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Yeh kahani ek aisey area ki hay. Jaha ek posh building jiska naam gitanjali apartment tha wahi usi kay baju mai ek sultan nagar tha.
Aaj say 5 saal pehley yeh pura area sultan nagar mai ata tha par ek sanjay kumar builder nay municipality ko paisa khila kar waha ek building bana Di thi
Jaha sirf uppar caste log hi rehtay thai.
Jis ka gussa Sultana nagar kay logo par tha. Wo hamesh in uppar caste logo say chidh aati thi khaas kar kay. Sanjay kumar say wo us area ka bada builder tha yaha tak uska ek bada sa duplex iss building may tha.
Iss building kay liye usnay kafi sari jhugiya bhi tod di thi.
Wahi iss jhopadpati ka ek leader tha uska naam Rafiq tha. Uska ek shop tha jo building kay baju mai hi tha.
Usko sanjay nay tod diya tha jis karan usko sanjay Kumar aur us apartment mai rehney walo say kafi gussa tha.
Issliye rafiq ney apartment kay samnay kay gate par ek public toilet bana diya tha jis karan sanjay kumar kay geetanjali apartment kay flat nahi bik par rahay thay.
Jiskar dono mai kai baar jhagday bhi hotay thay.
In saab kay bawajud bhi geetanjali apartment nay kafi log rehnay aaye thay.
Sanjay bhi kafi gussa aata tha. Kyuki usnay yeh apartment uski biwi aur beti kay naam par rakha tha.
Biwi Geeta jo 45 saal ki thi. Wahi beti Anjali jo 20 saal ki thi.
Issliye sanjay ka yeh ek dream project tha.
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Update bro ab ek aachi story aayi hai
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Geetanjali apartment ki ladies ka bhi introduction karwa do
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Bhai deku sirf isi pe focus rakho tumhara update sabse fast hai baki writer ke mamle
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Nice plot bhai keep it up...
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Deku ,,अच्छा start है keep going
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Hot start
Waiting for next update
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Intresting tittle keep going.
Add pix in between story that makes more interesting ?
Give big update and hope you not live your story in between ?
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Deku bekar ki stroy chor ke ispe focus kar na bhai
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Ab deku v bhaw khane laga please jyada log tarif mat karo nahi to yeah v baki writer ki tarh ho jayenga
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अरे कहा गायब होगया मेरा भाई।
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Ek din jab Rafiq aur uskay do betay anwer aur Saqib unkay ghar par dopeher ka khana kha rahay thay.
Tabhi koi unkay ghar aata hai.
A : Rafiq bhai wo waha.
R : jaldi bol hariya kya hua?
H : wo jcb lekar aaye hain. Apka toilet todnay kay liye. Jaldi chalo Rafiq.
Usi waqt Rafiq aur uskay betey khana chod waha dod jatay hai.
Waha jakar wo jaisey hi jcb unkay banaye toilet ko chuney wala tha.
Rafiq aur unskay betay us jab driver aur waha maujud govt officers ko bhi markar waha say bhaga detay hai.
Rafiq uskay ghar chala jata hai.
Aur waha sanjay ko call karta hai.
S : ha Rafiq bol phone kaisey kiya?
R : yahi batna kay liye phone kiya tere jo aadmi aaye thay unki kafi dhulai kiye hai hamney.
S : ha wo pata chala mujhay. Par tum yeh bhul gaye waha jo officer tha jisko tuney mara hai. Wo yaha kay Acp ka jamai hai. Agay tu janta hai.
R : arey ACP kiya agar koi bhi aa jaye mera kuch nahi ukhad sakta hai.
S : dekhtay hai kon tera kiya ukhadega.
Jaisey hi Sanjay Rafiq ka phone kata hai Rafiq kay ghar par security officer aa jatay hai.
Aur usay ghasitay hue sultan nagar say security officer station le jatay hai.
Acp : kiya hua to hi hai na Rafiq tere haath pair kuch jyada hi chal rahay hai.
R : chup saley sanjay kumar kay bhadway.
ACP : To sanjay sahi bola tha tu bahut bada chutiya hai.
R : chutiya kisko bola tu.
ACP : tujhay bola hai. Tu yaha security officer station mai hai aur waha mera jamaye tera garibo ka taj mahal gira raha hai.
Bas itna kehnay ki baat thi.
Rafiq ACP par hamla kar deta hai.
R : saley harami tujhay aur us sanjay ko mai choduga nahi
Iss baat par ACP jor jor say hasney lagta hai.
ACP : tunay aab bahut badi galti kar di hai. Dekho inspector Suraj inki achay sai khatir dari karo inki.
S : ji sir aap chinta maat karo.
Phir inspector suraj unko waha say security officer ki custody mai le jata hai.
Tabhi suraj unko cell mai le jakar unki khatir dari mai lag jata hai.
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Story exciting lag rahi hai
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Story अच्छी शुरुआत कर रहे हो ,,, अब थोड़ा गीतांजलि अपार्टमेंट की बहु बेटियो का भी इंट्रोडक्शन करवा दो।
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Nice interesting exciting update
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