Fantasy Agnivarsha The incomplete LOVE story.

[imravan1997im]

Hii frinds me hu Ravan 
Me agni bhai ka bahut bada fan hu.
Aur isliye me agni bhai ki sabse khas story ko fir se post karna chahata hun.
Agar aap sab log muze support kar te ho to me kal se hi story post karna suru kar duga.

[imravan1997im]

FriendsyekahanihaiAgnikiijisneekladkisepyarkiya,,,,,agnineushladkiseishhadtak
pyarkiyakiiusneushladkikeliyeapnasabkuchchoddiyaapnaghar,,,,apnaparivar,,,,
apnedost,,,,apnisanse,,,,apniatma,,,,apniroohyahantakkkiiapnijaanbhiushladkike
uparusnekurbankardiyatakiiwoladkisahisalamatrahekhushrahe,auraajkejamane
sayedhiikoiaishadeewanahojoapnepyarkeliyeishhadtakjapaeparagnineaisha
kiya ushne apni jaan lutadiya apne pyar ko mehfuzz rakhne ke
liye,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
YeZindagiTereSaathHo,
YeArzooDinRaatHo
MaiTereSangSangChalu,
TuHarSafarMaiMereSathHo
MaiKantoParBhiChalPadu,
TerePyarKiJabBarsaatHo
KabhiShamDhaleJabHumMile,
NaDinDhaleNaRaatHo
YeZindagiBasTereSathHo
YeZindagiBasTereSathHo

[Nil199]

yaar tum log eossip access kyasekar rahe ho???

[imravan1997im]

Bhai log plz aap log batao ki me ye story post karu ki nahi.

[imravan1997im]

update 1-introduce

hindustan ka ek chota sa seher puri , ye seher orissa state ka ek chota aur bikashit seher hai , ye seher ek '. seher hai ,yahan pe lord jagganath jii ka tample bhi hai aur khubsurat samandar bhi , aur pure duniya me ek louta surya mandir(sun tample) konark tample puri me hii moujud hai , me jitna bhi ish seher ke bareme baat karun kam hai ishliye abb kahani suru karte hain


Agni das ek mamuli aur sidha sadha sa ladka jo kii ek uper middle class family se belong karta hai uske pariwar me uske papa Ram kumar das jo kii ek helth department me ek officer hain , agni kii mom Asha das jo kii ek doctor hain Agni ke do bhai aur ek bahain vikas aur manish dono job karte hain aur shadi sudha hain , bade bhai ka 1 ladka hain manjhle bhai ka 1 ladka hai Agni teenon bhai mese sabse chota hai aur sabka chahrta hai

Agni ek 23 saal ka handsome aur jinda dil ladka hai hamesha apni life ke har ek moment ko bade shaan se jeeta hai wo kehta hai kii life bohut choti hoti hai to life main ladhai jhagda na karke ache se jeena chahiye wese to wo bohut hi saant kisam ka hai lekin agar koi ushe ya uske gharwalon ko ya phir uske doston mese kishi ko agar koi pareshan kare to wo pal bhar me hii ek monster ban jata hai aur ishliye kisi me itna dum nahin kii wo ushe haath lagaye chahe wo koi bhi ho


uske do jigri dost hain abhi aur dev dono ush par jaan chidakte hain aur agni bhi unn par apna jaan chidakta hai abhi ek upper middle class family se hai aur abhi ek natkhat kisam ka banda hai aur dev ek high class family se belong karta hai aur dev ek tharkii kisam ka banda hai in teenon ki dosti badi ajeeb tarike se suru hui thi jab ye log class 13th me the tab suru hui thi inki dosti

agni aur abhi bachpan se hi dost the ye dono padosi the hamesa ikathe padhayi karte the sararat kiya karte the aur masti kiya karte the ek din college me lunch time ke waqt kuch ladke dev ke behen rupa ko ched rahe the aur ye baat dev ke ek dost ne door se dekh liya aur jakar dev ko bata diya aur dev apne doston ke saath wahan ake dhamak gaya wahan rupa ke paas abhi khada tha jishne un ladkon ko wahan bhagaya tha aur rupa ishwaqt abhi ko thanks keh rahi thi

dev ko laga sayad abhi hii wo saksh hai aur usne apne doston ke sath milke hamla bol diya aur buri tarah se sab milke abhi ko pitne lage , rupa ne dev ko bohut roka par dev nahin ruka aur abhi ko pitne ke baad wahan se chala gaya jab ye baat agni ko pata laga wo pagal ho gaya aur bhagta hua ground par aya aur usne dekha ke abhi ko bohut chot lagi hai abhi ne ushe rokne ki koshish bhi kii lekin wo nahin ruka aur jakar dev ke samne khada hogaya aur dev se pucha ki kya tune abhi ko mara dev ne bataya haan mene mara aur phir dev age kuch bol pata ki agni dev ke uper japat gaya aur buri tarah marne laga ye dekh dev ke sare dost darke mare whan se bhag gaye agni buri tarah dev ko marr raha tha tabhi abhi wahan apahunchta hai

usne agni ko rok diya aur shant karne laga idhar dev ko bohut chot lagi thi tabhi wahan rupa ayi aur usne dev se pucha bhai apne abhi ko kyun mara dev ne bataya wo tumhe ched raha tha ishi liye mene ushe mara rupa ye baat sunke chounk gayi aur usne bataya kii abhi ne mujhe un ladkon se bachaya tha na kii ched raha tha samjhe ab dev ko apne kiye par pachtawa ho raha tha usne abhi se maafi mangi aur abhi ne use maaf kar diya fir dev ne kaha yaar abhi tu bohut lucky hai jo tujhe agni jesha dost mila hai aur sale mere dost mujhe chod ke bhag gaye aur dev ne pucha can we friends aur fir ye teenon dost ban gaye jigri dost,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

[imravan1997im]

Update 2 - The Dream



dopehar ka waqt tha lekin wahan pura ghana andhera raat tha Agni ek aise jungle main tha jidhar suraj ki ek halkii roshni bhi dikhayi nahin de rahi thi jeshe amavas ki raat ho wahan pe itna sanatta tha ke jeshe wahan shaitan ka vas ho agni dhire dhire age badhta hai usi waqt use achanak koyi awaaz sunai deti hai agni ke kadam wahin pe ruk jate hain aur wo piche mudke dekhta hai kii ye kish kii awaaz hai ek baar phir wo awaaz ati hai jise sunke agni ke dil kii dhadkan tej ho jati hai

wauuuuuuuuu wauuuuuuuuu ye awaaz sunke agni samajh jata hai kii ye bhediyon ka awaaz hai aur wo samajh jata hai ki bhediye sayed uske liye arahe hain darke mare uske pair wahin jam jate hain woh hill bhi nahin paa raha tha woh bhagne ki koshis kar raha tha lekin wo hill bhi nahin paa raha tha dekhte hi dekhte wo awaaz aur karib arahi thi aur karib aur karib aur karib aur phir achanak

uske samne bhediye aaa jate hain dekhte hii dekhte wahan bhediyon ka pura ka pura jhund jama ho jata hai jeshe wo than ke aye ho kii shikar karna hii hai unn bhedhiyon ko to dekh kar kisika bhi khoon safed ho jaye wo sare bhediye bahut bade the ek ek ki hight kam se kam 6 se 7 foot hogi hii wo bhediye aam bhediyon se alag the unka speed unke hight unke ankhe jo lal thi agr ankhon me dekhon to lage jeshe unke ankhe jal rahi ho achanak se wo sare bhediye hatt jate hain unke bich se ek bahut bada bhediya samne atta hai uska ek ankh pe khanjar ka nishan hota hai jishe dekh agni kii ankhe phati kii phati reh jati hain aur achanak wo bhediya bhokta hai wauuuuuuuuuu wauuuuuuuuu aur agle pal agni ke uper chalang maar deta hai aur tabhi

achanak agni ki ankh khul jati hai aur uska sapna tut jata hai wo pura ka pura pashine se bhiga hua hota hai uske paas uska bhatija khada hoke ushe kab se awaaz de raha tha agni ke bhatije ka naam shreyas hai shreyas agni se kehta hai chachu jaldi uthiye dadi bula rahi hain ajj monday hai aur apko dadi ko leker mandir bhi to jana hai aur lot ke mujhe,raju aur didi ko college bhi pahunchana hai jaldi uthiye chachu phir agni kehta hai abe uth to raha hoon jaa bhag yahan se aur dadi ko bol 15 min me aya aur phir agni bed se uth jata hai aur apne sapne ke bare me sochne lagta hai are yaar ish sapne se mera picha kab chootega main kab raat ko chain se so sakunga pata nahin bachpan se hii mujhe ye sapna rojana kyun atta hai aur wo sala kaniya bhediya bhachapan se hii mere piche pada hai

kahin mera ish sapne se koi link to nahin hai yahi sochte sochte uski nazar calender pe padta hai aur kuch yaad atta hai are ajj to collage khulne wala hai aur ajj wo apne Junior's kii jamke ragging karega , dev to raat ko so bhi nahin paya hoga raging ko lekar sala tharki hai na ajj to sayed hii wo kishi ladki ko chode ragging ke naam par aur phir agni yahii sab sochte hue mushkura deta hai aur ush kane bhediye ko galiyan bakte hue bathroom me ghoos jata hai

idhar niche agni ki maa drawing room me bethke agni ko galiyan de rahi thi nalayak kahin kaa kitna der kar raha hai kitne samay lagata hai bathroom ke andar lagta hai me ajj let ho jaungi hospital bhi jana hai aur lat sahab abhi tak nahin aye

ushi waqt wahan agni ajata hai aur dekhta hai kii maa bohut gusse me hai to wo jake unke pair chunke good morning bolta hai aur maa ka gussa thoda kam hojata hai aur apne maa ko leke pehle mandir or phir hospital pe drop karta hai aur ghar akar apne bhatiji aur bhatijon ko college drop karta hai aur wahan se apne dost dev ke ghar pe chala jata hai jahan abhi aur dev uska intajar kar rahe the aur agni ko dekte hi wo dono baras padte hain

dev jyada gussa tha kyuki use ragging jo leni thi , agni dono ko gusse me dekh bola bas karo be nahin to ek mukka de dunga salon aur wo bhi free sari hero giri dhari ki dhari reh jayegi aur karliyo ragging ye sun dev kii phat jati hai aur wo kehta abe bura maan gaya kya hum to mazak kar rahe the chal sale narayan ke dukan pe tujhe cigarette pilata hoon agni ne muhn banate hue bola lekin

[imravan1997im]

main Rajshree bhi khaunga sale tune mera mood kharab kar diya hai dev bola chal thik hai tu bhi kya yaad karega kish dildar se pala pada hai aur phir teenon chal dete hai narayan ke dukan pe
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[imravan1997im]

Update 3

achanak 2 bike ake narayan ke dukan ke samne rukta hai ushme agni , dev , abhi bethe hue hote hain narayan ka dukan veraity store tha narayan in logon ka dost tha aur uska ek veraity store tha aur usme mobile me gana , video download bhi karwata tha aur ye teenon roj narayan ke dukan pe ake cigarate pite the aur apna dev to rojana yahan se special video bharwata tha aur narayan ka dukan girls college ke pass tha ishliye wahaan ladkon ki achi khashi bhid bhi rahti thi narayan ek dum mast banda tha ya kahen to pakka loundiaa baaz tha apne dev kii tarah narayan aur dev ki bahut achi jamti thi wo kehte hai na ek se bhale do

ab age badhte hain teenon bike pe se utarte hain narayan unko dekh ke kehta hai kya be aaj itna let ho gaya , tum logon ke collage main ragging start ho gayi hogi ye baat sunke agni aur abhi ek sath kehte hain abe sale tujhe kaise pata be to narayan kehta hai mere ko dev ne bataya tabhi to me ban dhan ke khada hoon kab se pata hai tum logon ka intejar kar raha tha

aur phir agni , abhi dev ke taraf dekhte hain to dev apni batishi dikha deta hai aur kehta hai abe mene kaal narayan ko bataya to wo bohut khush hogaya aur bola ushko bhi jana hai mene kaha to chal koun sa apne baap ka collage hai tubhi chal ladkion ko patayenge ragging ke naam par aur dev ne teen nakharalimangai aur narayan ne diye , tabhi agni ne narayan ke hath se sare nakharalile liye ek abhi ko dekar baki dono khud rakh liye to dev ne kaha abe sale mujhe bhi de agni ne kaha sale tu mera ganaa pile tune humko narayan ke bare nahin bataya aur sale mujhe pata hai tu kal jaroor naran se free main special video leke gaya hoga aur hume nahin dikhaya tu to mera ganaa hii pile dev kehta hai maa kasam se abhi tak nahin dekhi raat ko tujhe dikha dunga abhi bola sale mere ko pata hai tu kal raat ko video dekh ke jaroor teen char baar muth maar di hogi dev bolta hai abe sirf do baar mari hai be tabhi sabhi hasne lagte hain aur agni dev ko cigaret de deta hai aur teenon ek sath cigarate sulgate hain kash pe kash lagate hain

aur tabhi wahan se scooty pe do ladki gujar rahin thi kii achanak se narayan ke dukan ke pass ake ruk jati hain dono mese piche wali age atti hai jishe dekh agni uske ankon me kho jata hai agni ko ush ladki ke ankhon ko dekh kisiki yaad ane lagti hai lekin jyada der nahin wo ladki atti hai aur sidhe jake agni ,dev aur abhi ke muhn se cigaret nikal ke nali me phek deti hai

ye dekh dev kehta hai abe mere peshe fenk diye be mahnga cigaret tha sale mene sirf do hi kash mari thi abhi use kehta koi baat nahin beta ja shirt pant khol ke nali me kud ja aur cigaret nikal le jishe dev chid jata hai aur kehta sale teri ankhen hai ya batata vada dikayi nahin deta kya mera cigaret behke chala gaya hai aur nala kitna bada hai me dub jaunga mujhe terna nahin atta sale aur yahan agni jake ush ladki se kehta hai tum pagal to nahin ho ye kya kiya wo ladki kehti hai mene jo kiya tumhare bhale ke liye hi kiya hai , pata hai cigaret pine se kitni bimariyan hoti hain cancer,tv,lunks problem aur na jane kya kya ishliye mene jo kiya acha kiya

agni bolta acha to jake cigaret banani wali company band kyun nahin karti badi ayii philosophy jhadnewali chal nikal yahan se pagal kahin kii sara mood kharab kardiya wo ladki chidhjati hai aur phir wo ladki gusse me agni se kehti hai oye sun mere sang bakwass na kariyo agar bakwas kii aur age se cigaret pite dekha to security officer me complain kar dundi aur andar beth ke pite rahio bidii samjha phir wo ladki wahan se apne dost ke sath schooty me beth ke chali jati hai

agni bas use jate hue dekhta rehta hai ush ladki ke jane ke baad abhi bola abe ye to apni hii marke chali gayi phir agni kehta koi baat nahin yaar agli baar pel dunga sali ko aur phir agni , dev , abhi aur narayan chal dete collage ki taraf

collage me pahuchte hii unn charon ko kuch ladke awaaz dete hain aur ye charon unke taraf hii chal dete hain ye ladke unke hi collage ke dost the deepak ,lucky ,bicky ,taru ,gopal ,muna aur gitu

[imravan1997im]

dev unn sabse puchta hai kya haal hai be kahan tak pahunche deepak bolta hai abe mera to ek round ho gaya bubu aur gitu round pe gaye hain ye log bhi unke saath beth jate hain aur ragging suru kar dete hain,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,