Fantasy Geeta ??

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Chapter 1 : Madhupur aur Chowdhary Pariwar

Ye kahani hain Madhupur naam ke ek chhote se gaanv ki. Ye gaanv bahot sundar hain. Chaaro taraf hariyali hain. Is gaanv ki aabadi koi jyada nahi hain. Gaanv mein bhot khushaali hain. Logo ke paas koi jyada paise to nahi hain par fir bhi santushthi hain. Is gaanv ke jyadatar log kheti karte hain. Madhupur ghumne ke liye kayi paryatak desh videsh se aate hain kyunki yaha par kayi prachin cheezen hain dekhne ke liye jaise 'Ram ka Tila' jaha Shri Ram Chandra ji apne vanvas ke liye thehre the aur 'Dholi ka Bargad' jo ki ek 400 saal purana bargad ka paid (tree) hain.

Madhupur mein Headmaster Pitamber Chowdhary bhi apne parivar ke saath rehte hain. Inki 2 betiyan Meera (24) aur Rajni (22) shadi karke sasural ja chuki hain. Inki chhoti beti Geeta ke liye bhi ab ladka dhundha jaa raha hain. Ab inke ghar mein 3 sadasya rehte hain. Unke baare mein apko batata hu.

Geeta - Humari kahani ki naayika. Geeta ki umr 19 saal hain. Use duniyadaari ki jyada samajh nahi hain. Uska mann abhi bhi ek bachche jaisa hain. Mata pita ko apni Geeta beti sundar dikhti hain par baaki log to use kaamukta se dekhte the. Geeta apne pita par gayi thi, gora rang, lamba kad. Uska shareer bhi bhara hua hain. Gaanv mein uski sundarta ke bahot charche the.

Headmaster Pitamber Chowdhary - Ye Geeta ke pita ji hain. Inki umr 50 saal hain. Gaanv ke ek maatra school ke ye head master hain. Chowdhary ji ek behad vinamr aur sharif aadmi hain. Chowdhary ji ki Madhupur mein bahot izzat hain.

Gayatri Devi - Ye Geeta ki mata ji hain. Inki umr 46 saal hain. Inka rang sawla hain. Ye dekhne mein zyada akarshak nahi hain. Inki betiyan Meera aur Rajni inhi par gayi hain. Gayatri Devi ko aksar Geeta ki chinta rehti hain kyunki usme abhi bhi bachpana hain, jo mann mein aata hain keh deti hain.


Coming Soon

Chapter 2 : Postman Karim Chacha
Chapter 3 : Meera ki Chitthi
Chapter 4 : Geeta tu bahot bholi hain
Chapter 5 : Mumbai ka babu
Chapter 6 : Chai ki Daawat

More chapters will be revealed later...

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Nice start bro

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Chapter 2 : Postman Karim Chacha

Part 2.1

Madhupur ke Post Office mein ek postman hain Karim. Karim ki umr lagbhag 60 saal hain. Uska rang ekdum kaala hain. Uski height koi 5'5" hain, vo is umr mein swasth aur nirog hain. Karim ne 2 shaadiyan ki thi. Pehli biwi thi Sanya jiso gujre hue koi 21 baras ho gaye the. Dusri biwi thi Ladida jisko gujre hue koi 10 baras ho gaye hain. Karim aksar kothe par jaa kar paise dekar sasti randiyon ko choda karta tha.

Karim ke kul 4 bachche hue the:

Sarfraz - Karim ka sabse bada beta. Umr 35 saal. Sarfraz 16 saal ki umr se shehar mein apne mama ke saath rehta hain. Inke mama ji ek manjhe hue karigar hain. Unhone hi Sarfraz ko silayi aur kadhayi ka kaam sikhaya. Jab Sarfraz ko nayi nayi jawani chadhi thi to uska mann kaam mein kam aur ladkibaazi mein zyada raha karta tha. Vo aksar apne mama ki dukaan par aayi ladkiyon par line mara karta tha. Uska kayi ladkiyo ke saath chakkar bhi hua. Dekhte dekhte vo bada hua aur usne Tamanna naam ki ek ladki se shaadi ki. Ab usi shehar mein vo apna ek chhota sa ladies boutique chalata hain.

Shoaib - Karim ka dusra beta jo aaj 32 saal ka hota. Par jab Shoaib koi 10 saal tha tab ek accident ke karan uske sar par ek chot aayi jiska ilaaj nahi ho saka aur uska dehant ho gaya. Apne bete ko khone ke dukh se hi uski ammi Sanya ka bhi 1 saal baad dehant ho gaya.

Fatima - Karim ki eklauti beti. Umr 21 saal. Fatima surat se zyada sundar to nahi thi par uske sharir ki banawat kamaal ki hain. Rang halka sawla, height 5'8". Famita Geeta ki acchi saheli hain.

Siraj - Karim ka sabse chhota beta. Umr 19 saal. Siraj ka rang Fatima ki tarah sawla hain, uski height koi 6 foot hain. Vo rozana kasrat karta hain aur usne kaafi acchi body banayi hain. Vo bachpan se kaafi adhiyal aur badtameez swabhav ka hain. Aur uska aksar school aur maholle ke ladko se jhagda laga rehta hain. Siraj aur Geeta ne ek hi saath 12th ke exam diye the. Ye 2 saal pehle ki baat hain. Geeta ne to pareeksha pass kar li thi par Siraj 2 saal se fail hi ho raha tha.

Sarfraz aur Shoaib ko Sanya ne janm diya tha aur Fatima aur Siraj ko Ladida ne.

Ye tha Postman Karim ke parivar ka parichay.

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Part 2.2

Ye baat mangalvaar subah 9:30 baje ki hain. Karim ne apne bag mein aaj ki saari chitthiyan bhar li aur vo post office se apni cycle par nikal padha. Usne 3 gharo mein chitthiyan di, agli chitthi Headmaster Pitamber Chowdhary ke naam ki thi. Aksar headmaster ji ki chitthiyan vo unhe school mein hi de diya karta tha.

Karim school mein aa kar headmaster ji ke office mein tak pahunchta hain. Headmaster ji usse vaha nahi dikhte. Saamne ek table par baithe hue clerk Karim ko dikhta hain. Us clerk ka naam tha Kishore.

Karim: Arre Kishore babu, aaj master ji nahi hain?

Kishore: Ao ao chacha. Nahi headmaster saab to ja chuke hain. Ab to kal hi aayenge.

Karim: Aaj bahot jaldi chale gaye?

Kishore: Haan aaj unka school mein koi jyada kaam nahi tha. Tumko headmaster saab se koi kaam tha, chacha?

Karim: Haan master ji ki ek chitthi thi. Khair koi baat nahi, main unke ghar ja kar chitthi pahuncha dunga.

Kishore: Ji chacha. Jaisa tum thik samjho.

Fir vo school se nikal jaata hain. Karim ka ghar headmaster ji ke ghar se keval 2 ghar chhod kar tha. To usne socha aakhir mein master ji ko chitthi de dunga. Vo bachi kuchi 4-5 chitthiyan bhi sabko baat deta hain. Karim ab cycle se apne ghar ja raha hota hain. Karim mann soch raha tha "Aaj jarur Sarfraz ko phone karunga. Siraj ka padhai mein to mann nahi lagta, is nalayak ko apne paas shehar bula kar kisi kaam par laga dega Sarfraz. Saala haram ki roti todta rehta hain. Par kambakhat is gaanv mein phone ke signal bhi to nahi aate. Sochta hu kal post office se use chitthi daal dunga". Karim apni is soch mein cycle par jaa raha tha ki tabhi saamne se ek car bahot tez gati se us ki aur aati hain aur uske bagal se hoti hui gujarti hain. Karim chillata hain "Abbe madarchod andha hain kya? Sambhal kar gaadi nahi chala sakta kya?". Karim isiliye gussa kar raha tha kyunki gaadi vaale ne uske upar keechad ucchal diya tha. Aaj subah baarish giri thi jiski vajah se raaste par kaafi keechad tha. Karim apni haalat dekh kar sochta hain "Ab to pehle paas ki jheel par jaa kar kapde saaf karne honge. Saale harami ne pure kapde kharaab kar diye". Jheel yaha se bahot paas thi to vo jheel ki taraf cycle liye paidal hi chal padhta hain.

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Part 2.3

Is wakt subah ke 10:45 baje the. Jheel ke liye ek 200 meter lamba rasta jaata hain. Jaha se vo rasta shuru hota hain vaha par Karim pahunch jata hain. Tabhi use ek ladka dikhta hain. Karim use pehchan leta hain, us ladke ka naam hain Deepu.

Deepu 8 saal ka bachcha tha jo aksar Geeta ke saath rehta tha. Vo Geeta ke ghar ke bagal vaale ghar mein rehta tha. Geeta nadaan thi isiliye Geeta jab bhi bahar jaati to uski maa hamesha Deepu ko Geeta ke saath bhejti thi.

Karim: Kyu re Deepu, yaha kya kar raha hain re?

Deepu: Arre postman chacha, namaste. Tum yaha kaise? Aur ye kya huliya bana rakha hain?

Deepu Karim ke kapdo ko dekhkar zor zor se hasne laga.

Karim: Hasta kya hain? Ek chutiya gaadi wale ne..

Karim bol hi raha tha ki ek ladki ki madhur awaaz uske kaano par padhi.

Ladki: Oh Deepu, kis se baat kar raha hain re? Tujhe jo kaam dia hain vo thik se kar raha hain na?

Deepu: Haan didi tum chinta mat karo.

Karim: Ye kiski aawaj hain re Deepu?

Ladki: Chacha vo Geeta didi jheel mein naha rahi hain na. Unhone kaha main yaha chaukeedaari karu aur kisi ko jheel par na jaane du.

Ye sun kar Karim ke pairo ke beech hulchal hoti hain. Uska soya hua lund khada ho jaata hain. Karim ki nazar kaafi saalo se Geeta par thi. Jabse vo jawan hui thi. Karim ne usse kayi baar apni kalpana mein nanga kia tha aur uske jism ke baare mein soch kar Karim kayi baar muth maar chuka tha.

Karim (mann mein): Aaj to meri lottery lag gayi! Aaj to Geeta ko nahate hue dekhne ka badiya mauka hain. Saali kya maal hain. Ya ,.' ek baar mujhe is hoor ke nange chuchiyon aur gaand ke darshan kara de bas. Mujhe aur tujhse kuch nahi chahiye.

Deepu: Kya hua chacha? Kaha kho gaye?

Karim hadbadata hain aur apni soch se bahar aata hain

Karim: Oh Geeta beti naha rahi hain? Deepu beta tu ja, main yaha chaukeedaari kar lunga. Tu thak jayega.

Deepu: Nahi chacha main thik hu. Tum jao yaha se.

Karim: Beta tune nashta kia kya? Ye le paise..

Deepu beech mein bol padhta hain

Deepu: Haan chacha maine to kabka nashta kar liya.

Karim: To kya hua beta? Ek aur baar kar lena. Ye le paise aur Ramu halwayi se samose aur jalebi kha le. Main yaha Geeta ki rakhvaali karta hu.

Vo Deepu ke haath main paise pakda deta hain

Deepu: Nahi chacha maine Geeta didi ko vaada kia hain.

Karim (mann mein): Lagta hain ye nahi manega. Isse jyada behas ki to waha puri picture kahatam ho jayegi. Mujhe jungle ke raste se hi jaana hoga.

Karim: Accha beta tu yahi par khada reh. Main chala.

Karim Jungle ki taraf jaane lagta hain

Deepu: Oh chacha? Tumhara ghar to us taraf hain. Waha kidhar ja rahe ho, Aise bigde hue kapdo ke saath?

Karim ko bahot gussa aata hain par vo khud ko kabu karta hain

Karim: Wo beta, mujhe Post Office mein kuch kaam yaad aa gaya. Aise bado se zyada sawaal nahi karte! Aur la mere paise wapas kar!

Deepu (mayus hokar): Ye lo chacha.

Karim (mann mein): Ye ladka bahot kaam ka hain. Ye Geeta ka khaas hain. Aus iski maa bhi saali mast item hain. Isse dosti bana kar rakh Karim. Abhi 20 rupay de kar tujhe baad mein lakhon ka khazana milne vaala hain.

Karim: Arre beta udaas kyu hota hain? Main to mazaak kar raha tha. Rakh tu ye paise aur apne pasand ki mithai khana lena. Aur paise chahiye ho to bhi maang lena.

Deepu: Thank you, chacha.

Karim: Kya bola? Thik hain. Thik hain, beta. Mujhe kaam hain. Main jaata hu.

Karim cycle ko bahot tezi se chalate hue jungle ke raste nikal padhta hain. Vo mann mein sochta jaa raha thi ki saala kya nazara hoga jab us hoor ko nanga nahate hue dekhunga. Saali nangi kaisi dikhti hogi, oof! Phir jheel aa jaati hain. Karim ko darr tha ki ab Geeta vaha se chali na gayi ho.