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Samaj nayi aa rahi c jeetu nu ki boley  ... ek passey mintaan kardi usdi maa c tey dujey passey  bapu samja samja k thak chuka  c 
Jeetu bar bar Ehi kehnda unha nu... oh eh viah nayi karwa sakda ajay college ch parda  ...' par koi usdi  gal e nayi sun riha c  akhir usnu  viah lyi haan karni e pyi jad bapu ney tarla laindey hoye keha ...  'vekh putt rab ney tera wada bhra pehlan e kho lya tey dhee wargi nunh nu b usdey maa peo waps lay gye .. ro ro burra hall a teri maa da mere tey nayi tan apni maa di e soch'
'Par bapu mein bhabhi nal  kidan viah ..'  Pareshaan hoyea jeetu  bolea 
 'Kyoun nsyi karwa sakda tun bhabhi nal viah ..' jeetu di  maa us  wal vekhdi hoyi boli  ' wadey bhra dey achank akal chalana krn  ton baad chotey mundey dey ghar bhabhi nu  bitha e dindey  ney lok' 

 'Par mere ton wadey ney bhabhi.. ' ehi bol sakea jeetu hor kuch smaj nayi aa rahi c ki boley jidan usdi maa raun hakki hoyi usdean mintan kar rahi c ...

 'Koi wadi nayi  'jeetu di  maa fer jeetu  wal vekhdi boli .' 3 saal e hoye c ajay viah nu k eh bhana bart gya vekh putt preet vohat e changi kudi a .. mere lyi tan oh nunh ghat tey dhee jyada c .. pehlan rab ney mera putt kho lya hun o meri dhee wargi nunh nu b pekey lay gye .. '
 'Par maa   ' deepu  kuch bolan e lga c k bapu bol pya  'vekh putt tere bhra di maut ney pehlan e adh mari kar ditta teri maa nu hun preet dey vichodey ney  usdey baki sah b kho leney a .tey mein mein  tan pehlan e adh mareya hoyea jisney  apney jwan putt di laash
 Apney modeya tey chuki ...'
 'Sadey eh sochan nal ki hunda bhabhi nu b tan puchna chahida  ' eh shabd pta nayi kidan jeetu dey munh ton nikl gye jis ney usdi  jindgi e bdal k rakh diti .....


 'Vekho bhain ji rab di likhi nu asin mita  tan nayi sakdey .. preet di ma wal vekhdi hoyi jeetu di bibi  boli  'bas hun tan asin jholi ad k tuhadey ton ehi mangdey haan tusi sadi nunh preet nu waps usdey sohrey bhej deo  '
 'Par bhain ji ..o bechari hun uthey ki ... ' preeti di maa apney gharwaley wal fer jeetu di maa wal vekhdi boli 
 'Putt tan sadey ton rab ney kho lya hun dhee wargi sadi nunh nu sadey ton dur na karo'  hath jordi hoyi jeetu di maa boli'  asin soch k aye haan tusi preet da duja viah sadey mundey jeetu nal kar deo' 

 'Eh ki keh rahey o tusi  ' preet di maa tey bapu hairain hoye unha wal vekhdey boley 
 'Sahi keh rahi a jeetu di bibi  .. tusi preet da viah sadey jeetu naal kar deo..' jeetu da bapu b haan ch haan milanda hoyea bolea 
 'Par jeetu nal kidan o tan ajay par da a'  preet da bapu kuch sochda hoyea bolea
' Haan sanu pta ..Chotta a preet ton fer ki hoyea ... hun eni lambi jindgi ekeliya kidan katugi preet kitey tan tusi usda viah karogey jeetu naal e kar deo .es to  wadi ki gal hoyegi mud preeti sadi nunh ban sadey ghar aa javey'   jeetu di maa tey bapu hath jor unha wal vekhdey boley ...


 'Eh ki keh rahey o mummy tusi .' Jeetu naal mein kidan viah kina chotta a..' hairain preshaan hoyi preet apney maa peo wal vekhdi boli
 'Ena b choota nayi  . College parda a . Naley unha ney aap aa k tera hath mangeya a  ' preet di maa  usdey sar tey hath ferdi boli
 'Vekh putt jad tak asin jeoundey haan tenu kisi  cheez di kami nayi aan dindey  par sadey ton baad  ..' kuch sochda hoyea preeti da bapu bolea 
 'Sahi keh riha tera bapu bhra bharjayi tere changey ney par edi wadi jindgi  kidan katungi  ..' preet dean udas akhan ch vekh hauka lendi preet di maa boli  'Fer ki hoyea j deor lagda aksar edan ho janda gharwaley ton baad deor nal viah dindey ney ..'


Tin saal pehlan jad es ghar ch viah k ayi c kinia raunkan kinney rishtey dar ekethey c  tey aj jad viah k ayi jeetu naal bas chup chap viah ho gya na koi rishteydaar na baja brat chunni chada gurughar anand karaj . Bas risteydari dey naam ch usdi nanan tey nandoyea sehron aye c tey nal dey ghar ton tayi huna da tabr lag e nayi riha c viah wala ghar .....lagda b kidan chup chapitey tan us dey chottey  deor nal viah k usnu sohrey pind lay aye c ..

Ajeev jeha lag riha c lal jodey ch jeetu dey kamrey ch beithi preet nu ... kadi sochea b nayi c jeetu nal .. jad usda jeetu dey  veer nal  viah hoyea c dasvi ch parda c tey aj o usnal viah kar usdey kamrey ch beithi usdi udeek kar rahi c ek ajeev jehi shrm aa rahi c aj jeetu usda aa k ghund chukuga o jeetu jehra...uston 3/4  saal chota tey hamesha sharmakl jeha . 

Dharkdey dil nal sar chuk jeetu nu kamrey andar anda  vekh ekethhi jehi ho manjey tey beh gyi...

 'Maaf kareo bhabhi '  ..manjey di wahi tey aa beithda jeetu jijhakdey hoye bolea
 'Maffi kyoun ji'  jeetu nu maffi  mangdey sun hairaan hoyi preet ney puchea
 'Mein tuhadey naal viah...' haklanda hoyea jeetu bolea'  baba ji di sonh mein bda keha bibi tey bapu nu mein tuhadey nal viah nahi  karwana   par unha di jid' 
 'Ohhhh  'dukh lga preet nu jeetu di gal sun o b us wang nahi chahunda c viah karwana' 
 'Par ek gal a bhabhi ji tusi waps ghar aa gye  'ek chehak c jeetu di awaz ch'  nayi tan veerey ton baad tusi b apney ghar chaley gye ghar khali khali lagda c ..'
Kuch na boli preet ek sakoon milia usnu jeetu di gal sun .. chali tan gyi c o pekey ghar par o panj  mahiney  maa peo kol kidan katey eh usnu e pta c .. jad b us ghar usdey viah di gal chaldi ja koi rishta lay k anda usnu e pta c kidan luk luk rondi c 
 'Tusi vekhea bibi kini khush c aj .. badey dina baad bibi nu eni kush vekhea  ' preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea
 'Haan .. 'majey tey bichi hoyi chaddar tey pair da angutha ragardi preet boli sahi e keh riha  c jeetu aj tan bibi dey dil di khushi usdey cherey tey saaf dikhayi dey rahi c 
Tey bapu ji o tan veerey ton baad jiven bolna e bhul gye c aj unha nu khush vekh vohat sakoon milia... sab tuhadey karkey hoyea  ' preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea'  ah ghund kyoun kadeya mere ton ..'
' waisey e ..' ghund chuk jeetu dey masoom chehrey wal vekhdi hoyi preet boli
 'Roti khadi tusi  'preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea  'mein tan gallan gallan ch puchna e bhul gya' 
 'Hanji kha lyi .. jeetu wal vekhdi preet apney sar tey chunni swardi boli'  tusi kha lyi ..
' tusi..' uchi uchi hasda hoyea jeetu preet wal vekhda bolea'  bhul gye ..'
 'Ki .. ' hairaan hoyi preeti boli
' pehlan kidan awaz mar k kehndey hundey c  'oye jeetu roti kha lay fer pad lawin tey aj menu  tusi ..' hasda hoyea jeetu bolea..
 Kuch na boli preet shrm dey naal naal bullan tey muskaan b aa gyi.. galt b nyi keh riha c jeetu .. hamesha usnu roti khawaan lyi dbka maar jhirkna painda c 

 'Acha bhabhi ji mein bahar ja k sonda'  manjey di wahi ton uthda hoyea jeetu bolea 
 'Ethey e so jayo ..' ek dum kahli kahli ch boli preet' Mera matlab tusi bhar tey mein andar soyoungi bibi ki sochugi..'
 'Ohhh haaan sach eh tan mein bhul e gya c ... sada viah hoyea ..' kamrey ch edar udar vekhda jeetu bolea' Koi na mein us manjey tey so janda .... '
 'Ek min ruko mein bistra lga dindi haan  'uth k khadi  ho preet manjey tey chadar theek kar sarhana rakhdi boli'  lo so jayo hun ethey tusi  ..'
 'Theek a bhabhi ji  'manjey tey aa beithda jeetu bolea'  tusi kithey challey ..'
 Kuch na boli preeti darwaza band kar kundi la mud apney manjey tey aa beith jeetu wal vekhdi boli'Ek gal kahan menu bhabhi na keha karo  '
 'Kyoun tusi mere bhabhi ..' preeti wal vekhda jeetu bolea
 'Samjdey kyoun nayi hun mera tuhadeu nal viah  tey..'   jeetu wal vekh jijhkdi hoyi preeti boli
 'Ohhh theek theek sab dey samney nayi kahunga  ' hasda hoyea jeetu bolea' Ek shrt tey tusi b menu  pehln wang mera naam lay  k ..bulaya karogey ..'
' theek a par sab dey samney nayi ..'jeetu di gal sun hassa e nikl gya preeti
 ' fer eh pkka mein bibi bapu samney tuhanu bhabhi nayi kahunga tey tusi menu jeetu keh k bulaya karogey..' manjey tey lma painda jeetu bolea 
 ' sab dey samney nayi .. ' jeetu wal vekhdi preeti  boli 
 'Fer kado ..' passa wat preeti wal vekhda jeetu bolea
'  so ja hun ..kinna bolan lag pya tun jeetu ..' ena keh uchi uchi hassan lgi preeti .. hasdi hasdi dean akhan bhar ayean pta nayi kiney chir baad o hassi c nayi tan ro ro hanju e muka lya c usney ...

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'Ki gal sardara aj bda jor dikha riha' bantey thalley pyi kammo jhiri apni fudi ch bjdey gasseya da swad lendi boli 
 'Puch na kammo'  hanerey ch e kammo dey mummey putda banta tika k usdi fudi ch gassa marda bolea'   preet wapas viah k usi ghar aa gyi' 
 'Ahhh holi sardara jan kadni a'  apni fudi ch bjey gassey da swad lendi kammo nakhra kardi boli
 'Bhain chod tin sal ho gye ney mere ton fudi marwandi nu aj tak tan jan nayi nikli teri' mud tika k gassa marda banta bolea 
 'Uiee maa Hye eda lamba a tuhada'  fer nakhra kardi kammo uchaldi hoyi boli
'Aho tenu tan sab pta pind ch kisda lumba a kis da chotta  'gol gol lun fudi ch ghumanda banta mud gassa marda bolea ..'Lunna da tokra bhar javey j tera lak fad k hilaya javey' 
 'Eney b nayi  lye sardara  'akhan matkandi kammo hasdi hoyi boli 
 'Pta menu pind da kehra khet hona jithey ja tun fudi na marwayi  hovey .' Pura lun bahar kad tika k gassa marda banta siskaria..
 'Ehi tuhadey sardara di adat khrab a jad beigani run aram nal nala khol devey ehi sochdey o pta nayi kinnia ton marwandi a.' Apney bull ghutdi kamo hanerey ch bantey dey munh wal vekhdi boli
 'Tin char da tan menu b pta'  josh ch aa  gsssey marda banta apney sah kabu karda bolea
 'Bas ohi tin char ney  hor koi nayi'  lak chuk bantey dey lun tey brabar da gassa mardi kammo boli'  jaldi kar lyo adi rat ho gyi a wps pind b Jana  ' 
 'Ruk ja bhain chod eney dina baad hath ayi a...  jaan di kahli na paa' kammo upar jhukea banta saho sahi hoyea bolea
 'Samjeya kar sardara kini der da lagea hoyea aj pta nayi kehra cha chadeya hoyea tenu chutda e nayi tera ..'  jammen tey ragar hundi apni pith dey dard nu bardast kardi siskdi hoyi kammo boli
 'Hye aj preet pind waps aa gyi sonh rabb di pind sunna sunna lagda c usdey bina'  apney gasseya nu tez kar machlda hoyea banta bolea
 'lagda o b ethey bjayi hoyi a sardara tun  jehra ena cha chadeya hoyea'  hanerey ch e bantey dean akhan ch vekhdi kammo boli
 'Ufff na chetey karwa kammo'  hauka lenda banta bolea  'sali hath andi andi nikl gyi' 
 'O kidan'  gaur nal bantey wal vekhdi kammo boli 

 Nal da khet debu huna da a roz andi c gharwaley no roti den sadi wat ton e langdi c  .jan e kad lendi c ..jad b etho langdi pwwa bhar turdi sr tey rottia da tokra hath ch lassi wala bhanda .. galey ch atkeya duppta asman nu tichran kardey hik dey ubar gol gol tikhey tikhey  ghutwi kamjeej ch ghut
uff g karda c usdi hik ch munh luko jindgi gujar devan  patla lak samtal dhid nal chimbdi kameej ..chauna wali sat meeter di salwar ufff langdi c tan kalezey sap lotdey c lambi surahidaar  gardan. lal prandi pith dean chumia lendi ... patla lehranda lak tey gol matol doldi bund. . ahh seeney aag la jandi jad dolda lak khabey sajey hunda ... pind di kisi run di bund da ubar ena jan kadwa nayi hona..  turdi dey upar thallaey hundey chittad enj lagda jivey mere lun nu awazan mardey hon  jad b  wat ton langdi g karda picheo jaffi pa ragar dewa apna .'
 'Ragar deni c tenuu kehri run nah kar sakdi sardara'  lak chuk fudi ch bjdey gasseya da swad lendi kammo boli
 'Hye ek din rok lyi keha kadi sanu v roti khila dey bharjayi'  ukhdey ukhdey sah lenda machlda hoyea banta bolea'agley din sachin rottia di tokri tey channa fda gyi .'
 'Acha fer tan lot aa gyi honi'  bantey thalley pyii kasmasandi hoyi kammo boli
' Mein b ehi sochea'  kammo di fudi ch gassey marda marda ruk gya banta' Aa gyi lot sochdey hoye usdey waps aan di udeek krn lga  Tey jad ayi hasdi hoyi boli apni bna lay deora nit mangwi nayi milni' 
 'Fer ..' ek dum boli kammo 
 'Fer ki fad lya hath tey keha  aa ja tun e sar dey aj deor da kamrey ch koi nayi'  hauka lenda siskaria banta
 'Hye fer bjayi kamrey ch lya k'  ek dum chehkdi hoyi kammo boli.
'kithey nee ek dum aag wang bhark uthi.. hath chuda munh tey thapd mardi boli ...'debu ton elawa koi jameya nayi aj tak jehra menu hath b la jawey'  lamba sah lay mud kammo di fudi ch gassey marda banta bolea

'...tere thapad marea sardara'  hairaan hoyi kammo boli'  fer' 
 'Fer ki chali gyi ..jinna usdey chehrey tey jwani da nur tapkda c gussa uston b att mein tan usdean lal surakh hoyea akh vekh kamb gya mud na kadi himmat hoyi us wl vekhn di fer oh bhana brat gya .. ' lamba sah lenda banta bolea'  Mein tan viah lyi suneha b laya c usdey pekey ghar  par mani e nayi tey hun jeetu nal viah karwa  mud sohrey ghar  ghar aa beithi . '
 'Edan e sardara'  thalleyo lak chuk gassa mardi kammo machldi hoyi boli  'lun nu fudi kismat nal e mildi a kisi ney sochea c jeetu patoley wargi preet choduga. .'
 'Eh tan hay..' ahh bharda banta bolea
 'Chadeya hona preet dean lattan khol us upar  . Lutda hona es velley najarey run di fudi ch gassey mar mar'  bantey nu uksandi behal kardi kammo boli
 'Ahhh haan'  akhan band kar gassa marda siskar uthea banta kammo di tichar sun 
 'Hay b sukh nal ucha lamba hun tak tan changi trah pani la dita hona panj chey mahinia di pyasi fudi nu.. ' bantey nu hor bechain kardi kammo boli
 'Badi ankhi bani firdi c aj chud di honi dujey lun ton .. j mere hath aa jandi mein tan sali ghodi bna thokni c ...' tika k kammo di fudi ch gassa marda banta bolea'  uff sali di bund ... ek baar hath aa jandi bund tan pakki marni c bhain chodi di .. sali di madak kadni c bda lak matka matka kolon langdi c' 
 'Hun tan jeetu chadeya hona ghodi tey'  bantey nu uksandi  kammo boli pta c usuu jina banta  sun sun bechain hoyo uni jaldi e us upron uturuga hor agg landi hoyi boli'  aj tan puri rat  bulley lutu  run di dholki bja k' 
 'Chup kar bhain chod'  hauka lay gassa marda banta cheekda bolea  'sali ney bol bol lun chutwa dita' 
 'Shukar a sardara tera b chuttea tun  tan  thalley pyi run dea  cheekan e kadwa dinda  ' apni fudi ch digdey bantey dey lun di dhar nal sukh da sah lendi kammo boli' hye puri pith ragar ho gyi bhunjey pyi di' 
 'Chup kar sali gashti cheeka tey terian'  apna lun bahar kad punjda hoyea banta bolea'  eda khulla fuda lyi firdi a enj lagda jiven patiley ch kafachi nyi chamcha ferea hovey' 
 'Khulla b tusi kita' apni salwar di gath bandi kammo boli
 'Pta menu doh doh rupey lyi janey khaney agey salwar khol dindi a tey mere ton panj  lendi a'  jebey vichon panj da note kad kammo nu franda banta apney sah kabu karda  bolea
 'Hye jinna lamba lulla tera sardara tenu   tan dus rupey deney chahidey'  panj da note fad nakhra kardi kammo boli' Eh tan mein e haan jehri seh lendi tenu  ..usdin gwadan lay k ayi c tere  kol ki hall kita c tusi usda' 
 'Bhain chodiea rupey b tan panji ditey c purey tan karney c apni much nu tah dinda  banta bolea'  koi hor lya totta yaar tenu tera hissa mil jayo.'
 'Kosis kardi haan sardara'  apney kapdey jhardi kammo  boli'  bas menu na bhuli ..'
 'Tenu kidan bhul sakda salia tere karkey tan pind dean kinnia   runna chaudea ...' apna lun maslda banta bolea'  j kadi kitey preet da jugad lga devey sonh rab di soney dey tapkey  lay dayoun ..'
 'Sachin sardara'  chehkdi hoyi kammo boli'  mukri na sardara ..'
 'Hye ek bar preet mere thalley pwa dey ..' apni hik tey hath ferda banta machlda hoyea bolea'  tera kacha kotha pakka karwa dayounga ..'
 'Fer tan kuch karna paina tere lyi sardara'  akhan matkandi chehkdi hoyi kammo boli'  mukri ba sardara ethey e tere thalley pyi hoyo ek din preet ..'
 'Hye sadkey hawan tere' agey ho kammo nu haffi panda banta bolea'  j tun mera eh kam kar devey tenu khush kar dayoun ..'
 'Karungi jarur karungi par hun menu ghar jan dey sardara'  bantey ton vakh hundi kammo Boli'  adi rat ho gyi' 
 'Chali javin .' bahr jandi kammo wal vekhda apna lun masalda  bolea'  gal sun bund dey ja jandi jandi ....panj rupey dayounga' 
 'Na sardara aj nayi'  bantey wal vekhdi kammo boli'  fer kadi ..'
 'Chal dus lay lavin' kammo  di moti bund wal vekhda  bantta apna lun ghutda  bolea
 'Ki sardaea tun   b'  dus rupey sundey e kammo dean akhan ch chamak aa gyi  nala khol salwar dhili kr kand tey hath rakh kaudi hundi boli' pta menu marni meri a tey swad preet da lena' 
 'Jo marji samj'  kamo dey pichey aaa apney lun nu thuk la kammo  di kameej da palla chuk lun  chittandan vichkar dhakda siskarda bolea' thodi upar nu chuk bhain  chodea 
 'Chaki tan hoyi a sardara' hath pichy kar bantey da lun apni bund di mori nal jordi kammo boli'  chal maar hun gassa ..'





 'Es baar jyada din nayi la ditey mandi  ch'  inder di hik tey thodi rakh kiran usdean akhn ch vekhdi boli
 'Haan ek din  jyada lag gya  .. aardtia kehnda rakam lay k e jayeo ufff vohat thakawat ho gyi  'angrayi lenda inder kiran wal vekhda bolea 
 'Lattan ghut dewan'  inder di hik palosdi  kiran boli
 'Nayi lattan nayi j ghutna e a tan lun ghut dey'  sharart nal muskuranda inder  bolea
 'Ki tusi b  '  sharmandi hoyi kiran inder di hik ch munh lukondi boli'  kuch b bol dindey o' 
 'J vohti nayi ghutugi tan hor kaun ghutugi'  kiran nu cherda inder hasda hoyea bolea
'meinu nayi  pta g'  sharmandi muskurandi hoyi kiran inder wal vekhdi boli'  acha tunanu ek gal dasni c ..' 
 'Kehri ..' gaur nal kiran wal vekhda inder bolea
 'Preet sohrey ghar mud ayi .. jeetu nal viah diti ..' inder wal vekhdi kiran boli
'Sachin'  ek dum chehkda hoyea inder bolea'  kado... '
Aj e .. ' inder di hik tey ungln ferdi kiran boli  ' pind ch kisi nu nayi dasea chup chap e ..'
 'Ohhh ..' kuch sochda hoyea inder bolea'  chalo eh tan vohat changa hoyea ..'
 'Kal ja k mil k ayoungi ..' inder wal  vekhdi kiran boli 
 'Nayi nayi bilkul b nayi ..' ek dum inder bolea'  tenu pta e a aj b debu dey ghardey debu di maut da karn menu e samjdey ney ...'
 'Galt samjdey ney ...' inder wal vekhdi kiran boli'  sarey pind nu pta tusi tey debu ek duney di jaan c ..'

 'Bhrawan nalo wadh c debu  mere lyi' ek dum udas hunda inder bolea' chandri maut kho k lay gyi mere ton mera yaar.'
 'Nayi nayi rona nayi' agey nu ho ghut k jaffi pandi kiran inder nal chimbdi boli pta c usnu jad b inder nu debu di yaad andi ro ro akhan suja lenda.. udon tan inder marn jogga ho gya jad debu dey ghardea ney bhri panchyt ch ilzaam laya c k unha dey putt di maut da jimmeywar inder a' 

 'Vohat e chnga hoyea preet mud ghar wps aa gyi  'apnia akhan punjda inder bolea'  chandra  mere hathan ch marda marda ehi keh riha c  mere baad meri preeti da ki banuga ...'

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Duja viah story tusi hun tak xossip tey padi .. preet da apney deor jeetu nal viah ho janda tey o waps apney sohrey ghar aa jandi sare ghar ch raunkaan mud waps aa jandia .. bas kmi c tey eh k jeetu ajay b preet nu bhabhi smj ijjat maan dinda .. tey preet b usnu apna gharwala na smj deor smj e khushi khushi us ghar ch rehn lgi ethey tak story tusi xossip ch padi .. usdey close hon ton baad mein eh story agey continue krn lgi haan umeed a holi holi punjabi section dey sarey readers es site tey aa jangey ... 
So mere valuable readers story da agla part .....


3rd update

Thand da mausam uton asmaan ch badl sham velley e enj lag eiha   c jiven rat pay gyi hovey ... pura vehrda dhund nal bhar gya ..dangar wadey da kam muka preet chaunkey ch beithi dudh ubaldi chulley dey sek nal apney hathan nu sekdi bar bar buhey wal vekh ehi soch di aj jeetu ajay tak nyi sehron mudeya  agey tan mud anda c ...es velley tak... keh k b nyi gya c der nal ayounga ... fer kithey reh gya .. dopehr dey bibi bapu ji b massi di khair khabr lain  wandey challey gye c 
Kayi dina di keh rahi c bibi bapuji nu  apni bhain kol  jaan lyi ..ageyo kuch din college ch jeetu nu b   chuttia c ...ehi soch dopehrey  bibi   apni bhain  nu milan  bapiji naal wandey tur gyi ... ..
 'Eh munda aa janda'  chulley ch lakr pa agg da sek wadhandi preet burburayi'  roti tuk da kam muka aram nal kamrey ch beithdi ethey tan thand e vohat a .. '
 'Shukr a aa gya'  cycle lay andar andey jeetu nu vekh sakoon da sah lendi preet burburayi ...
 'Ah layo bhabhi tuhada smaan'  cycle ton thailla lah chaunkey ch   preet kol aa khada hunda jeetu  bolea
 'Oh tan theek a ..'  jeetu ton thaila fad preet us wal vekhdi boli'  aj eni der kyoun la diti .. mausam vekh kinna khrab a ..'
 'O bhabhi tesan tey gaddi late c ..' preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea'  bibi kithey a ..'
 'Dasea tan c tenu bibi ney aj wandey jana'  sar chuk jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli
 'Oh mein bhul e gya'  preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea
 'Tun kapdey bdl lay mein roti tuk da ..' jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli'  puria wahan da sweater pa lavin thand vohat a ..'
 'Nyi roti nyi khani ajay bhukh nyi ...' kamrey wal janda jeetu bolea'  halley time b ena nyi hoyea bdl tey dhund kaarn hanera lag riha ..'
 'Chal theek a jad khani hoyougi das devin'  chulley uton ubldey dudh da patila chuk ek passey rakhdi preet boli
' cha bna layo bhabhi ..' bda chit karda ..'preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea'  thand vohat a' 
 'Tun kapdey bdl lay ....uni der mein cha banadi haan ..' thand ch preet da apna chit kar riha c cha peen da...  patili chuk chulley tey rakhdi kamrey wal jandey jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli'  sweater jarur pa lawin....'
'Layo ji gram gram cha peo'  cha dey dono gilas hath ch fdi preet eh kehndi hoyi kamrey andar aan e lgi c k dehleej tey e ruk gyi... andar jeetu nu sheeshey mohrey khad apney wall swarda vekh hassa e nikl aya usda ..
Pith c us wal .. shyad kapdey badlda badlda sheeshey ch apney aap nu vekhn ch ena ulj gya k kurta paan da dhiyan b nayi riha ..eni thand ch b upron nanga ..thand nyi lgdi es mundey nu.. kuch sochdi hoyi preet kehn e lgi c thand lag jayougi kuch pa lay mundeya par keh na saki ..buhey tey khadi khadi usdi nangi pith nu nihardi gaur na usdey  uchey lambey bharwey  jism wal vekhn lgi.. sohna ucha lamba kad niklya a jeetu da .. 3/4 salan ch pura gabru jwan ho gya... majboot modey fulley hoye wahan dey dolley .. chauri tagri pith   ... kini der khadi nihardi rahi ... 
 'Bas kar hor kinnia ku chuzzan marnia sheeshey nu'  .. kol aa apney dhiyan ch rujey sheeshey wal vekhdey jeetu nu cherdi preet hasdi hoyi boli'  kapdey paa lay thand lag jayougi ...'
 'Ohhh o o bhabhi ...' gal na suji jeetu nu ki boley manjey tey pya kurta chukda bolea'  cha ban gyi ..'
'Haan'  jeetu di nangi hik wal vekhdi preet hasdi hoyi boli'  mein tan kado di lay k khadi c par jnab tan sheeshey mohrey ..'
 'O bhabhi bas ..' galley ch kurta fsa panda hoyea jeetu apni jhep mitan di kosis karda bolea 
 'Tera kasoor nyi'  hasdi hoyi preet boli'  jwani ch sarey  mundeya da ehi haal hunda'  aahh lay fad cha pee' 
 'Ruko jra ... ' apney galley ch fsey kurtey nu thalley karda muskuranda jhepda jeetu hassan di kosis karda bolea..
Cha dey gilass dona hathan ch fdi kuch na boli preet akhan tikayi jeetu di nangi  chauri majboot hik wal muskurandi hoyi vekhn lgi .. apney aap e usdi njar haithan nu jeetu dey pattan wal fislan lgi ..pajamey andar shant lun da njar anda ubaar vekh bull tukdi ek baar tan sochan ch pay gyi preet .. sahi e das rahi c jaspreet .. andaza landi akhan nal napn si kosis kardi nu jaspreet di gal sahi lagan lgi ... chahey shant c par fer b andaza lana aukha nayi c preet lyi kinna ku wada mota tey lumba kala sap hoyouga jeetu da ..  
 'Deo chah ..' jeetu di awaz sun ek dum apnia njran usdey pattan ton hta usdean akhn ch vekhdi preet boli'  sweater tan pa lay ...'
 'Koi na paa layounga bhabhi'  preet dey hathon cha da gilass fad ghut bharda hoyea jeetu bolea'  bibi kiney bjay gyi ..'
'Dopherey.' majey tey beithdi hoyi preet boli' tun tan bhul e gya    aj bibi ney jana jaldi ghar aa jawan ..par pta nayi tera dhiyan kithey rehnda. .'
' chetey nyi riha aj jana c unha ney  ..' preet kol e manjey tey beithda jeetu kuch sochda hoyea bolea'  fer tan aj asin ghar ch ekeley ...'
 'Haan kyoun ..' ek baar tan dil dharak uthea preet da jeetu di gal sun ..
 'mera matlab aj tan sarey kam  tuhanu e karney painey ...' preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea ..
 'Muka lye sarey kam ..' dhar kad lyi .. dangra nu pathey pa andar b kar dita  .'Hasdi hoyi preet boli'  hun tan bas roti took da reh gya das devin jad khani hovegi ...'
 'Ajay nyi khani'  cha da khali gilass ek passey rakh manjey ton uth sweater chuk panda jeetu bolea  'acha bhabhi mein huney aya ...'
' hun kithey challea .. eni thand ch ' jeetu nu bahar janda vekh preet boli ..' hanera ho gya' 
 'Bas thori der ch aya bhabhi ..' kahli kahli ch kamrey ton bahar niklda jeetu bolea ..' jra kam a kisi naal...'



 'Thand  vohat a ...aa ja rajayi ch beih ja ..' majney tey beithi preet mungfali chabdi jeetu nu kamrey ch aya vekh chaukri mar beith rajaayi nal apney goddey dhakdi  boli
 'Sahi keh rahey o bhabhi aj tan sachin thand jyada a ..dhund  pay rahi a bahr ..' preet wal vekhda thand nal kambda jeetu bolea
 'Hor ki ajay 6 e  bjey ney enj lagda jiven adi raat ho gyi hovey ...mein tan jaldi jaldi kam mukaye ..thand naal bura hall c ... aaa ja rajayi ch beith. .' manjey tey ek passey hundi preet jeetu lyi jagah bnandi boli
 'Es baar lagda thand jyada payo gi'  manjey tey  preet samney chaukri maar beithda jeetu   rajayi naal  apney goddey dhakda bolea
 'Aah lay mungfli kha ... ' gud di dheli tey mungfali nal bhari hoyi thalli rajayi utey rakh  jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli'  sehar di mungfali da swad e vakhra hunda' ..
' meinu tan chetey e bhul gya c tusi mungfali mangwayi ..o tan jad chetey aya pehlan mungfali liti fer baki smaan' mungfali da chilka lah giri kad chabda hasda hoyea jeetu bolea 'shukar a chetey aa gya nyi tan dobara sehr jana paina c ..'
 'Hye sachin'  chehkdi hoyi preet jeetu wal vekhdi boli
 'hor ki bhabhi pehli baar tusi koi cheez mangwayi c ...' gud di dheli chuk dandi wad hasda hoyea jeetu preet wal vekhda bolea'  lya k tan deni paini c ...'
 'Acha ji .. ' preet b hasdi hoyi boli'  eh tan das aj eni der kidan ho gyi sehar ch ...tun tan kehnda c jaldi mud aana aj ..'
 'O bhabhi bas ..' thalli vichon mungfali chukda  jeetu bolea'  yaaran dostan nal sehar ghuman firan chalea gya ..'
 'Yaaran dostan nal k rupi nal ..'mungfali chabdi preet gaur nal jeetu wal vekh usnu cherdi boli..
' tuhanu kidan .. mera matlab tuhanu kis ney dasea'  jhepda hoyea jeetu bolea
' gya c rupi naal'  muskurandi chehkdi preet jeetu wal vekhdi boli...
'Haan'  ena keh edar udar vekhda jeetu bolea'  rastey ch unha dey pind utar gye ..kehndi sada pind vekh lay'
.'
 'Oye hoye munda sohrey pind ja k aya'  chehkdi chulbali hassi hasdi preet jeetu nu cherdi boli 
 'Nyi nyi'  ek dum bolea jeetu'  ghar nyi gya usdey' 
 'Naley apey keha rupi dey pind gya c'  dhiyan nal jeetu nu vekhdi  boli preet
 'Haan par unha dey ghar nayi' .. 'Teshan ton thori e dur unha dey khet ney   nal e   unha da amba da baag c'  kuch sochda hoyea jeetu bolea
 'Oye hoye saheli nal amban dey baag ch  ' akhan matka bharwatey chuk preet hasdi hoyi boli
 'Ki bhabhi tusi b..' preet di gal sun sharma e gya jeetu

 'Kyoun.kyoun ki mein b  ' jeetu nu cherdi preet dey munh vichon 
Pta nyi kidan nikl gya ...' fer chuppey preet dey bag dey amb..'
 'Nyi bhabhi ..Aj kal kehra ambn da mausam '  preet wal vekh  jeetu bolea..
 'Oh haan sach ..' gal sambln di kosis kardi preet boli shukar c jeetu usdi tichar nayi samjeya
 'Vohat wda amban da bag a unha da ...' mungfali kha gud di dheli nu dandi wad da jeetu bolea
 'Acha ..' jidan jeetu masoom jeha ban das riha c na rok saki preet apney aap nu fer usnu cherdi boli'  sara baag dikhaya rupi ney
 'Haan bhabhi .. ' mein tan thak e gya  
Baag ch turdey turdey ...' sehaj swah ch gal karda jeetu bolea
 'Beh jana c kitey'  gaur nal jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli  ' hor kon c naal ..'
 'Koi nyi bas  asin dono'   mungfali chuk khanda jeetu bolea 
 'Hye sachin ...tusi dono baag ch  ekeley.'  gaur nal jeetu wal vekh preet muskurandi hoyi usnu cherdi boli' fer tan ..'
 'Edan da kuch nyi bhabhi'  boldey boldey shrma gya jeetu munh usda lal hon lga 
 'Fer kidan da kuch'  akhan matkandi jeetu nu sharm nal lal hunda vekh preet usnu hor cherdi boli'  jaffi juffi tan payi honi saheli nu ..'
 'Nayi bhabhi mein nyi'  ach khachanda hoyea jeetu bolea'  rupi ney payi c ..'
 'Hye sachin matlab tun sharmanda reh gya tey jaffi b  rupi ney aap..' jeetu di gal sun hasdi hoyi preet boli'  meri deorani tan bdi tez nikli ..'
Kuch na bolea jeetu sharma k mungfali chabda edar udar vekhn lga...
 'Usney jaffi payi tun kuch nyi ..' gaur nal jeetu da chehra pdan di kosis kardi preet usdean akhan ch vekhdi boli 
 'mein ki ..' haklanda sharmanda ena bol chup e kar gya jeetu ..
 'Budu a tun b ..' hasdi hoyi preet jeetu nu cherdi boli'  kudi ney aap tenu jaffi payi tey tere kolon baag ch kuch b nyi ...'
 'Edan thori bhabhi j koi aa janda uthey fer ..' ek dum bolea jeetu 
 'Hye meria rabba tun tan kudi nalo b jyada darda'  jeetu wal vekh hasdi  hoyi preet boli'  tere kolon tan kudi nu jaffi b nyi pyi o b bechari nu aap pani pyi ...tun hor ki...' boldi boldi ruk gyi preet
Kuch na bolea jeetu mungfali khanda edar udar kamrey ch vekhn lga..
 'Lassi karwa diti tun tan jeetu'  hasdi hoyi preet boli'  ki sochdi hoyougi rupi ...  kinna budu a jeetu' 
 'Nyi bhabhi ena b budu nyi ..' bolda bolda ruk gya jeetu ......
 'Rehn dey rehn dey pta menu'  jeetu wal vekhdi preet fer usnu cherdi boli
 'Oh tan bas jijhak riha c .. mein'  kuch soch preet ton akhn churanda jeetu holi jehi bolea'  fer tan rupi e mintan kardi c na kar jeetu koi aa jayouga ..'

 'Ki keha ..' gaur nal jeetu wal vekhdi preet ney puchea .sun tan lya c preet ney ki keha jeetu ney fer b swad lendi hassdi hoyi boli'  ki keha tun ..'
 'Kuch nyi'  hasda hoyea jeetu bolea'  rupi nu puch layeo mein  budu haan k nyi ..'
 'Oh ho acha ji'  muskurandi hoyi preet  jeetu nu cherdi boli' matlab kanto fulln tey lay e ayea sada jeetu ...'ena bol uchi uchi hassan lgi preet .....
' katto tan aap ayi c fullan tey..' halka halka sharma k hasda hoyea jeetu bolea..
 'Oh ho ..' jeetu dey munh ton eh sun hasdi hoyi preet b swad lendi boli'  fer tan palosi honi kanto ...'
 'Palosni paini c ..' jhijhak mitta khulda hoyea jeetu bolea'  hun j rupi aap...'
 'Oye hoye'  akhan matkandi preet dey munh ton bina sochey samjey nikl gya'  ki ki kita fer ..'
'pehlan tan aap jaffi paa menu tichar krn lgi gallan e andia k kuch hor..' bina preet wal vekhey mungfali khanda jeetu boleea'  jad mein jaffi paan lga fer agey agey bhjan lgi ...'
'Fer'  gaur nal jeetu wal vekh preet usda chehra pdan di kosis kardi boli
 'Fer ki amb dey buttey pichey  fad  k ghut k jaffi pa lyi udon kehndi chad dey jeetu koi aa jayo ..' bina preet wal vekhey mungfali chabda jeetu bolea
 'Oh ho fer ..' ajay b yakeen nyi  c preet nu k jeetu sach bol riha
 'Fer ki hasda hoyea jeetu bolea'  mud k nyi tichar karugi menu .... har baar 
 kehndi hundi c bas gallan e krnia andia k ..'
 'Hye sachin bdi chakmi saheli a teri Fer tan ....dasna c gallan e nyi hor kuch b anda ..' jeetu di gal sun akhan matkandi preet boli
 'Lag gya pta usnu Fer tan kahey na kar na kar..' sharmanda muskuranda jeetu bolea
 'Oye hoye ki na kar...' jeetu nu cherdi preet boli
 'Ki bhabhi tusi b ...' akhan churanda jeetu edar udar vekhda bolea
 'Ki mein...' hasdi hoyi preet boli'  baag ch mundey nu kudi aap  lay k gyi ... fer kahdi na kar na kar .. mundey ney tan hath ayi patola saheli napni e c ..'
Kuch na bolea jeetu sharmanda muskuranda hoyea edar udar vekhn lga .. bhabhi eni khul k tichar karugi umeed nyi c usnu ..
 'Nap lyi fer ..' muskurandi mungfali chabdi preet jeetu wal vekh hasdi akhn matkandi boli
 'Haan ...' achkhachnda muskuranda haklanda hoyea jeetu ena bol preet dey hathon mungfali dean kadiyean giria chuk chabda bolea
 'Oye hoye sachin ..'  apni hik tey hath rakh jeetu nu vekhdi preet nu yakeen nyi hoyea jo usney jeetu dey munh ton sunea sach a k jooth ..'
 'Hor ki bhabhi ..' gud di dheli nu dandi wad khanda jeetu bolea ..'   jad ghut k jaffi pyi ghabrandi hoyi boli'  hye eni jaan jeetu ... '
'Fer'  jeetu dey gatheeley jism nu nihardi preet boli
 'Fer ki bhabhi .. lag gya pta usnu gallan e nyi  hor b kuch anda menu..' muskuranda nimma nimma hasda jeetu bolea
 'Sachin.. 'chehkdi hoyi preet boli'  waisey hor ki anda .
 'Sab kuch . Muskuranda sharmanda jeetu bolea'  koi hor gall karo bhabhi menu dasdey nu sang lagdi a ..
 'Acha ji uchi uchi uasdi hoyi preet boli'  jad saheli nu jaffi payi udon nyi sang lgi ..' jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli'  das na hor ki ki ..'
 'Tin char chumia littia usdean fer chadeya  na na kari javey'  sharmanda jijhakda bol e pya jeetu
Ohhh  ...  ' jeetu dey bulln wal vekhdi preet boli'  bas chumia e littia hor kuch nyi..'
Nyi ..' preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea' Munh vekhn wala c usda dari hoyi ghabrayi hoyi  mintan krn lgi jan  dey jeetu menu koi vekh layouga .
'
 'Tun jan ditta..' jeetu di gal bdey dhiyan nal sundi preet boli 
'Haan'  preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea'  mintan krn lag pyi c ..'
 'Jhalla e a tun ena ku tan nakhra kardi e a kudi naley app lay k gyi  tenu apney baag ch nap  leni c'  jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli
 'Npi tan c bhabhi ghut k jaffi pyi c' kamrey ch edar udar vekhda sharmanda hoyea jeetu bolea 
 'Oh ho gaur nal jeetu wal vekhdi preet usnu cherdi boli'  hor kuch nyi kita'  
 'Nyi kehndi hanera ho riha chal hun waps chalea ..'  nimma nimma hasda sharmanda jeetu bolea
 'Oh tey waps aa gye tusi'  thori hairaan ho gaur nal jeetu nu nihardi preet boli 
 'Haan ..' preet wal vekhda jeetu gal badlda bolea'  kal vekhea na tusi ..kidan jaapreet bhabhi nal....

[kavitakhullar]

4th update



'Nyi kehndi hanera ho riha chal hun waps chalea ..'  nimma nimma hasda sharmanda jeetu bolea
 'Oh tey waps aa gye tusi'  thori hairaan ho gaur nal jeetu nu nihardi preet boli 
 'Haan ..' preet wal vekhda jeetu gal badlda bolea'  kal vekhea na tusi ..kidan jaapreet bhabhi nal....


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'Sanu ki jo marji kraan ...' jeetu wal vekh preet hasdi hoyi boli
 'Par sukhi apni bhabhi nal kidan' preet wal vekhda jeetu mungfali dey chillad ek passey rakhda bolea
 'Lay hun apni saki bhabhi nal hassa mjak nyi karuga tan hor kis nal...' mungfali chabdi preet boli
 'Mjaak thori c  .tusi vekhea nayi kidan ek dujey dey bull ..' bolda bolda ruk gya jeetu 
 'Fer ki hoyea ..  'hasdi hoyi preet jeetu wal vekhdi boli'  jayda na soch'  ho jandi a galbat kisi kisi deor bharjayi ch' 
 'Galbat hassa mjak tan theek par Bhabhi dey bull  vekhea nyi tusi kidan dono'  sehaj swa ch preet nu gal kardi vekh jeetu bolea'  jaspreet bhabhi ney b nyi rokea sago  o tan aap sukhi dey bull..'
 'Hun tenu mein ki dsan jeetu' jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli'  kehn tan lgi c tun bull chuman di gal kar riha jaspreet  tan sukhi ton marwandi b a' 

 'Menu tan lagda hor b agey wadhey hoye ney  ' kuch sochda hoyea jeetu bolea
 'Haan eh tan hay vekhea nyi kidan pichey pichey gyi c jaspreet didi sukhi dey kamrey ch ..' kuch sochdi hoyi preet boli
'Haan'  preet di haan ch haan milanda jeetu bolea
 'Jwan munda jwan patola bhabhi hun .....'Jeetu wal vekh hasdi hoyi preet boli'   'fsa lya bhabhi ney deor ..'
 'Acha aj ayi c milan tuhanu'  preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea
 'Haan dophrey ayi c  ' thalli vichon mungfali chukdi preet boli'  kyoun' 
 'Puchea c tusi'  gaur nal preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea
 'Paagl edan di gal b koi puchda'  jeetu wal vekh usdi gal sun  hassan lgi preet
 'Mein tan puch laina c'  hasda hoyea jeetu bolea
 'Ki puchna c...' haadi hoyi preet boli
 'Ehi k bhabhi sukhi dey pichey pichey ki kran gyi c usdey kamrey ch ..' mungfali khanda hasda hoyea jeetu bolea
 'Oh ho'  hasdi hoyi preet boli  'pta usney ki kehna c' 
 'Ki ...' gaur nal preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea
 'Aa ja tun kamrey ch das dindi haan tenu ki kran gyi c kamrey ch'  ena keh uchi uchi hasdi hoyi preet boli'  fer nap lena c tenu kamrey ch ..'
 'Edan kidan..' ek dum bolea jeetu 
 'Jidan sukhi nu napea udan e'  jeetu nu cherdi fer uchi uchi hassan lgi preet
 ' sachin jaspreet bhabhi sukhi nal fsi hoyi a' preet wal vekhdey jeetu ney pucgea
 'Aho fsi hoyi a ..' akhan matkandi preet boli
 'Mera matlab .' Bolda bolda ruk gya jeetu 
 'Haan galbat hay unha ch ..' jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli  'matlab wali gal krn e gyi c usdey kamrey ch' 
 'Oh ..' ena e niklya jeetu dey munh vichon 
 'Waisey teri saheli  b tenu apney baag ch lay k gyi c ki pta usney b tere nal galbaat ..' gaur jeetu wal vekh muskurandi hoyi preet usnu fer cherdi hoyi boli
 'Nyi nyi  ' apney wallon e sfayi dinda jeetu bolea'   jad mein jaffi payi o tan  dar e gyi c  '
 'Pehli baar tan darugi e nkhrey b krugi  kuwari kudi'  jeetu wal vekhdi preet muskurandi swad lendi boli' Eh tan mundey tey  hunda a kidan saheli nu tikana' 
 'Oh..' kuch sochda hoyea jeetu bolea
 'Ki hoyea..' bharwatey chuk akhan matkandi preet ney puchea
 'Kuch nyi'  akhan churanda jeetu edar udar vekhda bolea
 'Waisey jhalla e a tun hath ayi saheli suki jaan diti menu tan lgda gallan kad di honi tenu..' jeetu nu cherdi tichar kardi preet boli
 ' gallan kyoun'  thora hairan hoyea jeetu bolea'  usney tan aap keha ajay nyi kuch b ...viah ton baad' 
 'Kudi tan kehndi hundi a viah ton baad ...... ' akhan tarer di preet boli' puchna c usnu fer amban dey baag ch aj kyoun lay k ayi ' 
'Ohhhh'  kuch na samj ayi ki jwaab devey jeetu
 'Esi lyi khendi haan jhalla e tun'  jeetu nu cher di hasdi hoyi preet boli
 'Koi na agli baar'  apni jhep mitanda jeetu bolea
 'Agli baar nayi kakaji hun nyi milan andi tenu ekeli baag ch ..' jeetu nu tichar kar hasdi hoyi preet boli'  edan da mauka kisi kisi nu milda viah ton pehlan saheli nal galbat krn da ...hun kar udeek viah di fer e hath ayo tere oh' 

'Oh'  preet di gal sun jhepda gal badln di kosis karda jeetu bolea' waisey jaspreet bhabhi bdi kharab nikli. .'
 'Kyoun kyoun ..' jaspreet  da pakh lendi preet boli' Usda ki kasoor jad deor chundia wadu ..kisi na  kisi  din tan  bhabhi b ..'
 'Oh ..'  muskran di kosis kardey ena e niklya jeetu dey munh vichon ..
 'Hor ki ek din fad lya  usdi bhabhi ney ..' hasdi hoyi preet boli' fer bhajea patheya dey taprey wal..!'
'Fer'  gaur nal preet wal vekhdey hoye jeetu ney puchea
 'Fer ki nap lya bhabhi ney saria chundia da hissab eko e jhatkey ch brabr kr lya' jeetu wal vekh hasdi hoyi preet boli
 'Ohhhh ..' preet wal vekhda jeetu mungfali chabni bhull gya
 'Aho hun jwan bhabhi nal deor ultey sidey pangey layouga fer bhabhi kehri ghat karogi'  jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli
 'ultey pangey deor e lay sakda bhabhi nyi
 'Fer b'  hairan hunda jeetu bolea'  bhabhi edan kidan deor naal ..'
 'Jyada na soch aven  ' jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli' naleey fer jaspreet tan hay b khulley swaa di  hassa mjak kran wali oh tan tenu b..'
 'Menu b ki  ' hairaan hoyea jeetu bolea
 'Tere nal b fasan lgi c o tan .. bas tun ...ena keh uchi uchi hassan lgi preet 
 'Nyi nyi mere nal kyoun mein kadi b nyi edan jaspreet bhabhi barey'  preet nu uchi uchi hasdi vekh ek dum bolea jeetu 
 'Ho janda kadi kadi bhulekha lag janda'  gaur nal jeetu nu vekh muskurandi hoyi preet boli'  jaspreet nu b lag gya c  '
 'Kehra bhulekha'  hor hairaan hunda jeetu bolea
 'jad tun usnu chubarey ch wanh fad kamrey ch lay k gya c ..' ena keh gaur naal jeetu dey munh wal vekhn lgi preet
 'Ohh'  jiven kuch yaad aya jeetu nu 
 'Aya kuch chetey'  akhan matka hasdi hoyi preet boli
 'Oh tan mein udon tuhadey barey gal karni c  ' haklanda jhepda hoyea jeetu bolea'  es lyi bhabhi huna dey chubarey gya c' 
 'Par usnu tan ehi lga jwan deor wanh fad k kamrey ch lijanda keh riha kisi nu dasin na ..kitey.....' muskurandi hoyi preet boli
 'Oh nyi nyi mein  ..' bolda bolda hakla gya jeetu 
 'Haan usnu b baad ch samaj ayi k edan di koi gal nyi ..jeetu tan waisey e koi hor gal krn ..' muskurandi hasdi preet boli .
 


 'Haan o tan tuhadey barey gal karni c ..' apney walon safayi dinda jeetu bolea'  es lyi kamrey ch lay k gya c bhabhi nu'  
 'Pta menu dasea c usney'  muskurandi hoyi preet boldi boldi ruk k  boli'  usnu pehlan ehi lga aj jeetu galbaat karuga bhabhi nal .....par tun tan hor e gal krn lga ..'
 'Haan'  ek lamba sah lenda jeetu bolea

 'Waisey ek gal a j tun kosis karda tan fas jana c jaspreet bhabhi ney tere naal'  hasdi akhan matka jeetu nu cherdi preet boli
 'Nyi nyi mein nyi jaspreet bhabhi nal ..'ek dum bolea jeetu
 'Kyoun sohni nyi lagdi'   preet gaur nal jeetu wal vekhdi boli'  eni sohni a' 
 'sohni tan hay par tuhadey jini nyi...' preet wal vekh holi jehi bol jeetu edar udar vekhn lga
 'Rehan dey'  jeetu wal vekhdi preet hasdi hoyi boli'  mein tey sohni...'
 'Sachin bhabhi tusi vohat e sohney o'  preet dean chamkdian akhan gorrian  gorrian gallan ...hasdi dey chittey dandan di laddi .muskurandey gulabi bullan wal vekhda jeetu bol e pya'  tusi vohat e sohney o  .jaspreet bhabhi tan ki ...rupi b tuhadey samney kuch nyi..'
 'Oye hoye'  jeetu dey munh ton apni tareef sun garur ch sharmandi hoyi preet bull ghutdi boli'  rehan dey aven makhan na laa ..'
 'Tuhadi sonh bhabhi ..' hath agey kar jeetu preet dey sar tey rakhda bolea'  tusi vohat e sohney o ..'
 ' Hye sachin'  jeetu wal vekhdi preet chehkdi hoyi boli'  fer tan...'
 'Fer tan ki bhabhi'  gaur nal preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea 
' fer tan tere ton dur e rehna paina'  hasdi hoyi preet boli'  hor na kitey tun b sukhi wang apni bhabhi dey chundia waddan lag pavey..' ena keh uchi uchi hassan lgi preet .......

 'Tuhanu mein edan da lagda bhabhi k tuhadey chundi wadunga ..' jhepda sharmanda jeetu bolea 
 'Nyi' hasdi hasdi preet jeetu nu cherdi boli  'waisey sukhi nu vekh kehra lagda k o apni bhabhi di lenda hovega..'
 'Ki..' munh khulla reh gya jeetu da bhabhi di gal sun 
 'Kuch kuch nyi'  hun samj ayi preet nu kuch jyada e khul k bol gyi jeetu samney 
 'Nyi nyi mein tan eh puchea ki lenda  sukhi'   preet wal vekhdey fer puchea jeetu ney 
 'Chup kar kuch jyada e bolan lag pya tun ..' jeetu wal vekhdi preet hasdi hasdi sharma gyi 
 'Nyi tan'  preet nu hasdi vekh jeetu b muskuranda  hoyea bolea'  gal tan aap tusi shuru kiti c ...'
 'O acha ji ..' hasdi hoyi preet boli'  koi na hun band kar dindi haan'  kehndi hoyi rjayi apney upron lahndi majey ton utar gyi 
 'Ki hoyea kithey challey'  preet nu edan achank manjey ton uth khadi ho vekh jeetu ney puchea 
 'Roti tuk da kam b karna a'  preet chunni nal apni hik swar k dhakdi boli'  kafi vella ho gya a ..hor kal bibi aa k kahey mere putt nu rat roti nyi khilayi ...
 'menu tan bhukh Nyi  'preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea pta nyi kyoun usnu bhabhi da edan uth k jana changa nyi lagea dil kar riha c us kol beith gallan kardi rahey ...
 'Kha lawin roti  .. hor menu adi raat nu tang karunga'  apni gutt nu jhakta dey pichey nu kardi hasdi hoyi preet boli'  fer kahenga roti bna dey bhabhi bhukh lgi a ...'
 'Sachin bhabhi bhukh nyi a ..' hasdi khirkhirandi preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea ..
 'Menu tan lagi a ..' jeetu wal vekhdi usnu cherdi preet boli'  aho tenu kyoun bhuk lagni rupi ney bhar bhar chummia jo ditia ..
 'Nyi tan bhabhi ..' bolda bolda preet di gal sun sharma gya jeetu ..
 'Koi na bna dindi haan ..' bahar nu jandi preet chehkdi hasdi hoyi boli'  jad dil karey mang lawin dey dayoungi ...
.....
Preet da hasda chehkda chehra vekh asim sukh milia jeetu nu .. dil nu sakoon milia k bhabhi sab kuch bhul kini khush a ghar waps aa k .. ekeley manjey tey beithey da dil nyi lga uth k bahar chaunkey wal jandey jandey ruk gya .... jad usdi nigah apney pjamey wal pyi ek dum hairain reh gya jad usney pjamey ch apna uberya hoyea lun vekhea ..
 'Es nu ki hoyea . 'Apney akadey hoye lun wal vekh kahli kahli ch buhey wal vekhda burburaya jeetu shukr c bhabhi bahar chali gyi nyi tan j o vekhdi ki sochdi ... hath pjamey upron e lun tey rakh ghut k usnu shant krn di kosis kardey ney ek baar fer buhey wal vekhea ..  eh ki gaur nal apney lun wal vekhda fer  burburaya jeetu eh tan hath landey e hor akadan lga ...ghabra k hath apney lun ton prey kar edar udar vekhn lga.. ..tabu wang pjamey ch ubrey apney lun wal vekhdey nu samaj na ayi ki karey...akhir chaddar chuk apney upr lapet bukl maar  bahar niklya
 'Bahr tan badi thand a ..' chaunkey ch roti pkandi preet wall vekhda jeetu bolea
 'Haan aa agg kol beh ja ..' lakad di pidi chulley kol rakh jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli .'aag sek lay ..'
 'Bhukh tan c nyi tusi aven e roti bnan lag pye chaddar di bukal mar chulley kol beith hath agey kar sekda hoyea jeetu bolea
 'Menu tan lagi a'  roti veldi preet muakurandi hoyi boli'  kha lay bhabhi dey hath dean rotia fer tan sari umar rupi dey hath dean e khania ...
 'Kyoun tusi nyi pkaya karungey ..' roti velldi preet dean wahan ch chan chan kardia wangan di awaz sun hasda hoyea jeetu bolea ..
 'Fer tenu mere hath di roti kithon psand aa ni kaka ji'  hasdi hoyi preet tawey tey roti pandi boli'  fer tan apni vohti dey hath dean chopdea chopdea rotia kha bhabhi nu bhul jana ..'
 'Edan kyoun kehndey o bhabhi ..' hath sek da preet wal vekhda jeetu muskuranda hoyea bolea  ' tuhadey hath dean rotia da swad e vakhra a' 
 'Viah ton pehlan sarey deor edan e kehndey ney .. viah ton baad tan bas fer vohti e chetey rehndi a  bhabhi kithey '  hasdi hoyi preet chakley ch roti veldi boli ... 
 'Nyi ji mein tan viah ton baad b tuhadean pakkia rotia khaniaa'  hasda hoyea jeetu bolea
 'Rehn dey Rehn dey ..' hasdi hoyi preet boli'  hor teri vohti mehney mardi firu mera gharwala tan apni bhabhi pichey lagea hoyea ...
 'Nyi kehndi .. ' preet di gal sun hasda hoyea jeetu bolda bolda chup kar gya .. lun nu tunka jeha lga jad usdi njr roti velldi bhabhi di hik tey pyi .. sah  rok uthey e vekhn lga kameej dey galley vichon njr andi bhabhi dey gol gol mummey di lakeer tey roti velldi dey hildey mummey ek dujey nal uljdey bahar nu nikl jhattia mardey ... bar bar usdi njr bhabhi di hik tey ja tehrdi ... galley ch atki chunni  ... beparda hik da kameej ch ubhreya ubhaar tey gol gol tikhey tikhey chittey  mummey .. pehli baar aj o bhabhi di hik nu nihar riha c ... aj ton pehln kadi b usney bhabhi di hik wal edan nyi vekhea c.. rotti veldi bhabhi dey hilldey mummeya ch ek khich c jehri bar bar usnu uthey e vekhn nu majboor kar rahi c ...
Jeetu dean njran ton anjaan preet roti bail twey tey rakh us wal vekhdi boli'  ki gal chup e kar gya ..'
 'Nyi tan  bhabhi' preet ton akhan churanda jeetu chulley di aag ch hath sekda bolea  ....
 'Ah lay fad apni jaspreet bhabhi nu dal fda aa'  kauli ch daal pa thalli nal dhak jeetu nu frandi preet usnu cherdi boli'  naley j mauka lagea tan chundi b wad avin ...'
 'Ki bhabhi tusi b'  hasda hoyea jeetu kauli fad kand wal janda bolea'  mein kyoun wadu ga chundi ...'
Kuch na boli preet hasdi muskurandi hoyi vehrdey ch kand wal jandey hoye jeetu wal vekhn lgi jad usdi njr apni hik tey pyi ek dum galley ch atki chunni nu hik tey swardi apney mummey dean jhatti mardia gollayean nu dhakdi sochn lgi hye rabba kitey jeetu di njr ethey tan nyi c ... 
' Ayi jeetu .. ' jeetu di awaz sun kand dey dujey passey aa khadi hundi jaspreet boli'  ki gal ...'
 'Kuch nyi bhabhi ..' kauli agey nu karda jeetu bolea'  aah preet ney daal diti c tuhanu den lyi ...'
 'Ohhh'  dal di kauli fad chaddr di bukl mar khadey jeetu wal vekhdi jaspreet boli'  lagda jyada e thand lagdi a tenu ..'
 'Haan bhabhi thand hay e jyada'  apni chaddar wal vekhda jeetu muskuranda hoyea  bolea.
 'Hye tenu  b thand lagdi a'  akhan matkandi jeetu nu cherdi jaspreet hasdi hoyi boli'  navi navi viahi  aag wargi vohti dey hundey ..'
 'Ki bhabhi tusi b'  jaspreet di tichar sun sharma e gya jeetu
 'Ki mein b ..' hasdi hoyi jaspreet fer jeetu nu cherdi boli'  aj tan pura nigh lawin ... ghar ch hor koi hay b nyi sari thand bhul jayounga ...'
Kuch na bolea jeetu es ton pehlan k jaspreet hor tichar kardi waps chaukey wal aa gya ...
 'Ki kehndi teri jaspreet bhabhi ..' jeetu wal vekhdi preet b usnu cherdi boli ..
'Kuch nyi'  hasda hoyea jeetu bolea
 'Mein sochea kitey tun chundi wad diti'  jeetu nu cherdi preet boli
 'Nyi nyi  'ek dum bolea jeetu
'Usney chundi wadi' fer jeetu nu cherdi preet boli.
 'Nyi ji o kyoun chundi wado mere'  pidi tey beith hath agey kar aag sekda jeetu bolea' jeounda rahey sukhi usdey chundi wadan wala ..' 
 'Oye hoye ..' jeetu wal vekh hasdi hoyi preet boli'  roti ethey khani k andar ...'
 'Andar e khandey haan ethey tan thand lagdi a'  chulley di waldi aag di roshni  nal preet dey chamkdey chehrey wal vekhda jeetu bolea .. njr usdi jad es baar preet di hik tey gyi chunni thalley swar k dhakey hoye mummeya di golayi nu niharda niharda apney jism andar ek khumari chardi mehsoos krn lga
 'Tenu b thand lagdi a'  gaur nal chaddr di bukl mari beithey jeetu wal vekhdi preet hasdi hoyi ek dum akhan churandi boli dil e usda dhark uthea jad usdi najr jeetu dey pattan vichkar pyi .. pjamey ch ubrey hoye lun dey ubhaar nu vekh mud na himmat hoyi usdi jeetu wal vekhn di .. hath kambn lag lye ... hye sachin kehndi c jaspreet jeetu da kafi wada lagda ...
 'Thand hay e vohat ..' preet dean njran ton anjaan jeetu bolea..
 'Ahh lay fad rotia di tokri . tey gilass .' jeetu wal rotia di tokri kardi preet boli'  tun eh lay k andar chal mein baki smaan lay k andar ayi ...'
' achaar wali dabba b chuk layeo ..' tokri chuk khada hunda jeetu bolea ..'
' tokri ch rakh dita achar b.. hor kuch khana tan bol'  kauli ch daal pa patili ek passey kardi preet jeetu wal vekhdi boli'  sah upr da upr tey thalley da thalley reh gya preet da samney khadey tokri fadey jeetu dey ...
Kurtey dey palley thalley pajamey ch ubrey khadey lun wal vekh ..
Kahli kahli ch najran jhuka tedi akh nal andar kamrey ch gye jeetu wal vekhdi sochn lgi'  es nu ki ho gya ... pakka jehra aj baag ch rupi dean chumia lay k aya usda asar a ....' sochdi sochdi has pyi .....fer ek dum apni hik tey hath rakh boli' hye rabba kitey jhattia mardi meri hik tan nyi vekh lyi esney .. nyi nyi apney naal e behas kardi preet dal dean kaulean tey pani da dolu chuk kamrey wal jandi  burburayi'  edan da nyi jeetu ...'







'Rehn deney c bhandey saverey manj lendey'  kamrey ch ayi preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea  'bahr eni thand c ..'
 'Jehra kam muk javey ohi changa ..' manjey tey rajayi lay k pye jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli'  naley fer saverey b mein e manjney c .. kehra meri deorani ney aa k manj deney c ..'
 'O b aa k manj dayougi ..' preet wal vekh muskuranda hoyea jeetu bolea ..
 'Rehn dey rehn dey' apney manjey tey beithdi preet hasdi hoyi boli'  udon tan tun apni gharwali nu keha karna aa tun mere kol beith .. ghar dey kam aapey bhabhi kar layougi ..'
 'Nyi ji ohi karea karu sarey kam'  passa watt preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea'  tusi tan bas aram kareo ..'
 'Acha ji sachin'  akhan matkandi preet apney manjey tey lmi paindi rajayi modeya tak lay jeetu wal passa wat vekhdi  boli'  tere e kam nyi mukney ghar dey kam bechari ney ki karney ..'
' mere kehrey kam'  preet wal vekhda jeetu hasda hoyea bolea 
 'Batherey kam hundey ney gharwaley dey jehrey vohti nu karney paindey ..' jeetu nu cherdi preet boli...' naley fer eni sohni vohti nu tun tan apney kolon uthn b nyi dena .'
' waisey ek gal a bhabhi tuhadey jini sohni tan koi nyi ..' lattu di roshni ch preet dey chamkdey gulabi chehrey wal vekhda jeetu bolea .. ' vohat e sohney o tusi ...'
 'Holi bol vey'  jeetu ton apni tareef sun uchi uchi hasdi hoyi preet boli'  j kitey rupi ney sun lya hor kahugi chummia meria lay layean tey sohni tenu apni bhabhi lagdi a' 
 'Sachin bhabhi mjak nyi kar riha'  gaur nal preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea'  tusi vohat e sohney o .'

 'Oh ho acha ji'  jeetu wal vekh hasdi preet boli ..
 'Tuhadey lambey lambey wall .. chamkdia kallia kallia akhan ...hamesha muskurandey tuhadey bull .mottia di ladi wang chamkdey dand. sachin ek noor a tuhadey munh tey ..' preet dey khoobsurat chehrey wal vekhda jeetu apni e roh ch bolda gya ..
 'Aye hye menu tan pta e nyi c'  apni tarif sun di preet dey munh tey  chamak aa gyi
 'Lambi surahidaar tuhadi gardan hik tan k jad tusi turdey o .' Muskra k preet dean akhan ch vekhda jeetu bolea

 'Bas kar bas kar' jeetu dey bol sun sharma e gyi preet 
 'Sachin bhabhi jad tusi ghar ch turdey o tuhada dolda patla lak tey pith tey hullarey lendi prandi wali guth... enj lagda jiven sadey vehrdey ch morni paillan pa rahi hovey ..' akhan meech preet nu dil e dil niharda jeetu bolea
 'Hye o meria rabba'  hun tan sharma e gyi preet rajayi ch munh luko nimi nimi hasdi jwan mundey ton apni tarif sun garur ch bull chabn lgi ..
 'Ki hoyea bhabhi ..' preet nu rajayi nal munh dhak pyi nu vekhda jeetu bolea'  tuhadi sonh sach keh riha tusi vohat e sohney o ..'
Kuch na boli preet rajayi ch munh luko bull chab hasdi di himmat nyi c jeetu wal vekhey
 'Gussey ho gye bhabhi'  achank jeetu nu lga kitey kuch jyada tan nyi bol gya apni jhep mitanda bolea'  sachi tusi vohat e sohney o sab ton jyada .. j kuch jyada bol gya tan maaf kar deo par edan munh na rajayi ch lukowo..
'
 'Aho gussey haan'  rajayi vichon munh kad jeetu wal vekhdi preet boldi boldi has pyi'  menu nyi pta c tun menu eni gaur nal takda rehnda ..'
 'Nyi bhabhi oh gal nyi .' Apni jhep mitanda jeetu bolea ..
 'Hun tan tere ton dur e rehna paina hor na kitey tun b sukhi wang mere chundia wadan lag javey ..' hasdi hoyi preet jeetu nu cherdi boli
 'Mein tuhanu eda da lagda bhabhi..' ek dum bolea jeetu
 'Hor ki  'akhan matkandi  hoyi preet boli'  hasdi dey dand ginda turdi da lak minda  ..deor hoyea nwa nwa  jwan bach k rahin bhabhia '
 'O tan waisey e bhabhi changa lga keh dita'  hasdi khirkhirandi preet dey munh ton bol sun sharma k jhepda hoyea jeetu bolea
 'Oye hoye acha ji  'akhan matkandi preet usnu fer cherdi boli'  aj badia chakmia chakmia gallan kar riha mere nal ki gal ..
 'Nyi tan'   samj nyi ayi ki boley .. akhan churanda jeetu edar udar vekhda bolea 
 'Lagda rupi dean littia chumia da asar a' gaur nal jeetu dean akhan ch vekhdi bharwatey chuk muskurandi preet uchi uchi hasdi boli
Kuch na bolea jeetu na e koi jwaab aya usnu bas khirkhirqndi hasdi preet dey thirkdey bulln wal vekhda nimma nimma hassan lga
 'Bol hun ..' jeetu nu chup vekh usnu tang kardi cherdi preet boli
 'Menu neend aa rahi a mein sona hun ...' apney munh tey rajayi lenda jeetu bolea ..
' so ja so ja ..' hasdi hoyi preet jeetu nu cherdi boli' supney ch peengan pa rupi naal amba dey baag ch ..'


 'Nee preet nee preet'  bahron ayi jaspreet di awaz sun apney munh ton rajayi lah jeetu preet wal vekhda bolea'  jaspeeet bhabhi awazan maar rahi a ki gal ..'
 'Pta nyi'  preet b sar chuk buhey wal vekhdi boli'  hun kehra kam pay gya didi nu ..'
 'Nee preet gal sun ..' jad fer jaspreet di awaz ayi jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli'  vekhin jeetu ki gal a kahnu teri bhabhi awazan mardi a ..' 
 'Menu nyi tuhanu awazan mardi a tusi ja k pucho ki gal a ..' rajayi ch pya jeetu preet wal vekhda bolea 
 'Eh b na ....' akhir rajayi prey kar manjey ton utardi preet boli  'pta nyi kehra kam pay gya ea velley ..' fer apney manjey tey pyi chunni chuk sar dhak hik tey  swar di jeetu wal vekhdi boli'  es nu b adi rat nu thand ch.. chain nyi ..'
 'Ayi didi'  jad dobara jaspreet ney awaz mari kahli kahli ch chapple pa kundi kholdi preet boli' 

 'Hanji didi ..' buha khol kand dey dujey passey khadi jaspreet kol ja khadi hundi boli'  ki gal ..'
 'Kado di awazan maar rahi c tenu'  preet nu upr ton lay haithan tak vekhdi jaspreet boli  'ki kardi pyi c! 
 'Suti pyi c didi'  thandi thandi hwa ch thand nal kambdi angrayi lendi preet boli
 'Suti pyi c k jeetu thalley chud di pyi c ..'hasdi hoyi jaspreet preet nu cherdi boli' maaf karin tuhada dona da swad kharab kar ditta ..
 'Nyi ajehi koi gal nyi ..' hasdi hoyi preet boli 
 'Chal joothi teria adlhullea akhan ch tapkdi masti saaf das rahi a jeetu naal morni ban paila pa rahi c ... ' preet dean akhan ch vekhdi jaspreet hasdi hoyi boli 
 'J pta a tan fer puchdey kyoin o'  preet b hasdi hoyi boli
 'Fer tan pkka menu gallan kad di honi ad vichaley e awaz maar tera swad kharab kar dita ..' akh tedi kar preet nu nihardi hasdi hoyi jaspreet boli
 'Mein tan nyi jeetu gallan kad da c'  hasdi hoyi preet boli'  kehnda  bhabhi nu adi raat nu b chain nyi ...menu pta mein kidan usdey thalleyo nikl k ayi haan' 
 'Oh fer tan .sachin tuhada ad vichaley.' preet wal vekh jaspreet boli' mein tan es lyi awaaz mari c tera jeth huney aya tey teri saas   ney us hath suneha bhijwaya'  k unha di bhain di sehat theek nyi o kal nyi parso angey ...'
 'Ohhhh ...'kuch sochan ch pay gyi preet boli
 'Hun tan maujan tuhadia ghar ch dono ekeley khub manji thokeyo mil k'  akhan matka hasdi jaspreet fer preet nu cherdi boli
 'Kithey didi kam b tan sarey menu e karney painey ..' hasdi hoyi preet boli
 'Eh tan hay ..kuch sochdi jaspreet boli  'koi na menu awaz maar lawin mein madad karwa dayoungi ... par ghar dey kam ch manji thokan ch nyi o tun e thukwayi jeetu ton ..
 'Tusi b thukwa layeo tuhada b deor lagda ki hoyea j ek adi saat deor ton marwa lyi kehra koi frak paina'  es baar preet jaspreet nu cherdi boli
 'Na baba na .. 'apni hik tey hath rakh jaspreet boli  'tun e thukwa uston ... eda lamba auzar lyi firda ..'
 'Oh ho bda pta jeetu dey auzar da'  tedi akh nal jaspreet wal vekhdi preet hasdi hoyi boli
 'Kyoun tenu nyi pta  'hasdi hoyi jaspreet apna hath fad gut dikhandi boli'  eda mota lumba auzar lyi firda ..ja hun andar  bechara hath ch fdi menu gallan kad da hona k bhabhi ney ad vichaley kam rok dita ..'
 'Eh tan hay ..' apna bull chabdi hoyi preet boli  'gallan tan kad da hona ..menu tan bahr e nyi aan dinda c menu pta kidan usdey thalleyo nikl k ayi' 
 'Ja fer pay ja mud k thalley ..' hasdi hoyi jaspreet boli'  savery gal karungi ..'
 'O tan paina e paina  ..' hasdi hoyi preet boli'  tusi b jayo jeth ji udeekdey honey ....'
 'Changa khiyal rakhin mere deor da'  hasdi hoyi jaspreet boli' vekhin kitey so na gya hovey....'
 'Koi na ..' hasdi hoyi preet boli'  manji thokey bina  nayi sonda tuhada deor ..' enha keh hasdi hoyi 
kahli kahli turdi apney kamrey wal andi sakpka e gyi preet jad usney buhey tey khadey jeetu nu vekhea ...' hye rabba es ney sadia gallan tan nyi sun layean ...  pakka sun layea honia ehi sochdi dharkdey dil nal bina jeetu wal vekhey apney manjey tey aa beithi...
 'Ki kehndi bhabhi ...' buhey di kundi laa apney manjey wal andey jeetu ney puchea 
 'O bibi ney suneha bhejea unha ney kal nyi parso aana ...' apney upar modeya tak rajayi lay lmi paindi preet chatt wal vekhdi boli ..
 'Ohh...' jeetu b apney manjey tey lma painda bolea ...ek anjan jehi khushi tey chehak mehsoos hoyi usnu apney dil ch  kal bibi dey wapas na aa di sun k ..kal o tey bhabhi fer ekely ehi sochdey chatt wal vekhdey hoye jeetu ney puchea'  hor ki kehndi c bhabhi ..'
 'Kuch nayi ..' bina jeetu wal vekhey preet boli  'bas ehi suneha dena c ...'
 'Manji thokan di ki gal kardi c'  gaur nal preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea
 'Kehri manji ..' dil dhark uthea preet da jeetu di gal sun apney aap nu sambhaln di kosis kardi boli'  o tan waisey e keh rahi c koi manji dheeli c unha di ..'
 'Oh ..' preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea

Kuch der chup rahi preet fer ek dum passa wat jeetu dey manjey wal vekhdi boli'  tun khada sadia   gallan sun riha c ...'
 'Nayi nyi ..' ek dum bolea jeetu .. ' o tan mein sochea pta nyi ki gal hoyi jehri es velley bhabhi awazan maar rahi  a es lyi buhey tey aa gya' .............

[kavitakhullar]

5th update

kahli kahli turdi apney kamrey wal andi sakpka e gyi preet jad usney buhey tey khadey jeetu nu vekhea ...' hye rabba es ney sadia gallan tan nyi sun layean ...  pakka sun layea honia ehi sochdi dharkdey dil nal bina jeetu wal vekhey apney manjey tey aa beithi...
 'Ki kehndi bhabhi ...' buhey di kundi laa apney manjey wal andey jeetu ney puchea 
 'O bibi ney suneha bhejea unha ney kal nyi parso aana ...' apney upar modeya tak rajayi lay lmi paindi preet chatt wal vekhdi boli ..
 'Ohh...' jeetu b apney manjey tey lma painda bolea ...ek anjan jehi khushi tey chehak mehsoos hoyi usnu apney dil ch  kal bibi dey wapas na aa di sun k ..kal o tey bhabhi fer ekely ehi sochdey chatt wal vekhdey hoye jeetu ney puchea'  hor ki kehndi c bhabhi ..'
 'Kuch nayi ..' bina jeetu wal vekhey preet boli  'bas ehi suneha dena c ...'
 'Manji thokan di ki gal kardi c'  gaur nal preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea
 'Kehri manji ..' dil dhark uthea preet da jeetu di gal sun apney aap nu sambhaln di kosis kardi boli'  o tan waisey e keh rahi c koi manji dheeli c unha di ..'
 'Oh ..' preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea

Kuch der chup rahi preet fer ek dum passa wat jeetu dey manjey wal vekhdi boli'  tun khada sadia   gallan sun riha c ...'
 'Nayi nyi ..' ek dum bolea jeetu .. ' o tan mein sochea pta nyi ki gal hoyi jehri es velley bhabhi awazan maar rahi  a es lyi buhey tey aa gya' .............


Hun agey ...


' thora jeha hausla hoyea preet nu .. shukr c jeetu ney unha di gal nyi suni..rajayi ch munh luko sochan lgi  kina  ulta sida bhaunk rehi c jaspreet didi..tey  aap b o kehri ghat c kidan usney b  besarm ho jaspreet didi nu jwaab ditey c ...'
 'Bhabhi ek gal manugi'  preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea
 'Hun kehri gal mana ni a'  passa wat rajayi vichon munh kad jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli
 'Mein tuhadey manjey tey so jawan ..' gaur nal preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea
 'Nyi nyi menu sang lagdi a tere nal sondi nu.. ' ek dum hairan hoyi sochan  lgi  preet eh ki keh riha jeetu
 'Nyi mera matlab tusi es manjey tey so jayo mein tuhadey alley manjey tey..' preet nu samjanda jeetu bolea
  'kyoun..' hairaan hoyi jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli
 'Neend nyi andi es manjey tey
... pehlan b mein tuhadey waley manjey tey sinda hunda c ..' preet wal vekh jeetu bolea
 'Ohhhh ..koi na kal ton so jawin .. ' hasdi hoyi preet boli
 'Aj ton kyoun nyi ...sachin bhabhi es manjey tey neend nyi andi..tusi aa jayo na es manjey tey ..' kahli ch preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea
 'Nyi kal nu ..menu thand lagdi ..hun nyi mein rajayi vichon niklna  'kuch sochdi hoyi preet boli' waisey menu pta tenu aj  neend kyiun nyi andi pyi' 
 'Kyoun bhabhi..' masoom jeha ban jeetu ney puchea
 'Rupi nu jo mil aayea  ..usdi yaad ch neend udi hoyi a teri'  hasdi hoyi preet boli' tera kasoor nyi ... pehli baar kudi di chumi liti a doh char din asar tan rehna ..!
 'Nyi o gal nyi'  bhabhi di tichar sun muskuranda hoyea jeetu bolea
 'Gal tan ohi e a tun chahey mn chahey na mn .. ' tedi akh nal jeetu wal vekhdi preet usnu cherdi boli'  lagda mud rupi dey bull chetey aa rahey ney ....'
 'Haan shyad ..' apney bull ghutda chatt wal vekhda jeetu akhir sach bol e pya 
 'Koi na agli baar jad mili changi trah chum lavin ...' hasdi hoyi preet boli 
Kuch na bolea jeetu bull ghut chabdey nu ajay b apney bulln tey rupi dey mulaym gulabi bulln da sek  mehsoos ho riha c jis di tapish usdey ang ang nu khumari bharey swad nal bhardi ja rahi c ... ang ang masti bhari akadn nal kambn lga .....pattan vichkar lun da kadakpan usnu bechain karn lga shukar c rajayi lyi hoyi c ... 
 'So gya ..' jad kafi der kuch na bolea jeetu preet passa wat us wal vekhdi boli 
 'Nyi bhabhi ..' ek dum bolea jeetu usnu tan lga c shyad bhabhi so gyi a
 'Haan hun neend kithon aani'   hasdi hoyi preet boli 
 'Kidan ayougi neend ..' preet wal vekhdey jeetu ney puchea
 'Menu ki pta ..' jeetu di hallat vekh preet hasdi rajayi ch munh lukondi hoyi boli  'menu tan hun neend aa rahi a mein sona ..'
 'Bhabhi tuhadi chummi leni c dayoungey  ' rajayi ch muko luko pyi  preet nu cherda jeetu bolea
 'Ki ek dum rajayi vichon munh kad jeetu wal ghur k  vekhdi preet boli 
 'Tuhadi chunni ...' preet wal vekhda jeetu gal badldta bolea
 'Ki karni .. ' hairaan hoyi preet jeetu wal vekhdi boli usnu lga usney galat suneya jeetu ney chummi nyi chunni mangi c 
 'Sar jeha sukh riha ban ni c  ' preet wal vekh apney mathey nu hath nal ghutda jeetu bolea
 'Oh ahh lay .. ' rajayi vichon hath bahar kad jeetu nu chuni frandi preet boli'  so ja hun' 
 'Tusi ki samjey c .. ' chunni far da jeetu nima nima muskuranda bolea
 'Kuch nyi mein ki samjna ..'  jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli 
 'Menu pta ki samjey tusi'  preet wal vekh muskuranda hoyea jeetu bolea' 
Ehi samjey c na  tusi  k mein tuhadi chummi mangi' 
 'Haan menu b ehi lga tuh keha bhabhi chummi laini a  tuhadi  'hasdi hoyi preet boli'  mein b sochan ch pay gyi eh ki mang riha jeetu'  
 'Waisey ek gal kahan mein mangi tuhadi chummi e c  ' preet nu hasdi vekh fer himmat kar usnu cherda jeetu bolea
 'Ki .. 'akhan kad  ghurdi jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli  'ahh thappad vekheya' 
 'Nyi  'hasda hoyea jeetu rajayi ch munh lukonda bolea ...
 'Bol hun'  jeetu nu rajayi ch munh lukoyi vekh preet b hasdi hoyi boli'  hun kyoun munh luko lya' 
 'Acha bhabhi tuhadi ek chummi lain lyi kinney thappad khaney payougey'  mud rajayi vichon munh kad preet nu cherdey hoye jeetu ney puchea
 'Ki  ' sar chuk jeetu nu ghurdi preet boli
 'tusi apey keha jad mein chummi mangi eh thappad vekhea  ..' hasda hoyea jeetu preet wal vekhda bolea
 'Kuch na boli ..' samj na ayi jeetu di gal tey hassey k gussey hovey chat wal vekhdi nimi nimi muskuran lgi 
 'Daso b ..' preet nu muskurandi vekh fer chedeya jeetu ney 
 'So ja hun nyi tan thappd mar mar k munh lal kar dayoungi samjeya  ' jeetu wal vekh  thappad dikhandi preet boli

'munh lal krn ton baad fer dayoungey chummi. ... ' preet dey hath wal vekh hasda hoyea jeetu bolea
 'Apni rupi dean lay ja k chummia mein nyi deni . ' samj tan gyi c preet jeetu usnu cherd k tang kar riha
 ' tusi Kyoun nyi deni bhabhi ...jaspreet bhabhi b tan dindi a apney deor nu ..' behas jehi kar swad lainda jeetu bolea
 'Oh tan hor b bathera kuch dindi a apney deor nu... ' chat wal vekhdi preet holi jehi  boli
 'Nyi mein tan bas chummi laini ...' chahey holi boli c preet fer b jeetu ney sun lya ki keha bhabhi ney
 'So ja hun kyoun tang karda saverey uth k sarey kam b menu e karney painey ... ' chirdi hoyi gal mukan di kosis kardi preet boli 
 'Neend nyi andi bhabhi  ' fer jeetu ney keha
 'Hye o rabba .. nee rupi tun e sambh es nu pta nyi ki chaska la ditta tun es nu chummia da .. kutta mere ron chummia mang riha ...  'chatt wal vekh hath jordi preet boldi boldi hass pyi
 'Dey deo fer tusi ..' preet nu hasdi vekh fer usnu tang karda jeetu bolea
 'Mein kyoun dewan .. ja k apni rupi dean lay ....ja fer jaspreet bhabhi nu awaz maar lay o dey dayoungi  ..' akhir preet boli 
 'Apni bhabhi dey hundey mein kisi hor bhabhi nu kyoin awaz maaran ... ' preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea
 'Nyi ji teri bhabhi nyi dindi chumia deor nu ... ' ek dum mukrdi preet boli
 'Ek dey dey bhabhi ..' jid jehi kar  preet nu cherda jeetu bolea
 'Nyi bilkul b nyi ...' apni awaz ch kadakpan lya boli preet
 'Ki bhabhi saria bhabhia dindia tun b dey dey na.. ' bhola jeha ban jeetu bolea
 'Jehria dindia unha kol ja k lay mein nyi dindi .... ' bina jeetu wal vekhey preet boli
 'Nyi ji mein tan apni bhabhi di e chummi laini a  '   muskranda hoyea gussey na hundi preet nu vekh jeetu fer jid kar cherda bolea
 'Nyi ji mere ton nyi dey honi ..' apni hik tey hath rakhdi preet boli 
 'Lay mein apey e layounga tusi bas chummi den nu haan karo ...' preet da jwab sun  muskuranda hoyea jeetu usdean akhan ch vekhda bolea
 'Oh ho  ' jeetu da jwaab sun akhan matkandi preet jeetu wal vekhdi boli'  apni saheli di tan tere ton lay nyi hoyi o b us bechari nu aap laini pyi .. wada aya meri chummi lain wala .. so ja chup kar k'  
 'Dey dey na bhabhi ..' preet nu cherda jeetu bolea'  bas ek chummi' 
 'Jeetu so ja chup kar k kyoun tang karda menu b neend aa rahi a saverey jaldi uthna sarey kam menu ekeli nu karney painey ....' jeetu wal vekhdi boli preet 
 'Ki bhabhi ek chimmi nyi dey sakdey apney deor nu ...'preet nu vekhda jeetu muskuranda hoyea bolea
 'Nyi ji nyi dey sakdi .... ' ghuri wat jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli
 'Acha bhabhi kal dayoungi chummi ..' fer preet nu cherda jeetu bolea


 'Sochungi ...  'bedhiyani ch pta nyi kidan preet dey munh vichon nikl gya ek dum boli  'nyi nyi bilkul b nyi ...'
 'Mnn ja bhabhi'  jid karda jeetu bolea ek alag e swad aa eiha c usnu bhabhi nu edan tang karkey
 'Ufff jeetu so ja kyoun tang karda . .' Akhir khij k chird hoyi preet boli
 'Mein tan edan e tang karunga'  hasda hoyea jeetu bolea 
 'Soch lay j mein tang kita bahr nu bhajunga .. ' jeetu nu ghurdi preet boli
 'nyi ji nyi bhajda ..' muskuranda hoyea jeetu bolea 
 Kuch der chup rahi preet ...pta c usnu jeetu janbuj k tang kar riha ..
 'Ki sochdi bhabhi dey dey na ek chumi'  preet nu fer  cherda jeetu bolea

Chup rahi preet samj gyi esney edan nyi hatna tang krn ton ..swaad lay riha menu cherd cherd ..sabak sikhana paina esnu ... kuch sochdi hoyi preet rajayi apney upron lah ek passey rakh manjey di wahi tey beithdi boli'  hun bol ki keh riha c ....'
'Ek chumi dey deo ..' fer preet nu cherda jeetu sar chuk manjey tey uth beithi preet wal vekhda bolea ..
 'Aa ja lay lay fer ..' manjey tey latkkdean lattan hilandi hoyi preet boli 
Ek dum hairaan reh gya jeetu preet da jwaab sun .. gaur nal preet wal vekhda bolea  'nyi menu pta tusi kutna' 
 'Nyi kutdi chal aa lay chumi'  manjey di wahi dona hathan ch fad lattan hilandi preet jeetu wal velhdi boli  pta c usnu hun jeetu ney rajayi ch munh luko so jana 
 'Menu pta tusi kutna  menu'  apney manjey tey eketha jeha hunda jeetu bolea  'samaj gya o hun  uth preet kol gya pakka thapd marna bhabhi ney 
 'Ki sochda pya'  darey hoye jeetu nu vekh hun preet  usnu cherdi boli  'pehlan tan bda kehnda c ek chummi dey dey bhabhi' 
 'O bhabhi ..' achkachanda hoyea jeetu boln e lga c k preet usdey manjey kol aa wahi tey beith us wal vekhdi boli'   'kyoun hun nyi laini chummi'  
 'Nyi  ..' eni kol aa beithi preet wal vekhda jeetu  ghabra k haklanda bolea  'menu pta tusi deni hay nyi kutna a menu ... '
 'Naley kehnda c jinna marji kutt layo bas ek chummi dey deo .' Muskurandi jeetu wal vekh preet apney hath wal vekhdi boli 
 'O bhabhi mein tan tuhanu cherda c .' Manjey tey uth beith preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea .. ' ena ku mjak tan kar sakda .. umeed a tusi gussey nayi o ..'
 'Mein kyoun gussey  hoyoungi' jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli'  mein tan aap tere kol  tenu chummi den ayi haan  .' Muskurandi hoyi preet boli pta c usnu jeetu nu jinna o hun tang karugi unha e usney sharma k ghabra k dardey hoye mintan karnia 
 'Nyi nyi bhabhi mein tuhadi chummi kidan ... ' preet wal vekhdey jeetu nu samj nyi aa rahi  c bhabhi sachin uskol chummi den ayi a k mjak kar rahi a ...' 
 'Eh tun soch kidan tun'  jeetu nu fer cherdi preet boli'  tun e mintan karda c ek chummi dey dey bhabhi hun ki hoyea .keha c na '

' haan keha c'  preet dean sharart ch chamkdia akhan tey muskurandey bulln wal vekh edar udar vekhda  holi jehi bolea jeetu ..

 ' lay fer hun chummi ..' jeetu nu pareshaan ho ghabra k edar udar vekhdey vekh preet usnu cherdi boli
 'Nyi bhabhi mein tan mjaak ..' manjey tey beitha jeetu preet wal vekhda bolea'  tusi jayo so jayo ..'
 'Eni der da tang kar riha c bhabhi chumi dey dey tey hun jad mein kehndi haan mukrda kyoun a ..' jeetu di gabhraht vekh swad lendi preet boli
 'O bhabhi mein tan tuhanu tang kar riha c ched riha c ..' hichkhichanda hoyea jeetu bolea . Eni kol beithi muskurandi bull dandn haith dba us wal vekhdi Bhabhi...dil di dharkn tez hon lgi .. usdi himat nyi c hun preet nal akh mila sakey
 'Soch lay .. fer na kahin bhabhi ton pehli baar kuch mangea c tey bhabhi mukr gyi ..' jeetu nu cherdi  usdi halat vekh swad lendi preet apna bull ek passeyo tukdi usdean akhan ch vekhdi boli .. pta c usnu jeetu nu jina o hun tang karugi una e jeetu ney sharmandey hoye  ghabra k pareshaan ho munh tey rajayi lay apney aap nu luko laina 
 'Nyi kehnda bhabhi ..' preet dean akhan ch vekhda jeetu usdey kambdey gulabi muskurandey bulln nu vekhda bolea achanak e agley pal ch us ch himmat pta nyi kithon aa gyi agey nu ho usney apney bull preet dey bulln nal jod   bulln nu chum lya ...
 'Hye rabba'  ek dum tabrak k uchal e pyi preet umeed nyi c usnu jeetu usdey bull chum layouga chahey kuch e pal lyi jeetu dey bull usdey bulln nal judey c par jwan mundey dey bechain bulln di garmi tey tapish ney usda ang ang khinda k rakh dita ..
 'Maaf kardey bhabhi pta nyi kida ..' ghabraya hoyea jeetu preet ton akhn churanda bolea ...usnu khud pta nyi c us ch eni himmat kithon aa gyi k bhabhi dey bull chum lye usney .. pura jism kamb uthea bhabhi dey gulabi bulln nu chumdey e .. par hun usdi himmat nyi c bhabhi nal akh b mila sakey...  behak e gya c preet dey gulabi muskurabdey bull di thirkn vekh
Bull chuman ton baad edan ghabra k ekethey ho beithey jeetu nu vekh hassa e nikln lga c preet da fer b apna hassa rok us wal vekhdi boli  '  edan e litia c rupi dean chummia' 
Kuch na bolea jeetu .. kamrey ch edar udar vekhn lga  dar nal bura haal c usda .. eh ki kar beitha mein  .. bhabhi dey bull chum laye ...ehi sochda kamb jeha gya  jeetu 
 'Bol ..' pta nyi kehri khumari chad gyi c simran nu jeetu wal vekhdi boli'  das b' 
 'Haan ...haan ..' apney bull ghutda jeetu hakla k bolea
 'budu jeha..' jeetu dey bulln wal vekhdi preet boli'  tenu kudi di chumi b nyi laini andi' 
 'Ki matlab ... hairaan hoyea jeetu preet wal vekhda bolea ...samj nyi ayi bhabhi gussey hon di jagah tichar kyoun kardi pyi a
 'Matlab eh .. ' jeetu dean akhan ch vekhdi preet us wal jhukdi apney bull usdey bulln kol lya holi jehi boli'  mein dasdi haan kidan lyi di kudi di chumi 
 'Ki kii... kidan'  haklanda hoyea jeetu preet wal vekhda bolea eni nedey bhabhi dey gulabi bull tey  munh vichon nikldey grm sahan dey sek nal behal hunda bolea'  mein samjya nyi' 
 'Koi na mein samja  dindi haan ..' jeetu di gardan ch hath rakh preet usdey bulln nu  apney bulln dey hor nedey kardi boli'   bol samjna' 
 'Haan ....nyi  'bechain hoye jeetu nu samj na ayi ki jwaab devey ..bhabhi dey thirkdey gulabi eni nedey c k j jra jeha  b hilda dona dey bulln ney apas ch jud jana c ... 
 'Edan lyi di a chummi  kudi di' kehndi hoyi preet ney apney bull khol jeetu dey bulln tey rakh ditey ...andar tak kamb uthea jeetu jidan bhabhi ney apney bull usdey bulln nal ragdey .... gram mulaym thirdkey gulabi bulln di tapish ney jeetu dey hosh e uda ditey...es ton pehlan usdey bull koi harkat kardey  ja fer bhabhi dey bull chumdey .. preet usdey dono bulln nu apney bulln ch fsa khich khich chusdi hoyi usdean akhan ch vekhn lgi ... jeetu usnu tan samj na ayi ki karey ... bas bechain betab hoyea preet dey bull chuman di kosis karda par preet usney ek b mauka nayi dita jeetu nu apney bulln nu chuman da .... usdey dono bulln nu apney bullan ch fsa khichdi chusdi usdey modey fad us upr jhuki usdean akhan ch akhan pa vekhdi jiven keh rahi hovey ..' eda layidi chumi kudi di kaka ji ...'
 'Ouffff'  jiven e sah lain lyi preet dey bull jeetu dey bulln nalo vakh hoye sah niglda hairan bechain hoyea apney bull ghut preet dean akhan ch vekhn lga jehri muskurandi hoyi apney sah kabu kardi bull chabdi usdi halat vekh bharwatey chuk akhan matkandi boli'  samjea hun ..edan karidi a chummi kudi nu ..'
 'Haan'  apney ukhdey sah kabu karda jeetu apni hik tey hath rakh preet dey munh wal vekhda bolea ..' samj gya bhabhi ..'
 'Agli baar edan lawin  rupi di chumi'  akh dba jeetu wal vekh hasdi hoyi preet  thodi fad usda munh upr nu chuk usdean akhan ch vekhdi boli
Ji .. ' apney bulln tey thori der pehlan judey preet dey bechain gram bulln di tapish nal behal hoyea jeetu haklanda hoyea bolea ajay b usnu yakeen nyi hoyea k bhabhi ney aap usdi chumi lyi tey chumi b ruh nal bulln ch bull fsa chus k ek supney wang lga usnu sab ....
 'So ja hun'  hasdi hoyi preet usdey manjey ton uth apney manjey tey aa lmi paindi boli ..
Yakeen tan preet nu b nyi ho riha c o aap uth k jeetu di chumi lay k aayi .. ki ho gya c usnu samj ton prey c uslyi ... par jeetu dey bulln di narmi tey jwan mundey dey ukhdey sahan dey sek ney usdey ang ang ch khumari bhar diti .. kinney mahinia baad usdey bulln ney bull chumey c .. jwan jism dey ek kauney ch  eney mahina di suti hoyi aag ch ek chingri jiven mud bhakn lgi ...
 'Hye o meria rabba eh mein ki kar beithi tey o b jeetu naal ...' akhan meech sochdi burburayi preeti
Kafi der kamrey ch sanata riha na preeti kuch boli na e jeetu ...
 'Bhabhi enj lagea jiven mein koi supna vekhea hovey ..' jeetu di awaz sun us wal vekhdi preet boli'  tun sutta nyi ajay ...'
'Hye bhabhi tusi meri chummi liti ..' ahh jehi bhar bechain hoyea jeetu bolea ...'
 'Chal chal so ja hun .. vohta swad na lay chetey kar kar ..' jeetu wal vekh tedi akh nal ghurdi preet boli 
 'Fer dayoungey ..' apney bull ghutdey jeetu ney puchea
 'Nyi hun nyi ..' kahli kahli ch boli usnu tan aap samj nyi ayi usney jeetu di chummi  kyoun  tey kiven lyi
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 'Nyi nyi mera matlab kal nu ..' samj hun jeetu nu b nyi aa rahi c o bhabhi nu cherd riha k sachin chummi mang riha
 'Sochungi ...' jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli'  minnat ali gal a so ja hun menu vohat neend aa rahi .. thak gyi mein sara din ghar dey kam kar kar ..'
 'Mein lattan  ghut dewan ... 'sar chuk preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea 
 'Beh ja aram naal wda aya meria lattan ghutan wala ..' jeetu wal vekhdi preet  hasdi hoyi boli'  apni vohti dean ghutea karin lattan ...'
 'Theek a ji ..' muskuranda hoyea jeetu bolea'  acha hun mein sonda .. tusi socheyo jarur ..' 
 'Ki sochan vey ..' jeetu wal vekhdi preet akhan kad di  boli 
 'Ohi'  preet nu cherda fer bolea jeetu'  tusi keha na kal chumi den barey sochungey ..'
 'Oh koi na sochungi ..' hasdi hoyi preet boli'  bas hun boli na.... chup kar k so ja ...' rajayi ch munh dhakdi preet boli .......

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Daily update dena aukha a ji .waisey b readers hay nyi ethey..so regular n continue likhan du
a mood n atmosphere create nyi no riha ... let it as it is going .. writer always write when there r readers otherwise ..

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5th update



'Tusi kadon uthey .' Kamrey ton bahar aa jeetu chaunkey ch beithi kam kardi preet wal vekhda bolea
 'Kado di ...' jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli 
' wadey ch dangran da kam muka .. bas safayi karkey hati c ..' ek baar dil dhark uthea usda rat dean gallan chetey kar ...
 'Menu utha dindey mein madad kar dinda  .' Preet kol chaunkey ch aa khada hunda  sehaj swaa ch jeetu bolea 
 'Sochea kyoun uthana naley chuttia a tenu so lavey jinna marji ..' jeetu wal vekh fer chulley tey ubaldi cha ch dudh pandi  preet boli'  cha ban gyi a munh hath dho lay ...' 
 'Tusi payo cha mein aya ...' parna chuk gusalkhaney wal janda jeetu bolea'  fer ekethey beh k peendey haan cha ....'


 'Bdi thand a'  parney nal hath munh punjda jeetu chulley kol aa beithda bolea ...
 'Thand tan hay ..' cha da gilass jeetu wal kardi preet boli ...
 'Tusi nha lya ...' preet dey munh wal vekhda jeetu cha da ghut bharda bolea
 'Haan kyoun ..' cha dey gram gilass nu dono hathan ch fad nigh lendi preet boli ....
 'Eni thand ch .'Vehrdey ch  faili dhund wal vekhda jeetu bolea 
 'Hanji ..tere wang alsi nyi ..' hasdi hoyi preet boli  ' kam muka sab ton pehlan nahati fer cha dhari tenu awaz marn e lgi  c k uth j hun ..bathera din chad aya ..'
 'Mein tan kado da uthea pya c bas rajayi vichon nikln nu dil nyi kar riha c .
.cha da ghut bharda jeetu bolea ...
 'Oh acha ji ..' hasdi hoyi preet boli'   pta menu ... rupi dey supneya ch guhri need suta pya c ....sochea bibi bapu ghar nyi so lavey ...nyi tan bapuji dey ghar hundey eni der soo k vekhda ..'Edan e a gharwaley ghar nyi sanu kisi da dar nyi ..' cha da ghut bhar jeetu bolea'  mein tan cha pee k fer so jana ...'
 'khetan nu geda  maar awin .. bapuji ney andey ehi puchna tey mere ton jooth nyi keh hona ...'jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli 
' Ki bhabhi tusi mere lyi ena b jooth nyi bol sakdey'  preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea .....
 'Nyi bilkul b nyi ...' biba putt ban khetan nu ja ..' hasdi hoyi preet boli' aa k jinna marji so lavin ....' chaunkey  ton uth khadi hundi preet boli
 'Jo hukam malkan da  ...' preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea' Kithey chali bhabhi'  preet nu chaunkey ton uth vehrdey wal jandi vekh jeetu ney puchea
 'Kitey nyi makhan ridkan lgi c' chaati tey madani chuk ek passey nu jandi preet boli ...
 'Bhabhi o rat kehrey bol sunaye c tusi..' muskuranda jeetu cha da ghut bharda bolea
 'kehrey. ..' gardan ghuma jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli  
 'Ohi hasdi dey dand ginda turdi da lak minda deor hoyea nwa nwa jwaan bach k rahi bhabhia .. ' preet nu niharda jeetu bolea
 'Aho fer ..' jeetu wal vekh nimi nimi muskurandi preet boli
 'Sachin bhabhi tuhadi taur morni wargi a'  preet dey patley doldey lak tey lehrandi kali praandi wal vekhda jeetu hasda hoyea bolea 
 'Hor kuch ..' jeetu di gal sun hasdi hoyi preet boli'  
 'Hor b vohat kuch ... ' khetan ton wapas aa dasunga 
 'Koi na ..' hasdi hoyi preet vehrdey ch ek passey peedi tey beith chatti ch dahi pandi boli  ' sweater paa chaddar di bukal mar k jawin thand vohat a ..
 'Theek bhabhi..' uskolon langda jeetu bolea'  tusi b soch k rakheo ..
 'Ki ..!' Sar chik jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli
 'Rat tusi keha c sochungi oho'  akhan matka jeetu preet nu cherda bolea..
  'Hye rabba'  apni hik tey hath rakh jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli'  nyi nyi bilkul b nyi .. rat pta nyo mere ton kidan ..'
 'Tuhadi  marji .. ' ah bharda jeetu bolea'  par ek gal a bhabhi  jindgi bhar chetey rahugi rat ali tuhadi chummi .'
 'Ja baba  .. khetan nu ja' jeetu nu ghurdi preet boli'  savrrey saverey fer shuru ho gya .....'
' theek a ji'   gate khol bahar nu janda jeetu fer preet nu cherda bolea......' j vehley hoye  tan socheo jarur ...'



'Eni der la ditti kheyan ch ...' maney tey beithi dhup sekdi preet vehrdey ch aye jeetu wal vekhdi boli ..' mein kado di udeekdi pyi c ...'
 'Sachin bhabhi preet kol anda bolea jeetu'  lagda soch liya tusi jo mein sochn nu keha c esi lyi udeek rahey c ..'
 'Jyada jabblean na maar roti tuk da karna c'  jeetu wal vekh ghurdi hoyi preet boli  'kado di udeek rahi c tun awey tan roti tuk ton vehli howan ...dopehra ho gya ...'



 'Bhabhi jad tusi gussey ch vekhdey o sachin vohat e sohney lagdey o'  roti khanda muskuranda hoyea jeetu bolea 
 'Mein kado tere wal gussey nal vekhea vey ..' gilass ch lassi pa jeetu mohrey rakhdi preet fer akhan kad di boli ..
 'Kyoun jad mein kuch kehnda gussey nyi hundey ..' preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea 
 'Ena ku tan gussa jaruri a deor nu dikhana'  hasdi hoyi preet tokri vichon gram roti kad jeetu di thali ch rakhdi  boli'  nyi tan aj kal dey deor bhabhi nal kuch jyada e chambl jandey ney ..' 
' par jad bhabhi tuhadey wargi sohni sunakhi hovey tan'  roti khanda jeetu bolea'  gussey ch hor b sohni lagdi a ..'
 'Chal chad eh sab  'jeetu nu vekh hasdi hoyi preet boli'  aj bibi bapu ghar nyi mera bda dil karda kiran didi nu mil k aan da ..'
roti khanda jeetu kehan e lga c haan haan .. koi na chaldey haan unha dey ghar par ek dum bolea'  nyi nyi bilkul b nyi ..'
 'Kyoun'  udas mayous jehi hundi preet boli
 'j bibi nu pta lag gya tan ...na ji na tuhanu tan pta e a mere ton bibi samney jooth nyi bol hona ...'
 'Oye hoye mera dialogue mere tey e'  jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli 
 'Edan e a ..' gilass chuk lassi peenda jeetu muskuranda bolea
 'Bda dil karda a didi nu milan da..' jeetu dean akhan ch vekhdi preet boli'  mera sohna sohna nikka deor bhabhi di eni gal nyi man sakda ..'
 'Tusi mn dey o meri gal ..' preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea
 'Manugi .' jeetu wal vekhdi sehaj swah ch preet boli'  jo kahunga tun'  
 'Pkka'  roti khanda khanda ruk preet wal vekhda jeetu mukeria'  baad ch mukeriyo na ..'
 'Rehn dey nyi lay k jana tan na lay k ja ..' jeetu wal vekhdi preet  udas hundi boli 
 'Gussey kyoun hundey o'  preet da uterya munh vekh jeetu bolea'  tusi tyar ho jayo mein roti kha k chad anda tuhanu ..' 
 'Tyar e haan .. ' apney kapdeya wal vekhdi.preet boli 
 'Edan nyi changi trah tyar ho k ... akhan ch kajl ...surkhi bindi  laa ..sohna jeha suit pa k ..'  ' muskuranda hoyea jeetu bolea ..'akhir pind ch mere b tan roab bney k eni sohni bhabhi nal jeetu tureya janda ...' 
 'Oh ho acha ji ..' hasdi chehkdi hoyi preet boli'  koi na pind ch teri tohr bna dindi haan' 
'Jaldi tyar hovo fer mein chad anda tuhanu .. aa k dangra lyi patthey b...
Kutarney ney .. ' muskuranda hoyea jeetu bolea
 'Hye kinna changa a tun  jeetu ...'chehkdi hoyi preet kahli kahli ch kamrey wal jandi boli ...' vohat e changa ...'
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' acha bhabhi chalda mein ...'  kiran tey preet kolon uthda jeetu bolea'  tusi karo gallan ..'
 ' beh ja .. tun ki karna ghar ja k'  jeetu wal vekhdi kiran boli'  j bhukh lgi tan ethey e roti bna dindi haan ..'
 'Nyi bhabhi'  manjey tey beithi kiran wal vekhda jeetu bolea'  roti asin kha k aye c ..bas bhabhi kehndi c tuhanu milan nu dil karda es lyi asin aa gye ...'
 'Eh tan tun vohat e changa kita jeetu .. mera apna vohat dil karda c preet nu miln nu par teri bibi karkey nyi ayi ...' mayous jehi ho kiran boli 
 'Aa jana c tusi bibi ney ki kehna c ...' preet wal vekh fer kiran wal vekhda jeetu bolea ...
 'Pta nyi ki kehndi ..' thori udas hundi kiran boli'  tenu tan sab pta e a ..
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Kuch der chup khada sochda riha jeetu'  acha bhabhi mein ghantey ku tak lain anda tuhanu ...dangran lyi pathey b kuterney ney ..'
 'Koi na mein chad ayoungi  'preet wal vekh fer jeetu wal vekhdi kiran boli ..
 'Nyi nyi didi jeetu lay jayouga aa k'  kiran wal vekhdi preet boli ...
 'Theek a bhabhi ..tusi karon gallan'  gate wal anda jeetu bolea .....   jidan khush ho chehkdi hoyi bhabhi apni didi kol beithi gallan kar rahi c ....ek sakoon jeha c usdey dil ch bhabhi nu ethey lya ..

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'Sachin bhabhi aj tan tusi meri tohr bna diti pind ch ..' preet nal ghar waps aa jeetu preet nu upr ton lay haithan tak vekhda bolea'  vohat e sohney lag rahey o tusi es suit ch ...' 
 'Oye hoye sachin ..' apney suit wal vekhdi preet boli
 'Tuhadi sonh .. ena sohna lagda eh suit tuhadey utey k puchon na ... darji ney changi trah nap k sitta esnu ..' preet dey ghutwey suit ch njr andey dilkash utar charav nu niharda jeetu bolea
 'Mein aap sitta c es nu ..' apney suit nu vekhdi preet boli 
 'Ohh haan sach mein tan bhul e gya c meri bhabhi tan suit c lendi a ..' halkey harey rang dey fullan di kadayi walley suit ch preet dey dul dul paindey husan nu vekh jeetu muskuranda hoyea bolea .. ek dum pattola lag rahi c preet us suit ch lak tey ghuti kameej dey goddeya ton thorey upr tak pujdey kameej dey palleya tey chamkdi peeley rang di fullan wali kadayi .. thalley chauna wali khulli duli patiala sahi salwaar .. patli patang uchi lambi jatti da jan kad da husan.. aj shyad pehli baar eni gaur nal bhabhi nu vekh riha c jeetu .. sohni tan usnu raj k lagdi c bhabhi  .. jism pura niroya gaddar ....lambi surahi daar gardan . Ubri hoyi hik dean  gollayean  da ubaar  ageo nukela .. samtal dhid nal chimbdi kameej ch patla lak ..jiven nawi nawi jawan hoyi mutiyar kudi ... pattan ch chauna wali salwaar dean silwaatn..  paunchey addea thalley.. pairan  ch payi suit nal match kardi sitareya wali juti .. dil kar riha c usda aj bas bhabhi nu velhi jawey ....
 'Ki kitta tun ghar aa k ..' jeetu nu apney wal tak taki lga k vekhdey hoye vekh preet boli'  pathey kutrey k nyi..'
 'Haan kutar lye bas panney a ..' wadey wal vekhda jeetu bolea .. sochea pehln tuhanu lay aawan ..ekeley da ghar chit nyi lag riha c ...'
'acha ji ..' hasdi hoyi preet boli 
 'Sachin tuhdey bina ghar sunna sunna lag riha c ..' muskuranda hoyea jeetu wadey  wal janda bolea ..' hun tusi aa gye tuhanu vekh lya chain aa gya ..'
 'Oye hoye ..' jeetu nu dangran dey wadey wal janda vekh preet nu jiven 
Kuch chetey aya usdey pichey pichey dangraan dey wadey ch aa  ek dum  boli' Oye ek gal puchni c tere ton .' Jeetu wal gaur nal vekhdi preet boli'  kiran didi nu ena ghur ghur k kyoun vekh riha c ...'
 'Kadon ..' ek passey pya pattheya da  khali  tokra chukda jeetu hairaan hunda bolea
 'Jyada dramey na kar mein sab vekhea'  jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli'  kidan akhan fad fad kiran didi nu vekh riha c ..'
 'Nyi bhabhi tuhanu galti lagi mein kado vekhea ...'  bina preet wal vekhey jeetu kutrey hoye harrey patheya tey tudi sutda bolea
 'Menu Galti ..' jeetu dey nedey aa us dean akhan ch vekhdi preet boli  'jad manjey tey beithi kiran didi mere nal gallan kar rahi c teria akhan kithey c' 
 'Kitey b nyi..'sakpkanda hoyea  pattheya ch tudi ralanda jeetu bolea
 'Chal jootha vekhea mein kidan akhan tika kiran didi di hik wal vekh riha c ...' gaur nal jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli 
 'Nyi tan' mukrda hoyea jeetu bolea munh da rang ud gya eh soch hye rabba bhabhi ney usnu kiran bhabhi dey mummey nihardey fad lya 
 'Mere nal tan jooth bolea na kar ..' jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli  'kidan ghur ghur vekh riha c mein apni akhin vekhea
 'O bhabhi ..' kuch jwaab na sujeya jeetu nu 
'Bol hun  ' lak tey hath rakh jeetu dey udey hoye munh wal vekhdi preet boli
 'Waisey e njr chali gyi honi..' preet ton akhan churanda jeetu bolea
 'Oh ho waiaey e kidan ..mein aap vekhea bina akh jhapkey ghur ghur uthey vekh riha c .' Jeetu nal behas kardi preet boli 
 'Dikh  rahey c vekh ho gye'  patheya ch tudi rla tokrey ch panda holi jehi bolea jeetu'  menu lagda unha ney kameej thalley kuch nyi paya c . .'
 'J oh vekh lendey ki sochdey kidan ghur ghur vekh riha c  '  jeetu nu samjandi hoyi preet boli
 'Nyi eni ghur k v nayi vekhea bas ek adi baar njr ja tiki c uthey... mera ki kasor dikh rahey c vekh ho gye ..apney wallon safayi dinda jeetu tokra chuk majh agey khurli ch patthey sutda bolea
 'Oh acha ji ki dikh rahey c ..' puchdi puchdi preet da hassa nikl aya jidan masoom bhola jeha ban jeetu ney keha'  dikh rahey c vekh ho gye ..'
'Menu nyi pta ..' bhabhi nu hasdi vekh jeetu b sharmanda hoyea hass pya
 'Pta tenu sab kuch a ..ena bholla tun hay nyi jinna lagda a'  akhan tarerdi preet jeetu nu cherdi boli
 'Unha nu b chunni lay laini chahidi c hun mera ki kasoor jhaatia mardey c mere ton vekh ho gya  'masoom jeha ban jeetu safayi dinda bolea
 'Kehrry jhattia  mardey c vey'  Jeetu nal behas kardi preet boli 
 'Mardey tan c kameej vichon  bahar nikl..' kiran dey mummeya di golayi nu chetey karda jeetu bolea
 'Awin mardey  c ..unha kehra khulley galley di kameej payi c  ' fer behas di hoyi preet boli
 'Hun tuhanu kidan dassaan mere matlab bahar nu nikley hoye c..' mud tokrey nu patheya nal bharda jeetu holi jehi  bolea'  vekh ho gya' 
 'Oh ho acha ji  'jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli  'shukar a unha nu pta nyi lga k tun unha di hik nu ghur riha' 
 'Hor ki ... suit b patla c dikhdey pye c bahar nu nikley ...' bina preet wal vekhey jeetu kiran di kameej ch ubrey gol gol mummey tey bahar nu niklia doddia nu yaad karda bolea
 'Sachin bda lucha a tun ..' hasdi hoyi preet boli'  meri wadi didi a oh... kuch tan lihaj karda na vekhda ' 
 'Mera ki kasoor unha nu sochna chahida c..' pathheya da tokra mud khurli ch sutda jeetu bolea
 'Unha nu kehra pta c asin unha dey ghar aa rahey haan naley fer eh thodi pta c jeetu eda wada ho giya bhabhia dey mummey napda firda ..' pta nyi kidan preet dey munh vichon mummey nikl gya jeetu wal vekhdi ney jeev dand haith dba lyi jad samj ayi ki bol gyi oh' 
jhatka tan lga jeetu nu b  bhabhi dey munh ton mumma sun ... sharmanda hoyea bolea'  tusi b na bhabhi awen' 
 'Awen kiven ..'apni hik tey lyi  chumni nal apney mummeya di golayi nu swaar k  dhakdi preet boli'  hun tan menu b tere ton ...'
 'Ki mere ton .' Pathhey panda panda ruk gardan ghuma  preet wal vekh bolea jeetu ..
 'Kuch nyi ... ' jeetu wal vekh apna hassa rok preet boli'  pathhey pa majhan nu ...'


 'Daso na bhabhi ...' nimma nimma hasda jeetu fer bolea
 'Ki dassan ...  'hasdi hoyi preet boli  'jehra dujeya di bhabhia di hik niharda rehnda ..ki pta meri hik tey b akhan tikanda hovey...'

'Nyi bhabhi tuhadi sonh kadi nyi vekhea tuhadi hik wal ......' keha chahey jeetu ney eh pr apney aap e usdi njr chunni nal dhaki preet di hik tey ja tiki
 'Acha ji ....  kyoun changi nyi lagdi.. hasdi hasdi preet jeetu nu apni hik wal vekhdey vekh boli
 'Nyi o gal nyi ..jhepda jijhkda hoyea jeetu apnia najran preet di hik ton hta khurli kol aa beith pathey khilarda bolea
 'Fer ..' gaur nal jeetu dean akhan ch vekhdi preet hasdi hoyi nalka ged pani di balti bhardi boli
 'Tusi Kadi vekhn e nyi diti ...chunni ch luko k rakhdey o ...' hasda hoyea jeetu preet nu cherda bolea
 'O teri sachin .. sachi jina bholla tun lagda una hay nyi ... ' nalka ged di ruk preet uchi uchi hasdi usnu cherdi boli
 'Nyi tan .. ' patheya ch tudi mila majhn agey karda   jeetu bolea 
 'Ki nyi tan ...'   balti chuk majh kol aa khadi hundi preet boli


 'Bhabhi tusi keha c j mein tuhanu kiran bhabhi nal mila lyawa jo mangu ga.. ' tokra ek passey rakhda jeetu bolea 
 'Menu pta tun ki mangna koi na rat nu son velley ..' apna bull ghutdi preet balti majh agey kardi boli 
 'Nyi bhabhi...' preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea 
 'Fer . ' akhan chuk jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli
 'tuhanu vekhna...' sar ton lay pair tak preet nu niharda jeetu muskuranda hoyea bolea
 'Koi na vekhi ja'  hasdi  hoyi preet boli  'jina marji vekh' 
 'Nyi binna chunni ton  ' chunni nal dhaki hoyi  preet di hik niharda jeetu bolea
 'kyoun...'  jeetu di gal sun jad smj ayi  preet nu hik tey hath rakhdi  boli'  hye rabba...'
 'Mn ja na bhabhi  ..' preet nu gussey na hundi vekh jeetu hausla kar fer bolea
 'Tun b ki yaad karunga'  chunni lah hath ch fad preet sidi khadi ho jeetu wal vekh hasdi hoyi boli'  khush hun ..'Lagda tenu chaska lag gya bhabhia di hik vekhn  da  '
 'Edan di gal nyi ..' gaur nal preet di hik wal vekhda jeetu burburya ..
 'Khush hun ..' muskurandi hoyi preet... betab hoye jeetu nu  bina akh jhapkey  kameej andar lukey apney  mummeya nu nihardey vekh boli  
 'Haan...' chehkda hoyea jeetu bolea'  par tusi kameej  thalley .. kiran bhabhi ney tan kuch nyi...'
 'Mein tan pandi haan ..' sar jhuka apni hik wal vekhdi preet boli 
 'Hye j kitey tusi b kameej thalley kuch na paya hunda ...' bull ghutda jeetu bolea 
 'Fer ki ...' jeetu wal vekh akhan kad di preet boli
 'Kuch nyi ..' dar jeha gya jeetu bhabhi nu edan akhan kad ghurdi vekh 
 'O acha acha ...na kaka ji na o nyi dikhnia jehria tun labhda  'apni hik wal vekhdi preet muskurandi hoyi boli .. khumari jehi chard gyi apni hik wal vekhdi nu .. gol gol mummey kameej ch ghutey hoye bahar nu nikley jiven jeetu nu tichar  kar puch rahey hon'  kyoun hun das teri bhabhi di hik kisi ton ghat a ...'
 'Ki gal chup e kr gya kithey gwach gya ..' jeetu nu bina akh jhapkey apni hik wal vekhdey vekh masti ch sah tan usdey b tez hon lgey jwaan mundey samney bina chunni ton khadi tey munda b akhan e akhan ch usdey mummeya di golayi nap bechain hunda
 'Nayi bhabhi'  apney bull ghut preet dey kameej ch kassey hoye mummeya di golayi tey bahar nu nikli hik da nukeela pan vekh jeetu aukha  sah lenda bolea'  vohat e sohney ney tuhadey' gol gol tikhey tikhey ..'
 'Vekh vekh kidan akhan fad vekh riha .' Apni hik nu nihardey jeetu nu vekh sharmandi hasdi hoyi preet boli'  jo labh riha o nyi dikhnia ..!'
 'Jo vekh riha o kehrey ghat ney .'. sah jeha niglda bechain hoyea jeetu bolea'  sonh rabb di vohat e dil khichvi hik a tuhadi .. kisi di nyi edan di... rupi di b nyi ..gol gol tikhey tikhey tuhadey dono mum....' bolda bolda ruk gya jeetu ..
 'Chal chal vohtia jhattia na maar ..' hasdi sharmandi hoyi preet boli
 'Bs bhabhi hun chunni nal na dhakeyeo eney sohney ...  ' preet dey hath ch fdi chuni wal vekhda jeetu bolea' menu tan pta e nyi c meri bhabhi di hik eni jan kadvi ..'
 'Oh ho ..kakka ji kam b kar layo ..majha becharean pattheya nu udeek dean ..'jeetu ton apni tareef sun tey behal hoyea vekh preet hasdi hoyi  boli
 'Haan haan  ' jeetu preet di ubri hoyi nukeeli hik dean gollalyean vekh da besbra jeha ho bolea'  bas hun chunni nal ena nu dhakeo na...'
 'Nyi dhakdi ..vekh lay'  hasdi hoyi burburayi preet ..' nyi tan begainia bhabhia di hik ghur ghur ulambey lay anda firunga....'
 'Jad tuhadi  vekh lyi hun kisi hor di kyoun vekhunga ..' preet nu muskurandi vekh jeetu hasda hoyea bolea.... 'ah tokra fadayeo jra ..!
 'Kyoun nyi ji  'agey nu jhuk  jameen tey pye khalli tokrey nu chukdi preet boli
 'Hye bhabhi ..' siskarda hoyea jeetu machal e uthea 
 'Ki hoyea'  tokra chukdi ek dum boli preet
 'Hye j tusi thora hor jhukdey swad e aa  jana c ..' apni hik tey hath rakhda jeetu bull chabda bolea
 'O kiven ... ' par agey e pal jhuki hoyi ney  jad kameej dey galley vichon bahar nu nikl jhattia mardey apney mummeya wal vekhea ek dum sidi khadi ho apni hik upr hath rakhdi boli'  badmaash'  

 'Sachi J thori hor jhuk jandey tusi changi trah dikhh janey c .. ' preet dey gorey chittey mummeya di uprli nangi golayi vekh betab ho chuka jeetu hauka lenda bolea
 'Besrm  jeha' chunni chuk apni hik dhakdi preet da haasa nikl aya 
 'Hye bhabhi  chunni kyoun lay lyi'  apni hik nu chunni nal dhakdi preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea
 'Na ji teri akh da koi bharsoa nyi ..' hik tey chunni swardi preet boli
 'Kehra kuch dikhea bhabhi   'bechain  jeha ho akhan tikayi jeetu preet dey sahan nal hildey mummeya wal vekhda bolea'  J tusi kameej thalley kuch na paya hunda  tuhadia kalia kalia bahr nu ...'
 'Meria kalia nyi bhuria ney ..' apney aap e pta nyi kidan preet dey munh ton  nikl gya
 'Hye sachin . ..menu dikhayo .' preet di gal sun hor besbra ho jeetu bolea 
 ' Chal chal dangra da km mukka  .' jeetu ton akhan churandi preet wadey ton bhr nikldi boli   'hor b km ney menu ...'
'ruk ja na bhabhi ..' preet nu vehrdey wal jandi vekh jeetu mayous hunda bolea' thori der hor vekh lain deo. .'
 'Nayi ji ..hasdi hoyi wadey ton vehrdey wall panjeya bhar turdi  preet ney gardan ghuma jeetu wal vekhea yakeen c usnu pakka usdey lak wal wal e vekhda hona  eh sochdi dey alahad jwan mutiyaar   jism  ch ek niroyi masti ch dubi  lehar daudan lgi........
 






 'Eh ki bhabhi ..' chaunkey ch beithi preet dey chulley ch nikldi agg di loh nal   chamkdey munh wal vekhda jeetu us kol aa beithda bolea ...
 'Ki ..' jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli
 'Eh shawl di bukl kyoun mar lyi ..' lal rang da shawl lapet rottia pakandi preet di hik wal vekhda jeetu muskuranda bolea 
 'Thand lagdi c ji... es lyi shawl di bukl maar lyi  'apney modey tey shawl da palla theek kardi preet boli'  naley fer ek lucha deor vehrdey ch firda ...'
 'Kaun ..' hasdi hoyi preet wal vekh muskuranda hoyea  jeetu bolea 
 'Tun hor kaun  ' tedi akh nal jeetu wal vekh preet nimi nimi hasdi roti baildi boli
 'Mere tan sarey chaa adhurey  e reh gye ..' preet nu muskurandi vekh jeetu gaur nal usdi shawl ch lukey mummeya di golayi labhn di kosis krda bolea 
 'Kehrey chaa .. ' akhan matkandi preet  hasdi hoyi boli
 'Tuhanu bina chunni ton vekhn dey..' preet dean akhan ch vekhda jeetu hath agey kar chulley di aag sekda bolea'   ' tusi shawl lay lyi ..
 'Edan e  a...' vehrdey ch dhund  wal vekhdi preet boli'  thand vohat a ..'
 'Koi  na ..garmia aa lain deo..' preet dey patley patley gulabi muskurandey bulln wal vekh jeetu hasda hoyea bolea ..' fer tan ... '
 'Oye hoye  'jeetu wal vekhdi preet hasdi hoyi boli .' Ki fer tan ...'
 'Hanji fer tan patley patley suit paya karungey ..' nimma nimma hasda  preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea' udon vekhunga tuhadia bhuria bhuria ..'
 sharm nal lal e ho gyi preet akhan churandi holi jehi boli'  luchha.. '
 'Tusi app e keha tuhadia kallia nyi bhuria a ..' preet nu sharmandi sangdi sharm nal lal hundi vekh jeetu usnu cherda bolea' Bhabhi  edan nyi ho sakda aj ghar  koi nyi tusi kameej thalley kuch na pawo..'
 'Nyi ji edan tan bilkul nyi  ho sakda....' roti twey tey pandi preet boli'  ek tan thand vohat a uton ghar ch lucha deor ghumda jis nu aj kal bhabhia di hik napn da chaska lagea hoyea a ..'
 'Nyi nyi .. bhabhia di nyi apni bhabhi di..' preet dey sharm nal gulabi hoye noor jhalkdey chehrey wal vekhda bolea'  jad meri bhabhi eni sohni a mein kyoun begainia bhabhia di hik ... '
 'Chal chal roti kha ...  'thalli jeetu agey krdi preet boli ..  'rat ho gyi tey sarey krn waley pye ney ..savery bibi ney aa k meri gutt fad puchna ki kardi rahi nee ghar  ch ena khilara paya hoyea ...
 'Mein keh dayounga vehl e nyi lga eney kam c  ...' roti khanda jeetu muskuranda hoyea bolea ... 
 'Rehn dey vey ..' twey ton roti chuk jeetu di thalli ch rakhdi preet boli'  bibi samney bol tan hunda nyi tere ton ...
 'Koi na ... dhak  layo lukko layo  shawl ch ...    'preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea .. ' garmia ch vekheya karunga kidan lukoyungey patley patley suit ch ..'
 'Luko layoungi udon b .. tun roti kha '  hasdi hoyi preet boli ..



Roti tuk da kam muka bhandey manjdi nu ek sarur jeha chadeya hoyea c jeetu nu edan apney lyi betab hunda vekh chahey kamrey ch ja chukka c jeetu fer b  chaunkey ton bar bar akh chuk kamrey wal vekhdi enj lagda usnu jiven kadi b mud bahr aa us kol beith jayouga ..  
Hye mein b kini besrm haan kidan besrm ho bina chunni ton usdey samney khadi ho gyi .... tey jeetu b kida akhan fad fad mere mummey wal vekh riha c ....hye meria rabba apni hik tey hath rakh preet sochdi sochdi kumari nal kamb uthi k jeetu ney usdey mummey akhan naal naap lye .. fer ki hoyea j naap lye ..apney aap nu tassali dindi burburayi preet' .chahey o menu apni bhabhi samjda par sada viah  b tan hoyea a .....'
Bechara kidan tarseya hoyea meri hik nu niharda mintan karda keh riha c j bhabhi tusi kameej thalley kuch na paya hunda .. sochdi sochdi da hassa e nikl aya ... koi na kaka ji kisi din kameej thalley kuch na pa teri jaan b pkka kadungi .....  . ...


Kini der ho chuki c manjey tey pya jeetu baar baar  buhey wal e vekh riha c .. bhabhi kam muka andar nyi ayi  ... cha chadeya hoyea c tey chaska jeha lagea c aj b bhabhi nal kal wang gallan krn da tey bhabhi nu ched k tang krn da.. par aj bhabhi andar e nyi aa rahi c bar bar buhey wal e vekhda usdey aan di udeek krda  ....  dil khushi nal jhoom utheya jiven e preet kamrey ch ayi ... par edan pya riha manjey tey jiven usney andar ayi preet  nu vekhea e na hovey ..
 'Lattu bujja dewan ..' manjey tey lmey pye jeetu wal vekh muskurandi hoyi preet ney puchea
 'Bujja deo  'chatt wal vekhda jeetu bolea
 'O jeetu edar vekh  'apni shawl lah ek passey killi tey   rakhdi preet boli 
 'Hanji bhabhi ki hoyea'  passa watt preet wal vekhdey jeetu ney puchea
 'Kuch dikhya..' nimi nimi muskurandi hoyi preet jeetu wal vekhdi boli
 'Ki bhabhi ..' edar udar kamrey ch vekhda jeetu bolea
 'Ja vey jeetu tun jhalla e a mere wal vekh ..' bull tuk hasdi hoyi preet boli
 'Hanji ..' gaur nal preet dey munh wal vekhda jeetu bolea
 'Kuch dikhya .' Muskurandi hoyi fer preet ney puchea
 'Ki bhabhi ..' samj na ayi jeetu nu ki vekhn nu keh rahi a bhabhi
 'Ohi jo tun shammi vekhn nu kehnda c'  muskurandi hoyi preet kameej ch apni ubri  hik wal vekhdi boli
 'Hye o meria rabba  'jiven e  jeetu di njr preet di hik wal gyi ....akhan fad fad preet dey tikhey tikhey mummeya  wal vekhda  kahli kahli ch majey tey uth beithda  bolea  '. 'bhabhi ...bhabhi lattu na band kreyo.....'

bechain ho manjey tey chall mar uth beith apni hik wal vekhdey jeetu di halat vekh preet muskurandi hasdi  hoyi boli'  nyi kardi ....'

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 'Kuch dikhya .' Muskurandi hoyi  preet ney fer puchea
 'Ki bhabhi ..' samj na ayi jeetu nu ki vekhn nu keh rahi a bhabhi
 'Ohi jo tun shammi vekhn nu kehnda c'  muskurandi hoyi preet apni ubri  hik wal vekhdi boli
 'Hye o meria rabba  'jiven e  jeetu di njr preet di hik wal gyi ....akhan fad fad preet dey tikhey tikhey mummeya  wal vekhda Jeetu kahli kahli ch majey tey uth beithda  bolea  '. 'bhabhi ...bhabhi lattu na band kreyo.....'



bechain ho manjey tey chall mar uth beith apni hik wal vekhdey jeetu di halat vekh preet muskurandi hoyi boli'  nyi kardi ..'
 'Sachin ... ' hauka lay preet dey sahan nal hildey mummeya wal vekh behal hoyea jeetu bolea
 'Joothi  ' muskurandi hoyi preet akhan matkandi lattu bujan lyi hath agey krdi boli
 'Nyi nyi bhabhi lattu na bujawin ...' besabra jeha ho jeetu kadi preet di shahn nal upr thalley hundi hik ch kaid gol gol mummeya di golayi tey bahr nu ubrea doddia wal vekhda kadi bijli dey button tey rakhey bhabhi dey hath wal
 'Kyoun ...' bull nu dand nal dba preet jeetu di halat vekh aap b sarur ch dubdi boli ..
 'Sachin tusi es velley kameej thalley kuch nyi paya ..' preet di hik tey akhan tikyi   kameej ch ubar k bhr nu nikliya usdean doddia nu vekh sarur ch apna sah niglda jeetu bolea..
 'Tenu ki lagda ...' muskurandi preet jeetu di halat vekh apni bahar nu nikli hik wal vekhdi boli
 'Bhabhi nedey aa k vekh lwaan ..' besabra jeha ho jeetu bina akh jhapkry preet dey mummeya di golayi tey us upr  ubrea doddia vekh behal hunda bolea.. enj lga   aj  munh mangi murad puri kr diti bhabhi ney 
 'Kyoun etho nyi dikhdey ..  'bull tuk hasdi hoyi preet boli' Manjey tey beitha beitha e vekh jo vekhna  nyi tan mein lattu band kar dena...  ' lattu band krn lyi hath agey kardi preet boli 
 'Nyi nyi lattu na band kareo ..' bechain hoyea jeetu bina akh jhapkey preet di hik wal vekh ah bharda bolea  ' hye kinney sohney .. gol gol tikhey tikhey.. ' sahi e keh riha c bechain hoyea jeetu bhabhi di hik da ubar e dil khichwa jan kadwa c .. mummey ek dum gol tey doddia nukkelia bahar nu nikl taneyia hoyea ...mummey di golayi ney tan keel k rakh ditta jeetu nu .. sahan nal hildey upr thalley hundey mummey jiven saintaan mar usnu apney kol bulla rahey hon.. kehr e dha ditta c bhabhi ney aj tan .. jan halk tey aa atki usdi ...dil kr riha c uth k bhabhi dey nedey ja dono mummeya nu palos devey ...
 'Kush hun ..' jeetu di halat tey akhan di chamak vekh nimi nimi hasdi preet boli...
 'Haan ..' sah niglda jeetu preet di hik utey akhan tikayi bolea ...
 'Sochea ..kyoun apney deor nu garmia tak udeek karwani.. jad mere pattley suit ch meri hik nu jhattia maru ..'jeetu kol andi preet usdi bechaini vekh muskurandi hoyi boli
 'Sachin ...'bechain hoyea jeetu besabra ho bolea'Tusi kinney changey o'
 'Tun kehra ghatt changa a'   bull ghutdi preet manjey di wahi tey beithdi  boli'  menu kiran didi dey ghar lay k gya ...'
 'Bas bhabhi ek gal meri hor mn lay ..' apney sahan nu kabu karda jeetu bolea ..
 'Kehri..' dharkdey dil na jeetu wal vekhdi preet ney puchea pta tan c usnu jeetu ney ehi kehna bhabhi hath laa lain dey ..
 'Aj di raat lattu jag da rehn dayeo es nu na bujayeo ..' karmrey ch lattu di roshni ch chamkdey preet dey chehrey wal vekhda jeetu bolea ..
 'Ohhh ..koi na nayi bujandi  ..' jeetu di halat vekh hasdi hoyi preet jeetu dean chamkdia akhn ch vekhdi boli..
 'Swad aa gya bhabhi  'preet nu manjey tey beithi vekh jeetu madhoshi ch bolea'  kinney sohney ney tuhadey .gol gol' sah usdey wadh dey ja rahey c eni nedeyo bhabhi dey mummeya di golayi vekh ... '.jee karda vekhi jawan ...'
 'Vekhi ja menu ki'  hasdi hoyi preet bechain hoye jeetu dean akhn ch vekhdi boli ...
 'Acha bhabhi kal tusi samjaya c   menu k kidan lyi di a kudi di chumi ... ' preet dey muskurandey bull wal vekhda jeetu sah niglda bolea
 'Haan fer ..'muskurandi hoyi preet ney  jeetu dean akhn ch vekhdi hoyi pucheya
 'Menu lagda menu samj aa gyi kidan lyi kudi di chummi ..' bhabhi nu muskurandi vekh chehkda hoyea jeetu bolea
 'Haan fer agey b bol ..' jeetu wal ekhh hasdi hoyi preet boli
 'Tusi check kr layo menu kudi di chummi laini ayi k nyi ..' preet dey gulabi nrm patley patley  bulln nu  vekhda jeetu  sharart ch muskuranda hoyea bolea
 'Ki matlab..'kuch kuch smj tan aa gyi preet ki keh riha jeetu fer b anjan ban di boli 
 'Matlb eh k aj mein lenda tuhadi  chummi'  preet wal vekh hasda hoyea jeetu shararti muskan muskuranda bolea'  fer daseo menu kudi di chummi laini ayi k nyi ... '
 'Oh acha ji ...' jeetu dean akhan ch vekhdi preet uchi uchi hassan lgi 
 'Ki hoyea'  preet nu hasdi vekh jeetu hairaan hunda bolea .usnu tan lga c usdi gal sun bhabhi ghuri wat akhan kad us wal vekhugi ..
 'Sida keh na chummi lain nu dil karda'  jeetu dey bulln wal vekhdi preet boli 
 'Haan.. nyi.. nyi  'samj nyi jeetu nu ki boley par bhabhi nu hasdi vekh bolea'  dayoungey tusi menu chummi ..'
 'Nyi  'jeetu wal vekhdi preet  bharwatey chuk akhan kad di boli 
 'Kyoun ..' mayous jeha ho jeetu bolea
'Tun keha tenu chummi laini aa gyi .. boldi boldi ruk  jeetu dean akhn ch vekh  nimmi nimmi hasdi hoyi  preet boli'  fer apey lay mein kyoun dewan' 
 'Sachin .. ' shyad yakeen na hoyea jeetu nu k bhabhi ney haan kr diti
 'Haan pr ek e .. ' jeetu dean akhn ch vekhdi preet boli
 'Haan haan ek baar bs' manjey tey agey nu hunda jeetu apney bull preet dey bulln kol lya usdean akhn ch vekhn lga 
 'Ki hoyea ..' jad jeetu ney apeny bull hor  agey na kitey holi jehi boli preet 
 'Sachin lay lwan gussey tan nyi hovongey ...' yakeen nyi c usnu k bhavhi eni jaldi haan keh dayougi  
 ' Lagda nyi tenu chummi laini aa gyi'  jeetu nu darda jikhak4da vekh  preet da apna hassa nikl aya 
 'Kyoun ..' gaur nal preet wal vekhdey jeetu ney puchea
 'J aa gyi hundi tan ena sochda na  . ' jeetu dey bull kol apney bull lya preet usdi thodi fad hasdi hoyi boli'  budhu ..'
 'Hun na roki bhabhi' ek dum josh ch aa jeetu preet dey   modey fad apney bull preet dey bulln nal jod dey e  masti ch kamb uthea  .. eney nram mulaym kambey gulabi bull bhabhi dey .. hosh e ud gye usdey 
Bulln nal bull jod usney bhabhi dean akhan ch vekhea jehri usdean akhn ch e vekhdi pyi c ... bharwatey chuk jidan bhabhi ney usdean akhn ch vekhea sabr krna aukha ho gya us lyi apna pura munh khol preet dey dono bullan nu apney bulln ch fsa chusan lga 

Preet da tan rom rom e khind utheya jidan aj jeetu usdey bull chum riha c .akhn band hon lagea usdean  kayi mahiniya baad usdey pyasey bull nu koi chum riha c .. chum e nyi riha c jeetu tan usdey bull nu chusda hoyea besabra ho usdey modey fad usdey bulln nu khan e lga .. jeetu dey bulln di bechaini tey gram sahan da sek usdey munh andar aa usdey sahan nal ghul usdi kyi mahinia ton suti pyi jwani nu ubaln lga .. apney aap e usdey bull jeetu dey bulln nal bhid usdey bulln nu chusan lgey ..madhosh hoyi nu koi hosh na rahi kad jeetu da hath usdi hik upr aa usdey mummey nu palosan lga ..
Jini betabi nal jeetu preet dey bull chusda uni e bechaini ch preet b usdey bulln nu chusn di kosis kardi nu eh b ehsaas naa hoyea k jeetu usdey mummey di golayi nu hath ch ghut palos riha ..
Jeetu nu khud pta na lagea k usda hath kad bhabhi di hik tey puj gya par jad bhabhi ney ek baar b na rokea .. himmat usdi apney aap wad di gyi hath ch fadeya preet bhabhi da sakht mumma tey doddi ek dum tikhi usdi hatheli tey chubdi...

Bina bra ton kameej uton  bhabhi dey mummey nu fad ghutdey hoye enj lag riha c jeetu nu jiven usney bhabhi dey nangey mummey nu fadeya hovey . ungln usdean bekabu ho preet di doddi nu fad masaln lagea .. jina o bhabhi dey mummey di dodi ungln ch fsa masalda uni e bechaini ch bhabhi usdey bull apney bulln ch fsa khichn di kosis kardi bechain  hundi us upr jhukn lgdi ...
Behal hoyi akhan meechi bhabhi di bechaini nu vekh hath usda behkda hoyea kameej dey galley vichon andar mumneya wal jaan lga
 'Jeetu ..  'ek dum jiven hosh ayi preet nu jeetu dey bulln nalo apney bull vakh krdi jhatkey nal pichey nu ho gyi ..jeetu da hath apni hik tey ...sochdey e kambdi hoyi ney  jeetu da hath prey kr ghuri wat uswal vekhea .
Tey jeetu lyi jiven koi hasseen supna tut gya .. bhabhi dey bulln di narmi tey tapish ch behakda hoyea hath kithey paan lga c usnu khud nyi pta lagea ...

Apney sah kabu kardi hik tey hath rakh kamrey ch edar udar vekhdi preet nu kuch samj na ayi ki kahey jeetu nu ..

'Hun tan nyi kahogey menu kudi di chummi laini nyi andi ..' sarur ch dubeya jeetu apney bull ghutda preet dey kambdey thar tharandey gullabi bulln wal vekhda bolea .. ek alag e swad tey nasha c bhabhi dey bulln ch ......bulln nal bull jud dey jiven usdey tan hosh e ud gye  c eney mulayam tey nrm ..pura sareer usda masti ch kamb riha c chumea b tan usney ruh nal c bhabhi dey bulln nu .. chumeya ki chus e lye c usney bhabhi dey bull ..
 tey bhabhi  ney b na tan bull vakh kitey na e koi nakhra kita ulta adkhulia akhan nal usdean akhan vh vekhdey hoye vich vich usdey bull apney bulln ch fsa chudsey pura sath ditta... 
 'Nyi ji hun nyi kehndi .. ' apney bull chabdi jeetu wal vekhdi preet nimi nimi muskurandi boli yakeen nyi ho riha c usnu jeetu ney aj usdey bull eni bechaini nal chusey ...ang ang usda khinda k rakh dita ..dil tan kr eiha c jeetu apney bull usdey bullan ton vakh e na karey ..jwan bulln di betabi tey gram sahn da sek usdey jism dey roye roye nu pigla gya ... sah ajay tak ukhdey pye c usdey hik ubar bahar nu nikli tey mummey  kameej fad bahar aan nu bechain ..
 'Vohat nrm tey mulaym a tuhadey bull ..' preet dey bulln nu vekhda jeetu khumari ch dubeya bolea ajay b enj lg riha c usnu jiven usdey bull bhabhi dey bulln nal chimbdey hon bullan  di tapish tey bhabhi dey munh vichon nikldey gram sahn ney  usdey jism nu akada k rakh dita ...
 'Hath kithey c tera ..' akhan kad ghuri wat di preet nu jad chetey aya jeetu ney tan bull chumdey hoye usdey mummey nu e fad lya c 
 'Oh bhabhi pta e nyi lga kad mera hath'  apney hath wal vekhda jeetu bolea ungln/ hatheli  ajey b bhabhi dey mummeya nu palosan dey swad ch dubea hoyi c .. gol gol tikha mumma hath ch fardey e jiven o hor e duniya ch puj gya c .. dar b riha c bhabhi gussey  ho bull na vakh kar  lavey par jad bhabhi ney kuch na keha himmat usdi apney aap wadh di gyi ungln ney ruh nal mumma palosea .. tey bhabhi dey sakth hoye mummey di doddi ..jad usney ungln ch fad masli kidan siskdi hoyi bhabhi aap usdey bulln nal apney bull ragar usnu chusan lgi c .. chetey andey e  njr usdi bhabhi dey mummeya tey challi gyi ubri hoyi hik tey sahan nal upr thalley hundey mummey tey mummeya dean dono doddia tan hor mottiya ho bahar nu ubar ayea c
 'Pta tenu sab a . 'Apni hik nu nihardey vekh jeetu wal vekhdi boli  ..kinney mahinia baad apney mummeya tey mundey da hath mehssos kr preet nu tan aj jiven bhulleya  hoyea swad chetey aa gya .. hye kuttey ney tan bull chusdey chusdey mera mumma e palos ditta. . paloseya  b ruh nal purey mummey di golayi naap gya ajay b usnu apney mummey upr jiven jeetu dean ungln ghumdea mehsoos ho rehea c 
 'Tusi b nayi rokea .. ' preet dean akhn ch vekhn di kosis karda jeetu bolea 
 'Menu tan aap nyi pta lga kad tera hath meri hik tey ... ' jeetu wal vekhdi apney sah sambhaldi boli' o tan jad tun meri kameej andr hath paan lga udon smj ayi ..
 'Pta nyi ki ho gya c ..' preet di hik wal vekhda jeetu bolea  'pr tuhadi hik tey hath rakh swad aa gya gol gol tuhada sakth  mumma' 
 'Lucha ..'jeetu dey munh ton mumma sun akhn kad ghurdi has e pyi preet 
 'Sachin bhabhi kinna sakht a tuhada  tey doddia .. mottyia tikhia nukkelia.
' preet nu hasdi vekh jeetu usdey mummeya da nukeela pan vekh apna sah kabu karda bolea 
 'Chup kr besarm. Jeha ..' jeetu nu enj khul k bolda sun sharmandi hoyi preet boli
 'sachin keha c bhabhi tusi tuhadia  kallia nyi bhurria a .. gol gol gulabi ghera tey upr bhurria doddia meri hatheli utey enj chub rehea c jiven bandook dean glllia hon..'preet dey mummeya nu tey apney hath wal vekhda jeetu bechain hoyea bolea
 'Chup chup..' jeetu nu apney mummeya nu akhan tikayi nihardey vekh  preet apni hik tey hath rakhdi boli ..
hairaan b c preet  mummey usdey aj ek dum sakht tey doddia akad k khaddiya .payi hoyi kameej tang lgn lgi  har baar sah lendi nu enj lagda jiven kameej pichey lgey hook tut jangey .. bull ghutdi sochn lgi  kutta meri eney mahinia di sutti pyi aag nu hwa dey gya.hye hun ..'

 'Nee preet ..' bahron ayi jaspreet di eh awaz sun ek dum kamb jeha gya jeetu ..enj lga usnu jiven kuch  chori kr riha hovey tey kisi ney usnu vekh lya... ehi haal preet da c  manjey tey  ekethi jehi ho buhey wal vekhn lgi ...
 'Nee preet' fer jaspreet di awaz ayi ..' so gyi k jagdi pyi a ....
 'Ki gal didi ..' jeetu wal vekh fer buhey wal vekhdi preet boli ... jaspreet da es velley enj awaz marna bilkul b changa nyi lga usnu
 'Gal suni jra ...' bahron ayi eh awaz sun jeetu b  preet wal vekhn lga  ..
'Ki gal hoyi aj fer jaspreet bhabhi tuhanu awazn mardi a ...'buhey wal vekhda jeetu bolea ... ena  mja aa riha bhabhi kol beh gallan krn da tey jaspreet bhabhi di awaz sun  ... khij.. gussa jeha aya ..
 'Bibi ney koi suneha laya hona ..us lyi shayd bullandi pyi a..' changa preet nu b nyi lga jaspreet di awaz sun ...ek khumari bharea swad aa riha c jeetu nal gallan kardi nu ..
 'Sara swad kharab kr dita' holi jeha burburanda hoyea jeetu bolea
 'Kehra swad vey'  jeetu di gal sun hasdi hoyi preet boli'  ja .. ja k puch k aa ki kehndi a' 
 'Mein ...' preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea  'awaz tan tuhanu mardi a' 
 'Fer ki hoyea . Tun puch lay ki gal a' jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli' bahr thand vohat a mera dil nyi krda bahar nikln nu ...'
 'Menu nyi thand lagu ..' preet wal vekh jeetu bolea 
  'Ja na  'jeetu nu modey ton fad dhakka dindi preet boli .. ' mera puchungi tan keh devin so gyi haan ..'
 'Nyi bhabhi tusi jayo  ' bilkul dil nyi c jeetu da bahr jaan da 
 'Samjda kyoun nyi tun ja ... 'jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli'  vekh mein b teri gal mni c na  '
 'Fer ek   chummi leni  hor'  preet dey bulln wal vekhda jeetu bolea
 'Lay lawin baba  ja hun  ' kahli kahli ch jeetu nu manjey ton uthandi preet boli' vekh awazan mardi pyi a ..'
 'Nyi bhabhi'  manjey ton utarda utarda fer ruk gya jeetu
 'Ki hoyea ..' jeetu wal vekh buhey wal vekhdi preet boli
 'J menu unha ney fad lya..' hasda hoyea jeetu bolea
 'Tun b fda devin'  hasdi hoyi ek dum chup kr gal sambhaldi boli preet'  tun b fad lawin ...hun tenu b kudi di chummi laini aa gyi ..'
 'Nyi ji'  akhan matkanda jeetu b hasda hoyea bolea
 'Hath b laa  lawin ... ' jeetu dey hathan wal vekhdi preet boli'  hay b usdey motey motey wadey wadey ...'
 'Nyi ji mein tan tuhadey e hath layounga  'manjay ton uth khada hunda jeetu hath agey kr preet da mumma polla jeha palos takreebn takreebn buhey wal nu bhajda bolea
 'Luccha'  apni hik tey hath rakhdi preet khumari ch khind uthi ... sarey aam e jeetu mera mumma palos gya ... jyada e chambl pya aj ... haan sochdi da dil jor nal dhatk utheya jad usnu chetey aya manjey ton utar bahr jandey hoye jeetu dey kurtey da palla kidan pattan kolon bahar nu niklay hoyea c ...hye rabba kambni bhari khumari nal kambn lgi .. jeetu da khada c .. haan pakka khadda c akadeya hoyea esi layi tan usda kurta pattan kolon bahr nu ubreya c ..

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Es update ton pehlan tak story xossip tey post kiti c o unha ney band kar diti pta nyi ki reason tey lalach c unha da ...any this is continuation of story now onwards....



 'Luccha'  apni hik tey hath rakhdi preet khumari ch khind uthi ... sarey aam e jeetu usda mumma palos gya ... jyada e chamblea pya aj ... haan sochdi da dil jor nal dhatk uthea jad usnu chetey aya manjey ton utar bahr jandey hoye jeetu dey kurtey da palla kidan pattan kolon bahar nu niklay hoyea c ...hye rabba kambni bhari khumari nal kambn lgi .. jeetu da khada c .. haan pakka khadda c akadeya hoyea esi lyi tan usda kurta pattan kolon bahr nu ubreya c ..


 'Ki keehndi teri bhabhi' chahey preet ney jeetu nu eh puchea... par .. akhan   usdean jeetu dey pattan vichkar e c ajay b kurtey da palla bahar nu ubreya hoyea...saaf pta lag riha c pajamey ch jeetu da lun akad k khada .....jad buhey di kundi laa uskol aaya... usdey pattan ton akhan prey kardi boli'  dasea nyi tun ki kehndi teri bhabhi' 
 'Bibi ney suneha bhijwaya ek doh din hor lag janey massi theek nyi shyad kal sham nu chutti miley haspataal ton..' manjey tey beithi preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea
 'Ohhh..' kuch sochdi hoyi preet di ek ajeev jehi khushi ch dil di dhadkn wadhn lgi fer b boli'  matlab kal fer menu e sara kam karna paina' 
 'Koi na fer ki hoyea'  peeet wal vekhda jeetu bolea saaf jhalk rahi c usdi awaz ch b bibi dey kal na aan di chehak manjey di wahi tey preet kol beithda bolea'  tuhada kam mein kar dayounga...'
 'Rehn dey tun .' Hasdi hoyi tedi akh nal kol beithey jeetu dey pajamey ch ubrey lun wal vekh fer jeetu dean akhan ch vekhdi boli' wada aya mera kam krn wala .. mein aap e kr layoungi ...' pattan vichkar kurtey dey palley thalley ubrea lun da akkaar vekh dharkdey dil nal kamrey ch edar vekhdi khumari bhari sochan ch pay gyi'  jad jeetu ney keha'  tuhada kam mein kar dayounga enj lagea usnu jiven jeetu dey kehn duja e matlab ...
 'Acha chummi deo hun ..' preet dean akhan ch vekhda jeetu apney bull ghutda bolea
 'Kyoun ..' jeetu wal vekh akhan jehia kad preet boli
 'Tusi apey keha c chummi lay lavin ..'preet dey bulln wal vekh jeetu besabra jeha ho bolea
 'Aho keha c pr eh tan nyi keha c aj  dayoungi ..' jeetu dey  betab bulln wal vekh preet usnu tarsandi swad lendi boli' kal dayongi.. aj nyi' 
 'Glt gal a bhabhi keh k mukrdey pye o tusi .' Bina palak jhapkey preet dean akhan ch vekhda jeetu bolea
 'Mein kad mukri ...  'jeetu nu bechain  hoyea vekh preet apney bull ghut usnu hor tarsandi boli' kal dayoungi' 
 'Nyi aj laini a'  jid jehi karda jeetu besabra hunda bolea
 'Nyi ji kal dayoungi .' Jinni jeetu jid karda una e usnu tarsandi preet nu hor swad aa riha c
 'Ki bhabhi.. aj dey dey na'  ahh jehi bhr jeetu bolea
 'Ki jeetu kal lay lawin ..  'preet b jeetu di nkl kardi  hasdi hoyi boli 
 'Kal savery laini mein fer..' samj gya jeetu kal e dayougi bhabhi chummi hun 
 'Nyi nyi kal rat nu .. din velley menu sang lagdi a ...' shrm bhareya nakhra kardi preet apney bull tukdi boli
 'Kyoun ..' bechain hoyea jeetu bolea'  mere ton kahdi sang' 
 'Bas sang lagdi a  'apney bull ghutdi preet tedi akh nal jeetu dey pattan vichkar pajamey ch  akadey lun dey ubar nu vekhdi boli'  rat nu doh lay lavin ...'
 'Ki bhabhi mein tuhadia sarea gallan mn da  tey tusi'  mayous jeha ho mehna marda jeetu bolea
 'Kehri gal nyi mni vey .. tun keha bina chunni ton vekhna .. mein nah kiti .. fer chummi nu rokea ..  ' jeetu nal behas krdi preet boli' hun jid na kr kal chahey doh lay lawin ...'
 'Sachin  ..' kuch soch chehkda hoyea jeetu bolea
 'Haan kal rat nu doh lay lawin .. hun son dey tey ja apney manjey tey ... ' jeetu wal vekhdi preet ney hasdi hoye keha  'rat vohat ho chuki a saverey tadkey uthna b a ..' 
 'Nyi mein ethey e sona kal gal hoyi c sadi  ..' manjey utey changi trah chaukri maar beithda jeetu preet wal vekhda bolea ...' us manjey tey menu neend nyi andi ...'
 'Oh acha ji .. wada ho gya par jid juakan wargi karda ajay b'  hasdi hoyi preet jeetu wal vekhdi manjey ton uthdi boli'  chal koi na so ja mein us manjey tey so jandi haan..'
 'Mein kehnda tusi b es manjey tey e so javo ..wada manja a aram nal dono so sakdey haan ..' manjey wal vekh preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea
 'Nyi ji ..'  chaukri mar beithey jeetu dey pattan wal  tedi akh nal vekh usdean akhan ch vekhdi voli'  tera manja a tun e so ethey ..'
 'Chalo sona nyi tan thori der beitho ta  sahi gallan kardey haan ..' preet wal vekh jeetu bolea dil nyi kar riha c bhabhi uskol uth dur dujey manjey tey javey ...'
 'Hun kehria gallan karnia menu tan neend.aa rahi a'  angrayi lendi preet jeetu wal vekhdi boli' mein tan sona  a hun...' chahey preet ney keha eh c par dil usda b jeetu kolon uth k jaan da bilkul nyi kr riha c . 
 'Hye bhabhi ek baar fer angrayi layeo ..' preet di hik tey akhan tikayi jeetu bolea .' Kiney sohney lagdey ney tuhadey dono ..'
 'Kuch jyada e chakmia gallan nyi kar riha mere naal aj tun ..' jeetu nu apney mummeya utey akh tikayi vekh preet 
ghurdi hoyi boli..
 'Aho ..' preet dey mummya da nukeelapan vekh sehj swaa ch bolea
 'Ki aho ..' akhan kad jeetu da jawaab sun preet fer ghurdi hoyi voli
 'Tusi b tan kardey o chakmia gallan' chehkda muskuranda hoyea jeetu bolea
 'Mein kad kittia vey..' jeetu nu enj chambal k hasda vekh preet behas krdi boli
 'Kyoun keha nyi c tusi tun b fad lavin jaspreet bhabhi nu ..tey tey ..' kuch sochda chup reh fer bolea'  naley keha c hay b usdey wadey wadey mottey mottey .. '
 'Kyoun hay nyi usdey wadey wadey ..' gaur nal jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli 
 'Meinu ki pta mein kadi vekhey e nyi' bhola jeha bn jeetu preet di hik nu niharda bolea 
 'Oh ho acha ji .'  jeetu da jwaab sun preet boli'  ena sharif tun hay nyi..'
 'Sachin bhabhi kadi nyi unha di hik wal vekhea ..' safayi dinda jeetu bolea  
' naley tuhadey wargi jan kadwi hik nyi honi unha di .. vohat e sohney ney tihadey ..'
 'Jan kadwi..' apni hik tey hath rakh hasdi hoyi preet boli'  jaan kadwi ki hundi' 
' ji karda vekhi jaawn vekhi jaawn tey jad vekhda haan  tan jaan nikldi a ..' preet dey mummey di golayi wal vekh hauka lenda jeetu bolea' uton aj tusi kameej thalley kuch pya b nyi ...menu pucho mera ki hall a' 
 'Puchna ki a dikh e riha'  jeetu di halat  vekh preet hasdi hoyi boli'  kehn tan lgi c tera akadaya khada. . aap das riha ki hall a tera fer b  gal bdldi boli  'bar bar meri hik nu e ghur riha' 
 'Hay e eni sohni akhan baar baar uthey ja tikdia'  mummeya upr ubrea doddia vekh jeetu apney bull chabda ahhh bharda bolea
 'Sambhaal apnia akhan nu jyada e bigdean ja rehean ney  'apni hik wal vekh hik utey hath rakhdi preet boli
 'Nyi sambhl dean bhabhi tuhadi gol gol  hik utey bhr nu nikl ubrea doddia tan  jan kad dean  ney'  sah nigalda jweetu behain jeha ho bolea
 'Tun e keha c j tusi kameej thalley kuch na paya hunda'  jeetu nu enj behal hoyea vekh preet boli' mein b sochea chal vekhdi haan ki  hall hunda jeetu da  '
 'Voht bura hall a bhabhi uton jad da hath lageya uthey  ..  'apney hath wal vekhda jeetu bolea' uff menu aap nyi pta .menu ki hunda ja riha  sara jism akadeya pya ..'
 'Pta menu..' jeetu di halat vekh preet tedi akh nal usdey pattan wal vekhdi boli  'kuch jyada e bura hall ho gya tera .. '
 'Haan bhabhi'  angrayi lenda jeetu bolea
 'Chal so hun ... 'jeetu kol khadi apney manjey wal vekhdi  preet nakhra jeha krdi boli'  teria gallan tan kdey nyi muknia menu neend aa rahi a ... .. ' eh tan usnu e pta c akhan ch   neend tan usdi udo di ud chuki c jad da usney jeetu dey pjamey ch khada ... bechain tan behal pura c jeetu pr pta c usnu jijhkdey hoye jeetu ney pehl tan krni nyi tey aap b o eni besrm nyi c pehl karey ... ehi  sochdi apney manjey wal jaan lgi  ...j pehl krni hoyi jeetu ney tan kr layouga nyi tan mein sona apney manjey tey .. hor ki ...eney isharey kr dittey esnu .. chunmi b dey ditti hik b vikha diti.. mummey nu putwa lya fer b j jijhkda sharmanda darda tan darda rahey ..hun es ton wadh tan besrm nyi ho sakdi mein jeetu agey.....

[kavitakhullar]

ਅਨੰਦ ਆ ਗਿਆ ਪੜ੍ਹ ਕੇ, ਪਹਿਲੀ ਬਾਰ ਜਦੋਂ ਅਕਾਊਂਟ ਦੇਖਿਆ ਸੀ ਇੱਥੇ ਓਦੋਂ ਲਗਿਆ ਵੀ ਕੋਈ ਫੇਕ ਹੋਣਾ ਕਾਪੀ ਪੇਸਟ ਕਰ ਰਿਹਾ ਹੋਣਾ ਪਰ ਅੱਜ ਸਾਬਿਤ ਹੋ ਗਿਆ ਤੁਸੀਂ ਕਾਵਿਤਾ ਜੀ ਹੀ ਹੋ। ਇੰਨਾ ਪਿਆਰਾ ਅਪਡੇਟ ਦਿਲ ਖੁਸ਼ ਕੀਤਾ ਤੁਸੀਂ ।। ਤੁਹਾਡੀ ਕਹਾਣੀ ਤਾਂ ਬੰਦਾ judgement ਦੇ ਡਰ ਤੋ ਬਿਨਾ ਆਪਣੇ ਪਾਰਟਨਰ ਨੂੰ ਵੀ ਸੁਣਾ ਸਕਦੇ । ਸ਼ੁਕਰ ਗੁਜ਼ਾਰ ਹਾਂ ਤੁਹਾਡਾ। ਧਨਵਾਦ

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Siraaa swaad aa geya

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Sirra update kavita g

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kavita ji me v nai Chanda k tu c story da fahh wado.... par ki kariye tuhadi writing he eni vadiya hai k hor paran da dil karda es lai sabar e nai hunda..... baki well written keep updating.....

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Rab di sonh Jeete nalo jyada tn mera akad gya aah wali post padh k
Ohh doddiya wala scene wahla hi dungha satt marda a

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btw nice update mam

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World no 1 writer and best story aa eh bs jdo bhi ph nu hath laida pehla ehi chek krida ke mam ne update kita ke nhi ..bhut nice update si bs jaldi hun mila davo dova nu ..god bless u.

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 'Chal so hun ... 'jeetu kol khadi apney manjey wal vekhdi  preet nakhra jeha krdi boli'  teria gallan tan kdey nyi muknia menu neend aa rahi a ... .. ' eh tan usnu e pta c akhan ch   neend tan usdi udo di ud chuki c jad da usney jeetu dey pjamey ch khada ... bechain tan behal pura c jeetu pr pta c usnu jijhkdey hoye jeetu ney pehl tan krni nyi tey aap b o eni besrm nyi c pehl karey ... ehi  sochdi apney manjey wal jaan lgi  ...j pehl krni hoyi jeetu ney tan kr layouga nyi tan mein sona apney manjey tey .. hor ki ...eney isharey kr dittey esnu .. chunmi b dey ditti hik b vikha diti.. mummey nu putwa lya fer b j jijhkda sharmanda darda tan darda rahey ..hun es ton wadh tan besrm nyi ho sakdi mein jeetu agey.....


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'Thori der beith   na bhabhi '  preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea'  thand karkey hanera lag riha ajay tan nau b nyi bjey honey ...thuhadey nal gallan krn nu dil karda' 
 'Kal kar lawin  ..' jeetu wal vekhdi preet hasdi nakhra kardi boli'  jehria gallan karnia ...'
 'Minnat ayi gal a bhabhi beh ja na'  manjey kol khadi preet nu upr ton lay haithan tak vekhda jeetu bolea' bas  thori der  ..'
 'Ek tan minnatan vohat karda tun ..' hasdi hoyi preet manjey di wahi tey beithdi boli'  prey nu ho fer .. changi trah beithan dey sara manja sambh k beitha a ..
 'Haan haan'  chehkda hoyea jeetu manjey tey ek passey hunda bolea'   'ayo beitho'  
 'Hun das kehria gallan karnia'  manjey tey chaukri maar beithdi preet pattan nu rajayi nal dhak rajayi da duja sira jeetu wal krdi boli'  rajayi lay lay thand lag jayu..'
 'Koi b'  apney pattan nu rajayi nal dhak jeetu preet wal vekhda bolea'  bas mere kol beithey raho ..' 
Theek a ji lo beith gyi'  jeetu wal vekh hasdi hoyi preet boli' par shararat koi nyi karni gallan jiniia marji kar' 
 'Pkka pkka'  chehkda hoyea jeetu preet dey khilkhilandey muskurandey  chehrey wal vekhda bolea'  bhabhi tusi vohat e sohney o' 
 'Acha ji menu tan pta e nyi c' hasdi hoyi preet boli'  hor kuch ..'
 'Tuhada noor bharea chehra surahi dar gardan ..' preet muskurandey bull wal vekhda jeetu bolea
garur ch hik wahar nu kad dhaun chuk jeetu wal vekhdi hasdi hoyi boli' oh ho acha ji ..'
 'Tey tey tuhadey dono mummey tey..'preet di kammaan wang tani hoyi hik wal vekhda jeetu ahh bharda bolea'  kinney sohney ney' 
 'Oye oye chup'  ek dum hasdi hasdi chup kr jeetu wal vekh ghurdi preet boli
 'Tusi apey keha gallan jehria marji..'.
Preet nu cherda jeetu bolea'  mein tan das riha kehri koi sharart .. sachin swad e aa gya tuhadey mummey vekh k
 'Jeetu jeetu mein uth k apney manjey tey chali jana j tun chup na kitta hun ...menu sang lagdi a jad tun meri hik wal vekhda tey  bar bar mu.... kehnda 

 'Ohhh theek thhek'  preet nu sangdi vekh jeetu muskuranda hoyea bolea'  hye bhabhi tuhadi hik tey beithey dono chinney kabootar  '
 'Sachin vohat e besarm a tun
Kinia luchea gallan karda bigad gya tun b sukhi wang'  jeetu dey modey tey mukka mardi preet boli' lucha' 
 'Nyi nyi j  sukhi wang bigadea hunda tan  tuhadey chundia na wad da'  preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea'  waddi kadi tuhadey chundi' 
 'Wad k dikha chundi ahh thapd vekhea'  apna hath jeetu nu dikhandi preet boli .. par  dil tan keh riha c  eni himmat tere ch kithey jeetu chundi  wadey tun .. '
 'Tusi tan gussey ho gye  ' preet dey hath wal vekhda jeetu bolea' apey kehndey c sharart nyi krni gallan kar . .'
Gaaln kar oar enia chakmia b nyi ..' hasdi hoyi jeetu wal vekhdi boli 
 'Theek a ji.. ' kuch sochda hoyea jeetu bolea'  sachin bhabhi vohat e sohney o tusi ..jad turdey o enj lagda vehrdey ch morni paila pandi hovey .. patla  lehranda dolda lak tey tey upr thalley nu ho doldi ....'

 'Chup chup'  jeetu dey munh tey hath rakhdi hoyi preet boli'  jma e lucha a tun .. mein chali apney manjey tey besrm jeha' 
 'Theek theek bhabhi hun nyi karda  ' apney kann farda jeetu bolea' bs tusi  uth k na jayo' 
 'Nyi menu neend andi pyi a mein sona hun  'nakhra kardi preet boli dil tan usda apna nyi kr riha jeetu kolo uth k jan da..
 'Jad jaspreet bhabho nu dasea k tuso so gye o pta ki kehndi ..' preet wal vekh jeetu bolea
 'Ki ..' gardan jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli
 'Hye eni jaldi so gyi ladayi hoyi tuhadi' preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea
 'Fer tun ki keha'  kahli kahli ch boli preet
 'Nyi mein keha ladayi nyi hoyi bas thak gyi c es lyi so gyi jaldi'  preet dean akhan ch vekhda jeetu bolea'  menu kehndi' kamaal  a nava nawa viah hoyea tuhada eni sohni patoley wargi nu eni jaldi kidan son ditta' 
 'Fer ..' jeetu wal vekhdi preet ney puchea
 Preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea'  Kehndi koi na mein puchugi kyoun nyi khiyal rakhdi mere eney gabru jwan becharey  deor da' 
 'Kehna c tun rakh lay j ena e tars anda tenu ..' jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli
 'Tuhanu nyi anda tars'  gaur nal preet dean akhan xh vwkhda jeetu bolea
 'Pehlan anda c hun nyi anda lucha bn gya  tun pura lucha akhan matkandi preet jeetu wal vekhdi boli'  hye kinnia luchia luchia gallan krn lag pya' 

 'Kehri kiti  luchi gal'  masoom jeha bn jeetu bolea'  edan na keh' 
 'Hor ki  'jeetu wal vekhdi boli preet'  chetey a na bhr jandey jandey ki kr k gya c  '

 'Ki   'anjaan bn enj bolea jeetu jiven usnu kuch chetey na hovey
 'meri hik tey hath la k kidan bhajea c' apni hik tey jeetu dey hath wal vekhdi preet boli
 'Tusi e keha c usdey wadey wadey mottey mottey ney fad lawin'  apney hathan wal vekhda jeetu hasda hoyea bolea
 'Aho keha c haygey e a usdey wadey wadey  fad lainey c  ' jeetu dey hathan wal vekhdi preet boli
 'Mein kyoun fda kisi hor dey sukh nal jeoundi rahey meri bhabhi usdey fadunga' preet di hik wal vekhda jeetu nima nima hasda hoyea bolea
' aho fadandi haan tenu .. eh  thappad vekheya'  apna hath jeetu dey munh kol kr hilandi hoyi preet boli
 'Thapad e dikhayeo kuch hor na vekhn dayeo..' sharart ch hasda hoyea jeetu preet dey hath wal vekhda bolea
 'Hye o rabba kina bhukha a dikhaye nyi tenu  ja mein nyi boldi tere nal bhukhad jeha .. '  moddeya tak rajayi lay manjey tey lmi paindi preet boli.. ' menu neend ayi a mein sona hun ..'
 'edan na kaho bhabhi ..' bhabhi nu lmi pay modeya tak rajayi lay vekh jeetu b us nal lma painda bolea'  meri vohat vohat e changi bhabhi o tusi' 
 'Nyi bolna nyi bolna tere nal bas  'munh tey rajayi lay preet akhn band kr hasdi hoyi boli 
 'Nyi ji bolna tan paina tuhanu'  ek paseyo rajayi chuk jeetu b usdey nal lma painda bolea 
 'Nyi bolna  'munh ton rajayi  chuk  jeetu wal vekhdi preet ghurdi hoyi boli'  kehta tenu' 
 'Hye gussey ch kinney sohney lagdey o tusi'   moddey fad preet dean akhn ch vekhda  jeetu bolea
 'Nyi bolna bas ja apney manjey tey ..' rajayi ch ekethi jehi hundi preet boli
 ' Nyi ji mein nyi jana mera manja a ..'pyar nal jida krda jeetu bolea
 'Oh ..'hun chetey aya preet nu o tan jeetu dey manjey tey lmi pay gyi uthdi hoyi boli'tun e ao ethey..'
 'Tusi b Ehtey e so jayo na'  mod dey fad preet nu uthan ton rokda jeetu minnat krda bolea
 'Kyoun  mein kyoun sowan..ethey'  nakhra krdi preet bina akh jhapkey jeetu wal vekhdi boli
 'Meri changi bhabhi nyi o ...  'lmi pyi preet da mukhda hor b chamkda haseen lagn lga jeetu nu mathey tey ayi wallan di latt akhan di khich tikhey nain nkas muskurandey kambdey bull gorrea gorean gallan  gaur nal usdean akhan ch vekhda jeetu bolea'  sachin bhabhi lmi pyi tusi vohat e vohat jyada sohney lagdey o' 
 'Oh ho'  bull tuk bina akh jhapkey jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli'  tera kasoor nyi kaka ji rat nu koi lmi pyi kudi har mundey nu jyada e sohni lagdi a ..'
 'O kyoun..' preet dean akhan ch vekhda  apney sar thalley hath rakh sar chuk preet wal vekhdey jeetu ney puchea .. shyad sach e keh rahi c bhabhi ek alag e  husan bharea alhad noor c kol lmi pyi bhabhi dey munh tey
 'Eh tan mundey nu pta hoyo kyoun sohni lagdi a'  kehndi hoyi uchi uchi hassan lgi preet  ek bar tan usdey munh vichon nikln lga c'  laini jo hundi a mundey ney kudi di .. bdi muskil nal dandn haith jeev dba apney aap nu rokea  
 'Menu tan nyi pta ..' preet nu hasdi vekh jeetu bolea  'par tusi sohney vohat lag rahey o edan mere kol lmey pye' 
 'Pta tenu sab a ..' jeetu wal vekhdi preet akhan matkandi boli  'bas apni bhabi nu budu bna riha ..' pehli baar c edan jeetu nal eko manjey tey lmi pyi .. tey jeetu b rajayi andar usnal lma pya ... .. jwan gabru munda nal lma pya .. bechaini tey betabi nal usda jism machlan lga thand ch kol pye jeetu dey jism da sek usdey jwan jism nu jiven piglaan lga .. 

 'Sachin tuhadi sonh nayi pta ..' gaur nal preet wal vekhda jeetu  bolea .. eni kol bhabhi lmi pyi baar baar dil kr riha c agey nu ho bhabhi nu jaffi pa apney nal ghut lwey par jijhkda hoyea himmat nyi kr pa riha c uton khada akdya lun usda..j bhabi dey nal lageya/chubea unha nu pta lag jana 
 'Fer ki pta tenu ..'chatt wal vekhdi preet apna bull ghutdi boli
 'Menu tan ehi pta aj menu apni bhabhi pehlan nalo vohat vohat e jyada sohni lag rahi a edan mere kol lmi pyi ..'preet di thodi fad usda munh apney wal karda jeetu usdean akhan ch vekhda bolea
 'Oh ho acha ji ...hor...'  akhan matkandi bharwatey chuk preet jeetu wal vekh hasdi hoyi boli 
 'Hor ..'kuch sochda jeetu  preet dey bulln wal vekhda bolea'  dil karda tuhadey bull ek baar fer chum lwan ..'
 'Chum lay fer ..' kehn tan eh lgi c preet par akhan kad di boli'  tenu pehln keha c koi sharart nyi chetey hay na ..'
 'Haan haan koi sharart nyi'  apney bull ghutda jeetu bolea  'chetey a ...nyi tan ghut k jaffi pa laini c tuhanu.'
 'Edan kidan jaffi pa laini c'  passa watt jeetu wal vekhdi preet fer akhan kad di boli. . eh tan preet nu pta c chahey o akhan kad jeetu nu ghur rahi c par dil tan usda apna kar riha c agey nu ho jeetu nu ghut  k jaffi pa usnal chimbad e javey ang ang usda bechain ho tuhea c ..jawan mundey dey nigh nu apney jism nal mehsoos krn lyi......

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 'Edan kidan jaffi pa laini c'  passa watt jeet wal vekhdi preet fer akhan kad di boli eh tan preet nu pta c chahey o akhan kad jeetu wal vekh rahi c par dil tan usda apna kar riha c agey nu ho jeetu nu ghut usnal chimbad e javey ang ang usda bechain ho uthea  ..jawan mundey dey nigh nu apney jism nal mehsoos krn lyi




 'Edan pa laini c  'agey nu ho jeetu preet dey modey fad usnu apney naal ghut chehkda bolea
'Jeetu' ek dum machldi hoyi preet usdean wahan vichon nikln di kosis kardi akahn kad di boli  'chad menu'
'Tusi apey e puchea kidan paa laini c jaffi'  preet nu apney nal ghutda jeetu usdean akhan  ch vekhda bolea  'chahy bhabhi akhan kad usnu ghur rahi c par bhabhi dey  bulln tey ayi nimi nimi muskaan .. ena nrm najuk bhabhi da jism enj lagea jiven usney fulln nu jaffi pyi hovey .... bhabhi dey jism da sek tey madak khusboo ney tan usdey lun nu jhaka e dey ditta
 'Chad menu  'machldi hoyi preet da hauka e nikl aya jad lak kol usnu kuch chubda mehsoos hoyea .ghbara k kamb e gyi tikha lun dhidd kol chubda ena geam k akhan e band hon lagea preet dean ..tez hundey sahan ch khumari ghullan lgi ..  lun da sek tey kadak pan  chahey uadey dhid kol chub riha c par pattan vichkar sutti pyi jwani di agg bhark uthi .. machldi hoyi jeetu dean wahan vichon nikln lyi jina o machldi una e jeetu da lun kadi usdey dhid kol kadi lak tey aa chubda  ..khud nu samaj nyi aa rahi c o jeetu dean wahan ch machl apney aap nu uston vakh hon lyi rahi c k bar bar chubdey jeetu dey lun da swad lain lyi...

 'Hye bhabhi kinna nigh aa riha tuhanu jaffi paa k..' preet dey gadraye niroye jism  nu wahan ch ghut jeetu usdean akhan ch vekhda bolea .

 'Chad menu.. machldi hoyi preet jeetu dey modey fad uston vakh hon lyi kasmadandi hoyi  boli ... par pta c usnu jeetu ney hun nyi hatna.. eh  sochdi da usda hauka e nikl gya .. aj chard gyi nee preet tun jeetu hathey .. aj khilarnia e khilarnia nee teria fullia .. aj nyi sukki bachdi tun .. bar bar dhid kol jeetu da  chubda kadak lun.. tey wahan ch ghut usnal chimbdea jeetu ... yakeen jeha hon lga usnu aj bhnn dena jeetu ney usda pattasha .. hye rabba akhan band kar sochn lgi .. aj eh munda pakka teria lattan kholu .. hichki lay sochdi dey pattan andar eney dinna di suti pyi agg  bhambar ban machn lgi .. j jeetu ney usdi lain lyi jid kiti ..hun tan uston b na nahi honi... ang ang tan usda  sarur ch pehlan e jeetu ton bull chuswa  mumma putwa khindiya pya c.. hye rabba sachin jeetu nu deni paini .. apney aap nal e behas kardi preet sochan lgi tera b tan dil karda jeetu nu den nu lyi tey usda lain lyi.. awen tan nyi uskol manjey tey pyi a ... kadak tey motta b lagda a ... sahi e keh rahi c shyad jaspreet didi.. jeetu da mota tey lumba hona ... eney mahiney baad mere andar  jeetu da .. hye mein b apney deor ton . kuch sochdi goyi ney ek lamba sah lya .. fer ki hoyea j mein jeetu nu dey dwan .. viah b tan hoyea a sada chahey o menu apni bhabhi samjda a par lagda tan mera gharwala e a .. ehi soch mn nu pkka kr jeetu dey modey fad usdean akhan ch vekhdi boli'  tun hatna nyi sharatan krn ton ..'
 'Nyi bhabhi'  muskuranda hoyea jeetu usnu hor jaan laa apney naal ghutda bolea  'vohat nigh mil riha tuhanu jaffi paa k' 

'Na lay mere naal pangey'  jeetu dean wahan ch machldi usnu  ghurdi preet boli..'hat prey  menu apney manjey tey ja son dey  '
 'Nyi  ethey e so jayo es manjey tey 
 ' preet nu wahan ch ghutda usdean akhan ch vekhda   jeetu machalda hoyea bolea
 'Samjda kyoun nyi  chad menu'  jeetu dean wahan ch machldi preet boli tan eh par  dil usda b nyi kr riha c hun jeetu dean wahan ton azad hon nu .. gabru jwan mundey dey tagdey jism di madkta ney usnu  bechain tan pehla e kita hoyea c uton jeetu da akadya lun lak tey bar bar chubda jiven usdey jism ch bharkdi aag nu hor hwa laa riha c fer b boli'  mein nyi so sakdi es manjey tey' 



 'Kyoun bhabhi ..' preet dean akhn ch vekhdey hoye jeetu apnia wahan di pkad dhili karda bolea
 'Nyi so sakdi bs ..' bilkul b changa nyi lga preet nu jidan jeetu ney wahan dhilia kitia . ' hor tun b kitey sukhi wang apni bhabhi nu ..
 'Nyi wad da  tuhadey chundi'  preet di gal sun hasda hoyea jeetu preet ton vakh hunda bolea'  tusi bas edan e ethey lmi pyi raho hun koi sharat nyi karunga' 
Kuch na boli preet par  jeetu dean wahan ton azad ho hor bechain ho uthi..jeetu dey jwaan jism da  nigh .. dil tan kr riha c aap agey ho chimbd jawey jeetu naal 
 'Chup kyoun o'  preet nu  chup kiti chatt wal vekhdi vekh jeetu bolea ..' tuhanu lagda mein tuhanu chundi wadunga' 
 'Nyi o gal nyi ..' bina jeetu wal vekhey preet apney bull ghutdi boli
 'Fer ..  'jad bhabhi dey kehn da matlab samj aya ek dum   jeetu bolea'  tuhada matlab jidan sukhi jaspreet bhabhi naal .. udan da mein b tuhanu ..'
 'Nyi ..haan ..'kuch jwab na aya peeet nu ki kahey..bull ghut jeetu ton akhan churandi kand tey lgey lattu di roshni wal vekhn lgi


 'Tuhanu lagda mein tuhadey naal ...' preet di haan tey nah ekethi sun jeetu gaur nal us wal vekhda bolea .. 
 Kuch na boli preet ...' dil ch sochan lgi ki kahn esnu nu hun ..ehi tan samj nyi aa rahi jaffi b pa lyi bull b chum lye uton tera akadya b pya fer b jijhakda hoyea sau jeha bn puch riha
 'Daso na bhabhi  gaur naal preet nu vekhda jeetu bolea  'ena b bharosa nyi mere tey ...'
 'Nyi o gal nyi pr'  kuch sochdi hoyi preet boli' pta nyi lagda .. kal b mein thori sochea c teri chumi layoungi'
 'O gall hor c  mjak mjak masti ch sharartan ..' gaur nal preet dean lal surkh hundean gallan tey khumaria ch dubea akhan ch vekhda jeetu bolea'Par  jo tusi sochdey o thori asin  ...' 
 Ek baar ta  dil e tut gya preet da jeetu da jwab sun lageya jeetu nyi us nal hor agey  wadh da .. mjak hassey ch e o eh sab ... samj nyi ayi jijhkdey hoye jeetu eh keh riha k sach ch jeetu us nal hor agey nyi 
 ' Ena b bharosa nyi mere tey ..' sar chuk preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea 
 'Nyi bilkil nyi..' jeetu wal vekhdi preet hasdi hoyi boli'  vohat sharararti hunda ja riha tun menu tan dar lagda hun tere ton ..'
Kyoun ..' ek dum bolea jeetu'  mere ton kahda dar tuhanu bhabhi ..'
 'Bas teri niyat theek nyi lagdi'  soch lya c preet ney aap e gal agey tordi haan j tan jijhakda hoyea  kuch na bolea ... gal bdl layoungi
 'Nyi bhabhi edan na kaho meria akhan ch vekh k kaho tuhanu meri niyat kharab lagdi a'  preet di thodi fad usda munh apney wal karda jeetu bina akh jhapkey usdean akhan ch vekhda bolea
 'Akhan ch tan theek lagdi a par kitey hor kharab lagdi a...' akhir preet ney us nal khuln di kosis kardi ney prhl krdi hoyi keha

 'Hor kithon .. ' anjan jeha ho jeetu bolea smj bilkul b nyi ki keha bhabhi ney