11-10-2021, 01:35 AM
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Shubha Adventures
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11-10-2021, 02:19 AM
Do post your reviews and suggestion and looking ahead for response
13-10-2021, 01:57 AM
(11-10-2021, 11:32 AM)Givemeextra Wrote: Cons:
1) Don't spam your own thread. Updates delivery should be timed better.
To many updates in same day will lead to next many days completely empty. If updates were 1 per day, then it wil be regular posting
2) Pictures were missing in later parts completely
3) Original Font was fine , the last few posts had to big a font
4) Expected more incidents while she was with Hubby in call
Pros:
1) Chat conversations were good
2) The way Shubha went into debauchery was more realistic (when compared to other stories)
3) Good writing Skills
Future:
1) More incidents with Hubby on call?
2) What will Hubby see/learn when he comes Back?
3) Shailesh Character scope ?
4) Any more incidents behind hubby's back when he is around?
General:
How are you going to take it forward? Any hints. Is story close to end or more of Shubha's ADVENTURES exist?
THREAD RATING: 4 STARS OUT OF 5
Appreciate your time and suggestions for giving such a lengthy review and happy that you liked it. I know the pictures are missing will add them later as difficult to manage them to find with exact situation and time consuming. Try to work on the same if you can post some pics for the rest of the part will really appreciate and add them to the earlier parts
27-11-2021, 03:32 PM
Sorry for the late updates to the story as had been busy with other things.
However the response i see is little disappointing and hope the story is like by others. If any changes please suggest
However the response i see is little disappointing and hope the story is like by others. If any changes please suggest
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