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		02-03-2023, 05:22 PM 
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		Hi guys, 
I am thinking to start a short story have the following options please let me know on which topic you guys want the story to be based:
 - Naukar aur malkin
 
 
- rishtedar shehr mein a k ek widwa maa aur beti k saath reh rha o 
 
 
- dokandar and madam
 
 
 
Mujhe polls nai arhe abi s mein banana s liye esse post kr rha un and new to this writing 
 
yea hindi roman text base ogi.   
	 
	
	
	
	
 
 
	
	
	
		
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		Very very beautiful,innocent,conservative,faithful and religious house wife of a very much rich,powerful and aristocratic family and an ugly old house servant of opposite majab who has a monster black dick of 10 inches long and 5 inches thick.
	 
	
	
	
	
 
 
	
	
	
		
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		 (02-03-2023, 06:13 PM)Mafiadon Wrote:  Very very beautiful,innocent,conservative,faithful and religious house wife of a very much rich,powerful and aristocratic family and an ugly old house servant of opposite majab who has a monster black dick of 10 inches long and 5 inches thick. 
100% agree with you.
	  
	
	
	
	
 
	  
	
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		 (02-03-2023, 06:13 PM)Mafiadon Wrote:  Very very beautiful,innocent,conservative,faithful and religious house wife of a very much rich,powerful and aristocratic family and an ugly old house servant of opposite majab who has a monster black dick of 10 inches long and 5 inches thick. 
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		 (02-03-2023, 06:13 PM)Mafiadon Wrote:  Very very beautiful,innocent,conservative,faithful and religious house wife of a very much rich,powerful and aristocratic family and an ugly old house servant of opposite majab who has a monster black dick of 10 inches long and 5 inches thick. 
bahut badhiya theme clp); clp); clp);
	  
	
	
	
	
 
	  
	
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		First Update 
Main Character: padma 
Age = 44 
Jism khubsurat 33 ki dekti hai by looks  
Figure: 36 36 38 
Gand p bht mehnat ki hai shape gol khubsurat 
Family mein husband hai aur bache jo k boarding mein ote hain kbi kabar ate hain chutiun p 
Padma khud ko bht maintain krti hai subah uthte e khud ko tayar krti pr aone un ko uta k office k liye tayar krti hai pr sara din koi book padti ya koi movie dekti bahar kam e jati bht masom aur duniya se door rehti hai  
 
 
Husband: padma naam se nai bulati sirf sunein G ya bs G kehti hain 
Businessnam hain aur har waqt kaam mein busy rehte hain family ko bht support krte har khuwaish puri krte hain 
Un k ghar mein sari sahotalein hain lekin q k log 2 hain aur pati bahar e rehte hain tho nokar chakar ki itni zarurat nai rehti 
Subah kaam wali a k ghar ki safai wagera kr leti hai khana bana k chali jati hai 12 bje tak 
Ek nokar rkha hai garden k liye jo padma ko bht pasand hao apne garden ko hnesha saaf aur khubsurat dekna chahti hai q k use pool aur greenry bht pasand hai. 
 
 
2nd main character:  
Gardner: (nokar) = Aslam 
Age: 54 
Body structure: strong build, jism kala safai ka itna khayal nai rlhta 
2 shadiya kr chuka hai, 6 bache hain lekin sb gaon mein hain, garden mein kaam krne aur rehne k liye sahib ne ek quarter dia hai jahan wo rehta hai S k elawa ghar k kaam wagera jb zarurat o krta rehta hai aur nalkin k b saath hansi mazak chalta rehta hai 
 
 
Watchman: ek watchman hai jo ghar k ander nai ata use permission nai hai bs bahar e rehta hai aur shaift change one k badh chala jata hai aur dusra ajata hai same routine chalta rehta hai 
 
 
 
Suabh k 6 bj rhe the Padma washroom naha k niqlti hai us k jism p pani ki boondein use bht khubsurat jalka rhi thi, wo room mein a k apne jism se pani ponchti hai, aur make up wagera krne k badh ek khubrsurat red color ki dress pehnti hai,  
pr apne husband ko utati hai aaj unein jadi jana tha 2 din ki meeting thi aur 9 am ki flight pakadni thi, padma un k liye quickly chae aur bfeakast tayar krti hai jesse wo kr k chala jata hai ghar se. 
un k jane k badh padma ek book uta k padne lagti hai use books ka bht shok tha koshish oti us ki k jb b time mile koi na koi book padh le. 
pr 9 bje k badh roz ka routine start ota hai kaamwali a k ghar i safai krti aur khana bana k chali jati, us k badh wo bahar ati aur apne garden i seer krti pr khana kah k dopher k nap lene badh uthi. sham k waqt wo bahar beth jati aur kuch e dair badh Aslam b waein ajata hai aur donun baatein krne lgte hain. 
Aslam koi 5 saal se yahan kaam r rha hai aur hmesha se us ki nazar padma k jism p rhi hai, wo padma se baatein krte waqt us ko chune ki bht koshish krta aur bht bar makiyab b rha hai, tho bht dair baatein krne k badh padma chae wagera p k apne room mein chali jati hai aur aslam apne quarter mein. 
Quarter ponch k aslam padma k naam ki mout mar k sojata hai aur padma kitba padte padte sone ki koshish krti hai, padma k husband sex k mamle mien bht kamzor hain sirf bache paida kr skta hai baqi sexually koi proper atisfaction nai de skte, jb k padma sexually bht active rehne wali aurat hai lekin ab us ki sari exxpectations mar chuki hain aur wo sb kuch bs guzar rhi hai. 
 
 
yahan se start oti hai hmri story,  
 
 
 
 
	 
	
	
	
	
 
	  
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		Please apply slow and steady seduction. Don't hurry up for early sex.
	 
	
	
	
	
 
 
	
	
	
		
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		Fantastic starting! Very nice theme.   
	 
	
	
	
	
 
	  
	
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		Great start! Very nice writing! Keep going brother. clp);
	 
	
	
	
	
 
 
	
	
	
		
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		chamatkar shuruaat,bahut bahut shandar likha!
	 
	
	
	
	
 
	  
	
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		 (02-03-2023, 07:53 PM)Bimal Wrote:  Please apply slow and steady seduction. Don't hurry up for early sex. 
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		ekdom fataka shuruaat, bahut hi shandaar kahaani shuro kia aapne yaar.
	 
	
	
	
	
 
	  
	
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		Subah aslam ki aank khuli aur wo uth k ghar ki taraf jata hai aur peeche ki taraf se washroom k pass a k intezar krne lgta hai bht daur guzrne k badh darwaza band one ki awaz ati hai hai aur wo aista se bathroom ki kidki se jankne lgta hai wahan padma k khubsurat jusm us k boobs aur gand ko dekte uwe apni shalwar neeche krta hai aur aone mote lund ko bahar niqal k ragadne lgta hau 10 inch ka mota kala lund jhesse ragdte uwe dil e dil mein padma ko soch rha ota hai alsam 
Aslam: uff kia jism hai ek bar mere neeche a ja tm ko ghukam na bna dia s lund ka pr kehna, 5 saal se s haseena ko chodne k liye taras rha un uff padna meri jan 
 
 
Yea sb aista se kehte uwe wo bs lund ko ragadta ja rha tha aur padma k jism ko kah jane wali nazar se dek rha tha thodi daur badh us ka pani niqal kaga aur wo wahans e chala gaya, padma b naha k bahar niqalne e lagi thi k us ki washroom ki upar wali kidki p nazar dali aur bahar chali gai  
Bahar a k us ne kapde change kiye make up kia, aur neeche chali gai nashta krne. 
neeche a k maid se nashte ka kaha pr maid b padma k saath beth gai 
Maid: madam G aap ko pata hai saath wale ghar mein kia uwa hai  
Padma: Kia uwa hai  
Maid: madam saath wali malkin apnenokar k saath bhag gai 
Padma: Kia khesse yea wo bht achi thiapne pati aur bachun se bht pyar krti thi essa khesse oskta hai  
Maid: Madam G essa e uwa hai sunne mein aya hai un ka bht saalun se chakar tha, un ka pati use ache se khushi nai de paya tha aur us ne noukar k saath kai saal tak sambhand banae raka aur ghar mein ksi ko pata b nai chala, pata tho tb chala jb us ne khud sb ko bataya aur bhag gai us k saath 
Padma: Khessa zamana agaya hai essi b kia khushi jo ghar bhar sb chor k wo naukar k saath bhag gai  
Maid; madam g maza tho isi ka hai jb tak is li lath nai lagi hai sb teek hai lekin jhesse lag gai aurat k liye rukna bht mushkil hai asal mard e wo aag bhadka skti hai aurat mein, baqi mard sirf bache e paida kr skte hain lekin maza tho har ksi k bhas ki baat nai  
Padma kuch sochte uwe 
maid: Madam G mein khana banane ja rhi un aaj tho aap k kaam k badh mein thodi door jana padega is liye jaldi kaam khatam kr k jana oga mujhe 
 
 
Padma: teek hai apna kaam kro 
us k badh padma apne kamre mein jati hai aaj wo garden nai jati aur kamre mein ja k bed p bethte uwe sochne lagti hai k pados ki aurat ne essa q kia 
Dusri taraf Aslam padma ka wait krta rha bht intezar k badh use laga aajshayad wo na ae aur us husn ki pari ka deedar na o  
wo b apne kaamun mein lag gaya 
doper k khane aur neend k badh padma roz ki tara bahar ai Aslam b thodi dair badh a k samne beth gaya  
Aslam: madam g aaj subah aap nai ai  
Padma: han aaj kuch ajeeb baat sunne mein ai pareshan ogai thi 
Aslam: kon si khabar madam G 
Padma: wo pados wali ki sunne mein bht buri baat ai hai 
Aslam: G madam G wo tho hmein pehle se e pata tha pechle 5 saalun se chal rha tha, mujhe us k naukar ne bataya tha 
padma: 5 saal se  
Aslam: han madam G wo chota beta b usi naukar se e hai 
Padma: s had tak ja chuki thi wo kia 
Aslam: (sochte uwe 5 saal mein pehli baar essa mouqa mila hai) Han madam G wo naukar k saathbht maze krti thi sahab G tho kuch sai se kr nai skte the tho us ne naukar se e maze lene shuru kiye wese b ghar mein aur koi essa tha nai k un ki baat niqal skta sb khushi khushi chalta rha 
Padma ne s baat ka koi jawab nai dia aur baat badal dhi 
per idar udar ki baatein krne k badh roz k routine ki taraf padma room mein chali gai 
aaj room mein a k us k zehn me in bht waqtun badh sexual fantasies chal rhi thi k padosi k saath us k naukar ne kia kia kiya oga aur khesse maze liye onge padosi ne bht dair ochne k badh us ki aankh lag gai aur wo sogai 
Dusri taraf aslam room mein ja k sochne laga k bht waqt ogaya hai ab ksi tarah haath aghe badaya jae wese b kal dusra din hai sham tak sahib b ane wale hain 
	 
	
	
	
	
 
	  
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		bahut bahut shandar kahaani, dheere dheere seduce kariye yaar.
	 
	
	
	
	
 
	  
	
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		02-03-2023, 09:52 PM 
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		WOW!Awesome and amazing start! Just excellent writings!   
	 
	
	
	
	
 
 
	
	
	
		
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		jabardast story! behad hi shandar tharika se shuro kya is kahaani ko yaar,bahut acha!   
	 
	
	
	
	
 
 
	
	
	
		
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		 (02-03-2023, 09:49 PM)Rijwana Ansaari Wrote:  bahut bahut shandar kahaani, dheere dheere seduce kariye yaar. 
Thank you for your support, Abi tak tho start e nai uwi hai story plot e ban rha hai abi tak  
also this story is not going to be too big q k mein nai chahta ise baqi kuch stories ki tara beech mein chor dia jae tho uthni e ogi jitne mein ek achi story ban sake ziyada drag b na aur koshish krunga first attempt hai essa kuch o jhesse dhek k next ki b tayari osake :)
	  
	
	
	
	
 
	  
	
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