[seansean007]

Thanks.

Anita k gand me garam लंड ghushed k uski अंतड़ी me aag  sa laga do... let these lowlifes fuck the crap out of this memsahab  ... story ko apne tarike se aage badhao 

Awesome update! Hariya and Anita is really rocking this story. clp); clp); clp);

Please continue

Awesome

Super fantastic,awesome and amazing update clp); clp); clp);

Absolutely fantastic update

Just wow update was beyond expectations... waiting for more actions and foreplay..

Absolutely fantastic,mind blowing update. Hariya is really a very very lucky man.

Uodate when bro

Superb! Outstanding and marvelous update! clp); clp); clp);

[seansean007]

Thanks.

What a story and what a plot. Waiting for next update eagerly.

Of course marvelous update!

Very much hot,erotic and lascivious writings! clp); clp); clp);

Amazing,awesome,dashing,and thrilling update!

[seansean007]

Thanks for the detailed feedback.

Great build up. Bus wale incident ne Anita ki chudas ko aur badha diya hai aur wo ab Raj se chudwate gue bhi dono Lundo ko yaad kr rahi thi.

Ab to Anita ne bhi bol diya Hariya ko ki " aaj apko meri koi aur sewa karna h to kr dijiyega pr uske liye apko jaldi aana hoga" aur Hariya to 20 min me hi pahuch gaya h. Ab to bahut time hai to sayad ek step aur aage badh jaye Hariya aur Anita ki Gaand ko nanga karke dekhe aur masle. Vaise bhi bus wala budha to dekh hi chuka h Anita ki gaand ko to ab Hariya ko bhi inam milna chahiye.

Aage ke liye bhi Hariya ne aane ka bahana bana hi liya h Store room ki safai ke bahane or abhi to is baar hi jis tarah se Hariya ekdam nanga baitha h usse Anita ki chut jarur fudakne lagi hogi aur Hariya ko dudh bhi pina hai.
Jis andaj se Hariya Anita ke randipane ko dheere dheere bahar nikal raha h wo lajawaab hai.

Sean bro your writing is awesome aur ap itni details me Anita ke ek ek harkato ka ullekh karte ho ki maja aa jata h. Aise hi likhte rahiye aur is baar jab Hariya ko phli baar mauka mil skata h Anita ki Gaand aur Chuchi ko nanga krne ka to mast kinki baate krte hue nanga kare Anita ko aur uske ek ek ang ki detail me tarif kare.
Let see kya Hariya ko Anita ki chut ke bhi darshan ho pata hai kya abhi ya nhi.

[seansean007]

Hi guys. I will update the story this weekend. In the meanwhile I have been working on several stories whenever I get time. One of the stories I wanted to publish here to get your opinion. Anita Singh will obviously be the priority and I will write this new story only after moving Anita Singh story forward significantly. Just let me know your opinion on the new story and whether the premise of the story is interesting (along with the fact that whether the first chapter itself was able to arouse your feelings).

I also request other writers/readers not to start their own story taking the plot from here. Respect others creation. Thanks.


Atul and his wife Nisha along with their friends Ravi and Priya reached a colony on the outskirts of Noida. The colony was newly constructed and did not have many residents as it was away from the main city. Most buyers were NRIs who had bought the flats as an investment.



Atul and Ravi had also bought flats in one of the buildings in that colony. They were the first buyers to shift in that building. Both were childhood friends and had decided to start a business under a partnership. Since they had invested a significant amount of money in their business, they decided to buy flats on the outskirts of the city because they did not want to spend too much money on flats.



Their wives who were used to city life were obviously not happy with this decision but ultimately gave up after visiting the colony on a few occasions. They too belonged to a well to do middle class families and had helped their hubbies by investing in their business from their personal savings which they got from their parents.



Since their wives supported their noth the decisions, to start the business and shift to new flat to this remote location, they wanted to make sure that their wives are happy. Therefore, both the friends decided not to shift any old items from their previous flats and the new house was furnished with brand new items. So all they had to do was take their personal belongings only which they had already shifted.



Both the families reached the destination in their respective cars at the same time. The watchman, a fat man in his late 40s with a black complexion smiled at them and opened the gates. When the car was crossing the gate the watchman smiled looking at both Nisha who was in the first car with her hubby and then at Priya who was in the second car with her hubby. Both Nisha and Priya returned the smile at him.



When the families reached the car parking area they saw that there was no other car as they were the first residents to shift to that building. However, it was not completely empty. On one side of the car parking space a table was place surrounded by 4 chairs which were occupied by 4 men.



Both Nisha and Priya looked towards that corner and saw those men were playing cards. When the car was parked both the couples got out and were greeted by a voice,"Namaste Atul aur Ravi saahab. Aakhirkar aaj shift ho hi gaye aap log (Namaste Atul and Ravi sir. Finally you all have shifted here)".



Both the couples turned towards the source of the voice and saw that it was Shambhu's voice, the guy responsible for keeping the society clean.



Atul replied back with a smile on his face,"Haan Shambhu. Samaan to pehle hi bhej diye the aaj finally aa gaye (Yes Shambhu. We had already shifted our belongings. Today we have also finally shifted here)".



Shambhu too smiled and replied back,"Haan Atul saahab humne dekha (Yes Atul sir, we saw that)".



Shambhu's gaze then turned towards Nisha and Priya and he smilingly greeted both of them,"Namaste memsahab (Namaste Madam).



Both Nisha and Priya greeted back with a smile,"Namaste Shambhu".



Then both Nisha and Priya looked towards the other 3 men who all were looking towards them only. Both of them could recognize one of the other three person. He too looked towards both Nisha and Priya and with a smile said,"Aap logo ka yahan swagat hai. Apan ko yaqeen hai ki aap logo ko yahan rehne mein achha lagenga (Welcome all of you. I trust that you all will enjoy living here)."



Both the couples smiled hearing this but both the married women smilingly replied back,"Thank you Usmaan".



Hearing this Usmaan looked at both the women from top to bottom which was obvious to every one present there. Even to Atul and Ravi. They knew that Usmaan was looking at their wives curvy bodies but they didn't react. Nisha and Priya also looked at Usmaan but said nothing.



All of a sudden Usmaan said,"Bhabhiji tum dono ko koi takleef nahin hoyenga yahan. Ek dum araam se mast hokar rehne ka. Koi takleef ho to apan ko zarur batana. Woh Atul aur Ravi babu to bade businessman hain. Yeh to apne kaam mein busy rahenge. Aese mein tum dono ko kisi bhi baat ka pareshani hoyenga to bejhijhak apan ko bolne ka (Sister-in-law you both won't have any problem staying here. You can stay here comfortably. Let me know if you have any problem. Atul and Ravi are big businessmen so they would remain busy with their business. In such a situation you can approach me without hesitation if you have any problem)".



Both Priya and Nisha smiled hearing this when they saw the other two men say something to Usmaan. Usmaan looked at both of them hearing this and then with a smile looked at both Nisha and Priya and said,"Aur haan yeh Bablu hai aur yeh Chhotan. Dono apan ka khaas dost hai, apan ka langotiya yaar (Ohh and this is Bablu and that is Chhotan. Both are my dear childhood friends)".



Hearing this both Nisha and Priya smiled, especially hearing "langotiya yaar". The next moment both of them greeted,"Namaste bhabhiji".



Nisha and Priya both smiled and greeted back,"Namaste".



Bablu said,"Bhabhiji tum dono ka swagat hai yahan. Jaisa Usmaan bola, aap dono yeh mat samajhna ki yahan koi nahin hai to aap dono akela hain. Apan log hai aapke liye. Kisi cheez ka zarurat hoyenga to apan log haazir rahenga. Bas bejhijhak bolkar dekhne ka (We welcome you both. As Usman said, you both don't think that just because there are no residents here you both are alone. We all are here for you. We will be present whenever you need anything. You just need to let us know without any hesitation)".



Both Nisha and Priya smiled at this and then Chhotan smilingly said,"Kisi bhi cheez matlab ki koi bhi cheez. Apan log to yahich pada rehta hai zyadatar waqat to koi baat hone par apan log ko bol sakti ho".



Nisha and Priya both smiled hearing this and nodded positively. Those four men again looked at their bodies from top to bottom and even Nisha and Priya looked at them. All of those 3 men were in their mid to late 40s. They were all well built but had developed a slight paunch. They all were black in complexion and clearly looked like ruffians with slight facial hairs which had partially turned grey.



Nisha and Priya observed that both Bablu and Chhotan were wearing shorts and shirts with two of the upper buttons open, whereas Usmaan was wearing a Pathan suit. Shambhu was wearing a lungi and a shirt. He was younger than those three men and looked like in early 30s, but he too like those three was black in complexion.



Atul and Ravi were mute spectators. They didn't know what to say. They knew that Usmaan was a local goon and was associated with a political party and they guessed that same must be the case with Bablu and Chhotan as they looked like him and also were his childhood friends. They were glad that they started on good terms with them, but didn't like the way they were looking at their wives.



Both of them were glad when Nisha said,"Achha hum chalte hain. Abhi to shift hue hain, bahot saara kaam hai. (Okay we have to go. We have shifted just now and there are lots of things to do)".



Those 4 men smiled hearing this and then both the couples went towards the elevator. When in elevator Priya said,"I didn't know Usmaan stays here most of the time".



Ravi replied this,"What other work these types of people have? They just waste their time playing cards and all".



Hearing this Nisha replied,"Guys let's not be personal okay. What they do is their business but I am glad that these guys will be staying here most of the times".



Hearing this both Atul and Ravi looked at Nisha with a surprised expression but before either of them could say anything, Nisha continued,"This is a new locality and there is hardly anyone here. This must be a soft target for thieves and robbers. I am sure with Usmaan and his men around no thief will dare to enter the building.".



Priya too jumped in with her point of view,"I agree with Nisha completely. Usmaan and his men are kind of bodyguards of this building and isn't this why he is allowed to be here by the builders? I have also heard that he is associated with a political party and has quiet a reputation in these areas of being a "dabang" and I am sure no thief will dare to enter a building guarded by a dabang like Usmaan".



Nisha continued the conversation,"And that's about Usmaan only. We don't know anything about Bablu and Chhotan. Who knows they might be having the same reputation. With three "dabang" men around, not only thief but we will be safe from other kind of threats as well".



Priya replied,"Yeah yaar Nisha, I agree (Yes dear Nisha, I agree with you)".



Atul finally got a chance to jump in the conversation,"Guys I agree with your points but let's not forget that these guys are goons and I am not being personal just stating a fact".



Nisha quickly rebuked him,"So? What do you want to prove with your fact?".



Atul replied,"Just that these guys are goons and since when have goons become a necessity for safety?".



Nisha replied quickly,"In certain situations they are necessity Atul. Let's not be childish and try to act like everything is perfect in this world".



Priya again jumped in,"Again I agree with Nisha. Guys whether you like it or not but men like Usmaan, Bablu and Chhotan are also required in this world. They also have their purpose. And it's more of a point of view. For some they might be goons but for some they might be good men. They have been respectful towards us so let's be respectful towards them as well. I am sure they will prove to be useful some day".



Nisha continued,"Yeah I am sure too. Guys these men will treat you the way you treat them. They are straight forward in that regard. Again as Priya said, it's the point of view. Let's consider them good men, show respect and I am sure they will prove to be good men in your eyes as well. But obviously if you try to be assholes towards them they will not watch you like some coward and let it go by. So it's all upto us, whether we want men like Usmaan, Bablu and Chhotan to be on our side so that we live here peacefully or do the opposite".



Priya echoed Nisha's sentiments,"Yeah yaar and they have been so nice to offer their help to me and Nisha incase we ever need help. You guys will be busy in your work and office and it's me and Nisha who have to stay here the whole day, so isn't it good to have someone around in case we need help".



They got off at the eleventh floor and there was silence as they got off the elevator and Nisha again continued,"Yes true Priya".



Then she addressed the men,"You two decided to buy flats at such a remote location and we agreed like good wives. Now that we are feeling secure with men like Usmaan being around to help us when you guys will be busy with your work, kindly don't do anything that will make us regret our decisions to support you".



Priya again supported Nisha,"Yes guys. We have been good wives to support your decision and now it's your turn to be good husbands. If you don't like Usmaan and his friends that's fine, I mean you guys will be busy with your work anyway, but atleast don't spoil anything for us ladies who might require their help in urgent situations".



Both Atul and Ravi had flats on the same floor. There were only couple of flats on each floor and they were glad to have the flats next to each other. This was one of the reasons why they were happy to get the flats in this building. Looking at their flats reminded them of their brilliant decision of buying the flats.



Being proud of his decision to buy the flats in this locality, Atul said with a smile,"Okay girls. We get your point. Now shall we enter our flats with a smile on our faces and holding each others hands? Or do you want to continue arguing".



Hearing this Nisha said with a smile,"Shut up Atul. We were not arguing, but just trying to support you guys only".



Atul and Ravi both looked at each other with confusion. Sensing this Nisha continued,"What we were trying to say is that we support you guys decision of buying the flats here and we want to live happily here. Therefore, let's be friendly towards whatever neighbors we have. Isn't that correct?".



Atul and Ravi both held their ears and said together,"Okay baba."



Then Ravi said to Priya,"Ab flat mein chalen ya angreji mein aur bhi kuchh kehna hai memsahab?"



Everyone smiled at this whereas Priya flirtingly slapped Ravi on his back,"Shut up".



They all laughed and entered their respective flats. The rest of the day went by with the couples putting their personal belongings to where ever they wanted to put them.



The next day was Sunday morning. Both Priya and Ravi had joined Nisha and Atul in their flat for a Sunday brunch. The couples were having a good time at the dining table where they were sitting chit chatting along with having coffee after the brunch.



They were all laughing and having a good time when the door bell rang. Nisha got up hearing this and the other three turned their attention towards the door as they didn't know whom to expect as such a remote location when their friends and relatives were yet to ask for the exact address of their new flats.



Nisha went to the door and after looking through the peep hole opened the door and with a smile greeted someone at the door. The next moment she nodded her head and came back towards the dining table and proceeded towards the kitchen when Atul asked her,"Kaun hai Nisha darwaze par (Who is at the door Nisha?)"



Nisha replied,"It's Shambhu. Bol raha hai ki aaj Sunday hai to Usmaan aur uske dost neeche parking space mein peene baithe hain aur thode ice chahiye unhe (He says that Usmaan and his friends have gathered in the parking space to enjoy drinks on Sunday. He asked for some ice cubes)".



Before Atul or Ravi could react or say anything they heard Priya,"Dost nahin langotiya dost bolo yaar (Not friends, say childhood friends)".



Hearing this Nisha laughed out "Hahaha" and Priya too joined in the laughter. Atul and Ravi just looked at each other and nodded their heads but said nothing.



Nisha opened the refrigerator and while pulling out the ice cubes looked at Priya and said with a smile,"Langotiya dost nahin, langotiya yaar samjhi (not childhood friends, but childhood dear friends)"



Priya nodded her head and then both of them again burst out in laughter. The men were just mute spectators, sipping their coffees. Nisha started putting the ice cubes in a container when Priya said,"Nisha let's give him the leftover of the brunch. We had cooked more than required".



Ravi opened his mouth to say something when Nisha replied,"Yeah sure. It better to share than to let it go waste".



The next moment Ravi saw his wife Priya get up from the chair and walk towards the kitchen saying,"Let me pack them and we can give it to Shambhu".



Nisha nodded her head in affirmation. Priya went to the kitchen and packed the foods. Both the men looked at their wives packing ice cubes for a few goons so that they can enjoy their Sunday drinks and also packing their brunch as they want to share them with those goons rather than let it go to waste.



Both the women packed whatever was required to be packed and then together proceeded towards the door and with a smile on their face, handed the packets to Shambhu. Both of them said something to Shambhu but neither men can hear what their wives told to the cleaner of the society. They then closed the door and joined back at the dining table.

[seansean007]

To jaise ki sean bhai , ek adha update ane me lagvg 10 din lag hi jta hy , Aur kavi kavi to aur v jada , Toh aise me jab multiple ideas pe likhoge , kitne samay bad bad updt ki umeed rkh skte hy readers? 3 se 4 mahine man k chale?  Bas khali chhod mt dena JAAWAN BIWI ki tarah

The next update will be after 10 years. Come back then. No need to be back before that to waste your precious time. I know VVIP like you are super busy and it can be annoying for you when you take out a few minutes of your precious time only to find that there is no update. So I am saving your precious time and from your agony by letting you know when to come back. If that is too far away, then just forget this 3 star story and just read 5 star stories. Don't waste your time on anything less than 5 star rated story. Also don't come to this thread even as a guest because even that will waste your precious time. Thanks.

[seansean007]

UPDATE 59

Anita usko dekhkar ruki huyi hi thi ki tabhi Hariya ka lund thoda jhatka maara jaise khada hone ke time hota hai.

Hariya apne lund ko dekhne ke baad Anita ko dekhkar muskuraya to Anita bhi ek nazar uske lund ko dekhne ke baad Hariya ko dekhkar muskura di.

Jaise hi woh muskurai to Hariya muskurata hua bola,"Maaf kijiyega memsaahab woh hum paseena se bheeng gaye the to socha ki AC mein baitha hoon to thoda badan ko achha se sukha lun".

Anita Hariya ka baat sunnkar muskurati huyi randipane wali awaaz mein boli,"Are nahin Hariya ji isme maafi mangne ki kya baat hai.Aapko jaisa theek lage aap baithiye.Aap mere liye itna kuchh karte hai to iske badle aapka itna haq to hai hi ki aap araam se aapko jaisa dil kare waisa baithe.Itni garmi mein mere liye samaan laane ke kaaran aap paseena se bheeng gaye the to aapne to theek hi kiya hai.Aese baithne se aapka paseena sukh jayega. Mujhe koi safai dene ki zarurat nahin hai aapko. Aap araam se jaisa dil kare waise baithiye main juice lekar aati hoon".

Hariya yeh sunnkar muskuraya aur Anita ko muskurate hue dekhte hue apne pet mein sikan laaya jisse uska lund phir se halka jhatka mara.

Hariya ko muskurate hue dekh Anita bhi muskura di aur phir ek nazar woh Hariya ke taang ke beech nazar daal kar use lund jhatakte hue dekh waapas uske chehre par dekhi to Hariya ko khud ke taraf daant dikhate hue muskurate hue dekhi.

Anita usko muskurata dekh khud bhi muskurai aur ek nazar phir se uske lund par daali toh woh phir se apna lund jhatak diya. Anita uske lund ko jhatka maar dekh muskurai aur bina kuchh bole ya Hariya ko dekhe apni gaand matkati huyi kitchen ke taraf chali gayi.

Anita kitchen ke taraf jaati huyi apni gaand ko normal se zyada matka rahi thi aur Hariya uski gaand ko normal se zyada matakta dekh jor se gaane laga,"Tohri gaand badi hai mast mast, tohri gaand badi hai mast".

Anita itna sunnkar apni aankhein badi karke peeche ghumkar Hariya ko dekhi to woh daant dikhate hue muskurate hue gaana jaari rakha,"Tohre gaand ko dekh humre lauda mein aaye josh josh".

Hariya yeh line jab gaaya to uska lund phir jhatka maarne laga jise Anita dekhi aur dekhkar besharmi se muskurane lagi aur aascharya se apni aankhein badi kiye hue muskurati huyi sir hilane lagi.

Hariya aage gaate raha,"Humre lauda ko nahin rahe koi hosh hosh".

Anita ki chehre par yeh sunnkar muskurahat ke saath ek garv ki bhao bhi aa gai thi apni jawaani aur khoobsurti ko lekar aur woh muskurati huyi garv ke bhao se Hariya ke chehre to kabhi uske lund ko dekh rahi thi.

Hariya aage gaate raha,"Tohri gaand hile, haan tohri gaand hile, jab tu matak ke chale. Tohri hilti gaand ko dekh hoye humra lauda khada khada".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi apni sir hilati rahi aur phir Hariya aage gaya,"Tohri gaand badi hai mast mast tohri gaand badi hai mast" aur saath hi woh apne lund ko jhatka de raha tha. Anita besharmi se apni chehre par garv ki bhao liye muskurati huyi Hariya ke lund ko jhatka maarte hue dekh rahi thi aur uske gaane ko sunn rahi thi.

Hariya utna gaana gaakar daant nikal kar muskurane laga to Anita bhi muskurati huyi apni sir hilakar use dekhti huyi randipane wali awaaz mein boli,"Hariya ji aap bhi na. Sach mein".

Hariya yeh sunnkar muskuraya aur phir uski gaand ko dekhne laga to Anita waapas ghum gayi aur apni gaand ko waise hi normal se zyada matkati huyi kitchen mein chali gayi.

Anita kitchen mein jaa kar ek tray mein juice ka bottle aur ek glass rakhti huyi Hariya ke taraf dekhi jo waapas sofe par araam se haath aur taang phailaye baitha use hi dekh raha tha.

Anita uske chehre ke dekhne ke baad uske lund ko dekhi to uska lund phir jhatka maar diya. Hariya ka lund dekhne ke baad Anita waapas uske chehre par dekhkar puchhi,"Hariya ji kuchh aur lenge kya? Mera matlab hai kuchh khaiyega?"

Hariya use dekhkar apna lund jhatakte hue bola,"Nahin memsaahab juice theek hai".

Anita yeh sunnkar uske lund ke taraf dekhi aur phir woh tray uthakar sofe ke taraf jaane lagi.

Hariya usko kitchen se aate hue dekhkar apna haath aur tang phailye hue baitha Anita ko dekhkar muskura raha tha.Anita bhi usko dekhkar muskura rahi thi aur ek nazar uske lund par daal kar waapas uske chehre par dekhkar muskurati rahi.

Woh jaakar Hariya ke saamne jhukkar table par juice ka bottle aur tray rakhi.Aesa karne se uski cleavage jo chhoti si blouse me achha khaasa dikh raha tha aur zyada dikhne laga.Uski cleavage dekhkar Hariya apna lund jhatakte hue bola,"Waah memsaheb humka jo peena hai woh kitna achha lag raha hai".

Anita yeh sunn kar muskurai aur waisi hi jhuki huyi bottle kholne lagi to Hariya usko bola,"Are memsaheb bottle to khulega hi,lekin eehan humre paas aakar baithkar araam se kholiye na".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi khadi ho gayi aur Hariya ke lund ke taraf ek baar dekhkar sofe par jaakar uske bagal mein uske baaye taraf baith gayi.Uske aur Hariya ke beech ek feet ka fasla tha.Yeh koi zyada duri nahin tha magar Hariya Anita se bola,"Memsaahab humse kauno ghalti ho gawa ka?"

Anita yeh sunnkar aascharya se Hariya ko dekhkar boli,"Nahin Hariya ji, kyun?"

Hariya usko dekhkar bola,"To aap humse itna door kahe baithi hain. Aaiye na humre paas".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi boli,"Offo Hariya ji aap bhi na. Aese bolte hain ki main bhi soch mein pad jaati hoon ki aakhir kya hua. Seedhi baat ko bhi baatein bana kar kehna koi aapse seekhe sach mein."

Hariya araam se nanga baitha Anita ko dekhte muskura raha tha.

Anita aage boli,"Main koi bahot zyada door thodi baithi hoon aapse".

Phir woh randipane wali awaaz mein boli,"aur agar aapko aesa lag bhi raha tha to mujhe pakad kar apne paas khinch lete. Itna to taaqat aap mein hai hi ki mujhe apne paas khinch sake".

Hariya yeh sunnkar muskuraya to Anita muskurati huyi uske kareeb khisak gayi magar Hariya uski kamar pakad kar apne taraf khinch kar use apne se pura chipka liya.

Aesa karne par Anita ki munh se "aaah Hariya ji" nikal gayi aur woh khilkhilane lagi,"Hehehe aap bhi na Hariya ji".

Hariya ke khinchne se Anita usse puri chipak gayi thi, aese ki Anita ki dayi chunchi Hariya ke seene se satt gayi aur Hariya apna baya haath uski kamar se upar lejakar uski bayi chunchi ko mutthi mein bharkar bola,"Are memsaheb abhi to humre ander itna taaqat hai ki aapka ragad kar seva kar de, bas bolkar dekhiye to humka"

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi Hariya ke seene par bayi haath rakhkar pherti huyi boli,"Hariya ji aap bhi na. Seva koi ragad kar kiya jaata hai kya? Seva to pyaar se karna chahiye".

Hariya yeh sunnkar Anita ki chunchi dabate hue bola,"Are memsaheb hum jo seva karenge u to ragad kar hi kiya jaata hai".

Phir woh Anita ki badan ko gandi nazar se dekhte hue bola,"Aur aapki seva to ragad kar hi hum karunga to aapko humre seva ka asli mazaa milega."

Anita yeh sunnkar uske seene ko sehlati huyi boli,"Hariya ji pata nahin kaun sa aesa khaas tareeqe se aap meri seva karna chahte hain ki woh seva ragad kar hi karenge to mujhe achha lagega. Khair ab aapki marzi ki aap kaise seva karna chahte hain".

Hariya yeh sunnkar daant dikhate hue muskurakar Anita ki chunchi dabate hue bola,"Kaise ka".

Phir woh Anita ki chunchi dabate hue hi apne aankhon se lund ke taraf ishara karte hue bola,"Ee se hi seva karunga ragad kar".

Anita yeh sunnkar Hariya ke lund ke taraf dekhi to woh jhatka mara. Anita yeh dekhkar muskurati huyi Hariya ke seene par apni baayi haath phirati huyi randipane wali awaaz mein boli,"Hariya ji aap bhi na. Aese ab theek se aapke saath baithi hoon ya aur bhi kuchh complain baaki hai?".

Hariya Anita ki bayi chunchi ko apne baaye haath se dabate hue bola,"Ab theek hai memsaahab. Aese kauno shikayat to nahin hai lekin ek aur cheez hai memsaahab jo hum kehna chahta hoon."

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi Hariya ko dekhti huyi uske seene par apni khoobsurat,nazuk,gori,lambi aur patli ungliyan pherti huyi randipane wali awaaz mein boli,"To boliye na Hariya ji kya baat hai?"

Hariya yeh sunnkar Anita ki ungliyon ke taraf aankhon se ishara karte hue bola,"Aapka ee khubsurat haath humre seene se zyada achha".

Agle pal Hariya apne lund ke taraf aankhon se ishara karte hue bola,"humre lund par rakhne se lagega. Ee aapka Khabsurat haath ka abhi sahi jagah uhan hi hai, humra lauda par".

Anita yeh sunnkar apni ankhein badi karke muskurati huyi randipane wali awaaz mein boli,"Hariya ji aap bhi na.Koi aese bolta hai kya?".

Hariya yeh sunnkar hasne laga,"Hahaha" to Anita use dekhti huyi uske seene par ungliyaan pherti huyi muskurati rahi.

Hariya hasne ke baad bola,"Are memsaheb ka ghalat bola hoon hum. Dekhiye na kaise aapko dekhkar humra lund khush hai. Aap thoda haath rakh dijiyega to sasura aur khush ho jayega".

Anita muskurati huyi uske lund ke taraf dekhi to woh phir se jhatka maarne laga. Anita uske lund ko ek nazar dekhne ke baad saamne table ke taraf apni dono haathon ko lejakar juice ka bottle kholti huyi boli,"Pehle aap juice pijiye Hariya ji nahin to yeh garam ho jayegi".

Yeh bolkar woh bottle kholkar glass mein juice bhar kar Hariya ke munh ke taraf glass lejaati huyi boli,"Yeh lijiye Hariya ji.Yeh peekar apna pyaas bujhaiye".

Hariya apna munh khola to Anita Hariya ko apne haath se ek ghunt juice pilakar uske taraf dekhne lagi to Hariya bola,"Are memsaahab ee to humra gala ka pyaas bujhayega. Lekin sasura humra lauda bhi to pyaasa hai. Eeka bhi to pyaas bujhana hai humka".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi boli,"Hariya ji aap bhi na.Phir se wahi baat.Koi aesa bolta hai kya? Hathiyaar bhi to bol sakte hain aap ise" aur yeh bolkar woh glass ko Hariya ke honthon ke taraf badha di.

Hariya uski chunchi dabate hue ek ghunt juice pi liya phir bola,"Are memsaahab hum lauda ko lauda hi na bolunga.Jis tarah se hum aapka chunchi ko chunchi bolta hoon aur ee gaand ko gaand bolta hoon."

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi besharmi se boli,"Theek hai Hariya ji ab bas bhi kijiye. Bas baatein hi banane lagte hain aap".

Hariya yeh sunnkar muskuraya to Anita waapas juice ka glass uske honthon se laga di aur woh uski chunchi dabate hue juice peene laga. Anita Hariya ke aankhon mein dekhti huyi use juice pila rahi thi.

Thoda juice pilane ke baad Anita glass Hariya ke honthon se hatai to Hariya ka lund phir jhatka mara jise dekhkar Anita muskura di.

Anita ko muskurate dekh Hariya bhi muskura kar uski chunchi dabate hue bola,"Sasura humra lauda to aapko dekhkar hi baukhla jaata hai magar abhi aapka ee mulaayam chunchi dabane se ek dum bechain ho gaya hai humra lauda. Ee bhi bahot pyaasa hai memsahab".

Anita yeh sunnkar Hariya ke lund ke taraf dekhi to woh dheere dheere jaag raha tha aur khada hote hue thoda jhatke maar raha tha.Hariya apna lund ko jhatak kar bola,"Dekhiye memsaahab kitna bechain ho gaya hai humra lauda".

Anita uske lund ko dekhkar randipane wali awaaz mein boli,"Haan Hariya ji.Sach mein aapka hathiyaar to pura bechain ho gaya hai".

Hariya yeh sunnkar bola,"Are memsaahab ka kare sasura aapko dekhte hi bechain ho jaata hai aur jab aapki ee bada bada gaand ko matakte aur hilte dekhta hai to ek dum sa pagla jaata hai, pura baukhla jaata hai".

Anita yeh sunnkar glass ka juice ek baar Hariya ke honthon par laga kar use pila kar use table par rakhkar uske seene par ungliyan phirati huyi neeche ke taraf lejakar lund ke thoda upar uske pet par ungliyan phirati huyi randipane wali awaaz mein boli,"Hariya ji aap aur aapka hathiyaar. Dono ko pata nahin mujhe dekhkar kya ho jaata hai. Mujhe dekhkar aapke munh se mere liye bas tareef nikalne lagta hai aur aapka hathiyaar bas baukhla kar akadne lagta hai. Main jab kitchen mein jaa rahi thi to aapka hathiyaar to pura baukhlaya hua tha".

Phir Anita uske lund ke tope par halka pre cum ke taraf ishara karti huyi randipane wali awaaz mein boli,"Aur aapke hathiyaar ke munh se laar bhi tapakne lagta hai, jaise koi cheez ko dekhkar lalcha raha ho aur uske liye bhookha ho".

Hariya apna lund jhatak kar Anita ki chunchi dabate hue bola,"Are memsaheb ka dekhkar lalchayega. Aapko hi dekhkar to aesa karta hai. Ab lalcha raha hai ya jo bhi hai aapko dekhkar hi aesa karta hai. Aur raha baat jab aap kitchen mein jaa rahi thi to u waqat to aapki ee bada bada gaand aese hil rahi thi ki sasura aapka gaand ko hilta dekh humra lauda bechain ho gaya. Ab sasura ke saamne aisan bada gaand hilega to ee chup thode rahega."

Anita yeh sunnkar uske pet par haath pherti huyi randipane wali awaaz mein boli,"Theek hai Hariya ji aapka hathiyaar baukhla gaya meri bum dekhkar lekin aap bhi to kam nahin hai. Kaisa gaana gaane lage aap meri bum ko dekh kar."

Hariya yeh sunnkar hasne laga,"Hahaha" to Anita besharmi se muskurati huyi boli,"Hariya ji aap bhi na. Koi aese karta hai kya woh bhi aesa gaana. Sach mein".

Hariya yeh sunnkar muskurate hue bola,"Are memsaahab ab hum aapka gaand hilte hue dekha to humka jo mann mein aaya u hum gaa diye. Ab aapka gaand itna bada bada aur mast hai jisko hilta dekh humra lauda bechain ho jata hai to upar jo mann mein aaya u hum gaa diye".

Anita yeh sunnkar Hariya ke pet par haath pherti huyi randipane wali awaaz mein boli,"Hariya ji aap bhi na. Main nahin sochi thi ki aap mein itna talent bhara hai ki koi cheez dekhkar itni jaldi gaana bhi bana denge".

Hariya yeh sunnkar Anita ki chunchi dabate hue bola,"Are memsaahab hum bhale hi ghareeb hoon, lekin baaki cheez mein hum mein bahot telent hain".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi glass uthakar use juice pilati huyi boli,"Haan woh to main dekh hi chuki hoon ki kitna talent hai aap mein. Jab bhi mujhe madad ki zarurat padti hai aap aa jate hain. Yeh bhi to ek talent hi hua aur aaj to aapne mujhe dekhkar gaana bhi bana diya. Pata nahin aur kitna talent aap mein bhara hai".

Hariya juice peene ke baad bola,"Are memsaahab hum to thokne mein bhi bahot telented hai. Ghanto thok sakte hain. Aap humse thukwa kar dekhiye to tab aapka samajh aayega ki hum kitna zabardast thukai karta hoon. Hum aapko jhuka kar peeche se aisan thokunga ki aapki gaand humre thukai se hilne lagega".

Anita ka dil yeh yeh sunnkar dhadakne laga aur woh apni ankhein badi karke Hariya ko dekhti huyi uske seene par haath pherti huyi randipane wali awaaz mein boli,"Hariya ji aap bhi na. Bas ghum phirkar meri tarbuj ki hi baat karne lagte hain".

Hariya yeh sunnkar muskurate hue bola,"Are memsaahab ka kare aapki gaand hai hi aesi ki sasura humka u dekhne ka, chhune ka aur uska tareef karne ka mann karta hai. Sach bataye to aapka gaand dekhkar humra telent badh jaata hai".

Anita yeh sunnkar apni ankhein badi karke Hariya ko dekhkar muskurakar boli,"Hariya ji aap bhi na".

Yeh sunnkar Hariya hasne laga,"hahaha" to Anita bhi muskurati huyi apni sir hilane lagi aur phir juice ka glass Hariya ke munh ke taraf le gayi to woh ek sip pi liya.

Anita yeh glass table par rakhkar Hariya ke seene se lekar pet tak haath pherti huyi randipane wali awaaz mein puchhi,"Hariya ji sach sach bataiye. Meri peeche dekhkar aapko kaisa lagta hai aur kya mann karta hai?"

Hariya yeh sunnkar Anita ki chunchi dabate hue bola,"Are memsaahab ka bataye. Aap toh humra lauda ko dekhi hi ki aapki gaand ko dekhkar kaise bechain ho jaata hai. Sasura aapki hilti huyi badi gaand dekhkar humra khoon khaul jaata hai aur lauda mein u garam khoon jaakar aisan baukhlata hai humra lauda ka ki humra mann karta hai ki aapko jhuka kar peechhe se ragad kar thukai karu, aapko achhe se chodun".

Anita ki saans yeh sunnkar tez hone lagi thi. Hariya ke munh se chodne wala baat sunnkar woh bina muskuraye uske pet par haath pherti huyi uske lund ke taraf dekhi aur table se glass uthakar ek garv ke bhao se Hariya ke honthon se laga di.

Living room mein ab khamoshi thi aur Anita chup chap Hariya ko juice peela rahi thi aur Hariya bhi Anita ki chunchi dabate hue uske haath se juice pee raha tha. Woh baaki ka juice ek saath pee gaya to Anita glass table par rakhkar bottle se glass phir se bharne lagi to Hariya bola,"Are memsaahab ab rehne dijiye kitna juice piyenge hum"

Anita yeh sunnkar Hariya ke taraf dekhkar randipane wali awaaz mein boli,"Hariya ji ek glass aur pi lijiye. Meri wajah se itni dhoop mein aaye hain aap. Kitna paseene se bhar gaye the aap. Ek glass aur pi lijiye"

Hariya yeh sunnkar Anita ki chunchi dabate hue use apne se aur chipka kar bola,"Katna khyaal rakhti hain aap humra memsaahab. Sach mein hum bahot kismat wale hain ki humka aap jaisi memsaahab mili".

Anita glass mein juice bharkar Hariya ko dekhkar waapas uske seene par ungliyan pherti huyi boli,"Aap bhi to mera itna khyaal rakhte hain Hariya ji. Bas aapko pata chalna chahiye ki mujhe kisi madad ki zarurat hai aur aap haazir ho jaate hain. Aap apni memsaahab ka itna khyaal rakhte hain to aapki memsaahab kya itna bhi nahin kar sakti".

Hariya yeh sunnkar muskurate hue bola,"Sach mein memsaahab aap kitna achhi hai jo humra atna khyaal rakhti hai. Hum bhi apka achhe se seva karna chahta hoon memsahab magar sasura ab tak nahin kar paya hoon".

Aniya yeh sunnkar randipane wali awaaz mein boli,"Hariya ji aap to meri seva aur madad karte hi hain. Bazaar mein itna khul kar meri seva aur madad karte hain aap to phir yeh mat boliye ki aap meri seva aur madad nahin karte hain".

Hariya Anita ki chunchi dabate hue bola,"Are memsaahab utna to theek hai lekin abhi tak hum aapka ee humra lauda se seva kahan kiye hain."

Anita yeh sunnkar Hariya ke seene ko sehlati huyi randipane wali awaaz mein boli,"Hariya ji aap bhi na".

Hariya Anita ki chunchi dabate hue bola,"Are memsaheb asli seva to humre lauda se hi hoga na aur ab tak hum aapka apne lauda se seva kahan kiya hoon".

Anita yeh sunnkar apni ungliyaan Hariya ke seene se neeche uske pet tak phirati huyi boli,"Hariya ji aap bhi na. Aap meri madad karna nahin bhulte aur ab aapka hathiyaar meri seva karna chahta hai. Aap aur aapka hathiyaar sach mein".

Hariya yeh sunnkar muskuraya aur apne pet mein sikan laakar lund ko jhatka diya jise dekhkar Anita muskura di to Hariya bola,"Dekhiye sasura humra lauda aapki seva karne ke liya kitna bechain hai. Ek baar chhukar dekhiye na memsaheb, bechaini aur baukhlahat se kaisan akad raha hai. Aapka khabsurat haath mehsus karke thoda shaant hoga".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi uske lund ko dekhne ke baad Hariya ko dekhkar boli,"Hariya ji mujhe nahin lagta ki aapka hathiyaar bas mere chhune se hi shaant hoga. Jaisa aapne kaha ki yeh pyaasa hai aur akad raha hai. Iske liye to tel se iski maalish karni hogi tabhi jaakar iska pyaas aur akad khatam hoga."

Yeh sab sunnkar Hariya ka khoon garam hone laga aur Anita ki baat sunnte hue uski chunchi dabane se uska lund jhatka maarne laga. Hariya apne lund ke taraf ishara karte hue bola,"Dekhiye humra lauda aapke haath se malish ka baat sunnkar sasura kaise khushi se naach raha hai. Aap ka sach mein humra lauda ka abhi maalish karengi".

Anita yeh sunnka Hariya ke seene par haath pherti huyi randipane wali awaaz mein muskurati huyi boli,"Aur nahin to kya Hariya ji. Jitna baukhlaya hua akad raha hai aapka hathiyaar bina maalish ke iska akad nahin jayega."

Phir woh uthti huyi boli,"Aap araam se juice pijiye Hariya ji. Main tel lekar aati hoon"

Hariya Anita ke uthne se pehle ek baar jor se uski chunchi daba diya magar Anita chup chap wahan se uthkar kitchen jaane lagi to Hariya ka awaaz phir se suni,"Tohri gaand badi hai mast mast, tohri gaand badi hai mast".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi bina pichhe dekhe apni gaand ko aur matkane lagi. Hariya gaate raha,"Nahin laude ko humra hosh hosh, teri gaand ko dekhke aaye ise josh josh. Tujo aese chale, tujo aese chale yun natak natak, teri gaand hile zabardast zabardast, teri gaand badi hai mast mast, teri gaand badi hai mast".

Anita muskurati huyi kitchen mein jaa kar ek katori nikal kar usme tel daal to huyi Hariya ko dekhi to woh use dekhkar muskurate hue gaane laga,"Ee jo humra, bada sa lauda, dekhke tujhko khada ho jaye sasura, ee jo humra bada sa lauda dekhke tujhko khada ho jaye sasura. Ispar jo lagaye Tu tel tel. Tel lagne ke baad tujhe main du pel pel".

Anita tel daalti huyi uska gaana sunnkar muskurati rahi aur akhri baat "pel pel" par aankhein badi karke Hariya ko dekhi to woh muskura diya aur gaand bandh kar diya. Anita tel lekar uske taraf aati hui muskurakar boli,"Hariya ji aap bhi na. Aaj to aap apna pura talent dikha rahe hain".

Hariya muskurate hue bola,"Are memsaheb aaj hum aapko apna pura lauda bhi to dikhaye hain".

Anita muskurati huyi boli,"Hariya ji" aur tel ka katori table par rakhkar muskurati huyi uske saath chipak kar baith gayi magar Hariya uski chunchi pakad kar apne se aur chipka liya aur uski chunchi dabate hue dheere se puchha,"Boliye na memsaheb humra lauda aaj pura dekhkar aapko kaisa lag raha hai?".

Anita sach mein aaj pehli baar Hariya ka lund pura nanga dekh rahi thi. Ab tak Hariya pant se lund nikal kar use dikhata tha jiske kaaran lund ka upar ka aadha bhaag hi woh dekh paati thi. Aaj pehli baar woh uska lund pura jad tak nanga dekhi thi aur uska balls bhi pehli baar dekh rahi thi.

Anita muskurati huyi boli,"Hariya ji kya bolun. Achha hai aapka hathiyaar".

Hariya Anita ki blouse mein haath ghusate hue uski bra ke upar se uski chunchi dabakar puchha,"Bas achha hi hai humra lauda?".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi uske pet par ungliyaan phirati huyi randipane wali awaaz mein boli,"Umm Hariya ji. Bahot bada aur mota hai aapka hathiyaar".

Aur Anita agle pal apni ungliyaan uske lund ke upri bhaag par rakhkar thoda sehlane lagi. Hariya ke munh se "aaahhh" nikal gaya aesa hone par.

Anita use dekhi aur phir agle pal tel ki katori ke taraf haath badhati huyi randipane wali andaaz mein boli,"Hariya ji ab aap juice apne se pijiye. Bahot khyaal rakh li main aapka. Ab main chali aapke hathiyaar ka khyaal rakhne".

Hariya yeh sunnkar muskurate hue pura glass juice ek saath peekar glass table par rakh diya aur apna dono taang aur phailakar thoda saamne sadak gaya to Anita boli,"Hariya ji woh cushion peeth ke paas rakhkar araam se baithiye".

Hariya yeh sunnkar cushion peeth ke paas rakh kar inclined karke tange phailakar sofe par baith gaya aur apne shirt ke pocket se kuchh nikalne laga.

Anita uske lund par tel girane lagi jisse uska lund jhatka maarne laga to Anita use dekhkar muskurane lagi. Tel ka katori woh waapas tray mein rakhkar uske lund par tel malne lagi.

Anita ki haath apne lund par padne se Hariya ke munh se "aaahhhh" nikla to Anita use dekhti huyi muskurai aur dekhi ki Hariya apne pocket se bidi aur match box nikala tha. Anita uske lund ki maalish karti huyi use dekhne lagi aur woh bidi munh mein daalkar use jalakar match stick ko bujha kar use kahin rakhne ke liye table par dekha to Anita apni dusri haath se juice wala glass uske saamne kar di.

Hariya usme match stick daala aur phir waapas Anita ki chunchi pakad kar dabane laga aur Anita uske lund ko dekhti huyi maalish karne lagi.

[seansean007]

Yes not too in favour of the songs

Reason?

[seansean007]

Hi Sean, I hope you are well and having a good time.
Reading the updates after a long time. I must say that you are the master of story telling and building sexual tension. In the era of porn where one can get orgasm in no time, it is worth reading your story more importantly when sex is being shown/depicted as something either taboo or too casual, taboo as in people don't wanna talk about it and casual as in people are liberated already so much so that it doesn't need effort to get yourself laid.

Sex and the relationships surrounding it are real life phenomenon and not simply just come-meet-fuck-ejaculate. It is too unreal.
But thank you for depicting reality, where if we apply the logic of your story in real life it feels. Sex is for enjoyment of the people involved in it and not just about one person's satisfaction where other person lay on bed unsatisfied. I cannot appreciate you enough about this. There's a reason why the survey shows that females stays unsatisfied in sexual relationship in 80-90% of the cases.

This version of the story is sexy-raunchy as you have promised and is worth reading it because of its detailed scenarios. There are a lot of KLPD movements in this version where were expecting something but alas KLPD comes in our way but I am saying this not as a criticism but only as genuine admirer of this story as how the story should depict the realities of the society and not fictional imagination. We are not used to about his slow seduction, build up and have no idea what it takes to get what we want which should be real.

As much as Anita knows herself, it is hariya who is showing tremendous amount of courage and patience while dealing with Anita. He has understood Anita well and that's why he is still grounded otherwise we would have given up on Anita if we were in his position trying to get into the pants of Anita. It is because of hariya only we are able to see the Anita opening up and has only grown up in here overall nature(or was she already like this from starting only?) Her participation yet reluctance in going too far immediately shows the character of Anita, I agree with the other readers comments where he has called Anita as CHALOO AURAT. Because she knows where she is heading into but she also knows how to maintain her stature as not being a whore who will let you eat her simply, for that you'll have to win her. Ahh wonderful.

I also liked the bus incident where we can see what hariya has been able to achieve in his acts to seduce Anita, when Anita in one bus journey only has messaged the dick of that man on bus. It shows Anita has started to enjoy and is trying to participate equally if the opposite person is courageous enough.




My mild criticism of this version and as well as for the previous version is that the way you have gone into the depth of telling your story there is something lacking here which is the accute details of how hariya's body is, you have not fully given the details of hariya apart from his labourer background. Where in this new update you have shown that how hariya is almost naked, you did not tell how hariya's stature is is his body full of hairs, is his body full of odour which is stinky yet arousing to Anita, are his genitals full of hairs and dirt as is should be? What running in Anita's mind seeing his cock and balls? Is she enjoying as it is her first time having these acts with low class man? How much is she enjoying seeing his body, his cock? Please include this details as well, because we are literally imagining this happening in real and it will add tadka also in this story.

Thanks a lot for the detailed feedback. Appreciate it. With the lack of detailed feedback during the past few updates from the regular readers, I was starting to feel that the story is not as enjoyable as I want it to be. This kind of feedback is necessary for me to keep going but inspite of repeated requests, only handful of readers provide it. I am glad to know your take on the story so far. Thank you again. 

As for criticism regarding Hariya'a stature, I agree with you that I have not included that in detail so far but only because I am waiting for the right time. Keep in mind that what Anita felt is also something I revealed only after some updates and not after the initial encounters. Sometimes the less revelation, especially if it can be revealed at an appropriate point of story is necessary to keep the story interesting. Sometimes I may not describe something too much in detail as I leave it upto the readers as well to guess it as per their imagination. 

But I am really glad that you came up with this criticism. As a reader if you find some shortfall you should definitely point that out with an explanation and not mere criticism. You let me know where you think the story is lacking rather than just criticising. This is what I want is that if you find something lacking point that out with proper explanation. As a writer I can justify the lack of that element if I was already aware of it (Hariya's stature being an example) or I can try to improve the story in that aspect. Appreciate your effort for providing the detailed feedback. Thanks again.

[seansean007]

UPDATE 60

Anita dwara lund ke maalish se Hariya ke munh se "aaaaahhhhh" nikal gaya to Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi Hariya ko dekhi.

Hariya bhi Anita ko dekhkar muskurate hue uski chunchi ko dabate hue bola,"Waah memsaahab kitna pyaar se aap humra lauda ka maalish kar rahi hai".

Anita yeh sunnkar besharmi se muskurati huyi boli,"Hariya ji ab aapka hathiyaar mujhe dekhkar itna baukhlaya hua hai to ise shaant to karna hi padega na.Agar main ise shaant nahin karungi to aap bhi to sochenge ki ek to aap mere liye itni dhoop mein samaan lekar aaye aur jab aapka hathiyaar mujhe dekhkar baukhla gaya to maine aapka madad bhi nahin ki ise shaant karne mein".

Hariya yeh sunte hue Anita ki chunchi dabate hue bola,"Are memsaahab hum kahe aesa kahunga. Aap memsaahab kitna khyaal rakhte hai aap humra aur humre lauda ka to sasura hum kaise keh sakta hoon ki aap humra khyaal nahin rakhti.".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurai to Hariya uski blouse mein haath ghusaye uski bra ke upar se chunchi dabate hue bola,"Hum ghareeb zarur hoon memsaheb lekin sasura kauno ehsaan faramosh nahin hoon. Aap jaisan khabsurat, jawaan, ameer aur padhi likhi memsaheb humre jaisan ghareeb ka atna khyaal rakhti hain ee to humre liye bahot khushi ka baat hai".

Anita yeh sunnkar thodi narazgi se Hariya ko dekhti huyi uske lund ki maalish karti huyi randipane wali awaaz mein boli,"Hariya ji aap bhi na. Khabardaar jo aapne kaha ki aap ghareeb hai. Ghareebi ameeri padhai likhai apni jagah hai. Sabse badi baat hai ki aap ek achhe insaan hain".

Anita Hariya ke aankhon mein dekhti huyi waise hi randipane wali awaaz mein boli,"Aur agar main khoobsurat aur jawaan hoon to aap bhi kya kam hain".

Hariya yeh sunnkar Anita ki chunchi dabate hue bidi ka ek kash lekar use dekha to Anita aage boli,"aap bhi to pure mard hai".

Phir Anita uske lund ke taraf aankhon se ishara karti huyi boli,"Aapke paas bhi to itna lamba, mota aur tagda hathiyaar hai. Paise wala ameeri ghareebi to aati jaati rehti hai, lekin upar wale ne aapko jis cheez mein ameeri di hai woh sabke paas thode hota hai. Aapke jaisa ameer banne ke liye to paise se ameer log bhi aapke jaisa paise se ghareeb banne ke liye tayyaar ho jayenge".

Anita yeh bolkar uske lund ko dekhti huyi use hilati huyi randipane wali awaaz mein boli,"Uff Hariya ji itna mota aur bada hathiyaar hai aapka ki itna tel daalne ke baad bhi pura hathiyaar tel se nahin bheega".

Anita yeh bolkar tel ka katori lekar aur tel daalne lagi uske lund par jiske kaaran uska lund phir jhatka maara. Hariya araam se baaye haath se Anita ki chunchi uski bra ke upar se dabate hue daye haath se bidi peete hue apne lund ke taraf dekh raha tha.

Anita uske lund ko jhatakte dekh randipane wali awaaz mein boli,"Kitna baukhlaya hua hai aapka hathiyaar Hariya ji. Ek to itna bada aur mota hai aapka hathiyaar upar se aese baukhla raha hai".

Hariya Anita ki chunchi dabate hue bola,"Are memsaheb aap iska maalish kar rahi hai to khush hai sasura. Achha lag raha hai eek isliye khushi se jhoom raha hai".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi tel ka katori waapas table par rakhkar uske lund par tel malkar malish karne lagi jisse Hariya ke munh se phir "aaahh" nikal gaya.

Anita yeh sunnkar use dekhi aur uske lund ko maalish karti huyi randipane wali awaaz mein boli,"Hariya ji aesa bada aur mota khajana aapko upar wale ne diya hai aur aap hai ki bas paise ki ameeri ghareebi ka baat karte hain".

Hariya yeh sunnkar Anita ki chunchi dabate hue bola,"Haan memsaahab ee to hai. Sasura humra asli daulat to ee humra lauda hai aur humre jaisa lauda to sasura bahot kam logo ke paas hi hoga".

Hariya yeh bolkar baye haath se Anita ki bayi chunchi dabate hue has diya,"Hahaha" to Anita bhi khilkhilane lagi,"Hehehe" aur haste hue hi Hariya apna daya haath jisme bidi tha woh Anita ki dayi chunchi ke taraf lejakar bola,"Aur memsaheb aapke paas bhi to ee do bada bada khajana hai, doodh ka khajana".

Hariya yeh bolte hue Anita ki dono chunchiyon ko ek saath jor se daba diya jisse Anita ki munh se "ouch aaahh Hariya ji" nikal gaya. Hariya yeh sunnkar haste raha to Anita bhi besharmise khilkhilana jaari rakhi,"hehehe" aur Hariya ko dekhti huyi randipane wali awaaz mein boli,"Hariya ji sach mein aap bhi na hehehe".

Anita Hariya ke lund ko maalish kar rahi thi aur Hariya uski dono chunchiyon ko daba raha tha aur aesa karte hue dono ek dusre ke aankhon mein dekhte hue hans rahe the ki tabhi achanak Hariya ka mobile bajne laga.

Mobile bajne ka awaaz sunn Anita khilkhilana bandh karke Hariya ke shirt ke pocket ke taraf dekhi to Hariya Anita ki dono chunchiyon ko dabate hue bola,"Ee sasura kaun phone karne laga abhi".

Hariya yeh bolne ke bawjud apne pocket se phone nahin nikala aur phone ring karte raha. Anita yeh dekhkar uske lund ki maalish karti huyi boli,"Hariya jee phone utha lijiye. Shayad aapke dukaan se hoga".

Anita yeh bolkar sochi ki Hariya ko dono haath busy hai aur uski bayi haath free hai to woh uske pocket se khud phone nikalkar uske kaan mein lagane ka sochi taaki woh araam se baithe hue apna kaam karte hue baat bhi kar le.

Anita itna sochi hi thi ki Hariya Anita ki dayi chunchi se haath hatane laga. Anita ko laga ki woh khud phone uthayega to woh chup chap uske lund ki maalish karne lagi lekin Hariya daye haath ko apne munh ke taraf lejakar bidi ka ek kash lekar Anita ki bayi chunchi dabate hue bola,"Chhoriye memsaheb. Hum abhi apni pyaari memsaheb ke saath hain. Humri memsaheb itni pyaar se humara khyaal rakh rahi hai ee chhor ke hum sasura phone kahe uthaye".

Anita muskurati huyi thoda randipane wali awaaz mein boli,"Hariya jee aap bhi na" aur phir uske lund ke taraf dekh kar katori se thoda sa aur tel lekar uske lund par girakar use hilati huyi muskurakar waapas Hariya ke taraf dekhi. Hariya ka mobile ring karna bandh ho chuka tha. Anita usko dekhkar uske lund ko achhe se upar se neeche haath mein lekar maalish karne lagi.

Anita achha khaasa tel daali thi uske lund par iss baar jisse uska lund pura tel mein sann chuka tha. Aese mein jab Anita uske lund ko maalish karne lagi to uski haath uske lund par achhe se phisal rahi thi jisse Hariya ke munh se "aaahhhh" nikal gaya.

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi Hariya ke chehre par dekhti huyi uske lund ki maalish karne lagi. Hariya "aaaahhhh" karne ke baad bola,"Sach kehti hain memsaheb ki humra asli daulat to ee humra lauda hai. Bada, mota aur tagda lauda jo bahot ameer logan ke paas bhi nahin"

Hariya phir Anita ki badan dekhkar ek kash liya aur beedi ko glass mein daalkar daye haath ko uski blouse mein ghusakar bra ke upar se uski daayi chunchi pakad liya aur dono chunchiyon ko ek saath bra ke upar se dabate hue bola,"Aur humre paas ek tagda lauda hain to humra lauda ka khyaal rakhne ke liye aap jaisi jawaan aur khabsurat memsaheb bhi hain. Sasura kaun keh sakta hai ki uke paas aap jaisi aesi jawaan aur khabsurat memsaahab hai jo uka itna pyaar se juice pilakar uka lauda ka maalish karte hue lauda ka tareef kare. Ee bhi to sirf hum hi keh sakat hoon, hum Hariya".

Anita ko Hariya ka yun garv se apne baare mein bolta dekh achha laga. Woh bhi garv se Hariya ke taraf dekhkar randipane wali awaaz mein boli,"Hariya ji tareef nahin kar rahi bas sachai bata rahi hoon".

Phir woh uske lund ke taraf dekhkar uska malish karti huyi randipane wali awaaz mein boli,"Itna bada aur mota aapka hathiyaar hai wahi to bol rahi hoon aur abhi toh bada hote hi jaa raha hai. Uff sach mein aapka hathiyaar bhi na".

Apni chunchi Hariya dwara dabaye jaane aur uske lund ko maalish karte hue Anita ki gala sukhne lagi thi. Uski badan mein masti ki laher daud rahi thi aur saans tez ho rahi thi. Tez saans hone ke saath saath uski gala bhi sukh rahi thi. Na chahte hue bhi Anita Hariya ke lund ko maalish karti huyi uske lund ko dekhti huyi apni sukhti hontho ko bheegane ke liye us par zabaan pher di.

Hariya Anita ko aese apni honthon par zabaan pherte hue dekhkar uski chunchi dabate hue bola,"Aap bhi bahot pyaasi lag rahi hain memsaheb"

Anita yeh sunnkar Hariya ke taraf dekhi to Hariya baat jaari rakhte hue Anita ki aankhon mein dekhte hue bola,"Lag raha hai aapko kuchh chusne ka mann kar raha hai. Kuchh chus kar aap apna pyaas bujhana chah rahi hain".

Hariya Anita ko dekhkar uski chunchi dabate hue aage bola,"Memsaheb aapko pyaas laga hai to bujha lijiye na. Chus lijiye memsaheb. Eehan sab kuchh to aapka hi hai. Jo bhi chusne ka aapka mann kar raha hai araam se chuskar apna pyaas bujhaiye".

Anita yeh sunnkar Hariya ke aankhon mein dekh hi rahi thi ki tabhi Hariya baaye haath se uski chunchi dabate hue daaye haath ko uski sir ke peeche rakhkar bola,"Aaiye memsaheb chus lijiye. Aapke liye hi to hai sab kuchh. Pura dil khol kar maze se chusiye aur apna pyaas bujhaiye".

Hariya yeh bolkar Anita ki sir ke peeche dabao banaya hi tha ki uska mobile phir bajne laga. Mobile bajte hi Anita ka dhyaan uske pocket ke taraf chala gaya aur Hariya jhunjhla kar bola,"Behenchod kaun saala baar baar phone karke distarab kar raha hai".

Anita yeh sunnkar uska lund maalish karti huyi randipane wali awaaz mein boli,"Hariya jee utha kar dekh lijiye na. Shayad koi zaruri kaam ho".

Hariya yeh sunnkar Anita ko dekhte hue sir hilaya aur apna daya haath uski sir ke peeche se hatakar mobile shirt ke pocket se nikalkar phone receive karke "hello" kiya to dusri taraf se kuchh awaaz aaya.

Hariya jawaab mein garv se bola,"Maal shaam tak pahunchega."

Aur phir woh Anita ko dekhte hue uski chunchi dabate hue waise hi garv se bola,"Abhi humka aur bhi zaruri kaam hai".

Dusre taraf se jawaab mein kuchh bola gaya to Hariya bola,"Are bhai shaam tak pahunch jayega maal. Abhi hum bahot zaruri kaam mein biji hoon. Shaam ko maal milega".

Yeh bolkar Hariya phone kaat kar bolne laga,"Sasura log ko thoda sabar nahin hai, samaan abhi ka abhi hi chahiye. Sasura soyega raat mein lekin gadda din mein hi chahiye".

Phir woh Anita ki taraf dekhkar uski chunchi dabate hue bola,"Isliye kehte hain hum memsaheb ki aapke jaisi koi nahin hai. Humka pura yaqeen hai ki agar iske jagah hum aapka gadda laate aur late hota to aap aese chilla chilli nahin karti. Sach mein memsaheb aap bahot achhi hain"

Anita yeh sunnkar uske lund ki maalish karti huyi randipane wali awaaz mein boli,"Hariya jee chhoriye na. Kyun apna mood kharab kar rahe hain. Use thode hi samajh aa raha hoga ki aap mere liye itni dhoop mein samaan laaye hain aur abhi thoda araam kar rahe hain."

Hariya yeh sunnkar Anita ko dekhkar uski chunchi ko masalte hue bola,"Aap kitni achhi hain memsaheb. Itni ameer aur padhi likhi hain aap. Heroine jaisi khabsurat bhi hain lekin phir bhi aap mein ghamand nahin hai."

Anita yeh sunnkar Hariya ko dekhti huyi muskura kar randipane wali awaaz mein boli,"Hariya jee aap bhi na. Ghum phir kar meri tareef karne lagte hain. Aese aap bhi to bahot achhe hain. Meri kitni madad karte hain. Jab zarurat padta hai meri madad karne aa jaate hain. Abhi ke zamane mein kaun kiski madad karta hai".

Hariya Anita ki chunchi dabate hue bola,"Are memsaheb ee to humra farz hai".

Agle pal Hariya Anita ki badan ko gandi nazar se dekhkar bola,"Zamana chahe jo bhi ho, humre jaisa mard aapki jaisi aurat ka madad karne ke liye rahenge hi. Aapki jaisi aurat ka hum madad kaise nahin karunga. Agar aapki madad aur seva hum nahin karunga to humre mardangi par thu hai".

Anita muskurati huyi Hariya ke lund ka maalish karti huyi uska baat sunn rahi thi. Uska baat pura hone par randipane wali awaaz mein boli,"Hariya ji aap bhi na apni mardangi ko kyun beech mein la rahe hain".

Hariya yeh sunnkar uski chunchi dabate hue bola,"Are kahe nahin memsaheb. Sasura aisan bada, mota aur tagda lauda hote hue bhi agar hum apka ache se madad aur ragad kar seva nahin karunga to humre mardangi par thu hi to hoga. Apna lauda se aapka ragad kar seva karna aur ragad kar thokna to humra farz hai aur hum to bas apna farz hi nibhana chah raha hoon".

Anita yeh sunnkar besharmi se muskurati huyi boli,"Hariya ji bas bhi kijiye ab"

Hariya yeh sunnkar muskurane laga aur Anita ki chunchi pakde hue use apne aur kareeb khinchne laga jisse Anita ka thoda balance bigad gaya aur woh besharmi se muskurati huyi boli,"ouch Hariya jee" aur phir hasne lagi,"aaahh hahaha araam se Hariya jee hehehe".

Hariye bhi saath mein hasne laga aur living room dono ke khilkhilahat se gunj utha.

Hariya haste hue uski chunchi daba raha tha ki tabhi Hariya ka mobile phir bajne laga. Anita hasna bandh karke khud ko sambhalti huyi Hariya ke shirt ke pocket ke taraf dekhi to Hariya bola,"Ee sasura baar baar distarab kar raha hai".

Anita Hariya ka lund ka maalish karti huyi boli,"Hariya jee dekhiye kaun hai"

Hariya sir hilakar pocket se phone nikala aur screen ke taraf dekhkar bola,"Ee sasura maalik ko kaa ho gaya. Ee bhi phone karne lage".

Anita Hariya ka lund maalish karti huyi uska baat sunn rahi thi. Hariya khud uski ghar mein kisi maalik ki tarah sofe par nanga hue araam se baitha hua tha aur juice peete hue Anita ki chunchi dabane ke saath saath uski khoobsurat mulaayam haath se apne lund ke maalish ka mazaa le raha tha.

Hariya waise hi araam se baithe hue phone utha kar garv se bola,"Hello".

Anita Hariya ko dekh rahi thi aur samajh paa rahi thi ki Hariya abhi kitna confidence mein tha. Hariya ko aesa dekhkar use achha laga.

Dusre taraf se kuchh bolne ke baad Hariya confidence se bola,"Are maalik hum to bol hi diye ki shaam ko maal pahuncha denge to phir...."

Hariya ke pura bolne se pehle dusre taraf se uska maalik kuchh bolne laga jiske kaaran woh ruk gaya.

Woh baat sunne ke baad Anita ki taraf dekh kar uski chunchi ko dabate hue bola,"Abhi hum bahot zaruri kaam kar raha hoon".

Dusre taraf se kuchh bolne par Hariya ke chehre par gussa ka bhao aane laga,"Are maalik hum kabhi kaam mein gadbadi kiya hoon. U sasura customer sahi nahin hai. Jaan bujh kar pareshan..."

Anita chup chap Hariya se chipki huyi uska lund ka maalish karti huyi khud ki chunchi ko uske mutthi mein masle jaate hue uska baat sunn rahi thi. Hariya ka baat pura hone se pehle phir se dusri taraf se kuchh bola gaya aur Hariya jawaab mein jaise hi "maalik suniye" bola to phone kat gaya.

Anita samajh gayi ki uska maalik uss par gussa hai aur shayad jaldi mattress pahunchane ke liye bolkar phone kaat diya.

Hariya phone kate jaane par phone ko dekhkar bola,"Ee sasura log humka aaj memsaheb ki seva nahin karne denge. Sasura aesa lag raha hai jaan bujh kar humka distarab kar rahe hain. Lekin sasura hum bhi nahin jaunga memsaheb ki seva kiye bina aaj".

Anita jo chup chap Hariya ka lund ka maalish kar rahi thi woh yeh sunnkar Hariya se boli,"Hariya jee agar urgent hai to chale jaiye. Aese aap karenge to customer kharab ho jayega. Customer jaisa bhi ho use to bana kar rakhna padta hai na. Aur apne maalik ka bhi to sochiye. Unka business kharab hoga to aapka naukri bhi to khatre mein aayega. Kya aap yeh chahenge?"

Hariya yeh sunnkar Anita ke taraf dekha aur sehmati mein bola,"Haan memsaheb aap theek keh rahi hain lekin sasura humka aapka seva karne ka mann hai abhi. Dekhiye humra lauda kaise bechain hai aapki seva karne ke liye. Aapka seva kiye bina humka jaane ka mann nahin hai".

Anita yeh sunnkar Hariya ke lund ka malish karti huyi apni chunchiyon ko thoda sa aage karke randipane wali awaaz mein boli,"Hariya jee main kahin bhaagi thode jaa rahi hoon. Meri seva aap phir kabhi kar dijiyega. Aaj to aapne meri itni madad kiya hain phir kisi aur din seva kar dijiyega."

Hariya yeh sunte hue Anita ko apni chunchiyon ko aage karte hue dekh thoda jhuk kar Anita ki bayi chunchi ko blouse ke upar se hi munh mein bhar liya.

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Thanks for the detailed feedback. I just have one word 'patience'. The readers of this story have already been showing lots of patience since a long time and I appreciate it and hope you all will continue to do the same. Everything has to happen at proper time and point of the story. Thanks again.

Hey Seanbro.. thanks for your long and continuous updates.. a master erotica of Anita.. involving erotic mingling with different characters.. keep it up bro.. still many things are in store to explode from your side..

Sabse Jo baat hamein jakad ke rakhati hai wo hai sexual chedchhad.. sath me aisa he hot conversation.. it's the height of superb slow seduction. Abhi Tak fir bhi Anita apne pati ke alawa kisi se chudi nahi hai par lund se maje bahut le rahi hai.. market se le kar gali.. sasural.. dhaba.. bus.. aur abhi Ghar ke andar Anita ka khel chalu hi hai.. Jo hamara khada karne me kamyaab ho hi jata hai..
Aur aisi slow seduction wale khel se charam seema tak jaane me hi badaa mazaa aataa hai.. yehi yeh story ka crux hai..

Thoda Jo miss ho Raha hai yahaa woh Jitu se jaisi chudaai Hui thi waisi abhi Tak nahi hui hai.. pure raw sex.. aur jo unn logo ki pasine ki ya unke sharir se smell jisse Anita apne jahen me utaar leti thi aur vahi khinch jaati thi.. tann Mann se.. wo thoda miss ho rahaa hai.. woh bus wale incidents me aur abhi pasine se lathbath hariya ke sath bhi.. Jo aap ek scene khada karte the Anita ka woh miss kar rahe hai.. matlab unlogo ke sharir ki gandh se Anita ka aksrshit hona.. yeh story ka majedaar jaayaka tha..

BT yeh criticism bilkul nahi hai.. aap bahetarin writer ho yeh koi jhutla nahi shakta.. yahaa hame padhane ke liye time aur jagah mushkil se milte hai to aap to likhane ka kaam karte hai.. hum wo characters ke hisab se padhate hai.. Anita yeh boli/kiya to hariya ne ye bola/kiya.. but aapko to sab characters ke baare me khud hi sochna padata hai fir aap likhate ho.. bahot tough task hai.. hamare liye yeh bhi bahot badi baat hai ki jis story ko hum doondhte rahete the aur Puri milti bhi nahi.. waha aapne usse fir se likha aur naye characters aur situations ke saath aage bhi badha rahe ho.. aap dusri stories koi bhi likho lekin yeh kahaani ka flavor.. tadka.. aisa hi rakhana change mat karna.. hame uummid hai ki aap hamein niraash nhii karenge..

Abhi wale scene me Maine yeh soch thaki.. hariya sharir to kholke baith jayega lekin baat karte karte Anita se hi uska pent khulvata aur lund bahaar nikalwata to tel ki jagah dono ka thuuk milake massage karvaata.. aur Anita hariya ke bajuu me chipak ke baith kar apne saari ke pallu se..bahot pyaar se hariya ka lasina pochhati.. mere hariya ji kitni mahenat karte hai meri madad karne ke liye.. aise sab baate karte woh pochhati jaati uoard se leke chhati pet se hote huve lund takk woh pochhati aur hariya ke jaane ke baad Anita apne pallu ko sungh kar madhosh hoti.. juice hariya ko pilaati baad me hariya ne jahha muh lagaakar Piya waha se hi wo bhi juice pitii.. juice ki bunde hariya ki khuulii chhat pe girti aur Anita whaa uungli se yaa jibh se chht leti.. hariya ke balo me haath ghoomati jab usse jaane ke liye samjha Rahi thi yaa phone le ne ke liye bolti thi..
Aur abhi to jaane ka time to aayaa hai leking hariyaa ne Anita ki chuchi muh me le li.. blouse ke upar se hi.. kya turning point hai aur wahi par aapne story atkaa di.. aur agla update yahi se aage khulega tab dekhte hai kya hota hai..

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A request to all the readers: Since readers are complaining about repetitiveness of the dialogues, I request you to teach me what kind of dialogues can suit a particular situation. Do come up with a couple of paragraph of story narration and dialogues. I would love to learn from the readers/ other writers.
Also tell me why do you think I keep the dialogue "aap bhi na" by Anita frequent in response to some of the dialogues of Hariya. If any reader can explain it then that would be great. Thanks.

[seansean007]

I am busy with some personal and professional work. Will update once I get time. The story will continue don't worry about that. Thanks.

[seansean007]

UPDATE 61

Apni blouse ke upar se chunchi par Hariya ka honth aur zabaan mehsus karke Anita ka dil dhadak gaya aur badan mein ek ajeeb sa maza ka laher daud gaya. Woh iss cheez ka ummeed nahin kar rahi thi.

Anita khud ko sambhalti huyi Hariya ka lund ko malish karti huyi randipane wali awaaz mein hi boli,"Hariya ji kya kar rahe hain. Please seedhe baithiye na".

Hariya agle pal dayi haath se Anita ki bayi chunchi pakde hue usko blouse ke upar se hi jitna ho sake utna munh mein mein bharne laga. Anita ki tann badan mein aag lagne lagi aur uski choot par maano chintiya rengne lagi thi. Woh bina kuchh bole hi chup chap Hariya ka lund ka malish karti rahi.

Kuchh seconds baad Anita phir se khud ko samnhalti huyi boli,"Hariya ji please ab bas bhi kijiye. Ho gaya. Aapko kaam par bhi jaana hai".

Hariya bina kuchh bole Anita ki chunchi se munh hataya to Anita ko laga ki ab woh chhor dega magar woh uski bayi chunchi ko pakad kar use munh mein bhar liya. Anita kuchh nahin boli aur thoda daye taraf ghumkar Hariya ke taraf ho gayi jisse Hariya achhe se uski chunchi ko munh mein lene laga.

Anita agle pal katori se tel lekar Hariya ke lund par girakar uske lund ko phir se maalish karne lagi. Ab koi kuchh nahin bol raha tha. Hariya Anita ki dayi chunchi blouse ke upar se hi munh mein lekar chus raha tha wahin Anita Hariya ke lund par aur tel gira kar achhe se maalish kar rahi thi.

Dono ko hosh tab aaya jab Hariya ka mobile phir se bajne laga. Hariya iss baar mobile ke bajne par bhi phone nahin uthaya to Anita boli,"Hariya ji ho gaya ab phone utha lijiye.".

Hariya yeh sunnkar uski chunchi se munh hataya aur Anita ko dekhkar uski chunchi pakad kar dabate hue bola,"Memsaheb ka kare sasura aapka ee doodh ka thann dekhkar peene ka mann karne laga. Humse raha hi nahin gaya magar sasura lag raha hai ee behenchod log nahin chahta ki hum aapka doodh achhe se piye".

Anita yeh sunnkar ek haath se uske lund ko malish karti huyi dusre haath se uske seene ke baal par haath pherti hui randipane wali awaaz mein boli,"Hariya ji sach mein aap bhi kya kya bolte rehte hain".

Hariya muskurakaya phir dusre haath se pocket se mobile phone nikal kar use dekhkar bola,"Ee behenchod sasura Ramu ko ab ka chahiye".

Hariya Anita ki chunchi dabate hue boss ki tarah tang phailaye sofe par baithe hue Anita ki khoobsurat haath se lund ke maalish ka mazaa lete hue bola,"Hello".

Dusre taraf se koi baat par Hariya jawaab mein bola,"Haan haan aata hoon. Tum jao wahan".

Hariya phone kaat kar Anita ko dekhkar bola,"Sasura maalik Ramu ko bhi bhej rahe hain u customer ke paas. Mann to nahin hai sasura magar humka jaana hoga memsaheb".

Anita uske lund ko maalish karna chhod kar boli,"main tissue paper laakar saaf kar deti hoon".

Hariya apna pant underwear ke saath upar karte hue bola,"U ka kauno zarurat nahin hai memsaheb. Aap itne pyaar se humra lauda ka maalish kiye hain to hum ise aaj aese hi Rehne denge. Hum ee tel se sana hua apna lauda dekhunga to humka yaad aayega ki kitna pyaar se aap humra lauda ka malish kiye hain".

Anita yeh sunnkar besharmi se muskurati huyi apna sir hilakar boli,"Uff Hariya ji aap bhi na".

Hariya yeh sunnkar muskurakar khada hokar gaand ke upar se pant chadhaya aur Anita ke taraf ghum kar uske chehre ke paas khada hokar pant ke bahar latke lund ko dikhakar bola,"Ee humra lauda sasura bahaar hi rehna chahta hai".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurai aur uske lund ko pakad kar pant ke ander daalkar zip lagaakar boli,"Yeh chahta hai ya aap chahte hain Hariya ji. Dekhiye ander karne se to chup chap chala gaya".

Hariya yeh sunnkar hasne laga,"Hahaha" to Anita bhi khilkhilane lagi,"hehehe".

Anita khilkhilati huyi uthi aur Hariya ke bagal mein khadi hokar boli,"Chaliye Hariya ji main darwaze tak chhor deti hoon".

Hariya uski kamar pakad kar apne se chipka kar bola,"Chaliye memsaheb".

Anita use muskurakar dekhi aur woh bhi usse puri chipak gayi. Hariya Anita se chipke hue chalne laga aur haath uski kamar se neeche lejakar uski thirakti huyi gaand par rakhkar bola,"Kasam se memsaheb chalte waqt aapki gaand hilti hai to humra lauda bechain ho jaata hai".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi Hariya ko dekhi. Uski muskurahat mein ek garv tha aur woh garv se muskurati huyi uske pant ke upar se lund ko pakad kar randipane wali awaaz mein boli,"Hariya ji aap aur aapka hathiyaar. Ab chalte waqt to peeche ka hilega hi, isme kya hai sach mein".

Hariya yeh sunnkar Anita ki gaand daboch kar hilata hua bola,"Are memsaheb gaand hilne ke liye gaand waisa hona chahiye. Aapki gaand to ek dum mast hai. Sasura sach mein mann kar raha hai ki aapki thukai kar dun".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi uske lund ko hilati huyi randipane wali awaaz mein boli,"Umm Hariya ji aap bhi na".

Hariya aur Anita dheere dheere chal rahe the aese mein woh dono ab tak sofe ke side tak aaye the. Anita ki baat sunnkar Hariya Anita ki kamar pakad kar ghumaya aur thoda aage karke uski kamar par dabao daal kar Anita ko jhuka diya.

Aesa hone se Anita ki munh se awaaz nikli,"Aaah Hariya ji" magar phir sofe ke side mein pakad kar jhuk gayi.

Agle pal Hariya Anita ki gaand ki dono bhaago ko pakad liya aur apna lund pant ke upar se hi Anita ki gaand se sata kar hilne laga. Kuchh seconds hilne ke baad Hariya Anita ki gaand pakde jor se dhakka lagaya.

Dhakka lagne se Anita ki munh se "aaahhhh" nikal gayi. Hariya agle kuchh seconds tak waise hi dhakka lagate raha aur Anita sofa pakad kar jhuki huyi thi.

Kuchh seconds baad Anita ko Hariya khud se alag hote hue mehsus hua to woh waise hi jhuki huyi peeche mud kar dekhi to use apna pant kholte hue dekhi.

Hariya Anita ko dekhte hue pant khol raha tha aur Anita waise hi jhuki rahi. Kuchh seconds baad Hariya ka pant uske kadmo mein gir gaya aur uska lund phir se aadha khada hua hawa mein lehrane laga. Aadha khada hone par bhi uska lund bahot bada aur mota lag raha tha.

Hariya agle pal apna lund pakad kar aage badha aur Anita ki gaand se saree ke upar se sata diya. Anita bina sharm ke waise hi jhuki huyi peeche ghum kar Hariya ke lund ko khud ki gaand se chipke hue dekhne lagi.

Hariya Anita ki gaand ki daraar mein saree ko ghusane laga magar tight saree zyada ander nahin ghus payi. Magar jitna bhi tha Anita ki gaand ki daraar mein thoda ghus gaya jisse saree ke upar se bhi daraar pata chal raha tha.

Hariya apna lund uski daraar mein ghusane ke baad Anita ko dekhkar bola,"Memsaheb thoda achhe se jhuk kar gaand ko humre laude ke taraf baahar nikaliye na".

Anita yeh sunnkar apni kamar ko arch karke apni gaand ko baahar ke taraf achhe se ubhar li. Hariya uski gaand ke dono bhago ko pakad kar uske beech apna lund do teen baad ragda to Anita bhi apni gaand upar neeche karke Hariya ke lund mein ragadne lagi.

Hariya yeh dekhkar bola,"aese hi memsaheb apni gaand hilakar humra lauda mein ragadiye"

Anita apni gaand Hariya ke lund par ragadti rahi aur Hariya uski gaand ko pakde hue apna kamar hilate raha.

Kuchh seconds baad Hariya Anita ki kamar pakad kar jor se dhakke lagane laga to Anita ki munh se "aaahhh Hariya ji" nikalne lagi. Hariya Anita ki kamar pakde hue dhakke lagane laga aur Anita jhuki huyi uske lund ka dhakka apni gaand par mehsus karne lagi.

Kuchh second bad Hariya jhuk kar Anita ki nangi peeth ko chumne laga to Anita ki munh se "ummm Hariya ji aaahhhh" nikal gayi.

Anita Hariya ka lund ka sakhti badhte hue apni gaand ki daraar mein mehsus kar rahi thi. Hariya ke dhakke se uski saree uski gaand ki daraar mein aur ghusne lagi thi aur saath hi Hariya ka lund bhi uski gaand ki daraar mein aur ander ghus rahi thi.

Anita ki saans aur dhadkan Hariya ka lund apni gaand aur uske honthon ko apni peeth par mehsus karke tez ho rahi thi. Hariya ke dhakka se Anita thoda aur aage ho gayi thi aur sofa ke arm rest ko pakadne ke jagah uski pair uske kinare tak aa gayi thi.

Aesa karne se Anita ki pair sofe ke side wale bhaag aur peeche Hariya ke beech ho gayi thi jiske kaaran woh na hi aur aage ja sakti thi aur na hi peeche.

Hariya ke dhakke ke kaaran aur uske peeth chumne se woh thoda neeche jhukne lagi thi jiske kaaran uski pet uss arm rest par tik gayi aur woh khud ko balance karne ke liye haath ko sofe ke seat par rakh di. Aesa hone se Anita ki gaand aur ubhar ke Hariya ke lund ke taraf nikal gayi thi.

Anita ke aur neeche jhukne ke kaaran uski peeth se Hariya ka honth alag ho gaya to Hariya khada hue hi sofe aur uske badan ke beech atki huyi Anita ki gaand ya badan pakde bina hi achhe se dhakke dene lagalaga aur dhakke dete hue haath badhakar sofe ke saamne table par rakhe tel ki katori ko uthaya jise Anita nahin dekhi.

Hariya tel ki katori ko Anita ki peeth ke upar karke us par tel girane laga to use ehsaas hua ki uski peeth par kuchh gir rahi hai. Woh gadhapan aut phislan se samajh gayi ki woh tel hi hoga magar woh ghumkar dekhi to uska andaaza sahi laga.

Woh ghumkar Hariya ko apni peeth par katori se tel girate hue dekhkar randipane wali awaaz mein puchhi,"Hariya ji yeh kya kar rahe hain aap?"

Hariya jawaab mein Anita ko dekhkar muskuraya aur thoda tel girane ke baad woh katori waapas rakhkar apne dono haathon se tel ko Anita ki peeth par malte hue bola,"Kuchho nahin memsaheb. Aap humra lauda ka maalish kiye to hum bhi thoda aapke peeth ka maalish kar det hoon".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurai aur Hariya ko dekhte hue apni gaand ko hilakar uske lund par ragadne lagi. Wahin Hariya bhi apna kamar hilate hue Anita ki gaand par lund ragadte hue uski peeth par tel malne laga.

Kuchh seconds tak uski peeth par tel malne ke baad woh katori phir uthaya aur uski kamar par tel girane laga. Iss beech woh apna kamar hilate hue Anita ki gaand par lund ragadte raha.

Anita ki kamar par tel girakar waapas katori table par rakhkar woh tel ko uski kamar par malne laga. Kuchh seconds baad Anita ki puri back, gardan ke neeche se lekar uski kamar jahan saree bandhi huyi thi tel se chamakne lagi thi. Anita ki badan mein maze ki laher daud rahi thi aur choot mein gilapan badh raha tha. Woh besharmi se apni gaand hilakar Hariya ke lund par ragad rahi thi.

Hariya phir se tel ki katori uthakar Anita ki kamar par giraya aur katori table par rakhkar uski kamar se tel ko apne haath mein lekar haath neeche uski pet ke taraf lejakar uski pet par tel malne laga. Anita ki saans tezi se chal rahi thi wahin Hariya ka lund kadak hote jaa raha tha jise Anita apni gaand ki daraar mein poke karte hue mehsus kar rahi thi.

Anita ki pet par tel lagane ke baad woh haath upar lejakar Anita ki dono chunchiyon ko dono haath se jor se pakad kar dabate hue apna kamar ka dabao uski gaand par badha diya aur saath hi ek baar uski dono chunchiyon ko jor se masal diya.

Apni dono chunchiyan masle jaane se Anita ki munh se siskari nikal gayi,"Ssiiii".

Anita ki siskari sunnkar Hariya uski dono chunchiyon ko dheere dheere masalte hue apna kamar thoda tezi se hilate hue uski gaand par lund ragadne laga to Anita ki munh se "aaahhh Hariya ji" nikal gayi.

Hariya uski chunchiyon ko jor se pakde hue dhakke tez karne laga to Anita apni dayi haath bagal table par lejakar us par rakhe katore se tel haath mein lekar us haath ko peeche lejakar Hariya ke lund ko pakad kar uss par malti huyi randipane wali awaaz mein boli,"Hariya ji meri saree se aapka hathiyar mein friction ho raha hoga.".

Hariya friction ka matlab nahin samjha magar yeh samajh gaya ki Anita nahin chahti ki uska lund uski saree ki ragad se kahin chhil jaye.

Hariya yeh sunnkar bola,"memsaheb sach mein aap humra kitna khyaal rakhti hain. Aapki mehengi saree to aese hi mulayam aur chikna hai phir bhi aapko humra lauda ka chhil jaane ka khyaal hai".

Anita uske lund par tel malti huyi randipane wali awaaz mein boli,"Hariya ji phir bhi jab tel hai hi to laga deti hoon".

Anita phir ek baar katori mein phir se haath lejakar aue zyada tel lekar uske lund ko tel se sarabor kar di aur uske lund ko pakad kar apni gaand ki daraar mein atka kar Hariya ko dekhi aur apni gaand ke taraf aankhon se ishara ki to Hariya uski dono chunchiyon ko mutthi mein dabaye use upar uthaya to Anita apni gaand ko peeche ke taraf ubhari aur chunchiyon ko samne ke taraf nikali badan ko arch karke khadi ho gayi.

Hariya apna kamar thoda aage karke apna lund jitna ho sake Anita ki gaand ki daraar mein ghusa diya jisse uski munh se "aaahh Hariya ji" nikal gayi aur woh apni dono haath peeche lejakar Hariya ke gale mein daal di.

Ab situation aesa tha ki Hariya Anita ke peeche khada hua uski dono chunchiyon ko muthhi mein bhare hue uski gaand ki daraar mein saree ke upar se apna nanga lund ghusaye hue tha aur Anita uske samne khadi huyi body ko arch karke apni gaand ko peeche dhakeli huyi thi aur chunchiyon ko saamne ke taraf ubhari huyi thi.

Hariya Anita ko aese apni haath peeche kiye dekh uski kaan mein bola,"Memsaheb aapka gaand bada mast hai. Sasura lauda khada karne wala".

Hariya yeh bolkar apna kamar thoda upar neeche karke lund Anita ki gaand mein ragadne laga to Anita bhi waise hi body arch ki huyi apni gaand ko hilane lagi.

Hariya bhi apna kamar hilate hue Anita ki gaand mein lund ragadte hue gaane laga,"Tohri gaand badi hai mast mast, tohri gaand badi hai mast".

Anita yeh sunti huyi waise hi apni haath peeche karke Hariya ke gardan mein daali apni gaand ko ek lay mein hilakar uske lund par ragadne lagi.

Hariya aage gaate raha,"Tohra gaand hile to lund ho jaye khada mera".

Anita yeh sunnkar ek lay mein apni gaand ko Hariya ke lund par ragadne lagi.

Hariya tezi se lund upar neeche karte hue uski gaand mein ragadte hue aage gaya,"tohri gaand mein daalne ka mann kare lauda mera" to Anita bhi apni gaand ko tezi se hilati huyi Hariya ka saath dene lagi.

Ab Hariya gaana bandh karke Anita ki gaand mein tezi se lund ragadne laga aur Anita bhi waise hi body arch ki huyi tezi se apni gaand uske lund mein ragad rahi thi. Anita ki chunchiyan jo Hariya ke mutthi mein kaid thi uske neeche uski gori, chikni aur sapaat pet tel lage hone ke kaaran se chamak rahi thi aur body arch hone ke kaaran bahot hi kamuk lag rahi thi. Upar se usme latki huyi belly button ring bhi light padne se chamak rahi thi. Yeh drishya dekhkar kisi bhi mard ka lund khada ho jata.

Anita ki saans tez chal rahi thi aur woh bina sharm ke apni gaand hilakar Hariya ke lund par ragad rahi thi. Dheere dheere dono ka khoon garam hone laga tha aue Hariya ka lund kadak hone laga to woh Anita ki chunchi pakde hue jor se dhakka lagaya to Anita ki munh se "aah" nikal gayi. Hariya Anita ki chunchiyon ko waise hi pakde hue dhakke lagane laga aur Anita bhi apni gaand ko arch ki huyi peeche ke taraf dhakel rahi thi aur ahein bhar rahi thi.

Ab Hariya lagatar Anita ki chunchiyon ko jor se dono hathon se pakde hue jor se dhakke lagane laga aur Anita ki munh se aahein nikalne lagi,"Aaahhh". Bina chudai ke hi wahan dono ka saans tez hone laga tha.

Hariya Anita ki kandhe ko chumne laga tha aur kuchh seconds chumne ke baad uski kaan mein bola,"Ise kehte hain memsaheb asli thukai"

Aur Hariya jor se dhakka lagaya to Anita ki munh se aah nikal gayi. Hariya do teen baar waise hi bolte hue dhakka lagaya aur phir bola,"Humka to ek baar pehle bhi aap dekh chuki hai ki hum kaise ragad kar thokta hoon. Aaj phir dikha deta hoon memsaheb. Boliye ee hai na asli thukai".

Anita tez saans leti huyi apni gaand peeche ke taraf dhakel kar boli,"Haan".

Hariya dhakka lagate hue puchha,"boliye memsaheb to aap humse thukwaiyega to".

Anita ki munh se jawab mein nikla,"aaah haan Hariya ji".

Hariya yeh sunnkar dhakke lagate hue bola,"Are memsaheb eehan kauno nahin hai khul kar boliye".

Anita tez sanson se boli,"Aaahh haan Hariya ji main aapse thukwaungi".

Hariya dhakka lagate hue puchha,"Humra ee tagda lauda se thukwaiyega aap?"

Anita apni gaand peeche dhakelti huyi tez sanson se boli,"Aaahh haan Hariya ji".

Hariya dhakka lagate hue aage puchha,"Wahi tagda lauda jo aapki gaand mein ghusne ka koshish kar raha hai?"

Anita apni gaand peeche dhakelti huyi tez sanson se boli,"Aaahh haan Hariya ji".

Hariya yeh sunnkar Anita ki petticoat mein haath daalkar uski saree kholne wala tha ki tabhi phone aa gaya jise sunnkar Hariya jhunjhla kar bola,"behenchod sasura log humka memsaheb ka seva bhi nahin karne dega".

Woh phir apne shirt ke pocket se phone nikala to bola,"Ee malik bhi na barabar phone kar rahe hai aaj"

Phone aane se Anita ko bhi thoda hosh aaya to woh apni haathon ko Hariya ke gale se hatakar seedhi khadi hokar apni saans ko kabu karne lagi.

Hariya jhunjhlaya hua phone uthakar bola,"Haan maalik bas pahunchne hi wale hai".

Hariya dusre taraf se kuchh suna aur phir phone kat gaya. Woh phone jeb mein rakhkar neeche jhuk kar pant uthate hue bola,"Memsaheb maaf kijiye hum aapki achhe se seva nahin kar paye".

Anita bhi ghum gayi aur Hariya ke seene par haath pherti huyi randipane wali awaaz mein boli,"Hariya ji kaisi baat kar rahe hain aap. Ulta to mujhe afsos ho raha hai ki aap itni dhoop mein meri madad karne aaye aur apne mann ke hisaab se meri madad nahin kar paye.

Anita phir Hariya ke shirt ke neeche sab button lagakar upar ke do butto chhor kar uske seene par haath pherti huyi boli,"Chaliye Hariya ji main darwaze tak chhor deti hoon".

Hariya apna pant pehen kar uski gaand par haath rakhkar bola,"Chaliye memsaheb".

Anita apni gaand matkati huyi darwaze tak pahunchi to woh boli,"Hariya ji mere liye samaan laane ke liye thank you. Sach mein aap nahin hote to main kya karti pata nahin".

Hariya Anita ki gaand dabate hue bola,"Are memsaheb kaisi baat kar rahe hain. Aapka madad karna to humra farz hai. Ab bas humka bol kar to dekhiye hum aapki har tarah se seva karenge. Humra jaisa marad hote hue aapki jaisi khabsurat aurat ko pareshani ho ee sasura kaise ho sakta hai".

Hariya yeh bolte hue Anita ki chunchi aur nangi pet ko dekhne laga aur dekhte hue bola,"Uff memsaheb ka khoobsurti aur jawani diya hai uparwale ne aapko".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi uske seene ko sehmati huyi boli,"Hariya ji to aap bhi kam hain kya. Aapko bhi to upar wale ne bharpoor mard banaya hai".

Phir woh aankhon se uske pant ke ubhar ke taraf ishara karti huyi muskurakar boli,"Itna tagda hathiyaar diya hai upar wale ne aapko".

Hariya yeh sunnkar muskurate hue Anita ki gaand dabaye apne se chipka kar bola,"Are memsaheb aapke liye hi to hai humra lauda. Aapki seva ke liye. Samaan pahunchai se aapki thukai tak hum sab seva karunga".

Anita yeh sunnkar besharmi se muskurati huyi Hariya ke seene ko sehmati huyi boli,"Hariya ji aap bhi na".

Hariya yeh sunnkar hasne laga to Anita bhi khilkhilane lagi aur phir boli,"Are Hariya ji aap samaan lekar aaye maine aapko to aapka bhara hi nahin diya".

Hariya Anita ki gaand dabate hye bola,"Are kahe humka sharminda kar rahi hain aap. Thela mein kaa bhara. Hum ghareeb zarur hoon, lekin lalachi nahin hoon".

Anita yeh sunnkar Hariya ke seene ko sehmati huyu boli,"Hariya ji phir shuru ho gaye aap. Maine kya kaha ki aapke paas to aesa khajana hai jiske liye ameer log apna paisa dene ke liye tayyar ho jayenge".

Hariya yeh sunnkar puchha,"Haan memsaheb aap sach kehti hain. Humra paas to aesa tagda lauda hai jisse hum aapki thukai karenge".

Anita yeh sunnkar apni ankhein badi karke use dekhkar boli,"Hariya ji".

Hariya yeh sunnkar muskuraya to Anita bhi muskura di aur boli,"Ab jaiye Hariya ji nahin to phir aap bolne lagenge ki meri wajah se aapka hathiyaar baukhla gaya hai aur phir aap shuru ho jayenge".

Hariya yeh sunnkar Anita ki gaand ko dabate hue bola,"Are memsaheb ab aap hai hi aesi to hum ka karu. Aapko dekhkar lauda to khada hoga hi humra. Hum marad hoon, asli marad"

Anita yeh sunnkar uske seene ko sehlati huyi randipane wali awaaz mein boli,"Haan Hariya ji aap jaise asli mard ka to hathiyaar khada hoga hi aurat ko dekhkar aur jab hathiyaar khada hoga to uss aurat ko thokne ka bhi mann karega aapka. Upar wale ne to aapko tagda hathiyaar thokne ke liye hi diya hai to isme ghalat kya hai. Sher ke saamne khoon rahega to woh baukhlayega hi na. Lekin sher bhi sahi mauqa milne par hi apne khoon ka pyaas bujhata hai kyunki asli mazaa usi mein hai, sahi mauqa mein taaki araam se mazaa liya jaa sake".

Hariya yeh sunnkar muskurakar bola,"Haan memsaheb aap sahi bol rahi hain. Achha hum chalta hoon nahin to ee sasura log phir phone karne lagega".

Anita muskurakar boli,"Theek hai Hariya ji. Meri madad karne ke liye phir se thank you".

Hariya yeh sunnkar muskuraya aur gate kholkar baahar nikal gaya. Anita use jaate hue dekhne lagi. Hariya thela par baithkar muskuraya to Anita haath hilakar bye boli to Hariya muskurakar apne lund par haath rakh diya to Anita bina sharm ke uske lund ke taraf dekhkar sir hilane lagi. Hariya muskurate hue wahaan se chala gaya aur Anita darwaza bandh karke seedha kamre mein jaa kar nangi hokar khud ko dekhi aur apni geeli choot se tapakti ras ko dekhkar use haath se chhukar boli,"Uff Hariya ji bhi na. Jab bhi milte hain geeli kar dete hain".

Anita phir apni pet mein lage tel ko dekhi jisse uski gori sapaat pet chamak rahi thi. Woh ghumkar apni gaand dekhne ke baad bathroom mein jaakar nahakar kha na banayi aur kha kar so gayi.

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UPDATE 62

Agle din Shaam mein Anita ek jagah sadak ke kinare khadi thi aur auto ka intezaar kar rahi thi magar use ek bhi auto nazar nahin aa rahi thi.Wo pareshan dikh rahi thi aur kuchh samajh nahin aa raha tha ki woh kya kare ki tabhi use Hariya ek motor cycle par aata dikhai diya.

Anita Hariya ko dekh kar thodi raahat mehsus ki aur muskurane lagi aur kuchh seconds mein Hariya uske paas aakar ruk gaya.Motor Cycle Ramu chala raha tha aur Hariya peechhe baitha tha.

Anita ke paas aane se pehle Ramu Anita ko muskurata dekhkar sochne laga ki itni khoobsurat aurat use dekhkar kyun muskura rahi hai ki tabhi use dhyaan aaya ki woh Anita ko kahin dekha hai aur thoda sochne par yaad aaya use ki woh Hariya ke saath uske ghar mattress lekar gaya tha ki tabhi use peeche se Hariya ka awaaz sunai diya,"Abe Ramu gaadi rok to".

Yeh baat bolte tak Ramu lagbhag wahan pahunch chuka tha jahan Anita khadi thi.

Motor cycle rukne par Anita ko khushi huyi aur woh muskurane lagi ki tabhi Hariya Anita ko dekhkar poochha,"are memsaahab aap eehaan?".

Anita Hariya aur Ramu ko dekhkar thodi khushi aur thodi pareshani ke bhao chehre par laakar boli,"are Hariya ji aur Ramu ji aap dono. Wo main ek kaam se aayee thi magar auto ka ata pata hi nahin hai".

Hariya bhi thodi pareshani se dekhte hue Anita ko bola,"are memsaahab kya kijiye iss shaher mein aesa hi hota hai. Kabhi hadd se zyada jam ke kaaran jaldi gaadi nahin milti to kabhi log maar peet karke jhamela kar lete hain aur gaadi ko bandh karke rakh dete hain. Aaj ek auto wale aur ek bus conductor mein jhamela hua hai kuchh der pehle usi karan sab gaadi bandh kar diye hain. Public ka kaa hoga ee sochte nahin hai sasura log".

Anita yeh sunkar aur pareshan hokar boli,"Oh My God. Phir main ghar kaise jaungi. Ghar nazdeek bhi nahin ki main paidal jaa sakun upar se meri pair mein abhi moch bhi aa gayee hai thodi der pehle. Hey bhagwan main kya karun ab yahan to taxi bhi nahin milti hai".

Hariya muskurate hue bola,"are memsaahab humra hote hue ab aapko chinta karne ki zaroorat nahin hain. Hum log hoon to" aur yeh bolte hue wo motor cycle se utar gaya aur phir paas mein gutkha thook kar phir se apna haath se munh pochhte hue bola,"memsaahab ab aapko chinta karne ki zaroorat nahin hai. Aap humare saath motor cycle par chaliye aapko ghar tak pahuncha denge".

Anita yeh sunkar muskura kar boli,"Achha hua aap sahi time par aa gaye nahin to mushqil ho jaati. Aap har jagah meri madad karne kahin na kahin se pahunch hi jaate hain".

Yeh sunkar Hariya muskurate hue bola,"are memsaahab hum aapko pehle din kahe the na ki hum bare kaam ke aadmi hain".

Anita yeh sunkar muskurai aur phir Ramu ke taraf dekhi to use apni nabhi ke taraf dekhte hue payi jisse woh samajh gayi ki woh uski nabhi se latki huyi belly button ring dekh raha hai.

Anita phir Hariya ko dekhkar boli,"Hariya ji aese hum teen aadmi motor cycle par baithenge to security officer fine kar dega na. Meri wajah se aap dono ko pareshani ho jayegi. Agar fine hoga to main de dungi".

Hariya yeh sunnkar bola,"Are memsaheb eehan ka phain hoga. Ee kauno aapka Dilli jaisa bada sheher thode hai. Eehan sab chalta hai. Bas aapko kauno pareshani nahin hona chahiye".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi boli,"Hariya ji mujhe kya pareshani hogi. Mujhe to ek tarah se khushi hai ki aap".

Aur phir woh Ramu ke taraf dekhkar aage boli,"aur Ramu ji yahan aa gaye nahin to main aaj yahin reh jaati hehehe".

Anita ki baat sunnkar Hariya bhi has diya,"Hahaha". Anita jab Ramu ko dekhi to use apni chunchiyon ko dekhte hue payi magar bina sharm ke apni baat bolkar hasne lagi.

Hariya haste hue bola,"Are memsaheb hum logan ke hote hue aap kahe eehan rahenge. Bhagwaan bhi jaanta hai ki aapko hum jaisan marad ka zarurat hai abhi tabhi to bhej diya hum logan ko".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurai aur muskrati huyi boli,"Hariya ji woh to theek hai lekin aesa lag raha hai Ramu ji ko yahan rukna achha nahin lag raha hai. Woh shayad jahan aap dono ko jaana hai seedha wahan jaana chahte hain".

Agle pal Anita Ramu ka baat suni jo uski chunchi se nazar hatakar uski chehre par dekhte hue bola,"Are memsaheb waisan baat nahin hai. Humka bhi khusi hai ki aisan zarurat ka mauqa par hum aapka kaam aa sake. Hum bhula nahin hoon ki hum jab Hariya ke saath aapke ghar aaye the to aap kitna achha se pesh aayi thi humare saath aur bakhshish bhi diye the".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi boli,"To aapko yaad bhi hai ki aap mere ghar aaye the. Jitna serious hokar aap mujhe dekh rahe the mujhe to aesa lag raha tha ki aapko main yaad bhi nahin hungi".

Ramu yeh sunnkar halka sa muskura kar bola,"Are nahi memsaheb u baat nahin hai".

Agle pal Hariya bola,"Are memsaheb ee aisan hi hai. Har waqt aise hi rehta hai".

Aur phir thoda dheere se bola,"Aur abhi to sasura ka peene ka time hai to peene ka soch raha hoga".

Ramu yeh sunnkar Hariya se bola,"Abe kaa bol raha hai".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurane lagi. Wahin Hariya jawaab mein bola,"Abe ka ho gaya. Memsaheb kauno anjaan thode hai jo sharma raha hai. Aur aese bhi memsaheb kitni achhi hai yeh to tum ka bhi pata hai. To memsaheb se sach kya chhupana".

Ramu yeh sunnkar chup ho gaya to Anita muskurati huyi boli,"Hariya ji ab Ramu ji ko yeh pasand nahin hai to chhor dijiye. Unka apna niji mamla hai".

Phir woh Ramu ko dekhkar boli,"Ramu ji aese main bata deti hoon ki aap peete bhi hain to usme koi burai nahin hai. Aap adult hai, aapki marzi aap jo kare".

Hariya yeh sunnkar bola,"Sunn liya. Beqaar mein sasura chinta kar raha tha ki memsaheb ka sochegi. Abe memsaheb jitni khabsurat hai utni hi dil ki achhi aur samajhdaar bhi hai. Tohre baare mein kuchho ghalat nahin sochegi".

Hariya ke munh se apni khoobsurti ki phir se tareef sunnkar Anita muskurati huyi sir hilane lagi jaise bolna chah rahi ho ki kuchh bhi ho jaye Hariya ji meri tareef hi karenge. Phir woh Hariya ka baat sunnkar Ramu ke taraf dekhkar boli,"Ramu ji main kyun ghalat sochungi aapke baare mein. Hum sab yahan adult hain. Umar se bade hain hum sab. Yeh to samajhne ki baat hai ki din bhar mehnat karke shaam mein peekar aap aur Hariya ji apni thakaan mitate honge"

Hariya yeh sunnkar Ramu se bola,"Sunn liya memsaheb kitni samajhdaar hain"

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurakar boli,"Ab chaliye chalte hain. Meri wajah se aur der na ho jaye. Aap logo ko araam ki zarurat hogi".

Ramu jawaab mein bola,"chaliye memsaahab shaam ho gayee hai andhera bhi ho raha hai".

Anita yeh sunnkar ek kadam aage badhi to ladkhada gayi. Hariya uski haath pakad kar sambhalte hue bola"are sambhal kar memsaahab".

Anita uska haath pakadti huyi khud ko sambhalkar boli,"wo thodi der pehle moch aayee thi pair mein isliye thoda chalna mushqil ho raha hai".

Hariya ek haath se Anita ki bayee hath pakda aur dusri haath uski gaand par rakh kar sahara dete hue use motorcycle par baithate hue bola,"Aap araam se beech mein baithiye memsaheb. Hum peeche se sahara dunga aapko.

Anita yeh saree pehni thi to isliye wo motorcycle par sideway baith gayi.

Anita ke baithne ke baad Hariya uske peechhe usse chipak kar baith gaya. Anita yeh dekhkar thodi aur aage khisak gayi jisse Hariya achhe se baith sake. Aesa karne se Anita ki dayi chunchi ka side wala bhaag Ramu ke peeth se satt gaya. Ramu ko jab yeh ehsaas hua to uska dil dhadak gaya aur badan aur lund mein ajeeb sa maze ka ehsaas hua.

Peeche se Hariya bhi Anita se chipak kar baith gaya jisse uski bayi chunchi ka side ka bhaag Hariya ke seene se satt gayi aur Hariya ka lund bhi pant ke upar se Anita ki bayi jangh se satt gaya. Anita bhi uske lund ko apni jangh par mehsus kar paa rahi thi.

Hariya phir Anita ki baayi haath pakad kar apne daye taraf se motorcycle ke peechhe pakda diya aur phir apna baya haath se uski nangi kamar ko pakad kar bola,"memsaahab ab aap araam se baithiye. Aap mehfuj hai aese,girne ka darr nahin".

Anita yeh sunnkar Hariya ko dekhkar muskurai. Dono ke chehre ke beech sirf kuchh inches ke hi faasle the aur aese mein Hariya ke munh se gutkha aur sharab ka gandh Anita ko mahek rahi thi. Saath hi Hariya ke shareer se uske paseene aur uske shirt se sharab ki mishran wali tez durgandh usko mahek rahi thi.

Use yaad aaya ki aesi durgandh jab woh daal,aata chawal yeh sab lekar uske ghar aaya tha aur woh usse chipak kar uske lund ki maalish kar rahi thi tab bhi aa rahi thi magar aaj uske paseene ki durgandh kaafi tez thi kyunki abhi shaam tha aur Hariya ka badan din bhar ki mehnat mazduri se paseene se bheega hua tha. Yahan tak ki uska shirt aur pant par bhi paseena sukhne se kahin kahin safed lakeer ban gayi thi. Yehi haal Ramu ke shirt aur pant ka bhi tha aur uske badan se bhi paseene aur sharab ki tez durgandh aa rahi thi.

Anita ki naak mein unn dono mazdur mardon ke beech chipak kar baithne se unke paseene ki tez durgandh jaa rahi thi magar use ghinn nahin aa rahi thi balki ulta ek mazaa sa lag raha tha usko. Woh ulta tez saans lekar unke durgandh lene ki koshish ki.

Hariya Anita ko araam se baithne ki baat bolne ke baad bola,"chalo Ramu gadi chalao".

Anita dayee haath apne god mein rakhi thi. Motorcycle jaise hi chali Anita ka balance bigadne se thodi aage ke taraf, matlab apni dayi taraf jhatke se Ramu ke badan se puri chipak gayi aur uske munh se "ouch" nikal gayi.

Ramu ko Anita jaisi khoobsurat aurat ke munh se "ouch" sunnkar bhi achha laga magar phir agle pal Hariya ka awaaz suna,"Abe Ramu araam se chala".

Ramu jawaab mein bola,"Haan Hariya theek hai".

Phir woh motorcycle chalate hue hi saamne aaine mein Anita ko dekhkar bola,"Maaf kijiyega memsaheb".

Anita ki baal motorcycle chalne se hawa mein udne lagi thi. Woh dayi haath se apni baal ko kaan ke peeche karti huyi boli muskurakar aaine mein hu Ramu ko dekhkar boli,"Koi baat nahin Ramu ji. Itha ho hi jaata hai".

Ramu yeh sunnkar muskuraya to Anita bhi use aaine mein dekhkar muskurati rahi. Agle pal Ramu bola,"Memsaheb agar aapko kauno pirablam nahin hai to aap apna daya haath se humka pakad lijiye".

Hariya bhi yeh sunnkar bola,"Haan memsaheb Ramu ko pakad lijiye aapko belens banane mein madad milega".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurakar boli,"Sach mein aap dono ko mera kitna khyaal hai".

Phir woh apni dayi haath aage lejakar Ramu ke pant ke thoda upar uske shirt ke upar se pet se hote hue uske baye kamar ko pakad li. Hariya bhi apna daya haath peeche Anita ki kamar par rakh diya.

Ab situation yeh tha ki Anita Ramu aur Hariya ke neeche sideways baithi thi aur apni dayi haath Hariya ke daye side se hote hue peeche lejakar motorcycle pakdi thi jisse uski bayi chunchi aur Hariya ke seene ke beech koi rukawat nahin thi aur uski bayi mulayam chunchi Hariya ke seene se side se dabi huyi thi.

Wahin Hariya ka lund pant ke upar se hi Anita ki bayi jangh se sata hua tha aur Anita apni jaangh par uske lund ke ubhar ko mehsus kar paa rahi thi.

Hariya apna baaya haath Anita ki pet par rakhe use sehla raha tha aur daya haath uski gaand ke upar nangi kamar par rakhe wahan sehla raha tha.

Anita apni dayi haath aage lejakar Ramu ka daya kamar pakdi thi aur uski kalai Ramu ke shirt ke upar se uske pet par tha. Aesa karne se uski dayi chunchi aur Ramu ke peeth ke beech kuchh nahin tha aur uski dayi chunchi Ramu ke peeth se sati huyi side se dabi huyi thi. Dekha jaye to uski dono badi chunchiyan side se dono mardon ke kathor seene aur peeth se dabi huyi thi.

Anita Ramu ka kamar pakad kar aaine mein dekhti huyi boli,"Ramu ji ummeed karti hoon ki aapko koi pareshani nahin ho rahi hai mera haath rakhne se".

Ramu motorcycle chalate hue aaine mein Anita ko dekhkar bola,"Are memsaheb pareshani kaisan. Motorcycle par aese side mein ghumkar baithne se to aise pakad kar hi belens milta hai".

Anita muskurati huyi boli,"Thank you Ramu ji".

Ramu yeh sunnkar halka sa muskurakar bola,"Aap bas araam se baithiye memsaheb".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurai to Hariya bola,"Ab theek hai memsaheb. Ab thoda jhatka lagega bhi to aap ko pareshani nahin hogi".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurakar Hariya ko dekhkar boli,"Pareshani kaise hogi Hariya ji. Peeche se aap apne majbut haathon se mujhe pakde hue hain aur aage se main Ramu ji ka majbut badan pakdi huyi hoon. Aap dono jaise majbut mardon ke beech baithkar pareshani ho aesa ho hi nahin sakta".

Hariya yeh sunnkar bola,"Aisan baat hai to thoda test kar let hain humlog apna majbuti".

Anita yeh sunnkar Hariya ko muskurati huyi dekhi aur agle pal woh Ramu se bola,"Ramu thoda achanak se jhatka dena to".

Ramu kuchh seconds aese hi motorcycle chalane ke baad achanak se break lagaya to Anita jor se Ramu ka kamar pakad li aur Hariya apna baaya aur daya haath ko Anita ki kamar ki dayi taraf karke jor se pakad liya.

Aesa hone se Anita ko jhatka nahin laga bas achanak break lagne ae lay mein Ramu thoda sa aage khisak gaya, itna ki samajh nahin aye kyunki Anita uske kamar ko jor se pakdi huyi thi aur uski bayi haath motorcycle ke peeche pakdi huyi thi. Wahin Hariya ke jor se pakde hone se Anita bhi nahin khiski aur Anita ke aage hone se Hariya bhi nahin khiska. Teeno majbuti se apne seat par dante rahe. Bas lay ke kaaran unke badan ka upri bhag thoda aage ke taraf jhuka.

Aage halka sa jhukne ae Anita ki dono chunchiyan Hariya ke seene aur Ramu ke peeth ke beech dab gayi. Jab achanak ruka to Anita ki munh se halki cheekh nikli thi "aaaahhh" aur unka upar ka badan jaise hi aage ke taraf thoda jhuk kar seedha hua Anita ki hasi chhut gayi,"Hehehe".

Anita ko hasta dekh Hariya bhi hasne laga magar Ramu bas halka muskurate raha. Anita ki chunchiyan un dono mardon ke beech dabi huyi thi magar use isse koi farq nahin pad raha tha aur woh khilkhilakar has rahi thi.

Woh hasi control karke boli,"Aap dono bhi na sach mein".

Agle pal Ramu ka awaaz aaya,"Memsaheb hum aur Hariya taaqat mein pass hue ki phel"

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi aage aaine mein Ramu ko dekhti huyi boli,"Pass woh bhi pure 100 number se".

Ramu yeh sunnkar muskuraya to Anita ko apni bayi chunchi par haath mehsus hua. Woh yeh mehsus karke bayi ghumkar Hariya ke taraf dekhi jo uski bayi badi chunchi ko muthhi mein jitna bhar sakta tha utna bharte hue bola,"Agar hum aapko aur achhe se pakde hote to ee thoda aage bhi nahin jhukti aap".

Anita yeh sunnkar apni ankhein badi karke Hariya ko dekhi to Hariya uski chunchi dabate hue muskuraya aur agle pal Anita Ramu ka awaaz suni,"Are to sahi se pakadna chahiye tha na memsaheb ko".

Ramu Anita ki chunchi par Hariya ka haath nahin dekh sakta tha. Woh bas Hariya ka baat ka jawaab dete hue bol raha tha.

Anita Ramu ka baat sunnkar apni ankhein badi ki to Hariya uski chunchi dabate hue bola,"Are theek hai ab achhe se pakad liye hoon memsaheb ko.".

Anita bas apni ankhein badi karke Hariya ko dekhi aue besharmi se muskura rahi thi. Hariya muskurakar Anita ko dekhte hue uski chunchi dabate hue bola,"Ab memsaheb ko achhe se pakad liya hoon hum. Tum tezi se gaadi chalao Ramu, bahot door jaana hai".

Rami agle pal gaadi ko aage badhaya aur halka sa jhatka phir diya. Anita jor se Ramu ka kamar phir se pakad li aur Hariya uski bayi chunchi ko jor se dabaye hue tha. Anita phir se halka sa cheekhi,"Aaahhh" aur khilkhilane lagi,"Hehehe".

Hariya Anita ki chunchi apne mutthi mein pakda hua tha aur woh khilkhila rahi thi. Usko khilkhilata dekh Hariya bhi uski chunchi dabate hue hasne laga.

Ramu motor cycle chalate hue aaine mein Anita ko hasta dekh bola,"Maaf kijiyega memsaheb iss baar jaan bujh kar hi aesa kiye hum. Soche ki ek aakhri baar aapko hasa de".

Anita khilkhilati huyi aaine mein Ramu ko dekhkar ek ada se boli,"Hehehe koi baat nahin Ramu ji. Ab to mujhe bhi koi darr nahin hai. Aap aur Hariya ji jaise majbut mardon ke beech baithkar ab darr kis baat ka".

Hariya Anita ki chunchi dabate hue bola,"Aesa baar baar chalana to sasura theek nahin hai. Magar memsaheb ko achha lag raha hai to ek baar aur aesa karke achhe se gaadi chala Ramu".

Ramu kuchh seconds baad phir waise hi jhatka diya to Anita phir se Ramu ka kamar jor se pakdi khilkhilane lagi. Hariya bhi uski chunchi ko jor se dabaye hue tha.

Ramu Anita ko ek baar aaine mein khilkhilate huw dekh normal tareeqe se motorcycle chalane laga wahin Anita khilkhilati huyi boli,"Hehehe oh my god aap dono bhi sach mein bahot funny hai hehehehe".

Hariya bhi uski chunchi dabaye hue haste hue bola,"Hahaha hum dono phanni hai kyunki hum dono ke paas phanwala cheez hai memsaheb".

Hariya yeh bolkar apne lund ke taraf aakhon se ishara kiya. Anita khilkhilati huyi Hariya ka baat sunti huyi uske taraf dekh rahi thi aur Hariya jab apne lund ke taraf ishara kiya to Anita besharmi se apni jangh se sate Hariya ke lund ke ubhar ko dekhi aur dekhkar khilkhilana bandh karke apni ankhein badi karke Hariya ko dekhi aur apna sir hilakar muskurati huyi saamne dekhne lagi.

Ramu aaine mein Anita ko muskurate dekh muskurakar bola,"ek aakhri baar humre taraf se memsaheb aapko hasa deta hoon".

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi boli,"Ab bas bhu kijiye Ramu ji. Aap dono to mujhe hasa hasa kar pet mein dard kar denge".

Agle pal Anita ko Hariya ka awaaz sunai diya,"Are memsaheb kuchho nahin hoga. Ek aakhri baar bas".

Anita yeh sunnkar khud ko mentally tayyar kar li aur Ramu kuchh seconds baad phir se jhatka diya jisse Anita ki munh se cheekh nikki,"Aaahh" aur phir uski dayi chunchi Ramu ke seene se dab gayi aur bayi chunchi Hariya apne mutthi mein bharkar dabaye hue tha. Anita iske bawjud besharmi se khilkhilane lagi,"Hehehe" aur Hariya bhi uski chunchi dabaye has raha tha "hahaha".

Anita Hariya ko hasta dekh khilkhilati huyi boli,"Ohh my god" aur phir khilkhilati huyi saamne aaine mein Ramu ko muskurate hue dekhne lagi.

Anita jo padhi likhi, behad hi khoobsurat, model aur actress jitni khoobsurat thi aur ameer ghar ki shaadi shuda aurat thi woh besharmi se do anpadh ganwar majdur jinke kapde par paseene se kahin kahin safed dhabbe ho gaye the aur jinke badan se paseene aur desi sharab ki gandh aa rahi thi unke beech motorcycle par baithi ek ke peeth se apne chunchi dabti huyi aur dusre ke haath se apni dusri chunchi masalwati huyi puri behayayi aur besharmi se khilkhilati huyi apne ghar ja rahi thithi, jaise koi rundi apne customer ke saath unka bistar garam karne ya koi badchalan aurat apne yaaron ke saath rangreliyaan manane jaa rahi ho.

[seansean007]

Welcome back sean...nice to read 2 update after a long period..hope everything will be go on at same speed, the way hariya has rubbed and anita in second turn massage his dick from back is unparalleled and hot af..but I wonder when a character like jeetu will enter to put some spark in story..hariya is there and he'll have some fun but deep down we all know that audacious jeetu is now needed in story. Plz consider this

I have said it earlier and saying it again for the second time,"Please read the very first post of this thread". Hope this time you get your answer. Thanks.

[seansean007]

As the last paragraph of the update mentions that she is behaving like a "badchalan" aurat, Is it time that we say she is, isn't she? But I would love to add that she is not only "badchalan" but she is also "chalu" aurat. She might not be aware of that but considering her over "frankly" Ness with the men like hariya and ramu is testament of that. She is a player who very well knows that what does she actually desire and acts freely and challenges the "dabang" men by being loke that.

One more good update from you sean, I was so engrossed in reading and that I was thinking that Anita's hand will slip towards the ramu's "lauda" and she hold it tightly, in one of the naught break play and then ramu and Anita's story will start simultaneously. I was hoping for it alas, next time I'm the future.

I think and one important improvement this storytelling can make is, by describing what Anita's attire is actually in detail and also what hariya and ramu immediately thought after looking at her. That would be awesome scenario to read, what hariya thinks of Anita as a person, that we as a reader would love to read I guess, according to me at least.
After all of these actions, I am really hoping that we will read the ever anticipated update about the "thukai" between Anita and hariya, considering it almost at the end before the beginning after reading the 2nd last update. Cannot wait to read that.

All the best for the next update. Waiting...

Thanks for the detailed feedback. I usually don't put what the males think of Anita in words but try to put it across through their gaze. How they look at Anita also shows what they think of her without putting it explicitly in words. If I start putting that in words then the story will lose a little bit of mystery and eroticism. 

Also since most of the readers are males, I leave it upto their imagination on what they want to think of Anita if they are in place of a particular male with whom Anita is having an encounter or who is looking at her. This is the very reason I constantly ask readers to put comments on what they think of Anita or her behaviour in a particular update. I think if the readers engage themselves more in the discussion and openly put across their thoughts of her and whether it reminds them of any particular incident or woman in real life then the story will become more interesting and erotic as it will connect with readers lives. Readers should definitely call out their take on Anita, her character and her behavior. You did this very well in this feedback by openly calling out what you think of her and her character and I am sure while describing her character you must have got a sense of pleasure as well because you described her the way you think about her without holding yourself back. That's what I look forward to from the readers. 

As far as Hariya is concerned he obviously tells Anita what he thinks of her openly, her beauty, her sexiness, how her swaying ass makes his cock hard, etc. 

Hope I was able to justify the update. I will also keep the improvement points in mind and try to keep improving the story. Thanks a lot for being such a wonderful and engaging reader. Hope you keep enjoying the story.

[seansean007]

Before readers start making assumptions about the direction in which the story may move in future, I would request them to have patience for the next 3-4 updates. Till then just comment on the particular update without discussing the direction in which the story might move. I know where to take the story and where to place a particular event. Thanks.

[seansean007]

UPDATE 63

Anita usi tarah hasti khilkhilati huyi Hariya aur Ramu ke beech motorcycle par unse chipki baithi apne ghar ki taraf jaa rahi thi. Hariya uski bayi chunchi pura raste masalte raha aur Anita ek baar bhi use apna haath uski chunchi se hatane ke liye nahin boli.



Shaam ka waqt tha aur Ramu highway se hote hue ek gali se Anita ke ghar ke taraf gaya jidhar logo aur gadiyon ka aana jaana nahin tha to koi dekhne wala nahin tha ki Anita ki chunchi koi daba raha hai shayad isi kaaran se Anita Hariya ka haath apni chunchi se hatane ke liye ishara nahin ki ya boli nahin.



Anita ki ghar se 2-3 minute ki doori par halki halki baarish hone lagi aur ghar pahunchte pahunchte baarish tez ho gayi. Anita baarish tez hota dekh boli,"Ohh no. Yeh baarish to tez ho gayi"



Hariya motorcycle se jaldi se utarte hue bola,"Ee to achha hua ghar pahunch gaye nahin to itna tez baarish mein raaste par mushqil ho jaata".



Anita bhi yeh sunnkar "Haan Hariya ji" boli to Hariya uske taraf haath badhate hue bola,"Aaiye memsaheb".



Anita Hariya ka haath pakad kar motorcycle se utar gayi to Hariya bola,"Chaabhi dijiye memsaheb hum jaldi se ee lohe ka gate khol deta hoon".



Anita jaldi se apni bag se chabi lekar Hariya ko di to woh gate kholkar bola,"Aaiye memsaheb hum jaldi se aapko ander chhor deta hoon nahin to aap bheeng jaiyega".



Anita aage badhi to Hariya use chabhi dekar Ramu se bola,"Tum ruko Ramu hum memsaheb ko jaldi ander chhod kar aata hoon".



Anita yeh sunnkar boli,"Hariya ji baarish tez ho gayi hai. Aap dono abhi kahan jayenge. Aap log bhi chaliye ander".



Ramu yeh sunnkar bola,"Are nahin memsaheb hum aapki pareshani nahin badhana chahte. Aap jaiye".



Anita yeh sunnkar ghumkar Ramu ke taraf dekhkar narazgi se boli,"Kaisi baat kar rahe hain Ramu ji. Main saath aai to aap logo ko pareshani nahin huyi aur aap dono thoda der yahan ruk jayenge to mujhe pareshani ho jayegi".



Phir woh Hariya ko dekhkar boli,"Hariya ji aap hi samjhaiye na Ramu ji ko. Itni baarish mein aap dono jayenge to pura bheeng jayenge aur tabiyat kharab ho jayegi"



Hariya yeh sunnkar bola,"Abe Ramu memsaheb theek bol rahi hai. Chal jab tak baarish nahin rukta hum dono yahin ruk jaata hoon".



Ramu yeh sunnkar Anita ki bheegi badan ko dekhne laga. Uski chhoto blouse uski chunchiyon se chipak chuki thi aur uski cleavage mein paani ghus rahi thi. Anita Ramu ko apni badan ghurte hue dekh boli,"Jaldi chaliye Ramu ji nahin to aur bheeg jaiyega"



Ramu yeh sunnkar "haan" mein sir hilaya to Hariya Anita ki haath pakde ander ghar ki taraf dauda. Ramu peeche se motorcycle lekar ander gaya aue uska nazar daudte waqt Anita ki gaand par tha.



Bheegne ke kaaran Anita ki saree uski gaand ki daraar mein ghoos gayee thi aur uski dono gaand ke phaank ka poora aakar samajh aa raha tha jo daudne se hil rahi thi. Anita ki badi gaand ko hilta dekh Ramu ke lund mein garam khoon daudne laga.



Anita guest room ki taraf badh gayee aur ghar ka chabi jo dusre guchhe mein thi usko bag se nikalne lagi. Hariya Ramu ko gate bandh karne bol diya to woh motorcycle ko park karke jaldi se gate bandh karke aa gaya.



Anita tab tak chabi nikal kar guest room kholne lagi. Ramu waapas aakar jaise hi Anita ko guest room kholte dekha uska dil dhadakne ke saath saath lund mein bhi hulchul ho gaya. Anita kisi badi gaand jiske daraar mein bheegi huyi saree ghus chuki thi aur uske upar adh nangi bheegu huyi gori peeth jispar paani phisal raha tha yeh dekhkar kisi bhi mard ka khoon garam ho sakta tha to phir Hariya aur Ramu jaise mardon ka khoon garam na ho aesa ho hi nahin sakta tha.



Woh dono Anita ko gaand aur uski adhnangi peeth ko dekhne laga. Kuchh seconds baad Anita ki gaand ko ghoomte dekh Ramu samajh gaya ki wo peechhe ghoom rahi hai to jhatt se apni aankhen uski gaand se hatakar uske chehre par kar diya.



Anita use apni gaand ko dekhte hue dekh li thi magar phir bhi bura maan bina muskurati hui boli,''aaiye aap dono isme araam kijiye''.



Hariya aur Ramu ke poore badan se paani tapak raha tha. Hariya bola,"Are memsaheb hum aese jayenge to aapka pura ghar geela aur ganda ho jayega"



Anita use dekhkar boli,''Ohh main bhi na. Rukiye main tauli deti hoon''.



Yeh bolkar Anita guest room mein jaakar wardrobe kholne lagi.Wardrobe se do tauli nikal kar woh baahar aai aur Ramu aur Hariya ko ek ek tauli deti huyi boli,"Yeh lijiye aap dono apna badan sukha lijiye".



Ramu aur Hariya dono Anita ko dekhte hue uske haath se tauli le liye. Hariya muskurate hue bola,"Thenku memsaheb".



Anita yeh sunnkar muskurai to Ramu bhi bola,"Thenku".



Anita yeh sunnkar Ramu ko dekhkar muskurai.





Agle pal Hariya Anita kisi badan ko upar se neeche tak dekha to Anita uske taraf dekhi. Woh chup chap khadi rahi aur Hariya ko apna badan par nazar daudane di. Hariya uski badan par ek nazar daudane ke Anita ko dekha to woh boli,''aap dono apna badan ponchh kar guest room mein jaa kar araam kijiye tab tak main bhi thoda fresh hokar kapda badal leti hoon. Main bhi puri bheeng chuki hoon''.



Hariya jawaab mein bola,"Haan theek hai memsaheb. Aap bhi apna ee khabsurat badan ponchh kar kapda badal lijiye".



Anita yeh sunnkar muskura di to Hariya aage bola,"Bheegne se sasura aapka pura kapda aapka khabsurat badan se chipak gawa hai".



Hariya yeh bolkar Anita ki badan ko phir se upar se neeche tak dekhkne laga. Anita use phir se apni badan ko ghurte dekhne lagi, uska nazar uski chunchi se chipki blouse par aur bheegi pet par jaa raha tha. Ramu Anita ke bayi taraf khada tha to Anita aankhon ke kone se dekhi ki woh side se uski gaand dekh raha tha jahan saree uski gaand se chipak kar thoda uski daraar mein bhi ghus gayi thi.



Anita bina bura maane boli,"Haan Hariya ji bheegne se to chipkega hi".



Hariya yeh sunnkar bola,"Haan memsaheb aur aapka to pichhe ghus bhi gawa hai".



Anita ko Hariya se Ramu ke saamne aese bolne ki ummeed nahin thi aur woh yeh sunnkar ankhein badi karke Hariya ko dekhi to woh muskura diya. Anita apni aankhon ke kone se Ramu ko dekhi to woh bhi halka muskura raha tha.



Ramu ko muskurata dekh Anita apni besharmi ki sabut deti huyi bina sharm ke uske taraf dekhi to woh bhi Anita ko dekhkar muskurate raha.



Anita bhi muskurakar boli,"Achha aap dono badan sukha kar guest room mein araam kar lijiyega. Main thoda fresh ho jaati hoon tab tak".



Anita yeh bolkar apni gaand matkati hui ghar ka darwaza ke taraf jaakar darwaza kholne lagi. Anita ke darwaze ki taraf jaane waqt Hariya aur Ramu sir aur badan ponchhne lage aur ponchhte hi dono ka nazar Anita ki gaand par waapas para aur dono tauli ko waise hi sir aur badan par rokkar uski gaand dekhne lage jisme saree ghusi huyi thi. Dono ek nazar uski bheegi kamar aur peeth par bhi lejakar dekhe.



Anita darwaza khol kar living room mein dakhil ho gayee aur darwaza ander se bandh karte waqt woh dono ke taraf dekhi to woh dono halka sa muskura rahe the. Anita bhi muskura di aur darwaza bandh kar di. Dono Hariya aur Ramu ka lund phadphada gaya Anita ki gaand aur adhnangi peeth aur kamar ko dekhkar. Dono gehri saans lekar waapas sir aur badan ponchhne lage.



Dono apna badan ponchh kar guest room mein gaye aur do kursi par baithe agle aadhe ghante tak dono uss room ki khoobsurti dekhte rahe aur saath mein aapas mein baat karte rahe, khaakar Anita ke baare mein ki kaise woh itni padhi likhi, ameer aur khoobsurat hone ke bawjud bhi dil ki kitni achhi hai.



Dono baat kar hi rahe the ki Anita waapas guest room mein aayee. Woh naha kar kapde badal li thi.Woh ek bahurang saree pehni huyi thi jispar hara, laal , gulabi aur nili rang ki patti (stripe) bani thi.



Woh saree uski gori jism ko aur bhi khoobsurat bana rahi thi. Saree ke saath woh usi pattern mein ek chhota blouse pehni thi jo uski chunchi ke neeche aakar khatam ho jaa rahi thi. Upar cleavage bhi thoda dikh rahi thi. Woh saree ko naabhi se 3 inches neeche pehni thi jiske kaaran uski gori sapaat pet puri nangi thi aur bas ek side mein hi uski kandhe par jaati huyi pallu se thodi dhanki huyi thi.



Puri nangi gori sapaat pet ke beech uski gehri naabhi se dedh do inches ka belly button ring latak rahi thi jisme laga white stone roshni mein chamak rahi thi.



Woh jab aayee tab Hariya aur Ramu dono Anita ko dekhte reh gaye saath hi Anita bhi unn dono ko dekhne lagi. Woh dono kursi par sirf tauli lapete hue baithe the, uske alawa un dono ke badan par aur koi kapda nahin tha.



Ramu aur Hariya Anita ki chunchi ki ubhar, nangi pet aur nabhi se latki chamakti huyi belly button ring dekh rahe the wahin Anita unke baalon se bhare seene ko dekh rahi thi. Aesa kuchh seconds tak hua uske baad Ramu bola,"Maaf kijiyega memsaheb woh kapda bheega tha to use sukhne ke liye rakh diye aur ee tauli pehen liye".



Anita yeh sunnkar Ramu ko dekhi aur muskurati huyi ek ada se chalti huyi aage unke paas jaati huyi boli,"Are koi baat nahin Ramu ji. Aap dono to meri wajah se hi bheege hain. Main nahin rehti to aap dono apne ghar jaate aur bheegte bhi to kam se kam badalne ke liye kapda to hota aap dono ke aas paas".



Hariya yeh sunnkar bola,"Are memsaheb kahe humka sharminda kar rahi hain aap. Aapka madad karke to humka achha laga ab isme thoda bheeg gaye to kaa hua. Kaa Ramu ka bolta hai".



Ramu yeh sunnkar Anita ko dekhkar bola,"Haan memsaheb. Hum dono ko aapka madad karke achha laga".



Hariya aur Ramu ke kareeb unse ek se dedh feet ki duri par Anita unke saamne khadi thi jiske kaaran uski pet un dono ke aankhon ke saamne thi. Ramu apna baat bolkar ek nazar Anita ki nangi pet aur uske beech nabhi se latki huyi chamakti huyi belly button ring ko dekhne laga.



Anita Ramu ke nazar ko apni pet par rengte hue dekhne ke baad ek nazar Hariya ko dekhi to use bhi apni nangi pet par dekhte hue payi.



Woh dono ko apni nangi pet ko dekhte hue paakar woh bina kuchh reaction ke muskurakar boli,"To aap log bhi mujhe sharminda mat kijiye maafi maang kar. Ab aap dono ka kapda bheeng gaya hai to use to utarenge hi. Bheega hua kapda pehen kar apna tabiyat kyun kharab karenge. Iske liye maafi maang kar mujhe sharminda mat kijiye. Jo bhi kiya hai aap dono ne theek kiya hai".



Hariya yeh sunnkar muskurate hue Anita ki chehre ko dekhkar bola,"Sach mein memsaheb aap kitni achhi hain. Jitna khabsurat aapko upar wale ne banaya hai aap utni hi achhi aur samajhdaar bhi hain".



Anita yeh sunnkar muskurai to agle pal Ramu bola,"Haan memsaheb sach mein aap bahot achhi hai".



Anita yeh sunnkar muskurakar Ramu ko dekhkar boli,"Aap dono bhi to bahot achhe hain. Mujhe aese raaste par khadi dekhkar meri madad karne ke liye tayyar ho gaye aur apne saath mere ghar tak le aaye".



Ramu aur Hariya dono halka muskurane laga to Hariya bola,"Ab memsaheb aapka jaisan khabsurat, pyaari aur nazuk aurat ko hum aese wahan kaise chhod sakte the".



Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi boli,"Hariya ji woh to theek hai lekin ab meri tareef karna bandh kijiye. Bas meri tareef hi kar rahe hain aap dono".



Yeh sunnkar Anita khilkhilane lagi,"Hehehe" to Hariya bhi hasne laga "hahaha". Wahin Ramu bas muskurata raha. Anita Ramu ko muskurate hue dekhkar boli,"Achha baatein to hoti rahengi. Aap dono bheeg gaye the to main aap dono ke liye adrakh wali chai bana deti hoon".



Ramu ko iska ummeed nahin tha. Woh yeh sunnkar Anita ko dekhne laga ki tabhi Hariya hasna bandh karke bola,"Are memsaheb aap kahe takleef kar rahi hain".



Anita muskurakar boli,"Isme takleef ki kya baat hai. Main bhi peena chahti hoon to sochi ki aap dono se bhi puchh loon ki aap dono adrakh wali chai peete hain ya nahin. Sabki apni apni pasand hoti hai to puchhna zaruri hai na".



Hariya muskurakar bola,"Waah memsaheb phir se aap kitni samajhdaari ki baat boli".



Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati rahi to Ramu Hariya ke taraf dekha jaise aankhon se kuchh kehna chahta ho. Anita bhi Ramu ke taraf dekhi to woh bhi samajh gayi ki woh shayad kuchh kehna chahta hai.



Anita use dekhkar puchh,"Ramu ji aap kuchh kehna chahte hain kya? Agar aap adrakh ki chai nahin peete to nimbu chai bana dun aapke liye. Ya juice piyenge aap?"



Ramu yeh sunnkar Anita ko dekha. Anita use itna kuchh peene ke liye offer karegi woh socha nahin tha. Woh uski khoobsurti se uske taraf aakarshit to tha hi aur uski badan ko gandi nazar se ghurne mein achha to lag raha tha magar saath hi Anita ke prati thodi mann mein izzat bhi hone lagi uski achhi behavior dekhkar ki itni ameer, khoobsurat aur padhi likhi hone ke bawjood bhi woh dil ki achhi thi aur ghamand zara bhi nahin tha tabhi to uske aur Hariya jaise mazduro ke saath itni achhe tareeqe se khul kar ghul mil gayi.



Hariya jawaab mein bola,"Woh memsaheb hum bole the na ki shaam mein sasura ko thoda peene ka aadat hai. Jab tak thoda piyega nahin isko chain nahin milega".



Anita yeh sunnkar Ramu ke taraf dekhi aur apni sir hilati huyi boli,"Ramu ji to yeh bolne mein aap jhijhak rahe the? Isme jhijhakne ki kya baat hai. Main to pehle hi bol chuki hoon ki hum sab adults hain. Agar aapko peene ka mann hai to wahi sahi. Lekin mere ghar mein to peene ka kuchh nahin hai."



Hariya yeh sunnkar bola,"Are memsaheb kauno baat nahin u Ramu sasura lekar ghumta hai agar kabhi kahin peene ka mann ho aur aas paas na mile"



Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi boli,"Ohh tab theek hai aapko peena hai to araam se pijiye".



Hariya phir bola,"Aese memsaheb juice ke alawa to bahot saara doodh bhi hoga yahan" aur yeh bolkar woh Anita ki chhoti blouse mein kaid uski chunchiyon ko dekhne laga.



Anita ko iski ummeed nahin thi. Uski dil dhadakne lagi aur saans tez ho gayi jisse uski chunchiyan bhi upar neeche hone lagi. Saath hi uski choot mein bhi thodi hulchul ho gayi. Woh jaldi se aankhon ke kone se Ramu ko dekhi to payi ki woh bhi uski chunchiyon ko hi dekh raha hai.



Anita apni saans control karke Hariya ko dekhi to woh uske chehre par dekhkar muskuraya. Hariya ko muskurata dekh Anita puchhi,"Hariya ji aap chai piyenge ya aap bhi Ramu ke saath hi piyenge".



Hariya muskurakar bola,"Ab memsaheb sasura jaisa bhi hai humra dost hai. Thoda saath to dena hi padega".



Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi boli,"Theek hai. Main khud ke liye chai bana leti hoon. Aap dono araam se pijiye".



Hariya yeh sunnkar bola,"Theek hai memsaheb. Woh do glass milega kaa?"



Anita sunnkar muskurakar boli,"Haan Hariya ji kyun nahin. Uske saath kuchh khayenge kya?"



Hariya yeh sunnkar bola,"Are nahin memsaheb kuchho nahin. Aap pareshan mat hoiye".



Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi boli,"Are Hariya ji pareshani ki kya baat hai. In fact main soch rahi thi ki mausam achha hai to kuchh namkeen bana leti hoon. Iss mausam mein pakaude khane ka alag hi mazaa hai. Main pakaude hi bana deti hoon. Main bhi kha lungi aur aap dono bhi kha lijiyega".



Hariya aur Ramu ek dusre ko dekhe aur phir Hariya bola,"Theek hai memsaheb jab aap bana rahi hai to hum dono bhi kha lenge".



Anita muskurakar Ramu aur Hariya dono ke taraf ek ek karke dekhkar boli,"Theek hai. Tab tak main do glass laa deti hoon".



Ramu "haan" mein sir hilaya aur bola,"Memsaheb thoda paani aur baraf bhi milega?".



Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyu Ramu ko dekhkar apni sir hilakar boli,"Ramu ji kyun nahin milega. Aap bhi na. Jo bhi chahiye aap logo ko woh bejhijhak mangiye. Aap dono koi anjaan to hain nahin ki kuchh bolne ya mangne se pehle jhijhak ho".



Ramu yeh sunnkar "haan" mein sir hilaya to Anita use aur Hariya ko dekhti huyi aage boli,"Ek kaam kijiye ap dono ander living room mein hi aa jaiye na. Wahan araam se sofe par baithkar aap dono pi lijiyega aur main kitchen mein pakaude banakar garam garam aap dono ko serve bhi kar dungi. Living room mein hi kitchen bhi hai to jo bhi chahiye aap logo ko asaani se mil bhi jayega aur thodi bahot baat chit bhi hote rahegi".



Hariya yeh sunnkar bola,"Haan baat to sahi hai".



Ramu ko Anita ki baat par yaqeen nahin ho raha tha to woh ek pal ke liye Hariya ko dekhkar waapas Anita ko dekhne laga to Anita boli,"Lag raha hai Ramu ji ko akele aapke saath hi peene ka mann hai. Woh mere saamne peena nahin chahte hain".



Ramu yeh sunnkar bola,"Are nahin memsaheb aisan baat nahin hai".



Anita yeh sunnkar ek ada se boli,"To phir soch kya rahe hain? Chaliye araam se ander baithkar piyega."



Ramu jawaab mein bola,"Bas yehi soch rahe hai memsaheb ki aapke saamne piyenge to nasha dugna ho jayega".



Hariya yeh sunnkar muskurakar bola,"Abe Ramu sasura". Wahin Anita apni ankhein badi karke Ramu ko dekhti huyi ek ada se muskurati huyi boli,"Ramu ji aap bhi. Main to sochi bhi nahin thi ki aap aese tareef bhi kar sakte hain".



Ramu yeh sunnkar muskuraya to Hariya bola,"Sasura chhupa rustam hai hahaha".



Anita bhi sunnkar muskurati rahi to Hariya bola,"Lekin sasura ka isme kauno ghalti nahin hai memsaheb. Aap sach mein bahot khabsurat lag rahi hain iss saree mein. Kasam se heroine lag rahi hain aap".



Anita yeh sunnkar Hariya ko dekhkar muskurati huyi boli,"Offo Hariya ji ab bas bhi kijiye" ki agle pal Ramu bola,"Humka to memsaheb heroine se bhi zyada khabsurat lag rahi hai".



Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi Ramu ko dekhkar boli,"Ab main kya bolun. Aap dono hi meri tareef karne lage".



Iske jawaab mein Hariya bola,"Are memsaheb tareef usi ka kiya jaata hai jo uke layaq hota hai. Aap hai hi itni khabsurat".



Anita yeh sunnkar muskurakar Hariya ko dekhi to woh uski jisk ko upar se neeche tak dekhne laga. Agle pal Anita Ramu ke taraf dekhi to woh bhi uski jism ko upar se neeche tak dekhne laga. Dono mardon ke munh se khud ki khoobsurti ki tareef sunnkar aur phir unki nazro ko apne jism par rengta dekh Anita ko apni khoobsurti par garv hone laga aur woh garv se wahan chup chap khadi rahi.



Kuchh seconds baad Hariya bola,"Waah memsaheb sach mein bahot hi pyaar se banaya hai aapko upar wale ne".



Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi boli,"Ab bas bhi kijiye aap dono".



Yeh sunnkar Hariya muskuraya to Anita bhi muskurati huyi dekhkar boli,"Ab aap dono ko peena bhi hai ya ek guna nasha aese hi ho gaya?"



Hariya yeh sunnkar muskurate hue bola,"Are memsaheb" aur phir hasne laga,"hahaha" to Anita bhi besharmi se khilkhilane lagi "hehehe".



Ramu bhi Anita ki badan ko dekhte hue muskurane laga. Anita khilkhilati huyi boli,"Hehe sach mein aap dono bahot funny hain. Ab chaliye"



Ramu yeh sunnkar "haan" mein sir hilaya to Hariya bola,"Chalo Ramu".



Dono uth gaye. Ramu ek kursi par sukhne ke liye rakhe uske kapdo ke taraf gaya aur pant se sharab ka ek chhota bottle nikala to Anita boli,"Aap log apne kapde bhi lete chaliye. Washing machine mein jaldi se dhul bhi jayega aur sukh bhi jayega".



Ramu yeh sunnkar Anita ko dekha aur "haan" mein sir hilakar apna kapda uthane laga. Hariya bhi aage badhkar apna kapda dusra kursi se uthaya.



Anita phir boli,"Chaliye aur chabi le lijiye. Guest room bandh kar dete hain jab tak aap dono ander rahenge tab tak ke liye" aur woh dono ke aage chalti huyi guest room se baahar jaane lagi. Ramu jaldi se chabi uthaya aur woh aur Hariya bhi baahar jaane laga.



Hariya aur Ramu ka nazar Anita ki peeth par pada aur dekh kar dono ka lund phadphada gaya. Anita ki chhoti blouse mein peeche teen dori hi thi, ek gardan ke paas, ek neeche peeth par aur ek un dono ke beech. Iske alawa uski peeth par aur koi kapda nahin tha. Uski gori chikni peeth gardan ke neeche se lekar uski gaand ke upar jahan saree bandhi huyi thi wahan tak puri nangi thi un teen dori ko chhodkar jiska kaam badan ko dhankna nahin balki blouse ko Anita ki badan par bandhe rakhna tha. Uski baal bhi aage ke taraf kiya hua tha to woh bhi uski peeth ko dhank nahin rahi thi.



Anita gaand matkati aur kamar lachkati huyi unn dono mard jo sirf tauli lapete the unke aage chal rahi thi aur woh dono ka nazar uski nangi peeth aur matakti gaand par tha.



Anita kamre se baahar nikli to baarish aur hawa pehle se tez ho gayi thi. Aesa lag raha tha ki aandhi aayegi. Tez hawa ke kaaran verandah mein bhi baarish ki thodi chhinte aa rahe the jisme se kuchh chhinte Anita ki gori badan par bhi pad raha tha.



Ramu jab darwaza lock kar raha tha to Hariya tez hawa aur baarish dekhkar bola,"Ee sasura baarish to aur tez ho gawa aur aandhi bhi aane wala lagta hai".



Ramu bhi darwaza lock karne ke baad Anita ke peeche chalte hue bola,"Haan lag raha hai rukne wala nahin hai. Jagah jagah paani bhi lag gawa hoga".



Anita yeh sunnkar chalti huyi boli,"Haan. Khair hum log ghar par aa chuke hain to yahan safe hain".



Hariya yeh sunnkar bola,"Haan memsaheb"



Anita ghar ke darwaze ke paas gayi to bijli chamakne lagi aur phir halka badal garza. Bijli chamakne se Anita ki gori badan bhi verandah ki halki roshni mein chamak uthi, khaaskar jahan jahan baarish ki thodi chhinte padi thi. Ramu aur Hariya dono ka nazar wahan pada to unka lund tauli ke ander phir se phadphada gaya.

[seansean007]

The "best" cinemato narration ever, just like a movie running, in the begging update looked running fast but when needed it became very steady and normal in dialogue, witty and naturally real. Her changing of clothes and building lust inside ramu is very tightly fixed in plot. And like many writers I'd like to suggest one thing that plz give a detailed description of Anita's face , as you thought it to be because the character is so big that we are unable to think everything in our own way, hope you'd consider this.

Thanks a lot for the feedback. The reason I don't describe Anita's face is I want to leave it to readers' imagination to think of whoever they want as Anita. Everyone has their own likes and dislikes, one description may not be liked by a group of readers and the other may not be liked by another group of readers. In such a case it's better to let them imagine whoever they want to imagine as Anita. This will make the story enjoyable for all the readers. Though one thing I can say is that Anita doesn't have any nose piercing (I dislike it). She has ear and navel piercing. So based on the above if readers want to share any pic of whom they imagine while thinking of Anita's face (I believe earlier we had discussed about whom readers imagine when thinking about Anita as a personality and the body type. While imagining one can imagine various person based on different body parts). So when it comes to face only, let the readers share whom they imagine as Anita. I think you can start with your own imagination. 

Thanks.

[seansean007]

This is like reading screenplay, you are so engrossed into reading that you forgot the world around you exist. The ability to make readers feel that they are the part of that story is just tremendous. What a writer you are sean, this is one of the toughest job to do and you do this regularly thank you. While reading this update I was imagining Myself to be ramu and hariya simultaneously, my heartbeat was at peak while reading the erotic encounter between three folks. And I can see what Anita is looking like reading the update . Just phenomenal writing.

Thanks a lot for the feedback. Just as I said above, would love to know what/whom/how you thought Anita was looking like in this update. Thanks.