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26-07-2021, 05:29 PM
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Chaliye main characters ke intro de deta hun,
Hariya....
Ek 45 saal ka admi, ek noukar. Per apni body ke wajah se dikhne mai 35 se jyada nahi lagta hai, jitna khunkaar dikta hai iska lund bhi utna hi khunkaar hai 10.5 inch ka lamba aur 3 inch mota kala sa.
Mitali......
Hariya ki madam, ghar ka malkin, abhi umar 40 saal, inka pati ka dehant ho gaya hai aur abhi ye apni pati ka business sambhal rahe hai. Per jaab pati mara inka beti baas 3 saal ki thy, jaab 12 saal ki thy inki beti taab inhone apni garmi ke aage hatiyaar dal diya aur pehli baar hariya se chud gayi thy. Taab se leke aaj tak inka garmi hariya hi nikal raha hai.
Inka figure bhi gadraya hua hai, 38-34-40 ki hariya baas inka hand chod chod ke 36 se 40 ka kar diya hai.
Supriya.....
Mitali ki ek louti beti, abhi 18 saal ki hai, apne maa le gayi hai, iska figure kuch kaam nahi hai 18 saal ke umar mai bhi saab kuch bhar gaya hai 33-28-32 ka ho gaya hai. Abhi school mai hai. Dikhne mai behed hi khubsurat.
Ye ek short story hi pata nahi kitna update de paunga per jitna hoga aapko padh ke maja aayega.
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Update 1
Kehte hai aap jitna bhi savdhani barto jo hona tha wo hoke hi rahega....
Har raat ki tarah aaj bhi Mitali Hariya se chudwa rahi thy aur Hariya bhi jor jor se chode ja raha tha. Per abhi raat ke 1 baj rahe thy aur inka nanga nach chal raha tha kamre mai, tabhi Supriya uth ke kitchen ki aur jane lagti hai pani pine ke liye kyun ki uska room mai jo bottle tha usme Pani nahi tha.
Abhi wo apne room se bahar nikli hi thy ki uske mommy ke room ki light jalti huyi nazar aayi to uss aur jane lagti hai, jaab paas pahunchi to baas siskariyo ki awaj aane lagti hai.
Sayad aaj Hariya aur Mitali ko jaldi thy isiliye aaj inhone darwaja band bhi nahi kiya tha, jiska natiza ye hua ki Supriya halka sa darwaja khol ke jaab ander dekhi to dekhti reh gayi.
Ander Hariya apna 10.5 inch ke loude se Mitali ko kisi randi ke tarah chod raha tha. Aur iss scene ko dekh na chahte huye bhi Supriya apne panty ke ander hath ghusa deti hai aur apna chut ko sehla ye ja rahi thy.
School mai apni dost se bahut baate suni huyi thy aur adult film aur story padhi huyi thy Supriya ne jisse ye to pata chal gaya ki ander kya chal raha hai, per kabhi pane hath se apne chut ko chua nahi tha jo aaj ho raha tha wo bhi apni mommy ko apne noukar ke sath dekh ke.
Adhe ghante taak Hariya Mitali ko ragadta raha fir uske chut ke ander hi apna sara virya chod deta hai aur usko ek kiss karke side mai hi ludak jati hai.
Aur idhar bahar Supriya bhi jhad chuki 2 baar, aur baas ander hi dekhe ja rahi thy. Jaab Hariya ka lund bahar nikla to Supriya baas usse hi dekhe ja rahi thy.
Hariya : Mitali jaan maza aagaya..sach kehta hun tujhe jinta chodu mera maan nahi bharta hai kabhi.
Mitali : mera bhi maan kanha bharta hai mera to maan karta hai baas isse apne ander ghusse rahu, per ek dikat hai aap hamesha mere ander hi nikal lete ho aur mujhe tablet lena padta hai.
Hariya : aab isme mai kya kar sakta hun mujhe ander nikal ne mai hi maza aata hai.
Ye dojo yese hi baate karte rehte hai aur Supriya bahar khadi inki baate sun rahi thy aur baas ek tak Hariya ko lund ko ghure ja rahi thy jo abhi murjha gaya tha, murjhaya hua bhi bada khunkhaar lag raha tha.
Hariya : jaan ek aur round ho jaye....
Mitali : na baba na..pehle hi 2 round ho gaya hai aur tisra lene ke liye aur jor nahi hai aur kaal ek important meeting hai aab tum jao.
Hariya : please ek aur
bahut gidgidane lagta hai Hariya per Mitali manti hai to maan marke apna dress pehen ke jane ke liye darwaja ke las jata hai to Supriya ko dekhta hai aur Mitali bhi apni beti ko apne samne dekhti hai to dono ghabra jate hai aur hariya wanha se chala jata hai.
Supriya ander aati hai mitali taab tak apne kadpe pehen chuki thy aur bed pe bethi huyi Supriya ke paas jake beth jati hai.
Mitali kuch kehne ko huyi to Supriya ne usse mana kar diya,
Supriya : aapko kuch kehne ki jarurat nahi hai. Mujhe pata hai papa ke jane ke baad aap pe kya biti hogi. Per mujhe isme kuch nahi kehna wo apka decision tha. Per mai khush hun ki aap bahar kuch nahi karti hai jisse hamare ghar ka badnami ho. Per itna kahunga ki thoda darwaja band liya karo ye saab karne se pehle ghar mai ek jawan beti bhi hai.
Ye kehke Supriya nikal jati hai per Nilam apni beti ki baat sunke usko acha nahi lagta hai wo guilty feel kar rahi thy, aur bahut royi bhi. Per uska rona kon sunta.
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Achchha story he. Ise Dominent Thoda canvart kro Malti ki pyas he ki Buzti nhi aur dikhave ki khatr supriya ko khush rkhti he par jab supriya ko malum pad gya to ab hriya gharme hukm chleye supriya ko pite us se Lund chusvaye. use khna pina n de ya kahne ke badleme hriya ka lund chusna pde ya pani ke badle hariya ki gand chatni pde malti ki chudai ke bad supriya se malti ki chut chtvaye supriya n mane to uske balo kokhich ke hath marod ke malti bhi usme hriya ka hi sath de.
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(26-07-2021, 06:07 PM)Bhikhumumbai Wrote: Achchha story he. Ise Dominent Thoda canvart kro Malti ki pyas he ki Buzti nhi aur dikhave ki khatr supriya ko khush rkhti he par jab supriya ko malum pad gya to ab hriya gharme hukm chleye supriya ko pite us se Lund chusvaye. use khna pina n de ya kahne ke badleme hriya ka lund chusna pde ya pani ke badle hariya ki gand chatni pde malti ki chudai ke bad supriya se malti ki chut chtvaye supriya n mane to uske balo kokhich ke hath marod ke malti bhi usme hriya ka hi sath de.
Thanks brother for your suggestions, per ye dominate story nahi hai, wese idea acha hai sayad agli story usike upar banaunga.
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make supriya a top slut for low class man and Mitali will help Hariya
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Mitali to rote rote so jati hai, kyun ki aaj usse bahut guilty feel ho raha tha, per idhar Supriya ki nind hi udd gayi thy. Usse reh reh ke baas Hariya ka lund hi nazar aaraha tha, wo so na saki to wo uth ke pehle apne kamre ka darwaja ache se band kiya fir ek ek karke apna dress utarne lagi, fir uska gore badan light mai kamal ki lag rahi thy.
Pir aage badke apne apne chut mai ungli karne lagti hai bed pe jake,
Supriya : aaaahhh...maaaaa.... Hariya....uuuufff... Hariya......aaaahh.....pata nahi kitne der tak karti rahi, pehle to 2 baar jhad chuki thy aab bhi wo Hariya ka naam leke baas ungli kare ja rahi thy.
15 min baad wo jhad ke wanhi bed hi besudh hoke gir jati hai aur so jati hai.
Agli subha saab uth jate hai aur Hariya kitchen mai khana bana raha tha aur Mitali apne office ki kaam kar rahi thy, Supriya bhi uth ke aajati hai per wo abhi na to Mitali ko dekhti hai na hi Hariya ko.
Ajib sa uttbhed mai thy Supriya..fir bina nasta kiye hi college school nikal jati hai, aur Supriya ko yese jane se Mitali bhi dukhi ho jati hai aur ye sochne lagti hai ki Supriya ko bura laga hai hariya ke sath uska sambadh ka janke...
Hariya bhi Mitali ki mandodasa samajh raha tha,
Hariya : malkin..aap chinta na kijiye aap ache se jayiye apne business meeting mai jaab aap 7 din baad wapas aayenge taab apko beti pehle jese ho gayi hogi.
Mitali : thik hai hariya, mera bhi mood nahi hai khane ka tum banake kha lena aur ache se ghar ka khyal rakhna.
Hariya : ji malkin....
Fir Mitali bhi chali jati hai apne business meeting ke liye aur wanha se business tour mai jo abhi 7 din chalegi.
Mitali ke jane ke baad Hariya sabhi kamro ko saaf karta hai aur akhir mai Supriya ki kamre mai aajata hai per aaj usse kuch mil jata hai.
Raat mai Supriya ungli karne ke baad apne panty mai hi hath aur chut ko poch ke wanhi bed ke niche fenk di thy jisko Hariya ko mil gaya.
Pehle to wo usko utha ke bahar dhone ke liye le ja raha tha per pata nahi kyun wo usko sunghne laga, aur sunghte sunghte apna hath apne lund pe le gaya aur aaj pehli baar Hariya Supriya ka naam ka muth mara tha, fir Supriya ki panty mai apna lund ko saf karke dhone rakh diya. Sara ghar ka kaam karne lag jata hai.
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ab tera kiya hoga re Supriya
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 Reps added.. Keep Rockin...
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(26-07-2021, 06:09 PM)writersahab719 Wrote: Thanks brother for your suggestions, per ye dominate story nahi hai, wese idea acha hai sayad agli story usike upar banaunga.
Yhi story ko kyu Nhi? vayse story Aapki he. aap ki marji. Fir bhi ab to story me situation bhi ayse he. supriya aur hriya 7 din akele he ghar me. 7 din me hriya use jabrdast Dominent kar sakta he. use bhukha rkh ke pyasa rkh ke spanking kar ke .
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Update 3
Udhar supriya school pahunchne ke baad sidha canteen mai chali jati hai janha uska best friend Ragini bethi huyi thy, wo bhi apne boyfriend ke sath.
Supriya bhi jake wanhi beth jati fir dono dost baate karte hai kuch der baad Ragini wanha se chali jati hai aur Supriya bhi apne class mai, per aaj Supriya ka kisi bhi chiz mai mann laag hi raha tha usse baas baar baar Hariya ka hi lund nazar aaraha tha aur na chahte huye bhi uska hath uske choot ke upar chala jata tha.
Yese hi jese tese karke apna class khatam karke wapas ghar jane ke liye nikalti hai ki uski maa Mitali ka call ajata hai,
Mitali : beti mera business tour hai 7 din ke liye to mai aagayi hun, aur beti aaj subha....
Supriya bich mai hi : that's ok mom, uske liye aap chinta na kijiye jaab wapas aayenge ache se baat karenge.
Mitali : thik hai beti, baas mujhe galat maat samajh na.....
Supriya : bye mom....
Mitali : bye beta....
Fir call rakh deti hai Supriya,
Supriya (mann mai) : aab aapko kese bataun mom mere chut mai aag lagi padi hai jaab se Hariya kaka ka lund dekha hai, aur mai apse naraz nahi hun apki majburi thy.
Sirf itna hi nahi Supriya ye bhi sochne lagti hai aage kese ye 7 din mai Hariya lund lena hai wo plan banane lagi, aab wo kafi dari huyi thy aur sath mai excited bhi.
Dar iss baat ka ki kese itna bada uske ander jayega aur excited iss liye ki jaab jayega taab kesa maza dega. Kyun wo kafi baar Ragini se suni huyi thy jaab lund chut mai jata hai to kitna mazza deta hai.
Fir Supriya Hariya ko apne jaal mai fasana ka soch ke ghar ke taraf chali jati hai iss baat se anjaan ki Hariya to pehle se hi usko chakne ke liye tayar betha hai.
Chaliye Hariya ke paas chalte hai,
Jaab saab kaam khatam ho gaya to hariya sidha Supriya ke room mai jata hai aur uska godrej khol ke uska inner dress dekhne lagta hai aur usko chune lagta hai aur apna lund masalne lagta hai, aur mann hi maan than leta hai ki kesse bhi karke ye 7 din ke ander Supriya ko apne niche lana hai fir dono maa beti ko ek sath ek hi bed pe chodna hai.
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Dono bnegi hariya ki biwi suppprrbbbb bro
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(29-07-2021, 09:52 PM)good writersahab719 Wrote: Update 3
Udhar supriya school pahunchne ke baad sidha canteen mai chali jati hai janha uska best friend Ragini bethi huyi thy, wo bhi apne boyfriend ke sath.
Supriya bhi jake wanhi beth jati fir dono dost baate karte hai kuch der baad Ragini wanha se chali jati hai aur Supriya bhi apne class mai, per aaj Supriya ka kisi bhi chiz mai mann laag hi raha tha usse baas baar baar Hariya ka hi lund nazar aaraha tha aur na chahte huye bhi uska hath uske choot ke upar chala jata tha.
Yese hi jese tese karke apna class khatam karke wapas ghar jane ke liye nikalti hai ki uski maa Mitali ka call ajata hai,
Mitali : beti mera business tour hai 7 din ke liye to mai aagayi hun, aur beti aaj subha....
Supriya bich mai hi : that's ok mom, uske liye aap chinta na kijiye jaab wapas aayenge ache se baat karenge.
Mitali : thik hai beti, baas mujhe galat maat samajh na.....
Supriya : bye mom....
Mitali : bye beta....
Fir call rakh deti hai Supriya,
Supriya (mann mai) : aab aapko kese bataun mom mere chut mai aag lagi padi hai jaab se Hariya kaka ka lund dekha hai, aur mai apse naraz nahi hun apki majburi thy.
Sirf itna hi nahi Supriya ye bhi sochne lagti hai aage kese ye 7 din mai Hariya lund lena hai wo plan banane lagi, aab wo kafi dari huyi thy aur sath mai excited bhi.
Dar iss baat ka ki kese itna bada uske ander jayega aur excited iss liye ki jaab jayega taab kesa maza dega. Kyun wo kafi baar Ragini se suni huyi thy jaab lund chut mai jata hai to kitna mazza deta hai.
Fir Supriya Hariya ko apne jaal mai fasana ka soch ke ghar ke taraf chali jati hai iss baat se anjaan ki Hariya to pehle se hi usko chakne ke liye tayar betha hai.
Chaliye Hariya ke paas chalte hai,
Jaab saab kaam khatam ho gaya to hariya sidha Supriya ke room mai jata hai aur uska godrej khol ke uska inner dress dekhne lagta hai aur usko chune lagta hai aur apna lund masalne lagta hai, aur mann hi maan than leta hai ki kesse bhi karke ye 7 din ke ander Supriya ko apne niche lana hai fir dono maa beti ko ek sath ek hi bed pe chodna hai.
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Super.... please update more
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Keep updating, please don't make us wait long or else we will loose interest to read the story maybe you too to write further
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