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Aram karte karte sam ho gai thi tabhi kuch shor gul ki or rone ki aavaja se meri aakh hul gai, me mere bedroom se nikal kar niche jake dekha to champa room me aavaj aa rahi thi,  me turant fresh hoke uske room per gai






Rupa : (room per jake darwaje per) champa o champa....

Champa :  ji medam abhi aai, usne darvaja khola to under se uske ladke ki rone ki aavaj aa rahi thi,  Rupa :  kya huva ?

Champa : medam dekhiye pagal na vo gat se bahar bhag raha tha to mene use pakakar lai na is liye ro raha he,

Rupa : lekin kyo? use yaha accha nahi lag raha kya, 

Champa : ji vo bahot din se mene use kamre me band karke rakha tha na isliye, 

Rupa : are pagal koi ase room band karke rakhata he kya !, thoda bahar garden khelne de, ghar me bhi la sakti tu kisi na thodi bola he tuje,  uss bichare ko room me rakhage to or jyada uska dimagi santulan bigad jayega,  or use samjane ke bad vapas apne bedroom me aa gai, 

Sam ko jap dhiraj aaye to mene dada ke  bare me Bataya ki unke sath mulakat nahi hui or kal vapas muje  jana padega, unhone bhi meri ha me ha bhari,






Dusre din jungle se hote huve sortcut ke raste se vaha pahoch gai, nala par nahi kiya vaha per hi pagdandi ke side me gadi rakhne ke bad lakdi patti ke raste kholi tak pahoch gai, lekin aaj bhi vo hi hal tha, 

Rupa : me vaha khadi khadi soch rahi thi ki tabhi pise se aawaz aayi, mene mudkar dekh to ek admi bhatthi per kadhai me pani puri ki puri tal raha tha, ek mela sa kala admi jo sarir ke sath sath sakal surat se bhi ekdam kala tha,  use dekhakar me vapas ja rahi thi lekin dada ko milne ka khyal ate hi me vapas ruk gayi,





uske muh pe kachhe road jese  bade bade khadde or juriya thi, uske chahre ki skin ekdam khurduri thi, daat to uske pan masala kha kha ke lal kale ho gaye the, kai daat to dekhai nahi de rahe the jo sayad guthke ki garami ki vajah se gal gaye the, sath me hoth bhi bade or kale dikhai de rahe the, uski sakal kisi bhi angle se dekhne layak nahi thi, bada hi ajib or daravana chahera he, itna badsurat chahera me mere jivan me pahli bar dekh rahi thi, uske hath koylse se kale ho gaye the,  usne kapde ke naam per ek dhoti pahni thi, or upri hisse per kuch bhi pahena nahi tha, pura sarir bade bade gughrale balo se bhara tha, uska pet sarir se do guna bada tha jo niche ki or latak raha tha, aaj tak mene itni badi nabhi dekhi nahi thi, vo ek bada gahra kala khadda tha, pet ki vajah se itna to pakka tha ki vo sarir ka niche ka hissa usse bilkul najar nahi aata hoga,  uska dravana  roop dekhakar muje bhi dar lagne laga tha,  






Me ye sab dekh rahi thi ki tabhi vapas mere kano me aavaj gunji, bibiji kiska kam he aapko, 

Rupa : ji..... Ji vo yaha per dada rahte uska mene kaha or  usne muj per najar dodai, ye to nahi pata konse bhav se muje dekha, per uper se niche tak dekhate huve bola....


Ajnabi :  achha ye budhav, vo kahi idhar udhar gaya hoga sayad, arjant kam he kya ?

Rupa : nahi sirf milna tha, kal bhi aayi thi me per kal bhi mulakat nahi huvi,

Ajnabi : achha jara rukye me dekhta hu, 

Rupa : usne bhatthi me se jal rahe lakdi ko nikal liya or khada huva to me uski kad kathi dekh kar dang reh gai, vo mere se kam uchai vala ek nata aadmi tha,  uski uchai mere kandhe jitni thi, mere gale se 2se3 inch niche tak uski uchai thi, mota or nata sa admi tha, uska sarir pet ki charbi ki vajah se bhari bharkam ho gaya tha, dhoti pahne huve vo idhar udhar dhire+dhire gali chor tak gaya or gayab ho gaya na jane kaha chala gaya, me bhi fir vahi per tahalne lagi, tahlte tahlte gatar ke uss paar me pani pine gadi ke pass gai, jab pani pi rahi thi to gali ke mod se vo vapas aata huva dikhai diya, me pani ka bottle dikki me rakh kar age ki or jane ka faisla kiya, tabhi vaha gatar per lakdi ke patti se uss taraf jate jate mera pair patti ke kinare se fisal gaya or ekdam se me jami per gir gai, vo to sukra he ki me gatar me nahi giri, jese hi me uthane gai to pair me asahay dard ke karan vapas beth gai, ghav to nahi laga tha bus pair ki eadi fisal ne se  nash khich gai thi,  me uth nahi pa rahi thi, vo anjan mota admi apna bada pet idhar udhar hilate huve jaldi jaldi aaya or muje hath ki sahayta se uthane laga, uske khurdura hath se muje thada uthaya lekin kuch fayda nahi huva uthte hi me vapas niche baith gayi, vo bola.....





Ajnabi : bibiji aapko sayad moch aayi he, aap ek kam karye ye budhav ke bajume meri kholi he, aap vaha aaram kariye, 

Rupa : kya karti me!,  meje bhi thik laga, sayad kuch aaram karke thik ho jaye tab tak dada bhi aa jayege, mene majboori me uske sahayta se uthi or bus ek kadam hi chali thi ki pata chal gaya ke nush chad gai he or pair mood  nahi raha he,


 or behad dard ke karan mere aakho se ashu aa gaye, me sah nahi pa rahi thi, jese vese me vapas jamin per baith gai, ankho me ekdam se andhera  ho gaya, lekin behos nahi huvi thi, tabhi muje esa laga ke kisike hath mere ek haath ke baju se niche pith per hote huve se dusri baju taraf nikal gaye, or dusra haath mere guthne ke niche le jake, 





or dono hatho ki sahayta se muje utha liya he, uska bada pet pe meri pith chute hi gadde jesa ahsas huva,, mere hath jo uske sarir se laga tha vaha usk pet or chhati ke bade bade bal mahsus ho rahe the, uske sarir se pasine ki tez gandh aa rahi thi,  kuch hi der me  muje vo apni kholi ka darvaja khol ke ek charpai per dal diya tha, room me bhi ek ajib si gandi smell aa rahi thi jo mere nak me ghus rahi thi, charpai pe letane ke bad usne mere pair ke pass jake ungliya khichne laga, pair ke panje or edi ko pakad kar jordar apni taraf khicha, tabhi do hadiya takrane ki aawaj ek do bar aayi or badme panje ki malis jese karne laga, usne muje hath or pair pakad ke khichte huve ulta lita diya, or pair ki edi ki malish karne laga, mene tight legis or top pahna huva tha, legis ke upar se hi nas ko pakad kar dhire dhire ghutne ki taraf age badhne laga, fir usne jangh se hote huve meri bharav dar gand uper apni ungliyo ki madad se malish karne laga, 

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Aag laga di......
Bahut hi lajawaab bhakurdaar.....

Dear Aag to laga di lekin ye samma like ❤️ milker hi bujegi


        

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Meri gand ke ubhar ko tatlte huve usne salwar ke uper se nas ko pakad kar khichne ki koshish ki lekin koi fayda nahi huva,

meri gand hi itni badi thi ki nas pakad me nahi aa rahi thi, tabhi usne meri salwar ko niche se pakad kar pith tak le aya or meri tight legis ki elastic ke sath sath panty ko pakad kar thoda sa gand ke ubhar tak niche sarka diya, bad me nas ka jayja lete huve dono hatho ki madad se jor se khicha jiski vajah se muje bhayanak dard huva or me thoda hos me aa gai or mood ke jesi hi meri gand ke taraf meri najar jate hi me turat sidhi hokar uske badsurat chahre ke khurdure dono gal pe tamache mar diye or boli...

Rupa : Tumhari himmat kese hui muje sune ki, gandi nale ke kide !, tum logo ko thodi si daya dikhai to apni aukat pe aa jate ho, apni surat dekhi he kabhi aaine me? Koi badnasib hi hogi jo ese tharki, ghinone or badsurat se kide sadi ki hogi, do tan ke khane ke liye tum log bhikh magte firte ho or aukat to dekho ?

Mera itna bolte hi vo bhi gusse me aa gaya or mere gal pe ek jordar tamacha mar diya, muje dhakka markar khat pe sula ke mere sine pe aa betha, mere dono hath aju+baju uske bade bade pairo ke niche dab gaye the, lekin vusne apna pura vajan mere sine pe nahi dala tha, uska ludhka huva, gande balo vala or badi nabhi vala pet mere chahre ke bilkul samne tha,

Me kuch samaj pati usse pahle usne apni badi kali balowali jango ke side me dhoti me hath ghusa diya or ek vishalkay ghade jesa kala musal land mere chehre pe de mara,












Meri Najar uss pe padte hi me hoso hawas kho bethi, ye kya he ????


Vo vaha nahi ruka vo itna gusse me tha ki usne mere balo ko pakad kar apne kale musal jese land se hi mere chahre pe chate marne laga. 






Or muje apne khud ki aukat dikhane laga, jese uske vishalkay land se muje vo dominate karne laga,






Vo itna bada tha ki mere hath ki kalai bhi uske samne chhoti najar aa rahi thi,








uska vishalkay land mere pure chehre pe chaya huva tha, uski lambai mere sir ke balo se leke mere sine  tak pahoch jaye utni thi, me besudh hoker uske land ko dekh rahi thi,


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 tabhi uski aawaz mere kano me guji, 

Aukat ki bat karti he sali rand? Kahte huve vapas usne mere gal pe ek tamacha mar diya or turant mere sine se uth kar khat pe se utar gaya, apni kholi ke darvaje ke pass jake mudkar vapas muri or dekhkar bola....

Sali rand kitno ke niche leti hogi or yaha sarfai chodti he, tumahare jesi amir aurate kya kya rangraliyan manati he hum sab jante he, or apne pati ke samne pativarta banke ghumti he, isliye muje aurat jat se hi nafrat he, or iske vajah se hi mene aaj tak sadi nahi ki........ Aaaaaak thu,

Meri aur thukte huve vo darwaje se gayab ho gaya, ye sab itni jaldi jaldi huva ke muje kuch sochne samajneka vakt bhi nahi mila, 

Ye gatna ke bad to muje kuch bhi hosh nahi tha, Me khat pe leti besudh hokar sab dekh rahi thi. Lekin kuch bhi karne ke kabil nahi thi.

Me kya parti kirya du usko kuch samaj me nahi aa raha tha,

Usne jo mere gand pe harkat ki thi uske liye ? ya......

Jo uske dwara mare gaye gal pe tamache ke liye ? ya......

Uska vishalkay ghade jesa kala land dekhakar batmiji ki uske liye? ya.....

Muje raand kaha or mere pativarta per sawal uthye uske liye?......

Kya bolu? Kiske liye bolu? Ase hi kai sawal mere dimag me uth rahe the. Tabhi chuhe ne bartan giraya jo idhar udhar bhag rahe the or me hos me aai, mera dhyan tuta, or apne aapko ko sambhalte huve astvayst kapdo ko thik kiya,

Khat pe se uthkar chalte huve sidha gadi ke pass pahoch gai or chabi lagakar gadi start hote he me vaha se nikal gai,

 Kab rasta khatam huva, kab ghar aaya, kab apne bedroom me aai, kuch bhi pata nahi chala, kab rat ho gai or kab mere pati aaye, mere jahan me hajjaro vichar chal rahe the,

Me hoso hawas me bilkul bhi nahi thi, me apni manodasha mese bahar nahi aa rahi thi, tabhi mere pati bedroom aaye or usne girne ke vajah se jo mere gande kapde ko dekhte huve unhone kaha....

DK : rupa...... Kya huva tumhe? Accident huva kya?

Rupa : haaa vooooo thoda gadi sleep ho gai thi, mene jooth bol diya, aaj pahli bar muje jooth ka sahara lenr ki nobat aa gai thi, lekin ye sab unke vajah se hi huva tha. Unke kahne se hi me vaha gai thi, 

DK : kya.....? tumhe chot to nahi lagi na ?

Rupa : nahi nahi kuch nahi huva, me bilkul thik hu, ab me kya batati usko ki ek gandi nale ke kide jo mere pairo ke talve ke bhi kabil nahi he usne tumahari khubsurat pativarta patni ko cheda, tumhari patni ki gori gadrai gand ko masla, kya ye sab batati unhe,

DK : darling thoda sambhal kar chalaya karo, agar kuch ho jata to?

Rupa : aap tension mat lijye me bilkul thik hu, me abhi fresh hoke aati hu bad me khana khate he, 

Bathroom me jakar naha rahi thi tabhi meri najar pairo ke lal nishan pe gai or sari ghatna ankho ke samne aa gai, nishan ko dekhkar ahesas huva ke pairon ki moch jo nas ke chadh ne ki vajah se huvi thi vo ab thik ho gai thi,

To kya vo meri madad kar raha tha?

Lekin uski sakal se bhala aadmi to bilkul bhi nahi dekhai de raha he, pura ka pura kala, ganda, gawar or nata sa he vo.   


Or  or or...! kitna badsurat bhi he vo !    Shhiiiii




Dosto agar  story age badhana he to like & reply kare ya sabko slam namste,

Agar itni mahnat per like  na aaye to time vest karneka koi matlab nahi he,

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Lekin jo bhi ho rupa....! Tumhari usne aaj madad ki he or tumne usse........? 

Me apne aap se baate kar rahi thi ke tabhi DK ki pukar ne aawaj aai,


DK : khana laga diya he darling....

Thodi der ke bad me fresh ho gai or khana khatam karke hum dono bedroom me aa gaye, 

ekin aaj khana khate vakt mera dhyan bilkul bhi nahi tha, DK bhi kuch bich bich me bate karte rahe lekin unki bato me bilkul bhi dhyan nahi tha,

Rat ko bed pe bhi yahi haal tha, meri ankhon se neend koso door thi. Aaj ki ghatna mere dilo dimag per esa asar dala tha ke me usmese bahar nahi nikal pa rahi thi. Vo sab ghatna bar+bar mere jahan dohra raha tha, aaj bistar per mere pati hone ke bavjud pure bedroom me khudko akeli mahsus kar rahi thi, lekin had tab ho gai jab mere bachhe pe bhi mera dyan nahi ja raha tha, adhi rat kat gai thi or savera hone vala tha tabhi ankhon thakan ki vajah se muje kab need aa gai pata hi nahi chala, 


Saware jab 11 baje aankh khuli to DK ja chuke the, or daily routine ke hisab se jo puja path or yoga kartji thi vo aaj kar nahi paai ya yu kaho ke mera maan nahi laga, me fresh hoke vapas bed pe apne bacche ke sath laiti rahi or Champa ke sath uske kam me madad karke time pass kar diya, ese hi pura din tarah tarah ke khayalo se bachate bachate nikal diya, 

Rat ko jab DK aaye to unko mere mood ke bareme jara ehsas hote hi muje thoda bahar ghumane le gaye, rat ko das baje hum icecream or mitha pan khake vapas ghar lot aye, bache ko dudh pilane ke bad sone ke time unke sath me majak Masti karke thoda halka mahsus kar rahi thi, mansik roop se thoda free mahsus kar rahi thi, or DK mera mood dekhkar apni bahome muje bhar liya, kai dino se sex nahi kiya tha to mene bhi unka dil na dukhate apni patni na farz nibhaya,





vo mere uper aa gaye or kiss karte huve nighty ko uper karke unka land meri chut ke ched pe rakhakar dhakka mar diya, or apne kam me masgul ho gaye, 





Vo mere badan ke uper hote huve bhi ekdam halka fulka mehsus ho rahe the,  kyoki sayd ek bhari bharkam vajan ka anubhav mere sarir  ko ho gaya tha. or chut me thodi chiknahat ke karan land ander bahar hote huve bus mahsus kar rahi thi,





 tabhi unka land meri chut mese fisal ker bahar aa gaya to mene apne ek hath niche le jakar unke land ko pakada or vapas chut ke ched pe rakh rahi thi or muje unke land ko do ungli me angute ki sahayta se pakdte hi muje achanak land aakar or size ke bareme dhyan aaya, oooooorrr....










Orrrrrr... Muje uss janver ka land meri aankho ke samne aa gaya, ek vishalkay land jo akar se meri kalpana se bahar tha, jo meri kalai se bhi jyada lamba choda tha, jo mere pati ke land se kai guna bada tha, 
Kya vo insaan land tha?
Kya kisi insan ka land itna bada hota hoga? 
Agar hota he to aurat kese isko jelti hogi?
Kya vo chut me ja pata hoga?



Agar jata hota to...
Kitna maza aata agar mere pati ka bhi itna bada hota to chudai ka anand sayad do guna dadh jata,
Kassss esa hota to me har roj chudai karvati us land se,

Lekin Kudrat se us land ka nasib ko dekho to sahi........... ! 
vo uski joli me gira he jiske pass na sakal he. Na dhang ka sarir. Na kad kathi, na rang+roop or uper se na hi us land ka anand lene vali uski gharwali, vo to abhbhi bhi kuwara he,

Lekin kasss vo land meri chut me hota.......

Ye sab khayal se mere sharir me ek nayi urja utpann ho gayi, me ekdam se garam ho gai, 



vo jungle gatar ke kide ke land ke karan mere chut mese pani ki dhara bahne lagi, pati ne niche hone ke bavjud me meri gand ko unke land ki or dhakka marne lagi, apne dono pairo ko unki kamar pe peroke upni or kichte huve unke land ko chut me se dhakka marne lagi, me itni garam ho gai ke unke pith se lipatkar apni gand ko jor jor se hilane lagi, or unke hoth pe apne hoth rakhakar chusne or katne lagi, apne pati ke land ko uss gande paraye darawne mard ke land ke sath tulna karke uski anubhuti meri chut ke under karne lagi, or usi ke shath meri chut ne apna garam lava chod diya or me apne pati ke kamar pe dono pairo ko jor se bheech diye or unke shath ankhe bandh karke chipak gai, mere shath me unhone bhi meri chut me pani chod diya,

Bina chetavni diye jo tufan aaya tha vo ab santh ho gaya tha, mene nighty ko kamar ke niche karke jab mene apni pati pe najar dali to vo chokte huve sawaliya najar se ek kone me bethe muje dekh rahe the, najare milte hi unhone muje apne or khich ke apni baho me bhar liya or bole,

DK : rupa aaj tak tumne apna ye roop kaha chupakar rakha tha? Sadi ke itne sal ke bad achanak se tumahara ye roop dekhakar to me chok gaya, 

Rupa : Me kya jawab deti unhe, mene bhi bat ko sambhalte huve itna hi kaha ki kai din se kiya nahi tha to sayad ho gaya,

DK : lekin jo bhi darling aaj to maja hi aa aya, i love you, 

Rupa : i love you too baby mene bhi jawab diya, or mere mate ko chumne ke bad muje apne sine se laga ke sula diya, thakan or sukun ke anand ke sath sath nind achhi aa gai thi, 

Subhah me mobile ring bajte hi meri aakh khul gai dekha to DK ka phone tha,

DK : GOOD MORNING dear, kesi kati rat? nasta kiya? Unhone sawal pe sawal kar diye,

RUPA : GOOD MORNING baby, bus aapki ring ke aawaj se hi ankh khuli he, aapne nasta kiya,

DK : ha ha nasta kiya, abhi office me hu, mene isiliye phone kiya he ki aaj muje thoda bahar jana he, sayad ek do din bahar rahne padega muje,

RUPA : Kya ? 

DK : ha darling kya karu kam hi kuch esa he,

RUPA : thik he janab ab kam he to karna hi padega, javo or jaldi aa jana ok !

DK : ok dear.   bye
RUPA : Bye karke mene phone kat diya. 



Mene bhi fresh hone ke bad apne bache ko dudh pila rahi thi ki tabhi champa ki aavaj aai

Champa : Madam aaj kya khana banana he,

Rupa : tumhe jo thik lage bana do, mene bhi uper bedroom se jawab diya, 

Champa : thik he madam,

Me esi hi bed uthkar bahar nikli to niche dining table per champa sabji kat rahi thi, tabhi usne ek louki ko lekar chelne lagi or louki ko dekhkar mere jnajar ke samne usi kala mota land aa gaya,

Uska akar bhi itna hi bada tha, kitna bhayanak or bada kala land tha uska ! Chhiiii or mathe pe chapat marte huve me vapas apne bedroom me aa gai, or aaine ke samne jakar apne bal sawar ne lagi tabhi meri najar perfume ki bottle pe padi jo uske land ke aakar ka tha or fir se vo kala bada land meri najar ke samne aa gaya,
Ab nobat ye ho gai thi ki muje har ek cheez jo land ke aakar ki hoti he to uss pe najar padte hi muje uska bada land meri aankho ke samne aa jata tha, har ek cheez me muje uska land dikhai de raha tha,
Lekin chut ki aag bujane or ek bharpur chudai ke liye ese hi land hona chahiye,
jiske nasib me vo badsurat jungli insaan hoga uske hi nasib vo bharavdar or bada land hoga, vo sab sochte huve mera hath kab meri chut pe chala gaya muje pata hi nahi chala, muje meri chut me gilapan mahsus ho raha tha, me apni chut ko kapde ke uper se hi sahlani lagi, meri ankhe apne aap band ho gai,
ek naya anubhav, ek naya bada kala mota land lene ke liye meri chut aatur ho rahi thi, chut me garmi ke karan mene apni chut ko mutthi me daba diya. Mera khudka kabu apne srir per nahi tha mera hath apne harkat karne laga tha, ab kab vo niche nighty ke sire ko pakadker uper diya or panty thoda sa niche sarka diya, me uss gatar ke kide ke land ko imagine karte huve apni gili gulabi chut pe hath firane lagi,







meri ankhe bhari hoke band ho gai, kuch der bad jab Mene dhire apni bhari akho ko khola or samne aaine me apni khud ki padchai ko dekha, 

Or tabhi meri najar mathe pe lagaye huve sindoor par padi or mene turant apna hat chut se hata diya, yeeee pap he, shiiii itne gande vichar mere dimag me kese aa sakte he? me ek pativarta naari hu, mere Sanskar ese nahi he, mere maa+baap ne muje ese raste janeke Sanskar nahi diye, shiiiiiiii...... kisi dusre paraye mard ke bare me sochna bh mere liye pap he.

Or me vaha aaine ke samne se uth kar sidhe dusre karyo me lag jati hu, or kabhi garden me to kabhi balkani me to kabhi chhat pe tahalne lagti hu, ese hi me apne man ko control karne ka prayas karne lagti hu, mene dopahar ko khana khaya or apne bache ke sath time pass kar rahi thi, tabhi Champa aati he,

Champa : medam muje do din ki chhutti chahiye?

Rupa : kya ? lekin kyo ?

Champa. : ji vo hamare gav me meri mosi ka dehant ho gaya he to muje jana padega, 

Rupa : lekin champa do din to aapke sahab bhi ghar per nahi he, me akeli kese rahngi,

Champa. : ab kya kare medam ?

Rupa : ab kya ! Javo or kya, ese halat me na bhi nahi keh sakti me, or kese javogi itni door apne ladke shath? Vo to adha pagal he, 

Champa : haaaa ! ab kya karu ?

Rupa : kuch sochte huve ? Achha ek baat batavo, agar tumhara ladka pagal he to kabhi mene kuch suna kyo nahi, or kabhi mere samne bhi nahi aaya?

Champa : ji ji madam vo na pagal jarur he lekin pagolo jesa nahi karta vo, bas thodi jeed karta he, or jyada khane pine ke liye hi jeed karta he, or na gumsum sa pagalo jesa harkate karta rahta he, or mene aapko bataya tha ke vo guga+bahera he, 

Me kuch soch me pad gai ke agar do din tak muje mere uss gatna ke vicharo se door rahna he to dhyan batane ke liye muje ise yaha mere shath rakhna chahiye , mera akelapan bhi door ho jayega or mera time pass bhi ho jayega,

Rupa : haaa me bhul gai thi, to ek kam kar usko mere pass chad de me usko sambhal lungi. Khana pine ka saman ki koi kami nahi he or kam pada to online mangva lungi, tum aram se do din aa jana ok,

Champa : ji bahut bahut dhanyawad medam aapka,


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Dear friends

Bin bulaya maheman-shemale - complete 

Reply and like na milne ki vajah se hamne story ka end de diya he,

Agar Rupmati (Rupa) ki story ko response achha mila to hi end tak ja payegi,

 abhi tak ka response ek writer ka hosla badhane ke liye kafi nahi he,

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Bhai mujhe lagta hai aap ye request bohot zada jaldi kar rahe ho..... Abhi to aapki story bohot nayi hai, characters develop ho rahe hai....
Story ke title ke hisaab se isme Kai mard aane ki possibility hai or abhi to ek hi mard aaya hai.....
Abhi to aap apni story ko aage badhaao, kuch nya kuch alag agar aapki story me readers ko dikhega to log apne aap reactions denge..... Thoda soch samajh kar updates do, spellings wagerah grammar wagerah thik Karo...... Updates ko jaldi jaldi khatam karne ke bajaye thoda detailing me dhyaan do..... Updates ko thoda or seductive bnaao..... Tabhi or maza aaega......

I think u r right ? sir

Thank you for suggestion & reply

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Writing are well....
Try to develope the plot....
Take it slow, detailed and seductive....
I am sure that the writing skills you have... This story would be a block bluster if there is continuity and different approach to the story....
Views and comments will eventually follow...

Thank you sir

Bus aap log isss tarah se thoda support kare, me janta hu mera grammar bahot week he, lekin me jarur koshish karunga spellings or plot ko develope karneka,


Bahot bahot dhanyawad sir

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Ek ghante bad Champa apne bete ko sath lekar aai or muje sopker chali gai, vo ek college me padhne wala jesa lag raha tha, uska sarir ekdam patla tha, lambai me bhi mere sine tak ki uchai thi, chahre pe muchho ka namo nishan nahi tha, ekdam quite sa dikhai de raha tha vo, 
Mene use sofe pe baith ne ka ishara kiya to vo turat uss pe baith gaya or idhar udhar kisi pagal ki tarah sab dekh raha tha, kabhi kamre me charo taraf dekhta to kabhi mere chahre ko dekhta,







, or mene use ke liye tv chalu kar di, kariban rat ko ab 8 bajne vale the, khane ka time ho gaya tha, mene use khana diya or khud bhi kha liya, khane ke time bhi vo tv dekh raha tha kabhi kabhi pagalo jesa harkate karta rahta tha firbhi utna  pareshan nahi kiya muje,

Vo khana khatam karke vapas sofe pe baith gaya or tv dekhne laga, me bartan vagera sab rakh dene ke bad table saaf kar rahi thi ki tabhi mere bacche ki rone ki aawaj aai or me uper bedroom me chali gai, usko doodh pilaya to vo khelne laga, vo soke utha tha to usko neend nahi aa rahi thi, thodi garmi lag rahi thi to mene bachhe ke dono taraf takiya lagaya or nahane liye bathroom me chali gai, jese hi me kapde utarna start kiya th ke darwaje pe ek aahat hui mene vapas bathroom se bahar aai to vo pagal ladka tha, vo mere bacche ke pass jake uske sath khel raha tha, 





Muje thoda dar laga kahi ye mere bachhe ko koi nuksan na pahochaye to accha he ? lekin vo bade pyar se uske sath khel raha tha, mene rahat ki sas lete huve jaldi jaldi nahke aane ka faisla kiya, lekin me riksh nahi le sakti thi to mene bathroom ka darwaja thoda sa khula rakha jitna me unn dono ko dekh saku, mene apni panty ko chodkar sare kapde utar diye or jake bath tab me baith ke fatafat nahna chalu kar diya,  






Me nahane me vyast thi  ki tabhi darwaja takraneka  damam aawaj aaya or me ekdam se dar gai samne dekha to pagal tha mene apna dono stan ko apne hatho se dhak diye or usko bahar jane ke liye bolne ke sath ishara karne lagi, usne meri or dekha haste huve pagal ki tarah idhar udhar dekhkar vapas chala gaya,

Darwaja takrane ki aavaj se mera bachha rone laga tha, mene apne badan ko pochhkar jaldi se sirf nighty jo kamar me les badhkar kar uske pass chali gai, nighty ke niche bra or panty dono hi nahi pahne the, muje iss ghatna se itna to pata chal gaya tha ki pagal se darne ki koi jarurat nahi he,









Apne ro rahe bachhe ke pass jakar doodh pilane lagi, vo pagal kabhi idhar to kabhi udhar tahal raha th, tabhi uski najar ek bade football jese boll pe padi or uske sath khelne laga, or kahi se bet jesa kuch utha laya or ball ke sath khelne laga, uska aakar bhi muje uss gandi nale ke kide land jesa dikhai nene lag, vo kahi bhi kisi bhi raste se meri najaro ke samne aaneka jaise bahana dhund raha tha, vo meri pati per ki vafadari ko todne ki koshish kar raha tha, vo mere mathe ke sindoor pe apna hak jamana chahta ho esa lag raha tha, uske sath mera bharpur yovan or chut ko lutna chahta ho ese bar bar mere ankho ke samne kisi bhi roop me aa jata he.

Kahi sach me esa huva to ?  
Kya vo sach me mere badan ko lutega ?  
meri komal or kamsin najuk si chut ko lutega. ?
kya vakai me itna bada vo meri chut me ja payega. ?






Ye sab soch ke meri chut me khalbali mach gai, meri chut uske land ko nimantaran dene ko aatur ho rahi thi, muje ab under gilapan mahsus ho raha tha, tabhi ball mere uper age gira to hos sambhal te huve vapas apna dyan dusri taraf kiya, 

 ball uchalkar mere pass aake gira to vapas mene use pass kiya, ab vo bar bar meri taraf ball fek kar mere sath khelne laga, muje bhi nind nahi aa rahi thi to me bhi apne bache ko doodh pilate huve khel rahi thi, me uske sath me ghulmil gai thi, vo ek pyara sa agya kari ladka tha, bhale hi vo ek pagal tha, ball uchalkar mere pair ke pass ake gira to mene ek lat mari ball ko or uske pass bhej diya, mere pairo me jo payal pahne the uski aavaj ne usko akarshan kiya, vo aake mere pair ke pass baith gaya or payal ke googhroo ke sath khene laga, kabhi kabhi vo gud gudi bhi karne laga tha, muje isse hasi aa rahi thi, vo dhire se mere bachhe ke baju me aake lait gaya, khelne ke karan garmi lag rahi thi to mene AC on kar diya, 









Mera ek stan se bachha dood pi raha tha iski vajah se dusra stan thoda aadha dikhai de raha tha, vo bade hi kutuhal se usko or mere bachhe ko dekh raha tha, me bhi uss pagal ki harkato ka muaayana kar rahi thi, muje bhi utne hi  kutuhal hui ke chalo ye pagal kya karta he dekhti hu, usne apni ek ungli sidhi karke dhire dhire mere adhe dikhai de rahe satan ke golai ke or lake dhire se ungli se dabaya or turant hath ko vapas khich liya, uski iss harkat se muje thodi hasi aai vo bhi jor jor se hasne laga, tabhi usne apne hath or muh se mere dusre stan se dood pine ka ishara kiya, muje bada tajub or ajeeb laga to mene ishare me hi mana kar diya, lekin vo to apne hath pair ko jatke marke hilake rone or jeed karne laga, me ekdum dar gai or nighty sidhi karke baith gai, ab kya karu kese isko sambhalu kuch samj me nahi aa raha tha, idhar pagal ki rone ki aawaj se mera bachha bhi vapas jag gaya. Mere liye dono ko sambhal pana muskil ho raha tha,


To be continue.......

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Tabhi ek fasla kiya kyo na ishko bhi apna doodh pilake usko sant kar do ye to gunga bahra or uper se aadha pagal he, kisiko bata bhi nahi payega or pagal ki kon bat sunega, kal to bhul bhi jayega vapas, or dhood pine se boobs ka bhar bhi kam ho jayega, or bechara googa bahra uper se pagal he muje daya aa gai, chote se ladke ki roni surat  jara bhi achhi nahi lag rahi thi,  turant let gayi mere bache ke muh me ek stan dal diya or usee mere pass ane ka ishara kiya, vo turat sant hoke pass aaya to usee meri pith ke pise bethne ko ishara kiya, dusra boob ko uske samne nighty ki les ko bina chode se side se bahar nikala or usee pine ka ishara kiya,


 usne turat der na laga ke uss per tut pada,  doodh se bhara huva stan ke samne uske najuk hath ki hatheli ekdam choti najar aa rahi thi, vo dono hatho ki choti hatheli me boobs ko bharne ki chesta karta tha, lekin ye boobs bada aakar ke karan sambhav nahi tha,






 mere bachhe ko sone me 2 se 3 minute lage honge, or  bacche ke muh me se nipple ko nikalakar pagal ki taraf gum gai, vo bhi ab apne pairo ko lamba karke sidha meri or muh karke so gaya, ab position ye thi ki vo mere samne tha or mera baccha mere pise hone ki vajah se mene usee dusri taraf khishak ka ishara. Kiya lekin vo nahi mana ya uske ishara samajh me nahi aaya hoga sayad ,


boob pe daat se thoda kat diya to useke chahre ko door kar diya or puchhhh ki aawaj ke sath nipple uske muh se bahar nikal aaya or meri taraf apna chehra utha ker sawaliya najar se dekhne laga, hum dono aapas me ekdusre se najare mili, uske pyare se chahre ke ankho me dekha to me khud hi uski sawaliya khubsurat jeel jaisi akho me dub gai, or uske komal galo pe pyar se chapat laga ke vapas apni or khich te huve apne bharavdar boob uske muh me dal diya lekin usne apni ankhe meri aankho me milaye rakhi, uska masoom sa  chahre ki ankho se me bhi apni najar ko door nahi kar saki, mera hath apne aap uske sir ke balo ko pyar se sahlana chalu kar diya,








kuch ajeeb sa lagne laga tha, ek ajeeb sa sarir me khumar sa chane laga tha.  boob me tanav ane laga tha, nipple ab khade hokar tan gaye the, sarir me ek alag sa anand ki anubhuti ho rahi thi,  dil jor jor se dadkane laga tha, sarir ke naso me khun ki raftar apne aap bad gai thi, AC ki thandi hava bhi  sarir ki garmi ko thanda nahi kar pa raha tha,  pairo ki naso me ek tanav aa gaya tha. Uske pair jo dood pine ke bavjud uski height kam hone ke vajah se mere pair tak hi saman antar me the,  uski ankho me dube huve hi uske sir ke balo ko kas kar uske chahre ko apne boobs per jor jor se dabane lagi, vo gu gu ki aawaj karne laga,







or jor se uska daat vapas boob me lag gaye, to dusra boob uske muh me dal diya, mere  under ab sex ka saya havi ho gaya tha jo uss pagal pe bhukha Sher ki tarah japat marnene ko taiyar tha. chut ab vapas se ekdam garam ho gai thi, vo apni garmi se pani chodne lagi thi, chut me dher sara chikna dravy paida ho gaya tha. 

Bar bar uss kale gatar ke kide ke land ki vajah se me rasta bhatkne lagi thi, bar bar mera sarir sex ki bukhar me tap raha tha, na chahte huve bhi me apne aapko uss raste se rok nahi pa tahi thi, 

Sex ka saya esa tha ki samne kon he, kesa he, kis jat ka he, use kuch bhi dikhay nahi de raha tha, na to use apni man maryada ka se kuch matalab tha na hi apne pati ka vafadar ka nishan sindoor se, na hi apne Sanskaro se, vo ab iss sex sagar ki gahrayo me uthar jana chahta tha, badan ab aag ki solo me tap raha tha, 



Me apne kabu me nahi thi, hath apne aap uss pagal ke badan ko sahlane lage.  uski tshirt or short ko payar se sahlate huve dhire se nikal diya, vo ab madar jat nanga tha, Tabhi us pagal ko AC ki adat na hone ke karan use thandi lagne lagi, AC adaat hoti bhi kese bichara garib jo tha. nighty kamar me jo gath badi thi vo mene khol di or ab nighty ka upervala sira pakad kar usne apna sarir ko dhakne ke liye jor se khicha to dusra sira bhi sine se dusri taraf niche gir gaya, or  sarir bhi aage se bilkul nanga ho gaya, or thandi ki vajah se vo mere sarir se chipak gaya, uska nanga patla sa sarir mere sarir se chapka to mere muh se aahhh nikal gai, or mene apni ankhe bandh kar di, 



 Uska sarir mere bharavdar sarir ke samne kuch bhi nahi tha, mene apna ek pair ko uthake uske pairon ke uper dal ke apni or khichne lagi, tabhi uska murjaya huva chota sa land meri chut ke balo ke ass pas chubhne ka ehsas huva to  sarir me ek sansani si hone lagi,   ek hath niche le jake uske murjaye land ko tatolne lagi,  uske chote se land ko apni angliyo me pakad kar age pise karne lagi,  lekin kuch der tak esa karne per bhi khada nahi huva, hota bhi to kese bichara pahli bar esi paristhiti ka samna kar raha tha,  upar se adha pagal or nasamaj he. 


Tabhi mene apne sarir ko thoda pise karke apne chahre ko uske chahre ke pass le jake usko puchkarte huve uske hotho pe ek pappi kar di, vo abb bhi muje savaliya najro se dekha raha tha. Me iss khel ko kisi bhi tarah se aaj anjam tak le jana chahti thi, is khel ke madhyam se hi apni jawala sant karna chahti thi, me ekdam dhre se sab apne dav pech khel rahi thi. Vapas mene ese hi ek do bar uske hotho per kiss kiye badme apne honth ko uske hantho ke sath dhire dhire chpka kar chumna chatna chalu kar diya, usako bhi khel me maja aane laga to vo bhi mere sath ese hi karne laga. Mene ek ek karke uske uper or niche vale labo ko chusna chalu kar diya, or apni juban ko kabhi kabhi uske muh me ghusa dethi thi, vo bhi ab mere iss khel me barabar sath dene laga tha, vo bhi apni juban mere muh me dalne laga to vasna se apne ankhe nandh karke uski juban ko chusne lagi, uske sath sath uske murjaye chote land ko bhi age pise karne ka kam chalu rakha, firbhi koi fayda na dekhkar mene chut uske lad pe rakhkar ragdne lagi, chut ke pani se uska land bhi bhig gaya tha, ab kuch kuch halchal uske land me mehsus ho rahi thi,



kuch hi der me iska fal muje mil gaya, uske land me ab dhire dire tanav aane laga tha, me pyar se dhire dhire uske lad ko sahla rahi thi, kyonki use ish khel ke khatam hone tak le jana tha, uske land me ab jan aa gai thi, uski nuni ab land ban gaya tha firbhi kariban vo sirf char se sade char Inch ka lamba or sayad ek se dedh Inch ka choda hi huva tha, meri hath ki mithi me hi vo sama gaya tha,


jo bhi ho loha garam he to hathoda mar dene ka faisla kiya,  uske land ko chodker hath uske sir ke balo ko kas kar pakda or dusre hath ko uski kamar ke niche se le jake uski gand ko jor se utha ke pura ka pura pairo ki madad se apni uper khich ke liya or pith ke bal ho gai, ab me niche thi or vo mere uper, mene position banane ke liye sir or dhad ko thoda uper karke do takiya niche rakh diye, or dono nage pairo ko uper hava me uske kamar ke ird gird utha ke lapet liya,







uska chota sa land meri chut ke ass pass takra raha tha, me ekdam aavesh me aa gai thi, ab ruk pana muskil ho gaya tha, lekin muje pura khel khelna tha to har ek kadam dhire dhire bada rahi thi,  








 ek hath ko niche le jake uske chote se land ko ungliyo se pakad kar dire se chut ke drwar se lagaya or uski gand ko pairo ki madad se apni or dhire dhire khicha, uska land ka chota sa supara meri chut ke dwar ko kholte huve dhire se chut ki chiknai ke karan under sarak gaya, under sarkne me der nahi lagi kyoki ek to chut me pani ke karan pahle se chiknahat ho gai thi or uper se uska land ekdam chota tha or ese hi mene kuch der pade rahne ka faisla kiya kyoki me khel ko bigadna nahi chahti thi, uske sir ko sahlate huve mene ek jordar kiss uske hontho pe ki,  mere aanand ki koi seema nahi thi, mera man khusi ke mare ufan per tha,  kyonki ki ek pagal ko sahla fushla kar vo bhi ek nadan dimag ke ladke pe khel me jeet hasil kar li thi, or usse bhi jyada khusi ye thi ki uska kuwara pan bhogne me mene kamyabi hasil kar li thi. Haaaa Uske sath uska pahela sex karke uska kuwara pan bhogne ke liye me apne app ko nasib dar manne lagi thi,

Isi anand ki anubhuti ke sath mene uske sir ko apne sine per dabaya or vo ek agyakari bachhe ki tarah uska dood pite huve chusne laga, me bhi kabhi kabhi uske mathe per pyar se chumban karti to kabhi kabhi komal mulayam gal ko dono hatho ki madad se sahalati or chumti rahti thi, vo meri esi harkato ko savaliya najro se dekhta rahta he, uski masumiyat pe muje hasi aa jati he, uske dimag me aa rahe vichar ko me achhe se janti thi, sayad vo ye sochta hoga ki ye aunty mere sath konsa khel khel rahi he ? Or muje is vichar se me khud under hi under haste huve khus ho rahi thi, tabhi usne mere boob ko chodkar mere hotho ko chume chusne laga, mene bhi uska fayda uthate huve uske hotho ko chusne lagi, meri chut mese se pani ki dhara bahne lagi thi, mene ab aage badhne ka faisla kiya,


Lekin muje khayal aaya ke ye pagal ko sex ke bareme kuch pata nahi he to dhakka kaha se marega? Mene use apne sine se chipake huve side me dire se palat gaye ab vo mere niche tha or me uske uper, uska patla sa chota sa sarir mere bharavdar or gadrayi kaya ke niche dab gaya,




vo ye sab dekhkar mere chahre ko dekhne laga mene usse pyare smile di or muskan ke sath uske hotho ko chumna chalu kar diya ab vo bhi mera khel me sath dene laga tha, ab mene or aage badhte huve meri kamr or gand ko dhire se land ke supare thak uthaye or puchhh ki aawaj ke sath vapas dhire se land ke uper baith gai, land ekdam chota sa tha fibhi ek naya anubhav ke karan meri chut ki diwaro mese pani ki dhara bahne lagi thi, me ekdum garam ho gai thi, ab akhri dav khelna chalu kar diya mene, dono hatho ko palang pe tikaya apni gand ko hava me land supare tak lake ekdam jorse gand ko vapas land pe patak diya, uske land ko chut ki gahrayo me utarna chahti thi,  tabad tod bichare pagal ke chote se lad ko chodna chalu kar diya,  mere dobo boobs ab havame mere sath sath jul rahe the, jabhi me land baithti thi to uski patli si gand mere badi badi gand ke ubhar ke niche gayab ho jati he, uske sarir ka mere sarir se koi tal mel nahi tha,








lekin ek naya anubhav se me uss pagal ke sath me bhi ab pagal hone vali thi, mene ab apni raftar me teji ladi or jor jor se uper niche hone lagi, mene uske haddi vale  jese baju ko dono hatho se dabake chut ko uske land pe tapatap marne lagi, mere pair ab ethne lage the, meri chut ne apni manzil pe pahoch ne ke liye top gair laga diya tha, meri chahre ke bhav badal gaya the, vo bhi mera ye roop dekhakar gabharahat or sex ka mila jula asar uske chahre pe dikhai de raha tha, vo bechain hoke idhar udhar apne sarir ko hilane laga,







lekin mene use baju  ko kas pakad rakha tha or mere vajan se to bilkul bhi hil nahi pa raha tha. Vo gu gu ki aavaj se muje esa na karne karne ke liye bol raha tha sayad, me bhukhi Sherni ki tarah uss pe tut padi, or uske hotho ko jor jor se kiss karana chalu kar diya. Or uski aawaz dab gai, me meri gand ko uske land pe age pise pagolo ki tarag ragad rahi thi, 







Gand ko patak patak uske land pe dhakko ki bochhar chalu kar di,  jese uska balatkar kar rahi thi,   itni besharam ho gai thi ki uss bechare pagal ko chut se chod chod ke apni havas mita rahi thi, mere boob ke dono nipple tan gaye the,  me vasna me esi doobi ke uske chote se land ko bhitar or bhitar sama dena chahti thi, usse pura ka pura kha jana chahti thi, uska chota sa land meri chut ki diwalo se ragad te huve mahsus kar rahi thi,  land chota hone  ke karan  chut me kabhi idhar to kabhi udhar chubh raha tha, meri uchal ne ki gati badh gai thi, meri chut ki diwalo se behta huva pani uske land ko bhigo kar uske uper gir raha tha,  meri ankho me andhera sane laga tha or AC chalu hone ke bavjud pasine se bhig gai thi, sarir me akdan si hone lagi tabhi achanak satve asman pe pahunch ki anubhuti hui or sarir me ek esa dhamal machaya ke meri kamar or pith dhanus ke aakar ka ho gayi or sir pichhe ki aur jhuk gaya or uske land pe sidhi baithe baithe ek hath uske gardan ke pise le jake jorse meri or khich ke dono badi badi chati ke bich me uska chahra bheech diya,   aaaaaiiiii ...........  or ek jordar fuwaraaaa chut se futta or bahne laga or uske sath hi me jadne lagi, or uske chote se sarir se lipat gai,



Aaj esa sukh mila tha ke mere pass use sabdo me byan kar pana muskil tha,  sarir param anand me dubki laga kar halka ho gaya tha,  dhire se baju me ludhak gayi or kab aankh lag gai pata hi nahi chala,



Comment and like  ❤️  pls,


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Brilliant....
Bahut hi bhadiyaa....
Thoda emotional introspection add karo....
Sex scene ko detail. Me likhiye.....
Choti choti feelings wagerah ko detail mein bataye....
Likhte accha hai....
Thoda spellings per dhyan dijiye or
Dialogue form mein likho....
Lambi jaayegi story....
Agge ka intezaar hai....

Thank you ?

Me jarur koshish karunga dost
Mera grammar thoda week he, or hindi muje aati nahi he, lekin jyada se jyada Hindi sab log padhate he isliye mene hindi me likhne ka faisla kiya,

Story me plot  story ke mutabik thoda idhar udhar aayenge, kyoki ki samay ke anusar story ke mutabik  kirdar ko rakh raha hu, me nahi chahta ek kiradar ek hi bar me apna role khatam kar de, agar ek bar me role khatam ho jayega to erotic stories likhne ka koi matlab nahi he, ye aapko story jab khatam hogi tab ye sab pata chalega, bus aap har ek plot ko dhyan se padhyega, ek plot likhta hu to samaj jana ke aage ishka jarur kuch na kuch lena dena hoga,


Thank you for support ?

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Koi batayega


gif jab post karta hu to chalta he lekin kuch samay bad band ho jata he ?


Pls koi solution batavo meri Puri mahnat pani me ja rahi he,

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Thank you ?

Me jarur koshish karunga dost
Mera grammar thoda week he, or hindi muje aati nahi he, lekin jyada se jyada Hindi sab log padhate he isliye mene hindi me likhne ka faisla kiya,

Story me plot  story ke mutabik thoda idhar udhar aayenge, kyoki ki samay ke anusar story ke mutabik  kirdar ko rakh raha hu, me nahi chahta ek kiradar ek hi bar me apna role khatam kar de, agar ek bar me role khatam ho jayega to erotic stories likhne ka koi matlab nahi he, ye aapko story jab khatam hogi tab ye sab pata chalega, bus aap har ek plot ko dhyan se padhyega, ek plot likhta hu to samaj jana ke aage ishka jarur kuch na kuch lena dena hoga,


Thank you for support ?

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Ek tum hi ho......
Yaraaaaa...... Dildaraaa....

Thank you dost ek tum ho jo ek naye writer ka hosla badhate ho, 
Bahot bahot dhanyawad mere dost

yr):                yr):

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Koi batayega


gif jab post karta hu to chalta he lekin kuch samay bad band ho jata he ?


Pls koi solution batavo meri Puri mahnat pani me ja rahi he,

Dosto kisi ke pass he iska solution pls ...

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Aap likhne per dhyan do.....
You are great at writing......

Thank you sir

yr):

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Subhah me jab aankh khuli to 



mera munna so raha tha lekin pagal kahi dikhai nahi de raha tha, me ekdum gabhara gai aakhir ye pagal kaha chala gaya. Mene bedroom me se bahar nikalkar pure ghar, gardrn, chat or balkani har jagah dekha vo dikhay nahi diya. Ab kya karu kuch samaj me nahi aa raha tha me vapas bedroom jake soch rahi thi ki tabhi mere bathroom me aavaj aai me bhagkar dekha to vo bathtab me pani ke sath khel or naha raha tha, mene use dekhakar rahat ki sans li,


mathe pe aye huve pasine ko saf karte huve me vapas munna ke pass ja rahi thi ki tabhi meri nazar aaine me meri padshai per padi or vahi ruk gai, mere mathe per pativarta ki gawahi de rahi sindur or gale me mangalsutra astvayst ho gaye the, aaj mene sari had par kar di thi, mera man glani or parshyatap se bhar aaya tha, ye mene kya kar diya, ek taraf mene apne pati ko dhokha diya or dusri taraf uss bichare garib pagal bachhe ka najayaz fayda uthake uske shath balatkar kiya. Kya me itni giri huvi aurat hu, ye sub uss jungli do kodi ke ishan ki vajah se mere daman me aaj dag laga diya mene, uske hi vajah se me aaj bahak gayi, aakhir me uss juggi me gai hi kyo ?  Uss harami badsurat inshan ki vajah se mere Sanskar  aaj tar+tar ho gaye, me kisiko mu dikhane ke kabil nahi rahi, ab kya karu? Bus jo bhi ho mene aaj jo galti ki he uski saja to muje milni chahiye,  Me........ me aaj sabkuch DK ko bata dungi, chahe vo muje ghar se nikal de, ya mujse door ho jaye,  lekin itna bada boj me apne sir per nahi rakh sakti, busss ajj samko DK aayege to kese bhi karke me sab sach unhe bata dungi, mere parshyatap ka bus yahi ek rasta he,






Samko DK or nokrani dono aa gaye, samko darwaje ki ghanti sunte hi me dodte huve darwaja kholker unki bahome simat gai or meri ankho aansu ki dhara bahne lagi,
DK : aree kya huva dear, bus do din hi to me bahar tha, 

Me unhe koi jawab nahi de paa rahi thi, meri aankho se lagatar aansu bah rahe the, 

DK : ohhhhh dear muje maaf kar do aaj ke bad me kabhi bhi tumhe akele nahi rakhunga busssss, vo kahete huve muje shofe pe bitha ke dilaasa dene lage,

Me :  siskyaa bharte huve tutafuti aawaaj me kaha, nnnn nahi nahi mmm mafi to muje magni chahiye tum kyon maafi mag rahe ho,






DK : nahi darling ab kabhi bhi me tumhe akele rakhakar nahi javunga bus,

tum apne anshu pochho or muje bukh lagi he baba,

tum iss nasamajh pati ko khana khilavogi, bhukh ke mare ab raha nahi jata, tumhare pyare komal hatho se bana khana khane ke liye taras raha hu dear,


unke pyar  or masoom chahre ko dekhekar unhe kuch bhi batane ki himmat nahi juta paa rahi thi, buss unhe gale lagakar haa me sir hila diya, unke chahere pe pyar se dher sari pappi karke kitchan ki or chal di, ese hi do teen din nikal gaye lekin unhe batane ki himmat nahi hi nahi hui, unke pyar ke samne me haar gai. Unka dil dukhane ki meri himmat nahi ho rahi thi, 

Dhire dhire samay ke saath sub thik ho gaya, me bhi apne ghar parivaar me kho gai, ek din jab cupboard DK kuch dhund rahe the ke tabhi usme purane mobile jo chalu condition me the vo mil gaye, or muje dikhate huve bole

DK : janu ek kaam karo ye mobile chalu he bas isme sim Card dalna he, in mese ek mobile dada ko de de to kesa rahega. Mobile pe baat hoti rahegi to apko bhi udhar jane ki jarurat nahi padegi, or haa yaha aake kholi me rahne ke liye maan jaye to or bhi achhaa he, han aur ek kam aur karna ek SIM  lekar Jana aur recharge kara kar hi Dena,  kya bolti ho.......?

Me : aaaaa hhhhhhaaaa thik he, achanak puchhe jane per muje sochne ka time nahi mila or ha kahna pada, 

Ha to kahna tha to kah diya, lekin uss juggi ki taraf janeke bareme  sochkar hi me tention me aa gai thi. Ek hapte tak bahana banati rahi, lekin kab tak bahana banati, ek din me jab gallery me khadi thi tab raste pe uss jungle gawar badsurat aadmi ko cycle pe sawar hoke city me jate huve dekha, me turant chhupte huve usse dekh rahi thi, ek kala badsurat  bheisa jo cycle ki jaan nikalne ke liye tula tha,  cycle ke tyre uske vajan se dab rahe the, uski badi badi bheise jesi  gand ke niche cycle ki sit  gayab ho gai thi, tabhi muje mobile ke bareme khayal aaya ke mauka achha he ye harami bahar he tab tak usse dada ko de aati hu, or turant taiyar hoke uss raste pe gadi leke chal padi,

Rupmati (Rupa)


Vaha pahochkar fatafat sidhe gali me jake juggi ke pass gadi khadi kar di or foran darwaje ke pass chali gai, Mene dhire dhire darwaze ke khatkhtaya, koi awaj nahi aai to mene wapas do+teen thoda jorse thoka tab jake under su ek bujurg jesi aawaaj aai, kon heeeyy?

Me : muje dhiraj kumar ne bheja he, apse milne ke liye,

Kuch der bad jab darwaza khula tho ek 80 ke uper dikhane wala budha  hath me lakdi ke sahare se khada tha, usne gandi si badbudar  fati huvi dhoti or kandhe pe ek rumal jaisa fata huva gamcha dala huva tha, budhape ki vajah se  uska sarir age ki aour juk gaya tha, jiska sarir puri tarah gal gaya tha, jagah jagah pe chamdi bhi latak rai thai, sarir ke naam pe to bus ek haddiyo ka dhacha bacha tha,



DADA - umer 80 year 




 usse dekhakar esa lag raha tha ke uska ek pair kabr me tha, vo jivan antim padav pe tha, uske chahre pe halki dhadhi or musse thi, uske  muh me to danto ka nam nishan nahi tha, ankho pe chasma tha jo dhaage se beech or side me banda huva tha,  uss bechare ko dekhakar mere dil me vakai me bahot daya aa rahi thi, ye sab dekh rahi thi ki mere kano me ek aawaj sunai di,

Vo mera chahera dekhte huva bola, ki ki kisne bheja heeeyy ?

Me : ji muje vo dhiraj kumar ne bheja he, jaha aap kam karte the unke bete ne bheja he,

Dhi Dhiraj bete ne bheja he, vo turat pahchan gaya or adar purvak avo avo  bitiya kahne laga, or mudke dhire dhire lakdi ke sahare under jane laga, me bhi unka adar karte huve unke pise pise under gai, under 10x10 ki chhoti jagah thi, usme hi ek kone me nahane ke liye batharoom tha, ek side charpai thi jispe gande badbu dar patla sa gadda or uper fati hui chaddar dali hui thi jo dekhar hi pata chal raha tha ki barso se dhuli huvi nahi thi, pure room me ek ajib si badbu aa rahi thi, kabhi kabhi to pesab ki bhi badbu merre nak me gus jati thi, me samaj gai ke vo budhape ki vajah se batharoom me hi pasab karte honge, charpai ke samni ki diwal pe ek rassi badhi huvi thi jispe gane mele kapde tange huve the, me sab dekh rahi thi unhone pusha or aaap ki taaariff ?

Me : Ji Dada me unki dharam patni hu, me aapko dada keh sakti hu na?

Dada : ji ji voooo  to apka baddpan he bitiya. Aap to hamare malik hi bahurani nui, khub khub jiyo bityarani,

Tabhi betho+betho kahte huve unhone muje bethne ke liye apne astvayst charpai sidhe karne lage to mene unka maan rakhne liye khud chaddar thik kar ke dhanyawad karte huve beth gai, or unko bhi mene side pe jaga dete huve bethne ko bola lekin vo nahi mane or vo bhi darwaje ke or apni peeth kaeke hatho or lakdi ko tikate huve se niche jamin per baith gaye, mera mu darwaje ki or tha, hamne batcheet chalu ki,

Bitiya yaha iss garib ke ghar kese aana huva ? sab thik to hena?

Me : Are dada sub thik he. Hum to aapko yaha se lene ke liye aaye he,

Dada : ji hame lene ?

Me : ha dada,

Dada : lekin hum vaha ake ab kya karege, ham ab kuch kam ke nahi rahe,

Me : Are dadaji puri duniya sub log kam ki vajah se riste nahi banate koi koi rista khoon  ka  nahi hone ke bavjud khoon ke riste se bhi adhik hota he,

Dada : nahi nahi bitya apki bat to sahi he, lekin ab bakika jivan yaha hi gujar jane do, vaha aake apko taklif nahi dena chahta or mera pota bhi he padhai ke liye City me college ke hostel me rahta he, 

Me : usme taklif ki kya bat he dadaji, apnose bhi bhala koi taklif hoti he, or ha aap to bhul gaye lekin aapka ladla nahi bhula aapko, uske Najar me to abhi bhi aap dadaji hi he, unho ne hi muje aapko lene bheja he,

Dada : nahin nahin bitiya Rani aapane Jo hamen ijjat Di uske liye dhanyvad, esi ijjat bhi ham jaise is Garib ke liye kafi hai,

Me : please dadaji man jaaiye, ab hamara kartavya hai ki ham aapki seva Karen, hamen bhi mauka de aapke hi seva ke liye, 

Lekin dadaji manne ke liye taiyar nahin the, vo to bus ek hi baat per atke hue the,  bus apna baki ka jivan yahi hai bitane ka nirnay kiya tha,  unka aadar karte huve Maine bhi jyada Jeed nahin ki, kyun ki kafi der yahan Ho gai thi, aur vah jungali Insan ke aane se pahle main yahan se chali jana chahti thi, 

Me : theek hai Dada Ji agar aapka kabhi bhi Dil mein Aisa Ho ki mujhe vahan jana hai to aap bus yah mobile se ek phone kar dijiyega, ham aapko Lene a jaenge,
Aur unki taraf mobile kar diya,  mobile Lene se bhi Na nukkar rahe the lekin Maine kaise bhi karke unhen Mana liya, kuchh der bad main vahan se nikal gai,

Vahase apne ghar per aane ke liye nikal gai, Jaise hi ghar pe pahunchi to gate  pe Buddha Bhikari baitha hua tha,  uske kapde bhi bilkul Dada ke jaise hi the, jagah jagah se fat gaye the, Unke kapde aur sharir per जगह-जगह gandgi ka samrajya  faila hua tha, unhen dekhkar Aisa pratit ho raha tha ki vah kafi dinon se bhukha hoga, chehra aur sharir bhukh ki vajah se murzaya hua dikh raha tha, chehre per jagah jagah umra ki dhalan ki vajah se juriya ho gai thi, dadhi aur mujhe safed Ho gai thi,



Bhikhari baba - umer 72 year




  uska sharir sirf haddiyon aur chamdi se tika hua tha, use dekh kar mera dil daya ki bhavna se pighal gaya, vaise bhi main seva ke karyon se Judi thi,  gate ke undar gai to munne ki rone ki aawaj aa rahi thi to gadi lagakar champa se munne ko lekar uske shath kuchh khana panni dene ke liye bhej diya, kuch samay bad munna khelne laga to gate pe jake dekha to budha bhikhari vahase jaa chuka tha, me vapas aake apne munne ke sath khelne lagi.  Ek do din bad vo vapas budha bhikhari aaya to usse me khud khana pani dene gai. Or khana khake dhanyawad bolke chala gaya,   uski halat dekh kar muje bahot daya aa rahi thi,  man hi man me socha ki kahi vrudha ashram me uske rahneka bandobast kar du to uss bichare ka bakika jivan aram se katega.........








Dosto kya usse vrudha ashram me bheju. ?


Ya



Ghar me rakhu ?

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Buddhe log jo garib aur badsurat ho wohi Rupa ke hero bane to maza aayega. Story superhit hogi

Dear Sir abhi tak aapko kahani ka hero pata nahi chala esa lagta he,


Mene pahle hi kaha tha story ko dhyan se padhyega, story erotic or lambi chalne wali he,

Isliye story ke plot story ke samay ke anusar idhar udhar aayenge, aapko thoda dhyan se padna padega, ek hi bar me kiradar ki entry karke, kam khatam karke rafadafa kar du to story me maja nahi aayega,



Ha ye bat me manta hu ke meri hindi or grammar thoda week he,  or me writer nahi hu bus abhi start kiya he to me jarur koshish karunga ki story or achche se likhu,  so pls aap thoda correction karke padhyega,   ? dhanyawad 


Age ka update ke liye kam chalu he, pura hote hi post kar dunga ye mera wada he, 


Dosto kahani ka hero kon he  vo comment me jarur bataiyega,