27-04-2024, 03:16 PM
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(28-04-2024, 12:57 PM)Dorabooji Wrote: Beautiful narration friend.
Please complete the story and do not leave it half way like your earlier ones.
(28-04-2024, 01:55 PM)Hornytamilan23 Wrote: Bro you have started mulitple threads with same theme, and srinivas or srinu as the husband.
But none of them are over one page
I think you want to develop this plot, I don't know what's stopping you over the years.
You are doing this since 2021.
So are you gonna complete?
(28-04-2024, 02:02 PM)Hornytamilan23 Wrote: +1, Now I understood, why you said this.
(28-04-2024, 02:19 PM)fuckandforget Wrote: The author has got great writing skills. If he can complete the story, i am sure he can make it a masterpiece. hope he does with this story.
(28-04-2024, 01:22 PM)fuckandforget Wrote: Marvelous way to begin.
Why should ganga go to restroom after the movie and not during interval.
Did javed do something to her in the second half of movie and made her wet and leaking down and she wants to clean it.
Are these men planning for a blackmail.
Cant wait to read more.
(28-04-2024, 01:10 PM)Ananthukutty Wrote: Life changed for poor srinu in just one half of the move. When he was thinking great about her, she not only shifted seat to go back to M men, but also left the husband in the dark. Great start dude.
(28-04-2024, 02:40 PM)Gilmalover Wrote: He would have shown his circumcized 12 inch dick and told he can show the heaven. This would have made her orgasm instantly and she would have touched his dick in the second half. She knows her husband has only 4 inch and he does not stay long and never given her real orgasm. Already a bored housewife she is, want to see the heaven through the Moslim man dick. Change seat means change her man. Extraordinary beginning of story.You guys should be ashamed thinking such low of Ganga a Sanskari woman. She's being very humble and loyal to her spending why would she drool on some low life 3rd class labourers like Javed and Chacha ? or IS SHE ?
(29-04-2024, 10:58 PM)Dinesh Raveendran Wrote: Superb narration friend
Lot of questions comes to mind
1. Why srinu did not ask anything to Ganga
2. Did the mechanic javed do anything to the bike. it was not starting then and it was starting now.
3. He does not know the names of two, but how did he ask the inspector by their names
4. What time he was hospitalized. Who brought him. How the accident case was taken without cop interference
5. The cheating wife ? means he is going to doubt the wife that she has committed infedility and keep spying her?
6. Where is ganga relatives
7. Why ganga switched back seat and the men stopped talking thereafter.
8. Chacha is elder to javed and why is he calling him with respect.
9. Normally after commiting some r*pe, these men will kill the victims because they will expose them. Here nothing happend. Ganga is not having even any marks in her body.
10. If someone hit srinu and javed and chacha not there, it means another person involved in the incident.
(29-04-2024, 11:47 PM)Samadhanam Wrote: Is this adultery or thriller? Super interesting.
(30-04-2024, 01:42 PM)tweeny_fory Wrote: wow what a thriller ride.. even we are eager to understand what has happened
my questions are
1) why did she change the seat? what happened in the 30mins during interval
2) after movie was over what took so long for ganga?
3) what hapened for 1hr when he woke from injury?
4) how did he end up at hospital and who helped him?
(30-04-2024, 08:51 PM)fuckandforget Wrote: When srinu is earning well, why would he take his wife to a cheap theatre rather than a multiplex.
The theatre does not have any CCTV for the cops to check??.
Ganga does not want to disclose that she lost her chastity because her husband would feel bad. She is going to face the worst part of her life when her husband starts doubting her and that would anger her to go back to the rapists.