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Every analysis is welcomed and since the majority of the audience is not very keen about this theme, I guess I better end it up at a quick note and I am very sorry incase I hurt any feelings subjectively.
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I am also glad I could save my time.
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No offence is taken whatsoever. I have decided to conclude the story and will make sure it is a satisfying one. :)
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Last Chapter
Some days later :
Alok's feminine activities increased and everytime he felt mocked and degraded by his own family members. Kaamna neglected him each and every night and even implied her hate towards him and made him almost useless. Clearly on the other hand, Jaya was taken care of in almost every way by his prince in shining armour Arvind and had sex almost three times a week and their beyond excellent chemistry made Kaamna cry in secret or whenever she was all by herself.
Arvind in the meantime handled office and Jaya ruled the home! Both of them behaved like Brutal Tribal leaders and Alok continued to just handle the kitchen and that made him feel pansy and nothing else. At times, he would sneak to a nearby pub and have drinks after drinks, only repenting on the day when he had banished Arvind from his office. To be honest, he had only hope in his life..
Kaamna!
His wife, his everything!
"But does she love me?? Does she still care for me??"
A tear of hopeless dropped from Alok's eye and he realised he drank quite a lot. At this precise moment, however one person actually did help him out in carving out a solution. And that person was none other than Rajesh, Pushpita's husband.
Infact Alok was shocked when he got a surprise call from him.
Alok : hi phuphaji.....how are you?
Rajesh : Alok beta, I know you are not happy!
Alok : Forget it! It's just my......just my fate!
Rajesh : and your fate is in your hands!
Alok : what do you mean?
Rajesh talked freely to Alok and at the end of the conversation, Alok seemed to heave a big deep breath. His eyes looked shiny at this moment and his heart skipped some beats.
"Ok phuphaji, so be it!"
.......
One Sunday :
"Beta?? What is this??" Why??"
Jaya was shocked to see that Alok had seperated himself from the family's will and decided to end the relationship with his family forever.
"Maa, all this is yours now! Rule over everything with Arvind!"
Alok spat out to his mother and he had almost packed his bags, while Jaya was shocked to see Kaamna complying with her husband as well.
Jaya : Kaamna, make him understand!
Kaamna : Jaya, you have been enough cruel to your son and if I live in this house further, I will surely follow your footsteps!
Jaya after a long long time felt pangs of guilt inside her and pleaded once more, but Arvind held her shoulder and implied her not to react. However Arvind didn't hesitate to go to Alok and touch his shoulder and surprisingly Alok didn't jerk it off. Arvind opened his heart out too...
"Alok beta, nothing on Earth can change my relationship with your mother, but yes just ask yourself, who allowed all these events to seep in? Every action has reactions, take care of Kaamna beti"
Alok and Kaamna left the house and this was actually the beginning of Alok and Kaamna's new life.
......
Some more days pass and Jaya becomes pregnant. However neither Alok nor Kaamna keep in touch with the people in that house. Rajesh being the exception though!
Today Alok has taken a job of a manager in some other company and is earning decently and Kaamna too is doing her regular job well. Alok's pre-ejaculation was still an issue, but Kaamna focussed on her true love for him, rather than his sexual performance. Infact, Kaamna still enjoyed making sweet softcore love to him and Alok too receproated in his own way.
Far from the small rented flat where Alok lived with Kaamna, was Jaya who had everything, her big house, her son's share of wealth and ofcoarse a bull like husband like Arvind to satisfy her in every possible way.
But...
Her only child was no more with her!
Standing by the balcony and rubbing her round pregnant stomach, Jaya only wished that the baby turn out to be a male newborn whom she can name Alok!
Indeed the re-marriage was successful for Jaya, but unfortunately....
It broke a well off family apart forever!
The End
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Brief note from the author :
To be honest, I had seperate plans for the story, but I guess its better to know where to end, rather than leaving the story incomplete or spoiling it's potential themes.
I may return with a fresh idea of a story in future. Untill then, I thank this platform for allowing me to share my imagination and ofcoarse the author of the original Re-marriage, for inspiring me.
Thank you everyone for everything, be it encouragement or analysis.
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A good news for all my readers. The next season of this story will begin soon and hope to get all your love and support. It's my request to all readers to ignore the story if the theme offends you. As for the others, stay tuned.
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Kaamna soon noticed Alok's presence at the threshold of the balcony and decided to hang up for now.
"Um okay Pushpita, talk to you later! Bye!"
Kaamna soon adjusted her dupatta and behaved like the typical demure traditional wife and very sweetly asked..
"Um what is it Alok, anything you wanted?"
Alok gave her the look of feeling almost cheated and left the balcony space silently. Kaamna hated this side of her husband as she realised that he was very sensitive to tiny things, but then she played the good wife card and swayed her (recently) kind of fleshy bum and ran to console Alok!
As Kaamna walked to her room, she relaised her buttocks sway a bit more than before. Clearly she had put on some very subtle weight and yet the extra kilos reached the right places. Kaamna giggled at herself when she relaised that this was all due to the non veg goodies she was having secretly outside, of which Alok had no idea, since she cooked only veg at home.
Kaamna bit her lip when she relaised she even had learnt to munch on beef meals too, although she behaved like a cow worshiping good housewife with her darling Alok!
"Ehrrmmm! Anyways.... I better console Alok, he is such a baby sometimes! A baby in an adult body!"
Kaamna again giggled and blushed as she said those lines. Anyhow she reduced her pace and walked slowly inside her room where Alok stood by the window, clearly with rage hidden inside.
Kaamna : umm Alok.... actually...I ...well..
Alok : gosh Kaamna! How could you??? You know I am not keeping in touch with any of my members anymore, right???
Kaamna : Alok! Hold on... First of all it was YOUR decision to not keep in touch, not MINE, okay?
Alok felt this tight slap to his male ego. When he said 'I' it actually meant 'we' right??? He was the male, who is supposed to make the decisions, right???
However Kaamna's eyes had this raging spark and her body language had the aura of latent dominance, which Alok could sniff easily. Not wanting to argue, Alok heaved a breath and left the room. Kaamna saw him leave and her heart thumped with a strange joy.
The joy of shutting her husband off!
The joy of seing a strange nervousness in Alok's face!
And moreover...
The joy of slapping his stupid male ego.
Kaamna smiled as she thought of all these, while murmering a song while heading to the washroom for a quick shower. The song she sang was a preppy song from the film 'Betaabi'.
"Na lena humse panga!
Ustaad hum baare hai.."
Murmering the song, she took her shower, while still thinking over whatever Pushpita shared with her on phone.
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My deepest respect for each and every opinion and sentiments. However as an author I am entitled to stick to my version of storytelling.
But then, ofcoarae I leave it to the reader to enjoy my offerings or not.
No offence taken, whatsoever :)
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Night Delight :
While Pushpita read an erotic novel in her bedroom, the room of Jaya and Arvind lit up with immense heat. Jaya was all in her naked glory and Arvind too slept stark naked besides her, doing his usual soft massage of the big preggo belly and ofcoarse the amazing melons with large coin shaped nipples that would soon spew milk sooner or later. Arvind softly flickered the nipples while Jaya rubbed her bulky legs against each other and moaned softly. The day was indeed amazing and Jaya and Arvind played within themselves while they discussed the amazing event that happened.
Jaya : oh Arvind! Why are the women in your Village aah...like this??
Arvind : (flicking a nipple) hmmmm they scared you??
Jaya : they are so..oh...so scar....no I mean so strong and so crude! Oh my.....aaah!
Jaya envisioned the oily semi naked busty dark women and again felt her nipples tighten up and become sharper, while the one between Arvind's rough fingers sharpened up even more. Jaya looked at them and wondered that if incase Arvind suckled them, she could die out of an orgasm!
But then Arvind was a slow teaser and it was one of the things Jaya loved about him. She closed her eyes as Arvind mauled the breasts and cooed into her ears..
"I have this strange desire Jaya! Only if you wish.."
Jaya cooed back..
"What kind of desire??'
Arvind hissed...
"This breasts should double up when filled with milk and the first offering should be given to the labour in our office! Let them have a lavish milk tea for a change!"
Jaya's nipples stood up more and she almost thumped her large ass on the bed while biting her lower lip, then cooed..
"Arvind! Oh what makes you think all these???"
Arvind chewed on an earlobe and whimpered...
"Hmmmm the labour workers know how BIG hearted their malkin is!"
Jaya moaned..."mmhmmm"
Arvind flickered further "you are BIG hearted right?"
Jaya nodded in extacy and envisioned someday walking to the office and opening her blouse and bra (if they fit) and openly spewing milk onto the steel tea cups of the hard working workers. The image set her body on fire and she almost grabbed Arvind's other hand and pressed it to her itchy groin..
"Aaarvwindddd ohhhhh!"
Arvind leg pulled her further...
"hey hey Jaya devi the sophisticated lady! What happened to you suddenly???"
But Jaya was already damp since the wrestling program and now Arvind's teasing only made her condition worse!
Arvind then whispered futher into her ear...
"So you loved the match eh?"
Jaya moaned as if she was having breathing issues..
"Arvind iit....it was so gro....gross!"
Arvind smacked her fat cellulite thigh and groaned "but you loved it! You admired them!!"
Jaya hated this brutish side of Arvind but loved it at the same time too. She still felt butterflies inside her stomach on recollecting the 'pee' moment during the victory of the winning lady and Arvind nuzzled on her greyish black hair locks, whimpering...
"Maybe someday they might even train you! the sophisticated Jaya devi!"
Arvind licked the earlobe on completing his sentence and Jaya bit her lip again as she envisioned herself oiling her body and patting her robust thighs for a crude activity like wrestling. Something which would be unimaginable a year ago. This bizzare image made her buckle her body and quickly hug Arvind, spewing juices all over his hairy thighs. Jaya moaned and moaned while Arvind held her firm and smacked her big juicy buttocks.
The slap sound never failed to arouse Jaya and she wapped her fair fat leg over Arvind's hairy strong one. Soon the couple indulged in a deep lovemaking frenzy. Pushpita in her room easily heared the moans and groans and this was not new to her, since Alok and Kaamna's absence over the last few weeks had made her normally loud and free.
Imagining Arvind's brown burly body over her bhabhi's plump fair one made Pushpita rub her own itch, while she actually imagined the driver of the family..
Manohar!
Infact Manohar even invaded her dreams in a Tarzan outfit while she in her bulky form rested on a tree in a skimpy cloth that barely covered her ample features. In the dream itself she could smell Manohar's muskyness from a mile and sadly while he approached her, the dream would end up.
Frustrated, Pushpita would hug the pillow and moan like a young budding nymph despite being the mother of two grown up daughters.
"Aw Manohar! Come back to my dreams...pleaaase.."
The elderly lady moaned and rubbed her ample breasts against the hugged pillow.
.......
One one hand were Jaya and Pushpita with their respective fates, and on the other were Kaamna and Alok in their flat, where the couple were spending a strange teaseful night. Alok had his shirt tugged up all the way to his neckline and Kaamna was busy kissing all the way on his smooth hairless chestline. Unknown to Alok, this activity strangely made Kaamna feel like the man on the bed and Alok the other way around, which never failed to turn her on.
"Forget whatever happened in the past and let's start afresh in our own house okay?"
Kaamna cooed like the typical loving wife and kissed on a bare hairless area of Alok's chest, strangely making him stirr a bit and close his eyes..
Kaamna cooed again..."shona, you didn't answer me..."
On getting another kiss on his other chest area, Alok melted and almost moaned saying...."yes sure! Let's aah begin a new...."
Kaamna again did something which she seldom did with Alok, and she knew it never ever failed to turn him on...
The flicking of his nipples!
The wrestling match had turned on Kaamna so much that she strangely found the bare chest of Alok to be a bit feminine and she imagining herself to be the strong one, almost mashed her lips over his nipple, making him moan in a way that even shocked her!
"Aaawwwwohh Kaaaaaamnaaaa uhhhhh!'
Kaamna felt Alok's body jerk and his trackpant formed a round wet patch immediately. Kaamna in her recent crude nature, didn't mind that at all. Infact she kissed the cheeks of Alok with her pouty lips and whispered..
"Let's get to sleep shona! Tomorrow morning we are shifting back, remember?"
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The Rude Shock :
"What??? How could she do this?"
Alok couldn't believe the document he was holding where Kaamna's new powers were mentioned. This strange conversation was taking place between them while Alok was bursting in anger and sorrow while inside the washroom, Kaamna took a shower and rubbed her slightly bigger breasts and soaped them up saying..
"Aw shona, don't be upset....I guess she just wants me to be a part of the business that's all!"
From outside, Alok kept reading again and again....
"Damn! She could have atleast told me! Kaamna, how could she!!"
Alok's ego weeped while Kaamna took her shower happily and strangely with some high levels of excitement, as she rubbed her newly extruded babyfat over her waist and also the bit of extra meat on her upper thighs, that made her feel quite sexy. Anyhow she rubbed those areas under the shower as she cooed to Alok...
"Just relax and talk to your mother if you want!"
Kaamna cooed and rubbed and scrubbed her entire curvy body under the shower while Alok almost crushed the file and walked all the way out of his room to confront Jaya regarding the decision she made.
While on the other hand, Kaamna showered her curvy supple body and rubbed and scrubbed those precise spots where she felt she gained some mass and this entirely new feeling excited her and she enjoyed the shower, while at the same time, she remembered something Alok had told her some time ago....
"Oh cmmon Kaamna! Don't bother with joining the business, it's not your cup of tea anyways!"
Kaamna showered as she recollected this line and then her cunny again moistened as she thought of Alok reading the documents and getting shocked. Kaamna thought of Alok as a baby from whom his most precious toy was taken away and this crude thought surprisingly made her insert her index finger into her moist opening and rub a bit. Another finger followed when she visualised Alok cry like a baby as he saw his position, his ego being shattered due to her new position.
"My baby! He must be so upset aaaah aaawww" Kaamna felt horrible and wicked yet she fingered herself as she imagined Alok's sadness and her own agency over him!
However Kaamna expanded her imagination more and visualed Alok's face as a cry baby on some of the posters she had seen on Mridula's office and that was it!
She buckled her body up and down under the shower while she reached a fierce orgasm. Her pouty lips opened wide and serious moans came out and this was an amazing discovery Kaamna did about herself. Strangely the orgasm gave her relief and she embraced her own wicked thoughts and giggled as she cooed to herself very nymphishly closing the shower...
"Aw Alok! My baby..."
............
On the other hand, Alok rushed and almost banged on the door of Jaya's room and surprisingly found it closed, that too at morning at such a odd time. His ego was so shattered that he wanted to question his mother as soon as possible for this authority transferring decision she made.
Alok tried his best to also mentally convince himself that he did love Kaamna, but couldn't handle the fact that she would take up his own authorities!
That was 'non-patriarchal' in his opinion.
Anyhow!
Alok banged on the door once more, as he had no idea that inside the room Jaya was naked inside a sheet with just her upper body exposed in her bra while Pushpita sat besides with an oil, wondering whether to open the door or not.
"Um bhabhi...must be Alok!"
A naughty smirk clearly planted on her face at the moment, while Jaya got angry on Alok, because at this precise moment, she wanted a soothing massage from her nanad.
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