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Adultery Zeba ke gadraye chutad [ new update]
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(19-10-2023, 12:39 AM)Therocksayys Wrote: Great update, but I think you have added so many characters. This story was supposed to be on Zeba and Pandit. Please try to focus more on only Zeba and Pandit at the start. More characters can come later.
In the first update you showed Zeba as very innocent and now she is watching all this and laughing doesn’t suit Zeba personality.
Pandit should try to get Zeba into his house again.
Please consider this.
Overall very great story.
Thanx friend , actually Uzma, aur Kallu wala episode shuru me itna bada nhi socha tha lekjn phir kahani banti chali gyi.But is episode ko ab yhi khtm kr dunga.
Basic idea was to seduce Zeba to some level.
NEXT WILL BE ABOUT ZEBA AND PANDIT l
19-10-2023, 02:09 AM
(19-10-2023, 02:01 AM)Therocksayys Wrote: Thanks dost for considering. Yes and it will definitely help Zeba to get seduced at some level and help Pandit when he next take her into his room.
Apke jaise writers bohat kam hai. Start mein hi itne saare characters confuse kardete hain k focus kis par kare. Zeba is story ki jaan hai aur hum sab ki favourite.
Ab able update ka besabri se intezaar hai.
Thanks a lot for liking my writing skills.
Read my other story also
https://xossipy.com/thread-58477.html
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19-10-2023, 05:12 PM
(19-10-2023, 04:52 PM)Therocksayys Wrote: Only Pandit. Kallu is only 18 years old. A shy respected housewife cannot be a whore to a 18 year old. This is too risky.
Pandit ke saath sab kuch raaz rahe ga uska aur use badnaami ka dar bhi nahi ho ga. This is what will make this story kinky and unique.
Aek khoobsurat Jawan biwi doodh se bhi gori aur naram, apni saas se jhooth bol kar aek jungle mein aek budhe badsoorat dhoongi pandit ke saath uske kamre mein uske gande bistar par puri nangi ho kar us se apni Gand marwati hai.
Yeh hai is story ki uniqueness.
Aek mard ke chodne mein aur aek bache ke chodne mein bohat farq hota hai. Kallu aek bacha hai aur Pandit aek hawasi mard jise pata hai usne Zeba ke saath Kia karna hai, kaise karna hai aur isko raaz kaise rakhna hai.
Sochna…..!!!!!
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19-10-2023, 05:15 PM
Kallu will be right for may be Anjum?
2 heroine hai 2 hero....
Only pandit is suitable for Zeba not a 18 year old kid
So ZEBA AND PANDIT..
Anjum and kallu..
2 heroine hai 2 hero....
Only pandit is suitable for Zeba not a 18 year old kid
So ZEBA AND PANDIT..
Anjum and kallu..
19-10-2023, 05:23 PM
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