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तुम तो रहने ही दो लिखने को
तुम्हारी कोई भी स्टोरी आज तक पूरी हुई है??
जो भी स्टोरी लिखी है तुमने सब अधूरी हैं पहले उसको तो पूरा करो
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South kolkata ki ye ek modern colony hai. Yaha prasun roy naam ka ek businessman rahate hai. Prasun roy ka kapade ka business hai.. wo ek jamindar family se belong karate the…Unka yaha ek bada sa bunglow hai…. Thoda purana bunglow tha wo… es colony mai bahot saare ghar aalishan aur modern tarike se banaye gaye hai… lekin kuch aise pocket bhi the jaha kuda- kachara feka ja sakata tha..
Prasun roy ke 3 santan the. Bada beta amar us mai settle tha, wo aapni patni kanak ke saath last 10 years se us mai rahata hai. Uski 2 number ki santan thi uski beti rani...
uski shaadi hoke 3 saal ho chuke the.Wo kolkata mai hi rahati thi aapne pati ke ghar… jo prasun roy ke ghar se door tha. uski figure 34-30-38 hai...
Prasun roy ki 3 rd saantan thi aaditya roy. Wo khud ek chemical engg hai… gujrat mai 3 saal raha chuka tha… experience lene ke liye usne gujrat ki polyster industry join ki thi…. Uski shaddi hoke 1 saal ho chuke hai….. uski shadi nandita se hui thi….
Nandita ka age 26 tha… wo khud engg karne ke baad mba complete kar chuki hai… uska native place Mumbai hai… shadi ke pahale usne Mumbai mai job ki thi aur baad mai Jamnagar mai jab pati ke saath thi tab bhi 6 month usne job ki thi… wo ek software engg hai. Uski figure 36- 28-38 hai. Wo dikhane mai bahot khubsurat hai….
Aaditya 3 saal ka experience leke kolkata wapas aa gaya tha…. Aapni patni ke saath…kolkata aaye hue use kuch 6 mahine hue the… usne aapne haath mai aapne papa ka business le chukka tha…. Uski patni nandita aab ghar mai hi rahati hai … business ke liye jaroori kaam wo ghar mai se operate karati thi…kabhi- kabhi wo aapne pati ke office jaya karati….aapne pati ke office ka saara software work wo karati hai...
Jaha roy family ka bunglow tha wo area tho posh tha…. Lekin bunglow khatam hote hi ek chotasa lane tha…. Wo len gande thi… us len se jane wala rasta aage jate hui ek slum ko milata tha…. Tho kabhi kabhi wo lane se jane wale log waha kuda kachara dalate the.
Roy famila ka bunglow bahut bada tha… aage open space thi… generally waha wo car park karate the… constructed bunglow 2 floor ka tha… aage jaisa open space tha waise hi piche bhi open space tha…. Lekin piche pura open space nahi tha…. Pichale wale hisse mai aada open space tha…aur aada constructed tha….jo aada constructed tha usme ground floor mai tho worker ke liye 2 room banaye gaye the… aur pura 2 nd floor roy family use karate the…. 2nd floor ka pichala wala hissa jo constructed tha…wo last mai bunglow ke compound se thode pahale khatam hota tha… matlab second floor se bunglow ke piche jo bhi kuch hota tha wo dekha ja sakata tha….
Bunglow ke ek side se wo chota sa lane jata tha.. bunglow khatam hote hi piche colony ki open space thi… wo bahut badi jagah thi… colony ki jagah hone ke karan wo jagah koi purchase nahi kar paya tha…. Mano tho ek chota sa ground ban chukka tha…. Us ground ke dono taraf ek waal bani hui thi.. ek taraf ki wall matlab roy aur dusare family ke bunglow ke compond wall thi …. Aur dusari tarf ek wall build ki thi… us wall ke bad mai wo slum area start hota tha… wo bahut bada ya bahut chota sa slum nahi tha tho wo ek medium size ka slum tha…
Es slum ki wajah se kabhi kabhi colony wale logo ko takalif hoti thi… roy family ke pichale side mai aur slum ke bitch mai jo space tha wo ground ban chukka tha… us ke kuch hisse mai bachhe cricket aur football khelate the aur kuch hisse mai kachare ka dher bana hua tha…roy family ke side wale hisse mai jo part tha us ground ka waha bahot sara kachare ke dher tha… lekin wo thode distance mai tha….es wajah se kachare ki badbhu nahi aati thi… wo thoda jada distance tha…lekin kabhi bachhe jada shor karane lag jate the tab roy family ke member ko disturb hota tha. Roy family ke bunglow ka uppar wale hisse ke pichale portion mai hi aaditya aur nandita ka bedroom tha… waha ek hisse mai ek choti si balcony bhi thi… us balcony mai khade rah kar ground ke naazdik area ke bare mai dekha ja sakata tha…
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congrats for new thread.Please post regular update of your other story.
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Us (slum) basti ko Rakesh nagar kaha jata tha. Us basti ke kuch ladke bahut bigade hui the, us me se ek tha javed.uski umar lagbhag 21-22 thi, wo dikhane mai kaala tha aur motha bhi tha. Us ke sir ke baal bahut Jada bade hui the, Ye baal uske shoulder tak aate the ,purane Hindi picture ke hero jaise. Iss wajah se wo aapne umar se jada umar ka lagata tha.javed ek bigada hua ladaka tha. Javed ko har ek bigadi hui aadat thi..use roj sharab chahiye thi… jis din sharab nahi milati us din wo sharab ke liye kuch bhi karane ke liye ready ho jata tha. Wo sigaratte aur bidi bhi pita tha, paan to use bahot pasant tha, hamesha Aapne moo mai paan chabata rahata tha. Ganja bhi wo pita tha. Aur ladke aur aurat ko chedana aur use chodana Ye to uska roj ka khel tha. Aapne basti aur ye modern town colony ki ladkiya ko wo roj chedata tha. Us se colony's wale log pareshan the. Jagada karana uska roj ka kaam tha.
Prasun Roy ji ko is baste ke ladako se bahot nafarat thi. Ye log aawargardi karate hai aise Roy ji ko lagata tha. Rakesh Nagar ke ladke the bhi Waise hi. Unka main kaam to tha kuda kachara collect karana colony walo se lekin in ke piche ye ladke chori bhi karate the. In mai sabse aage the Javed aur uske saathidaar. Javed ke saath 4-5 ladke the, Javed Unka boss tha, Javed ka har ek kaam Ye log kiya karate the. Javed jaisa kahata ye log kaam karate the.ye sab javed ko javed bhai kahake bulate the. Javed aur us ka group kachara collect karata aur usi kachare ko piche ground mai daal deta. Colony ke logo ne enn logo ko bahot baar samjaya tha ki kachara dusari jagah daalo, yaha iss ground mai mat daalo to Javed sunata nahi tha. Saath saath mai Javed ke saathidar choti moti cheje churate bhi. Saath mai Javed ki nazar hamesha se colony ki ladakiya aur aurat par rahati thi. Jaha chance milata wo chance maar leta tha. Colony ki ladakiyako hamesha chedata rahata tha.
Ek din Prasun Roy ke ghar ke saamne hi Javed ka Jagada ho gaya tha basti ke Kuch ladako ke saath. Tab Prasun Roy Kahi bahar ja raha the Aapne bahu aur bete ke saath.
Pahale se Roy enn logo se nafarat karata tha aur uske ghar ke samne ye log Jagada karane lag gaye tho usse bahot Jada gussa aa raha tha. Javed un logo ko gaandi gaandi galiya de raha tha. Aapne bahu aur beti ke saamne Javed jo gaandi galiya de raha tha usse Prasun Roy ka gussa badatha ja raha tha.
Prasun - ye... Tum log yaha se chale jao aur Aapne basti mai Jake fight kar lo
Prasun ki baat par ye fight karne wale ladke dhyan nahi de rahe the
Javed - rook Tu maderchod.. Tere ko dikhata hu... Tere bahan ko tere saamne Chodata hu..
Aise Kahate hui Javed ne us dusare ladke ko maarana suru kiya...
Prasun - ye mote ladke.... Yaha fight mat kar.... Chod de usko... Aur yaha gaandi gaandi galiya de mat .
Aab Javed ke nazar Prasun ki taraf gayi..
Javed - ye.... Mere bhasha pasant nahi to bahar Kyon aahe ho.... Aapne ghar mai jao .
Uski ye gaandi gaandi galiya sunkar nandita aur uske nanad raani ko sharam aa rahi thi. Wo niche gardan kar ke Khadi thi....
Un dono ne survat mai to enn logo ki fight dekhi magar Javed ki bhasha ki wajah se us taraf dekhana baand kar diya.
Prasun - ye.... Mote ladke ye Mera ghar hai... Tum aapni basti mai ja ke fight Karo.
Javed ko jab prasun ne aise bolate hi Rani aur nadita hasane lagi. Javed ko gussa aaya hai mota bolane se unko pata chal gaya iss wajah se wo dono hasane lagi.
Javed - Ye.... Motha kisse bola re buddhe... Maderchod . mai tere ghar mai aakar fight nahi kar raha hu.
Javed ko jab prasun ne aise bolate hi Rani aur nadita hasane lagi. Javed ko gussa aaya hai mota bolane se unko pata chal gaya iss wajah se wo dono hasane lagi.
Prasun - Mera naam Prasun Roy hai... Budhha mat bol.
Javed - Mera naam Javed hai.
Tabhi Javed ko ek jor dar gusa wo ladke ne Mara .
Ye dekhate hi nandita aur Rani Phir hasane lagi. Ye do ladies kyon muj par has rahi hai Ye soch kar Javed ko aur gussa aa gaya .
Javed - ruk maderchod... Dekh tere maa aur Behan ko kaise Chodata hu.... Saale
( aur unn dono ki taraf dekhte hui kahata hai)
Tum dono haso mat... Dekho iss ke kaise mai gaand marata hu...
Javed enn dono ke taraf dekh kar Ye bol raha hai Ye jaise hi Prasun ko pata chal gaya Waise hi Prasun un par gussa ho gaya
Prasun - tum us par haso mat... Gaadi ke aander baith jao.
Prasun ne kaha un dono ko lekin rani car mai baith gaye par nandita car mai nahi baithe thi. . Car ke pichale seat ke door ke paas khadi rahkar thode- thode ye fight dekh rahi thi… aab javed ki galiya bahot jada bad chuke thi… javed aab bahot jada excited ho gaya tha… nandita javed ke taraf hi dekh rahi thi aapni chor nazaro se…
uska dhya us fight ki taraf hi tha… aab uski taraf hi dekhate hui javed us ladake ko maar raha tha..
Javed nadita ke taraf dekh kar bola
Javed- dekho … kaise iss maderchod ki maar raha hu…gaand
Ye sunate wo sharma jati hai aur niche dekhkar car ka door open karati hai..
Edhar Javed us ladake ko bahut marata hai..
. Thodi der baad wo phir se us fight ko dekhane lag gayi nandita wahi Javed ki taraf hi dekh rahe thi. Javed ki gaandi gaandi galiya wo sun rahi thi. Us ki taraf dekhkar hi Javed us ladake ko maar raha tha.
nandita nazar chukate hui aur thode Sharmate hui Javed ki taraf dekh rahi thi.
Shayad iss se Pahle us ne kabhi itani gaandi galiya suni nahi hogi.
Aab Waha society ke watchmen aa gaye aur unone ye Jagada chudaya. Aab Prasun us watchmen par gussa ho gaya .
Prasun - kaha Mar gaye the itane der.. Hamara watchmen kaha hai ….
1 watchman - sir hum gate par the... Aap ka watchmen piche gaya hai ..
Prasun - inn ko bhagao yaha se..
Tab tak Unka Jagada stop hua tha...
Aab nandita ko Gadi mai baithane ko Prasun Kahata hai. Jaise hi prasun ye kahata hai.. tabhi waha hoke javed us ko dekh raha tha.. aab wo car mai baithane wali thi ki… javed us ki taraf dekhate hu aankh maarta hai…uso ka dhyan javed ki taraf hi tha.. jaise hi javed aankh maratha hai wo car mai baith jati hai…aur wo 3 log Waha se bahar chale gaye...
Enn ke Jane ke baad Javed bhi Waha se chala gaya.
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fir se ek nayi story,yaha kai readers budha tailor me priya or karim ki suhaagraat ka intzaar kar rahe hai ,lekin aapkse kai saalo se usse aage nahi badai ,kam se kam usse to puri kar dete
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Rajkumar this is you old incomplete story from now defunct xossip forum,. Hope you complete it now
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