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(30-04-2023, 08:50 PM)Rituparna. Wrote: Behad hi shandar or Hotttt update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.
(30-04-2023, 09:01 PM)The wicked Wrote: Kya khoob update diya h aapne.
Mzaaaa aa gaya bhai waah.
(30-04-2023, 09:06 PM)shalini Wrote: Awesome Update diya bhai aapne wahhhh...... And keep Going on continue mast likh rahe ho.
(30-04-2023, 09:28 PM)Sabrina. Wrote: Kya ek gajab update, lajawab story likhte hai aapne, ekdum fatafati kahaani
(01-05-2023, 08:15 AM)Love Bite Wrote: waiting
(01-05-2023, 08:40 AM)Kumari Chut Wrote: lajawab aur awesome update
(01-05-2023, 02:16 PM)Nobita Wrote: Get well soon buddy
(01-05-2023, 03:42 PM)Vik88 Wrote: It's OK. Take care of yourself
(01-05-2023, 04:14 PM)Explorer@life Wrote: Take care..Dear..
Health is wealth..
We Can wait for better cause..
Get well soon...
(01-05-2023, 05:05 PM)abcturbine Wrote: Take care....
Get well soon....
We are extremely missing your writings....
(01-05-2023, 05:51 PM)Esha. Wrote: Ekdum gajab update, bahut khoob, superb ?
(01-05-2023, 06:47 PM)Ekra. Wrote: Ekdum gajab aur lajawab story
(01-05-2023, 07:09 PM)Lamia Wrote: Ekdum super hot, erotic, bahut hi shandar aur mast story
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Thank you so much everyone, unfortunately i'm still having fever right now but i've tried my best to write an update. Maybe thoda chota hai but i'll make upto it soon.
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Part 22 posted.
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Hi guys, i know its been 3 days since i last posted & we've reached 500K views along so wait a day more i'll post a big update for reaching the milestone as well as for delayed update.
One more thing guys, i feel like i need a break because i haven't been able to concentrate on story writing lately for various personal reasons.
Lekin fikar karne ki zarurat nahi hai ye break long nahi hoga maximum ek hafta. Uske baad main fresh mind ke sath story likh sakta hun i feel. Main hope karta hun readers is chiz ko understand karenge.
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(07-05-2023, 03:04 PM)UntamedAfrah Wrote: Kyu ke aap hamesha realistic feel laate ho toh abhi yeh store room wale me kuch iss tarah kardein ki boobs dabate dabate voh muskan ko neechay se nanga karde ooper se nahi muskan k hath apne boobs ko bachane me lage rehna neechay dhan hi nai jana aur utne me panty utar jana Muskan ki. Aur jo voh Raghu gai vo bhi apna hathiyar nikal lee aur muskan ki sharamgaah per laga ke ragadhdee aur lambaan feel karaye muskaan ko apne auzaar ki. Kya sahab ka itna andar jasakta hai ? Kya sahab is tarah ragad sakte hai soncho memsab ? Lekin Muskan kisi tarah Qabu karke apne aap par vaha se raghu ko dhakel kar nikal jaye. Aur Raghu ko kaam se hi nikal dein.
Yeh meh is liye kehrahi hu kyu ki jis tarah ka apne muskan ka character banaya hai Muskan ka us oer sirf yahi suit karsakta abhii k liye ki voh itna asaani se naa behke just boobs masle jane se aur ass masle jaane se is tarah ka shareef aur paakdaman muskan nahi beheksakti itne pe bas EK HI CHEEZ KAAM KARSAKTI HAI YAHA VOH HAI RAGHU KA HATHIYAR toh vo uska MUSKAN ko uski sharam gaah pe feel karake ke sawal kare lamban motapa aur gehrahi me jake sukh dene ka mehsoos karwaye lekin PAAK DAMAN muskan aone apko bacha kar nikal jaye vaha se aur bas sonchi rahe RAGHU K HATHIYAR K BARE ME USKE FEEL AUR GEHRAYI ME JAA KE KASSS K CHO**NE ke baare me aur paani bahati reh naa chahte hue bhi.
Kaam se nikalwane ke bad Azam ko asli reason na batate hue vo bas RAGHU JAISA MOTAPA LAMBAAN HATHIYAR KA azam se expect karke sex karti jasye aur usko EHSAAS HOJAYE KI AZAM DWARA VO kabhi prapt naa hosake.
TOH EK ROZ JAB AZAM CHUP K AONI HAYADAR BEGUM KO APNI CHO** RAGADHTE HUEE DHEKLEIN AUR BADH BADHATE HUE SUNLEIN .. AAAH RAGHUUUU KYUU TUME TUMHARA VOHH MERE USS PAR LAGAYA EESHH KITNA LAMBAA THAA KITA MOTA THAA SACH BAAT TOH YEH HAI JAB TUM RAGAD RAHE THE TAB HII MERA PANI NIKAL CHUKA THA OPPER SE HI RAGADHNE SE AAAAHHH AZAM MUJHE KABHI KHUSH NAHI KAR OAYEGAA RAGHU VAPAS AJAO AAAHHH.
Aur Phir AZam ko aoni masoom khoobsurat MUSKAN KA YUUU MACHALNA KAHI NA KAHI SHARMINDA BHI KARTA HO KI USME KAMII HAI AUR VEJEH RAGHU K NIKALWANE KI YEH THI TOH KAAFI SONCH VICHAR K BAD VO APNI KHOOBSURAT BEGUM MUSKAN KO VOH MAZA DILWANE RAGHU KO VAPAS LATA HAI aur chupke se dono ka milan dhekta KIS TARAH USKI PAAKDAMAN BIWI KO RAGHU AB AZAM K GREEN SIGNAL K BAAD BESHARMI SE GHAR ME NANGA GHOOM GHOOM KE BINA DARE SEDUCE KAREGA AUR USKO NANGA PAAKAR MUSKAN HI APNI AAG ME KADAM BEHKAYEGI SHARMATE SHARMATE DHEEREY DHEEREY.
AAP MAHIR KHILADI HAI EVIL JIMERI BAAT AAP SAMAJH GAYE HONGE SHUKRIYA.
Thanks, itne detailed feedback ke liye. I'm glad tum meri story xossip ke waqt se padh rahi ho. Main readers ke suggestions ko seriously consider karta hun agar o mere plot se match kar jata hai.
Issue yahan yahi ke mera plot bana huwa aur main uske basis par hi story aage badhata hun lekin zarurat padti hai to thoda boht usme changes kiya jaskte hain. Tum sahi ho muskan ko easily raghu ke hath na aneke bare men.
Story padhte rehna tum disappoint nahi hogi, just trust the process.
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(02-05-2023, 01:45 PM)abcturbine Wrote: Thanks a lot for posting.....
We all readers will be grateful to you for your efforts inspire of your health issues...
You are truly a GEM.....
(02-05-2023, 03:36 PM)Monster Dick Wrote: Gajab ka update. Maza aaya...
(02-05-2023, 03:57 PM)Kumari Chut Wrote: lajawab update,every update is kamaal
(02-05-2023, 03:59 PM)Rizzi1198 Wrote: Tooo hot update bhai ? thanks waiting more...
(02-05-2023, 04:01 PM)Afruza Sumi Wrote: kamaal hi ek kamaal,bahut bahut sexy update
(02-05-2023, 04:47 PM)Sam840 Wrote: Hot update boss
(02-05-2023, 04:51 PM)Aliza Khanum Wrote: best of bests writings
(02-05-2023, 04:57 PM)Amphora Wrote: such mein garam kamuk update
(02-05-2023, 05:02 PM)Archana Gupta Wrote: jabardast,lajawab,aur sexy update
(02-05-2023, 05:05 PM)Anju Ghosh Wrote: kya ek garam kahaani hai ye.bahot bahot excellent story
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(02-05-2023, 05:08 PM)Aurora Wrote: awesome update!
amazing story! bahot bahot majhedar likha
(02-05-2023, 05:13 PM)Debashree Roy Wrote: vah!vah! terrific update!
(02-05-2023, 05:17 PM)Fallon Wrote: Absolutely mind blowing update
(02-05-2023, 05:19 PM)Hot Aunty Wrote: Fantastic update
(02-05-2023, 05:21 PM)Mafiadon Wrote: What thrilling and sizzling update!
(02-05-2023, 05:26 PM)BIWI NO.1 Wrote: aur ek ashadaran update
(02-05-2023, 05:29 PM)Ella Wrote: thanks for itni lajawab update ki liye
(02-05-2023, 05:48 PM)Vik88 Wrote: Fantastic update! Wonderful build update
(02-05-2023, 06:24 PM)Wanton Wrote: Brilliant update!
Hats off.
bahut bahut mast writing
(02-05-2023, 08:44 PM)shalini Wrote: behad hi shandaar, lajawab aur amazing update hai
(02-05-2023, 08:58 PM)Poonam Kaur Wrote: this is a wonderfully narrated story. your narrative description is fantastic
(02-05-2023, 09:01 PM)couples. Wrote: Wow bro wow...... what a marvelous update
(02-05-2023, 09:01 PM)Silverstone93 Wrote: Very erotic update bhai.. Raghu aur Muskan ke beech jo kuch ho raha hai wo padh kar kaafi maja aa raha hai. Aap jis tarah se Erotic situation banate ho, wo lajwab hai.
(03-05-2023, 08:16 AM)Dipty Sharma Wrote: ekdom superb! lajawab aur man pasand update
(03-05-2023, 08:27 AM)Kajol Mommy Wrote: such mein chamatkar,lajawab aur jabardast update
(03-05-2023, 08:34 AM)Bebo. Wrote: kamaal hi yaar ekdom kamaal ka update
(03-05-2023, 08:39 AM)Horse Power Wrote: gajab update,garam update,kamaal update
(03-05-2023, 08:47 AM)Shilpa. Wrote: hardcore aur jabardast update
(03-05-2023, 08:51 AM)Barsha. Wrote: ekdom garama garam aur lajawab aur mast update
(03-05-2023, 09:00 AM)Aleena Afreen Wrote: bahot bahot garam aur majhedar update
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(03-05-2023, 09:07 AM)Rodela. Wrote: bahot bahot exciting,garam aur kamuk update
(03-05-2023, 09:29 AM)Gadrayi Maa Wrote: ekdom garam aur uttejit karnewala update
(03-05-2023, 01:28 PM)Ek Do Teen Motin Wrote: ekdom super sexy aur super erotic story
(03-05-2023, 01:56 PM)Chudashama Wrote: Fantastic update,bahot maja agaya
(03-05-2023, 02:05 PM)Sabitri Roy Wrote: awesome aur blockbuster update
(03-05-2023, 02:08 PM)Sanjana. Wrote: ekdom mind blowing update! bahut bahut seductive writings
(03-05-2023, 03:09 PM)Nobita Wrote: Bahut bhadiya
(03-05-2023, 04:25 PM)Faggot. Wrote: Simply the exciting story
(03-05-2023, 04:31 PM)Valderrama Wrote: ekdom outclass update! Very much hot going
(03-05-2023, 04:35 PM)Tamanna. Wrote: Thanks a lot! bahot bahot majhedar update hai ye
(03-05-2023, 04:43 PM)TedBundy Wrote: super hot update with super excellent pics
(03-05-2023, 04:57 PM)Hussy. Wrote: Beautiful! Zabardast aur mast update
(03-05-2023, 05:06 PM)Vidya Singha Mim Wrote: Yes! Bahot hi mast aur wonderful update
(03-05-2023, 05:24 PM)hotboy007 Wrote: Absolutely interesting update
(03-05-2023, 05:26 PM)Gundmarani Wrote: mast update! ekdom full masti aya padhke
(03-05-2023, 06:58 PM)Aleena Khan Wrote: superb,sexy,exciting updte
(03-05-2023, 07:28 PM)BlackHorse Wrote: Fantastic update
Kya ek hot situation ban rhi hai
ekdom Fabulous
(03-05-2023, 09:19 PM)Ramukakalegend Wrote: Superb stunning Update!!!!
(04-05-2023, 04:11 AM)Rumana Wrote: Ekdum chamatkar update, mast aur jabardast tharika se is kahaani chal rahi
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(04-05-2023, 07:45 AM)Rajun Wrote: Superb! Wonderful update! Absolutely mind blowing narrations! Outstanding and sensual seduction
(04-05-2023, 07:47 AM)imles4le Wrote: Thik hai.... Thik hai.... Pahle sehat ka Dhyan rakho....
Lekin jyada Lamba mat tadpao....
(04-05-2023, 07:56 AM)Ishita Wrote: Bahut badhiya update, ekdum fatafati writing, slow seduction is really extraordinary
(04-05-2023, 07:59 AM)Sabrina. Wrote: Ekdum garam update,
Bahut accha tharika se likha aapne bhai, bahut maza agaya padhke
(04-05-2023, 08:05 AM)Neha Singh Wrote: Ekdum lajawab aur mast update ♥️ eisa hot tharika se likhte raho yaar
(04-05-2023, 08:08 AM)Rohit Wrote: Top class update, Top quality writing and stunning narrations
(04-05-2023, 08:11 AM)Smalldick Wrote: Wonderful update! Absolutely mind blowing, extremely exciting and undoubtedly thrilling writing
(04-05-2023, 09:03 AM)Explorer@life Wrote: Super duper hit update bhai..
It's truly sensual..
Waiting to see undress muskan..whole body gradually and Sensualy...
Very Eagarly waiting for that..
Make it more long and sensual...
Hope you will get well soon..and we can get more long hot and sensual update..Soon
TAKE care dear..
Waiting eagarly...
Can't wait to see those two big globe played and sucked by old men....
Waiting..
(04-05-2023, 10:05 AM)Jerin Kabir Wrote: Terrific update, bahut khoob, lajawab story, ekdum mast aur jabardast writing
(04-05-2023, 10:57 AM)Bambi Wrote: Awesome update! bahut bahut garam aur sexy writings
(04-05-2023, 11:09 AM)Maria Mishi Wrote: lajawab update,
super hot,super sexy story,
extremely erotic writings
(04-05-2023, 11:16 AM)Ileana. Wrote: Marvelous update!
itni sexy story!
Hats off

(04-05-2023, 12:50 PM)Naorun Sifat Wrote: garam update
(04-05-2023, 01:34 PM)Sweetu gautam442 Wrote: Bhai Bhahot hi Gazab ja rahi he Story but photo ka aur accha selection karo specially muskan ek husn pari si lagni chahiye Pakistani gorgeous actress ke pic set karo aur bhi Maza aayega
(04-05-2023, 01:37 PM)Fahima Wrote: ekdom amazing aur erotic update
(04-05-2023, 01:45 PM)anushka Wrote: EAGERLY WAITING…. ???
(04-05-2023, 01:50 PM)BhaiyakaLadli Wrote: kya ek gajab kahaani hai ye!
just kamaal ka update!
(04-05-2023, 01:59 PM)Nasrinruma Wrote: lajawab update!
ekdom karak kahaaani
(04-05-2023, 03:44 PM)Alex67 Wrote: Update kab aayega dost
(04-05-2023, 04:50 PM)Kasif Wrote: What a great update!
Just awesome,amazing and absolutely wonderful writings!
Thanks!
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(04-05-2023, 05:12 PM)Karishma Wrote: wow! bahut hi exciting aur erotic update
(04-05-2023, 05:34 PM)Mohini. Wrote: bahut bahut garam!
bahut bahut kamuk!
bahut bahut mujhedar!
bahut bahut sexy kahaani!
Ekdom kamaal ka writings skills!
Hats off dear!

(04-05-2023, 06:21 PM)Intruder Wrote: Super exciting writings
(04-05-2023, 07:49 PM)Anjali Sharma Wrote: Very very interesting and sensual update
Loved very much
(04-05-2023, 10:34 PM)Disha. Wrote: bahut hi majaedaar, chatpata update hai bhai . bahut hi maja aya, bahut erotica hai re....
(05-05-2023, 07:53 AM)Mafiadon Wrote: The story is going to achieve another milestone of 500k that means .5 million views. So it's expected that we are going to get another mega update.
(05-05-2023, 07:55 AM)SweetSonali Wrote: Faddu aur mast kahaani
(05-05-2023, 08:10 AM)Introvert Wrote: Fantastic update! Absolutely wonderful and stunning writing! Super excellent development! Please add more erotic and naughty conversations.
(05-05-2023, 11:21 AM)Bimal Wrote: Awesome update
(05-05-2023, 11:54 AM)Fatimakhan Wrote: ![[Image: IMG-20230505-113547.jpg]](https://i.ibb.co/SyQwdy9/IMG-20230505-113547.jpg)
Mai aapki kahani pad rhi hu bahut dino se par aap muskan ko chudwa kab rhe ho jisase wo raghu ka sath 4-5 baad chudne baad natak karna band kar de aur fir apne sauahr azam ko dhoka roj de dekar apne ashiq raghu se chude rooj ....waise meri friend ameera karti hai apne best friend rohit se chudti hai nigah ke baad apne sauahr ko dhokha. Dekar ..
(05-05-2023, 02:17 PM)Joyeeta Das Wrote: jabardast,lajawab,mast aur bahut bahut hardcore update
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(05-05-2023, 02:24 PM)Black Mamba Wrote: Tooooo hooooooot.......update
(05-05-2023, 04:08 PM)Premi07 Wrote: Mind blowing writing skills
(05-05-2023, 04:17 PM)Black Mamba Wrote: Congrats for 500k views
(05-05-2023, 04:22 PM)Nazmun Nahar Nishi Wrote: 500k views!!!!!! so big update is coming!!!!!!!!
(05-05-2023, 04:55 PM)Progga Sarkar Wrote: wah! garam,kamuk,sexy aur bahut bahut majhedar update
(05-05-2023, 04:59 PM)Samia Jaman Wrote: ekdom rocking,blockbuster aur bahot bahot erotic update
bahot hi sexy writings
(05-05-2023, 05:42 PM)Priyanka Nair Wrote: 500kviews celebrate ki liye ek mega update dal do yaar,
(05-05-2023, 05:50 PM)Sweetu gautam442 Wrote: Bhai Bahot so Sahi jaa rahe ho but Raghu ke saath saath kisi aur ko bhi pagal karo Muskan j ke jesi husn pari ke pi6e aur jaldi se koi bada gazab ka update to
(05-05-2023, 05:56 PM)Nova Dewan Wrote: bahut badhiya ek garam aur kamuk kahaani,behad hi exciting aur erotic writings!ekdom kamaal kar dhiya aapne Boss.
(05-05-2023, 07:15 PM)Black Panther. Wrote: ab aayenga majga
jabrdast turning moment
dekte hai aage kya hota hai
nice bro
(05-05-2023, 07:56 PM)Usha Devi Wrote: bahit hi mast aur majedaar update hai bhai.
(05-05-2023, 08:40 PM)Mafiadon Wrote:
For 500k views
(05-05-2023, 09:06 PM)BIGBOSS1 Wrote: Waiting for ur update till last update.
(05-05-2023, 09:06 PM)anushka Wrote: HOPE EVERYTHING IS FINE EVIL…
NO UPDATES OR NO MESSAGE FROM YOUR END….
(05-05-2023, 11:46 PM)Teebone1985 Wrote: Aree dada kya jabardast build up hai ... jaree rakheye issi build up ko sex jitna late ho utna late layege please... maja aa jata hai aapki stories padh ke
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(06-05-2023, 08:14 AM)Vamp Wrote: Congratulations for over 500k views. Mega update ki liye intizar yaar
(06-05-2023, 10:53 AM)Kartik69 Wrote: Ekdum classic and stunning update ❤️
(06-05-2023, 12:13 PM)Nova Dewan Wrote: It is ok Boss. Take rest for a week after giving us a big update.
(06-05-2023, 12:29 PM)Heenaparveen Wrote: It is okay. Take rest for one week so that we can get high quality writing from you. 
(06-05-2023, 05:33 PM)Ghosthunter Wrote: Absolutely great going and superb build up. Please keep seducing like this slow and steady way.
(06-05-2023, 06:44 PM)Porshi Wrote: Pakeeza chuts aur uncut black monster dick! Oh! Bahut h garam aur behad hi kamuk theme.
(06-05-2023, 06:59 PM)Runa khan Wrote: Bahut badhiya ek kamuk, behad h garam aur absolutely wonderful story ❤️
(06-05-2023, 08:41 PM)Felix Wrote: Super excellent and awesome update
(06-05-2023, 11:45 PM)SlayeRaju Wrote: Intizar rehega evil bhai
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Thanks guys, since we've reached 500k views here's a big update. It was way quicker than i expected.
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1. Koel, ek masoom housewife
2. Bade ghar ki bahu betiyan
3. Game of lust
4. Kahani ek bade ghar ki
5. Muskan
6. Tale of a lustful revenge
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So guys part 23 is posted & as i said yesterday i'll be taking a week long break to freshen up myself, in the meantime you guys do share your thoughts/suggestions on how this story can be improved further. I'll definitely consider good ones.
Thank you so much guys, see y'all after a week.
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1. Koel, ek masoom housewife
2. Bade ghar ki bahu betiyan
3. Game of lust
4. Kahani ek bade ghar ki
5. Muskan
6. Tale of a lustful revenge
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Dosto part 23 post kar diya hai aur jaise maine kal bataya tha main ek hafte ka break le raha hun aur jabtak main break par hu aap log apne sujhav mere sath share kar sakte hain ke kaise story better hosakti hai.
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2. Bade ghar ki bahu betiyan
3. Game of lust
4. Kahani ek bade ghar ki
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(07-05-2023, 05:53 PM)Regina Wrote: superb! Just ashadaran likha,ekdom mind blowing update! Hats off Boss.
(07-05-2023, 06:34 PM)Nafisa. Wrote: ekdom gajab,garam kahaani,
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(07-05-2023, 06:48 PM)Afruza Sumi Wrote: ops! kya likha aapne yaar, just gajab aur garam update
(07-05-2023, 07:00 PM)Fariha. Wrote: ekdom lajawab aur mast update
(07-05-2023, 07:13 PM)Mafiadon Wrote: Fantastic fabulous mind blowing hot update,just superb,exciting,sexy writings
(07-05-2023, 07:24 PM)Anjali Sharma Wrote: Jabardast bidu. Bahut hi hot exciting aur sex se bharpur update diye ho

(07-05-2023, 07:33 PM)BlackHorse Wrote: Bole to ekdum jhakaaas, faaaddduuuu update. LUNDTOD UPDATE
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(07-05-2023, 07:40 PM)Divya Shetty Wrote: ekdom kamaal ki update hein.
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(07-05-2023, 07:50 PM)Raisa Wrote: shuru se end tak pura ki pura excitement hi hot hai, bahut sexy update hai bhai
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(07-05-2023, 08:14 PM)Rizzi1198 Wrote: Great hot fantastic erotic too good maza a gya
(07-05-2023, 08:44 PM)Silverstone93 Wrote: Bahut hi jabardast update EVIL Bhai.. Raghu ne Muskan jaisi shadishuda aurat ko achhe se blackmail karke uske jism ke sath maja liya hai. Aapke 1 week break ke baad aane wale updates ko padhne ka intezar rahega..
(07-05-2023, 08:52 PM)Nourin Tumpa Wrote: jabardast update!
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(07-05-2023, 09:05 PM)Nusratfaria Wrote: wow!!! kya kahaani hi ye!
bahut bahut mast,lajawab aur zabardast writings!
(08-05-2023, 02:29 AM)Tanvi kumar Wrote: Garam killer update
Thanks!
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1. Koel, ek masoom housewife
2. Bade ghar ki bahu betiyan
3. Game of lust
4. Kahani ek bade ghar ki
5. Muskan
6. Tale of a lustful revenge
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(08-05-2023, 04:31 AM)The Pervert Wrote: Absolutely wonderful, extremely exciting,unbelievable hot writing
(08-05-2023, 04:35 AM)Pinkboy Wrote: Super erotic, sexy, naughty and of course stunning update
(08-05-2023, 10:08 AM)Wanton Wrote: Ekdum lajawab aur blockbuster update dala aapne yaar, bahut maza aayega padhke
(08-05-2023, 10:40 AM)Vik88 Wrote: Fantastic update, mind blowing writing, extremely exciting and hot descriptions
(08-05-2023, 10:53 AM)Aliza Khanum Wrote: ekdom kamaal ka update,dil kush hogaya padhke
(08-05-2023, 10:59 AM)Aleena Afreen Wrote: too much hot,erotic and sexy update
(08-05-2023, 11:28 AM)Kupa Shamshu Wrote: chamatkar update! bahot badhiya update! bahot bahot exciting writings
(08-05-2023, 11:35 AM)Blueman Wrote: Absolutely super sensational update! Your sexy and erotic writing skill is just awesome and amazing.
(08-05-2023, 11:42 AM)Shabnur Wrote: superb story! bahut bahut kamuk writings
(08-05-2023, 12:22 PM)Bimal Wrote: classic and outstanding update
(08-05-2023, 12:44 PM)Faggot. Wrote: ekdom hila diya aapne yaar,bahut hi mast aur zabardast update hai ye
(08-05-2023, 05:29 PM)shalini Wrote: lajawab update,ekdom garam,exciting story
(08-05-2023, 05:43 PM)The Sandman Wrote: Absolutely top class writings from a classic writer.Hats off.
(08-05-2023, 05:51 PM)Amphora Wrote: mast aur kamaal ka update
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(08-05-2023, 05:58 PM)NegroDick Wrote: super hot,super sensational and super exciting update!
(08-05-2023, 06:03 PM)Alfamale Wrote: The story is becoming hot,hotter and the hottest after every update.
(08-05-2023, 06:19 PM)Anju Ghosh Wrote: vah!just wow! mast update
(08-05-2023, 07:21 PM)Mpufo Wrote: ekdom lajawab,ekdom gajab,ekdom garam update
(08-05-2023, 07:43 PM)Archana Gupta Wrote: super hot aur mast update
(08-05-2023, 08:51 PM)Sameena. Wrote: bahut badhiya garam aur kamuk kahaaani
Thanks!
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1. Koel, ek masoom housewife
2. Bade ghar ki bahu betiyan
3. Game of lust
4. Kahani ek bade ghar ki
5. Muskan
6. Tale of a lustful revenge
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(08-05-2023, 09:37 PM)Slyboy Wrote: Another great update ? ?
(08-05-2023, 09:38 PM)Invisible Wrote: Awesome and outclass update ❤️
(09-05-2023, 08:53 AM)Smalldick Wrote: Absolutely wonderful and stunning update, extremely exciting update
(09-05-2023, 01:53 PM)Nandini Sharma Wrote: ekdom kamaal aur kamuk update,bahut khoob,bahut acha
(09-05-2023, 02:00 PM)Popy. Wrote: lajawab update! behad hi shandaar story
(09-05-2023, 02:31 PM)Bebo. Wrote: zabardast,mast aur superb update
(09-05-2023, 02:40 PM)Mousumi Wrote: bahut bahut garam aur exciting kahaani
(09-05-2023, 04:48 PM)Roxy Wrote: 100% super erotic story
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(09-05-2023, 05:31 PM)Adonis Wrote: Outstanding and classic story! Absolutely wonderful writings
(09-05-2023, 05:54 PM)MONTY Wrote: Awesome,amazing,stunning and thrilling story
(09-05-2023, 06:45 PM)LENNY Wrote: Absolutely thrilling and sizzling story!Superb and marvelous writings!
(09-05-2023, 07:19 PM)Urmila. Wrote: bahot bahot mast aur damaka update
(09-05-2023, 08:34 PM)Rodela. Wrote: ekdom hardcore adultery! bahut bahut maza agaya
Thanks!
My work
1. Koel, ek masoom housewife
2. Bade ghar ki bahu betiyan
3. Game of lust
4. Kahani ek bade ghar ki
5. Muskan
6. Tale of a lustful revenge