[Udaybhanu]

Arey baprey!! Uffffff!!
Ab yeh kahaani ek alaag hi mod lene wali hai. Abtak toh sab kallu ke gaon mein ho raha tha... Lekkn abtoh is heroine ki puri family danger mein hai..... Kallu aa raha hai ubke ghar rehene..... Kya kya hoga!! Sochke bhi rongtey kharey ho raha hai !!

Thank you Baban bhai

[Udaybhanu]

Superb update

Thank you ravi120

Nice update

Thank you Lost Spartan

[Udaybhanu]

AWESOME BHAI... WAITING FOR KALLU TO BANG LOLO...

Thank you dost

[Udaybhanu]

Dosto mujhe aaj hi pata chala ki Shubham Sharma krke koi writer mera story ko exactly copy kr ke //// me paste kr raha hai. Shubham bhai agar ye comment padh rahe ho to dost ye sab band kr do ye mera story hai tum apna story likho mera copy mat karo. Ye thik nahi hai. Agar tum copy paste krna band nahi kiye to me yaha bhi post krna band kr dunga story aadhi hi chhod dunga. Ishka koi matlab nahi hai koi comment nahi krta koi interested nahi hai story ko leke yaha tak bhi me seh raha tha lekin Agar story copy paste hoga to me story band kr dunga.

Aur me serious hu dost agar tum nahi ruke me ruk jaaunga.

[Udaybhanu]

Haa bhai maine bhi kal dekha ki .,., par hubahu aapki yeh story copy paste hai ....fir maine socha ki kahi aap ki koi dusri id se yeh likh rahe ho.....or ek writer hone ke naate aapka gussa hona jaayaj hai ....aap itni mehnat kar ke likh rahe ho or koi doosra aapki mehnat ko copy karke apna kahe ye sarasar galat baat hai.....i m with you uday bhanu bhai....aap us site par jaake us thread par announce kar dijiye ki yeh aapki story ko copy paste kar raha hai....or agar fir bhi wo na ruke to aap ruk jaaiye ....aave post na kariye.....

Ha Ajanmol bhai yehi ek rasta hai mene ushe mana kiya aaj hi site par apna account bana ke dekhte hai agar nahi ruka to me aage post nahi karunga. Mera mehnat mera story hai aur mujhe credit tak nahi diya hai aur nahi kabhi ish story ko padhte huye ek baar comment bhi kiya hai. Yaha adhe se jyada log bas story padh kr nikal jaate hai kabhi ek like ya comment nahi krte writer banne ka kya fayda agar appreciation hi naa mile aur jo appreciate nahi kr raha hai wohi tumhara story chori kare.

That's all.... Bas aagey dekhta hu kya reply deta hai post me.

[Udaybhanu]

Brother report that guy and plzz continue your story...

Brother I already did the same but some people don't realise their fault. So the 2nd option will be my last option and the destiny of this story.

[Udaybhanu]

Udhar bhi jakar bolkey ayaa....❤

Ek toh ab puranaa wala time nahi raha jab har ek language ke readers story ko parkey apna feelings comment karke writer ko inspiration dete the. Woh time gayaa.. Ab kisi bhi site pe us tarah ka josh readers mein nahi dikhta. Sab free mein parkey nikal jate hai. This is wrong frnds.

Main bhi aaj agar is site ka higest Reputation achiever  ban paya toh woh puraane real readers ke pyaar aur support ke wajah se. Jo story parkey comments, like, reps dekar mujhe inspire karte thei but aaj......huh

Sab araam se pura parkey maza lekar ek bhi comment na kiye dusre story parne lagtey hai. Guest users ko chor hi du... But at least jo registered member hai woh agar par rahe hai, aur story enjoy kar rahe hai woh log atleast ek positive comment kardo doston. Janta hu bolkey kuch faida nahi... Par ek comment karne mein kya jataa hai vhai?

Nahi Baban bhai ishka koi matlab nahi hai yaha sabko maza to chahiye lekin koi dusre ko inspire nahi karega ha tumhara story chori jarur karega.

Wah 

[Udaybhanu]

Mujhe bhi bhot gussa aaya tha maine toh soch liya tha ki inlogo ko free ka sukh nahi dunga ...paid kar doonga apni story ko....par kuch sacche reader ke wajah se jhuk gaya....warna sach kaho to ab man nahi karta yaha likhne ka....

Inhi logo ke wajah se bhut badhiya writers ylts , seansean , ajaykumar82 jaise or bhi bhut writers ab xossipy chhod chuke hai...

Wohi to baat hai bhai kuchh sache readers hi hai jo inspire karte hai hamare hard work ko. Jiske wajah se writing krta hai koi writer apna free time nikal kr, ab to IPL bhi start ho gya hai time kese manage krta hai ek writer sirf wohi janta hai. 

Aur Ajanmol bhai agar update late hogaya to log gaali bhi dena chalu kr dete hai, apke story me to dekha hu me, inhe sirf maza chahiye ye 1 min nahi de sakte comment krne ke liye.

Bas bahat hogaya ye story THE END hai 

Sab maze ko jisko copy krna hai wo kare copy.

Story khatam.......

Agar mere daily update aur mehnat ka yehi sila hai to....

The END 

Bye and have fun 

And mere dosto jinhone bhi ish story me mujhe inspire kiya suggestions diya. Unsab ko sorry please apne bhai ko maaf kr do. Lekin eshe story me aage nahi likh sakta.

Thank you

[Udaybhanu]

Socha nahi tha yeh baat kabhi bolunga..... Par aapka decision sahi hai..... Sala kaam se fursaat nikal ke inke liye story bhi likhe, baat Bhi suney, koi response bhi naa miley toh kya ghanta mood banta hai agey likhney ka? Ab toh mera bhi maan nahi karta.....

 Bengali mein main non erotic, romantic, friendship ke upar story likhta hoo..... Socha tha hindi mein bhi likhunga. Lekin jo haal dekh rahaa hoo.... Adult story ko hi response nahi milta toh non erotic ka kya hoga

Rok do.... Chor do bhai.... Haa main khud bol raha hu... Jo ekdin aapko bola tha yeh story complete karna.. Aj woh yeh bol raha hai. Log hum writers ko koi respect hi nahi dete..haljey mein le lete hai!!

Hum likhe, na likhey ghanta faraak oarta hai inko..... Dusrey baaki stories parney lagengey.. Haa kuch sacchey readers hai.... Unke liye hi abtak hum lilhtey thei... Par sab ka ek hadh hota hai

Thank you Baban bhai aap mera har ek decision me saath rahe hai aur motivate bhi kiya hai aapne. Aur apka saath mere ish decision ko bhi mila to thank you. But mera bahat mann tha ye story end krne ka lekin eshe koi bhi writer nahi likh sakta.

Aur mere ish decision ko har ek writer agree karega.

[Udaybhanu]

Chalo jee...ye bhi acha story incomplete chorne k lye...saaf saaf kehdo naa bhai k ab likhne ko kuch bacha nahi hai tumhare paas, or us copy paste ki waja se tumhain acha bahana milgaya...i am sorry main apke baqi readers ki trah yes sir yes sir wali nahi hun... really sorry  but it was disgusting...matlab karey koi aur bharey koi...us ullu k pathey copy writer ki saza ap yaha par apne chahney walon ko dengay???readers ka kia kasoor hai isme??? is ts wrong... completely wrong....at least ap se to ye umeed nahi thi...

Dekhiye Sana ji ye apka point of view hai ki mere paas likhne ko kuchh bacha nahi hai lekin deep down aap bhi janti hai ki me kesa writer hu. You are one of the best supporter of this story and I like that but sorry ye story aagey likhna ab mood nahi hai.

Dekhiye ek hota hai reader aur dusra hota hai writer, writer ko Storytelling pasand hota hai aur reader ko story aur indono ke bich ka rista hota hai communication ka. Agar aap koi content karo aur ush content ko sab padhe lekin sab response na kare aur jo response nahi kr raha hai wohi apka story kahi aur copy kr de to aapko kesa lagega.
Aap ye kabhi nahi samajh paaengi koi writer hi ye chiz samajh sakta hai koi reader nahi.

But apke achhe achhe suggestions ke liye thank you very much and I sorry to disappoint you, I really am. But this is not the way, I hope I am clear from my side.

[Udaybhanu]

UDAY AND BABAN YOU DID A SPLENDID JOB... YES I CAN UNDERSTAND YOUR FEELINGS... WE ARE WITH YOU... THANKS FOR THE SUPER STORY... FEELING BAD THAT IT ENDED WITHOUT LOLO AND SARA... BUT ITS OK...

THANK YOU VIKYA76 for understanding and supporting my decision.

[Udaybhanu]

Bro we are always here to support you!!! Now we will support through likes and comments but by leaving your story midway in between is also not correct...we have always enjoyed your story and will continue to read it and support it.

Bro I am really sorry about it but nobody is interested in this story only few give likes and comments which demotivate me, and those who don't respect my hardwork they are stealing the story. For that I have decided to stop please understand and thank you for your support.

[Udaybhanu]

Moral of the story...ek aur fantastic story incomplete...yehi riwaj hai is xossipy ka...

Incomplete to rahega sanaji yaha kisi ko interest nahi hai ek comment krne ke liye. Kisine sahi kaha hai free ka maal ka koi kadar nahi hota hai chahe wo kitna bhi achha ho.

Aur mujhe ye incomplete riwaj todna tha lekin mujhe ab pata chala ki akhir writer kyu chhod dete hai story bich me.

You have been a fantastic supporter of this story that is the only thing I am sorry for you and to my other supporters too.

But story incomplete to rahega hi agar readers hi saath na de writer ka. Sayad me hi tha xossip me jo itna zaldi zaldi update deta tha kyunki mujhe mera agla story nushrat ke upar bhi banani thi. Lekin sab waste hai yaha

[Udaybhanu]

Thanks bro for understanding us. Main bhi is story ke sath jura hua tha, 2 updates bhi maine likha.  par kya kehena? Sab hum (main aur uday bhai) kal bol hi diye hai..  Kisi kisi sacchey rwader ko kharap lag raha hai.. Par woh shayad nahi samjhengey ek writer ka dard.

Hum free story aap logon tak pahuchaate hai... Aur usi free ka kadaar zyadatar log nahi karta...... Puraa maza leke par liya fir without any comment, reply dusri story pe shift ho jaate hai.

Kahaan gaya woh xossipy? Kya tha woh puranaa xossipy uffff.. Mazaa ataa tha tab likhke aur logon ka comments parkey. Tab lagbhag har ek reader support karte thei writer ko.. Isiliye toh maine itney story likhi jo aap sabko pasand aya tha. ❤

Main isiliye uday bhai ko garma garam comment karta tha taake woh aur mazey se likhey..... Par hum kuch readers se kitna faraak parega bhai? Jab baaki log writer ka respect hi nahi karte?

Aab to story likhne ka iccha bhi nahi hota.... Kyu likhu bhai? Jab pathak comments hi nahi karte.... Humko Bataao ke kitna mazedar lag raha hai, erotic inspiring comments karo... But no..... Free mein aye aur gayaab. 

Baban bhai humne apna point prove kr diya hai aur hamare sachhe readers ne hamara decision ka saath bhi diya hai. Aur kuchh kehne ki zarurat nahi hai baban bhai me bahat try kiya tha ki Kareena Kapoor ka story arc complete karu. Lekin yaha ka ek reader jo kabhi yaha mujhe comment karke motivate nahi kiya wohi reader mere story ko chori karke dusra site me dale to kesa lagta hai wo sirf hum jaise writer hi samajh sakte hai.

[Udaybhanu]

Bhai aap story puri karo. Mai aap ko sujhaav bhi de sakta hu.

Baban bhai se pucho maine unhe pm kar ke kitna protsahit kiya tha.

You please also write nusrat story.

Aap writer log bekar ke readers pe dhyan dete ho.  Par aapke chahne walo pe nahi.  Deeply hurt bhai

Nahi bhai yaha aapke hardwork ka koi kadar nahi hai. Ab me bas mere jaise writer logo ka story padhunga aur unko support karunga. Kyunki unko to reader log support karenge nahi kuchh readers ko chhod kar, baaki sab ka haath me dard hota hai ek comment daalne me.

[Udaybhanu]

Doston..... Hum writer bhi chahte hai ke readers mazey se enjoy kare aur apna feedback de. Par agar aap log humko feedback nahi dengey toh writer ko bhi maza nahi ayega. Isluye please jo bhi registered member stories partey ho agar unko stories acchi lag rahi hai toh comments karke writer ko aur protsahit kiya karo... Isse woh writer aur mazey se anand se likhega.....

Firse wahi Purana xossipy ko wapas le aate hai... Chaliye doston.......

Kya aap chahte hai yeh story continue ho?

And meri guest user se request hai pls story padhne ke liye registerd hoiye or feedback dijiye...nahi to ye maza bas kuch din hi milega....koi bhi writer nahi chahega ki uska story koi aise padh kar nikal jaaye....or waise bhi kon sa registered hone mai paisa lag raha hai......story ki ahmiyat sirf writer se nahi hoti balki reader se bhi hoti hai...so guys support erotica writers....

Bhai aap ki bate Shai hai ki ham mahanet se readers ke liye story type kar ke post karte hai but un stories me kuch yashe log hote hai jo hamare story ko copy past kar dete h aur original writer ko credit tak nahi dete hai me bhi ek writer hu other site par ishle samja sakta hu apke duk ko yashe muje bhi story complete karne ka man nahi tha but mene apni story ko complete kara apne readers ke liye

Meri apse yahi gujarish h ki aap apni story ko continue kar de because sabhi ek jase nahi hote hai bro

Sorry ager meri koi baat buri lagi ho to

Thanks reply dene ke liye...nahi bhai.. Bilkul Bura nahi manaa..... Thanks ❤

Maine Ek chis notice kiya.... Abhitak jinhone bhi reply diya sab writers hi hai..

Yehi to baat hai bhaiyo ek writer hi dusre writer ka problem samajh raha hai aur reply kr raha hai.

Me bhi apne achhe readers ko wada kiya tha ki Kareena ki story arc complete hogi ish baar. Lekin jo chori huyi usse mera dil tut gaya aur bahat gussa bhi aaya ki hamare kaam ko log mazak me le rahe hai.

[Udaybhanu]

Update 75

Kareena, Saif aur Taimur tino ready ho jaate hai Mumbai jaane ke liye lekin taimur abhi bhi dara hua tha pochhle raat ka scene dekh kar. Tabhi Kareena chupke se jaake Kallu ko msg kr deti hai....... Maalik hum log taiyaar ho chuke hai aap kaha hai jaldi aaiye jald hi hum log airport ke liye niklenge.

Kallu msg padhne ke baad apna plan hariya aur Birju ko samjhata hai aur dono ko train se aane ke liye kehta hai.

Kallu apna lungi pehen ke aur ek maili se shirt daal ke kareena ke hotel pahunch jaata hai hariya tempo me baith ke.

Tabhi hotel security guard Kallu ko dekh kr apna nazar jhuka leta hai bechara ab Kallu ko izzat de raha tha.

Kallu bhi khushi khushi hotel ke ander ghush jaata hai jaha par lobby me hi Kareena aur saif aur taimur tino ushe mil jaate hai.

Kallu (haath jod ke)...... Namaste maalik apne mujhe Naukri di hai ishiliye me aapka puri zindagi abhari rahunga.

Saif Kallu ke dekh ke ghin aane lagta hai.

Saif (man me)..... Ye kesa jaahil aadmi hai itne bade hotel me bhi lungi aur shirt pehen ke aaya hai. Ye kya badbu hai ye aadmi kisi sade huye ande ki tarah baash maar raha hai ishe apne ghar me kese kaam du. (Kallu ka kala pila daant dekhte huye) ye aadmi to lagta hai kabhi daant bhi nahi ghista hai. Kitna kala daant hai aur kala to aisha hai ki koyla bhi ishe dekh ke sarma jaaye. Ye mere ghar me kaam karega, kese pura din jhelunga ishe.

Saif kareena ko side me lete huye.



Saif...... Bebo kya sach me ye aadmi hamare ghar me kaam karega.

Kareena..... Kyu kya hua.

Saif....... Ishe dekho zara kesa maila badsurat kala aadmi hai. Ishke paas kya hai esha jise dekh ke tum ishe hamare ghar me ishe kaam dene ki zid kar rahi ho.

Kareena (man me)....... Tum kya samjho ge saif ki ishke paas kya hai, ishke paas tumhari begam ko khush karne ke liye ek mota kala lund hai jo hamesha tumhari begam ko chodne ke liye khada rehta hai. Jiske ek dhakke me mere chut ki gehrai ko naap leta hai, mere maalik ka kala lund. Tum kya jaane ek aurat ki dil ki baat. Kitni raat sirf chut me ungli kr ke apne aap ko shaant kiya hai mene. Aur mere maalik sirf 4-5 dhakke se hi mere chut ka paani nikal dete hai. Ohhhhhh kya lund hai. Kitna gadha paani chhodta hai. Ghanto tak khada rehta hai aur mere chut ko baar baar jhadne par majboor krta hai ish kaale aadmi lund.



Kareena Kallu ke lund ke baare me sochte huye hi ushki chut gili ho chuki thi ushka nipple sakt ho gaye the aur ushka chut apne aap hi khulne laga tha. Ki tabhi saif ki awaz se wo wapas hosh me aati hai.


Saif(chutki marte huye)...... Kya hua bebo kaha kho gayi.

Kareena...... Please saif please ish aadmi ka ish duniya me koi nahi hai please ishe hamare ghar me rehne do. Ish aadmi ka stamina bahat hai dekha hai mene bahat sara kaam kr sakta hai ye. 

Saif.... Lekin ishke sarir kya badbu aati rehti hai maano koi sada hua anda ho aur ishke daant kitne kaale hai pura koi janwar jaisa hai maano koi gorilla ho.

Kareena se apne maalik ki aishi baizatti bardasht nahi hoti ushka maan kr raha tha ki saif ko ek jordar thapad maar de. Lekin ushe Kallu ke bade khel me ushka saath jo dena tha.

Kareena....... Bas bahat hua saif mene decide kr liya hai ya to ye aadmi hamare saath jaaega nahi to me yehi ishi gaon me rahungi.

Saif(pyaar se)...... Kya bebo itni si baat se itna gussa chalo thik hai itne naukar hai ghar me ek aur sahi.

Saif...... Aye kaale aadmi kya naam hai tera.

Kallu (man me)...... Sala harami ki aulaad meri beizzati kr raha hai ishka saza eshe dunga tujhe ki puri zindagi yaad rakhega tu. Koi baat nahi tera ghamand bhi todunga jaise teri Biwi ka toda hu.

Kallu..... Ji Maalik mera naam KALLU hai.

Naam sun ke saif hasne lagta hai jiske saath saif ke bodyguard bhi hasne lagte hai.

Saif(haste huye).... Lagta hai tere MAA BAAP ko jyada mehnat nahi krna pada tera naam rakhne me tu hai hi itna kala ki tujhe dekh ke dimaag me Kallu naam hi aata hai.

Kallu ko aur jyada gussa aata hai kyunki Saif ab ushke MAA BAAP tak pahunch gaya tha. Lekin Kallu ab apne gusse par kaabu rakhta hai.

Kallu..... Maalik aap bilkul sahi keh rahe hai mere MAA BAAP to anpadh the meri tarah ishiliye sayad ye naam rakha hai mera.

Ye kehte huye Kallu haath jod ke apna shir jhuka leta hai, ye dekh kr Kareena ko bhi bahat jyada gussa aaraha tha saif par.

Kareena (man me)..... Mann kr raha hai saif ki tere samne nangi hoke mere maalik se chud jaau. Lekin nahi mere maalik ka khel mujhe kharab nahi krna hai. Tujhe teri ish galati ki saza mere maalik denge.



Kareena..... Chalo ab bas bahat hogya hai chalo airport chalte hai.

Kareena ki baat sunke ushke sare naukar bodyguard sab alert ho jaate hai aur sara saaman utha ke gaadi me bharne lagte hai, to Kallu bhi unke saath milke kaam krta hai sara saaman leke gaadi me rakhta hai. Ye sab ke bich me sirf taimur hi esha tha jo Kallu ke dekh ke bura haal ho chuka tha. Jisko Kallu dekh chuka tha wo fauran Kareena ko message krta hai Kareena ko.

Kallu (msg me)..... Chhinaal apne bete ko sambhal le kahi mujhe dekh kr apna muh naa khol de apne baap ke samne phir mera sara bana banaya kaam bigad jaaega.

Kareena Kallu ka msg padhti hai aur taimur ko chupke se akelee leke ek jagah pe bolti hai....... Sun le taimur agar tune apna muh khola ki ye Aadmi kaun hai aur kya kiya hai to tujhe ushi kaale aadmi se pit put ke maar dungi aur tere sarir ke chhote chhote tukde kr ke gatar me baha dungi.

Kareena saif par aaya gussa apne bete par pura utaar deti hai aur taimur apne hi MAA ke muh se eshi baat sunke itna daar jata hai ki dar ke maare pisab ke deta hai apne paant me hi.



Taimur ki bolti baand ho chuki thi, Kareena ab taimur ko leke gaadi me aake baith jaati hai aur airport ko nikal jaati hai saif gaadi me hi taimur ka pant badalwa deta hai.

Kareena (msg me)...... Kutte ka pilla apna muh nahi kholega maalik itna darr gaya hai ki mujhe dekh ke pisab nikal gaya pille ka. Aap chinta mat kijiye aapke apman ka badla me gin gin ke lungi saif se.

Kallu msg padhte huye bahat khush hota hai ushke chehre par ek ghinoni mushkaan aajati hai.

Kallu (mann me)...... Kya baat hai Kallu tera training to ish randi ke shir par chad chuka hai. Ab ishe mere lund ka nasha chad chuka hai isna sara dawai jo dala hu ish randi me. Pura chakad chhinaal ban gayi hai. Ab ish kutiya ke jariye ishke Pati ka ghamand todunga. Hoga ye nawab kahika lekin ishki ghar ki sari aurton ko apna rakhel banadunga.

Kallu reply dete huye....... Sabash kutiya ab tu tayaar reh kyunki bahat jald mujhe teri jarurat padegi. Aur hamesha ush pille pe nazar rakhna aur dara kr rakhna taaki wo sapne me bhi apne baap ko kuchh na bol paaye. Jab tak mera plan kaam na kr jaaye tab tak.

Ab wo log sab airport par pahunch chuke tha Saif, Kareena aur Taimur tino apne private jet se jaate hai aur baaki sab naukar aur crew dusre public transport wale aircraft se jaate hai.

Kallu jet ko dekhte huye....... Koi baat nahi bahat jald ye sab par me raaj karunga. Saif baht jald tu mera kutta banega jaise teri biwi bani hai aur tere aankhon ke samne teri biwi aur beti dono ki gaand marunga aur tere haath me camera deke wo sab shoot karwaunga.



 Flight takeoff kr leta hai aur dekhte dekhte Kallu sapno ka seher mumbai pahunch jaata hai. Apna sapna pura karne, phir waha se wapas gaadiyo ka jhakira aata hai aur sara samaan chada ke sab log Kareena aur saif ke ghar pahunchte hai.

Ghar dekh kr Kallu ki aankhe fati ki fati reh jaati hai wo ghar nahi Mahal tha ek nawab ka Mahal. Itna bada property ki Kallu ke dekhta hi reh gaya.



Kallu.(man me)...... Ish jagah pe to mere gaon jaisa 10 gaon reh sakta hai. Ye Mahal ki raani hai meri rakhel Kareena kya baat hai socha nahi tha itni ameer hai meri randi. Eshe ghar me to mera khandaan bhi kabhi sapne me nahi dekha hoga lekin mere aage ke aane wale khandan jarur dekhega ki unka baap kese ek Mahal ki raani ko apna rakhel bana ke ye sab property par kabza kiya.

Saif...... Aye Kallu dekh kya raha hai chal sara samaan utha ke ghar ke ander aaja baaki naukar logo se bhi milwana hai tujhe. Aur jaldi kr buddhe.

Kallu ko aur gussa aarha tha...... Saale hijde tujhe napunsak to bana hi diya hu ab dekh tujhe kese tere hi biwi aur beti ka dalal banata hu tu khud roz apne biwi aur beti ko bechega bas tu dekhta hai.

Jaise hi Kareena ghar ke amder ghushti hai Karishma Kapoor ushke saamne khadi thi. Ek aur khubsurat bala bala jo apne pati se alag ho chuki thi sirf aur sirf apne ghamand ke wajah se.



Karishma turant hi aake Kareena ke gale lag jaati hai.

Karishma....... Congratulations Bebo for the second child. Me to sunte hi tumse milne bhagi bhagi chali aayi. Lockdown me jiju se bahat mehnat karwayi ho tum.

Ye kehte huye Karishma aur Kareena dono hasne lagte hai.

Kareena Kallu ki wor dekhte huye(man me)....... Lolo mubarak ka ashli haqdar to mere maalik hai. Jinki din raat ki mehnat ke wajah se mere pet me ye bacha aa pata hai nahi to tumhare jija ji me dum hi nahi hai.

Tabhi Kallu saman uthate huye ushka nazar Karishma par padta hai jise dekh ke ushka lund khada hota hai. Wo turant hi apne lund ko lungi ke upar se pakad leta hai.

Kallu (man me)...... Koi baat nahi shaant hoja mere sher ish kutiya ka bhi chut ka rash tujhe chakhaunga bash jaisa socha hu bilkul baisa hi chala to bahat jald hoga ye bhi.


To be continued.......

[Udaybhanu]

Accha laga uday bhai...aapne phir se story restart ki....or bhut badhiya update diye ho...ufff ab aage dekhna hai kya hota hai....

Thank you Ajanmol bhai.

Uday bhai, bohot accha update hai. Mai nusrat ki story ki pratiksha kar raha hu

Thank you bhai, bahat jald wo bhi kr dunga.

Uday bhai aur maine discuss kiya aur agey barbey ka decision liya.  Unko bhi abhi kahaani bahut agey le janaa hai. Lekin jo bhi hua usmein...... Ap sabko toh pata hi hai......  
  
Ab firse yeh continue hoga....Lekin pls.....aur zyada readers hum sab writers ke sath juriye. Hum aapke liye hi likhte hai.
Zyada se zyada feedback diya kijiye... ❤❤

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Thank you baban bhai. Me pura try karunga ki ye story arc ab complete hi kar du.

Aap sab ka saath chahiye hum sab writers ko eshe hi maza aata hai hume bhi aur aap logo ko bhi.

[Udaybhanu]

lajwab aur bahut bahut mast update

Thank you Rumana

What a mind blowing update! Just super excellent writings

Thank you Ghosthunter

AMAZING BRO... WELCOME BACK... AND THANK YOU

Thank you Vikya76

[Udaybhanu]

Bus friends..... Aise hi hum sab writer ko pyaar karye raho ❤❤ ek yahi chis toh chahiye humey aap logon se ❤

Thank you baban bhai

Superb....mind blowing update ......welcome back bhai

Thank Shabaz123