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AFTER HAWAS KI AAG, PURAANI HAVELI, PERVERT AUR MOHINI.. MAIN LAYA HU YEH STORY. YEH MERE PREVIOUS BIG STORIES/NOVELS KI TARAH LONG NAHI HOGA. EK MIDIUM SIZE KA STORY HAI YEH. 2/3DIN KE INCIDENTS KE UPAR BASED. LEKIN ASHA KARTA HOON.. AP SABKO PASAND ATE MERE BAAKI KE STORIES KI TARAH
Gari akaar rukti hai ek barey se puraane ghar ke paas. Under se utarte hai ek mard aur phir ek khoobsurat aurat aur uske haat mein ek baby.
Anamika aaj pehelibaar apne pati ke sath pati ke gaon ke ghar aayi hai ghumne. Woh sab saher mein hi rahete hai. Anamika ke pati Rohit bhi saher mein hi zyada tar samay bitaaya hai. Lekin unka janam is ghar mein hua tha. Kuch saal baad Rohit ke pitaji apne betey aur patni ko lekar saher aa gaye the. Tab se woh log saher mein hi rehete hai. Yeh ghar mein tabse Rohit ke pitaji ke barey bhai Chandrakant aur unka pariwar reheta hai. Chandrakant aur unke patni ka toh ab swargbas ho gaya. Isliye unke betey Animesh aur biwi Sunita yaha rehete hai. Aur ghar ke naukar Ramu kaka bhi.
Ghar ke bahar gari ke awaz pakar ghar wale bahar aate hai. Animesh Sunita. Shaadi ke kuch saal beetne ke baad bhi abhitak Sunita ko koi baccha nahi hai. Anamika ko dekhkar Sunita muskurake unke paas akar galey milti hai. Sunita gaon ki hokar bhi khoobsurat hai. Tabhi toh is ghar ki bahu hai. Halaki yeh koi zamindar khandan nahi hai par gaon ke jitne bhi uchey khandan hai unmein se ek yeh bhi hai. Sunita halki si fatty hai par zyada nahi aur dusri taraf Anamika ek saheri larki aur khoobsurti mein Sunita se bhi zyada aur Sunita se thori Lambi bhi hai. Slim figure aur bahut hi attractive.
Animesh bhi apne bhai Rohit se milkey galey lagta hai. Rohit aur Animesh dono hi duble patley hai Lekin Animesh mota aur kam height ka hai. Rohit usse zyada lamba hai. Anamika ke godi mein pyara sa baccha dekhkar Sunita usko apne godi mein lekar pyar karne lagti hai.
Animesh - arey under toh chalo... Kabtak bahar kharey rakhoge inko.... Under chalo.....arey Ramu kaka......?
Anamika dekhti hai under se ek bujurg admi apna haat jor kar bahaar ataa hai.
Ramu kaka- jee hujur?
Amimesh- kaka.... Inka samaan under le aao.
Rohit- arey main lekar ataa hoo na... Inko kyun takleef de rahe ho bahiya.
Ramu kaka muskurake kehete hai- arey beta...... Koi takleef nahi.... Aaplog jao hum sab lekar ate hai.
Anamika Rohit gharwalo ke sath under chale ate hai. Anamika ghar ke under akaar dekhti hai ghar sach mein bahut bara hai. Under bahut bara sa khula jagaah bhi hai. Jiske left side bathroom hai wo bhi purane zamane ka, aur opposite side kitchen hai. Aur ek side gate jahan se woh sab under aye aur ek side ghar ke under jaane ka main darwaza.
Anamika dekhti hai neechey ke sab room bandh hai. Sunita boli neechey ke kamrey mein se ek mein Ramu kaka rehete hai aur baaki mein ghar ke purane furniture aur samaan rakkha hua hai.
Sab log upar jaa hi rahe the ke kahin se kuch chain ke tang tung awaz aayi zor se...... Aur zor se ek chillane ki awaz bhi ayi- Aahhhhhhhhh........ Khanaaa..... Khanaaaa... Bhookh..... Bhokkh......
Achanak aisi awaz se Anamika thori darr gayi. Sunita apni Devrani ko dekhkar muskurayi. Rohit bhi chitit hokar apne bhai ke taraf dekha.
Anamika- yeh..... Yeh kya tha!!
Animesh boley- Aao... Pehele upar Room mein jaate hai.... Fir batata hu sab.
Bhookh ki shuruaat.....!
Doston story ke saath jurey rehna aur pls comments karna...
Accha lagey toh like & reps bhi dena ♥️
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Bhai Apne phir se story se thanks bhai
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Baban bai bohot hi mast story jogi.Keep going
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(13-03-2022, 05:26 AM)Desi chut Wrote: Bhai Apne phir se story se thanks bhai
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(13-03-2022, 10:29 AM)Kishore12 Wrote: Baban bai bohot hi mast story jogi.Keep going
Thank you bhai... ♥️ aise hi comment karna.... Aap sab ka comment/ feedback bahut inspiration deta hai
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AAJ RAAT KO 2ND UPDATE AYEGA!
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Animesh Rohit sunita aur Anamika upar ke floor pe gaye. Neechey se abhi bhi woh vyankar cheekh aur chain ki tang tung awaz Aa rahi hai. Upar Akaar Animesh ne pehele Rohit aur Anamika ke liye jo kamra set kiya gaya hai wahan aye.
Animesh- Rohit Anamika yeh tum logon ka kamra. Tum log Aa rahe ho janne ke baad Sunita ne apne haat se yeh kamra sajaya hai.
Sunita muskuraake - kab se tum logon ko bol raha tha yahan aane ke liye. Yeh bhi toh tum logon ka hi ghar hai. Lekin aaye hi nahi. Itne samay baad Aaj aane ka mauka mila.
Rohit - kya karta bhabi.... Ho hi nahi paa raha tha. Anamika bhi kabse bol rahi thi tumhare Gaon ghumne jana hai. Lekin aakhir aa hi gaye. Kaisa lag raha hai Anamika?
Anamika muskuraake boli - bahut accha. Kitna khoobsurat hai. Saher ki tarah maa hi Gaariyon ki horn, naa hi pollution. Gaon ka weather kitna accha hota hai.
Sunita - yeh baat tune ekdum sahi kahan Annu.
Tabtak Ramu kaka bhi saman lekar upaar Aa gaye aur bistar ke upar rakhkar jaa hi rahe the ke Sunita Ramu kaka ko boli - kaka.......
Ramu kaka ghumey aur boley- jee malkin?
Sunita- usey khana de do..... Bhookh lagi hai.
Ramu kaka sar hilaake neechey chale gaye.
Anamika - kaun didi? Kiski baat kar rahe the aap? Kya wahi jo awazzz kar raha tha abhi? Kaun hai woh?
Sunita boli - chal merey kamre mein jakaar hum baat karte hai. Bahut baatein karni hai humey.
Rohit - ek minute bhabi...... Yeh kuch mithayi laya hoon aap sab ke liye lo.
Sunita- arey.... Iski kua zarurat thi devar ji?
Anamika- arey kitne samay baad ghar aya hai... Aur main toh pehelibaar ayi hoon..... Yeh mithayi toh lana hi parta hai. Yeh lo didi.
Sunita 2 sweets ka packet haat mein leti hai. Ek mein mithayi aur dusrey mein packed Rasgulley.
Sunita aur Anamika room se bahaar dusre room mein chale gaye. Dono bhai us kamrey mein baithkey gappey marne lagey. Dono smoking karte hue baat karne lagey.
Udhar sunita Anamika ko apne kamrey mein le aayi. Dono room ke beech gap bahut hai. Is kamre se Anamika ke kamrey mein jaane ke liye balcony cross karke jana parta hai. Anamika jab balcony se jaa rahi thi tab bhi neechey se woh awaz ekbar aayi. Bhoooooookh!!! Khanaaa!!
Dono kamrey akaar baithti hai. Anamika apne betey ko dheere se bed pe rakhkey theek se baithi. Sunita bhi haat ka mithayi ka packet table pe rakhkey baithi.
Sunita - ufffff kitne din baad hum mil rahe hai kyun Annu?
Anamika - haa didi...... Woh last time jab aapki sasuma beemar thi aur aap unko saher lekar aayi thi ilaaj ke liye tab hum miley the.
Sunita- hummm....... Lekin koi faida nahi hua. Khair..... Tere sasuma sasur....aur baaki log kaise hai?
Annu- haa sab theek. Baaki log bhi sab theek. Asal mein mera bhi bahut man tha yahan ghumney aane ka. Kya hai na tumhara Devar toh office chala jata hai. Saas sasur ki bhi ab umaar ho gayi hai. Zyada tar samay akela hi rehena parta hai. Kabhi kabhi boring sa lagta hai. Isliye jab unko chutti mili toh maine bola chalo tumhare purane ghar ghumke aate hai. Sasuma aur sasurji ko bhi lanaa chahti thi par woh log nahi Aa paye. Zyada travel abhi woh nahi kar sakte na. Isliye unhone humko nhej diya.
Sunita- accha hua.. Kamse kam tu toh aa gayi. Toh kaisa lag raha hai apney asli sasural akar. Asal mein yahi hai tera sasural. Tere saaur toh baad mein saher gaye. Lekin unka sabkuch toh yahan se hi jura hua hai. Tere Pati ka janam bhi toh yahin hua hai.
Anamika - bahut khoobsurat hai Didi. Photo mein dekha tha yeh Ghar. Lekin bahut purani photo thi Woh. Black n white. Aaj samney se yeh ghar dekhne ko mila.
Sunita - kitna pyara baccha hua tera...... Ekdum tujhpe gaya hai. Kya naam rakkha iska?
Anamika - Pradeep.
Sunita - waah.... Pyara naam hai.
Ab Anamika fir se woh sawaal karti hai - Didi.... Aapne bataya nahi..... Yeh.... Yeh awaz kiski thi neeche? Kaun tha woh?
Sunita ki hasee ab thori kam ho jaati hai. Woh Anamika ke taraf dekhkar bolti hai - uska naam Chandu hai. Humare Ramu kaka ka beta. Woh thora........ Thora sa woh.....
Anamika - abnormal hai kya? Matlab mental?
Sunita ek saas chorkey kehti hai - huuuh!! Haaan...... Woh thora Alaag hai. Thora pagal.
Anamika - thora? Kya bol rahi ho Didi.... Jis tarah se chilla raha tha usse toh main Darr hi gaya..... Yeh toh bahut baraa Pagal lag raha hai....... Khatarnaak Pagal!!
Sunita boli - nahi nahi Annu.... Tu jaisa soch rahi hai utna bhi nahi.... Haa..... Jab bhookh bahut lagti hai toh woh sachmein bahut Gussa ho jata hai. Tab woh kisiki nahi sunta. Isliye usey chain se bandh ke rakhna parta hai. Varna kahin kuch kar na de.
Anamika- babare!! Iske baad bhi aap us pagal ko khatarnak nahi bologi? Aise pagal ko ghar mein kyun rakkha hai? Mental asylum bhej do.
Sunita- woh asal mwin Ramu kaka ka wk lauta beta hai...... Biwi ko guzre bahut samay beet gaya. Isliye ab woh beta hi unka sabkuch hai. Waise woh shaant hi reheta hai zyada samay. Bus bhookh zyada lagey toh thora............ Khair chor yeh sab baatein...... Bol tere maike waley sab kaise hai....
Dono dusrey topic pe baat karne lagi. Par Anamika ko laga ke Uski jethani jaan bujhke us pagal ke topic ko avoid kar diya.
Dopaher ko sab saath mein milkey upar dining table pe khana khatey hai. Aaj Rohit Anamika aye hai isliye aaj ka din Animesh ne chutti li thi. Sab ne decide kiya aaj kahin ghumkey aatey hai. Rohit ne bola bachpan mein woh jis nadee ke paas khelne jaate thei wahan se ghumke aatey hai.
Anamika pehelibaar yahan aayi thi isliye saree pehen ke ayi thi. Lekin ab usne room mein jakar saree change karke nighty pahen li thi. Sunita ne bhi bola ke kabtak saree pahen ke rahegi.... Jaa ghar ka dress pahen le.
Udhar khaney ke baad thori der sab log soney ka decide kiya. Waise bhi bahut dur tak drive karkey Anamika aur Rohit aye the isliye thora araam toh zaruri tha. Isi beech ekbar Anamika ke beta jaag gaya tha. Usko dudh pilaake firse usne sula diya. Rohit ab bed pe letkey newspaper par raha hai aur Anamika ghar pe tangi hui ek mirror ke samney kharey hokar apna kangi kar rahi hai.
Anamika - Tumne bataya nahi is ghar mein tumhare bhai bhabi ke ilawa ek pagal bhi reheta hai.
Rohit - pagal? Ohh.... Matlab woh Ramu kaka ka beta? Deemag se pura nikal gaya tha uski baat.
Anamika - tumhari bhabi bata rahi thi kitna khatarnak hai..... Babarey jab pehelibaar uski woh cheekh suni main toh darr hi gayi thi!
Rohit- haa...... Bachpan pe dekha tha. Woh pagal waise toh shant hai par gussa ane par asli roop dikhata hai apna. Pura mental case hai sala.
Anamika - woh toh janti hoon. Aise pagal ko koi ghar pe thori rakhta hai? Tumhara bhai bhabi usko kahin bhej kyun nahi detey? Pagal ke sath koi ghar thori na reheta hai?
Rohit- arey woh hamesha chain se bandha hua reheta hai. Pehele toh ghar ke under hi potty susu karta tha. Par Bhaiya ne bataya ke baad mein usko Ramu kaka neechey ke bathroom le jane lagey. Ab jab bhi susu potty lagti hai woh chillata hai aur Ramu kaka usko lekar jaate hai.
Anamika - isshhh!! Yaak!! Tumhare bhai bhabi fir bhi usko yahan pe rakkha hai? Chi!!
Rohit- arey woh bechara ghar ke under para raheta hai. Kisiko farak nahi parta. Upar se kab se yahu pe hai woh. Maine bhi bachpan mein usko kayi baar dekha hai. Humko khirki se dekhkar marne ko ataa tha. Choro us pagal ki baat....... Avoid karo. Woh thori na yahan upar ayega?
Anamika apna baal kangi karkey pati aur betey ke baju mein so jati hai. Rohit bhi thak gaya tha. Woh bhi so jata hai.
Lagbhag 5 bajey sab taiyaar hokar ghumney nikalte hai. Nadee bahut paas mein hi hai. Bus 4 minute ke duri par. Sab wahan jakaar idhar udhar ghumney lagte hai. Rohit na jaane kitne saal baad yeh jagah pe aya tha. Bachpan mein roz college se lautte waat yahan khelta tha woh. Anamika bhi betey ko godi mein lekar Sunita ke sath ghumney lagi.
Sunita- Annu kaisa lag raha hai yeh jagah.
Anamika- bahut sundar didi.... Sacchi isi liye saher ke log gaon mein ghumney anaa pasand karte hai. Dekho yahan ka paani kitna saaf hai. Aur kitney fish bhi hai yahan. Paani kitna hil raha hai.
Animesh - haa Anamika..... Tumhara pati ko yaad hai ke malum nahi.... Hum yahan kabhi kabhi machli pakar ne aate thei. Tujhey yaad hai Rohit?
Rohit - haa thora thora yaad hai bhaiya.... Main bahut chota tha..... Aap apne doston ke sath aate the. Main bhi ata tha. Aap sab jaal se machli pakarte the. Competition hota tha kisne kitna machli pakra.
Animesh- haa..... Sach mein yaar... Woh bachpan kya sundar tha. Aaj bhi yaad ata hai woh sab. Yaad hai ekbar Ramu kaka chandu ko yahan ghumane laye the?
Rohit hastey huye bola- woh kaise bhool sakta hoon bhaiya.... Woh pagal ne jo kiya tha uffffff ha.. Ha...
Animesh - tu has raha hai? Sala main dubney wala tha!!
Anamika- kya kya hua tha?
To be continued.....
Doston... Kaisa laga yeh update?
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Very nice and promising story..
Please give a big update..
Please dont stop story in between..
And also if possible please show a slow unwilling seduction of Anamika
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Absolutely wonderful start
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(13-03-2022, 10:40 PM)Baban Wrote: 2
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Animesh Rohit sunita aur Anamika upar ke floor pe gaye. Neechey se abhi bhi woh vyankar cheekh aur chain ki tang tung awaz Aa rahi hai. Upar Akaar Animesh ne pehele Rohit aur Anamika ke liye jo kamra set kiya gaya hai wahan aye.
Animesh- Rohit Anamika yeh tum logon ka kamra. Tum log Aa rahe ho janne ke baad Sunita ne apne haat se yeh kamra sajaya hai.
Sunita muskuraake - kab se tum logon ko bol raha tha yahan aane ke liye. Yeh bhi toh tum logon ka hi ghar hai. Lekin aaye hi nahi. Itne samay baad Aaj aane ka mauka mila.
Rohit - kya karta bhabi.... Ho hi nahi paa raha tha. Anamika bhi kabse bol rahi thi tumhare Gaon ghumne jana hai. Lekin aakhir aa hi gaye. Kaisa lag raha hai Anamika?
Anamika muskuraake boli - bahut accha. Kitna khoobsurat hai. Saher ki tarah maa hi Gaariyon ki horn, naa hi pollution. Gaon ka weather kitna accha hota hai.
Sunita - yeh baat tune ekdum sahi kahan Annu.
Tabtak Ramu kaka bhi saman lekar upaar Aa gaye aur bistar ke upar rakhkar jaa hi rahe the ke Sunita Ramu kaka ko boli - kaka.......
Ramu kaka ghumey aur boley- jee malkin?
Sunita- usey khana de do..... Bhookh lagi hai.
Ramu kaka sar hilaake neechey chale gaye.
Anamika - kaun didi? Kiski baat kar rahe the aap? Kya wahi jo awazzz kar raha tha abhi? Kaun hai woh?
Sunita boli - chal merey kamre mein jakaar hum baat karte hai. Bahut baatein karni hai humey.
Rohit - ek minute bhabi...... Yeh kuch mithayi laya hoon aap sab ke liye lo.
Sunita- arey.... Iski kua zarurat thi devar ji?
Anamika- arey kitne samay baad ghar aya hai... Aur main toh pehelibaar ayi hoon..... Yeh mithayi toh lana hi parta hai. Yeh lo didi.
Sunita 2 sweets ka packet haat mein leti hai. Ek mein mithayi aur dusrey mein packed Rasgulley.
Sunita aur Anamika room se bahaar dusre room mein chale gaye. Dono bhai us kamrey mein baithkey gappey marne lagey. Dono smoking karte hue baat karne lagey.
Udhar sunita Anamika ko apne kamrey mein le aayi. Dono room ke beech gap bahut hai. Is kamre se Anamika ke kamrey mein jaane ke liye balcony cross karke jana parta hai. Anamika jab balcony se jaa rahi thi tab bhi neechey se woh awaz ekbar aayi. Bhoooooookh!!! Khanaaa!!
Dono kamrey akaar baithti hai. Anamika apne betey ko dheere se bed pe rakhkey theek se baithi. Sunita bhi haat ka mithayi ka packet table pe rakhkey baithi.
Sunita - ufffff kitne din baad hum mil rahe hai kyun Annu?
Anamika - haa didi...... Woh last time jab aapki sasuma beemar thi aur aap unko saher lekar aayi thi ilaaj ke liye tab hum miley the.
Sunita- hummm....... Lekin koi faida nahi hua. Khair..... Tere sasuma sasur....aur baaki log kaise hai?
Annu- haa sab theek. Baaki log bhi sab theek. Asal mein mera bhi bahut man tha yahan ghumney aane ka. Kya hai na tumhara Devar toh office chala jata hai. Saas sasur ki bhi ab umaar ho gayi hai. Zyada tar samay akela hi rehena parta hai. Kabhi kabhi boring sa lagta hai. Isliye jab unko chutti mili toh maine bola chalo tumhare purane ghar ghumke aate hai. Sasuma aur sasurji ko bhi lanaa chahti thi par woh log nahi Aa paye. Zyada travel abhi woh nahi kar sakte na. Isliye unhone humko nhej diya.
Sunita- accha hua.. Kamse kam tu toh aa gayi. Toh kaisa lag raha hai apney asli sasural akar. Asal mein yahi hai tera sasural. Tere saaur toh baad mein saher gaye. Lekin unka sabkuch toh yahan se hi jura hua hai. Tere Pati ka janam bhi toh yahin hua hai.
Anamika - bahut khoobsurat hai Didi. Photo mein dekha tha yeh Ghar. Lekin bahut purani photo thi Woh. Black n white. Aaj samney se yeh ghar dekhne ko mila.
Sunita - kitna pyara baccha hua tera...... Ekdum tujhpe gaya hai. Kya naam rakkha iska?
Anamika - Pradeep.
Sunita - waah.... Pyara naam hai.
Ab Anamika fir se woh sawaal karti hai - Didi.... Aapne bataya nahi..... Yeh.... Yeh awaz kiski thi neeche? Kaun tha woh?
Sunita ki hasee ab thori kam ho jaati hai. Woh Anamika ke taraf dekhkar bolti hai - uska naam Chandu hai. Humare Ramu kaka ka beta. Woh thora........ Thora sa woh.....
Anamika - abnormal hai kya? Matlab mental?
Sunita ek saas chorkey kehti hai - huuuh!! Haaan...... Woh thora Alaag hai. Thora pagal.
Anamika - thora? Kya bol rahi ho Didi.... Jis tarah se chilla raha tha usse toh main Darr hi gaya..... Yeh toh bahut baraa Pagal lag raha hai....... Khatarnaak Pagal!!
Sunita boli - nahi nahi Annu.... Tu jaisa soch rahi hai utna bhi nahi.... Haa..... Jab bhookh bahut lagti hai toh woh sachmein bahut Gussa ho jata hai. Tab woh kisiki nahi sunta. Isliye usey chain se bandh ke rakhna parta hai. Varna kahin kuch kar na de.
Anamika- babare!! Iske baad bhi aap us pagal ko khatarnak nahi bologi? Aise pagal ko ghar mein kyun rakkha hai? Mental asylum bhej do.
Sunita- woh asal mwin Ramu kaka ka wk lauta beta hai...... Biwi ko guzre bahut samay beet gaya. Isliye ab woh beta hi unka sabkuch hai. Waise woh shaant hi reheta hai zyada samay. Bus bhookh zyada lagey toh thora............ Khair chor yeh sab baatein...... Bol tere maike waley sab kaise hai....
Dono dusrey topic pe baat karne lagi. Par Anamika ko laga ke Uski jethani jaan bujhke us pagal ke topic ko avoid kar diya.
Dopaher ko sab saath mein milkey upar dining table pe khana khatey hai. Aaj Rohit Anamika aye hai isliye aaj ka din Animesh ne chutti li thi. Sab ne decide kiya aaj kahin ghumkey aatey hai. Rohit ne bola bachpan mein woh jis nadee ke paas khelne jaate thei wahan se ghumke aatey hai.
Anamika pehelibaar yahan aayi thi isliye saree pehen ke ayi thi. Lekin ab usne room mein jakar saree change karke nighty pahen li thi. Sunita ne bhi bola ke kabtak saree pahen ke rahegi.... Jaa ghar ka dress pahen le.
Udhar khaney ke baad thori der sab log soney ka decide kiya. Waise bhi bahut dur tak drive karkey Anamika aur Rohit aye the isliye thora araam toh zaruri tha. Isi beech ekbar Anamika ke beta jaag gaya tha. Usko dudh pilaake firse usne sula diya. Rohit ab bed pe letkey newspaper par raha hai aur Anamika ghar pe tangi hui ek mirror ke samney kharey hokar apna kangi kar rahi hai.
Anamika - Tumne bataya nahi is ghar mein tumhare bhai bhabi ke ilawa ek pagal bhi reheta hai.
Rohit - pagal? Ohh.... Matlab woh Ramu kaka ka beta? Deemag se pura nikal gaya tha uski baat.
Anamika - tumhari bhabi bata rahi thi kitna khatarnak hai..... Babarey jab pehelibaar uski woh cheekh suni main toh darr hi gayi thi!
Rohit- haa...... Bachpan pe dekha tha. Woh pagal waise toh shant hai par gussa ane par asli roop dikhata hai apna. Pura mental case hai sala.
Anamika - woh toh janti hoon. Aise pagal ko koi ghar pe thori rakhta hai? Tumhara bhai bhabi usko kahin bhej kyun nahi detey? Pagal ke sath koi ghar thori na reheta hai?
Rohit- arey woh hamesha chain se bandha hua reheta hai. Pehele toh ghar ke under hi potty susu karta tha. Par Bhaiya ne bataya ke baad mein usko Ramu kaka neechey ke bathroom le jane lagey. Ab jab bhi susu potty lagti hai woh chillata hai aur Ramu kaka usko lekar jaate hai.
Anamika - isshhh!! Yaak!! Tumhare bhai bhabi fir bhi usko yahan pe rakkha hai? Chi!!
Rohit- arey woh bechara ghar ke under para raheta hai. Kisiko farak nahi parta. Upar se kab se yahu pe hai woh. Maine bhi bachpan mein usko kayi baar dekha hai. Humko khirki se dekhkar marne ko ataa tha. Choro us pagal ki baat....... Avoid karo. Woh thori na yahan upar ayega?
Anamika apna baal kangi karkey pati aur betey ke baju mein so jati hai. Rohit bhi thak gaya tha. Woh bhi so jata hai.
Lagbhag 5 bajey sab taiyaar hokar ghumney nikalte hai. Nadee bahut paas mein hi hai. Bus 4 minute ke duri par. Sab wahan jakaar idhar udhar ghumney lagte hai. Rohit na jaane kitne saal baad yeh jagah pe aya tha. Bachpan mein roz college se lautte waat yahan khelta tha woh. Anamika bhi betey ko godi mein lekar Sunita ke sath ghumney lagi.
Sunita- Annu kaisa lag raha hai yeh jagah.
Anamika- bahut sundar didi.... Sacchi isi liye saher ke log gaon mein ghumney anaa pasand karte hai. Dekho yahan ka paani kitna saaf hai. Aur kitney fish bhi hai yahan. Paani kitna hil raha hai.
Animesh - haa Anamika..... Tumhara pati ko yaad hai ke malum nahi.... Hum yahan kabhi kabhi machli pakar ne aate thei. Tujhey yaad hai Rohit?
Rohit - haa thora thora yaad hai bhaiya.... Main bahut chota tha..... Aap apne doston ke sath aate the. Main bhi ata tha. Aap sab jaal se machli pakarte the. Competition hota tha kisne kitna machli pakra.
Animesh- haa..... Sach mein yaar... Woh bachpan kya sundar tha. Aaj bhi yaad ata hai woh sab. Yaad hai ekbar Ramu kaka chandu ko yahan ghumane laye the?
Rohit hastey huye bola- woh kaise bhool sakta hoon bhaiya.... Woh pagal ne jo kiya tha uffffff ha.. Ha...
Animesh - tu has raha hai? Sala main dubney wala tha!!
Anamika- kya kya hua tha?
To be continued.....
Doston... Kaisa laga yeh update?
Zarur comment karke batana aur accha lage toh
Like, Reps de sakte hai.
Baban bhai ye khahani bahut intersting hai.
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(14-03-2022, 08:05 AM)anushka Wrote: Very nice and promising story..
Please give a big update..
Please dont stop story in between..
And also if possible please show a slow unwilling seduction of Anamika
Thanx anushka ji♥️
I'll try to give big update.. I wont stop in middle.... Aajtak nahi kiya aisa. But one thing... As i mentioned before... Its a middle size story.... Based on 2 or 3 days journey. So it have to be fast... But i can assure u... U will enjoy it♥️
Agar aapko slow seduction pasand hai toh meri novels- hawas ki aag, purani haveli, PERVET aur mohini pariye... Aapko zarur pasand ayega... Thnx again
(14-03-2022, 08:43 AM)Mafiadon Wrote: Absolutely wonderful start
Thnx Mafiadon♥️
(14-03-2022, 09:39 AM)pawanqwert Wrote: Baban bhai ye khahani bahut intersting hai.
Please jaldi update Dene ki kripa kare
Thanx ♥️ aisi hi sath jure rahey
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Lagbhag 5 bajey sab taiyaar hokar ghumney nikalte hai. Nadee bahut paas mein hi hai. Bus 4 minute ke duri par. Sab wahan jakaar idhar udhar ghumney lagte hai. Rohit na jaane kitne saal baad yeh jagah pe aya tha. Bachpan mein roz college se lautte waat yahan khelta tha woh. Anamika bhi betey ko godi mein lekar Sunita ke sath ghumney lagi.
Sunita- Annu kaisa lag raha hai yeh jagah.
Anamika- bahut sundar didi.... Sacchi isi liye saher ke log gaon mein ghumney anaa pasand karte hai. Dekho yahan ka paani kitna saaf hai. Aur kitney fish bhi hai yahan. Paani kitna hil raha hai.
Animesh - haa Anamika..... Tumhara pati ko yaad hai ke malum nahi.... Hum yahan kabhi kabhi machli pakar ne aate thei. Tujhey yaad hai Rohit?
Rohit - haa thora thora yaad hai bhaiya.... Main bahut chota tha..... Aap apne doston ke sath aate the. Main bhi ata tha. Aap sab jaal se machli pakarte the. Competition hota tha kisne kitna machli pakra.
Animesh- haa..... Sach mein yaar... Woh bachpan kya sundar tha. Aaj bhi yaad ata hai woh sab. Yaad hai ekbar Ramu kaka chandu ko yahan ghumane laye the?
Rohit hastey huye bola- woh kaise bhool sakta hoon bhaiya.... Woh pagal ne jo kiya tha uffffff ha.. Ha...
Animesh - tu has raha hai? Sala main dubney wala tha!!
Anamika- kya kya hua tha?
Animesh boley - arey main aur tumhara pati yahan usdin machli pakar ne aye the. Ramu kaka bhi hunarey sath aya tha. Lekin usdin Ranu kaka apne us pagal betey ko bhi ghunane laya tha hunare sath. Chandu yahan akar uchal kud kar raha tha. Idhar udhar ghum raha tha. Mai Rohit machli pakar ne mein byast thei. 3 machli pakar bhi chukey the. Ramu kaka shayad bathroom karne thori dur gaye the. Itne hi samay mein chandu pata nahi kab hunarey peechey akar khara ho gaya aur humbe jo machli pakri thi unko balti se uthake firse nadee mein fek diya.
Anamika - oho
Animesh - mujhe aya gussa! Itni mehenat se un machilon ko pakra aur woh pura mehebaat bekar kar diya. Gusse se maine uthke maraa usey ek tamacha. Lekin mujhey kya pata tha ke iska anjaam itna bura hoga.
Rohit - bura nahi..... Khatarnaak bolo bhaiya.... Main toh darr hi gaya tha... Chota tha na.
Anamika - kya... Kya hua tha bhaisahab?
Animesh - arey woh chandu thappar khake itna khunkaar ho gaya ke mera hi gala pakar liya aur mujhe dono haat se upar uthaa ke zor se nadee mein fek diya.
Anamika - oh my......!!
Rohit - woh toh accha hua bhaiya ko swimming ata tha.... Lekin fir bhi..... Bhaiya ko paani mein fek ke aur chandu Taali dene laga. Yeh sab dekhke mera toh halaat hi kharap ho gaya tha.
Animesh - lekin tabhi Ramu kaka aye aur mujhe uthyaya. Aur fir jo maraa chandu ko. Main bhi gusse se do teen thappar mara. Uske baad kabhi usko ghumane nahi laya gaua..... Sala pagal.
Anamika- fir bhi aise khatarnak pagal ko aap log apne ghar mein rakhte ho?
Animesh - kya hai ke Ramu kaka humare itne bafadar hai aur itne samay sw humare parivar ke sewa karte aa rahe hai ke mere pitaji ne chandu ko isi ghar mein rakhne ka adesh diya tha. Ramu kaka bhi aone betey ko apne se dur nahi karna chahte the. Waise bhi woh hamesha bandha reheta hai... Sirf bathroom ke time woh bahar ata hai. Par kabhi bhi koi pareshani nahi ki usne.
Anamika - fir bhi...... Babarey!! Aap jo bol rahe ho...... Aapko pura uthaake feka tha..... Kitna zor hoga uske under.
Rohit- haa yrh tumne sahi kahan Annu... Saley ke under taqat bahut hai. Jitna badsoorat, utna hi taqat hai. May be pagal hai isliye. Maine suna hai mental logon mein physical strength bahut hota hai. Isi liye toh bandhe rakhte hai usko.
Animesh - tab kuch log bolte the chandu ke Under koi shaitaani saya hai. Isliye.......
Rohit- nonsense!! Woh sab faltu baat hai. Gaon mein yeh sab baat jaldi fail jata hai.
Animesh - haa main bhi nahi manta......
Sunita - main bhi nahi..... Jabse shadi karke yahan aayi hoon maine bhi aisa kuch mehsoos nhi kiya. Yeh sab faltu baat hai.
Thori der aur ghumkey sab log wapas laut aye. Shaam ko sab baithkey ek sath chai piya. Gappey marey. Fir sunita neechey jaane lagi khana banane ke liye. Anamika ne boli - chalo didi main bhi aapke sath jaati hoon. Betey ko papa ke haat mein dekar dono neechey aa gayi. Dono bhai upar baat karne lagey.
Kitchen mein cooking karte huye ghar ki dono bahu gappey marne lagi. Baat karte karte kab khana taiyaar ho gaya pata hi nahi chala. Kahan banakar dono wapas upar jaa hi rahi thi ke tabhi firse ek cheekh gunz uthi - kahan.... Bhoookh!!! Khana!!!!
Achanak is cheekh se Anamika firse ghabra gayi. Usne Sunita ke taraf dekha. Lekin sunita ke aankhon mein koi ghbrahat nahi thi. Woh bilkul shaant thi. Uske liye yeh sab normal tha.
Anamika - didi..... Yeh toh firse chilla raha hai!!
Sunita muskurake boli - ghabra maat...... Main hoon na.... Woh toh bandha hua hai. Ruk ek minute.
Yeh bolkey woh agey jaane lagi. Anamika turant jethani ka haat pakar ke boli - didi kahan jaa rahi ho?
Sunita boli - ahaa tu ruk main dekhti hoon. Yeh bolkey woh neechey ke balcony ko cross karke ekdum peechey ke taraf chali gayi. Anamika bhi uske peechey peechey gayi. Usne dekha Sunita peechey se ghar ke ek khirki ke paas ayi. Aur wahin akaar khari ho gayi. Aur under dekhne lagi.
Anamika ne dekha jaise hi Uski sunita didi us khirki ke paas akar khari hui under se cheekhna chillana turant ruk gaya. Ab koi awaz nahi. Sab shaant. Anamika hairaan ho gayi.
Sunita under kuch dekhkar muskurayi fir wapas aane lagi. Anamika ke paas akar boli - kya hua? Aise kya dekh rahi hai?
Anamika - didi... Abhi toh woh pagal chilla raha tha.... Aap wahan gayi aur chup ho gaya?
Sunita- woh asal mein akela reheta hai.... Bandha hua....ghar ke kisiko dekh nahi pata toh gussa ho jata hai. Mujhe dekhkar isliye chup ho gaya. Ramu kaka ko bolta hu uske liye khan lane ko.
Fir sujata boli - Tu dekhega usko?
Anamika turant boli - nahi baba...... Koi zarurat nahi.
Sunita - anaa.... Dekh na...... Aa...
Yeh bolkey woh apni devrani ka haat pakar ke usi khirki ke paas aa gayi. Anamika ana nahi chahti thi par Sunita ke sath aakhir aa hi gayi. Usne dekha under pura room khaali hai. Ek bulb jaal raha hai. Bus room ke ek corner mein ek bed pe koi kala sa kuch baitha hai. Jiski height bahut hi lambi hai.
Anamika ne roshni mein ab acche se dekha ek bahut hi lamba dubla sa koi admi hai. Purey badan jaise ghaney baal se dhaka hua hai. Sirf ek half pant pehen ke baitha hua hai. Uska ek haat chain se bandha hua hai aur woh baithkey khudba khud baat kar raha hai aur pair hila raha hai. Lekin sabse ghinoni baat hai iska shakal. Bari bari aankh, lambi si nose, mota mota honth. Lekin nose aur honth ke beech gap bahut zyada. Jaise koi adi manav hai yeh. Bilkul Adimanav ke tarah hi dikhta hai. Dekhte hai ek darr sa lagta hai.
Sunita- dekha Annu... Yeh hai chandu.
Anamika - babare didi!! Yeh toh dikhne se hi khatarnaak lag raha hai.
Sunita- haa isiye toh bandh ke rakha jata hai isko.
Anamika -aise insaan ko aaplog ghar kaise rakh sakte ho didi?
Khaana.......!!!
Achanak under se awaz ayi. Anamika dekhi ke woh ghinona badsoorat insaan ab usiko dekh raha hai. Ek haat agey baraa ke firse bola - khanaaa!! Khanaa ayaa!!
Itne paas se yeh hunkar sunkey darr gayi Anamika. Woh dur hat gayi khirki se. Sunita muskurake boli - arey chinta maat kar.... Bandha hua hai yeh.
Anamika - fir bhi didi chalo yahan se. Chalo upar.
Dono wapas upar ke taraf chale gaye.
Anamika upar akar dekhi ke Rohit neechey hi Aa raha tha. Uske haat mein babu. Jo ro raha hai.
Rohit- arey main tumhare paas hi jaa raha tha. Yeh dekho tumhara beta ro raha hai. Lo samhalo babu ko.
Anamika betey ko godi mei le liya aur mummy ko godi mein jaate hi baccha thori hi der mein shant ho gaya.
Sunita- aja Annu.... Mere room mein jakar baat karte hai.
Rohit wapas Animesh ke paas jakar baithkey baat karne laga. Anamika aur Sunita roomein akar tv serial dekhte huye time paas karne lagey.
Anamika - didi....... Aap ko sach mein darr nahi lagta kya uss pagal se?
Sunita Anamika ko dekhkar boli - pehele lagta tha... Jab shaadi karke pehelibaar ayi thi tab darr lagta tha. Janta hai Ekbar Ramu kaka usko bathroom karwane le jaa rahe the. Sybah 8 bajey ki baat hai. Main uswaqt khana bana rahi thi. Janta hai tab kya hua tha?
Anamika - kya didi? Bolona...... Kya hua?
Anamika khud yeh bolkey hairan ho gayi. Achanak us pagal ke barein mein itna interest aa gaya usko?
Sunita boli- tab sasurji me liye dudh banakar main unke kamrey ke taraf jaa rahi thi. Lekin mere haat mein dudh ka glass dekhkar woh Ramu kaka ka haat chorkey mere paas aa gaya.
Sunita Anamika ke bahut paas akar boli - tuney toh khirki ke under se usko dekha hai..... Woh bhi bandha hua..... Maine toh usko mere taraf daurkey atey huye dekha tha..... Ek 6 foot ka khatarnak pagal mere taraf daurkey aa raha hai.... Soch meri kya halat hui hogi!!
Anamika bari bari aankhon se boli - babare!! fir!!
Sunita- main chilla utha..lekin woh zalim pagal mere haat se dudh ka glass lekar dhok dhok karke pura ekbaar mein pee gaya aur mujhe dekhkar bola - aur de... Aur de!
Anamika- uffff babarey... Mere sath aisa hota toh main behush hi ho jaati.
Sunita- Ramu kaka usko lekar chale gaye...... Mujhe tab laga tha ke woh mujhe maar hi dega.... Par baad mein samjha usko dudh peena hai.
Anamika - kya pata didi..... Ramu kaka nahi hota toh woh pagal kya kar deta aapke sath.....
Sunita muskurake boli - woh baat bhi sahi hai...... Waise bahut shaant hai lekin gussa Aa jaye toh khatrnak ho sakta hai.... Tabhi suna na kaise mere pati ko uthaa ke nadee mein fek diya tha.
Anamika - hummm didi...... Aise pagal ke under kab kya chalta hai pata nahi chalta. Main toh kabhi ma jaun aise pagal ke paas.
Sunita- woh Aa gaya toh?
Anamika - mat bolo didi darr lagta hai.... Ish kitna darawna shakaal hai!!
Sunita has pari. Fir boli - yeh accha hua ke tum log kuch dino ke liye yahan aye. Kamsekam tere sath baat karke kuch samay kat jayega. Varna woh jab kaam pe chale jate hai tab sara din akele tv dekh kar hi bitana parta hai.
Anamika- Didi...... Ab ek baccha le lo. Kabtak akeli rahogi?
Sunita- janti hu... Unse bola bhi hai... Lekin kuch problems ke karan ho nahi paa raha. Doctor ko bhi dikhaya. Woh ab medicine bhi le rahe hai...... Dekhte hai kya result nikalta hai. Main bhi Toh teri tarah Maa ka pukar sunna chahti hu.
Anamika apni jethani ka haat pakar ke bolti hai - didi... Dekhna.... Ekdin aapka god bhi bhar jayega. Aap bhi ek pyare se bacchey ki Maa banogi. Sab theek jo jayega.
Sunita muskurake Apni Devrani ke taraf dekhti hai. Fir bolti hai - Kash........ Sabkuch theek hota.... Toh abtak toh ek 5 saal ka baccha hota mera. Lekin......... Khair.... Dekhte hai agey kya hota hai.
Anamika apni Jethani ka dard samajhti hai. Ek aurat hi toh dusri aurat ka dard samajhti hai. Isliye woh Sunita ke kandhey pe haat rakhke dilasa deti hai.
Raat ko sab eksath dinner karte hai. Sara khana Sunita ne hi pakaya.... Anamika just help kar rahi thi. Sabne bahut acchey se khana khaya.
Rohit - sach mein bhabi..... Kya mutton banaya hai aapne.... Ungli tak chat gaya.
Animesh - Arey aisa kya bol raha hai.... Anamika bhi bahut accha khana pakati hai. Jab hum tum loginke ghar gaye the tab Anamika ne humko woh special fish curry banake khilayi thi. Waah kya swad tha... Kyu Sunita?
Sunita- bilkul...... Devarji.... Is mamle mein aap aur aapke bhai dono hi lucky ho. Aap dono ko hum jaisi biwi mili hai.
Sab hasney lagey. Fir khana khatam karkey haat dhokar sab chad pe gaye. Thandee ka samay tha. Chad pe thandee hawa behe rahi thi. Anamika chad se pura bahaar ka nazara dekh rahi thi. Pura ghar ke aaju baju bahut sare nariyal ke per hai. Ek aam ka per bhi hai. Aur yahan se main road bhi deekh raha hai. Lekin ekdum aaju baju koi ghar nahi. Sarey ghar thora dur dur hai. Animesh ne bola abhi toh sab pakka ghar ban gaya hai. Pehele unke ghar ke ilawa baaki zyadartak ghar mitti ke the. Jhopdi bahut thi. Ab kam ho gaya hai.
Anamika aur Rohit saher mein jahan rehete hai wahi baju mein hi main road hai. Har samay auto bus truck insab ki awaz aati reheti hai. Lekin yahan.... Kitni shanti hai. Dur jungle se jugnu ghum rahe hai. Jaisepura jungle roshni se bhara hua hai. Aisi drisshya dekhkar Anamika ka dil bahut tript ho raha tha. Apney betey ko bhi woh yeh sab dikha rahatha
Anamika- dekho beta..... Jugnoo..... Kaise jal rahe hai....woh dekho chaanda mama......
Woh baccha pata sirf mummy ke godi mein sar rakkhke ungli chuste huye samney dekhe jaa raha tha aur muh se mammamm..... Mammmam... Aise awaz kar raha tha.
Kuch der tak chad pe ghumkey woh neechey Aa gaye. Is beech Anamika ne ekbar ghar phone karke apni saasuma aur sasur ji se baat bhi kar li aur Animesh aur Sunita bhi unse baat ki haalchal pucha.
Dekhte hi dekhte raat 11 baj gaye. Bhai bhabi ko Goodnight bolkey Rohit aur Anamika soney Aa gaye. Rohit bed soye thori der magazine parne laga aur Anamika betey ko godi mein lekey raat ka dudh pilaane lagi. Mummy ka nipple suck karte karte Baby dheere dheere so gaya. Baby ko dheere se sulaakar apna nighty ke button bandh karke peechey murkey dekhi udhar pati bhi magazine haat mein lekar hi so gaya. Anamika muskuraake dheere se uthke light off karke wapas aakar so gayi.
Anamika ko jaldi neend nahi aati. Yeh problem hai uski. Raat ko kabhi kabhi 2 bajey tak neend nahi aati. Aur ab toh bilkul nayee jagah hai. Waise bhi nayi jagah pe nahut logon ko neend nahi aati. Anamika kuch der soney ki koshish ki par kuch faida nahi hua. Ab lagta hai neend ki dawai lena shuru karna parega. Anamika mobile lekar yeh woh dekhte huye time paas karne lagi. Aise aur bhi kuch samay beet gaya. Ufffff neend Aa hi nahi rahi hai. Usne mobile pe dekha 12: 41 baj rahe hai. Saher mein yeh time koi bari baat nahi lekin aise gaon mein yeh samay ghani raat hoti hai. Sab geheri neend mein hote hai.
Aaauuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu......... Aauuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
Oho.... Aaj bhi yahan Lomri hai.. Ya fir yeh kuttey ki awaz hai? Anamika ab bed se uthkey ghar ke bahaar ke khirki ke taraf jakaar khari ho gayi. Yahan se ghar ke neechey ka ek hisse ka corner acchey se dikhta hai. Anamika khirki ka grill pakarke bahaar ka nazara dekhne lagi. Thandee hawa ghar ke under aa rahi thi. Anamika hawa ko mehsoos karte huye bahaar ka nazara dekh rahi thi. Bahaar chandni bahut thi. Pura ilaka roshni se bhara tha. Kitna khoobsurat lag raha tha raat ka shaant nature.
Anamika yahi sab dekh rahi thi ke tabhi neechey ke taraf uski nazar gayi. Arey! Yeh.... Yeh kya? Itni raat ko kaun hai jo lamp lekar jaa raha hai?
Anamika acchey se dekhne ke liye is khirki se hatkey ghar ke left side ke khirki ke paas aa jati hai. Yahan se woh bahaar ka part acchey se dikh raha hai. Anamika bahaar dekhti hai ke koi chaltey huye agey jaa raha hai...... Nahi.... Jaaa rahi hai. Kyun ki chand ki roshni aur lamp ke roshni mein acchey se deekh raha hai ke woh koi aurat hai. Aur is ghar mein aurat sirf ek hi hai. Sunita didi... Anamika ki jethani. Lekin itni raat ko woh kya kar rahi hai bahaar?
Waise yeh koi bari baat nahi hoti. Kyunki bathroom ke liye bhi toh koi bahaar jaa sakta hai. Par jis karan se Anamika soch mein par gayi woh yeh ke bathroom jis taraf hai Sunita bilkul uski opposite side pe jaa rahi hai. Sunita jis taraf jaa rahi hai woh ghar ke puraane samaan rakhne ki jagaah hai. Itni Raat ko didi wahan kyun jaa rahi hai? Lekin sirf yahi baat nahi. Anamika ne dekha Uske jethani ke haat mein ek plate jaisa kuch tha. Usmein kuch rakkha hua hai... Kya hai us plate mein?
To be continued....
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(15-03-2022, 10:56 PM)saya Wrote: Jabrdsat story
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Fantastic story! Wonderful writing ✍
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Bohot hi bariya update Baban bhai.Jaldi se jaldi dusra update bhi de dijiye.
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Awesome zabardast story he baban bhai....
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(16-03-2022, 04:44 PM)Mafiadon Wrote: Fantastic story! Wonderful writing ✍
Thanks Mafiadon♥️
(16-03-2022, 06:50 PM)Kishore12 Wrote: Bohot hi bariya update Baban bhai.Jaldi se jaldi dusra update bhi de dijiye.
Thanks kishore12♥️ koshish karunga bhai jaldi laneki
(16-03-2022, 06:57 PM)Shabaz123 Wrote: Awesome zabardast story he baban bhai....
Thanks shabaz123♥️
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