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Romance Love story of a Housewife
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Love story of a Housewife nd Salesman

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SAKSHI TIWARI- 35yrs old ki ek sadharan si simple middle class housewife hai jiska pura waqt  apne parivar ki sewa m gujarta h. 
Neeraj Tiwari- Sakshi ka pati umar 42saal, ek company m supervisor ka kaam krta h. 
Savita Gautam- Sakshi ki ek matra saheli aur uski padosi. Umar 36yrs.Savita aur uska pati dono hi naukri krte h toh inki parivarik isthithi achi h Sakshi k ghr se. 
Salesman- Sahil Sharma umar karib 36saal. Iska divorce ho chuka h aur yeh akela rehta h. 

Chapter- 01
Raat k 10bje rhe thay Sakshi baith k tv dekh rai aur Neeraj khana kha rahy,tv pe add aa rha tha microwave ka jisme Sakshi khoi hue thi.
Neeraj: Sakshi jra sbji pass krna??
Sakshi TV m khoi hue thi aur Koi response na dekh k Neeraj dubara thoda jor se bolta h- Sakshi kha dhyaan h tmhara, jb se sbji pass krne ko bol rha hu
Sakshi- Ooooounn han ye lain,Sakshi harbra k sabzi ka bowl pakraya
Neeraj(thoda gusse m)- Kya din bhr tv m ghusi rehti ho, esa kya aata h tv m
Sakshi Neeraj ki baat ko ignore krte hue-Aji suniye na Ye microvave kitna acha hy na
Neeraj-Haaa acha h pr kya kru?? Tv p toh hr cheez achi lgti h, aur upr se tmhe aata b nhi h isay chalana... Abi mere pass budget b nhi h isay lene k lye, Isko le liya toh upr se bijli ka bill b bdh jyega
Sakshi-Dekhen kitny mazy mazy k khany paka rai hy ma sekh b loon ge savita hy na usy sb pata hy wo mjy sikha degi, Aur wesy b ma ne konsa hr waqt pakana hy is pe
 
Neeraj-Us savita se durr hi rha kro tm, woh theek aurat nhi h.. Aur tmhe yeh b sochna chahiye ki savita aur uska pati dono kamate h aur yha bs m hi kamata hu... Kuch din ruk jao jb bonus milega tb le lenge.. peecha chudane k lye bol deta h
Bacche soo gye??? M ja rha hu bedroom m, tm b jldi aao
Sakshi ka mood kharab ho jata h aur who  narazgi k swar m Tv bnd krti hai aur- G so gye hn bachy. Aur table se bartan uthaty huy boli Kuch paosy ma b de don ge meri BC nikly ge isi mahiny, Aap ko aur baccho ko achy achy khany bna k dn ge mujhe toh jada  shoq nhi khano ka
 
Neeraj-Theek h sochta hu pr phle jldi se aao kaam khatam kr k..
 Neeraj hath dhote hue sochta h ki keh toh theek rhi h Sakshi pr yrr microwave toh mehnga hoga aur abi paise b nhi hai jada aur fir  bedroom m ja k bed p late k Sakshi k aane ka wait krne lgta h.
 
Sakshi bartan samet k kitchen m jati aur gande bartan dhote hue sapne dekhne lgti h ki microwave aa jyega toh baccho ko new new dishes bna k diya kregi toh bacche kitna khush honge. Pr tbhi usay yaad aata h ki Neeraj ne bola h paise nhi h aur usay gussa aata h aur- In ko to koi parwa he ni ghar k kisi chz ki apni lye thodi na  koi demand krti hu main phr b aisa behave krty.
Sakshi ek bar ja k baccho ka room check krti h aur dekhti h ki dono soo gye fir woh apne room main aati aur almari khol k ek nighty nikal kr washroom m ghus gai, sakshi k chehre pr thoda gussa njr aata h neeraj ko aur woh sochta h, Lgta h isko dilwana hi pdega wrna ese hi muh fulaye hue ghumegi. Thodi der bad sakshi apne Kapry change kr k aati h aur bed p apni side aa k peeth kr k lait gai muh fulaye hue.
Neeraj-( bhtt dhere se phusphusate hue) Sakshi idhr aao na.
Sakshi sunn toh leti h but ignore krti h, 
Neeraj Dheere se hath bdha k Sakshi ki kmr p nighty k upr se rkh k hlke hlke sehlate hue kehta hai ki  theek h baba bola na sochunga, tm toh chahti ho ki tmhare muh se nikle aur cheez le aau.
Sakshi (ukhde hue swar m bolti h)-Toh banda bat to pyar se kr sakta hy na main kon sa apny liye keh rai thi bachy hn kabhi kuch demand krty kabhi kuch Ap ni chahty k ap b achy achy khny office le k jaye
Neeraj-Haa haa theek h smjhta hu pr tm b toh socho ki paise k bina kaise hoga.. Hath sarkaten hue boob k pass le aata hu.. Suno na sakshi, bhttt mood ho rha h seedhi leto na.
Sakshi(gusse m)-Mere sir ma bht dard hai aaj, Sone dain pls.
Neeraj- Bs khud toh kuch deti nhi aur chahti ho ki pyaar se baat kru.. Sir dard toh tmhara roj ka h.. 5min lgega bs, seedhi ho jao na. 
Sakshi-Kya hai itne bade bade bache ho gye hain ab to bus kr dijiye m thak gye hoon is roz roz k 5 min se.
Neeraj- Is m bacche kha se aa gye?? Bacche k bde hone se yeh thodi na bnd hota h.. Theek h soo jao... Pure mood ki maa behn kr di... Neeraj hath hta k karwat kr k soone ki koshish krne lgta h. 
Sakshi  b koi khas lift ni deti aur krwat kr k aankh bnd kr k late jati h, aankh bnd krte hi usay fir se wohi microwave njr aane lgta h aur us k sapne sajati hue neend k aagosh m chali jati h.

Nxt day subh Neeraj uthta hu toh dekhta h ki aaj sakshi  abi b soo rhi hoti h, toh usay hila ke jgane lgta h-sakshi utho 6bj gye h baccho ka school hai aaj. Sakshi jamahiya leti hue aa ooo onnn krte hue uthi Wash room m  ja k fresh hoti h aur  mun hath dho kr kitchen ki trf  chali jati h aur sath m baccho ko b awaj deti h uthne k lye.Kitchen se he bacho ko awaz di uth b jao baccho late ho jaoge school k lye..

Sakshi jldi jldi sb k lye nasta aur lunch bnati h aur fir sb ka tiffin pack kr k table p rkhti hue awaj deti h- Suniye nasta lga diya h jldi aaiye wrna chai thandi ho jyegi aur baccho k room m ja k unki help krti h bag back krne aur ready hone m.
Neeraj b  nha dho k office k lye ready hota h aur fir aa k table p baith jata hai aur chai ki chuski lete hu newpaper pdhne lgta h. thodi der m bacche b ready ho k bhr aate h aur table p baith jate h nasta krne.
Neeraj- beta maa kha h tmhari?
beta- woh hmara room theek kr rhi h..
Neeraj awaj deta h- Sakshi ek min bhr aana..
Sakhi baccho k room se hi ukhde hue swar m jbab deti h- aa rhi hu, nasta lga toh diya h ab kya dikkat ho gai? jaise hi baccho k room se bhr aati h toh Neeraj dekhta h ki Sakshi k muh abi b fula hua h.
Neeraj- Abi b gussa ho?? Acha theek h Jis din BC k paise mil jyege us din le aayege microwave. Neeraj k muh se microwave ka sunn k Sakshi ko khushi toh hoti h bt fir b woh apne chehre p jahir nhi hone deti h 
Sakshi- Pakka na? esa toh nhi ki mera mann rkhne k lye keh rhe h aap?
Neeraj(makhan lgate hue)-Haa pakka... Pr phle apne sar dard ka kuch permanent ilaj karo.

Sakshi- m kya jaan k sar dard krti hu apna? din bhr ghr ka kaam karte karte ho jata hai… theek h koshish karungi ki ab na ho sar dard.
Neeraj- Tmhara kya h, bs muh phula logi... Din bhr ghr p pdi aaram krti rehti ho, kbi hmara b socho din bhr ofc kaam krna pdta h thak haar k ghr aao pr hmara toh kbi sar dard nhi hota, pr tmhare toh bahane hi kbi khatam nhi hote.. 
Sakshi subh subh baat nhi bdhana chahti thi islye chup reh jati h pr usay andr se bhtt bura feel hota h ki khud ki mehnat mehnat lgti aur hmari mehnat thodi na h, hm toh bs ghr p pde aaram krte h.. 
Sakshi-Acha baba acha abhi aap apna mood na kharaab kre aur  office jaye  late ho rah h aapko.. 
Neeraj- Tiffin pack hua??
 Sakshi- g ye lijiye apka tiffin Aj phr sabzi he hy chaly ga na??
Neeraj- Haa theek h chal jayegi..
Sakshi ka utra hua chehra dekh k neeraj ko b thoda bura feel hota pr woh kuch nhi kehta aur chup chap tiffin uthata h aur baccho ko le k nikl jata h. 
Sb k jane k baad Sakshi table se juthe bartan uthati h aur kitchen m le ja k rkhti h, fir bhr aa k dekhti h toh usay Savita njr aati h. 
Sakshi- are savita aaj office nhi gai ™? 
Savita- nhi yrr aaj chutti li h, aur Tu suna kaisa chal rha h sb. 
Sakshi- kya chalna h yrr bs wohi roj ka h. Acha sunn is bat ki BC mujhe mil skti h kya? 
Savita- haaa koshish krungi pr tujhe esi kya jrurt pd gai jo BC abi utha rhi h?
Sakshi- yr soch rhi hu ek microwave le lu, bacche aaye din jid krte h pizza vghrah ki, aur bhr se yeh mngane b nhi dete h. 
Savita- wah yrr yeh toh achi baat h, chal m puri koshish krti hu BC k lye. 
Sakshi khush hote hue- thanks yrrr. 
Savita- pgal h kya tu? Mujhe kyu thanks bol rhi h, bs jb microwave aa jye toh mujhe achi achi dish bna k khilana. Sach m yrr tere hath m jaadu h. 
Sakshi- yeh b koi kehne ki baat h yrr, jb b kuch spcl bnati hu toh tujhe jrur deti hu. Aa na andr tujhe mst sir chai pilati hu. 
Savita- abi nhii yr mujhe ek kaam se jana h, free ho k aati hu na. 
Sakshi- chal theek h. 
Sakshi andr aa k ghr k kaam m busy ho jati h. 

Udhar Neeraj office k lye nikl toh jata Pr us k mann m yahi chalta h ki Sakshi ka muh fula hua aur ese m aaj raat fir bina kuch kre soona pdega. Tbi usay ek idea aata h ki kyu na Sakshi ki microwave dekha lau, paise h nhi toh kya hua km se km usay ek umeed toh mil hi jyegi aur uska mood b sahi ho jyega. 
Office pahuch k Neeraj call krta h Sakshi ko, Sakshi- hello, kya ho gya aaj office m kaam nhi h kya? 
Neeraj ko Sakshi ki tone m tanna saf smjh aata h- are suno toh 
Sakshi- ha kya h jldi boliye, mujhe aaram krna h. 
Neeraj- abi b gussa ho? Acha suno Sham to taiyaar rehna chalte h tmhara microwave dekhne. 
Microwave ka naam sunn k Sakshi ka chehra khil jata h. Aur woh khush hote hue bolti h- Aap jhuth toh nhi bol rhe h? Hm sham ko microwave lene chal rhe h
Neeraj Sakshi ki awaj m aai khushi ko smjh jata h- Itni b khush na ho, abi bs dekhne chalege, kharide tb jb bc k paise mil jyege
Sakshi usi utsah k saath Acha acha dekh to leyge na. 
Neeraj- Haa dekhte lene aur rate b pta kr lenge. Chalo rkhta hu byee
Sakshi- bye
Phone rkhne k baad Sakshi khushi se jhum uthti h aur jldi jldi Sare kaam khatam krti hai aur nhane jati h. Nhane k baad ek achi si saree with matching blouse nd peticoat pehn k ready ho jati h. Sakshi ko is waqt bs microwave k siva aur kuch soojh hi nhi rha h aur woh jagti aankho se sapne dekh rhi h. 3bje bacche school se vaps aate h aur teeno mil k lunch krte h. 
Raju- kya baat h mummy aaj aap bht khush lg rhi h? 
Sakshi- haa beta aaj m bht khush hu, aaj na sham ko hm microwave dekhne ja rhe h. 
Ruchi- wow mummy hm microwave le rhe h, fir toh hm pizza burger sb khane ko milega na. 
Sakshi- haaa beta, ab na tum dono ka jab mann hoga tab m bna diya krunga. 
Teeno khushi khushi lunch krte h. Fir bacche apne room m chale jate h aaram krne aur Sakshi TV on kr k baith jati h. 
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very very nice start
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Nice start. Dhire dhire seduce करके story लिखना
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Awesome and amazing story
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(22-01-2023, 10:05 AM)Prativa Rani Saha Wrote: very very nice start

Thanks for ur kind words.
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(22-01-2023, 01:20 PM)Bandabia Wrote: Nice start. Dhire dhire seduce करके story लिखना

Koshish toh yhi h aap logo ka sath rha toh esa hi hoga
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(22-01-2023, 03:44 PM)Rohit Wrote: Awesome and amazing story

Thanx a lot
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Chapter 2
Sham ko Neeraj thoda jldi ghr aata hu aur door knock krta hu..
Sakshi daudti hue jati h aur muskurate gate kholti h- aa gye aap?  Aap baithiye m pani le k aati hu. Aap chai piyege?
Neeraj Sakshi ki khushi notice krta h aur sochta h ki yeh toh ese khush ho rhi h jaise aaj hi le aayege microwave- haa chai toh p hi lenge.
Sakshi tiffin leti h aur kitchen ki trf bdh jati h, kitchen m chai ka pani chadhati h aur ek glass pani le k bhr hall m aa k Neeraj ko pani deti h.
Pani de k vaps kitchen m aati h aur chai bnane lgti h. Neeraj hall m baith k pani peeta h ki tbiyt raju aata h- papa aap jldi aa gye? Pata h papa aaj mummy microwave lene ja rhi h.
Neeraj Raju k muh se jb yeh sunta h tb uska sir chakra jata h, yeh toh puri taiyaari kr k baithi h.
Neeraj- beta lene nhi dekhne ja rhe h, pr haa jldi hi le b lenge. Tbi Sakshi chai le k aati h aur chai deti h.
Neeraj- Sakshi m tmhe subh hi btaya tha na ki hm dekhne ja rhe h na ki kharidne.
Sakshi- haa pta h mujhe ki aaj bs dekhne ja rhe h.
Neeraj- fir baccho ko yeh kyu bola ki lene ja rhe h.
Sakshi ko turant ehsaas hota h ki usne glti kr di pr woh baat smbhalte hue kehti h- are lgta h baccho ne glt smjh liya m toh in se yahi bola tha ki microwave dekhne ja rhe h aur agr bhagwaan ne chaha toh jldi le b lenge.
Yeh baat sun Neeraj ko thodi rahat milti h ki chalo ab raat m koi natak nhi hoga.
Chai p k Neeraj aur Sakshi dono bike se nikl jate h market. Raste m Neeraj kehta h - Sakshi ek new store khula h, tum bolo toh wha chale, suna h bhtt bda store h.
Sakshi- jaisi aapki mrji, mujhe is sb k bare m kuch nhi pta.
Neeraj- theek h wahi chalte h. Aur Neeraj us store ki trf bike mod deta h. Thodi der k baad dono store pahuch jate h.
Neeraj- Sakshi tum utro m bike parking m khadi kr k aata hu. Sakshi jaise hi neeche utar k store ki trf dekhti h toh uska muh khula ka khula reh jata h. Samne bda sa store h aur us k display m trh trh microwave, Tv, laptop, washing machine, fridge etc lge hue njr aate h, Sakshi mann m sochti h ki yeh toh bht mehnga hoga. Sakshi apne hu khayalo m khoi hue hoti ki Neeraj aa k bolta h-  andr chalogi ya fir yhi se dekhna h.
Sakshi- suniye mujhe toh darr lg rha h, yeh toh bhtt bda h aur costly b hoga na.
Neeraj- kya yrr tum bhi? Phle decide kr lo dekhna h ya nhi. Aur kisne kha costly h yeh, woh dekho display p kya likha hua h discount upto50%. Aur hme bs dekhna hi toh h,
Sakshi- fir b itne bde store m jane m darr lg rha h.
Neeraj- are chalo b darne ki kya baat h, aao andr chalte h.
Neeraj aagay chalta h toh mjburi m Sakshi  b us k peeche peeche chalne lgti h aur dono store m andr ghuste h. Store ki caka chaundh dekh k Sakshi ki himmat jbab de jati h aur andr hi andr ghabrate hue idhr udhr dekhne lgti h. Neeraj aagay bdh k mobile section m chala jata h, dheere dheere kadmo se Sakshi agal bgal dekhte hue Neeraj ko dhundhne lgti h pr usay Neeraj khi njr nhi aata h. Neeraj k na pa Sakshi aur ghabra jati h aur jaise hi uski njr microwave p pdti h toh usay thoda sukon milta h aur woh us trf chal deti h. Sakshi k samne line se ek se ek mst mst microwave lge njr aate h aur Sakshi ghabrate hue unhe nigarne m kho jati h. Abi woh apne sapno m khoi hue hi thi ki us k kaano m ek awaj pdti h- excuse mam, m aapki kuch sahayta kr skta h?
Jaise hi Sakshi peeche dekhti h toh usay Sawle rang ka aadmi njr aata h jisne store uniform pehn rkhi thi muskurate hue us ki trf dekh rha h. Sakshi thoda sa ghabrate hue- kkk kkucch nhiiii, mainn tohh bs dekh rhi thi.
Salesman- mam aap ghabra kyu rhi h?  Pani mangau aap k lye?
Sakshi- nhii nhii m nhi ghabra rhi hu
Salesman- mam aap k chehre se saaf pta lg rha hi aap ghabra rhi h. Aap preshan na ho aur mujhe btaiye m aapki kya sahayta kr skta hu.
Sakshi ko salesman k baat krne ka tarika aur uska vyavahar acha lgta h toh woh thodi normal feel krte hue kehti h
Sakshi- woh esa h ki hm abi sirf dekhne aaye h, taki ek idea mil jye ki kitne ka hai, fir jb budget hoga tb sochege lene ka.
Salesman- haa toh problem kya hai mam, aap itminan se dekhiye, aaiye mere sath m aapko ek ek k bare m detail m btata hu. Waise aapko kis purposebse chahiye microwave?
Salesman ki baat sunn sakshi ka sar chakra jata h aur usay smjh nhi aata h ki kya jbab de toh woh kehti h jis m pizza bn ske.
Salesman Sakshi ka jbab sunn smjh jata h ki bechare ko sayd pta nhi h microwave k bare m, bt woh usko bina is baat ka ehsaas diliye microwave dekhta h jis m gril, bake nd cook sb hota h woh dekhane lgta h. Abi salesman dekha hi rha hota h ki Sakshi ko wohi microwave njr aata h jo usne kl raat TV p dekha tha.
Sakshi(khushi se pgal hote hue) - yeh wala kitne ka h?
Salesman- Mam iski cost 15,000/- h bt… .
Abi salesman aagay bolta ussay phle hi Sakshi beech m bol deti h- ohhh yeh toh bhtt mehnga h?
Salesman- are madam phle puri baat toh suniye, iski actual cost h 15,000/- aur after discount yeh aapko 11,999/- ka pd jyega.
11,999/- sunn k sakshi ki thodi umeed bandhti h…
Sakshi- kya aap isay 10-15din rok skte h, m pkka isko le lungi?
Salesh Sakshi k bholepan p thoda sa muskurata h- jii mam aap boliye toh isko m yha se hta k rkwa do aap ka naam likh k?
Sakshi jheep jati h- nhi nhi bs m yeh le lungilungi aap thode din rukk jaiye bs.
Salesman apni pocket se card nikal k Sakshi ko deta h- mam yeh mera card h, aapko jb b lene ka mann kre aap mujhe call kr dijiyega, m aap k ghe deliver kr dunga aur demo ka b arrangement krwa dunga.
Sakshi card le k apne purse m rkhti h aur- thank you soo much, m aap ko hi call krugi isay lene k lye.
Card rkh k Sakshi wha se hatti h aur Neeraj ko idar udhr dhundhne lgti h. Neeraj billing counter k pass njr aata h toh Sakshi teji teji wha jati h- are aap yha h, m toh kb se aapko dhundh rhi thi.
Neeraj- esa kya ho gya jo mujhe khoj rhi thi? Dekh liya microwave tmne?
Sakshi- haa dekh b liya aur psnd b kr liya? Pr aap yha bikking counter p kya kr rhe h?
Neeraj- woh na m ek phn psnd aa gya aur us p accha offer tha toh m le liya.
Yeh baat sunn Sakshi ka para chhadh jata h- phone toh aap k pass phle se h na fir new lene ki kya jrurt thi? M kb se microwave k lye bol rhi hu bt aap k pass us k lye paise nhi h, bt new phone k lye paise aa gye?
Neeraj- ™ itna kyu chilla tlehi ho? Are mujhe offer acha mil gya toh le liya. Ab kya ™ se puch k lu kuch b? Apni aukaat mt bhulo, bibi ho bibi bn k rho mere sar p mat chhadho.
Neeraj jor se chilla k bolta h, jisse store m maujood sb log Neeraj aur Sakshi ko dekhne lgte h.
Tbi woh Salesman beech m aata h aur Neeraj ko tokta h- sir plz aap yha scene na create kre.
Salesman k beech m aane se Neeraj aur chhidh hata h- sale Tu hota kaun h pati patni k beech m bolne wala, ja k apna kaam dekh.
Salesmen mind ur language sir, hoga aapka pati patni ka matter bt aap hmare store p scene na create kre. Pati patni ka matter h toh ghr p. Solve kre, yha faltu nautanki na kre. Aur mana yeh aapki patni h toh kya yhi tamij h aapki apni patni se baat krne ki?
Yeh sunn Neeraj aag babola ho jata h aur salesman ka collar pkd leta h- sale 2 take k insaan teri himmat kaise hue yeh bolne ki?
Mamla bigadta dekh Sakshi beech m aati h aur Neeraj ka hath pkd usay durr krte gye aapko phone lena h le lijiye bt yha se chaliye, m nhi chahe kuch b.
Sakshi ko beech m aata dekh salesman shant ho jata h aur kuch nhi bolta.
Sakshi- chaliye na gussa chodiye ghr chalte h.
Neeraj- hath chhod is saale ki himmat kaise hue mujh se ese baat krne ki?
Sakshi- aap shant ho jaiye aur chaliye yha se. Sakshi Neeraj ka hath pkd usay store k bhr le aati h.
Neeraj aur Sakshi dono ghr aate h, pure raste Sakshi shanti rehti h kyuki Neeraj bht gusse m hota h. Ghr aa k Sakshi dinner lgati h aur sb dinner kr k apne apne room m aate h. Sakahi kitchen m ja k jldi se bartan saaf krti hue sochti h"ab toh bhul hi jati hu microwave ko, yeh toh waise b gusse m h, kIse b kr k inka gussa shant krti hu. Jldi jldi bartan saf kr k Sakshi room m aati toh dekhti h Neeraj new phone m busy njr aata h. Sakshi change kr k nighty pehnti h aur bed p aa k Neeraj late jati h air Neeraj k seene p apna hath rkh k sehlati hue- phone toh bht acha liya h aapne. Suniye aaj sar dard nhi h aur mera b mann h.
Neeraj sakshi ki baat sunn khush ho jati h aur phone side m rkh ne kya baat h aaj suraj kha se nikla h?
Sakshi- whi se jha se roh nikalta h, ab jldi se kriye jo krna h.
Neeraj Sakshi ki baat sun turant apna shorts nikal deta h toh Sakshi b seedhi late h apni nighty upr kr deti h. Neeraj Sakshi k upr aata h aur apna hatiyar Sakshi ki taango k beech set kr k push krta h. Neeraj ka hatiyar andr ghus jata h aur Neeraj dhakke lgana suru krta h. Sakshi shant leti hue intjar krti h ki Neeraj thanda ho jye jldi se. Aur hmesha ki trh Neeraj 2min m dhakke lga k shant ho jata h aur hafte hue Sakshi k upr se utr k jarvat kr k late jata h. Sakshi uth k washroom jati h aur khud ko saf kr jb vaps aati tb tk Neeraj k kharaate bjne lgte h. Sakshi apni jgh aa k late jati h aur us k dimag m sham ki baatein chalne lgti h. Woh sb sochte hue Sakshi ko acha feel hota b aur bar bar woh salesman Sakshi ki aankho k samne aane lgta h. Sakshi thodi der sb sochti h fir is natije pr pahuchti h ki kl din m salesman ko call kr k bta degi ki abi woh microwave nhi le pyegi islye woh usay bech de aur Sakshi ka intzar na kre. Sakshi ko fir yaad aata h ki kaise woh salesman Sakshi ki ijjat dete hue baat kr rha tha aur jb Neeraj se jhagda hua toh us k involve hone k baad kaise woh chup ho gya, jbki Neeraj ne kitna bura bhala kha usay. Yeh sb khi na khi Sakshi k dil ko chu sa gya aur woh yeh sb sochte sochte kb soo gai usay hi nhi pata chala.
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Awesome story
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bahut bahut shandar aur lajawab update
chamatkar tharika se likha is kahaani ko,
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(23-01-2023, 07:08 PM)Nourin Wrote: Awesome story

Thanx a lot?
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(23-01-2023, 08:36 PM)Debashree Roy Wrote: bahut bahut shandar aur lajawab update
chamatkar tharika se likha is kahaani ko,

Bht bht shukriya
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Nice story Continue bhai , jaldi jaldi update diya karo.
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(23-01-2023, 11:31 PM)Jyotimoy123 Wrote: Nice story Continue bhai , jaldi jaldi update diya karo.

Koshish toh puri h
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Chapter 3
Agle din ki subh sb wohi routine hota h Sakshi bhag bhag k sbka kaam kr k sabko un k time se ghr se vida krti h aur fir apne daily k kaam nipta kr nhane chali jati h. Nhane k baad yellow saree with red polka dots pehn kr taiyaar hoti h aur apne purse se us salesman ka card nikal k dekhti h toh us p naam likha hota h aur number. Naam tha Sahil Sharma aur Sakshi us no ko fail krti h, dusri trf bell bjti h pr koi response nhi milta h, Sakshi dubara call krti h toh phone pick hota h
Sakshi- hello
Sahil- hello kaun?
Sakshi- ji woh m kl aap k store aai thi microwave k lye.
Sahil- woh toh hme yaad h Sakshi ji aur aapki awaj b hm pehchan gye, ji boliye kya sewa kr skte h aapki.
Sakshi- aapko mera naam kaise pta h?
Sahil- ji woh kl jb aap k pati dev chilla rhe thay toh pure store ne sun liya tha.
Sakshi thoda sharminda ho jati h aur sorry kehti h.
Sahil- are aap kyu sorry bol rhi h, sorry toh mujhe bolna tha aap se, meri vjh se aapko sunne ko mil gya.
Sakshi- koi baat nhi yeh toh daily ka kaam h, jb tk 2-4 suna nhi dete h tb tk khana nhi hajam hota h.
Sahil- bt fir b aap mujhe maaf kr dijiye. Aur btaiye phone kis liye kiya.
Sakshi(bhujhe mann se) - sorry bt abi hm microwave nhi le pyege aap usay bech dijiye, jb paise honge toh m khud aa k le jyege.
Sahil Sakshi ki awaj se jaan jata h ki woh bechari dukhi h aur kehta h
Sahil- are bs itni si baat p aap muh kyu latka rhi h, aapko sayad pta nhi bt hr pange ka hal h is bnde k pass.
Sakshi- acha ji, kya hal h btaiye?
Sahil- haal yeh h ki agr aap chaho toh emi p le skti h.
Sakshi- yeh emi kya hoti h?
Sahil- EMI ka mtlb hota h ki abi chaho toh aap thode paise de k baki bacha hua amount thoda thoda kr k har mahine chuka skti h.
Yeh sunn Sakshi khush ho jati h- saccha?? Kya esa ho skta h?
Sahil- ji haaa esa ho skta h bs aapko kuch formality krna pdegi, jaise ki ek id, address proff aur ek cancelled cheque.
Sakshi utsahit hote hue- woww agr esa ho gya toh mujhe se jada khushi kise ko b nhi hogi.
Sahil- m bola tha na ki hal pange ka hal h is bnde k pass.
Sakshi- hmm ekdum sahi bola h aapne.
Sahil- toh btaiye kb aau formality complete krne.
Sakshi- m sham ko in se baat kr k aapko kl btati hu.
Sahil- theek h, m intzar krunga aapki call ka.
Sakshi- hm, rkhti hu ab. Namaste
Sahil- bye nd take care.
Dono apna apna phone cut krte h. Sakshi thoda relax feel krti h aur usay khushi b hoti h. Woh sochti h ki kitna acha insaan h, kitne pyaar se baat krta h aur sb se bdi baat kitna shuljha hua insaan h. Sakshi fir Savita ko call lgati h.
Sakshi- hii savita kaisi ho?
Savita- hello yrr bs theek hu, aur bta call kaise kr li aaj.
Sakshi Savita ko kl sham jo b hua woh btati h aur yeh b btati h ki kaise salesman ne uski problem ka solution nikal diya chutkiyo m.
Sakshi- yrr ab bs kaise b kr k BC ka jugaad kr ho jye toh isi month le aau microwave.
Savita- Tu preshan mt ho sb taiyaar ho gye h, aur is bar Tu le le BC.
Yeh sunn Sakshi khushi se uchal pdti h- thank yr savita, tera yeh ehsaan m kaise utarungi.
Savita- pgal h kya tu, is m kya ehsaan.
Sakshi- Tu nhi smjhegi ki meri kitni bdi mushkil tmne khatam kr di.
Savita- haa m toh bebkuff hu na, chal phone rkh ab m kaam h, sham ko aa k milti hu. Bye
Sakshi- bye, aana jrur sham ko.
Phone rkhne k baad Sakshi k pair k pair jameen p tik nhi rhe thay, uska mann kr rha tha khushi se naachne ka. Ussay khushi sambhali nhi ja rhi thi.
Sakshi ne TV on ki aur baccho ka wait krne lgi. Bacche apne tym se aaye toh sabne mil k lunch kiya, fir bacche apne room m chale gye aaram krne aur sakshi apne room m aa k bed p late gai aaram krne k lye. Sakshi ko intzar tha ki kb Neeraj aaye aur woh ussay baat kr bta paye ki paiso ka intzam ho gya h.
Sakshi ne apna phone utaya toh dekha ki WhatsApp p kisi ka msg tha. Sakshi ne khol k dekha toh Sahil ne uski dp p cmnt kiya tha "beautiful dp".
Sakshi- thanx bt itni b achi nhi h.
Turant Sahil ka reply aa gya- esa kisne kha aap se? Hme toh bhttt achi lgi.
Sakshi ko smjh nhi aaya ki kya reply kre islye usne bs- ok
Sahil- ek baat bolu agr bura na mane toh?
Sakshi- boliye
Sahil- aap na apni story hta lijiye.
Sakshi- kyu kya hua? Achi nhi h kya?
Sahil- achi toh h bt aap k shoulder p kuch black Black sa h.
Sakshi ne jaise dhyaan diya toh sharm k maare gadd si gai. Actually hua yeh tha ki Sakshi ne story m apni pic lgai thi jis m uski black bra ka strap blouse se bhr aa rha tha aur pic m clear dikh rha tha. Sakshi ne is baat p dhyaan nhi diya tha phle bt ab ek ajnabi woh b ek aadmi ne jb toka toh Sakshi jheel si gai aur turant story hta k phone side rkh diya. Sahil ne fir msg kiya pr Sakshi ki himmat nhi hue msg dekhne ki ya reply krne k sharm ki vjh se.
Sahil kitna acha h na, kitne logo ne dekhi hogi story bt kisi ne toka nhi, yeh itni care krta h, iski wife kitne khush rehti hogi issay. Kitne pyaar se baat krta h, kash yeh b thoda sa Sahil k jaise ho jye toh kitna acha h, bt inko toh mauka chahiye hota h jali kati sunane ka. Yeh sb sochte sochte sham ho jati h, Sakshi ka dhyaan tb tutta h jb Ruchi aa k kehti h- mummy m khelne jau bhr.
Sakshi- bhaiya kya kr rha h.
Ruchi- bhaiya toh soo rha h mummy.
Sakshi bed se uthti h aur kehti h- theek h beta pr jldi aa jana khel k.
Ruchi bhr nikl jati h aur Sakshi ghr k kaam m lg jati h.
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Chapter 4
Raat ko karib 8bje Neeraj nashe m jhumta hua ghr aata h toh dekhta h ki Sakshi Savita se bhr khade ho k baat kr rhi hoti h, us waqt toh Neeraj kuch nhi kehta h aur chupchaap andr aa jata h. Neeraj ko aaya dekh Sakshi b andr aati h aur kitchen m ha k ek glass pani le k aati h.
Sakshi- aaj toh bht der kr di aapne aane m? Aur fir p k aa gye aap?
Neeraj- ab kya tum se permission le k aana pdega ghr m? Haaa toh tere paise ki thodi p rha hu. Aur Tum bhr kya kr rhi thi us Savita k sath khade ho k? Hajar bar mna kiya h pr tmhe smjh nhi aata h.
Sakshi- sorry, savita se toh bs yeh puch rhi thi ki paise kb tk mil jye ge BC k? Ek baat btaiye aapko problem kya h Savita se? Jb dekho usko ulta seedha bolte rhoge?
Neeraj ka temper bdh jata h- haa hai problem aur m nhi chahta uska saya hmare ghr m pde. Ek no ki ayyash aurat h woh, idhr udhr muh marti firti h.
Sakshi- aap b na kya kya bolte h us k bare m, m toh aaj tk khi se b glt nhi lgi woh. Theek h aap keh rhe h toh nhi rkhungi mtlb koi b ussay pr BC k paise toh le lu. Aur ab aap yeh gussa chodiye aur fresh ho jaiye, m aapko psnd ka khana bnaya h.
Sakshi baat ko khatam krte hue pyaar se kehti, woh nhi chahti thi ki Neeraj ka mood off ho.
Neeraj fresh hone jata h toh Sakshi dinner lga deti h. Sb dinner krne baithte h toh Sakshi bhttt pyaar se bolti h.
Sakshi- suniye ji kuch btana tha aap ko?
Neeraj(nashe m dinner krte hue) - haa bol
Sakshi- aaj store p baat hue thi din m, woh aap se maafi maang rhe thay kl k lye(Sakshi thoda buttering krte hue boli)
Neeraj- woh toh maangni hi thi saalo ko.
Sakshi- puri baat to suniye.
Neeraj- haa toh bolo
Sakshi- woh log keh rhe thay ki agr hm chahe toh thoda thoda kr k de skte h payment.
Neeraj- dekho abi mere pass paise nhi h, agle mnth sochuga.
Sakshi- aap paise ki chinta mt kijiye woh m dekh lungi, aap bs yeh bta dijiye ki m le lu ya nhi?
Neeraj- tmhe jo krna h karo, bs mujh se umeed mt rkhna koi b.
Sakshi (mann m) - aap se toh waise b koi umeed nhi h mujhe. Thank you, permission dene k lye.
Sakshi ka dil khushi se bhr jata h pr woh chehre p show nhi krti h aur dinner khatam kr k table saaf krti h aur baccho ko sula k jb apne room m jati h toh dekhti h Neeraj kharate bja rha hota h.
Sakshi kpde change kr k ek nighty dalti h aur aa k bed p late jati aur phone check krti h.
Sahil ka msg pda hua hota jis m woh thanks bolta h story htane k lye. Sakshi is waqt itna khush thi ki woh sahil ko msg krti h.
Sakshi- hi
Sahil b us waqt online hota h toh turant reply krta h
Sahil- hello Sakshi, kaisi ho aap
Sakshi- ji badiya aur aap
Sahil- hm b mst h
Sakshi-maine baat kr li h in se aap kl din m 10bje k baad kbi b aa jyega paper le k.
Sahil- wow kl aata hu m 10bje aap k ghr, aap apni location bhej dijiye ga subh.
Sakshi- theek h.
Sahil sochta h thoda flirt krne ki
Sahil- woh kali makhi abi b h kya kandhe p??
Sakshi jaise hi yeh msg pdhti h toh fir se jheep jati h.
Sakshi- dhatt aap b kaisi baatein krte h.
Sahil- haa yeh sahi h aap kuch b kro toh koi baat nhi, hm jra sa kuch puch le toh problem ho jati h.
Sakshi- are m esa kb kha, aap baat hi esi kr rhe toh. Bt thank you mujhe meri glti k bare m bta diya aapne wrna mera toh dhyaan hi nhi gya.
Sahil- is m thank you ki kya baat h, waise kya kr rhi h aap?
Sakshi- bs soone ja rhi hu
Sahil- us black makhi k sath?
Sakshi- kya sahil ji aap b ek hi cheez k peeche pd gye. Gud nyt
Yeh msg kr Sakshi phone bnd kr k side m rkh deti h.
Sakshi itna jada khush thi ki khushi k mare usay neend nhi aati h aur woh idhr udhr karwate badalti rehti h. Woh sochti h ki jb microwave aayega toh m yeh krungi woh krungi aur b pta nhi kya kya uske khayalo m aane lgta h, tbi usay Sahil ka dhyaan aata h aur woh uski personality aur vyawahar k bare m sochne lgti h ki kitna bhala insaan h aur aurato ki kitni respect krta h.
Kl jb Sahil ji aayege toh unki ache se khatirdari kregi aur koshish kregi ki woh khush ho k jye taki baad m acha sa discount krwa ske. Inhi sb sapno aur socho m khoye usay neend aa jati h.

Agli subh jb Sakshi uthti h toh usay besabri se 10bje ka intzar hota h aur aaj uska waqt kay b nhi rha tha. Roj toh 10kb bjte thay usay pta nhi lgta tha pr aaj ek ek min bhari pd rha tha. Khair sbke jane k baad Sakshi jldi se nhati h aur ek black color ki saree pehn kr ready ho jati h. In sb se free ho k jb woh apna phone dekhti h toh usay Sahil ka Gud mrng ka msg k sath 10bje pahuchne ka msg milta h. Sakshi b gud mrng wish krti h aur likhti h jldi aaye, aapka intzar h hme.
Khair Sahil theek 10bje Sakshi k darwaje p khada bell bjata h. Sakshi jldi se darwaja kholti h
Sakshi smile krte hue- Namaste Sahil ji, aap toh tym k bht puntual h, theek 10bje pahuch gye.
Sahil b smile krte hue- ab kya kre koi hmara besabri se intzar kr rha h toh hmara b farz bnta h tym p pahuchne ka.
Sahil ki yeh baat sunn Sakshi sharma jati h aur us k gore chikne gaal sharm se lal ho jate h, njre neeche kr k Sahil ko andr aane ko kehti h aur usay baitha k jldi se kitchen se pani lati h. Sahil sofe p baitha hua formalities wale paper nikal rha hota h.
Sakshi- lijiye pani
Sahil hath bdha k pani ka glass leta h..
Sakshi- chai lenge ya coffee.
Sahil- jo mrji woh pila dijiye pr phle yeh form p sign kr dijiye aur id aur address prof k documents de dijiye.
Sakshi- 2min rukiye deti hu. Yeh bol Sakshi bedroom m jati h aur documents nikal k lati aur Sahil ko deti h. Documents lene m Sakshi ki najum unglia Sahil ki unglio se touch ho jati h toh Sakshi k jism m jhut jhuri si mach jati h. Sakshi jldi se hath keech leti h. Sahil documents ki pic leta h aur form bhre m busy ho jata h. Sakshi kitchen m jati h aur ftafat chai bnane lgti h.
Abi pani ubal hi rha hota h ki Sahil b kitchen m aa jata h.
Sakshi- are aap yha kyu aa gye, aap baithiye m aati hu.
Sahil muskurate hue- m toh yeh dekhne aaya tha ki aap microwave kha rkhegi aur kya wha power point h ya nhi??
Sakshi- ohh yeh sb b dekha jata h kya?
Sahil- haa dekhna pdta wrna jb demo k lye jate toh kbi kbi kitchen m power point nhi hota h toh problem hoti h.
Sakshi- acha. M socha h yha rkhne k lye. Sakshi kitchen k slab p ek corner dekhati h jha p switchpoint hota h.
Sahil- fir toh theek h. Waise ek baat bolu Sakshi ji?
Sakshi- ji boliye
Sahil- aaj toh aap is black saree m bhttt khoobsurat lg rhi h. Lgta h black aapka fav color h?
Sahil se apni tareef sunn Sakshi sharma jati h aur njre neeche kr- thank you.
Sahil- pleasure is all mine Sakshi ji.
Baat krte krte chai bn jati h. Sakshi 2cuo m chai nikalti h aur sath m biscuits. Aaiye bhr baithte h.
Sahil kitchen se nikl vaps sofe p baith jata h aur Sakshi chai ki tray le k bhr aati h aur Sahil ko chai de k khud b samne rkhe sofe p baith jati h.
Sahil- Sakshi ji yeh form check kr lijiye aur sign kr dejiye.
Sakshi form dekh k sign kr deti h aur dono chai p ne lgte h. Sahil jaise hi chai ki sip leta h- woww sakshi ji chai toh bhttt achi bnai h aapne.
Sakshi apni tareef sunn khush hoti h aur kehti h- Sahil ji ek help chahiye thi aap se.
Sahil- ek nhi hm 2help krege pr ek shart p?
Sakshi- ji kaun si shart?
Sahil- yhi ki aap mujhe Sahil ji nhi sirf Sahil bolegi.
Sakshi- theek h mnjur h bt tbi jb aap b mujhe sirf Sakshi bolege Sakshi ji nhi.
Sahil- haa toh Sakshi boliye ki kya help chahiye h.
Sakshi- woh kya hai maine kbi microwave use nhi kiya h aur na mujhe jada pta h is k bare m toh plzz kya aap mujhe seekha denge.
Sahil- are yeh kaun si bdi baat h, m number h aap k pass jb jrurt pde toh call kr lijiyega.
Sakshi khush hote hue- thank you soo much Sahil.
Thode der dono idhr udhr ki baat krte h fir Sahil chala jata h. Sahil k jane k baad Sakshi bhtt khush hoti h kyuki uska sapna pura hone wala tha. Sakshi abi lunch bana hi rhi thi ki Sahil ka msg aata h. Sakshi aapka EMI ka kaam ho gya h, aap jb chahe 3000/- down payment karke microwave utha skti h.
Sakshi msg pdh k nuskurati h aur reply krti h- Sahil jitna b tmhe thank you bolu utna kam hai.
Sahil- esa kya kr diya maine.
Sakshi- aapki madad se mera ek sapna pura hone wala h.
Sahil- congratulations, kya m jaan skta hu aur kaun kaun se sapne bache hue h aapke jinko pura krna chahti ho.
Sakshi- hai toh bht sare pr m pta h woh sayd hi pure ho, khair chodiye m paise ka arrangement kr k jldi hi le jaungi microwave.
Sahil- ok Sakshi, aaj koi story nhi lgai?
Sakshi(shararat se)- aapko bda interest aa rha h story dekhne m?
Sahil-(flirt krte hue) ab kya kre aap black m kuch jada hi khoobsurat lgti h toh mann krta h dekhne ka aapko.
Sakshi(chhedte hue) - lgta h aapki wife ko btana pdega ki aap dusro ko bhtt dekh rhe h aaj kal.
Sahil msg toh pdh leta hai par koi reply nhi deta. Sakshi ko lgta h ki sayd wife ki vjh se darr gya, aur Sakshi apne kaam m lg jati h.
Khair sb kuch routine se chalta h aur raat m dinner nipta k sakshi jb room m aati h Neeraj hga hua milta h. Sakshi smjh jati h ki aaj b jheelna hi pdega, kpde change kr k Sakshi bed p aati aur us k aate hi neeraj us p chhadh pdta h aur apna kaam nipta k soo jata h.
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Superb.....
Excellent writing skills....
Keep rocking....
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Awesome and amazing update Namaskar Namaskar Namaskar
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(25-01-2023, 06:23 PM)abcturbine Wrote: Superb.....
Excellent writing skills....
Keep rocking....

Thanks a lot..  Namaskar
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(25-01-2023, 07:06 PM)Rahul007 Wrote: Awesome and amazing update Namaskar Namaskar Namaskar

Thanks a lot.. 

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