[sarit11]

14asma4u
story adult hi ban rahi hai...ismein koi kami nahin hai..lekin ismein love bhi hai
love hai tabhi to raja rani jaise words ka use ho raha hai

kaee kahani mein raand randi jaise words use kiye ja rahe hai...jo yahan nahin hai
aage story mein male ramu ko hi rakhna..lekin female bahut add karna...preeti...ruby ki sister bhi ho sakti hai...

baki nokar add na karein

[sarit11]

Originally Posted by Ford_wwf View Post
Sorry guys. I am not able to continue with the story as I had to travel abroad. I am finding difficult to write the story. If anyone interested he/she can continue with the story.
I know it is bad to leave the story in the middle but please undrstand my situation.

Thanks for your comment and appreciation.

duttluka
so sad..........

i hope somebody continues with it........

[sarit11]

newmaleboy
Bahut umada story hai ... Writer ji ne bahut achhi tarike se isse likha hai ... Agar writer ji aage update de nahi paa rahe hai to kya muje permission de sakate hai kya aage ki story likhane ke liye ... If he allows I can try to write ... Unke jaise to likh nahi paunga par koshish jaroor karunga

30th June 2018

Ford_wwf
Anyone who is interested can continue with the story