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Renu ek 29 saal ki security officerwali thi jo ki 5 saal se security officer ki Naukri kar rahi thi
Is security officerwali ki Khasiyat ye thi ki ye jis bhi Ilaake me jaati thi waha ka Crime Rate khatam ho jata tha
Matlab Har case ye solve kar deti thi… 92% ka case solving record tha iska
Tabhi usko Time Time pe Promotion aur Tranfer milte rehte the
Aisa nahi hai ki jis ilaake pe ye jaati thi waha Crime khatam the
Crime to hote rtehte the par ye jaldi jaldi case solve kar leti thi
Aaie Apko Reasons batate hai kaise ye case jaldi solve ho jaate the
~ Main Reason to ye thaw o bahut Intelligent Dimaag se kisi bhi Case ko Crack kar leti thi
~ Martial Arts me Judo Karate n Jitsu ki Expert thi to Criminal us kea age nahi tik paate the
~ Undercover officers ka support milne ki wajah se andar ki sab khabre mil jaati thi
~ Sab se important is kahani ka naam ‘Badmaash security officerwali’ kyu hai.. kyuki ye Criminal ko torture to karti thi par apnii pyaas ke liye.. Ye Virgin jarur thi par Oral Sex me believe karti thi or sab Choro ka sandwich banana s phle choos k torture karti thi par khud ko kabhi kisi ko haath nahi lagane deti thi….
Sazaa bhi aisi deti thi… k Rooh kaanp uthti thi… Rapist ka to Choosne k baad Ling kaat deti thi… Choro ko choose k itna torture karti thi k bechare saara maal wapas krdete the… Murdered Qatilo or Terrorust p koi Reham nahi… Sidha encounter…
Chaliye fir karte hai jald hi is kahani ki shuruat
Jo ki ek shortstory hai max 3 update p khatam krdunga
Update b 2-2 din k gap me milenge
Milte hai Jald hi
Pehle Update k Satth !!!
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Bangalore City p last 6 months s security officerwali Renu k aane s crime rate almost tham s gaya hai
Uska reason Renu k tarah tarah k punishment bb hai... Kisi ko Encounter kar deti kisi ke karate s maar peet bure haal kr deti kisi ka ling kaat deti to kisi bechare k choos choos k bura haal krdeti.....
Jo Criminal awaaj uthata usko gaayab krwa deti. ab jab crime rate control ho jaye to senior b koi action kyu lega n us k khilaaf koi action b nahi liya jaata
Yaha Gundo k union b bahut pareshan tha Bechare kare to kya kare is baat k hi union bana k discuss kar rhe the
Raghu - Bhai logo ab yaha kaam karna namumkin ho gaya hai .... Koi idea do
Munna- Bhai mai to sab s piche hi thik hu pichli baar saali ne jo choosa hai mera abhi tak bura haal hain...
Raju- Saale tu kismat wala hai itni hot cheej tere maZe le rahi nahi to Abbas or Zafar k jo encounter kiya wo to dilmdehla dene wala tha
Shambu- Abe ye to kucch nahi jo Tony n Munim k saath kia bang k liya unka ling kaat lia .... Usse battar kya hoga ... Jinda b chorh diya or kucch krne layak b nahi chorha
Ab kare to kya kare yahi kisi k samajh nahi a raha tha
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Nice start bro.....pics bhi add kariye...padhne me aur maza aaega
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nice start.. waiting for more..
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Chaliye aage badte hai
Ek saath 3 stories p kaam karne k wajah s is p update delay hua
Renu k security officer station p badmaash Johnny ko.laya jata hai
Johhny jo k drug dealer hai n College students ko drug supply krta hai .... Apne source k naam batane ko agree nahi krta... Usko lock up p Renu k saath chorh dia jaata hai...
Renu - Sun b haraami 1 hi baar puchungi agar bataya to thik. Nahi to alag tarike s puchna pdega or sab ko pata mera wo tareeka
Johnny - madam mai sach bol.rha muj ko packet shop p.deliver hote maine supplier s bas phone p baat ki kabhi nahi mila
Renu aage badti hai or jeans k andar s hi uska ling ko dabana or pressure daalna start krdeti hai
Renu - Tera time khatam ab iska time a gaya
Or kehne kehte usko pant neeche ger deti hai wo bechara to itne me hi dard s bilbila uthhta hai....
Usko pata b naho chalta kab Renu uski Jeans or underwear utaar k fek deti hai
Wo karahta hua bolta rehta hai k madam plz pl mujko chorh do jo b pata sab bata dia plz pl or torture mat karo
Renu - Haraami abhi to bahut kucch batana tuje jaldi bata... Ruk
Kehte hue Renu Johnny k ling jo poori tarah ubaar maar raha tha ko apne muh p leleti.... Aur apna blowjob start krdeti.. Johnny k to totte uddd jaate wo kabhi ronrha kabhi chilla rha kabhi siskari maar rha... Hardly 90 sec b nai beete hoge k usne apna load k muh p chorh dia... Renu jaise juice samajh k sab k sab p gai....
Usne ling ko chorh k uske tatte apni mutthi s bheech a start krdia
Johnny bechare k muh s cheekh nikli band hi nahi ho rahi thi or wo apne tatte pakad k gir gaya....
Renu - Haraami baith mat jaldi kar 2nd inning b khelni hai abhi
Johnny - Madam muj s nahi ho paega... Vikram Singh hai uska naam mai kabhi mila nahi but baat hui phone p uska nmber ........ Ye hai
Plz mujko or mat torture karo mai mar jaunga
Renu- Chal saale dheele land itne me teri tauba ho gai ... Agar ye baat galat nikli to next inning khelne aumgi...
Bol k Renu bahar chali jaati
Renu b bahut khush thi k crime mitane k saath saath full on enjoyment b ho raha uska.... Full on Masti within duty
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Badhiya update bhai.....etne wakt baad update diya to thora bara dena chahiye tha.....koini ab aap update regular dijiega
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Ab to paani sar s upar nikal chuka tha Renu k dadagiri n gundagardi n behuda tareeke k torture s shehar k apradh jagat HIL chuka tha... Mostly criminals jail p band the jo 2-3 bache the wo idhar udhar chupte fir rhe the k uss k haath na lag jaaye...
Wo log sochte hai k wo khud shehar kyu chorhe us k darr s ye shehar unn ka hai inspectorni to yaha nayi hai .... Kyu naa us ghar p jaa k attack kare uska bang karde taaki wo sharam k maare yaha s transfer lele or wo log back to business aa sake kaam bahut risk wala tha unko Renu k aage tikna unn tatpunjo k bas ka nahi tha ye wo log b bahut acche s jaante the isliye unhone plan kar k andheri raat p attack krne k socha taaki soye hone k kaaran usko koi b chance nahi milne wala tha
Ab ye bache hue 4 log mil Raghu Munna Raju Shambhu mil k Renu k ghar raat ko attack karne pahuch jaate hai
Piche k raste s pipe k raste security k nazar s back k room p pahucte hai shayad wo Renu k hi room tha wo saamne hi bed p white nighty p so rahi thi par bahut jada andhera hone k kaaran kuch khaas nazar nahi a raha tha
Palang p Renu ko nighty p soya dekh k wo chaaro mil k uss p hamlaa s bol dete hai Raghu us k haath pakadta hai Shambhu us k pair pakadta hai to Raju uska apne haath s muh band krta hai jabki Munna uss k upar chad k jabardasti Krna start krdeta hai
Uski need khul jaati hai or wo shock ho hjaati hai or khud ko churhane k liye jhatpata rahi hoti hai aise mauke k poora faayda uthata hua Munna us k basketball jaisi chaahtiyo ko nighty k upar s hi jor jor s bheechna start krdete hai... Muh band hone k kaaran wo chilla nahi paa rahi hoti or uski siskaariya nikal.rahi hoti..... Wo abhi b apni nighty p thi or Munna nighty utar ne k koshish nahi krta wo to upar s hi full on maze le rha hota tabhi wo thoda niche k tarah badta hai or niche s uski nighty ko upar k taraf sarkana shuru kar deta hai or jaise hi pet tak krdeta hai wo hairaan ho jata hai ye dekh k usne panty nahi pehni thi or uski clea shaven choot uski aankhon k saamne aa jaati hai wo b thodi Gili gili c ye jarur uske boobs attck k kaaran hua tha... Andhere k bawjood bhi Munna ye sab dekh leta hai
Munna- Saali ne katcchi nahi pehni or mast gili hui padi aaj k dinner k to mazaa a jaega
Raju - Bhai pehle mujko chadne de tu yaha aaza darwaja mai kholunga... Plz
Raghu- Abe chup karo haramio jo jaise hai usi position p raho adla badli k chakkar p ye azaad ho gai naa fir humko isse azaad koj na kara paega
Munna- Haa bhai mai konsa adla badli krrha ... Pehle rasmalai mai hi khaunga ... Tum logo k number baad p
Ab wo uski nighty ko or upar sar ka k kandhe tak le jaata hai or jor jor s momo fir s dabana shuru kar deta hai uski siskaariya or n jaada bad jaati hai ..
Tabhi wo apni ungli niche k taraf le jaa k uski gili choot p Parvesh kara deta hai... Ek baar fir uski cheekh muh k muh phi reh jaati hai....
Munna- Saali humara ling ko itni buri torture karti hai tu... Ytere niche to mahasagar hai jo sirf ek ungli bhar s poori chaddar ko gili kar chuka hai ... Mazaa ayega aaj tera sabr k baandh hum log todenge hi nahi nichodenge bhi...
Or ungli andar baahar karne lag jaata hai.... Wo full on chatpatana start karti hai or haath pair maarne k badi koshish karti par pakad majbut hone k kaaran koi b faayda nahi hota.... Or is k saath hi Raju jisne uska muh pakda tha us k basketball ko dekh k Ruk nahi paata or uss p muh maar k uska doodh pina shuru krdeta hai....
Bechari k to is tarah k upar niche k double attack s tote udd jaate hai uske do to kya kabhi single attack b nahi jhela tha or us k aansoo niklne lagte
Tabhi achaanak kamre k light jal jaati
Saamne k nazaara dekh k charo badmaash shock reh jaate ... Un k saamne Renu haath p gun liye apne nighty p khadi thi... Tab ka k wo ladki k chehra dekhte or fir hairaan ho jaate ye to koi or hi thi koi 18-19 saal k ladki shahyad Renu k choti behan Poonam thi ye
Renu - Haramio utho waha s ... Tum me itna jigra aa gaya k tum ne mere ghar p mere behan p attack kia
Raghu - Attack to tuj p soch k kiya tha humko kya pata tha ye teri behn niklegi
Renu haste hue - Muj p soch k ab kutte sherni p.attack krenge... Itni aukaat ho gai... Karo attack muj p maa k doodh piya to
Wo log Poonam ko chorh dete hai or wo bechari dard s chillati bilbilati khud p kisi tarah control karti hui bina koi pal gawaye Renu k pass jaa k uss k piche khud ko chupa leti
Poonam - Didi dekho inn logo ne mere saath kya haal kia agar ap abhi naa aati to ye mera kya haal krte
Renu- Tu fikr naa kar Poonam mere room p jaa mai inka abhi hisaab barabar krti hu
Or Poonam ko waha s bhej deti hai
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agar meri story acchi lage to comment ya appreciation jarur de
acchi na lage to kucch suggestion the par read kar k ignore na kare
aisi cheejo s writer nirash hote hai or likhne p concentrate nahi kr paate
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No issues bro
Then it will be better to leave this topic on this site
I was a very regular writer of xossip.com but here no reply no appreciation obviously nothing motivate to write
If u chck any of my stories here no replies either hindi n English
Have 10 times better response then other similar site... That's why I asked here but this type of reply oy heart break
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Super update bro...good work
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Renu apni gun s goliya nikal k usko box p lock krdeti hai wo log charo taraf s Renu ko gher lete hai par unn me s koi first attack k himmat nahi juta pa rha tha....
Renu - Kyu be maa k dino, soti ladki p hi attack karoge... Sherni k saamna krne k aukaat nahi kya tumhari chakko ki paidayish
Raghu - Ae saali, jada mat bol tera aisa haal krenge naa ki muh nahi dikha sakegi
Renu - Abe tu pehla nahi ye kehne wala or akhri b nahi hoga tum jaise lullu s aaye din saamna hota mera ye dhamki koj nai nahi mere liye .. maa k doodh piya hai to aa
Raghu aage badne hi lagta k uska iraada jaan k Renu Bala k furti s aage badti or sidha ek jordaar kick uske ling p maarti bas fir wo jo dard s bilbillata hua baith jata fir wo or uska lund dono khade na ho paate
Usko haal dekh k baaki teen or b jyada alert ho jaate hai
Renu - Kyu b lullo apni band bajwane itni raat ko mere ghar aane k kya jarurat thi apne adde p bula lia hota wohi aa k bata deti tumko kya cheej mai... Ab tum teeno me s kis ne apna nmber lagwana haj bado aage mai b tum jaise baato k sher s thak gai hu koi action karna chahte ho k sirf maar hi khaa k manoge
Raju kisi tarah confidence gain kar k aage badta hai par sherni k nazro s bach nahi paata is baar wo sidha kick utchal k us k head p maarti hai wo bechara sar pakad k jhoom hi raha hota k dusri laat us k b ling p maar deti hai wo bechara b Raghu k tarah time waste kiye bina bilbillata hua niche gir jata or tadapne lagta
Ab tak baaki dono k hawaia poori tarah ud chuki thi der s hi sahi unn k is baat k poora ehsas ho gaya tha ki yaha aa k life k sab s badi galti kardi or ab dono me s koi b aage attack nahi krne wala tha or back foot p ho rhe the
Renu - Bas dhari reh gai mardangi... Itna hi dum tha kya jo sherni k gufa p a gaye wo b aise maar khaane... Chalo ab jaldi karo attack or ye khel khatam kare mujko b nind a rhi
Munna - Dekh is khel ko yahi khatam krte or hum log yaha s chale jaate apna hisaab kabhi or poora krenge...
Renu manne wali cheej kaha thi darwaje k tarah bala ki teji s pahuchi or lock kar dia ..
Renu - kyu mithai khaye bina jaoge. Aise kaise... Do bande ho abhi b mil k attack karo chalo wada krti mai first attack nahi krungi is baar... Bado aage ab to...
Shambu or Munna aapas p baat krlete k dekh Bhai bachne k koi idea to hai nahi ab mil k attack krte dekha jaega jo b hoega
Or dono k dono Renu k upar jhapatte or wo pehle ki hi tarah alert side p ho jaati par apne Wade anusaar un p pehla attack nahi karti... Shambhu gir jaata hai or Munna wapas Renu p kudta hai or piche s usko pakad leta hai or uski body ko control karne k koshish karne lagta hai samne k taraf s Shambu b aa jaata or Renu k face p ghusso k barsaat shuru krdeta...
Renu khud p hue double attack s bachne k koshish kar rahi thi k Munna usko piche s aise ghaseetna shuru krta k wo peeth k bal girti c chali jaati or mauke ka fayda utha k Shambu us k upar chadne k koshish karta but us bechare k anjaam b wahi hota Renu apne ghutno k jordaar thokar us k ling p maarti wo bechara b chillane lagta or apna ling pakad k niche ko baith jata
Tabhi kisi tarah khud p control kar k or mauke k fayda uthane Raghu b Renu k pass a jata par us p chad k attack karne k jagah wo jor jor s uske boobs bhichane lagta or Renu k is tarah k attack s haalat thodi jarur kharab ho jaati or first time confidence level thoda sa kam hota dikhai deta... Uska aise machalna or chatpatana dekh k Raghu ko bahut accha lagta hai
Raghu - Kyu Inspectorni sahiba, Sherni ko b dard hota hai... Ye aaj humko maloom hua
Or kehte kehte apna dabaad or jada bada deta hai wo is baar cheekh c padti hai
Wohi ye sab dekh k Munna mauke k fayda uthata hai or apne haath s Renu k nighty upar krne lagta or apna haath uss k panty k pass le jaata ...Renu samajh gai aage kya hone wala usne apni mundi ko jor s piche Munna k sar p maara Munna k pakad chooth gai or wo sar pakad leta hai itna mauka bahut tha or wo apni right koni s sidha uska face p attack krti wo bechrata karata hua sar k bal gir jaata... Tab Raghu ko ehsaas hota k ab sherni azaad hai par wo soch ya kucch kar pata . Usse pehle hi uski thudddi p Renu k kick padti wo dur ja k girta... Renu us k seene p aa k baith jaati or mujko k barsaat kar deti jab tak wo behosh nahi ho jaata ..
Ab charo k game baj chuka tha or baaji fir s Renu k haath me thi
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Shabaz123, yaar kya likhte ho. Bhai paisa vasool. Kya Renu Sherni ka character create kiya hai. Bilkul saamne erotic action film chal rahi hai. You told us to give suggestions. Here I request you to stretch erotic scene and play with it. Khelo erotic scene ko. Kanjusaai mat karo. Yeh scene men aap Poonam ke saath khel sakte the. Aur jab real sex karne ke liye lingh cunt pe rakhta hai. Tabhi Renu light on karti hai.
Doosra, Renu ko jab donon pakdte hai tabhi bhi bang scene chalna chahiye. Jab gunda lund chut pe rakhne jaate hai us end waqt Renu attack kake apne aap ko chhoda deti hai. Toh Conflict Sruggle aur erotic sex scene badiya lagega. Your wish bro. But update long episode regularly. Good writing. Keep it up.
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Thanks for suggestions bro
Will try these thing in next update
But bhai yaha p shahbaz123 kaun hai ?
Waise ye story b long chalane k soch raha hu tabhi audience ko proper sex sene k liye tadpa rha hu
Movie p jaise action last p aata yaha b kucch aise hi hai
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Kucch der baad
Usi room me chaaro k chaaro murge bane Nange baithe hue the haath unn k Renu ne rassi s baand rakhe the or unki nangi peeth p belt s waar kar rhi thi bechare bahut jada dard me the or chilla rahe the ki unko is baar maaf krdo or chorh do but Renu unko aise kaise jaane deti ek to unhone Renu k ghar attack karne k socha or upar se Renu k sis Poonam p sexual assault k try kia or to or khud Renu k upar bhi sexual attack kia... Itni asaani s kaise jaane deti
1-1 kar k sab k nmber laga ne wali thi wo
Sab s pehle Shambhu ko ek kone p le gai or us k haath khol k khada kia or uske nange badan ko niharne lagi fir sidha haath aage bada k uss k ling ko apne haath p lia or uske tatte zor s dabane lagi wo bechara dard me bilbilane laga rone laga tadapne laga or chillane laga uska haal dekh k baaki teen b seham s gaye or unn k paseene chutne lage.
Renu - Chal be dheele lund ready ho ja apni class k liye
Or kehte hi uss ne sidha Shambhu k muh me liya or choosna shuru kar dia ... Wo bechara daba hara sa siskari maar rha jab usse control na hua to wo apne haatho s Renu k baal jor s bheech leta isse Renu k haath or muh s uska lund choot gaya or usko katai bhi ye baat pasand nahi aayi...
Renu - Behn k land teri itni aukaat ki tune mere baal bheche... Ruk behnchod abhi batati tujko
Shambhu - nahi madam wo galti s wo balance.... Aaahhh
Uss k baa wo kucch naa bola uske cheekh hu gunji itni der tak Renu ne uska ling or tatte dono ek saath itni jor s bheeche k bechara karahne k machine sa hi ban gaya
Maafiya maang maang k thak jata hai par Rude Renu p koi farak nahi padta or fir wapas chusna shuru kar dia dard k maare or seham k maare kuch 10-12 sec p hi wo jhadd jata or Renu ko uska full on Masti or pleasure mil jata or tab jaa k uska mood kucch thik hota ... Fir wapas wo Shambhu ko baand k store room p rakh deti ...
Ab Raghu k number tha pehle hi wo dara hua tha apni aankho k saamne Shambhu k haal dekh k ab us k naseeb k baari thi wo b bahut ro rha or maafiya maang raha tha par Renu full mood p thi or uske bato p dhyan diye bina sidha us k bhi ling ko apne muh p rakh k bina koi fun miss kiye choosna start krdeti hai .. wo bechara to kab utha kab jhada kab nikla pata hi nahi chala Shambhu s b kam time p shuru hone s pehle hi khatam ho gaya ... Uss k saath to wahi kahawat hui marta kyu naa jhadta... Itne jaldi jhad jaane s Renu ko gussa aa gaya or le de Dana Dan uss p chaate ghusse barsane lagi or gaaliyo ki line laga daaali ...
Is tarah s dusra wicket b gir gaya ... Us ko bhi baand kar Renu ne store room p dal diya ..
Ab Raaju k number aaya wo bahut shaant tha or sehma sehma sa tha baaki dono k haal dekh k
Raaju - Madam apko jo bhi karna hai krlo plz mujko maaro ya torture naa kaeo...
Renu - kya baat hai tune to jung s pehle hi hathiyaar daal diye ... Chal saale jaldi s khada ho ja aur is ko khada kar...
Bolne bhar ki der thi uska ling full on khada ho gaya ab ye excitement s to nahi but dare s lag rha tha or mauka paate hi Renu sherni k tarah apne shikaar p lapti or choosna shuru kar diya. . is hathiyar ne b jaldi hi dum tod diya or Renu k muh bhar diya....
Is ka b anjaam wahi hua jo baaki dono k hua tha baand k is ko bhi store room p daal diya gaya ....or ye b jaa k wahi pada rhaa...
Ab baari aayi aakhri bande k jo bechaea sehma to hua tha par socha hua tha k aaj itni jaldi to atleast give up nahi dega or chance le ga chaahe kucch ho jaaye
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Now you are writing good erotic narration.
