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The End of Restless Sleep- By Pinuram
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Chapter 1: Aphrodite in rain.
It was raining heavily outside. I sat in one corner of the classroom and tried to doze of
my tiredness by resting my head on the bench. I was tired after a hard day at job and
wanted to take some rest. My dizziness took me to a dark place full of weird creatures
hovering around me. In one hand I held a burning torch and in the other a huge sword. I
was trying to get rid of those creatures and find my way to a distant white light. The
more I walked towards the light more it faded away in the horizon. Suddenly I felt
someone touching my shoulders from behind. I looked back; there was no one except
those weird venomous and ugly creatures prying upon me. I started walking but I was
again felt the same knock on my shoulder.
I opened my eyes to find that Anirban was standing near me, tapping my shoulder. He
asked me whether I was feeling ok or not. I gave a pale smile to him and said that I was
having a headache. I looked around the class most of the students had left. I rubbed my
eyes and answered that I was feeling dizzy. He asked me that whether I want to have a
drink with him or not. I laughed at him and said that I was too tired to have a drink that
day.
We walked outside the computer-teaching centre. I had my motorcycle parked in one
corner of the bus-stand. It was dark outside and the heavens were pouring. The number
of buses in the rain-drenched streets of Kolkata had come down. Anirban and I lit a
cigarette and looked around the bus stand shed. A dog, coiled like a huge wire, was lying
nearby. Few people were standing at one corner and smoking. I saw Anoushka, standing
in one corner of the shed, trying to save herself from the torrential rain.
Anirban pointed at her and whispered to me “Hey bro, she is really a hot piece. I think
she is most sexy in our batch. She is definitely waiting for her boyfriend. Why don’t we
ask her to drop her at her place, what do you say?”
I could not stop laughing, “I do not think she will allow you to. Come on, it is only the
rain that is deterring her from going home.”
I looked at Anoushka; she gave me a helpless smile in return. By looking at her face, I
observed that she was feeling quiet uneasy as there were other prying eyes of the
bystanders devouring her sensuous beauty of twenty-two springs. She was trying to
cover her ripe youthful beauty with her scarf that was completely soaked.
I looked at Anirban; he was lewdly devouring her rain soaked beauty like a hungry

mongrel. I slapped on his head and deterred him to stare at her like that. I asked him
that whether he want to go home or not. He laughed at me and said that whether I
want to spend some time with her alone or not. I laughed at him and said that I would
go to home once my cigarette is finished. After sometime his bus arrived, he winked at
me and went away. I slowly walked towards my parked motorcycle.
I was about to start my bike when I noticed that Anoushka was striding towards me with
tender steps. There was a pleading smile on her face. She clasped her bag across her
chest.
“It is raining since evening and the bus service has gone thinner.” She said to me. I
looked at her face trying to fathom whether she was asking for a ride or not. She
continued, “I was waiting for someone and see the treacherous rain played a
spoilsport.” I smiled, so Anirban was right about her boyfriend.
“I can drop you at your place, if you want to.” I said her.
She gave a demurring smile, “No, no, I will wait for sometime more. Only one request, if
you could stay till he comes.”
I nodded my head and said to her that I would wait until the person for whom she was
waiting for, arrives. I signed her to stand under the shed and I unmounted my bike to
stand beside her. She stood close to me; her upper-arm was touching mine. I could feel
the warmth of her body that was very fast depleting due to the humid cold winds. She
felt a sense of relief while standing beside me. I was avoiding direct eye contact with
her. Both of us were silent for a while, lost in words as what to ask to whom.
She spoke first, might be out of courtesy, “Where do you live?”
“Near Dumdum airport. What about you?” I asked.
“Really, I also live nearby.” She looked at me; I observed a twinkle in her big black eyes
“What do you do?”
“I just finished my graduation in physics last year and I do a job at Camac Street.” I
answered her.
Her face glowed, “I am also in physics, final year of my graduation. So computers for
your job?

“Yes for professional enhancement, I suppose.” I answered her query. For some time we
both kept silent as if there was nothing more to talk about. She was frequently looking
at the road.
After sometime, a person arrived in a bike. Anoushka looked at me and then ran to the
person on the bike. I could sense a veiled anger in her eyes as she was scolding the
person. She mounted and gently bowed her head towards me, in gratitude. I bowed my
head in return. She waved at me and the bike zoomed away into the darkness.
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Chapter 2: Viscous Alliance. (#1)
Whenever Anoushka eyes met with mine, she used to give a sweet smile. Seldom there
were any words exchanged between us. She possessed an elegance, which attracted
many friends around her. From a distance, I cherished her beauty and frolic nature. On
the other hand, I kept to myself, surrounded by my haughty nature. Probably everyone
in the batch thought me as a snobbish person and I liked that. At least that close
guarded my solitary citadel.
It was not long that those courteous smiles turned into some friendly conversations.
That night I was hungry so I bought a patty from a nearby shop and was munching. I did
not notice that Anoushka was standing behind me watching me intently. She cleared her
throat to signal her presence. Her feminine fragrance snaked into my nasal cavity and
attacked my brain cells.
“Munching alone? Where is your friend, Anirban?” She asked me.
I was startled on hearing her voice. I stammered a bit, “Yeah. I did not have the time for
lunch and was hungry so I was grabbing a bite.” I looked around, in general, some of her
friends always surrounded her but at that time she was alone. I asked her, “So today no
one is with you?”
She gave a faint smile and shrugged her shoulder, “Nopes, may be they don’t like my
company.”
I laughed at her, “Who on earth would not like your company.” I lowered my voice, “I
think you are wrong. People are dying to get your attention.”
She sported a coquettish smile on her lips, “Really? I did not know that. Who on earth is
willing to die for.”
I was enjoying her smile and company. “Find some time to look at your back, you will
find a long line of bees hovering to get your attention.” I joked at her. I looked at the
road, expecting the bike rider to come and pick her up. Probably she fathomed as what I
was looking for.
“Why are you frequently looking at the road?” She asked me.
“Aha! I was looking forward for your two wheeled chariot and the warrior over it.” I
flirted.
She laughed at me and said, “My brother is not coming to-day to pick me up. I am
waiting for the bus.”
A huge relief got off my mind. I was in an impression that the person, who picks her up
every day, was her boyfriend. I observed that many buses passed but she was not
boarding. Finally, I asked her “It is not raining today. The buses are plying perfectly
normal and it is getting night. I think you should go home. Why have you not boarded
any of the bus?”
“Nothing. Is there any problem to stand here?” She smiled at me and said, “You are a
complete bore. I am going now.” She turned and walked towards the bus.
Suddenly I felt a small vacuum inside my chest. I called her “Anoushka, I can drop you if
you want.”
She ran towards me and sat on my pillion. A faint laugh lingered inside my head, how
many colours can a girl can show, I thought. May be she was just playing with me.
“Start now.” She held my shoulder and whispered in my ears. The bike raced into the
dark night, over the black pitch road. I looked up the sky, Kolkata is always humid and
during monsoon, the clouds do shower at anytime. The humid cold winds were blowing
around us. Through my shirt fabric, I felt her soft warmth on my back.
She shouted, cutting the roaring sound of the engine, “What does your name,
Budhaditya means? It is a real long name to call.”
“It denotes something from Vedic literature, that’s all I know nothing more. But why on
earth you are concerned about the meaning of my name?” I replied her.
“Just like that. Actually after calling your name, one has to look into the mirror to check
whether her teeth are ok or not.” She laughed heartily.
I joked at her, “Making a mockery of my name. Is that so? I will then stop my bike here
in the middle of the road and you have to go all alone to your house.”
She giggled “Come on, you are not going to leave a poor girl all alone here.”
The light-hearted conversation went on. I came to know that she was studying physics in
a nearby college and was looking forward to study masters. Most of the time I kept
quiet as she was babbling too much. In between the conversation, she was giving me
directions to her house.
She asked me to stop at a lane and said to me, “Leave me here. I can walk the rest
path.”
I stopped my bike and asked her that I could drop her in front of her home.
She joked at me, “No way. What will happen if the bee stung me?” I laughed at her,
slowly her facial expression turned serious, “Actually I have some problem. My father
will be furious if he notices me with someone. That’s the reason he sends my brother
every evening to the centre to pick me up. Today I told that I could commute alone, so
my brother did not come.”
I understood her handcuffed situation and said her not to worry. She asked me to ride
away but I insisted that until she reaches her house I would rather stand there for her.
She smiled and waved me, “Go now, I am ok. This much path I can walk alone."
That was the only day Anoushka rode on my pillion, after that day she did not asked for
lift. She always took the bus after the class, but she cared to stand with me for
sometime before getting on the bus. With each passing day, she seemed to be friendlier
with me. Anirban joked at time, asking as what was going between us. I joked back, that
Anoushka was a good friend of mine and nothing more. At times, I felt and invisible
magnetic attraction towards her. I suppressed those wild imaginations, hurling those to
the abyss. It was hard to imagine that someone can get attracted to a coarse rugged
boulder like me. I never asked about her personal life and she refrained from knocking
into my domain of silence. I felt that normalcy was entering my life again, which evaded
me for long, more than a decade of solitude.
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এখানে হয়ত অনেকের অমত থাকতে পারে, আপনি ইংরেজি ফোরামে পোস্ট করতে পারতেন !!!!
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তাহলে এখানেই আপাতত থেমে যাচ্ছি , দেখি বাকিরা কি বলে ,
xossip এ কিন্তু এটা বাংলা গল্প বিভাগেই ছিল , আমি ওখানেই প্রথম পড়েছিলাম
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হ্যাঁ english forum-এ পোষ্ট করা যায় তো ! Smile
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#6
বাংলার ফিলিংস ইংরেজিতে আসে না সত্য।
পাঠক
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(23-09-2020, 07:13 PM)Kakarot Wrote: বাংলার ফিলিংস ইংরেজিতে আসে না সত্য।

এটা ত বাংলাতে লিখিনি আমি, এটা ইংরেজিতেই লেখা হয়েছে !!!!!!
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(23-09-2020, 07:13 PM)Kakarot Wrote: বাংলার ফিলিংস ইংরেজিতে আসে না সত্য।

আমি তো xossip এ বাংলা ফোরাম এই পড়েছিলাম , বহুবার চোখে জল এসেছিলো .
পিনুরামদা যদি কোনোদিন পারেন বাংলা তে লিখবেন হয়তো
অনেক কারণ আছে এই গল্প নিয়ে আমার কাদার
সব কিছু এখানে বলা উচিত নয় বোধ হয়
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(23-09-2020, 09:16 PM)ddey333 Wrote: আমি তো xossip এ বাংলা ফোরাম এই পড়েছিলাম , বহুবার চোখে জল এসেছিলো .
পিনুরামদা যদি কোনোদিন পারেন বাংলা তে লিখবেন হয়তো
অনেক কারণ আছে এই গল্প নিয়ে আমার কাদার
সব কিছু এখানে বলা উচিত নয় বোধ হয়

আমি শক্ত ধাঁচের মানুষ হলেও Dawn at Midnight পড়ে মন দুর্বল হয়ে পড়েছে বারবার। তবে শেষে মিলেছে অনাবিল স্বর্গীয় আনন্দ  Smile
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খুব ইচ্ছে করে , এই গল্পটাকে বাংলাতে অনুবাদ করে লিখতে !!
কিন্তু আমার যা লেখার বিদ্যে , জাস্ট অসম্ভব !!!!!!!!!

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বাংলা হলে পড়তে পারতাম ।
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(05-01-2021, 01:19 PM)Abhi28 Wrote: বাংলা হলে পড়তে পারতাম ।

স্বয়ং লেখক নিজে বাংলায় লিখছেন... পড়ে ফেলুন - সুপ্তির সন্ধানে
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#13
Excellent start pls go on hope to have a super romantic novel from u in English .
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গল্পটা বাংলায় এসে গেছে, পড়ে দেখতে পারেন সুপ্তির সন্ধানে
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Can u plz tell me where I can get this story in English as in English forum it's not completed......in Bengali now its started but still need the English one too
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(11-01-2021, 12:44 AM)raja05 Wrote: Can u plz tell me where I can get this story in English as in English forum it's not completed......in Bengali now its started but still need the English one too

As far as I know , it's not available in any forum now.
I do have it in pdf version , received from none other than the writer himself PINURAM Namaskar 

I can mail it to you , but need prior approval from Pinuda ...
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(11-01-2021, 11:21 AM)ddey333 Wrote: As far as I know , it's not available in any forum now.
I do have it in pdf version , received from none other than the writer himself PINURAM Namaskar 

I can mail it to you , but need prior approval from Pinuda ...

Ok fine then....let me ask him or u will ask ?
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