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Hello dosto, apke saamne ek kahani leke aya hoon. Umeed hai aap ko pasand ayegi. Like aur comment zaroor kre. iss kahani ko main beech mein nhi choduga. bss aap logo ko pasand aani chahiye. Please comments zarror kre.
Ye kahani hai Chandigarh ki rehne wali Jasleen ki. Umar 24 saal, Kad 5'5'. Jasleen ek upper class family se izzatdar pariwar se thi. Uske father bank manager the aur maa housewife. Jasleen bla ki khubsurat larki thi, rang gora, laal laal honth, kaamseen kaya, uske boobs na hi bohot bade aur na chote the, par tana huya seena tha. spat pet.. kehna ka matlab ke perfect figure tha uska. Use hamesha se hi exercise ka shauk rha. jise uska badan sudol tha. bhagwaan ne usse soorat aur seerat dono diye the, wo jitni sundar thi utni hi sanskaari bhi. Jasleen ko jeans t-shirts yan suite pehnna hi pasand tha, par wo hamesha apni maryada mein rehti thi. Jasleen ki saadgi ke sabhi dewaane the. Lekin usse kutton se darr lgta tha.
Jasleen:
Jasleen ki 2 mahine pehle hi shaadi huyi thi, Uske pati ka naam Parmveer (parm) tha. Dono ki love marriage huyi thi, dono lagbhag 4 saal se relation mein the. Dono ek dusre se behad pyaar krte hain, jaise 2 jism 1 jaan. Jasleen ka pehla pyaar aur boyfriend Parm hi tha. Usne kisi aur ke bare mein kabhi socha bhi na tha. Parm bhi ek acche gharne se tha, Parm ki height 6'2', mascular, Roabdaar, aur dikhne mein bohot handsome tha. na jaane uspe kitni larkiya marti thi. Wo kisi male model se kamm nhi tha. Pr uska dil Jasleen ke paas tha. Parm kuch hi mahine pehle Civil engg. bna tha.
Parm:
Jasleen ko uske sasural mein bohot hi zada payaar aur izzat mili thi. Jasleen ki kismat bohot hi achi thi, usse behad pyaar krne wala pati aur sasural mila tha. Iss shaadi se dono pariwaar bohot khush the. Dono ki sex life bhi bohot achi thi, Parm Jasleen ko puri tarah nichod deta tha, usse puri tarah se santusht kr deta tha, uska mota aur lamba lund Jasleen ko wo khushi deta tha jo har aurat chahti hai.
Shaadi ke baad Parm ko State Highway department se ek bada project mila tha. Lekin usse laghab 2 saal ke liye UP ke Hardoi shehar mein shift hona tha. Project bda tha to usne iss mauke ko na jane dena hi behatr samjha. Jasleen bhi ready thi uske saath jaane ko.
Shaadi ke 5 mahine baad hi dono Hardoi ke Asha nagar mein shift ho gye, unke rehne ka sara intezaam state department ka tha. unhe ghar bohot acha mila tha. Unhe naukar bhi mila tha, par Jasleen nhi chahti thi ke koi aur adami ghar mein aye, wo chahti thi ke agar koi larki ho to thik hai. to unhe bataya gya ke 1 week baad ek lady aa jay karegi ghar ke kaam ke liye. Jasleen ne Parm ka pura saath diya. Jasleen ghar mein hi rehti thi. use ghar se bahar ana-jana pasand nhi tha. pehle kuch din unhe mushqil huyi lekin dhire dhire sab thik ho gya. Subah 8:30 Parm office chla jata, din mein Jasleen akeli hi rehti thi. Wo ghar ka kaam krti, books read krti ya apni kisi seheli se phone par baatein krti. shaam ko Parm ke saath kahin bahar ghumne jaati. Vaise to unke paas ek car thi par Parm ne Jasleen ko ek scooty de di thi. Waise to ghar ka rashan Parm hi lata tha, par kabhi kabhi agr koi zroort ho to Jasleen ghar se thoda door market se kuch samaan le aati thi.
Jasleen bla ki sundar larki, shayed Hardoi jile ki sabse khubsoorat larki... to larko ki nazar to uspe jaani hi thi. jab bhi wo Parm ke saath bahar jaati to bhudhe ho ya jwaan sab usse dekh kar aahein bharte. Jasleen ko pta tha ke kaise usse larke ghoor ghoor ke dekhtein hain, lekin wo hamesha ignore hi krti thi. Ye uske liye koi nyi baat nhi thi.
Ussi area mein ek 23-24 saal ka larka tha Ramesh, lower middle class se tha, uske pariwar mein uskei maa aur ek choti behan, unki ek choti c Kirane Ki Dukaan thi. Ramesh thoda bigda huya tha, gali-muhalle ke badmaash type larka...10th fail tha, doston ke saath idhar ghumana, larkiyan chedna, paan-bidi larai-jhagda... bss uske yehi shaunk the. dekhne mein koi mawali type lgta tha, sanwla rang, pele dant, kad 5'5". Lekin kamina ek number ka larkibaaaz tha.
Jabse Parm aur Jasleen yahan shift huye the Ramesh ki nazar tabhi se Jasleen par thi. Jabse usne jasleen ko dekha ta tbse uske dimag mein Jasleen ka chehra hi ghoom rha tha. itni kaamseen larki shayad usne kisi film mein dekhi ho. Usse Jasleen ki saadgi ne dewana bna diya tha.
Ramesh ne Jasleen ki ek jhalk paane ke liye uske ghar ke chakkr lgaane shuru kr diye. dhire dhire usne pata lga liya ke iska pati kab kaam pe jata hai aur kab vaps ata hai. Ramesh ko bhi pta tha ke Jasleen jaisi larki usse ghaas bhi nhi dale gi. jab bhi Jasleen ghar se bahar jaati to Ramesh mauka dekh kr usse dekh kr seeti bajakar chedta. Jasleen usse ignore hi kr deti thi. Jasleen ne bhi notice kiya ke ye sadk chaap larka roz usse ghoorta hai.
ek din Jasleen kuch samaan lene ke liye market gyi... Ramesh mauka dekhte hi uske peeche ho liya. jaise hi Jasleen ne uski taraf dekha, Ramesh ne muskura kar aankh maar di. Jasleen ne gusse se chehra dusri taraf ghuma liya.
Ramesh --haste huyee " aaye haye ..kahan jaa rhi ho ?? apna chehra to dikhao ek baar...suno to!!
Jasleen ko kuch samajh nhi aya. wo bina koi reaction kiye ja rhi thi. Lekin ander hi ander usse bohot gussa bhi aa rha tha ke ye sadak chaap usse ched rha hai. Jasleen samaan khreed kar ghar vaps aa gyi. wo gusse mein thi. wo Parm ko batana chahti thi uss larke ke baare mein, lekin fir usne soche ke anjaan shehar hai, Parm ne agar gusse mein kuch kr diya to baat age badh jayegi. to usne kuch na kehna hi behtar samjha.
Ramesh koi mauka nhi chodta tha, Jasleen ki jhalak paane ka. Ye ab uska roz ka kaam ho gya tha, Jasleen ke ghar ke aas paas ghumna, mauka mile to seeti baja ke chedna. Ab ye laghbagh roz ki baat ho gyi. Jab bhi mauka milta Wo aye din usse taakta rehta.
Issi beech, Unke ghar ek naukrani ne kaam krna shuru kr diya, unhe govt. ki aur se naukrani mili thi. Uska naam tha Meena. uski umar 20 ki hogi, dekhne mein thik thak thi. kaam acha krti thi aur immandar bhi thi, Meena ka pati kisi factory mein majdoori krta tha, Meena Jasleen se bohot ghul mil gyi thi. Meena chulbali si thi. Jasleen ko bhi uska saath acha lgta tha. Jasleen ne kabhi ye nhi socha ke Meena ek naukrani hai, wo usse choti behan ki tarah samjhti thi. Meena Jasleen ke har kaam mein saath thi.
Ek din Parm aur Jasleen market mein kuch khreed rhe the, tabhi Ramesh ki nazar un dono par padi. Ramesh aur uske dost un dono ke kuch door khade ho kar baaten krne lgge. Jaise hi Jasleen ne Ramesh ki aur dekha, Ramesh ne usse aankh mari. Jasleen ko yakeen nhi huya ke ye kamina uske pati ke samne usse ched rha hai. Jasleen ne apni nazar dusri aur kr li. Wo thoda darr si gyi thi. Ramesh whi khada rha, Fir anjaane mein jaise hi Jasleen ne Ramesh ki aur dekha, Ramesh ne fir usse ankh maar di. Parm is sab se anjaan tha. Varna Ramesh Parm ke ek thapd ki maar tha. Jasleen ne gusse se Ramesh ki aur dekha. Ramesh par jaise koi asar na tha.
Jasleen mann hi mann soch ri thi..."kamine ki itni himmat!!"
Ramesh apne doston se--" kyaa maal hai yaar, ek baar mil jaye bss!"
Ramesh ka dost Raju --" abbe chal, wo kaha aur tu apni aur dekh, saale ye pari tere jasie langoor ko dekhi gi bhi kyuu??.."
Ramesh-- "chup kar bhenchod, pyaar krta hai tere bhai isse."
Raju-- " zada hafa mein na udd, aja zameen pe, bta rha hoon.,, ye saali yahan ki nhi lagti, kahan se aye hain ye dono?"
Ramesh- " abbe chutiyee !! tameez se bol, suna nhi tera bhai pyaar krta hai isse, Bhauji hai teri, samjha?"
Raju - " abhe ye pehle se shadishuda hai. iske patti ko dekh.. saala ek mare ga marr jayega tu."
Ramesh - " to? patta ke rahunga isse. Aur saale tum log, tumhare dost ko koi kuch kahega to tum log saale dekhte rahoge?"
Raju --- " nhi tujhe pehle pitne denge saale fir ayenge hahaaaa" raju haste huyeee majak mein.
Ramesh -- " bhenchod chutiya dost mere"
Jasleen-- "Parm ! chaliye abb ghar chalte hain, mera mann nhi hai ghumne ka'
Parm -" aree kuch le to lo, agar kuch chahiye"
jasleen-- nhi nhi chaliye abb bss"
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Jasleen ka mood kharab tha. Usse us ladke par gussa aa rha tha. Lekin jaise hi Jasleen ne fir Ramesh ki aur dekkha, Ramesh ne fir aankh maari aur muskurane lgga. Iss bar Jasleen ne nazre nhi feri, wo gusse se Ramesh ko dekh rhi thi, Ramesh ne bhi ankhein nhi jhapki. Usne fir se Jasleen ko aankh maar di. Jasleen ko samjh nhi aa rha tha ke wo kya kre, apne pati ko btaye ya na. uske mann mein thoda darr bhi tha. Jasleen ko bohot bura lagg rha tha ke Ek loafer sadkchaap usse is tarah se ched rha hai.
Uss raat Jasleen reh reh kar uss din ka waqya yaad kr rhi thi. Wo hairaan thi ke uss sadk chaap ladke ki itni himmat ke wo uske pati ke saamne use aankh mare. Lekin yee to shuruyat thi.
Agle din Meena Jasleen ke ghar ayi. Jasleen thodi tension mein lagg rhi thi.
Meena--- " kya huya didi, aap pareshaan lgg rahi hai?"
Jasleen-- "nhi kuch nhi, bss aise hi."
Meena--- " Didi agar koi baat hai to batao"
Jasleen-- " yaar pichle kuch hafton se ek ladka pareshaan kar rha hai, agar maine Parm ko btaya to...unka gussa ka tumhe nhi pta, wo mujhe itna pyaar krte hain ke..darr hai ke wo jhagda na kr de, aur mujhe larrai se bohot darr lagta hai."
Meena---" kya? kon larka? apne pehle kyu nhi bataya?”
Jasleen--" tumhe to pta hi hai, larko ka, kaise dekhte rehte hain, to maine ignore hi kiya bss, par abb thoda zada ho rha hai."
Meena --- " Didi kon hai aisa jo apko pareshan kr rha hai?"
Jasleen-- " hai ek sadk chaap."
Meena-- "didi aap tension na lo, mujhe dikhana kon hai."
Fir ek din subah Jasleen aur Meena kuch samaan lene market gye. us din Ramesh akela hi tha. wo un dono ke piche ho liya. Jasleen aur meena ek shop ke bahar khadi thi, tabhi Ramesh Jasleen ke bohot paas aa gya, uske badan se paan-beedi ki badboo aa rhi thi. Paas aakr usne Jasleen ko kuch ishara kiya, jisse Jasleen ko gussa aa agya, usse abb raha nhi gya, Wo behadd gusse mein thi, Jasleen ne gusse mein akar Ramesh ko dantna shuru kar diya...
Jasleen - "sharm nhi aati tujhe... aise larkiyon ke chedte huyee??"
aise chilane se waha ke log bhi ekathe ho gye. Jasleen gusse mein bolte ja rhi thi. Meena ne bhi Jasleen ka saath diya. Logon ne Ramesh ko pakadd liya aur usko peetna shuru kar diya. Ramesh kuch nhi bola, wo chup chaap maar kha rha tha. Agar wo chahta to ek do ko to punch maar hi skta tha, par wo chup rha. Jasleen ko usko pitt ta dekh bohot rahat mili. lekin wo thoda dari huyi bhi thi. Jasleen jaldi se apne ghar waps aa gyi. Jasleen ne Meena ko kaha ke wo aaj jo huya kisi se na kahe. Jasleen ko lgga tha ke jo aaj huya iske baad wo larka ab usse tang nhi krega.
Kuch din tak Ramesh nhi dikha. Jasleen ko bhi rahat mili. Lekin ek din jab Jasleen aur Meena sadk par ja rhe the, unke haath mein bags the, achanak se do awara kutton ne hamla kr diya, dono chilane lggi, tabhi Ramesh ne unhe bachya. ek kute ne usse kaat liya, wo thoda jakhmi bhi ho gya. Uss din ki pitayi ke nishaan bhi uske chehre pe the aur aaj ye. Jasleen ko samjh nhi aa rha tha ke wo kya kre aur kya kahe. Wo bss apna chehra niche krke ghar ki aur chal di. Usi Larke ne aaj usse bachaya jisse usne pitwaya tha.
Jasleen ne aaj joo huya wo Parm ko bataya. Parm ne Jasleen ko apni bahon mein bhar liya. Jasleen darri huti thi, Parm ko pta tha ke Jasleen kutton se kitna drti hai. Agle din subah Parm ke jane ke baad Meena unke ghar ayi.
Meena: -- "aap thik ho didi? main to bohot darr gyi thi."
Jasleen: --" muncipalti ko kuch krna chahiye inn awara kutto ka."
Meena -- "Didi dekha us larke ne kaise humein bachaya? uss din ki pitai ke baad bhi usne hamari madad ki" " lgta hai wo sach mein aap par fida hai."
Jasleen --" kya bol rhi hai?" wo itne dino se tang kr rha tha, pta nhi ke main shadishuda hoon"
Meena-- "han didi, par agar us din wo na hota to? un kutto ne to hamein maar hi dalna tha "
Asl mein Meena ko Ramesh par bohot taras aa rha tha , ke kaise usne unki jaan bachai. uske dil me Ramesh ke liye hamdardi aa gyi thi."
Jasleen--" han, par.."
Meena--" ek baat poochu? agar aap shaadishuda na hoti to? aap us se baat krti? ya wo apki hasiyat ka nhi isliye?"
Jasleen -"uski shakal dekhi, tune? tum bhi kya bole ja rhi ho?'
Meena - "didi usne hamari jaan bachai, main to isiliye keh rhi thi."
Jasleen --" baat wo nhi, main kaise uske bare mein soch bhi sakti hoon.. noo"
Meena -" lekin dosti mein kya harz hai? kya dosti hasiyat dekh kr ki jaati hai, aur kya larka larki dost nhi ho sktee.."
jasleen kuch nhi boli. Meena ke dimaag mein kuch aur hi chal rha tha. wo dhire dhire Jasleen ki Ramesh se dosti karwana chahti thi.
Jasleen:- "tum nhi janti ho aise larrkon ko, agar thoda sa hass ke bula lo to gale padd jaate hain.'
Meena: -' gale to wo abhi bhi pda hai,"
Fir Meena usse apne dil ki baat bataane lggi.
Meena: "main apko ek baat batati hoon, mera pati bohot accha insaan hai aur mujhe bohot pyaar krta hai, par kaam ke liye usse delhi jaana pada, main yahan hoon. saas roj jhagharti hai. hum greeb hain pet ke liye bohot kuch krna padta hai. par mere bhi kuch armaan hain. main akeli kaise rehti hoon wo mujhe pta hai, lekin fir meri zindagi mein Rajesh aya, wo ek factory mein kaam krta hai. Pta nhi kaise, na chahte huye bhi pyaar ho gya. Rajesh mujhe bohot pyaar krta hai, jo sukh mujhe usne diya mujhe kabhi nhi mila.
Jasleen:- "tu apne pati ko dokha de rhi hai. ye galat hai."
Meena: "Didi, lekin dil ko kaise samjhaon, akelapan katne ko dodta hai." meena ki ankhon mein anson the.
Jasleen ne Meena ko gale se lgga liya. wo uske akelepan ko samjh sakti thi.
Jasleen:- " main tumhari feelings ko samjh sakti hoon meena. lekin meri aisi koi majboori nhi."
Meena; -- "han didi mujhe pta hai, main to bss apko bta rhi thi."
Meena ne mood ko halka krne ke liye thoda hassi mazak mein kaha....
Meena: "didi aap itni sundar ho, gar main larka hoti to pakka aap par line marti."
Jasleen: " chup kar besharm" hastee huye
Meena: ' kya aapki zindagi mein kabhi koi Param sahib ke siva koi aur nhi aya?? college- college mein bhi nhi.??"
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Jasleen:- "aaree larke to pichhe parre hi rehte hain, mujhe bhi kayion ne propose kiya, lekin mera dil bass Parm par hi tha, na kisi larke se dosti ki, aur na kisi ko paas bhatkne diya, na hi kisi ke bare mein socha. Tunhare sahab pyaar hi itna krte hain aur main bhi."
Meena: - "thik hai, aap bhi didi...kisi se thodi dosti krne mein koi harz nhi. aise hi time paas."
Jasleen:- " tera hain na time paas Rajesh, isiliye bol rhi hai."
kuch din baad... Jasleen aur Meena chat pe thi, tabhi sadk pe unhe Ramesh khada dikha.
Meena - "Didi lo aa gya apka ashiq"
Jasleen --" zada mat bol, ye fir aa gya, koi kaam-vaam nhi hai ise?"
Meena --" dewaana hai apka."
Jasleen waha se jaane lggi, lekin meena ne usse rok liya.
Meena -- "ruko didi, dekhne mein kya harz hai, itna bhi bedard na bno, agar wo apke husan ka deedar krna chahta hai to ismein kya buraari hai?aur isne hamein bachaya bhi tha"
Jasleen -- " Main shadidhuda hoon. is tarah se kisi gair mard ko kaise dekhne du?"
Meena -- " par aap kya kisi ko rok payengi aise, kya pehle rok payi? log to dekhege hi. Aap kisi ki ankho par patti to nhi baand skti."
Jasleen-- "wo jo bhi ho, par ye galat hai." lekin Meena ne Jasleen ko rok liya.
Kutte wali ghatna ke baad Jasleen ke mann mein Ramesh ke liye gussa nhi tha. Usse bura lag rha tha ke uski wajah se Ramesh ki pitai huyi yhi. Jasleen whi ruk gyi. usse bohot azeeb sa lgg rha ha, Jaise hi usne Ramesh ki aur dekha, Ramesh muskurane lgga.. aur ussne Jasleen ko dekh kar ankh maar di. Jasleen ko gussa nhi aya, par wo sharm se laal ho gyi, usse ye bohot galt bhi lgga. Wo foran waha se chli gyi. Ye Meena ne bhi usse ankh marte dekha. lekin Meena Ramesh ko dekh rhi thi, Meena ne Ramesh ki aur dekh kar smile ki, jisse Ramesh ko ek signal mil gya ke shayed uski baat ban skti hai.
Jasleen ander aa gyi. Wo ajeeb sa feel kr rhi thi. Meena uske paas gyi. Uski saane tez ho gyi thi.
Meena: " kya huya didi? aap kyu bhaag ayi?"
Jasleen: "dekha nhi tune? wo baaz nhi ayega."
Meena: "aap bhi na aise hi darr rhi hain, kuch nhi hoga,jitna aap daregi utni uski himmat bhadegi, thodi bohot dosti mein kya burai?"
Jasleen: - "shakl dekhi hai uski?ek damm mawali hai"
Meena:- 'to agar wo ameer hota, dekhne mein acha khasa hota to? rang roop to bhagwaan ki den hai. Main konsa kuch krne ko keh rhi hoon, arre thodi masti hi krni hai. aur apko ye tang krna bhi band kar dega."
Jasleen: - "to main Parm ko dhoka du? main koi aisi waisi nhi hoon meena. "
Meena: - " dhoka nhi didi... dosti krne mein kya dhoka.. aap bhi"
Jasleen -- "rehne do"
Kuch din Ramesh nhi dikha. Jasleen bhi soch rhi thi ke wo ladka aaj kal nhi dikh rha. Jasleen aur meena ghar mein hi the. Jasleen ghar ke bahar dekh rhi thi. Meena ne usse dekhte huye poocha...
Meena: " kise dekh rhi hain didi? aaj kal apka ashique dikhayi nhi deta.?"
Jasleen: - "tu bhi na...acha hi hai ke dekhai nhi de rha"
Shaam ko Jasleen or Parm market gye. whi Ramesh bhi tha, wo bhi unke piche ho liyaa. Jasleen ko pta chl gya ke Ramesh unke piche hai. Par aaj baat kuch alag thi, Jasleen darri huyi ya gusse mein nhi thi. Jasleen ne Parm ko icecream khane ko kaha. wo dono ek thelle se icecream khaane lgge. Ramesh unse thodi door apne doston ke saath khada ho gya. wo Jasleen ko dekh rha tha. Jasleen ko pta tha ke Wo usse dekh rha hai. lekin usse gussa nhi aya. Jaise hi Jasleen ne Ramesh ki aur dekha Ramesh smile krne lgga. fir usne aankh maar di. Jasleen ne koi reaction nhi diya. kuch der baad usne fir Ramesh ki aur dekha.. Ramesh ne fir whi kiya. Jasleen kuch alag hi ehsaas huya. tabhi Parm ne ghar chalne ko kaha. Jasleen ko jaise thodi rahat mili. Dono apni gadi se ghar chle gye. Jasleen soch rhi thi ke ye larka shayed kabhi nhi sudhrega.
Agle din Meena Parm ke office jane ke baad unke ghar aayi. Ghar ka kaam krne ke baad dono baatein krne lggi. Baaton- baaton mein Ramesh ke baare mein baat hone lggi..
Jasleen: “kal wo loafer fir ayaa tha, main aur tumhare sahab ice cream kha rhe the aur kamina bss ghoore ja rha tha.”
Meena : “ hahaa didi, aapka aahshiq koi mauka nhi chodta apke husan ke deedar ka.”
Jasleen: “pagal hai… pta nhi kyu apna time kharab kar rha hai? usse koi aur kaam dhandha nhi kya?’
Meena: “to kya huya didi, bechara aapko dekh kar thoda khush ho jata hai, to isme kya burrai hai.dekhne do.”
Jasleen: “acha kyu? mujh par bss mere pyaar mere pati Parm ka hi haq hai. kisi aur se mujhe koi matlab nhi.”
Meena : “ wo to hai hi… par kyaa didi aap bhi, aaj ke zamaane mein itni puraani soch, thodi bohot masti krne mein koi harz thodi hai. Agar aapke pati apse pyaar krte hain to kya wo kisi larke se apki dosti par shaq krenge? aur aap sara din ghar mein hi rehti hai, thoda zindagi ka maza lein.”
Jasleen: “ Arre tumhe nhi pta ye larka aaye din mujhe chedta hai, na baba na ye to gale padd jayega. aur tu..mujhe pta hai konse maze krti hai apne Boyfriend ke saath, tere pati ko pta chla na tab saara maza nikal jayega.”
Meena : “jab lagega tab dekha jayega. main to zindagi ache se jeena chahti hoon… pati se payaar aur Boyfriend se maze.. hahaa”
Jasleen: “ kamini..bohot bigad gyi hai..”
Meena: “ Didi aap ye na bhule ke usne humein uss din bachaya tha. lagta hai wo lrka dil se chahta hai apko. gareeb hai to kya huya, dil to sab ke paas hai. Aur aapne apni zindagi mein humesha apni hasiyat ke logo se hi dosti ki hai, ek baar kisi gareeb ki dosti bhi dekh lein.”
Jasleen: “bohot bolti hai tu… Tumhe shayd pata nhi ke mere Parm kitna pyaar krte hain mujhe.“
Meena: “ aap mujhe galat na samjhe rhi.. mujhe pata hain Parm sahib apko kitna pyaar krte hain, aur unke jaisa insaan kisi kismat wali ko hi milta hai. aap to bohot hi lucky ho ke wo aapke husband hain.”
Meena: “Didi ek baat kahu gussa mat hona, aise hi masti ke liye bol rhi hoon…dekho didi…abb agar wo apko dekhe to aap gussa mat krna. aur thoda smile kr dena, to usse lagega ke aap naraaz nhi hain.”
Jasleen: - “pagal ho tum, gale padd jayega wo aur main kaise aisa kr sakti hoon kisi gair mard se? na baba na”
Meena: - “Arre didi, thodi masti hi to hai ! aap bhi na, dekhe to kya krta hai wo majnu. hamein to bass thodi masti krni hai, itna to chalta hai didi…agar shadi ho gyi to iska matlab ye to nhi ke aap thodi masti bhi na kre?”
Meena ko maza aa rha tha. Udhar Jasleen ke liye ye sab nya tha. Usne bhi socha ke pichle 3 months se ye ladka uske piche hai, aur meri wajah se pit bhi gya aur fir bhi mujhe kutton se bachaane ke liye khud zakhmi ho gya…dekhe to itna kya hai? Jasleen ko ese sochta dekh Meena ne Jasleen hathon ko apne haath mein le liya…
Meena:- “kuch nhi hoga didi, itna mat socho, thodi masti hi hai…aur aap kuch galat nhi kr rhi hain. main apke saath hoon. “
Jasleen: “tu bhi naa Meena…..”
Uss raat ko Parm ne Jasleen ko khoob pyaar kiya. Parm Jasleen ke har ek ang ko chumta. uska gora spaat pet, patli kamar aur laal laal honth..Parm poori shidatt se uske jism ko pyaar kr rha tha. Jasleen jaise madhosh hi ho jaati thi. Jasleen hamesha Parm ki baahon mein mom ki tarah pigal jaati thi. Parm ka lamba aur mota lund Jasleen ki kassi huyi choot ko jaise faad deta tha. Jasleen bhi apne pati se puri tarah se santushat thi. Shayed wo bohot khush kismat thi ke usse aisa pati mila tha. Jasleen Parm ki bahoon mein leti huyi thi, thodi der baad Parm so gya, Lekin Jasleen abhi bhi jaag rhi thi. Uske dimaag mein Meena ki baatein chal rhi thi. Wo soch rhi thi ke jo Meena ne kaha kya wo thik hai? wo apne pati ke siva kisi dusre mard ke saath flirt kre..kya ye galat nhi hai? fir usne socha ke thodi hassi mazak, masti mein koi burai bhi nhi, wo konsa apne pati ko dhoka de rhi hai. Soche huye wo Parm ki bahoon mein hi so gyi. Lekin uska mann fir bhi nhi maan rha tha. kahin na kahin usse ye galat hi lagg rha tha.
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Agle din dupehar ko Meena chatt pe kapde sukha rhi thi, usne dekha ke Ramesh Jasleen ko dekhne ke liye galli mein chakkar lga rha hai. Meena foran Jasleen ke paas gyi.
Meena: “Didi aagya apka aashiqu ! bahar chakkr lga raha hai..chaliye dekhe.”
Jasleen: “to lagane do chakkar, wo to loafer hai”
Meena: “didi chlo market chalte hain, aapne kaha tha na ke kuch samaan lana hai.”
Jasleen : ‘mujhe pata hai tu kyu bol rhi hai.’
Meena: “agar pta hai to chliye na..”
Meena ke baar baar kehne par Jasleen maan gyi. Dono market ki aur chal di. gali mein to unhone Ramesh ko ignore kiya jaise wo ho hi na. Ramesh bhi unke peeche chlne lgga. Market mein dono kisi dukaan mein khadi thi. Ramesh ne mauka dekh kr Jasleen ko ankhon se ishara kiya. Jasleen ne koi reaction nhi diya. Jaise hi Jasleen ne fir uski aur dekha, Ramesh ne ankh maar di, Jasleen ka dil zor se dhadak rha tha, lekin iss baar usse gussa nhi aa rha tha, usse ajjeb sa ehsaas ho rha tha. Meena bhi ye sab dekh rhi thi. Jasleen ne apna chehra dusri aur kar liya. Chahe jo ho Jasleen aisi-waisi larki nhi thi. Ye sab usse abhi bhi galat hi lag rha tha. Usne Meena ko ghar chalne ke liye kaha. Jasleen jaldi se ghar jana chahti thi. uski halat khrab ho rhi thi. Meena bhi samaj gyi ke Jasleen ke liye ye sab nya anubhav hai. Ramesh ne bhi koi jald baazi nhi ki. use lgga ke Market mein unse baat krni thik nhi hogi. Jasleen apna chehra jhukaye Ramesh ke saamne se chli gyi. Ramesh wahi khada uss husan ki pari ko dekhta rha.
Jasleen ek pati-varta aurat thi. Kisi gair mard ko iss tarah se apne aap ko chedne dena, ye uske sanskaar nhi the. Wo ek izzatdar family se thi. Wo thodi bechain thi. Uska pati usse har khushi deta tha, Uski koi mazboori bhi nhi thi ke wo Ramesh jaise ko apne paas bhi aane de. Meena ke jaane ke baad uske dimag mein yahi sab chal rha tha. Uss raat Jasleen ko sapne mein Ramesh dikhai diya. Sapne mein bhi usse Ramesh usse aankh maar rha tha, achank se uski neend tut gyi. Wo soch rhi thi ke kamina sapne mein bhi ched gya. Aaj pehli baar usse ki gair mard ka sapna ayaa tha, iss baat se wo guilty feel kar rhi thi.
Kuch din aise hi beet gye, roz Ramesh Jasleen ke ghar ka chakkr lagata, Jasleen ko dekhta, Jasleen ko bhi pta tha ke wo roz uske ghar ke chakr lagata hai, aab use bhi gussa nhi ata tha, kyunki ye abb roz ka kaam tha. Lekin Ramesh Jasleen se baat krna chahta tha. Usne kyi larkiya patayi thi, lekin unhe Jasleen se compare krna to Jasleen ki insult hogi. Usse koi idea nhi mil rha tha ke wo baat age kaise bhadaye.
Ek din Meena apne boyfriend Rajesh ke saath film dekhne gyi, waha Rajesh ne un dono ko dekh liya. Ramesh ne dekha ke Meena jiss larke ke saath hai wo use janta hai. Ramesh unn dono ko milne gya. Ramesh aur Rajesh bohot arse se mile nhi the, wo dono ek hi college mein the, Dono ek dusre ko mil ke bohot khush huye. Meena bhi hairan thi. teeno mein baat cheet huyi, fir wo chaye peene lagge. waha Ramesh ne unhe Jasleen ke baare mein bataya..
Rajesh: “ aare to ye baat hai… tumhe lgta hai ke teri baat ban skti hai.”
Ramesh: “dekh bhai, mujse nhi rha jayega abb, pyaar krta hai tera bhai uss se. agar Meena chahe to meri madad ho sakti hai.”
Meena: “ are tum samjh nhi rhe ho…wo aisi waisi nhi hai, wo apne pati se bohot pyaar krti hai, aur bohot hi-fi log hain, tum sachai ko samjho, unki kya mazboori jo wo tumse baat kre, wo nhi karegi tumse baat.”
Rajesh: “Meena! ye bhai hai mera..ek hi college mein padhe hain, tu iski help kar.”
Ramesh: “pata nhi yaar jabse use dekha hai, bhenchod bhool nhi paa rha hoon. aur main greeb hoon lekin chutiya nhi hoon, usse mana kar hi rahunga. usse dostihi karade bss”
Rajesh: “ ek kaam kar, kisi bahane se isse uske ghar leja, iski baat krwa de.”
Meena: “yaar tum log bhi na…main kuch sochti hoon, par Ramesh tum koi ulti seedhi harqat mat krna, aur unhe chedna band kro… wo bohot acche log hain, sach mein yaar maine itne gharo mein kaam kiya hain lekin Jasleen aur Uske Pati Parm sahib jaise log nhi dekhe, dono mujhe choti behan ki tarah samjhte hain.”
Ramesh: “Maa kasam kuch galat nhi karunga, agar galat krna hota to kab ka kr leta… mujhe usse jabarsasti se nhi pana.”
Meena: “thik hai, main krti hoon kuch.” “tumhe poore Hardoi Jile mein koi aur nhi mili?? matalb wo humlogo ki aukat se kahin uper hai“ haste huyee…
Meena soch rhi thi ke kaise Ramesh ko Jasleen se milwaya jaye.
agle din Meena Jasleen ke ghar gyi. ghar ka kaam krne ke baad, dono baatein krne lggi. Meena ne Ramesh ki baat ched di.
Meena: “Aaj apka ashiqu nhi aya didi??”
Jasleen: “tu na sudharna…roz ata hai kamina mujhe dekhne, aaj bhi ayega hi hoga”
Meena: “payaar mein pagal jo hai wo apke.”
Jasleen: “ pagal hi hai”
Meena: “ apko pta bhi hai kal kya huya??
Jasleen : “ kyaa huya??”
Meena: “kal main apne boyfriend ke saath film dekhne gyi thi, to apka ashiq mila tha wahan aur mera bf aur wo dono dost nikle. Uska naam Ramesh hai.”
Jasleen: “ achhaa..tu kuch bhi humare bare use mat batana, thik hai?
Meena: “ Ji didi…maine usse samjaya ke aap log bohot uchi hasiyaat ke hain aur tum gareeb sadkchaap, isiliye wo apko tang na kare.”
Meena jaan bhooj kar Amir gareeb wali baat bol rhi thi, usse pata tha ke Jasleen ko acha nhi lagega. kyunki Jasleen seedhi saadhi aur thodi emotional larki thi. Meena ko pata tha ke Jasleen ki isi baat ka fayada uthaya ja sakta hai.
Jasleen: “ are yaar ye hasiyaat ki baat nhi hai Meena.”
Meena: “ par didi ye sach hai, wo apke layak nhi hai, jo bhi ho koi aap jaisi ache pariwaar ki larki uss gareeb se dosti to door baat bhi kyu karegi.”
Jasleen: “ wo baat nhi hai…Main shadishuda hoon, aise kaise kisi gair mard se baat kr skti hoon aur wo bhi uske saath jiska mujhe pta hai ke wo mere piche pada hai.”
Meena: “ to agar shadishuda na hoti to? fir apko ko koi fark padta ke wo gareeb hai, jisne apko bachaya tha.”
Jasleen chup ho gyi. kuch soch kr usne jwaab diya.
Jasleen: “fir baat aur hoti.”
Meena : “ nhi didi, baat yehi hoti… hum mein aur Aap mein bohot fark hai ! hum gareeb hain aur aap uche log hain.”
Jasleen: “ tum pagal ho ye kya bol rhi ho…Parm tumhe choti behan ki tarh maante hain, aur main bhi, humne kabhi aisa nhi socha.”
Meena: “to aapko yehi problem hai ke aap shadishuda hain, isiliye aap us se baat nhi krna chahti?? ye jante huye bhi uss larke ne humein bachaya tha?
Jasleen: “han”
Meena: “ kya sahib aap par shaq krtein hai? nhi na…? to bss aap unse kaho ke ye mera dost hai.. agar wo apse itna hi pyaar krte hain to kisi larke se aap baat kre ya apki sirf dosti ho to unhe koi dikkat nhi honi chahiye. Payaar ka matlab bhandhna nhi hota. aur sirf dosti mein kya harz hai? aap apne pati ko koi dhokha nhi de rhi.”
Jasleen: “Parm ko mujh par poora bharosa hai aur mujhe bhi un par. wo mujh par kabhi shaq nhi krege.”
Meena: “didi aapne apni life mein hamesha apni hasiyat ke logo se hi dosti ki hai, iss bar kisi gareeb ko bhi azma ke dekh lo.. aur thodi masti mazak mein koi harz nhi, aur acha na lagge to baat na krna, isme kya hai.”
Jasleen sochne laggi. Meena Jasleen ke bholepan ka fayda utha rhi thi. Meena ko lagg rha tha ke dhire dhire Jasleen maan jayegi. Raat ko Jasleen Parm ki baahon mein leti thi. usse neend nhi aa rhi thi. wo Meena ki baaton ko soch rhi thi. Us ne socha ke agar sirf kisi se dosti hi ho iss mein to koi harz nhi, aur Parm to usse itna pyaar krte hain wo kabhi galat nhi sochege. Fir wo Ramesh ke baare mein sochne lggi, ek baar Ramesh ne usse bachaya tha, ye ehsaan ka badla wo kaise chuka sakti hai? usne socha ke shayd use Ramesh se ek baar baat krni chahiye.
Agle din fir se Meena aur Jasleen ke beech Ramesh ke bare mein baat huyi. Meena ki baatein sunne k baad Jasleen ek baar Ramesh se baat krne ko maan gyi. Meena ne agle din ye baat Ramesh ko bta di. Uski khushi ka thikana na tha. Lekin Meena ne usse samjhaya ke koi jaldbaazi na kre, Ramesh bhi samjh gya ke yaha par ek ek kadam soch ke rkhna padega. Ramesh ne Meena ko apna phone number Jasleen ko dene ko kaha.
Agle din Parm ke office jaane ke baad Meena Jasleen se mili. Aur usne Ramesh ka number Jasleen ko de diya
Jasleen: “ nhi main apna number nhi dena chahti aise kisi ko..aise hi problem ho jayegi.?
Meena: “didi.. koi problem nhi hogi, aap ye na bhule ye banda aapke liye kutto se zakhmi ho gya tha, to koi problem nhi karega.. aur main hoon na, aap mujh par bharosa rakhe.”
Jasleen abhi bhi sankoch kr rhi thi. lekin Meena ke baaton mein aakr usne baat krne ka faisla kiya.
Meena ne Ramesh se phone par baat ki, aur usse kaha ke Jasleen ka number kisi ko pta nhi chlna chahiye. Ramesh Jasleen ko sach mein chahne lgga tha, wo uska number kisi se bhi share nhi kar skta tha. Asl mein usne apne doston ko bhi ye baat nhi batai thi.. Meena ne Jasleen ka number send kr diya. Fir meena waha se chli gyi. Wo chahti thi ke Jasleen akele mein baat kre.
1 ghante baad Jasleen ke phone par Ramesh ka message aya, Jasleen ka dil thoda tez dhadkne lgga.
“Main ramesh, apko Meena ne bataya hi hoga. Agar aap busy nhi hain to kya hum phone par baat kr skte hain?”
Jasleen ne han mein jwaab diya.. phir ramesh ka call aya. Jasleen ko bohot ajeeb lag rha tha. fir Jasleen ne call uthayi..
Jasleen; “Hello”
Ramesh: “ Hello main Ramesh”
Jasleen: “han boliyee..”
Ramesh: “kaisi hain aap?”
Jasleen: “ thik hoon”
Ramesh ko kuch soojh nhi rha tha.
Jasleen: “apne kya baat krni thi?
Ramesh: “apko meri wajah se koi takleef huyi ho to uske liye sorry.”
Jasleen: dekhiye aap pls mujhe cheda na kare, mujhe ye bilkul pasand nhi”
Ramesh: “aap itni khubsurat hain ke mujhse rha nhi gya, aur jo mujhe lgga maine kiya. lekin wo galt tha.”
Jasleen: “ aap ko pta hain na ke main shadishuda hoon??
Ramesh: “pta hai, par fir bhi rha nhi gya, aur aap mujhe galt na samjhe main apko kisi problem nhi dalunga, jiss se apki shadishuda zindagi mein koi problem aye”
Jasleen: “par aise kisi larki ko chedna thik nhi. aur ye mujhe bilkul pasand nhi.”
Ramesh: “sach kahoon to main aisa hi hoon, mujhe aap jesi larkiyon se baat krni nhi aati, lekin apko meri vajah se koi problem nhi ayegi.”
Jasleen: “uss din meri wajah se apki pitaai huyi, lekin aap bhi jante hain ki galti aap ki hi thi.. par uss din aap humein bachaane ke chakkar mein khud jakhmi ho gye…uske liye thank you! apko zada chot to nhi lggi thi?
Ramesh: ‘are koi baat nhi…main thik hoon.” “ to aap abb naraaz to nhi hai?
Jasleen thodi der chup rehne ke baad.. “ nhi”
Ramesh; “ fir thik hai…mujhe lgga shayed abhi bhi naraaz hain. ek baat puchni thi aapse, bura mar manana.”
Jasleen: “ kyaa? lekin agar aisi koi baat hogi to bura zroor manugi”
Ramesh: “ thik hai… dekhiye ye sach hai ke jabse maine apko dekha hai, to apko bhool nhi pa rha, maine aaj tak itni sundar larki nhi dekhi, aur mujhe pta hai aap shadishuda hain, aur meri itni hasiyat bhi nhi hai, bhagwaan ne gareeb bnaya aur na shakal di na hi akal…par fir bhi main apse dosti krna chahta hoon. Meri kismat mein aap jaisi larki to nhi aa sakti lekin, agar main gareeb hoon to kya aap mujhe sirf dost bhi nhi bna sakti?? jaisa maine kaha ke meri vajah se apko koi takleef nhi hogi.”
Jasleen soch mein padd gyi, Ramesh usse gareebi aur hasiyaat ki baat krke emotional kr rha tha. Jasleen soch rhi thi ke wo kya kahe. Usse samjh mein nhi aya.
Jasleen: “ Dekho baat amiri gareebi ki nhi hai, par main shadishuda hoon, aur ye sab…”
Ramesh: “dekhiya main sirf dosti ki baat kr rha hoon, aur kya ladk-ladki dost nhi ho skte? aur agar apko baad mein thik na lagge to aap kabhi mujhse baat na krna.”
Jasleen fir soch mein padd gyi. wo naram dil ki larki thi, jald hi emotional ho jati thi. usse ne socha bhi ke sirf dosti mein kya harz hai? lekin usne koi jwaab nhi diyaa.
Jasleen: “main sochungi!”
baat-baat pe gali dene wala Ramesh aaj bohot salike se baat kr rha tha.
Jasleen: “ab main rakhti hoon, mujhe kaam hai.”
Ramesh “ thik koi baat nhi. ”
Jasleen ne call kaat di. uski dhadkan abhi bhi tez thi. aaj usne pehli baar aise kisi se baat ki thi, jo larka usse chedta tha. Wo soch rhi the ke kya usne Ramesh se baat krke sahi kiya? Udhar Ramesh bohot khush tha. Jasleen se baat krne ke baad Ramesh ne meena se baat ki. usne jo baat hui wo sab bataya. fir usne meena ko kaha ke aab wo jasleen se milke aage sambhaal le. Meena soch rhi thi ke abb uska kaam asaan ho gya hai.
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Superb update...
This is what is called character development..!!
Nice to see how Ramesh gets a chance against a loving and satisfying husband ( normally in such stories either husband is away, not loving or not able to satisfy)
You are doing superb...! Waiting for more.!!
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Behtareen kahani hai keep going
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Super story very nice bro
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yes its indeed slow n deliberate at this point to increase the depth of the characters. Time to slowly initiate some small seductions.
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Bahot badhiya Natureboyy.. ek nayaa andaaz dikha aap ki story me.. ek patni apne pati se santusht ho ne ke baad bhi ek sadkchhap aashiq ki taraf dhire dhire badh rahi hai.. aur aage badhane me bhi aap dhire dhire Jaa rahe hai.. ye hi is story me interst jyada paida kar rahi hai..
Let's see how the story move further.. with more seductive contents..
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(31-01-2023, 08:10 AM)Mgaya Wrote: Superb update...
This is what is called character development..!!
Nice to see how Ramesh gets a chance against a loving and satisfying husband ( normally in such stories either husband is away, not loving or not able to satisfy)
You are doing superb...! Waiting for more.!!
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Ramesh ki pic is very close what i was looking for... main bhi aise hi character chahta tha...thanks
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(31-01-2023, 12:06 PM)Yampag Wrote: Bahot badhiya Natureboyy.. ek nayaa andaaz dikha aap ki story me.. ek patni apne pati se santusht ho ne ke baad bhi ek sadkchhap aashiq ki taraf dhire dhire badh rahi hai.. aur aage badhane me bhi aap dhire dhire Jaa rahe hai.. ye hi is story me interst jyada paida kar rahi hai..
Let's see how the story move further.. with more seductive contents.. yes it will get more seductive but in natural way.
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