present...

Kabir....Nusrat Nusrat...sogyii kyaa??

Nusrat apni ankhen kholte huwe baith jati hai...

Nusrat...huhh?? Haa o kabiirr nind lag gayi thiii...

Kabir...acha maine naha liya hai tum bhi naha lo ek baar...

Nusrat...haa tum sojawo main nahakr sojaungi...

Kabir...pakka na??

Nusrat..haan kabiirrr...

Nusrat fir towel sab lekar bathroom chali jaati hai. Wahan o mirror ke samne apna sar pakad leti hai tabse o uski zindagi ke ek kale raaz ke bare men soch rahi thi jo usne shadi se pehle ek tarha se raghu chacha ko allow kiya khud use pata nahi tha kyun?

Nusrat ke pas bhi uska jawab nahi tha. O ab apne sare kapde utar kar shower lene lagti hai. Usko shower lete huwe raghu chacha aur sudha aunty ki harkton ke bare men yaad aata hai. O to in chizon ko bhul jana chahti thi lekin ye raghu chacha pata nahi kahan se wapas aagye uski achi bhali zindagi men. Aye to aye ye wapas se kaise usko ye sab dikh raha hai use kuch samajh nahi arha tha.

O kapde nikal kar bilkul nangi hojati hai aur shower on karte hi pani ki bunde uske gore sharir par girne lagta hai. Ek sukoon use milta hai jab pani ki bunden uske ang ang ko chu kar biche beh rahi thi.



Thodi der pehle kabir ne use kitna ache se pyar kiya. Kitna khayal rakhta hai kabir uska. Uske pyar karne ke tarike men kitna cutness hai. Usko o thodi bhi taklif hone nahi deta.

Kabir ka o kitna gora hai lekinnn....nusrat apni soch ko jhidkte huwe wapas se shower lene lagti hai. Uske baad o khud ko poch kar wapas bed par jakar sojati hai. Agle din kabir office chala jata hai apne time nusrat bhi apne ghar ke kaam men lag jati hai. Dopehr ke waqt nusrat khana banakr free huwi hi thi ke usko Mr. Khanna ke chat par kuch halchal ki awaz aati hai.

Halanki o Mr. Khanna ke ghar par isse pehle itna kabhi bhi gaur nahi karti thi lekin jabse raghu chacha wala incident huwa tha na jane kyun nusrat kuch zyada hi chaukanna hogyi thi. O jaldi se apni chat par dabe paun wahan pohnch jati hai. Wahan o dekhti hai sudha aunty khadi huwi kapde sukha rahi thi lekin wahan o akeli nahi thi unke sath raghu chacha bhi khade the bilkul unke piche.



Uffff ye kya scene hai. Raghu chacha akhir ka kar kya rahe hain. Itne bade admi ki sanskari awrat ko yun besharm bana diya tha unhone lekin kaise?? Nusrat ek aur chiz bhi notice karti hai ke sudha aunty aaj peticot aur blouse men thi aur unko dekhkar lag raha tha ke unko isse koi pareshani nahi hai.

Nusrat unki batien sunneki koshish karne lagti hai jo halki halki aa bhi rahi thi.

Sudha...raghu jii aap badee hi badtamiz ho nitin aata hoga...

Raghu...sudha teri jaisi maal ke liye to badtamiz hona hi padega na. Tere pati jaisa dheela to main hun nahii...

Sudha...khabar dar mere pyare patidev ke bare men kuch bhi kaha to main chad jaungi tum par...

Raghu....acha to kisne roka hai chad jaa mujhpar sudha ranii hahaha...

Sudha..main chadkar aapko marungi raghu ji...

Raghu...mujhe maregi ya mujhse marwayegi..???



Sudha...raghu jii aap bhi naa

Itna bolkar o bhagne lagti hai lekin raghu uski kamar kaske pakad leta hai aur use utha kar khud hi use niche lejata hai. Idar nusrat ye sab dekh aur sunkar puri tarha hairan thi use ye sab abhi bhi digest nahi horha tha ke sudha jaisi shareef awrat aise raghu chacha ke sath kaise o more importantly itne jaldi??

O wahin khadi khadi soch rahi thi ke use mr. Khanna ke gharse ajeeb ajeeb si awazen aane lagti hain o pretty much samjh jati hai ke ye jaisi awazen hai isliye apne mun par hath rakhte huwe wahan se niche bhag aati hai. Ufff ye firse use kya horha tha. Ye kaisi feeling jisse o dobara rubru horhi thi. Raghu chacha is waqt zarur sudha aunty ki na jane kis tarha se lll lee rahee hongee???

Isi bich nusrat hall men akar deewar ke sahare khadi thi. Is waqt usne ek punjabi suit pehna huwa tha. Upar terrece par itna kuch sunne aur dekhne ke baad nusrat ki sansen tez thi aur uska ek hath dress ke upar se uski chut ke kareeb.



To be continued...

[THE EVIL]

Part 13 posted, click here for updated index.

[THE EVIL]

Important

 So guys, recently i have been noticing decline in replies, likes & even views which makes me think if readers have lost intrest in this story? I'm not hungry for views & likes but replies is something i always lookup to whenever i post updates & unfortunately readers response recently has been too dull for my liking.

I don't know the solution but either i post only one update per week or just discontinue story altogether because i dont wanna continue it without people showing little to no intrest at all.

 Recently maine notice kiya hai ke likes, replies aur views kafi kam arhe hain kya main iska matlab ye samjhu ke logon ko is story men koi interest nahi raha? Mujhe views aur likes ki bhuk nahi hai lekin replies ka mujhe besabri se intizar rehta hai ke logon ka kya response rehta hai mere har post ke bad.

Ab iska samadhan ya to main har hafte sirf ek hi update dun ya fir story band hi kar dun kyunke main story ko logon ke intrest dikhaye bina continue karna nahi chahta.

[THE EVIL]

So evil, I will let u know honest review and would appreciate if u take that as a feedback nothing else m really ur very big fan very very big fan m personally created this account just to write a review for u... So evil the thing is consistentcy u know at this platform there r many writer's many who r consistent they r not even 10% of ur level but they complete there story... Will u believe I personally know 7 people who use to read ur stories 1 were couple they use to enjoy but after ur last story "MUSKAN" ur reputation went down sorry to say that u know the reason y??

I'll let u know because u write story in such a way that u make people think even when they r busy u r such a gem writer I would say only two writers have such skills u and linking and he is also no 2 infront of u u don't have any competitor bro in ur skills but the thing is that u leave ur stories people get so annoyed the couple I was talking about and the rest guy's were like v won't read his stories again reason ?? Left all stories incomplete I was like he is really good writer but u break our heart brother by leaving stories incomplete see there are 2 way now first complete muskaan atleast finish her first sex with hariya or u can continue with this story and leave it again

My suggestion is stop writting I know v don't pay u and u entertain us but bro look even some stupid writers r coming with absolutely no sense no buildup but they r taking there story till sex so people read that ur stories r true addiction 1 guy out of 7 was like I really wasted my time and energy because of that evil 

If u want stop ur writing and i really say no one will care and if it's ur passion make ur audience feel confident in u complete muskaan bro rest it's called

And if u stop this story too v won't care u know y?
It's like that dialogue kisi ko itna na darao ki dar he khatam hojae so v don't even dear to loose u now... There r ample of writers whom people can support i would repeat not of ur skills but committed and dear u might have personal life and all v respect that but it's ur choice to write it and u asked u so that's on u now and this was the most honest opinion which u can get because 7 people 7 man sseeeveeennn I found were reading u so that's really a big thing for some hidden writer's people don't care about ur new stories most people want to read muskaan I would say the build up u gave to muskaan i challenge people here to bring 3 stories like that just 3 I bet 5k on that but incomplete 

I wrote my emotions out bro 

Rest ur call if u don't complete muskan sex stories than leave bro

Quit writing because m not someone who is just writing random comments m really ur fan and saying so 

Bye legend stop it now!

U were the best 
Bye bro ? ?

Quiet a comment huh? Agreed. Complete muskan story? If you have followed this thread i've mentioned once that i'll be completing muskan story once this one is finished. Not only muskan but also my other stories which didn't got proper endings.

Yes i've left my stories abruptly quiet few times & understand people being disappointed but i had my reasons which were lot more important than this. I was a reader just like you guys once then i decided to write my own oneday & here i am. Writing isn't something i would ever pick over my personal life. Story writing is only my kind of a small kink.

Inshort, i will continue writing & complete my previous stories as well & those who like will my style of story writing will read & those who don't i can't force them to do so. All i was mentioning is decline in replies which now i can understand because this forum doesn't seems to have active readers like it used to be before.

Thanks for the comment, really appreciate it.

[THE EVIL]

No bhai esa ni h ....we really love ur story ...ur the very first writer jiski story mene pdhi or uske baad ur my favourite na jane kitne baar mene apki bade Ghar ki Bahu betiyan story pdhi but wo incomplete rhi uska dukh hua....and ur 2nd story koel wali wo bhi mene Kai baar pdhi ....I don't want u to stop this story but what I want is aap iss story ko complete kre or fr baki stories ko bhi ek accha conclusion de .

I've already mentioned that i'll be continuing muskan story once this one gets to an end.

[THE EVIL]

I have completely agree with your view.What I thought Raghu will seduce nusarat and she will become crazy for sex with Raghu following kinky update.
But what happened suddenly she got married,Raghu returned and had an affair with old lady something doesn't match up.
May be you have delayed marriage part and continued with Raghu nusart part before marriage would had much fun.After marriage she is not sexually happy with Kabir remembers her affair with Raghu and suddenly he appears then they started sexual affair behind Kabir's back would had fun,that's my point of view.

Sudha isn't part of the plot, her charchter is a mere trap for nusrat to get seduced (totally unintentional) by raghu once again. Infact there are no more scenes of her & raghu. Everyone seems to have speculated this whole scenario horribly wrong.

[THE EVIL]

Then evil bhai aap kabir ki choti bahan ko introduce Kara sakte hain jo abhi just 18 ki huwi ho aur hostel se ghar holiday me aayi ho aur kafi Jyada gussel aur ghamandi aur nakchadhi ladki ho aur sath me andar se innocent bhi ho..ye sir ak idea hai mere taraf se baki aap to guru hain is field ke to aapko Jo thik Lage waise kahani ko aage bdhayee ..
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Acha sujhau hai main dhayan men rakhunga.

[THE EVIL]

Nahi evil bhai aisiii baat nahi hai aap pls story ko continue rakhiye.. bahut hi mast story hai yee hamari taraf se full response rahega absee aur week me 2 update rakhiye ak bahut kam ho jayegaa plsss bhai..

Don't worry weekly 2 updates ayenge.

[THE EVIL]

I’ll give you my honest review as I am someone who loves your writing and regard you as the top writer on this forum. 
When I first started reading this story it made me crazy and I couldn’t stop reading it over and over again. Just the way you wrote the expression of Nusrat when she saw her old tormentor Raghu chacha after so many years. Up until the last update when Raghu chacha almost had her under her control. It was so kinky and felt like I’m watching a movie. 
But then I started to sense that the story is going to be involving other characters so early in the story which will make Raghu and Nusrat’s encounters mix with others - like her neighbour aunty which is not my favourite part. 
There are so many good stories end up losing its original plot when the main character, Raghu in this story, will be fucking her neighbour and she will just look and masturbate. 
For example there was Akmas story - a hot housewife and bahu ends up gets fucked by watchman and plumber but then the writer for no reason involved her old 50 year old sass and the next two months it was all about sass and watchman while Akmas just watches them and masturbates.
I just don’t think when an old horny man has a young beautiful lady to use and all he’s interested in fucking an old lady with no chemistry whatsoever. 
Another story Aslam ki Rand Dr Kamya was such a huge success because it was just about Aslam and Kamya. ASLAM fucked her in every update and readers loved it. That’s because the main focus was always on Kamya and Aslam was only interested to fuck her and make her his rand. 
Of course other characters can be added in the story for a little cocktail but before the readers actually get to see the full chemistry between the two main characters, the other character hijacks the whole story in its early stages. 

When you say people are not replying, I believe that’s because they are only interested in Nusrat and Raghu. I’m not getting any kinks seeing Raghu and Sudha Aunty. They can of course come later in the story but what I’ve thought this story to be and where I’m seeing it’s headed kind of loses interest. 

I don’t know if you have seen Japanese Jav porn but they are the epitome of kinkiness and horniness. It’s mostly about cheating wife and old man young girl kind of theme and only focus on two characters. The evil guy keeps coming back to house to fulfils his lust and the girl eventually gives up and becomes his whore to use any way he wants. 

Please forgive me if I’ve upset you with my review. Of course you’re the brain behind this hottest story and maybe you know what we don’t know and you may prove us all wrong by giving a whole different kinky surprise updates in the future. 

Please don’t close this story. It’s the best story I’ve ever red. Please consider my thoughts and disregard if you find this nonsense. 

From your honest reader. 
Regards. 

Thanks for the comment. I agree sudha's charchter isn't everyone's type but who said she is second MC of the syory!? Even in muskan's story few people showed disinterest when i introduced a side charchter for particular buildup. The idea behind introduction of sudha's role is to give that little spark in nusrat's long forgotten lust cum submissiveness towards raghu which might have lowered post getting married to kabir.

I thought everyone will get this thing. It's quiet awkard for me to come & explain.

Thanks though, really appreciate it & don't worry this story will get its deserving end.

[THE EVIL]

Hey guys, fist of of all me posting declining views comment wasn't something out of rage or anger, i did it because i wanted to point out something. When i started this story response was overwhelming then after few updates views, replies were declining which didn't bothered me at first but after noticing it quite few times i felt like should talk it out with everyone.

Secondly i've never forced anyone to read my stories (not that i can). Stories like koel, BGKBB were enough proof for me to understand that a lot of people like my story writing. So yeah those who are into these type of stories will read & those who don't can read whatever story they like on this or any other forum.

Lastly I'm not closing this story for goodness sake, already told you guys i'll finish this story & then muskan's.

Thank you

[THE EVIL]

Thank you guys, update will come tonight! Apologies for the delay i was quiet busy watching T20 worldcup knockouts, final & few other things. I will read comments once I'm about to post update tonight.

Thanks

[THE EVIL]

Absolutely tasty and delicious update!! clp);

Absolutely tasty and delicious update!! clp);

Absolutely wonderful, beautiful and marvelous story!!

Congrats for completing 200k views.

Exciting and erotic update!

Superb writings!

Awesome storytelling.

yr):

Thanks

[THE EVIL]

wah! bahut bahut garam update

Loving story!
Bahot badhiya update!

Aur intezar nahi hota... Fata fat dhamake dar sex lao bro.

Stunning update! garam aur sexy writings.

Another blockbuster update

Congrats on 200k views already evil bhai

Beautiful update

you are amazing writer...
keep going...
replies and comments will flow like a hurricane on your stories evil bro....
we are eagerly waiting..

You're good writer
Countinue the story evil

It is really  a very nice story. Your amazing and thrilling writing is very much interesting and enjoyable! Please keep going buddy. clp); clp); clp);

Incredibly exciting writing! I am very much pleased for reading this story.

अविश्वसनीय रूप से रोमांचक और कामुक कहानी! यह कहानी कामुकता और उत्तेजना से भरी है।

chamatkar aur charming update

Thanks

[THE EVIL]

This update is extremely hot and erotic. You are really rocking the forum.

Bahut badhiya ek kamuk aur exciting update. Bahut mazaa agaya yaar

Very much erotic and exciting update. Please upload more pictures of actress Sajal Ali

Ashadaran, amazing update. Bahut khub writing.

Bahut bahut hot update dala aapne yaar. Bahut hi kamuk tharika se chal rahi is kahaani

Wah! Bahad hi garam aur kamuk update

No bhai esa ni h ....we really love ur story ...ur the very first writer jiski story mene pdhi or uske baad ur my favourite na jane kitne baar mene apki bade Ghar ki Bahu betiyan story pdhi but wo incomplete rhi uska dukh hua....and ur 2nd story koel wali wo bhi mene Kai baar pdhi ....I don't want u to stop this story but what I want is aap iss story ko complete kre or fr baki stories ko bhi ek accha conclusion de .

chamatkar update! lajawab,mast aur ekdom kamaal ka kahaani!! Hats off clp); clp); clp);

बिल्कुल शानदार कहानी।

ekdom jackass update! Like aur repu added yaar.

What an exciting update it is!!After this update.....I'm really excited for next update....agla bahot maza aane wala h

bahut bahut shandaar,lajawab aur behad hi garam update! Really excellent and super exciting writings!

aap such mein ek classic writer hain yaar, bahut bahut mast aur lajawab update dala aapne,bahut khoob

Absolutely marvelous and fabulous update! Superb! Fantastic and enticing writings!

And evil bhai post one update a week make readers eagerly wait for next update,value your time and writings.You are legend.

Waiting for update

super duper hot story! bahut bahut garam aur kamuk writings!

Thanks

[THE EVIL]

Awesome,just amazing update

App to 0ne of my favourite writer ho bhai ... Jo log ap ke story k deewane hae .unka response aate rahega.. bus aap ki story ka to mae hamesa intezar krta hu .. sorry response na krne k liye ...

wah! kya ek chamatkar update dalaa aapne yaar,just awesome! please keep going.

zabardast update,ekdom chamatkar aur mazadar writings skills!!! Superb storytelling.

What an exciting, sexy, spicy and erotic update it is! Hats off to you buddy. yr):

ekdom garam,mazadar aur masaladar update!!!

बिल्कुल बहुत ही गर्म, कामुक और रोमांचक अद्यतन। यह कहानी आपके मोहक लेखन के साथ प्यारी और दिलचस्प है।

Absolutely wonderful, beautiful,very much hot, erotic and exciting update.This story is full of excitement and interesting with your seductive  writings.

Beautiful story

Thanks

[THE EVIL]

Evil sahab main ek ✍️ writer hu aur kafi hadh tak famous bhi ye mera ek reader's account hai maine aaj se pehle kabhi kisi bhi writer k liye comment ni kiya hai aur main apse kehna chahta hoon ki aap jaisa writer maine aaj tak ni dekha hai ek writer hai sairat linking aur oc se uska start hai koi ap jaisa nahi hai muje infact maine apki skills utha kar apni story me use ki hai kafi likes aur views mile hai apse ek request hai sir ki aap pehle muskan complete kijiye maine ab tak ki waisi story nahi parhi hai sir in this field u r my icon this is my kink to write ye story new hai isko ruko thoda ya toh ek update muskaan ka aur ek iska par muskaan tadapna ni chahiye hariya usko apne talent se sambhogh karle accidentally waisa kuch kare sir please as a writer aur as a fan apse request hai meri tahe dil se ???? please sir please maine aapke wajh se is platform par he nahi kafi platform par izzat kamai hai aur maine dekha aap //// par bhi agae hai toh hum toh dhany hogae hai saalo se apki stories parh raha hu soch aaj likh bhi du par og I'd se ni likh sakta reason altoh ap samjh gae hoge as a writer aur maine sare cmnts bhi parhe jo Karansonkar ki I'd be kaha wo bilkul sahi tha 1 writer aur 4 readers ko personally janta hu jo apke fan hai literally fan hai agar aap muskaan story ko likh kar paise me bhi sell karoge toh wo kharid lege par wo nirash hogae hai kaafi q ki muskaan ki jo adah apne batai na pighalne wali apna character na chorne wali wo us se pehle koi story me ni dikha that could b ur best story continue karde sirji wo bohot meherbani hogi

Apka samartak hone k naate muje bas ye sun na hai ki ok main abhi he chalu karduga muskaan ye story ko sir time lag jaega lagh bhag kuch mahine phir muskaan aegi par sir aap please pehle muskaan likh lijiye naa hum gareeb ka bhi bhala hojae ? dhanyawaad sirf

Thanks comment ke liye jaise maine kaha i'll definitely work on muskan story once this one is complete.

[THE EVIL]

superb, wonderful, sexellent update.
bahot hi garam aur kamuk writings

bahut hi mast, jabardast aur faadu update
kamaal ka likhte hai aapne yaar
bahot maja aaya padhke

wonderful update!!wah!! bahut bahut mast likhte hai yaar, shabash

Totally understandable. But the reason I said that is because of how you felt as a writer about readers not showing much interest anymore and probably thought people are not interested in the story anymore. So just wanted to point out my thoughts so it might give you a hint. 

But trust me when the story picks up the pace and the Raghu and Nusrat begin their secret illicit affair in her own bedroom, the story will break all records. Their steamy hot sex filled encounters will be too hot and kinky to read. I can already imagine. 

Waiting eagerly for the next update.

Absolutely fantastic, fascinating and exciting update it is! Really mind blowing and erotic writings.

Evil bhai update kab aayegaa iss week me ak bhi update nahi aayaa hai .. we r waiting for the update so excited..

Waiting for the next bigg update ????

Thanks

[THE EVIL]

Right bro , you are my favourite writer in this forum. Same like you , i also started a thread for just my kink. you had earlier replied on my 1st update. Just write ,what you think and imagine , dont focus much on suggestion. once the story proceed and sexual encounters appear , comments and views will also increase . stick with your slow build up narration. And lastly , if you have read  further updates of my story , kindly reply ,how it was ....thanks..

Thanks, i'll read it no problem.

[THE EVIL]

Part 14

Nusrat deewar ke sahare khadi khud se fight kar rahi thi ke jo bhi usne thodi der pehle dekha use o turant hi bhul jaye lekin uska jism dubara se uska sath nahi de raha tha. Usne kabhi expect nahi kiya tha ke raghu chacha uski shadishuda zindagi men laut kar ayenge. Shadi ke pehle jo huwa use o bhul bhi chuki thi. Anjane men aur nadani men usne jo bhi galti ki thi usko o sudhar kar aage badh chuki thi lekin yun raghu chacha ka wapas ana use ajeeb lag raha tha.

Khair o fir wahan se fresh hokar wapas apne kam men lag jati hai. Sham men kabir bhi ghar wapas aata hai aur o dono sath men ek acha quality time spend karte hain. Raat men dono shohar biwi dono yun bahar niklte hain thodi walking ke liye jo o usually karte the. Thode der yun hi tehlne ke baad kabir ek paan wale ki dukan ke pas rukta hai aur majburan nusrat ko bhi wapas tehlna padta hai.

Kabir ek paan ka order deta hai aur nusrat ko puchta hai chahiye kya lekin o mana kar deti hai. Thodi der men kabir paan chaba raha hota hai aur o dono wahan khade hi the ke...

Raghu...kaise ho nuuu...kabir betaa??

Kabir aur nusrat mudkar raghu ke taraf dekhte hain jo abhi abhi aya tha...



Kabir...arey raghu chacha kaise hain?? Hum bilkul thikk...

Raghu...main bhi thik kabir betaa..

Kabir...pehli baat to ye beta beta bolna band kijyee ajeeb lagta hai...bas kabir...

Raghu...haahahah bilkul sahiii..

Kabir...hahaha...aur sunayiye yahan kahan??

Raghu...arey bettt...haha kabiirr bas yun hi paan khane aya tha...

Kabir...acha main aur nusrat bhi paan khane hi ruke hain...

Raghu chacha nusrat par upar se niche tak nazar ek baar dalte huwe jo idar udar dekh rahi thi raghu chacha ke ane se.

Raghu...mujhe nahi pata tha nusratttt paan bhi khati haii..maine to bas uskoo....

Kabir...kya aapne??

Raghu...hahaha nusrat ko maine bohat sari chizen sikhayi hain pata hai tumko?? Aur nusrat ko mera bohat pasand bhi tha...

Kabir...kyaa pasand tha? Aur kya sikhaya hai??

Kabir bhi nusrat ko dekhne lagta hai thoda hairani se nusrat ke chehre ka rang uda huwa tha raghu chacha ki is baat se o kya jawab deti...



Raghu...aisa kya dekh rahe ho kabirr nusrat ko mere hath ka swadisht khana pasand tha aur kya kya sikhaya hai o main dhire dhire bataunga ab to nazdik hi hain...

Kabir...haahahah acha khana...aur haan sahi baat hai ab to ana jana laga rahega...

Raghu...haan

Kabir...nusrat ne kabhi nahi bataya ke aap itna acha khana banate hain chacha...kyun nusrat??

Nusrat...mm mainn oo kabirr oo...

Raghu...hahaha kaise batayegi kabirr ye koi batane wali chiz hai. Ek ladki ko agar kisi gair mard ka pasand ho to o thodi na apne pati ko uske bare men batayegi hahahah...

Utna bolkar raghu chacha bade hi awkwardly hasnta hai. Kabir bhi na samjhne par bhi hansta hai uske sath. Nusrat jo thoda bohat samjh gayi thi bohat embarrassed feel karti hai

Kabir...hehehe bade mazakiya ho aap raghu chacha aisi baat hai to lagta hai mr. Khanna se baat karke aapko humare ghar shift karwana padega...

Ye baat sunkar nusrat apne shohar ko hairani se dekhti hai ke baat bohat aage badh rahi thi o ye bilkul nahi chahti thi. Raghu chacha agar unke ghar aagye to usko rokna namumkin hojayega. Jis chiz ko o kunwari rehkar nahi control kar payi thi o shadi ke baad krna to next to impossible hona hi tha.

Raghu..haha haan baat kar lo agar o man jate hain to...

Kabir...arey main to mazak kar raha hun chacha nusrat itna acha khana bana leti hai ke humen kisi aur ki zarurt kabhi padi hi nahi....

Raghu..hehe ye bhi sahi hai...

Kabir...chalo thik hai chacha hum chalte hain kabhi aana ghar...

Raghu...haan zarur beta...

Fir nusrat aur kabir jane lagte hain aur adat se majbur raghu chacha nusrat ki chal dekhne lagta hai uski kha jane wali nazar nusrat ki matkti huwi gand par thi.



Ufff aisi chal jise o shadi ke pehle dekha karta tha. O apna lauda wahin maslne lagta hai jab tak kabir aur nusrat uski ankhon se ojhal nahi hojate.

Agle din kabir ke office janeke baad nusrat apne kam karke baithi huwi ke tabhi door bell bajti hai jise sunkar nusrat darwaza kholne jati hai to samne none other than raghu chacha ko dekh ek tarha seham si jati hai. O sochne lagti hai ke raghu chacha is waqtt yahan kya kar rahe hain.Raghu chacha ke chehre par ek alag hi evil smile thi.

Raghu...kaisi ho nusrat??

Nusrat...mm maainn thikk hu chacha aurr aap?

Raghu...bilkul mastt....

Raghu chacha nusrat ko tade jarha tha jise dekh nusrat ko ajeeb lag raha tha.

Raghu...andar ajaun??

Nusrat...hh haan ayiye naa..

O dono andar chale jate hain. Raghu chacha jakar sofe par baithta hai. Nusrat wahin side men khadi hojati hai.

Raghu...kafi acha ghar hai nusrat...

Nusrat...haan

Raghu...kabir waqai men kafi bhagyshali hai acha ghar aur achi biwi dono mile hain use hehe...

Nusrat ko ye baat ajeeb lagti hai lekin o ignore kar deti hai.

Raghu...waise nusrat mujhe pura yakeen hai kabir jitna bahar se acha dikhta hai utna tumare sath bhi acha hi hoga...samjh rahi ho na...

Nusrat...kkk kyaaa matlaab chachaa?

Raghu...matlaab bistar parr..

Nusrat raghu chacha ka yun bilkul direct bold jawab sunkar hairan si hojati hai aur usko jhatka sa lagta hai.

Nusrat...ye kyaa bol rahee hain aapp chachaa?? Plss mehrabani karke aisi batien na karen ye humara niji mamla hai...



Raghu...haha o to hai nusrat main to bas puch raha tha ke jo maine tumko sikhaya tha shadi se pehle o kam aya ya nahi??

Nusrat chup rehti hai usko nahi samjh arha tha ke o is situation kis tarha se handle kare. Raghu lekin samjh jata hai ke nusrat uski baat ko avoid krna chah rahi hai.

Raghu...aya hi hoga kam waise lekin mujhe ye baat abhi bhi khatak rahi hai nusrat...

Nusrat...kkonnsii baat ??

Raghu...yahi ke shadi ke 2 saal baad bhi ghar men bachon ka shor abhi tak nahii??

Nusrat ke gaal laal hojate hain raghu chachaa ki is baat se. Is tarha boldly direct raghu chacha ki batien use na sirf hairan kar rahi thi balke sharm ane par majbur bhi kar rahi thi.

Raghu...kyun nusrat??

Nusrat...cchh chachaa yee aap plss mainee bataya haii ye humara niji mamla haii..



Raghu...hmm niji mamla hai ya kuch aurrr..??

Nusrat...kk kyaa matlab??

Raghu...shayad kabir men kuch kamiii...

Nusrat...nahiii ye aap kya bol rahe hain kabirr mujhse bohat pyar karte hain o unme koi kami nahi hai...

Raghu...to fir tum men...

Nusrat...nnn nahiiii...

Raghu...hmm fir to ek hi matlaab niklta hai iska...

Nusrat...kk kyaa???

Raghu...dekh nusrat main teri madad kar sakta hun jaise maine shadi se pehle ki thi lekin uske liye tumhe khulkar mujhse baat karni hogi aur mera sath bhi khulkar dena hoga....

Nusrat...mmm mainn samjhi nahii..

Raghu...main tumari samsya samjh gaya hun...ye chiz sirf pyar tak nahi rehti hai pati patni ke ek dusre ke liye bohat sari zarurten hoti hain jo main tumko ab ache se sikha sakta hun..tumari shadi bhi hochuki hai isliye main ache se samjha sakunga.....bolo sikhna hai??

Nusrat...Nnn nahii chachaa plss main shadishuda hun kabir ko bhanak bhi lagi to acha nahi hoga....

Raghu...arey nusrat to main pata lagne do kabir ko...soch lo tumari ye jo pheeki shadishuda zindagi chal rahi hai usme tum naye naye rang bhar sakti ho. Aisi chizen tumko mere alwa koi khul kar koi nahi batayega aage tumari marzi....

Utna bolkar raghu chacha wahan se chala jata hai. Nusrat wahin bed par baithkar sochne lagti hai.

Nusrat...kya ye sahi rahega?? Raghu chacha se firse sikhna...nahii nahii main ab shadishuda hun ye to dhoka hoga... yaad hai na akhri baar jab ye sab huwa tha to kaise raghu chacha ne shadi ke ek din pehle ufff nahi nahii main ye nahi kar sakti aur waise bhi raghu chacha to bakwas kar rahe the humari shadishuda zindagi to behad khubsurt chal rahi hai.



Utna sochte huwe nusrat wapas apne kaam men lag jati hai. Raat men kabir ke aneke baad o dono acha time spend karte hain khane ke baad domo bed par baithe huwe batien kar rahe the. Thodi der baad dono ekdusre ke sath romantic hone lagte hain. Kabir nusrat ko letakar uske sath foreplay karne lagta hai.

Nusrat bhi uska sath dete huwe ankhen band karke uske sar men hath ferne lagti hai. Usne is waqt ek nighty pehni huwi thi. Kabir uske gale par chum raha tha. Apne shohar ko yun romantic huwa dekh nusrat bhi kafi excited thi. Kahin na kahin usko ye lagta tha ke jo bhi aaj raghu chacha ne use bola hai o jhut hai.

Kabir chumte huwe upar uske chehre par mathe par yahan wahan chumne lagta hai. Nusrat ko niche kabir ka lund khada hota huaa feel hota hai jisse o aur excited hojati hai. Thodi der baad kabir apna tshirt nikal kar boxers men aajata hai. Nusrat thodi bohat garam to hochuki thi. Ab tak nusrat ki nighty bhi utar chuki thi. O bas bra panty men bed par padi huwi thi kabir ke samne.

Kabir apne boxer utar kar under thoda niche karke nusrat ko missionary position men le aata hai aur dhire se apna lund se karke nusrat ki pinkish chut par andar dalne lagta hai...

Nusrat..aahh kkabiirr..



Kabir fir aur dhire dhire apna gora lund andar karta hai. Nusrat bhi kabir ke hath sakhti se pakad leti hai aur apni ankhen band kar leti hai. Kabir fir halke halke dhakke lagane lagta hai. Nusrat bhi ab thoda normal hone lagti hai. Dono apne shohar biwi wale romantic sex karne lagte hain.

Takreeban 15 minute baad dono alag hojate hain. Nusrat halki halki ukhdi huwi sansen normal karne men lagi thi wahin kabir to maze ke satwe asaman par besudh leta huwa tha. Uski biwi koi normal awrat to thi nahi itni khusburt gori chitti upar uski chut ufffff.

Kabir fir bathroom chala jata hai nahane wahin nusrat leti huwi apne chehre par ek muskan liye huwe thi tabhi uska hath galti se apni chut par lagta hai ufff kitna ajeeb feel hota hai sex karne ke bad. Usne zindagi men kabhi nahi socha tha ke sex men inta maza hota hai. Magarrr shadi ke pehle raghu chacha ne bhi to use bataya tha aurrr.....

Nusrat ko ab shadi ke ek din pehle wali o raat yaad aati hai jab raghu chacha uske kamre men aye the aur unhone kya demand ki thi. Aur fir o dono nange hogye the aur raghu chacha ne uski chut par apna o bada uffff utna bada awzar!!! Kabir ka to itna bada nahi hai fir bhi kitna maza aata hai agar raghu chacha ka...



Nusrat ko apni soch par ghin aati hai lekin raghu chacha ka us raat uski kunwari chut par apna bada kala lauda rakhna bhul nahi payi thi ufff firse wahin scene uske dimag men chalne lagta hai. Anjane men uska hath jo uski chut par tha wahan sehlane bhi lagta hai.

Abhi abhi o apne shohar ke sath sex kar chuki thi aur abhi usko raghu chacha ke kale awzar ki yad aayi thi jo o apne shadi ke ek din pehle feel kar chuki thi. Nusrat khud par blanket le leti hai. Uska hath chut par chal raha tha. Uski ankhen sochte huwe ya maze men band hochuki thi. Dheemi dheemi siskariyan uske mun se nikal rahi thi.

Nusrat man men... yee mainn kyaa karr rahii hunn...galat hai yee...mujhe sirf apne shohar ke bare men sochna chahiye fir ye chachaa aawwh...

Nusrat apni ek ungli chut par ragdne lagti hai jaise usdin raghu chacha apna kala lauda ragad raha tha. Ufff scene kafi kamuk tha. Ek shadishuda jawan awrat jo thodi der pehle apne shohar ke sath sex kar chuki hai aur o thodi der baad ek naukar gair mazhbi adhed umar ke admi ke bare men soch kar apni chut sehla rahi thi.

Tabhi bathroom ka door khulne ki awaz aati hai. Kabir nahakr bahar aajata hai jisse nusrat bhi thoda sambhal jati hai. O apne shohar se ankh nahi milati kyunke jo o kar rahi thi o bohat galat tha.

Kabir...nusrat jawo naha lo main sorha hun mujhe kal jaldi office jana hai..

Nusrat....ss soo jawoo kabirr main naha lungii..



Kabir...thik hai jaldi nahakr sojana...

Nusrat...thikk hai...

Kabir chaddar odhkar dusre taraf face karke sojata hai wahin nusrat apni blanket thodi hatakar firse apni chut sehlane lagti hai. Uff uski chut geeli hone lagi thi itni der tak to. Use yakeen nahi horha tha ke o thodi der pehle hi apne pyare shohar ke sath romantic hokar sex kar chuki hai lekin ab is waqt o apni chut sehla rahi thi.



Nusrat ki ankhen kuch sochte huwe band thi aur uske nazuk gore hath uski pinkish chut par.

To be continued...