03-02-2019, 07:26 PM
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(04-02-2019, 12:32 AM)Stallion Sandal Wrote: Great and too hot and Erotic update.
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Very Erotic. I suggest you to don't use too .
Much porn in updates.
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BTW this is your story and you know that how a story be written.
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Thanks for the update.
Thanks for specially PM.
(04-02-2019, 02:39 PM)admin Wrote: mast update hai dost..... har kisi k sath sex dikhane se hero ki value kam ho jaayegi mere khyaal se....
waise likhte bahut acche se ho
keep it up
(04-02-2019, 05:45 PM)diksha Wrote: Tanu hands off 2 u . It was a great fun to read this part ....
Kahani ab shape le rahi hai .....6 kidnappings aur mital ka manoj ko kisi khaas kaam kr liye bulana lagta hai pehle villain ki entry ho chuki hai ....
Pinki aur rahul kareeb aa rahe hain .... Relationship behad hot and erotic and romantic hai bechara rahul teen-teen ladkiyo ke beech upar se babita .Ab yeh dekhna hoga ki rahul paise kamane ke liye kya karta hai ....
And don't feel offended by some negative comments it's a normal thing for every writer
(04-02-2019, 08:23 PM)rahulraj Wrote: Gr8 update bane ...You just reminded me the days of my first girlfriend ....She was ditto like pinki .....She was used to make me excited and then she was like "chhodo koi aa jayega ....You all boys are tharki" and so on
(04-02-2019, 08:38 PM)Stallion Sandal Wrote: Lovely and seductive Update.
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Let's see what happens when Tanu and Rahul will be alone in their home
(04-02-2019, 08:50 PM)jaunpur Wrote: .
मित्र,
कहानी बढ़िया नहीं… बहुत बढ़िया है
मैंने आधी-अधूरी कहानी अंतर्वासना में पढ़ी थी, पूरी कहानी खोज रहा था।
Thanks
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(05-02-2019, 08:15 AM)rahulraj Wrote: GOOD MORNING TANU.
(05-02-2019, 12:25 PM)diksha Wrote: Tanu update plz....Kitna intzaar karwaogi
(05-02-2019, 07:48 PM)srlk Wrote: good oneThnx ...Keep visiting and keep in touch
https://xossipy.com/thread-91.html
this one is also nice. padhna
(06-02-2019, 12:12 PM)diksha Wrote: Wao tanu lovely update ......Amazing story plot for garima and karan and things are getting hot between tanu and rahul
(06-02-2019, 04:00 PM)Ritesh@786 Wrote: Mast update tanu ji superThnx ritesh .....Keep visiting ...Nice ti see you on my thread
(06-02-2019, 07:40 PM)Stallion Sandal Wrote: It's too much I am saying too much.
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Nice brilliant update dear lovely and noughty update.
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Love it also masturbating update
(07-02-2019, 07:01 PM)diksha Wrote: तनु आज की अपडेट कब आएगी ?
(07-02-2019, 11:47 PM)Stallion Sandal Wrote: From (idhar Tanu1:30 baje - the ending of the Story).
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Waiting for next dear.
(08-02-2019, 12:37 AM)akxxx Wrote: Mast story hai update do plzzz
(08-02-2019, 10:18 AM)RK prince Wrote: Update please
Your story is awesome
Majaagya padhke
(08-02-2019, 06:26 PM)rahulraj Wrote: Enough tanu enough ......Ab itna erotic likhegi to muth maar-2 ke lund fat jayega mera .....But dil hai ke manta nahi so keep updating