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Aapko nayi kahani ke jo idea diye pls uspe gaur kare 

I think ye wali ko yahin oe khatam kar deni chahiye nahi yo monotonous ho jayega..

Yes mai zaroor karonga

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Thoda busy hone ka karan likh na paya abhi jaha tak ye kahani sochi hai waha tak aaj se update likhonga

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Oh sake to unki request kisi dusri story mein puri karna lekin agar aapko lagta hai ki aapne jo socha hai aur story le liye set kiya hai aage ki kahani ko to aap wahi likhiye jo aapke dimag mein chal raha hai aap jaise bhi likhoge hum readers ko padhne mein maja aayenga

Yes isme maine thoda immotion accident likha hai jo ab aage likhna shuru karonga aur kismat kiya achanak se change karta hai wohi is kahani ka main plot hai

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You are very skillful writer....
Keep going as planned....
Missing your writings so much....

Dhanyawad bhai par mai kahani ko reder ki wish karne ke chakkar mai ya unke kahane par mere kahani khud hi flop kar deta ho isiliye maine 2 din ka gape liya ...

Aur jo socha hai wohi likhonga

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Kismat bada ajeeb khel khelti hai ...kisi ko kuch nahi pata kal uski zindgi mai kiya toofan aa sakta hai...

Jaise ki ab yaha afreen ko laga sab thik ho gaya hai lala ram jaisa use insan mila jo hawas ke sath usse pyar bhi karne laga hai ...

Aur yaha nazbeen ko bhi yahi laga ki Bhiku use woh sukh de raha hai jisko woh miss kar rahi hai ...

Par naseeb mai to ye chand din ki khushi hi dono ke likhi thi ...

Nazbeen kheto mai us pagal se chud kar acche se farig hue ...

Bhiku par use gussa to aaya par ghar afreen ke ab na jakar wapis aayi ...

Raste mai kuch ab baat dono mai nahi hue ...par raste mai usne man hi man bhiku ko maaf kar diya ...

Aur dusre din usne naye tarika se bhiku se sex karne ka man ab uske dil mai aaya ....

Par woh nahi janti kaisa sex ho ....lakin ab yaha agle din dono ki life mai bahot kuch hona tha ....

Pahle afreen ki baat karte hai....

Aaj present day ....shariq apne adat ke anusar woh subah ayyashi karne chala gaya apne dosto yaro ke sath ....

Aur yaha afreen ne socha aaj lala 2 baje zaroor uski gaand marne aayega ....

Waha lala bhi anchudi gaand chodne ki soch kar 2 baje ka intizar karne laga....

Tab karib 11 baje shariq ka call aaya ....

Shariq...hello afreen

A...shariq aaj apne khud is time samne se call kara mujhe yaqeen nahi ho raha sab kheriyat to hai...

S...ha afreen sab kheriyat hai ....mai tumse ek baat karna chahata ho jo abhi hosh mai kar raha ho ....mai tumse Bahot pyar karta ho...

Mai tumhe mar kar khush nahi hota ...par is sharab ke shok ne mujhe barbad kar diya.....

Ye kah kar shariq rone jaise laga ...

S....mai tumhe koi khushi nahi de paya itni haseen ladki ke milne ke bad bhi mai tumhari qadar na kar paya .....

Mai rundibazi bhi karne laga ...par tumne mere galti par hamesha parda hi dala
........

A ...ap ko mai bhi bahot pyar karti ho ...sharab ko chhod do ...ap jaise pahle the Waise ho jao....

Aise dono mai kuch baate chalne lagi ....yaha afreen bhi ab lala se kiye hue sex ke bare mai soch kar apne par gussa aya ...

Aur woh aaj lala ko apni anmol gaand dene ka bhi man banaya tha ....

Waise yaha shariq ko uske badmash dost isharo isharo mai afreen ki chudai ke bare mai kahte the ....

Par aaj billa jo kafi bada gunda badmash tha usi ne shariq ko bigada tha sirf afreen ki chut ke chakkar mai
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Par kahte hai na garib aadmi apni izzat se dusro ko nahi khilwata ...

Par ameer aadmi parmotion aur apne business ke chakkar mai apne biwiyo ko apne boss ya client se chudwa lete hai ....

Tab shariq ne call cut kari ....30 min dono mai baate kari ....

Jab waha billa aaya to shariq ne call cut kar di...

Billa....dekh shariq mai tumhe ek offer dena chahata ho ..

S...kiya offer bhai ....

Billa.....mai tujh se kafi mahino se baat karna chahata tha ....

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Par mujh ko lagta hai aaj kah deta ho....

S...ha bolo bhai ...

Billa....tu nahi chahata ki tere amdni 2 lakh mahine ya usse upper ho...

S...ha par kaise ....

Billa...tu nahi chahata tere biwi ko woh sab sukh mile jiski woh haqdar hai ....

S....ha kyo nahi ....

Billa....aur Tujhe kuch karna bhi na pade....

S....aisa ho sakta hai kya....

Billa...ha kyo nahi ....bus ab tu mere baat sun...

S...ha bolo....

Billa....tere biwi mujhe acchi lagti hai aise khubsurat aurat maine aaj tak nahi dekhi uska gateelapan uska madkta uski noorani chehra ab mujhe Zyada pareshan karne lga ....use apni rakhel hafte mai 3 ya 4 bar banana chahata ho ...

Iske badle mai Tujhe 2 lakh mahina donga aur jo tere biwi ko donga woh alag....aur mai apne sathi neta mantri security officer wale un sab se bhi chudwaonga ..

Yani use rundi banaonga bol Tujhe manzoor hai ....Waise bhi tere zindgi tujh par bojh hai ....

Ab shariq tha to garib sharabi.....par ye baat apni biwi ke bare mai sunkar uske iman ne use lalkara.....

Aur yaha dono mai bahas hue phir hath pair chalane ki nobat aa gayi....

Wahi ek hockey jo billa ke pass hamesha rahti thi yani uske aadmi ke pass un logo ne shariq ko bahot mara....

Yaha tak ki shariq ke deemag par bhi gahra asar hua ....aur woh pura laho loohan ho gaya...

Yaha billa bhi gusse mai tha hi ...usne chaku nikal kar shariq ko marna chaha....

Par behosh hone se pahle Shariq ne woh chaku usse chhin kar billa ke hi pet mai gused diya....

Aur yaha shariq ab mara ya behosh hua pata nahi ....


Ab dusri traf danish ko ye shaq hua ki uski biwi kisi aur se chud rahi hai ....kyoki aaj tak woh danish ke sath sex karte time itna exitment mai nahi aayi thi ....

Aur yaha nazbeen bhi bahot khush ya kaho uska chehra aur chamkadar ho gaya tha ....

To aaj ke din hi jaise bataya tha ki bhiku danish ke kam ss hamesha bareli jata tha ...

Par aaj subah danish bhi biku ke sath gaya.....

Yaha dono bareli pahuche ek office mai gaye ....waha 3 log the teeno kisi bade film ke bade don jaise lag rahe the

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Waha aaj biku ke pass paiso ka bag na dekh kar ek kale se bade don dekhne wala aadmi ....danish ko gandi gandi gaaliya dene laga...

Danish ser jhukaye sun raha tha ....to dusre aadmi ne kaha ki tera ghar tera sab kam tere zameen jaydad sab hamare pass girvi hai ....

Tujhe 3 caror dena hai aur tu aaj ke din bhi khali hath aaya aur pichli bar ye tera nokar aade paise leke aaya....

Hua ye tha ki danish ne bank se bhi karza liya tha ek bade business ke liye ....aur woh bank kar karza nipta to raha tha ...par business mai kafi profit hone ke karan...woh aur karza lene ki socha ....

Par bank walo ne kaha ki woh pahle ye karza pura kar de...tab new karza dega ....

Aada property abhi bhi bank ke pass thi ...tab apne business badane ke liye ye badmasho ke chakkar mai fas gaya ....

Yaha aur ameer aur ameer banne ke chakkar mai usne apna ghar bhi girvi un badmasho ke pass aur kuch aur property rakh di ......

Business to chal raha tha ...lakin thoda yaha sal mai kuch machine kharab chalne lage ....

Aur ek bada contract ek aur businessman ne danish ke hatho se chhin liya ...

Danish is mamle mai bahot seedha tha ...use business to accha chalaya par jab bade bade assignment milne lage to danish karza leta chala gaya ....in badmasho se bhi caroro rs le liye jo waqt par asal byaz soot sab time se deta tha ...

Aur bank ki kishte bhi time se nikalta tha ...par yahi ek neta ke bete ki nazar iske kam par gayi .....

Aur Zyada profit ke chakkar mai usne apne rutbe aur source se ye is sal ka contract apne nam kar liya ....

Isse danish ko sab doobta hua nazar aaya.....

Tab teesre aadmi ne filahal nazbeen ko dekha tha to woh nazbeen ko apni rakhel banane ko kaha....

Yaha danish ko bura laga par usne socha agar 2 mahine nazbeen inki rakhel ban jayegi to use accha time apne business ko phir se mazboot karne ko milega....

Yaha shariq ne apni aayashi ke liye afreen ka soda nahi kara

Par yaha danish ne apni biwi ka soda karne ko tayyar ho gaya....

Tab waha bikhu bhi khada tha...ye baat bhiku ko bahot buri lagi

Woh bhi garib hi tha par woh nazbeeen se pyar karne laga tha use pata tha nazbeen jaise ladki use 7 janam mai bhi nahi mil payegi .....

Aur use nazbeen ko rundi banane ki baat sunkar bahot gussa aaya ....

Usne danish ke faisle se sunnane pahle wahi table par ek paper wait rakha tha ....

Use utha kar teesre aadmi ke sir par mara ...par woh chot aise deemag par padi ki woh aadmi wahi dher ho gaya ....

Ab danish to kafi dar gaya.....aur yaha danish aur bhiku ko marne 2 aadmi bade.....

Par yaha danish aur bhiku apne ko bachane ke chakkar mai un dono se kafi marpeet hone lagi
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Danish ko to Waise bhiku par bahot gussa aaya tha ...ki nazbeen ko agar un logo se chudwa leta to kuch to pareshani kam hoti ...par biku ne sab khel bigad diya

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Apne ko bachana bhi tha lakin yaha un ke aur sathi aa gaye dono ko to jaise jaan se mar diya hi samjho ....aur dono buri trah se ghayal ho gaye ...

Un logo ko laga ye bus marne hi wale hai to dono ko apne aur sathiyo ke madad se bahar kahi fikwa diya ....aur yaha dono hi naseeb se bache ....

Par kisi ne office se security officer ko call kar diya ....yaha kuch aisa hua ki dono hospital.mai the dono ki halat kharab thi
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Ye wohi hospital tha jaha abhi shariq bhi apni zindgi mot se lad raha tha.


Yaha biku par shariq par danish par ...teeno par 302 ki dafa bhi lag gayi thi ....agar teeno bach bhi jate to jail jate

Yahi se ab nazbeen aur afreen ke upper musibat ke pahad toot padna tha abhi dono ko kuch nahi pata....


Aur pata to nazbeen ko bhi na tha.....

Par jab yaha sham ko nazbeeen ko security officer ke zariye pata chala to woh hospital bhagi ....

Aur 2 baje se pahle afreen ko pata chala woh bhi hospital bhagi ....

Ab yaha 2 din ilaj chala lala ne lakho rs ke karib kharch bhi kare

Lala.bhi aaya tha par ab bhi kafi paisa chahiye tha ...yaha shariq koma mai chala gaya tha....

Aur aise hi halat nazbeen ke shohar aur uske yaar ki thi ...

Halaki yaha naz aur afreen ek hi hospital mai hokar nahi mile ..

Par story skip karte hue....

Naz ke maa baap ne jitna ho saka paiso se help kari naz ka bhi personal paise jewar bhi chale gaye....

1 week mai ab bada operation hona tha yani next week ke andar yaha nazbeen ka bhi ghar jab bechna cahaha aur property bhi to pata chala sab ye girwi hai ....

Aur woh sadak par aa gayi ....lala bhi ab Zyada kharch nahi kar sakta tha usne apne hath khade kar diye ....

Aur naz ke maa baap ne bhi ...naz ka ab to ghar bhi nahi raha

Ye samjho 1 week mai sab khatam ho gaya ....tab aayi afreen aur naz ke milne ka time ....

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Yaha lala elec ke chakkar mai ab kuch din use neta logo ke sath rahna tha waha chala gaya....

Naz k maa baap bhi naz ko uski halat par chhodne ke liye majboor the ...ab yaha koi mara to nahi tha jisse kisi ko sabar aa jai aur woh apni life mai lot aaye ...

Naz aur afreen ittifaq se hospital canteen mai bethe the woh bhi amne samne hi ...

Par dono mai koi baat nahi hue...woh apni apni soch mai bethe the ....

Tab yaha afreen ne apna mob nikala aur ab usne danish ko call karna chaha ....

Yaha danish ka mob band tha usne bahot try kara ....pr call kaise lagta ....

Tab ek no aur milaya ..ye no naz ka tha ...ye no tab afreen ke pass safe tha...jab biku afreen ki help karne chala jata tha....

Yaha hospital wale bhi Zyada bhojh dono ka nahi rakh sakte the unko to roz paisa chahiye tha ...

Yaha lala ke karan shariq ki jaan to bach gayi par woh koma mai chala gaya ....

Aur hospital walo ne uski chuuti karna chaha ya roz paiso ke madad se use yahi rahne ka bhi kaha ....

Yaha afreen har man gayi thi to usne man hi man faisla chuuti karne ka kara...

Aur nazbeen bhi har manne lagi thi par yaha Waise biku ki halat kuch thik to thi par aise nahi ki uska ya danish ka ilaj band kar de.....

Tab afreen ne usi time biku ne jo no naz ka diya tha kuch help paiso ke liye use karna chahi ....

Aur yaha biku ki mot usi time ho gayi biku ka khel khatam ....

Par danish bacha hua tha....biku ki mot ka abhi naz ko nahi pata tha....

Aur main usi ke operation ke liye paise ki zaroorat thi....

Biku jo thik to ho raha tha par na jane kis karan uski death ho gayi.....

Ab dono ke pati hi bache the ...jo dusre din afreen apne pati ko leke apne ghar chali gayi .


Aur biku ki mot se naz kafi royi ...aur ab uska antim sanskar bhi subah kaise bhi naz ne karwa diya....

Ab uske pati ka bhojh use uthana tha ...jaha ab bilku rahta tha wahi woh apne pati ko leke aayi ...

Kahne ko woh ab zabt kari property mai hi tha par Zyada din kaise rah sakti thi aur apne maa baap ke pass le jana nahi chahati thi .....

Yaha naz ko jab call kara to naz samne hi thi ....aur dono isi bahane mile aur khub apas mai roye dhoye....dono hi barbad ho gaye....

Yaha ab naz ko roz 2000 rs apne pati ke liye chahaiye tha jo dressing aur uski dawai mai kharach hona tha....

Biku ki mot ka asar bhi kafi naz par hua tha....

Aur udhar afreen ko jo kuch machine bhi lagayi thi shariq ko uske liye bhi 3000 ya 4000 ka kharcha hona tha

Ab yaha dono kiya karenge ....yahi se ab aage ki hawas aur bhookh asal mai kahani shuru kaho ya end ki taraf jati hue samjho .....

Ab yaha dono apas mai milenge ya koi alag alag rasta apne marzi se chunenge .....

Hawas kiya phir se dono par bhari padegi ....aur bhookh unss kiya kiya karwayegi.....

Dekhte hai next update mai

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Waise to lala ki help se cort ne jamanat de di aur naz ke maa baap ne bhi jamanat le li jab tak dono mai koi thik nahi ho jata tab tak....

Lala ki shop uska nokar jo kafi wafadar tha woh sambhlane laga ....

Aur lala ne kaha bhi jo cheez chahiye de diya kare....

Lala ke nokar ka nam ganesh tha....jo 22 sal ka ladka tha ....

Woh kuch rashan dene afreen ke yaha aaya ....tab aafreen ne usse 5k dene ki baat kari ....

To usne lala ko call lagaya aur loudspeaker open kar diya...

Ganesh....lala ji mamsahib ne kaha hai ki 5k de de....

Lala....abe bosdi ke pata nahi mai yaha 1 week se Zyada elec ke chakkar mai aaya ho sala 2 bar chudai kari aur lakho rs mera kharch ho gaya dukan bhi ghate mai aa gayi...

Apne pati ko bachana ka shok hai to woh kisi se bhi chudwaye ....

Lala ki ye baat sunkar afreen ko bahot jhatka laga....par afreen kafi samjhdar thi ....

Woh sochne lagi ki lala ne itni uski madad kari to ab shyad woh chid gaya hoga...

Par yaha afreen ko ye to pata chala ki usne apne nokar ganesh ko sab bata diya tha kiya...

Jo woh ganesh ke samne aise baat kar raha tha....

Lala ne call cut kar di...par aaj kaise bhi 5k hospital mai jama.to karne the...


Ab afreen ne bhikh mangte hue ganesh se 5k ka intizam karne ko kaha...


Par ganesh ne jo kaha woh afreen ko aur ab bada jhatka dene wala tha ...uska pati samne koma mai tha.....

Aur ganesh ki baat sunkar afreen sakte mai aa gayi .....

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Sorry dosto mai ye story band karna chahata tha kintu maine socha apki mai klpd nahi karonga ....

Maine ye story achanak se roki woh isliye ki mere ab kuch story ek se hi pattern par chalne lagi....aur mujhe khud maza nahi aa raha tha ...

Maine bus ek hi story kuwari ladki ke upper shyad koi aur site par likhi thi ...

Ab mai ek si story likh likh kar bor ho gaya ....ab maine kuch gahan socha aur soch kar ab mai ek kuwari ladki par story likhonga agar kuch update acche nikle to Sahi hai ...

Mai kuch alag likhna chahata ho ...jo aksar kam hi logo ne likha hoga ya shyad nahi likha hoga....

Ek bahot hi shareef ladki jo kuwari hai ...uske upper likhna chahata ho bus ek tajurbe ke tor par agar woh Sahi chali to use aage likhta ho abhi filahal is story ko kuch din ke liye rokta ho ....par ise band nahi karonga ise us new story ke sath chalata rahonga .....

To aaj us new story ka wait kare ...dusri baat agar ye new story chal nikli to likhta rahonga ....warna band kar donga

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Ganesh....biwiji kaho apko ya malkin ya apka nam lo ..mujhe to pata hai hi ki apne apni garibi ke chakkar mai apni asmat loota bethi....ap duniya ki sabse khubsurat aurat hai ...jo apne pati ke liye wafadar hai ....

Dekho kaise apke pati samne lete hai aur inko koi hosh hi nahi is duniya mai kiya chal raha hai .....

Lala ne sharab ke nashe mai apke sath kiya kiya kara sab mujhe bataya .....ek baat kaho lala ne mere gaand bahot bar mari hai ....par mai to yahi samjhta tha lala meethe ka shokin hai use aurto mai koi intrest nahi ...

Mai bhi garibi se aata ho mere maa baap 3 bahno ki zimmedari hai jisme se 1 bahan ki shadi lala ne karayi thi uske badle woh mere gaand marta hai .....

Shuru shuru mai accha nahi lagta tha par bad mai mujhe bhi gaand marwana accha lagne laga....

Afreen uski ye khuli baat sunkar hairan hone lagi ....

G...biwiji ab apke pass bus apne pati ko bachane ke liye ya ye zinda lash dhone ke liye apko apna jism istimal karna padega ......

Ye upper wala bhi bade ajeeb khel khelta hai ...ab apke pass koi aisa karobar bhi nahi ki roz apne pati ki fees in machino ki ap roz hospital mai jama kar sake ....

Ye lo 5000k rs abhi sham ko ap hospital ki kam se kam aaj ki fees jama kar do....

Baki kal ki kal dekhenge ....bus apko mera itna kam karna padega ki ap mera lund chus kar mera sara mal kha lo....waise bhi mai roz apko lund chusane ke 5k nahi de sakta ...

Abbi filhal aaj ke liye ye paise kam se kam hospital mai jama karwa do....

Ap ko sochne ki zaroorat nahi hai ....ab ap apna naada kholo yahi apke pati ke samne ....salwar utaro ...aur mai apni pant utarta ho ....

Ab ye baat sunkar afreen ko chakkar aane lage ...waise bhi use 5k jama to karne hi the aur ganesh rashan bhi kuch dino ka laya hua tha
......

Afreen sochne lagi uske aankho se kuch qatra aaso ka jhalak aaya ....

Par apne pati ke samne is ganesh ka lund kaise chuse ....par use ye karna bhi tha ....

Ghar bhi samjho ek kamre ka hi tha ab afreen ko ye tassli thi ki uska pati koma mai hai ....

Ganesh...ap ye soch rahi hongi na ki ap jaise khandani bahot khubsurat ladki se mai ye kaise gandi bhasha mai baat kar raha ho apki majboori ka mai fayda kaise utha raha ho...

Mai bhi ek majboor ladka ho...maine apne pariwar ke liye lala se gaand marwata raha ....uska lund chusta raha uska gaada virya pita raha ...

Kintu bad mai mujhe bhi maza aane laga ye sab karte hue halat ye ho gayi mere agar lala mere gaand nahi marata to mai kinnar ke pass jane laga ...

Woh logo se apni gaand marwane ke liye garahak dhodne laga ....

Apko pata hai ek seth ne mere gaand mari aur mujhe 10k diye ....

Mai soch mai pad gaya ki gaand marwane ke liye mere jaise ladke ko 10k mile ....aur mai is dhande mai utar gaya ...

Chahata to lala ka kam chhod sakta tha par abhi 3 ya 4 hi log mile jo gaand marte hai....abhi pura is dhande mai nahi utra ...

Ab ap hi socho mere jaise kale londe ki gaand ke 10k mile to ap to lakho mai kamaogi.....ab ye jism kyo veeran kar rahi ho....

Kintu ek baat aur maine sochi ki maine lala ka ya kisi aur ka lund chusa uska virya kahya ....to yahi mer soch rahi ki mai bhi kisi haseen aurat ke muh mai apna lund dalo use chusao apna maal uske muh mai dalo aur moka lage to gaand bhi uski maro.....

To ab ap apna naada khol kar apni salwar utar do....woh isliye mai kah raha ho ki salwar ki rumali apne chehre par laga kar apke haseen muh mai apna lund dalo aur ap aise zordar tarike se chusna ki mera lund ka mal 5 min mai nikal kar bina niche giraye sab kha jao....

Aur agar ap ye 5 min mai nahi karti ho to phir apki gaand maro.....

Ab yaha uski aise baato se afreen ki soyi hue hawas jagne lagi salwar ki rumali gili hone lagi .....

Woh kuch boli to nahi bus apne pati ko dekha ...aur dekh kar apna naada niche hath dal kar khich diya....

Salwar pairo par gir padi ...halaki gutne hi thode se dekh rahe the ....

Jab salwar ko pairo se nikalne ke liye jhuki to jhamppar ka side bhag thoda open hua jisme bahot gori raan ki jhalak ganesh ko dekhayi di....yaha afreen ko jald faisla karna hi tha sham ko use hospital 5k jama karne the....

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Halaki woh sandle pahni hue thi use afreen ne pairo se nahi nikala ....

Tab ganesh ne wahi ek chadar dari zameen par bicha di. ..aur apna pant to utari hi thi underviyer bhi utar diya....

Aur apna lund lahrane laha ...shirt bhi utar di...afreen ne uska lund dekha jo abhi pura tanav mai na tha ..us lund ke tope par full chamdi latki hue thi ...kamar par uske kala daga banda hua tha ....jhante badi thi ....pote medium the pet thoda sa hi bahar tha ...par jism kafi mazboot tha....

Uska lund ka idea afreen ne lagaya ki ye khade hone par 7 inch hi hoga ha lala se kuch kam bada aur mota ho sakta tha....

Par bahot mota aur bada nahi tha...afreen jaise haseena apne umar ke ladke ka lund tukur tukur dekhne lagi ....

Aur woh ab uske bina koi response diye uske samne beth gayi gale par duppta nahi tha jisse uske calavages dekh rahe the ....

Woh beth kar bina apne pati ki parwah kare uska lund mutti mai apne gore hatho mai pakada aur aage piche karti hue hilane lagi ....uska lund aada khada tha ...to ganesh ne kaha hila kar pura khada na kar apne muh mai acche se chus kar khada kar....

Ye baat sunkar apne gulabi hont lund ki traf le gayi uski chmadi ko lund se upper kar ke lal topa open kara.../..

Aur ek kiss lal tope par diya....afreen uska mal jald se jald nikalna chahati thi ....to usne sabse pahle uske lund ke ched ko thoda khola aur apne zaban ki tip nikal kar lund ke ched mai dali ....aur woh kurdne jaise lagi....

Yaha ganesh jaise ladke ko kaha se aise ummid thi ki ek bahot majboor kamal ki haseen ladki uska lund ko chusegi.....

Par ye sach tha ganesh ka lund ab kuch hi sec mai afreen ke gulab jamun jaise muh mai jane wala hi tha....

Hua bhi aise hi woh ab apna muh open karte hue uska lund apne halq tak lejane lagi ....




Jaise hi aada sa lund afreen ke muh mai gaya to yaha ye pahle bar lund chuswane ka chaska ganesh ko pagal bana dalta hai...

Usne apna lund kisi rundi ko bhi nahi chusaya tha bhale usne kuch logo ka khud lund chusa tha.....

Ye maza use itna aaya ki uske muh se ab gandi gandi bhaddi bhaddi galiya nikalne lagi....

Aur woh lund chuste hue ubhar ko dekh kar bahot hi josh mai aa gaya .....

Ganesh....Ahhhhhhh madarchod raand veili raand aahhhhhh tera muh bahot garam hai haramzadi ....tujhe apne pati ki parwah nahi....tujhe bhi kutiya lund chusne mai maza aata hai ....

Ye gaaliya aise hi kuch lala bhi diya karta tha aur use marta bhi tha gaand par uske bahot belt mar mar kar woh lund ganesh ko chusara tha....

Har mard ki sex ki alag alag iccha hoti hai ab mansik tor par lala ne ganesh ko bahot pida di thi woh sab peeda aaj afreen ke upper nikalna chahata tha....

Yaha afreen ne uski baat sunkar lund muh se nahi nikala ....

Woh janti thi use aaj lund chuswane ka maza pahli bar mila ...

Uski harkat se afreen samjh gayi ki iske andar ek gusse ka lawa bhara pada hai jo aaj bahr nikalna chahata hai....

Usne afreen ke seene par hath rakh kar uska upper se jhamppar faad diya.....

Aur uppri tor par use nanga kar ke pura lund chusne ke liye kahne laga.....

Afreen uska utawla pan dekh kar hairan to hue par woh jald se jald uska mal nikalna chahati thi ....woh jaan gayi ki ye ladka agar jaldi thunda nahi hua to ye jawar ban jayega.....

Woh badi shiddat ke sath lund chusne lagi.....



Afreen ka sir pakad kar woh apne lund ko pura afreen ke muh mai gusane laga.....

G....ahhhhhh madarchod rundi ki aulad chus kha ja mera loda....

Aisa maza aata hai lund chuswane mai ye aaj pata chala .....

Ahhhhhh Tabhi lala apna lund roz chuswata hai....ahhhhhhhhh chusti jaaaaaaa madarchod raand halaq ke andar dal ......mera lunddddddddd Ahhhhhhh tere gale ke andar mujhe dekhna chahiye fasa le mera lund apne halaq ke andar direct fasa kar mera mal pet mai nikal......ahhhhhhhhhhhhh mere gaand ke andar ungli dal .......

Afreen ahista ahista uska lund halaq ke andar dalti hue uski kali gaand sahlane lagi.....

Aur yaha afreen ko na jane kiya hua usne ek apne ungli uske gaand ke andar badi aasani se dal kar aage piche karne bhi lagi.....

Ye afreen ko kuch alag sa maza tha....

G....madarchod rundi ki aulad ahhhhhh dusri ungli bhi dal Ahhhhhhh mere gaand mai chinmuni yani mere gaand marwane ka man kar raha hai .....Ahhhhhhh dal ungli .....

Afreen aisa hi karti hai halq ke andar lund fislta hua jane laga ...

To us dard bardash karte hue dusre hath ki bhi ungli gaand ke andar dal deti hai....

Woh bahot zordar jhatka halaq ke andar marta hai....afreen ki aankhe khuli rah jati hai ...woh ye dard bardash karti hue ab dono hath ki dono ungli bhi uske gaand mai dal deti hai ....

Yani ab ganesh ki gaand mai 4 ungli thi lund gale ke andar fas jata hai.....

Side se thook nikal raha tha afreen ko sans lene mai parshani hone lagi.....

Woh 4 ungli andar bahar ganesh ki gaand mai kar rahi thi ....

Ab 5 min to kab ke ho gaye....jaha tak ki gale mai fasa lund ko 5 min ho gaye ....

Afreen tadapne lagi ...par woh aankhe band kara hua tha aur puri taqat afreen ke sir ko apne lund par lagaye hue tha....

Jisse kuch rahat to milne wali afreen ko nahi thi ....aise hi kuch der woh karta raha ...

Afreen ka jism dheela pad gaya woh behosh hone lagi 4 ungli gaand se nikal gayi uske dono hath zameen par the jism dheela hota hua girne laga...

Tab use ganesh ko hosh aaya usne apna lund gale se khicha ...

Aur behosh jaise afreen ko niche bichi dari par dal diya....uska sara kapda utar kar puri nangi kar dia...

Afreen pet ke bal thi tabhi ek zordar karara thappad gaand par pada



Afreen hosh mai aa gayi uska chehra samne tha aur piche se upper se nangi thi uski gori gaand nangi peet khule bal afreen ko aur sexy rundi bana rahe the ....

G...ahhhhh ab tere mai gaand maronga tune 5 min nikal diye....

Ye kah kar woh piche aata hai zordar bahot zoro se afreen ki gaand par buri trah thappado ki barish kar deta hai ....

Afreen dard ke mare mari jane lagi ....woh chillane rone lagi ....apne gaand ko sahlati par ganesh uske hath hata deta ....

Bahot lal gaand padne lagi woh rukne ka nam nahi le raha tha ....kafi gaand par hath marte chala gaya ....

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Par yaha ek cheez thi jitna socha tha ganesh ne utna toucher nahi kara ...na usne afreen ke pet ki komalta dekhi na qatil navel ....na gore gol boobs na afreen ka masoom chehra ....

Bus use gaand marna tha ab ...gaand lal pad gayi thi afreen sahlate hue apne gaand na marne ki fariyad karne lagi...

A....plzzz ap mere aage wali le lo mai mana nahi karongi ...piche bahot dard hoga ....

G...hahaha rundi ye dard mujhe bhi pahli hi bar mai mila tha bina raham kare mere gaand mari ....woh dard tujhe bhi dena chahata ho....

A...par mere kiya galti ....isme ...lala ne apki maari to ap mere kyo maroge ....mai chudne se mana nahi kar rahi ahhhhh ye kiya bol gayi mai.....

Mai apse aage wali ki baat kar rahi ho piche wali mere na maro

G...ohhh iska matlab tere gaand mari nahi gayi ab tak....

A...ha mai piche se kuwari ho...

G...to rundi tu ab kuwari na rahegi....

Afreeen uski mannate karti rahi par woh nahi man raha tha ...

Jab afreen nahi man rahi thi to usne apni pant utha kar usme se belt nikal di....

Ye dekh afreen ki ab gaand fat gayi aur woh afreen ko khada kar diya aur belt ko fold kar ke ek zordar parhar afreen ki gaand par kara....

Asal mai ganesh mansik tor se pagal hi tha jo uske sath kara gaya woh ab yaha kar raha tha ....

Belt ki chuak pad kar afreen zoro se rone lagi aur apna hath us belt ke lambe nishan par laga kar sahlne lagi ....

Tab bhi yaha afreen gaand na marne ki baat kahne lagi....

Tab uska hath utha kar woh ek aur pahle se Zyada zor se belt gaand ke gaddedar hisse par mari ....

Aise hi 4 ya 5 bar belt gaand mari....afreen rote hue toot gayi aur usne apne gaand marne ki izazat de di....

Tab ye sunkar ganesh bahot khush hua....aur usne khud afreen se kah kar sarso ka oil kitchen se mangaya....

Afreen gaand sahlati hue langdate hue oil leke aa gayi ....

Tab usne afreen se apne khade lund par oil lagane ko kaha....

Afreen ne rote hue khub sara oil ki malish uske lund par kari....

Jisse kale lund ki nase aur Zyada visible ho rahi thi aur to aur lund khunkhar hone laga....

Tab usne bed pakdne ko kaha aur apne pati ki traf jhuk kar usse kaha ab to apne pati ko dekh...

Afreen jhuk gayi yani bed ka sahara leke ghodi ban gayi.


Woh piche aake dono anguto se gaand ka ched open kara jo lal tha...

Yaha afreen bahot gori thi to gaand bhi kafi white aur kholne par lal thi ....

Usne bhi kafi oil leke gand ke ched mai dal diya ....par usne gaand mai ungli na dal kar uska sir uske pati ke seene par laga kar hukum diya ki woh apne gaand ke ched ko khole ....
Ab aur woh belt ki pitai bardash nahi kar sakti thi to usne gaand ka ched khol diya ....

Aur thoda oil dal kar apna supada Sahi se feet kar diya....

Yaha woh waisa hi kar raha tha jaise lala ne kara tha

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Yaha usne pyar se aaram aaram se nahi balki pura topa Sahi se set kar puri taqat se pura zor se ek qarar jabarjast dakka mar diya .....serrrrrrrrrr se aada lund gusa ....jabki itni zor se kamar pakad kar dakka mara tha ki pura lund jana chahiye tha......



A.....,.'hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh maaarr dallllllaaaaaaaaaaaa mere khudaaaaaaaaaaaaaa marrrrrr gayi......


Jab tak woh apne dard par bardashpan lati to ek aur jhatkaaaaaa


G....haiiiiii bajrangbaliiiiiiii tod is veil raand ki naliiiiiiiiiiii


A....haiiiiiiiiiiii mereeeeeee khudaaaaaa aaaj marrrrr gayiiiiiiiiii jiiiiii

Lund pura gusa hua tha afreen chekh chillane lagi.....uske aanko se aaso bahne lage.......woh behosh si hone lagi ......

Dono apne tarah se upper wale ka nam le rahe the ek maze mai nam le raha tha ek dard mai nam le rahi thi.....

Par ye dard bus kuch lamha ka tha

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Hume to ye story bohat pasand hai.... please ise band na karo.

Roki nahi hai bus thoda gape leke likhta rahonga

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Afreen behosh hone lagi woh piche se ganesh bina raham kare gaand marta raha ....

Kuch hi lamhe mai yaha afreen ki dard bhari cheekh behoshi ka alam ahhhhhhhhh ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ummmmmmm mai badalne laga
......

Woh apni gaand ko bhi sath sath hilane lagi ....lund mai white cream jaisa laga aur andar bahar hone laga.....

Lund bhi ab bade aaram se andar bhar ja raha tha



G...dekh madarchod rundi veili raand dekh ab tujhe pata chala gaand maewane mai maza aata hai bol.raand bol


A...ummmmm ahhhhh faad to dali zaraaaa sa rahammmm na karaaaaa ab aata hai mazaaaaaa ahhhhhhhhhhhhh ab bus karooooo mujhe dard ho raha hai....

G....pr tune ab tak Sahi sa bataya nahi ki gaand marwane mai maza aata hai ....le ab is trah se marwa gaand....



Thoda aur upper aake woh gaand marta raha ...

A....ummmmmmm pura gusa na tumharaaaaaa ahhhhhhhhhhhhh

G....haa mere jaan pura gusa ......ahhhhhh jad tak pura ja raha hai dekhgi kaise ja raha hai.....

A...godi tumne mujhe ahhhhhh banaya hai to mai kaise dekh sakti ho......

Tab usne lund nikala aur thoda side se ab kar ke seeda lita diya ....aur phir se gaand mai lund dal diya ....

Yaha usne na to afreen ke doodh masle na kiss kari na boobs dabaye bus woh gaand mare ja raha tha....

To afreen ne thoda upper sir ko kar ke apne gaand marte kale lund ko dekha....




Gaand ke andar ab bade aaram aaram se lund jate dekh use kuch maza kahe ya ajeeb kahe kuch accha laga...

Woh kafi hairan thi jaha ek ungli Sahi se nahi jati woh ab mote lund ko gaand mai dalwa kar man hi man uska aanad le rahi hai ......

Ab afreen ko yaqeen tha ye insan kuch pagal hai iske same koi bhi haseen ladki jai use koi maza nahi aata hai ise bus gaand marna marwana hi pasand hai ....

Aisa woh soch rahi thi ki ab usne afreen ko palta aur ab khud shariq ke bagal mai let kar apne upper afreen ko kar ke dakke marne laga...




Afreen ka pati bagal mai hi to leta tha .....use dekh kar afreen ko josh dugna bad gaya ...woh ab full maze mai gaand marwane lagi


Gaand se garam garam white si creme bhahot Zyada uske kale lund par lag kar uske lund ko khubsurat bana rahi thi...



Afreen ab mast hokar chuda rahi thi .....aur ek ahhhh si nikli lund ne fawwara gaand ke andar garam garam sa chhod diya.....

Us garam lawa se afreen ki chut bhi bina chude hi jhad gayi ....

Aur kuch der bad ye toofan thama





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Afreen burkha pahan kar hospital jane lagi ...ganesh bhi bahar chala gaya....

Jab jate time woh gayi to langdayi to nahi balki uski chal gaj gamini jaise ho gayi


Afreen salwar nahi pahne thi ye ganesh ne aisa karne ko mana kara tha bina salwar ke woh khud use hospital leke aya...

Ha woh kuch der ke liye bahar gaya tha par bad mai aa gaya.



Aur bahar hospital ke chhod kar woh dukan par chala gaya.

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Pishab pilane aur gaand chatne ka episode rakho ho sake toh

Aise updatw likhe hai maine bahot si story mai ...ye aage kinki sex wali story hai ...jo ab shuru hue hai ....to situation par depend hai aage

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Tumne wrong socha boss ye story bilkul baki story jeysa Nehi hai...ya pe Afreen k jo character hai wo tumne kisi story pe Nehi likha.....ha par Nazbeen ka character baki story se thoda thoda match hota hai.....Mera suggests hai app Afreen ke bare me jeyda likho..gap na le ke......jeyda din gap hone se kuch logo ka story se interest uth jata hai....toda fatafat update Dena bro.

Dono hi carecter apne hisab se damdar hai...ha mai ek writer ki soch se dekho to afreen yaha mazboot ho rahi hai nazbeen thoda kamzor ho rahi hai ....

Mai try karonga alag alag dono ko balance kar ke likho

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Waise to afreen nazbeen ka jeevan aaj ek sa ho gya...par yaha afreen aur nazbeen ka mijaz bahot diffrent tha....

Afreen jo last time apne shohar se pyar bhari baat kar ke uske man mai shariq ke liye pyar dubara umda....ha pahle bhi pyar karti thi usse love marrige kari thi ....

Aur uske shohar ke zulm se ghabrayi nahi bus sabar kara....kintu halat aise hue ki usne aakhir apne jism ka soda kara....

Ab yaha afreen aaj bhi apne shohar se pyar karti hai ...aur uske jeevan bachane ke liye kisi bhi had tak ja sakti hai ....

Aur nazbeen ka kuch alag nazriya apne shohar par tha...kashipur mai ek ghar jo thik thak bada tha ....aur nazbeen ke baap ka hi ghar tha ...nazbeen rampur nahi aayi ....aur usi ghar mai rahne ka faisla kara.....

Par woh jis area mai tha kahte hai kisi sadu sanyasi ka sharp us area mai tha....

Karan pata nahi waha woh area kafi sunsan rahta tha kai pariwar us area ko chhodkar chale gaye...waha ghar bhi koi nahi leta tha...

Ha kuch chote dhande unhi khali veeran pade gharo mai shur hue ....

Kuch gharo mai chamde shoes ka kam hota....kuch gharo mai kadade ka kam hota ....sare dhande chote hi the ....

Aur woh chal bhi rahe the ...kuch security officer ki milibhagat se sharab ki bhatti bhi laga li gayi thi....waha sab 3rd class kam hote the....

Aur koi bada kam karta to woh fail ho jate the...Nazbeen waha us area mai hi apne apahiz pati ko leke aayi thi....par usi area se kuch door jaha aas pass kuch ghar the aur un gharo mai log aaj bhi rahte the ....

Yaha nazbeen ka mijaz apne pati ko leke wafadar nahi raha ....

Kabhi kabhi jab ss ye hadsa hua to nazbeen apne pati ke Sahi na hone par uske man se duwa niklati ki ye mar jate to accha rahta ....

Par ye duwa woh khud accept nahi karti thi ...aur ye khayal aata to use afsos to hota par woh apne pati se woh lagav biku aur us bhikari pagal se chudne ke bad nikal gaya tha....

Par pata nahi kyo woh apne pati danish ko chhod na payi rid ki haddi kharab ho gayi uski falish ka asar bhi tha.....

Woh uski dekhbhal kar to rahi thi par imandari se nahi ...uske papa maa jitni ho sake help karte ....aur Woh majboori mai unko rampur aana pada.....

Aur afreen ko bus apne pati ki parwah thi uske liye Woh kisi bhi had tak ja sakti thi.....

Waise is area mai kuch 1 ya 2 hi pariwar ko pata chala ki nazbeen apne apahiz pati ko leke yaha rahne lagi....

Aaj ke hi din jab afreen ne gaand ganesh se marwayi aur yaha nazbeen ko sex nahi ho raha tha to kuch tanav mai thi ....

Nazbeen apne bister par pade pati ko dekhti hai jo aankhe khuli hue thi jism ka hissa koi harkat nahi kar raha tha.....

Woh sab sun sakta tha aas pass kiya ho raha hai sab samjh sakta tha ...falish ke asar se bol nahi pa raha tha ...aur na hi wh bina sahare fresh hone ja pata tha....

Abhi yha nazbeen ke papa ne kuch paise deke chale bhi gaye ....

Tab naz apne pati ko gusse mai dekhti hue kahti hai.....

Apne mere zindgi kyo jahannam bana dali...maine aakhir tumhara kiya bigada tha...duniya bhar ke karz se ap doobe pade the....


Sari property neelam aur bank ke karze mai doobi thi us par un badmasho se bhi paise liye....

Ye mere shadi ke bad to nahi hua hoga na....pahle se sab aisa tha naa...

Aakhir jab ap ki aise halat thi to kyo apne aisa kara.....abhi jo mere pass hai kuch din tak ya kuch hafto tak apki dawai apke ilaj mai kharch kar sakti ho ....

Jab mere pass se bhi sab khatam ho jayega to mai kiya karongi ....

Mera sameer apko aise akela chhod kar nahi ja sakta ....tum woh gale ki haddi ban gaye jise na nigal sakti ho na ugal sakti ho....

Mujhe nahi lagta ye kuch paise tumhara pura ilaj kare ...dr kah rahe hai apko admitte karne ke liye....

Unko kiya batao mai offord nahi kar sakti na apko is halat mai chhodkar pure din koi job kar sakti ho....

Kaha se laonga paisa mere baap ki koi miil to nahi chal rahi hai

Woh bhi kitna kharach kar chuka hai ...mere life ke liye woh to barbad nahi ho sakte.....

Kitni shareef thi mai duniya se bekhabar thi mai ....kuch bhi nahi janti thi mai....mujhe na jism hawas ki bhookh thi na koi aur zaroorat....

Are tumhare chakkar mai Bhiku bhi mara gaya....us ki kiya galti us bechare ne garibi mai apni zindgi barbad kar di....

Mai kiya karo ab 4 dn bad apko aur ilaj ki zaroorat padegi to kaha se bheekh mang kar laongi kaha se apko dubara admit karongi......


Ye kah kar khub nazbeen roti hai ...ro ro kar apna man halka kar leti hai.....aur jane kyo ek alag trah ki muskan uske chehre par aati hai ...

Danish ko dekh kar maafu mangte hue kahti hai