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Adultery Ammi ke Secrets (Alternate continuation)

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#1

Hello felllow readers and writers,


I would like to request if i can continue the following story

Ammi ke secret: https://xossipy.com/thread-30460.html

The writer has moved onto his antoher story and has not updated for a long time....and hasnt come online either for 2 monthhs now

Note: i do not intend to continue where he left off, i will be flash forwarding....to leave space for him for his orignal continuation whatever that be.

Do give feedback
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Index
(Click on Update to directly hyperlink to that page)


Update 1: Shaila ki kashmakash
Update 2: "Kahan hain Hariya"
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#3

Thanks all
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#4

(30-09-2023, 01:15 AM)Cheekku Wrote:  agar koi madat chaiye ho to story buildup mein to msg kardena ;;

Drop me ur ideas on inbox..... but i do have a roadmap
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#5

Reintroducing the characters

Salim Khan - 50 years (businessman - construction company ceo)
Shaila Khan - 44 years (housewife of salim/dancer)
Sahil khan - 18 (son)
Hariya - 52 years (servant / dance guru/ bodyguard / driver)
Raju - 34 years (autowala)
Raghu - 39 years (streetrat/ flower shop attendant)
Ruksana - 49 years (tailor)
Naila - 37 years (sister of shaila)
Rohan - 42 years (husband of naila / batchmate of shaila)
Rohit - 28 years (hotel attendant)
Lallan
Qureshi
Ramachandran
SubInspctor Bulla
.....
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#6

Jin readers ne pehla part nahi padha hai...PLEASE READ before you come here
Because chracters will be returning and carry forward motivations from original story. (Link in first post of this thread)

Quick re intro of story:
Yeh kahaani hai shaila khan ki..... jo ki ek middle class background se hai lekin inki shaadi ek high class businessman se hui..... jo pehlay tou simple aur conservative thay.... lekkn waqt ke saath inka interest sirf business mein rehgaya....
Kaise shaila ek seedhi sadi housewife se ek hawasi chuddakad rakhail ban gayi .... ek dance competition ki aar mein...... jisko anjaam diya hariya naam ke ek buddhay naukar nay..

Hariya salim khan ke ghar ka pehlay naukar nahi tha..... salim ke ek dost ke ghar kaam karta tha driver aur helper ki haisiyat se.... aur salim ki company mein bhi kabhi kabhi godaam aur warehouse mein haath batata tha....salim aisay uaay jaanta tha.... phir ek samay jab baat ayi ke ghar pe ek fulltime naukar ajaye.... wahan se hariya ne ghar mein pravesh kiya.... jahan uski gandi nazar padi shaila par.... aur wahin se uska mann ban gaya.... usay na paisa chahiye na ruthba....na shauhrat... usay sirf shaila ka poora jism chahiye......
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Shaila Khan
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(30-09-2023, 05:37 PM)Rohit Wrote:  Brother, this is really an extraordinary interfaith adult story. I am very happy to see you have decided to continue the story.You have introduced a lot of new male characters. I don't know what rules they will be played in the story. But if you let other male members except Hariya to fuck the female members, then the story will not be popular among the readers I sure of that. So please don't let other male members to seduce and fuck the female members except Hariya.Thanks again for starting this great story anew. Namaskar Namaskar Namaskar

Thank you bro for your suggestion.
I dont want to reveal how things will.unfold so stay tuned....

But i would hint you to focus on the title of the original story and mine.
Thanks
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#9

(30-09-2023, 06:27 PM)Vamp Wrote:  Yes, I also want only Hariya to seduce and fuck the faithful and Conservative pakeeza female members of the khan family including Sheila's loving and extremely beautiful daughter

Thanks for feedback
Sana was out of original story action except cameos.  I will follow same. Title is for ammi, not khan famiy ke secrets.
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(30-09-2023, 06:44 PM)The Pervert Wrote:  This really an excellent and extremely exciting interfaith adultery.
Thanks a lot for coming forward to continue this great story. I hope you will make this story more exciting and erotic. And I also request you to consider the fantasies of the readers. They want only Hariya to seduce and fuck the female members of khan family. I also want so. You may add more female characters and let Hariya to seduce and fuck them all to make the story more exciting. Thanks again

Thank you for the amazing response. (To all fellow readers)

First of all i am no writer....litrally first try and coz this is my fav story

Second please understand I am doing this without the original writers consent, i hope he doesnt get this thread deleted in the first place!
Third, i do wish to mix in readers fantasies with my own 
BUT it cant be the same as "baday ghar ki bahu betiyan, buddha tailor, " ...... one guy fcks all..... the idea is to bring in new flavours wherever possible.
Finally this story is not about khan family... its about Shaila who plays role of mother to sahil and sana, It will mainly revolve around shaila only as did thr original.

I hope readers will give me some space and time to explore and expand this saga
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Due to the fan demand.... i have had to re build my plot.... hence sorry guys havent been able to kickstart the story.
Will be do it this week...
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#12

Sorry for the delay guys..... had to totally rethink and replot all..

Here is our sexy milf heroine: Shaila Khan
Note: Future updates will have different actresses photos as suitable to the scenes. Same goes for gifs.

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And here is your favourite hero: Hariya

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#13

Due to fan demand, decided to restarting story from where the last writer left...(although i had completely different plan) 
kahaani restart horahi hai jahan pichle writer ne chori thi, parantu yeh ofcourse alternate continuation hai and my vision (with some changes)

Tou kahaani ruki thi is mod par, Shaila jab apni behen Naila aur uske husband Rohan ke saath ek qareebi mall mein gayi thi. Kuch shopping ke baad Rohan jaan buj kar Shaila ko apnay ek harami dost Danny ki jewellery ki dukaan le legaya aur naila ke saath duusri dukan pe chala gaya ....wahan Danny ne chali chaal aur phir Shaila ne bitaye chand rangeelay lamhay Danny ke saath uski dukan ke store room mein. Rohan ke message ke aatay Danny Shaila ko chordeta hai aur dono showroon mein wapis aye jahan koi aur nahi tha. Danny ne shaila ko ek sonay ki kamarband gift kardi.
Phir Rohan Naila wapis aye aur shaila ko gift delakar rawaana hogaye ghar ke liye

Ab aagay

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Update 1: Shaila ki kashmakash


Idhar Rohan aur Naila Shaila ko ghar chhod kar chale jaate hai.......Shaila ghar par kisiko nahi dekh kar....... Harya se jaa kar chudwane ka sochati hai.......kyunki kal raat se wo pyassi thi......aur aaj ka din bhi itna romaanchit jo raha tha...... 
Shaila ki agan bhadki hui thi... aur woh uttejit hui chhat par jaati hai....  Harya ke quarter me...... lekin usse Harya nahi dikhata hai......phir wo usse kitchen me, garden har jagah dhundati hai......lekin Harya usse kahi nahi dikhata.......Shaila thoda chidate huye kahti hai...... 


Shaila : akhir kaha gaya ye kambakht Harya......mai itni pyassi hoo..... aur mil nahi raha......  aur abhi ghar pe koi hai bhi nahi

Tabhi Shaila Harya ka phone try karti hai.......lekin uska phone bhi swich off tha......jisase Shaila ki bechaini badhane lagti hai.......aur apni pyass me tadpaati rahti hai........ 

Shaam ko saahil wapis aya aur Salim bhi. Shaila ummeed mein thi hariya saath aayega..lekin woh niraash hogayi....
Khaana paros kar.... salim shaila se puuchta hai kaisa raha naila rohan ke saath mall ka samay. Shaila uninterested hokay jawab deti hai.... aur bolti hai naila ne mujhe ek gift diya aur help ki shopping mein kuch dresses ke liye....
Phir shaila ke khayalon mein Danny ke sath bitaye woh rangeen lamhay saamnay ajatay hai.... jisse woh apni chut mein hulchul ehsaaas hota hai
Wahan salim usse kuch bol rahay thay lekkn shaila gum hogayi thi danny ke harkaton se aur hariya ki aas meein ...... 
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Shaila uth ke bedroom mein agayi aur change karli nighty mein. Salim aakay dharaam se bed par let gaye
Salim sochukay thay...saahil ki koi khaas fikr nhi thi....aur yahan shaila bechain karwatein badal rahi thi ya kabhi bed se utar kar walk karleti aas paas.... uski phuddi ke bheetae bohot khujli si horahi hai....hawas ab shaila mein dheeray dheerya in mahinon mein pravesh karchuka tha lekin poori tarah se haawi nhi hua hai. Shaila ke anusar yeh ek prem katha hai uski aur harya ki... aur woh haryaa ke sath wafa karna chahti hai. Woh sochnay lagti hai ke kaise anjaan logon ke chuune se bhi woh bikharnay lagtihl hai... yahan tak kuch tou choom tak letay hain.... woh khud pe qaabu nhi rakh pati hai.

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(Shaila ke khayalon mein woh manzar jab danny ne uske pet ko chooma)

Shaila khayalon mein  ek toofan roop dhaarnay laga kaamvaasna se peedit
Usay ek awaaz ayi...

(Harya ki Premika Shaila) : yeh mera behekna duusre mardon ke sath sahi nhi hai.... harya ji ne mera kitna khayal rakha hai....dance sikhaya.... aur jitwaya.... mere sath kabhi badtameezi nhi ki....meri jaan bhi bachayi...aur main yahan apne jism ko duusre ke haathon mein saunp deti hoon .... kya hogaya hai mujhe. Harya ji kya sochengay

(Salim ki Biwi Shaila) : yeh tu kya keh rahi hai.... harya kya sochengay yeh kabse tujhe farq parne laga.... tujhe yeh sochna chaiye ke tu nay paap kiya hai....bhool gayi hai tu ki tu salim khan ki biwi hai...

(Premika) main bhooli nhi hoon....mainay lakh koshish ki sambhalnay ko khud ko... aur phir...competition bhi tou jeetna tha... aur sirf harya kaam aya.... salim ne tou saath bhi nhi diya.... aur unhon ne mera harya ka romance tou dekha hoga stage par.... isliye unhe koo aitraz nhi shayad....aur lekin main kya karti...harya ke romantic andaaz ne mujhe aisa akarshit kiya ke main khud ko usay saunpti chali gayi

(Biwi) baat sirf dance contest jeetnay ki thi...tu tou roz uska bistar garam karne pe tuli hai....

(Premika) harya ji ko gurudakshna bhi tou deni thi....itna haq tou banta hai unka jaise unhon ne mera khayaal rakha...

(Biwi) maan letay hain ke iss durbhagya mein tumhe apni pakewza chut ka sauda iss ghatia tareeqay se gurudakshna mein karna padgaya lekin tum tou pyaasi hogayi uski

(Premika) mujhe kya pata tha hum dono ko ek duusre se prem hojayega.... aur woh sampoorna hua uss raat jaise koi naya bhagya shuru hua meri jeevan ka, jiski shuruat uss raat hui jab mere preminguru ne woh sukh diya rajhastan ki raeth pe khulay aaasman mein jo sirf ek Mahapremi de sakta hai....honeymoon ke baad salim kahin nahi legayaye mijhe.... aur yahan meray is premi guru ne aisa anoka yaadgar anubhav diya jo shayad hi koi premika ko milay... aisi raatein filmon mein dekhayi jaati hain
Mujhe tou asal zindagi aisi experience dilayi 
Tou bhala main iss premi ko dukh nhi de sakti

Ek teesri awaz judti hai shaila ke mann mein
(Hawasi Shaila) kya raat thi woh..mm jism ka ang ang mein raungthay kharay hogaye the...humara husn hi aisa hai ... humari pyaas bohot adhuri rahi in saalon mein... ab jaakay maza araha hai... tou bhala thora idhar udhar airay ghairay thora humara swadh chak le tou kya hojayega...kaunsa sab ke saath raat guzarni hai

(BS) nhi yeh sab galat hai... hum biwi hain kisi ke yeh sab shobha nhi deta aur paap hai

(HS) chup kar ... shaila soch jab bhi kisi ghair mard market mein dheel di hai... humara munafa hi hua hai..

(PS) lekin woh harya ki nazarandaazi mein hua joke unke saath dhoka hai...main koi dhandaywali aurat nhi hoon

(BS) harya ke saath??? Arey salim ke saath dhokay ka kya??
Hawasi shaila iss biwi shaila ki awaaz ko dabatay huay

(HS) arey kya ghisi piti purani soch ... aagay barhna hai tou bold aur hona sabne yeh bataya hai .... dhoka woka kuch nhi hai.... apna faida dekho aur mazay se jiyo.... phoolwalay ke paas se faida hua aur khud ke mazay huay.... auto mein woh cute raju se free ride mili... aur ab danny ke dukaan mein jo mazay diyay humne usne tou yeh sonay ki belt hi de daaali... ek raat guzar lein usse tou pata nhi dukaan hi na humaray naam kardain!!

(PS) nhi nhi main koi bazaaru aurat nhi... main sirf harya ki hoon

(Hs) acha chalo harya hi sahi... bas meri baat yaad rakhna hamein bohot faida milsakta hai

(Ps) nhi salim mere pati hai aur harya mera premi... aur yeh baat ghar ki hai ghar mein rahegi

Shaila ka yeh aapsi tufan tham jata hai... lekin ab woh harya ki talaash mein wapos gum hojati hai
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late night phir ek chakkar lagati hai..... harya ke room tak....lekin niraash hokar wapis room tak jaati hai...lekin phir usay sidiyon pe saahil milta hai.

Shaila hairaan hogi sidiyon pe saahil ab tak soya nahi...saahil bolega ke usay college function ke drama pe daala gaya hai woh rehearse kar raha tha... phir woh yeh bolega ke hariya kaka nhi dikh rahay .  
Shaila bas kahegi jao ab sojao.... sahil chup chaap chala jayega...
Lekjn usay bhi pata hai shaila kyun baahar thi.

Shaila thora nirasha chupa kar apnay kamray mein jayegi...aur soch mein duub jayegi...ke woh apni aaj raat jo pyaas lagi hai woh kaise bhujayegi... salim ko hilati hai thora lekin salim nhi hiltay.... woh bas kamray se connected balcony pe hawa khaati hai soch mein...aur kisi tarah neend ki goli lekay so jati hai. Woh ye asha karti hai shayad harya subha tak ajeyga........
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#14

Thank you all for ther overwhelming response!

My suggestion is to re-read original story to keep track of connections coming ahead

My intent would to Update EVERY WEEK ONCE, only on Sundays in general.

As per the title and original story, daughter sana will not be involved, its just Shaila Ammi

Enjoy next update and give feedback here or inbox.
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Update 2: "Kahan hain Hariya?"


"Abay burbakon....Kahan mar gaye thay itnay din..... koi phone nahi koi milna nahi.....lagta bhool hi gaye humko tum teeno ? "

Hariya ne awaaz lagayi uss daaru ke aadday par 3 vyaktiyon ki taraf jo arahay thay hariya ki table ke paas.... ye wahi adda hai jahan Harya ne Raju, Raghu aur Ruksana ke saath mulakat hui thi dance competition se theek pehlay.... yeh adda Raghu ke basti ke paas ek pool ke konay mein tha (yeh pool paar karke hariya ka mohalla tha)

Lekin aaj Woh teen thay Raju, Raghu aur Pankaj....
(Raju aur Raghu ko aap sab jaantay hain, Pankaj inke mohallay ka mashoor paanwala hai..... )

Raju : arey hum se bol rahah ho kaka, khud tou aisay gayab huay ho jaise hamein pehchaantay hi nahi thay....bilkul anjaan matlab....aisa lag raha hai saal beet gaye...
Harya : abbay Raju bhosdike! zabaan ladata hai kaka ke saath!
Phir sab hasne lagay....Raju bhi khisya gaya..

Pankaj: Kaiy-se ho kaka, bahoot samay hogaya aay nahi humri dukaan par.... paan ki addat choot gayi ka? Ya koi aur dukaan tou nahi pakad li?

Hariya: abay nahi.... bas aaj kal apnay jeevan mein bohot vhast thay....aaj teray se woh paan letay huay jaaonga.....lekin haan tu meray bohot kaam aya Pankaj...
Teray nashilay paan ne meri murgi ki uttejna bhadkanay mein bohot faida diya...
Isiliye aaj ki jaam meri taraf se tum sabko....
Usko dance rehearsals se pehlay woh paan khilakar woh jaisay naya roop apnay antar se ubhaarti hai....

Raghu: kya kaka, abhi bhi naach gana dhong hi chalra hai uss madak jism ki rani ke sath yah jhanda gaar bhi paye ho?

Hariya: bhosdike, tujhe kya lagta hai, umr mein bohot aagay hoon tum sabse tou meray ko halkay mein na lo..abhi bhi yeh Hariya 30 saal ke hattay kattay mard ke barabar hoon.....

Jhanda tou kabka gaad diya......
Yahan tak bolta hooon.... uss taalay ko meri najaayaz chabi ne aisa khola ke woh sirf ab mujhse khulwana chahti hai.....
Aur..Jaisay roz hum sab apnay ghar ki tanki bhartay hain waisay hi .... yeh Hariya apna pipe daal ke roz uski gehri khai mein apna maal bharta hai

Raju, Raghu, Pankaj hairaan hokar: KYA?? Kya baat kar rahay ho kaka....sach??

Raju: wahh...!!! Badhai ho kaka...chah gaye guru..... main jaanta tha.....ufffff...aap zaroor jeetogay.....kya drishyay hoga..... aap jaisa shaktishaali surkh kaala mustanda ..... woh shaadishuda pakkeeza safed tareen makhmali jism ko rondh raha hoga....






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Raju:.. mera tou yeh khabar sun kar hi khara hone laga hai (Raju apna lund pakar leta pni autowali uniform ke pant mein....)

Hariya raghu ki tareef se prasann hua aur proud feel kar raha hota hai

Pankaj: badhaai ho kaka.... badhiya.....maza agaya sunkar kya dialogue maaray ho...kitna sabar karna para aapko...

Raghu: badhaai ho kaka....mujhe pata hai woh garam asaani se hojati thi... lekin woh apni choot napaak honay degi......yakeen nhi horaha hai...... woh khanzaadi maan gayi thi yah aapne ??

Hariya: Abay... Dhakkan.... agar meray ko zabardasti karni hoti tou main dance wance ka koi rasta na letA aur pehlay  he kar leta....
Yaad nahi.... usko mainay tum dono ke paas bhijawaya tha....usay garam karnay ke liye....
Koi shaadishuda aurat apni izzat apni marzi se day aur apna jism khud saunpay usme hi maza hai.... woh bhi kisi aur ki dharm ki .... tou sone pe suhaga
Isliye zabardasti se kabhi kisi ki choot marnay mein woh anand kabhi nhi milega....
Murgi ko achi tarah paal pos kar khila pila kar.... halal karne mein swadh aur santushti ata hai
...
Teeno iss bat se apna lund nikal tay hain....aur dheeray malne lagta hain.....

Aaah... (Hariya gehri saans letay huay).... teeno apni aanhen band karo.... aur suno...

kya gadraya jism hai uska..... 
kya rasilay hont....
uski sarayi gardan.....
kya rasbharay aam jaisay uske goray boobs....
uska spaat pait.... aur uski woh gehri naabhi........ (hariya zubaan pherta hua)...
Uski chikni peet.....aur usse bhi chikni kamar..... 
Uski taango pe jo tuaycha woh bhi itni naram
.....uski phaili hui gaand jo main jald phaad doonga aur anth mein .....
.......kya tight choot hai uski...... 
amrit se bhari....aur phir....
Kya drishhay hota hai... mera kaala baahubali jaisa jism.... uske goray chittay shaadishuda jism ko....rondtay huay..... aur meray har dhakkay pe uski mooh se siskiyan itni madhur .... sampoorna anand ata hai.....

Teeno apna lund nikal kar hila rahay hotay hain... ... 

Hariya : aey Bimla idhar aaa.... teri zarrorat hai
(Bimla iss adday pe kaam karti hai shaam ko customers ko khana sharab parosti hai.......aur raat mein jo ziada keemwt dega uske aaath raat guzarti hai)

Raghu:  aaaghh.... sach mein mujhe yeh drishhay dekhna hai....
Raju: aaaghhhh..... yessss.....
Pankaj: Mainay isay sirf dance contest pe dekha tha....lekin kya maal hai.....mujhe aur qareeb se dekhna hai

Raghu aur Pankaj mein dum tha tou woh araam se hila rahay thay...woh hariya se poochta hai ke tou aapka kya irada hai kaka...

Hariya: abhi tou main usko ghar ke kisi bhi konay mein chodta hoon....
(Iss beech Bimla agayi.... )

Bimla: haan kaka.... 
Hariya ishara karta hai inn teeno ki taraf....

Bimla: arey wah teen teen..... dekhtay kismein hai kitna dum aur kiska kitna nikalta hai....
Biml ghutno pe baith jaati un teeno ke beech mein.....Raju aur Pankaj ke balls ko halkay ss chuunay lagti hai..... jisse woh dono manmohak hojatay hain.... aur raghu ke lund ke topay pe apni zubaan se flick karti hain

Hariya: tou main keh raha tha.... abhi kahin bhi ghar pe chod deta hoon.....
Pata hai usne tou khud apni marzi se mera bistar ka mattress badalwaya.....
Jisse ki roz raat ko usay garam karsakay.....

Iss baat se.... teeno mein josh uth jat hai.....bimla bhi josh se raghu ke lund ke.topay pe apni zubaan ka khel mein raftaar le aati hain...

Hariya: lekin meri agli chaal se main Salim khan aur Shaila khan ke vyavhit bistar pe usay apni randi banaounga....aur maza usme hain.... jab uska pati khud mujhe bolega.... "jao meray bed pe sojao.... Shaila tum bhi saath do Hariya ka.."

Yeh sun mar sab climax pe agaye apnay...sabse pehlay raju 

Raju: aaaanhhhh.... unhhh... apna lund bimla ki aur karke....jhadne lagta hai....aur kaamp sa raha hota hai....
Pankaj: kaka.... kya khatarnak planning kartay ho.....le mera bhi hogaya Hai bas
Iss baat se Raghu tou jaanwar jaisa tez hilanah laagta hai.....
Bimla apna mooh raju kk taraf karke koshish karti jitna Woh apnay halak mein jitna le sakay ....
Pankaj bhi chornay lagta hai.... sab bimla ke chehray pe har jagah phail raha tha...
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Aur raghu ab kagaar pe tha....
Hariya: phir main usay usi bistar pe chodunga.... kabhi apnay bistar par.... aur har din subah... dophair... shaam...raat...bas yahi ghamasaan chalega

Aur ab Raghu apna lund Bimla ka sir apni taraf kheech kar uskay mooh mein.daal deta hai aur saara veerya undelnay lagta hai.......
Iss beech inn baaton se Bimla jo ki dhandhay wali aurat woh bhi jhad gayi.....
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Chaaron apni saansein hanptay huay..... bimla abhi bhi pi rahi thi.... raghu ka lund kayi strokes mein pani chor raha tha....
Sab pikar bimla..teeno ka lund choomti hai... aur Raghu ko bolti hai.... aaj tou tu hi bujhayega meri....aajana 2 bajay...main khatiya tayyar rakhoongi teray liye 
Aur chali hljati hai

Idhar hariya phir poochta hai..... Ruksana nhi dekhayi deh rahi.... kyun raghu.... kaisi thi wohhhh...
Raghu: hmphh..... hmphh.(saans laataybhuay)... mast thi kaka..... utni raseeli nahi jitna Tumhari shaila hai.... par jam ke choda usay..... lekin yeh Raju jaldi gir gaya tha....

Hariya: abay Raju kasrat kiya kar..... warna tujhe apni beti tou koi waise bhi nahi dega.... tou biwi milegi nahi...aur randiyaan bhi laat marnay lagengi
...

Pankaj: kaka, hamein yeh drishhay dekhna... mehsoos karna hai.... live... abhi tou kalpana se kam chalaya...lekin mujhe tou dekhna hai... mujhe yakeen nhi horaha hai
Raghu: kaka, yeh tou hai,  dekh kar nikalnay ka apna maza ayega
Raju: mainntou yeh sab xossipy jaisi sitesnpe parhta hoon.....mujhe yakeen.nhi horsha hai main khud ab yeh sab dekh raha hoon...

Hariya: abay saalon....theek hai sochta hoon...kuch.....bandobast karta hoon.... 

Sab apni glass khatm karke apnay rastein chalay jaatay hain.... hariya raju ke saath uske chotay jhopdi mein jata hai...

Raju: kaka, aal ghar nhi jaogay... usay raand bananay
Hariya: aaj nahi.... dheeraj....aaj or kal woh tadpegi...aur phir mainay kahan ek lambj game khel raha hoon....

Raju: kaka, please aap mujje sikhao aur mauqa do...mujhe sirf Shaila pasand hai.... mujhe chakna hai uskay jism ke ang se paseenay ki ek ek boond ko....chodhna chahta hoon
Hariya: theek hai meray lal, tu mera khaas tou raha hai.... pal pal ki khabar deta rehta hai....tujhay thora haq banta hai
Tou sun ek formula hai tere liye............(hariya raju ko kuch samhatay huay)
Hariya ek single bed lar aur raju zameen par sojatay hain.

(Raat guzar jati hai.... aur savera hojata hai.....)
(To be continued)
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An index has also been created on page 1, 2nd post for easy future navigation fir your favourite episodes!

And guys also, tel me if i should increase the font size or any such recommendations???
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(22-10-2023, 09:34 AM)Rana007 Wrote:  Fantastic story. Please post a big update

Update 5 will be big! Cool
Wait and read until then...
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Guys, Thanks again for amazing response. Appreciate your feedback
To clear out, no gangbang anywhere near.



Also, please let me know do you guys like previous writer's "song dance into sex" type stuff?
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Guys,
Thanks for the increased interest for this continued story from a rookie writer like me.Appreciated.

as i mentioned in an earlier post and also in my sign below, updates will come on weekends.....
But fyi, i am of course working on update 3 and 4 for this weekend.

A little patience guys, exciting stuff ahead.
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