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Incest Pass -e- Parda (Ik Be Misal Kahani)

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Hi
Sunao bai ki hall chall a.
Me ik gall hamesh feel keeti k Punjabi forum de writers nu eh shikayat rehndi a bai iss forum te readers ghatt aa. Par me samajhda wan k shayad iss di ik waja achey likharian di kami vee aa.
Ik do writers nu Chad k aksar likhari Kahani likhan di alaf bey ton v waqif nai.
Meri eh Kahani readers te likharian da eh Gila door Karey gi.

Meri koshish hovey gi k iss Kahani de regular update, haqeeqat passandi, suspense, thrill, romance, rabt te tasalsal te koi samjhota na hovey.
 iss de naal naal fazool tamheedan te tafseean, ghair zaroori kirdar, ghair haqeeqi fantsies te incest ton hatt k hor kirdar shamil karan to gurez keeta javey.
Kahani da ik ik lafz te ik ik waqia tuhanu lazzat di us dunia ch le Jaye k eh Kahani "winner te be Misal ban jaye iss forum te...

Pehli update tuhadi Raye aan tu baad hazar ho javey gi
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Bahar Da Mosam Apne Poorey Rang Roop De Nal Shuru Ho Chukia Si. Har Passey Mithian Hawawan, Poli Poli Dhup Te Khirdey Hoye Phullan Di Sohni Khushbo Har Dill Nu Khushi De Ehsas Naal Makhmoor Jeha Kar Rehi Si.

Jila Narowal Di Tehsil Shakargarh Da Qasba Nainan Kot Jehra K Apni Haryali Te Zarkhez Zameen Karan Poorey Punjab De Andar Shohrat Rakhda A. Nainan Kot Tu Panj Meel Door India De Barder Te Ravi De Kandey Lagey Ik Chota Jeha Pind Jalalpur Jehra K Door Door Tak Sar Sabz Khetan De Wichkar Aman, Sakoon, Mohabbat Te Sadgi Di Ik Tasweer C.

Jalal Pur Pind Cho Ik Choti Jehi Kachi Sark Jidey Dono Kinarey Uchey Uchey Tali, Kikkar Te Sufaidian De Darakhatan Naal Dhakey Hoye San. Mosam Bahar Di Aamad Hon Kar K Darakhtan Te Nawey Pattey Ugg Rahey San. Parindian Tu Le K Darakhtan Tak Te Phul  Bootian Tu Le K Har Bandey Bachey Tak Sakoon Te Tazgi Mehsoos Kar Rahey San. Eh Kachi Sarak Kai Uchey Neeway  Khetan Wichon Hondi Darya Lagey Ja K Muk Jandi C Jithon  Agey Choudhary Sultan Bajwa Da Raqba Shuru Ho Janda C Jehra K Darya De Kandey Kandey Koi 70 Kilian Ch Phailia Hoya C. Sultan Bajwa Jalalpur Da Ik Tagra Zamindar Te Izzat Dar Zaminda Shumar Kita Janda A.

Din De 11 Wajey Da Time C, Sultan Bajwa Di Ghar Wali Parveen Bajwa Apney Ghar Waley Te Apney Puttar Altaf Bajwa Di Roti Le K Us Choti Jehi Kachi Sarak Te Ja Rahi C. Parveen Bajwa Ne Lassi Di Gadwi Apney Sir Uttey Rakhi Hoyee C, Gadwi De Uttey Desi Ghayo Ch Banney Parathey Ik Poney Wich Bann K Rakhey Hoye C. Parveen Bajwa Ne Ferozi Rang De Lawn De Kaprey  Di Shalwar Qameez Paye Hoye San. Ik Waddi Sari Chadar Lapeti Hoyee Si Jidhey Uttey Sheeshey De Phullan Da Kamm Hoya C. Darakhtan De Wicho Chin Chin K Aundi Sooraj Di Roshni Jaddon Chadar Te Baney Sitarian Nal Takraundi C Te Dhup Chan Di Akh Macholi Andar Sooraj Di Roshni Kai Ik Rangan Di Taan Seena Ban Jandi Te Parveen Bajwa De Surkh O Sufaid Khoobsoorat Chehrey Te Inj Qurban Ho Jandi C K Parveen Bajwa Da Chehra Makhmal Ch Liptey Heerey Wangoon Eh Jahi Jaltran Pesh Kar Reha C Ki Bahar Da Mosam Wi Sharma Rahia C.

Parveen Bajwa Iss Pind Di Ik Bohat Sohni Aurat Shumar Kiti Jandi C. Ucha Qad Gora Pathanian Warga Rang, Kaley Lamey Bund Tak Aundey Ghaney Waal, Motian Nasheelian Brown Akhan, Satwan Nakk, Patley Patley Sohney  Gulabi Hoth, Gol Matol Chehra, Lammi Surahi Wargi Gardan Kisey Wi Gabhru Jawan Nu Ik Nazar Ch Pagal Kar Den Layi Kaafi C. Iss Tu Wad Mardan De Dillan Te Churri Chalawndi C Parveen Bajwa Di Khoobsoorat Chati, Chati Te Tanney Hoye Do Sakhat Te Nokeeley Mummey. 36 Size De Gol Te Motey Mummey Poorey Jawan San Sakhat Te Ooper Nu Uthey Te Tanney Hoyee, Chati Nu Hor V Sexy Bana Denda Si Patla Te Kham Dar Lakk, Te Lakk Nu Chaar Chann La Daindi Si Parveen Di Moti Bund. Motey Motey Do Ubhrey Hoyee Gol Matol Chuttar Bahar Nu Nukley Hoye San. Aggey Nu Nikley Mummey Te Bahar Nu Nikley Chuttar Lakh Jattan Tu Baad V Kissey Suity Ya Chadar Andar Chup Nai Sakdey San. Ik Nazar Wich Ee Lutt Putt Janda C Waikhan Wala.

Parveen Bajwa Ik Mitha Jeha Geet Matha Matha Jeha Gungana Rahi C Te Apney Khetan Wal Ja Rahi C, Ik Hath Lassi Wali Gadwi Nu Paya Hoya C, Dooja Hath Jadd Chalan Kar K Hilda Te Choorian Di Chankar Fiza Wich Haseen Mantar Padia Kar Daindian, Hussan Te Sadgi Di Eh Moorat Jadd Matak Matak K Chaldi Te Patli Kamar De Uttey Motey Mummey Te Lakk De Thalley Motey Chuttar Hussan O Jamal Da Ik Mast Te Sexy Manzar Paish Kar Reha C. Sarak Khatam Hoyee Te Ohna De Pump Nu Jan Wali Pagdandi Shuru Ho Gai.

Sultan Bajwa Ne Apni Jameen De Andar Ik Tube Well Pump Lagwaya Hoya C Jehra K Peetar Injan Te Chalda C, Ik Wadi Sari Haveli Jidey Andar Tractor Te Doojey Aujar Rakhey Hoye C, Ik Godam, Ik Store Te Ik Kamra V Bnaya Hoya C Jithey Do Tin Manjey Bistray Rakhey Hoye C Aram Karn Lai. Haveli Di Diwar Bohat Uchi C Ke Koi Chor Charh Na Sakey, Bohat Wadda Gate Laya Hoya C. Tube Well Pump De Aggey Ik Wadda Sara Hoz C Nahan Lai. Hoz De Asey Pasey Amb, Jaman Te Such Chain De Darakht Lagey Hoye C

Jadd Parveen Bajwa Haveli Paunchdi Aa Te Uss Wailey Su
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Sultan Bajwa Haveli De Andar Tractor De Pichey Hall Banh Rahya C Shayad Koi Paili Tayyar Karni Honi Iss Layee Tractor Nu Hall Chalawn Lai Tayyar Kar Rahya C. Parveen Ne Waikh K Rest Waley Kamrey Wall Tur Paya. Haveli Di Ik Pasey Pump Room, Rest Room, Store Te Godam Eh 4 Kamrey C Te Kamrian De Aggey Baramda Banya Hoya C. Parveen Baramdey Wich Paye Hoye Waddey Sarey Manjey Uttey Roti Te Lassi Waley Bartan Rakh K Sultan Bajwa Nu Salam Kardi A.

Sultan Bajwa Ik Ucha Lamma Gora Chitta Gabhru Jawan Mard C. 5 Foot 11 Inch Qad, Chori Chati, Tagra Jussa, Sohnian Muchan De Naal Ik Pur Kashash Mard C. Uss Wailey Sultan Bajwa Na Chadra Te Qameez Pai Hoi C.

Parveen: Assalam O Alaikum Janab

Sultan: Wa Alaikum Assalam Janab, Te Naal Ee Parveen Nu Phar K Apni Hikk Nal La Lainda A Te Ohdey Bullan Te Nikki Jahi Chummi Lainda A

Parveen: (Shara Ki Muskraundi Hoi) Chadd Yar Munda Waikh Laoo Ga.

Sultan: Sohnio Nai Waikhda, Oh Apnehy Bagh Andar Pathey Wadh Rahya Wa.

Parveen: (Sultan Di Gall Te Chumi Laindi A) Chall Yar Pehley Roti Kha Lo Tuhano Bhuk Lagi Honi (Te Naal Pyar Nal Sultan Nu Apney Tu Wakh Kar Daindi Te Ohna Nu Manjey Te Behan Da Ishara Kardi A) Te Naley Altaf Nu V Bula Lawo Mery Putt Ne Sawerey Nashta V Dhang Naal Nai Keeta C

Sultan: Yar Tu Iddan Kar K Menu Meri Roti De Dayo, Menu Bohat Jaldi Wa. Menu Apney Numberdaar Ne Nikki Jahi Wangar Pai C Kall. Me Cheti Cheti Ohna De Khet Jana. Ohna Da Ik Wiga Jameen Ch Hall Chalawney Wa Kyu K Ohna Da Tractor Kharab Hoya Te Shehar Gaya Theek Hon Lai. Me Hall Wah K Murna Wa. Tussi Iddan Karo K Altaf Di Roti Ohdey Pichey Ee Lai Jao Baghwich. Ohnu Roti V Khila Dyo Te Naley Ohdey Nal Thora Hath Bata Dayo Bi Cheti Waihley Ho Jayo. Inni Der Nu Me Murr Aao Ga Te Phir Pathey Le K Ghar Nu Chaley Jawa Ge.

Parveen: Chalo Theek Aa Jee.  (Parveen Kamrey Cho Kuj Bhandey Laya K Sultan Da Nashta Ohnu De Daindi Aa Te Altaf Da Nashta Banh K Haveli Tu Bahar Nikal Jandi Aa. Haveli Tu Dass Killey Door Amrood Te Maltey Da Bagh C Jidhey Andar Pathey Beejey Hoye C Passwan Lai, 10 Killey Da Bagh C Jo K Inna Ucha C Keh Ohdey Andar J Kar Koi Banda Howey Te Bahar Waley Kisey Bandey Nu Najar Nai Aa Sakda C. Bagh D Andar Pathey Wadhey Altaf Nu Kafi Bukh Lag Chuki C. Oh Cheti Cheti Pathey Wadh Rahya C Te Eh Soch Rahya C K Shayad Ammi Roti Le K Aa Gai Honi Haveli.

Altaf Bajwa Bohat Sohna Jawan C. Apney Payo Tu 3 Inch Ucha Qad Te Commando Jawan Warga Tagra Te Sakht Jism. Gora Chitta Rang Chori Chati Te Bareek Muchan Te Nikki Nikki Darhi, Sachi Bi Jawan Kudian De Dill Di Dharkan C Altaf Bajwa. Ajj Altaf Ne V Payo Wang Chardar Te Qameej Paye Hoi C.
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Parveen: Altaf Putt ! Ve Altaf Putt ! (Parveen Bagh De Andar Ja K Altaf Nu Awaz Daindi Aa

Altaf: Jee Ammi Jaan. Me Edhar Wa

Parveen: Acha Putt, Me Aa Gai Teri Roti Le K. Parveen Altaf Wall Tur Paidi Aa Jithey Altaf Passwan Lai Barsan De Pathey Wadh Rahya Bagh De Andar

Parveen Kol Pohanchdi Aa Altaf De.

Altaf: Ammi Jee Assalam O Alaikum (Pathey Wadhney Chadd Dinada Wa Te Uth K Khara Ho Janda Wa)

Parveen: Wa Alaikum Assalam Putt

Altaf: Ammi Jee Bohat Bhuk Laggi Menu. (Pathian Walli Palli Thalley Vicha Dinda Wa Cheti Cheti.

Parveen: Maa Sadqey Jawey, Dekh Tan, Me Makhan Waley Parothey Le K Aai Wan Apney Putt Lai. (Roti Waley Bartan Te Lassi Wali Gadwi Thaley Palli Utey Rakh Daini A) Kha La Rajj K Mera Putt. Menu Pata Tu Sawerey Chajj Naal Nashta Nai C Keeta.

Altaf: Ammi Jee Baitho Tussi V Kha Lao Merey Naal.

Parveen: Nai Put Me Te Kha K Aai Gharo, Puttar Tu Nashta Kar Le Te Menu Dass Me Teri Help Kar Dinni Wan Kamm Wich.

Altaf: Nai Ammi Jee Tussi Baitho Bus Me Nabair Laina Hunney Ee Kamm (Palli Te Beh K Nashta Shura Kar Dinda A Altaf)

Parveen: Nai Putt Aapa Dono Rall K Nabair Lainey Wa Kamm. Tenu Pata V Aa K Wassem Te Nusrat College Tu Aan Waley Honey. Ohna Nu Roti Pani Daina Painda Menu Time Naal. Jaddo Di Shugufta Maikey Gai Waa Ghar De Sarey Kamm Mery Uttey Aa Gaye Wa. (Nusrat Bajwa Altaf Di Choti Sister Wa Te Waseem Bajwa Altaf De Chotey Veer Da Na Wa Dono Colleg Jandey Wa Shakargarh. Te Shugufta Altaf Di Ghar Wali Da Naa Wa. Jehri K Pichley 20 Dinna Tu Apni Maa De Ghar Sialkot Gai Hoi C Milan Lai.)

Altaf: Aaho Ammi Jaan. Tussi Theek Keh Rahe Oo. Iss Layee Te Me Keh Rahya Wan Ke Tussi V Bohat Thak Jandey Honey. Me Kar Lao Sara Kamm. Baji Sughra Da Wayah Na Kar Chukey Hondey Te Oh Tuhadey Naal Kam Karwandi Sarey (Sughra Bajwa Altaf Di Wadi Baji Da Naa Wa Jidhi Shadi 1 Saal Pehley Naal De Pind Wich Ohdi Phuphi Te Sultan Di Choti Sister De Ghar Kita C)

Parveen: Koi Naa Putt. Tu Fikar Na Karia Kar. Me Kehra Budhi Ho Gai. Me Te Ajjey V Bohat Kamm Kar Laini Wa Te Bilkul Nai Thakdi. (Parveen Apney Nashta Kardey Putt Nu Barey Pyar Nal Waikh Rahi C. Altaf Apni Maa Da Bohat Khayal Rakhda C, Bohat Pyar Karda C Ghar De Sarey Jiyan Naal. Oh Khush Ho Rahi C K Ohdey Bachey Bohat Saoo C.

Altaf: Tussi Idda Karo, Nusrat Te Waseem Lai Thorey Jinney Amrood Te Maltey Tor Lawo. Me Cheti Cheti Pathey Rehri Te Ladd Laina Wan Unni Der Nu. (Altaf Pathey Khotey Rehrey Te Ladd K Pind Le K Janda C Har Roj)

Parveen: Theek Aa Putt Keh K Bagh Andar Chali Jandi Aa. (Inni Der Nu Altaf V Naashta Kar Chukia C. Oh Cheti Nal Pathey Chuk K Thori Door Kharey Gadha Gaddi Te Laddan Lagg Janda. Altaf Bohat Phurti Wala Jawan C. Desi Khorakh Naal , Makhan Malayan Naal Palya C Parveen Ne Apney Sarey Bachian Nu Te Naaley Apney Ghar Waley Nu)

Parveen Ne Pehlan Kujh Amrood Torey. Phir Maltey Labhan Lag Pai. Maltey Da Mosam Ja Reha C Te Koi Koi Dana Ee Reh Gaya C Kissey Kissey Bootey Te. Aakhir Ohnu Ik Do Bootian Tu Koi Ath Dass Maltey Labh Jandey Ne. Ohney Maltey Te Amrood Apni Chadar Di Jholi Bana K Ohdey Wich Rakhey Hoyee C.

Bagh Wali Jameen De Naal 5 Killey Kammad Lagya Hoya C. Parveen Turdi Turdi Bairi De Ik Darkht Kol Pohanch Gai . Ohney Kharey Kharey Uppar Hath Kar K Kuj Bair V Thorey Te Chardar Andar Rakh Laye. Kujh Din Pehlan Altaf Ne Iss Bairi Tu Choti Makhi Da Shehad Utaria C. Jehri Tehni Te Shehad Lagya C Oh Tehni Bairi De Darakht Thaley Aa Pai C Te Hun Tak Sukk Chuki C. Tehni Kafi Moti Te Wadi C, Te Bairi De Kandey V Us Tehni De Naal Lagey Hoye C Jehrey K Suk Jan Kar K Sakht Ho Chukey Si.

Parveen Ne Vekhia K Altaf Ne Pathey Lad Laye Ne Rehrey Te Oh Altaf Wall Tur Pai Te Naley Ik Mota Jeha Bair Apney Mooh Wich Paa K Kha Rahi Si. Parveen Bairi De Thalon Altaf Waley Turri Ee Si K Kammad De Wicho Do Giddar Yakdam Nikal K Bairy Wall Nasdey Aa. Ik Giddar Dujey Te Pichey Lagya Hoya C. Jaddo Oh Giddar Cheekdey Hoye Parveen De Bilkul Agyo Di Langdey Ne Te Parveen Buri Tarah Naal Darr Jandi Te Ik  Cheti Naal Pichey Nu Hatdi Aa. Ik Hath Naal Chadar Phari Hoi C Jiddey Wich Amrood Te Maltey Te Bair Si, Dooja Oh Darr Bohat Gai C, Teeja Ohda Pair Murr Janda A  Te Parveen Apney Aap Ne Sambhal Na Pandi Te Bairi De Thaley Payi Hoi Bairi Di Sukhi Sshakh De Uttey Bund De Bhaar Dig Jandi A. Diggan De Naal Ee Bairi De Chotey Chotey Bareek Bareek Kandey Parveen Di Lawn Di Patli Jehi Shalwar De Wichon Langh K Parveen De Lakk, Chuttar Te Pattan Wich Kubh Jandey Ne. Parveen Da Wajan V Thora Nai C Iss Kar K Kai Ik Kandey Parveen Da Bhaar Nai Seh Sakdey Te Parveen De Reshmi Gorey Chutran Te Pattan Andar Tut Jandey Ne Te Parveen De Narm O Mulaim Jism Andar Khub Jandey Ne. Harbra K Parveen De Mooh Cho Ik Cheek Nikaldi A Te Mooh De Andar Bair V Si Hehra Oh Uss Time Chaba Rahi C, Diggan Te Cheek Maran Kar K Parveen Di Jaban Dandan Thaley Piss Jandi Aa. Sachi Gall A K 5 Second De Andar Parveen Iddi Buri Tarh Naal Diggi C K Oh Bontar Gai C. Te Oh Ron Lag Payee C. Rondi V Kiwen Na, Ik Pair Di Moch, Dooja Bund Te Pattan Wich Tuttey Te Chubhey Hoye Bairi De Kandey, Teeji Dandan Haith Phassi Hoi Zuban.

Parveen Di Cheek Jiwen Ee Altaf De Kannan Te Payee, Oh Pathey Othey Ee Sutt K Bairi De Darakht Wall Dorya Jindey Thaleey Ohdi Jaan Tu Pyari Maa Bairi De Kandian Naal Bhari Shakh De Utey Bund De Bhar Diggi Payee C. Altaf Inni Teji Naal Nasya Parveen Wall K Bairi Tu Pehley Maltey De Bootey De Utoon Chakar Kattan Laga K Bairi De Lagey Ik Banney Tu Altaf Da Pair Tilak Gya Te Altaf Di Kalabaji Lag Gai. Te Kalabaji Lagdey Ee Altaf Di Chadar Khul Gai. Altaf Nu Apne Digan Di Koi Parwa C Na Khayal, Oh Bijli Wangu Uthya Te Apni Maa De Paira Wich Ja Baitha Godya Bhar. Altaf Di Chadar Pichey Ee Dig Gai C Jidha Shayad Altaf Nu Khayal Nai Rahya Us Time K Ohdi Chadar Khul K Ohdey Tu Wakh Ho Chuki C Te Oh Qameej De Thaley Bilkul Nanga C.

Altaf: Hayee Ammi Jaan Tussi Theek Te Haigey Je Naa. Altaf Bohat Pareshan Te Ghabraya Hoya C, Ohney Apney Hath Apni Maa Wall Wadhaye, Parveen Ne Peerh Naal Karohndian Hoya Apney Hath Altaf Walley Wadhaye. Altaf Ne Hath Phar K Parveen Nu Uthawn Layee Jor Laya, Par Shayad Oh Iss Cheez To Be Khabar C K Naa Sirf Ohdi Maa De Pair Ch Moch Aa Balke Ohdi Maa Bairi Di Kandian Bhari Sahkh De Uttey Diggi Hoyee Aa. Jiddan Ee Parveen Uppar Nu Uthi Ik Zordar Cheek Ohdey Mooh Cho Nikal Gai Uth K Behan Kar K Kai Darjan Kandey Hor Ohdi Roon Wargi Poli Bund Ch Tutt Gaye. Parveen De Rondey Mooh Chon Bus Inna Ee Nikalia Si

Parveen: “ Be Putt Meli Bunj Paat Gai Tandian Naarh”

Altaf Tu Apni Maa Di Eh Halat Waikhi Nai Gai, Ohdian Akhan Cho Athroo Tar Aaye. Jaddo Altaf Nu Samajh Aayee Ke Ohdi Maa Kandian Te Baithi A. Ohney Bijli Wang Phurti Naal, Apni Maa Nu Ohdian Bahwaa De Thalloo Di Hath Langha K Apnian Bahwaa Ch Bhar Lya Te Ik Dam Khara Ho Ho Gya. Kharey Hondian Naal Ee Do Kamm Hoye. Ik Te Bairi Di Shakh Vi Naal Ee Parveen De Pichey Chimbri Parveen De Naal Ee Khar Gai, Dooja Jiwen Ee Parveen Da Moch Wala Pair Jiwen Ee Jameen Te Lagya , Parveen Di Dard Naal Ik Hor Cheek Nikarl Gai.

Parveen: “Oooooooooyeee Mela Pail Tutt Gaya”

Altaf Buri Tarah Ghabraya Hoya C, Oh Apni Maa Nu Inni Takleef Ch Wekh K Androon Ro Rahya C, Te Ohno Us Wailey Apney Ma Ate Be Had Pyar Te Taras V Aa Rahya C. Ohnu Ajjey Tak Eh Ehsaas Nai C K Ohdi Chadar Khul K Dig Chuki A. Jiewn Ee Ohnu Ehsaas Hoya K Ohdi Maa Da Pair Ch Dard A, Ohney Apni Maa Ne Jor Nal Chuk K Apney Modhey Utey Sutt Lya Jiddan Ik Chotey Jahey Bachey Nu Chuk Laye Da Wa Jado Oh Dard Naal Ronda Howey. Dooja Kamm Altaf Ne Bohat Teji Naal Eh Keeta Keh Ohney Ik Jordar Jhatkey Naal Bairi Di Tehni Nu Khich K Door Sitt Ditta. Bairi Di Shakh Jiwen Ee Jameen Te Diggi, Altaf Nu Do Gallan Da Ehsas Hoya, Ik Te Eh K Bairi Di Shakh De Naal Ohdi Maa Di Khulley Pohnachian Wali Shalwar V Uttar K Shakh De Uttey Payee Sit E Dooja Eh K Ohdi Maa Di Chadar Vi Ik Passey Jameen Te Diggi Payee C Te Maltey, Amrood Te Bair Sarey Jameen Te Khilrey Paye Si. Oh Teji Naa Apni Maa Nu Apney Modhey Te Chuk K Wapis Murya Te Ohnu Hairat Da Ik Jhatka Lagya Jaddon Ohdi Najar Apne Thaley Diggey Hoye Chadrey Te Payee. Oh Ik Dam Ruk Gaya.

Ohdi Maa Dard Naal Kurah Rahi C. Bhanven Kandian Wali Shakh Ohdey Jisam Tu Wakh Hon Nal Bohat Sarey Kandey Ohdey Jism Cho Nikal Gaye San, Te Ohnu Kuj Sakoon Milya C Par Chubhey Hoye Kandian Di Jalan Te Andar Tuttian Hoya Kandian Di Peer Inni Ghat Nai Si Hoyee K Oh Eh Jaan Pandi K Ohdi Ssalwar Te Chadar Bairi Thaley Ney Te Oh Sirf Ik Qameej Tu Ilawa Poori Nangi Apney Janwan Putt De Mohdey Naal Lagi Hoi A, Ohdey Motey Te Sakht Mummey Altaf De Ik Modhey, Kann Te Gall Naal Buri Tarah Bhirey Hoye C, Ohdey Putt Da Ik Hath Thaloon Di Ohdey Dhidh Dawaley Liptya Hoya C Te Dooja Hath Uppron Di Ohdey Lakk Dawaley Liptya Hoya C, Kameej De Dono Palloo Altaf Dian Dono Bahwa Thalley Dab Gaye C, Jaddo Altaf Ne Ik Jhatkey Naal Apni Maa Nu Apney Modhey Uttey Sutya C, Ohdey Apney Qameej Da Palla V Ohdi Maa De Didh Thaley Dab Chukia C. Altaf Di Akhan De Samney Ohdi Maa Di Nangi Bund C, Jidhey Gorey Te Gulabi Chutran Te Kai Ik Surakh Nishan Te Halqey Ban Chukey Jithey Jithey Kandey Chubey San Othey Jism Laal Ho Chukia C. Altaf Di Maa Di Ik Latt Bahar Nu C Te Dooji Latt Altaf Dian Dono Lattan De Vichkar C Jiss Kar K Ohdi Maa Da Nanga Goda Ohdey Lun Nall Ragar Kha Rahya C.

Eh Sarian Gallan 5 Second De Andar Andar Altaf De Damagh Nu Jhanjhor Gayan. Altaf Sharam Naal Maran Warga Ho Gya Par Ohdi Maa Dian Dard Bharian Kurlatan Ohda Dill Cheer Rahya Si. Maa Di Takleef Da Ehsas Sharam De Ehsas Te Bazi Le Gya. Oh Apni Maa Nu Jaldi Tu Jaldi Iss Takleef Cho Kadhna Chaunda Si. Agley Ee Pall Oh Teji Naal Apni Maa Nu Le K Aggey Wadhya Te Pathian Wali Palli Kol Le Gaya Jithey Roti Wale Bartan V Payee C. Altaf Ne Bohat Pyar Naal Apni Maa Nu Palli De Uttey Wakhi De Bhar Lamma Pa Ditta. Te Ohdey Mooh Waley Passey Godya Bhar Beh Gya.

Apni Maa Da Sir Phar Apni Jholi Vich Rakhya Te Taqreeban Rondey Hoye Bolya

Altaf: Ammi G ! Ammi G

Parveen: (Holi Holi Apnian Akhan Kholdi A. Ohdey Samney Pichli Hoi Museebat Ik Filam De Trailer Wango Ohdian Akhan Ago Langh Jandi A. Oh Bari Takleef Naal Apney Puttar Wal Waikhdi A Jiddey Mukh Te Us Time Sari Dunia Di Mohabbat Jama Hoi Payee Si Te Akhan Wich Athroo Tardey Paye Si Jehrey Ohdi Apni Maa Naal Dunia Di Sb Tu Sachi Mohabbat Di Nishani Si. Iss Ehsas Ne Ohdi Takleef Bohat Had Tak Kamm Kar Ditti Si. Parveen Bajwa Di Juban Dand Thaley Peesi Gayee Si Te Zuban Te Saar Pe Rahya Si. Ohney Apna Moonh Lkholya Te Apni Zuban Bahar Kadhi Zuban De Bahar Aan Kar K Parveen Bajwa De Moonh Da Thora Jeha Thuk Ohdey Laal Gulabi Bullan Uttey Phail Gaya. Thuk De Naal Halka Jeha Lahoo V Shamil Ho Gya C. Halat Da Taqaza Ik Passey, Par Eh Manzar Altaf Bajwa Nu Pagal Karan Wastey Kafi C. Altaf Bajwa De Hath Wich Ohdi Pyari Maa Da Mukh C, Maa Da Sir Jholi Vich C, Maa De Wall Khulley San, Maa Dian Akhan Ro Ro K Nasheelian Te Sharabi Jehyan Hoyan Payyan Si. Maa Di Hill Ubhru Hoi Se. Wadhey Wadhey Gol Te Sakht Mummey Ohdi Maa De Seeney Te Sir Chuk K Kharey Si, Maa Dian Nangia Lattan Jehria K Dudh Wargian Chitian Sit E Sooraj Di Roshni Ch Chamak Rahyan Si.

Din De Bara Da Time Bagh De Vichkar, Door Door Tak Banda Na Bandey Di Zaat. 38 Saal Di Ik Mutiar Rann, 19 Sal De Gabhroo Jawan Jutt Di Jholi Vich Inj Payee Si K Koi Budha Vi Altaf Di Than Hund Te Oh Josh Na Paat Janda.

Parveen Bajwa Ne Apni Zunban Jiwen Ee Bahar Kaddi, Te Iddi Masoomiat Naal Apney Put Nu Vikhayee K Vaikh Putt Teri Maa Di Zuban Sar Rahi A Dand Thalley Piss K, Pata Nai Altaf Bajwa Nu Ki Sujhya, Ohney Apni Chan De Totey Wari Sohni Maa Da Sir Uttey Nu Chukia  Te Apna Sir Thalley Nu Jhuka K Ik Pal Tu Pehlan Apni Maa Di Zuban Apney Mooh Vich Bhar Layee.

Jaddon Parveen Di Peerh Naal Loosdi Zuban Ohdey Puttar Ne Apney Mooh Vich Paai Te Ohnu Ik Dam Inna Sakoon Milya K Ohney Koi Viroh Na Kita Te Na Chaundey Hoya Wi Ohdia Akhan Band Ho Gaya. Apni Ammi Jaan Di Garam Te Mithi Zuban Te Shehad Nalu Ve Mithey Hoth Jaddon Altaf De Bullan Te Mooh Vich Aaye Te Altaf Bajwa Saroor Te Lazzat Di Uss Bulandi Te Ja Chukia Si K Ohdian Wi Akhan Band Ho Gaya Te Oh Kissey Bachey Tarah Apni Maa Di Zuban Te Hoth Apney Hothan Te Mooh Vich Bhar K Inj Choos Rahya Si Jiwen Koi Shehad Da Payala Ohdey Mooh Nu La Ditta Howey Kissey Ne.

Altaf Ne Apna Ik Goda Apni De Maa De Sir Thalley Rakh Ditta C Te Dooja Goda Ik Passey Nu Bahar Kadhya Hoya Si. Parveen Da Ik Hath Apney Puttar Di Kamar Te Ja Chukia C Te Dooja Hath Ohney Apney Didh Te Rakhya Hoya C. Ohda Putt Inney Pyar Naal Ohdi Zuban Choos Rahya C K 2 Mint De Andar Andar Ohnu Apnian Sarian Dardan Bhul Chukia Si. Oh Iss Time Eh V Bhull Chuki C K Oh Apney Puttar Dian Bahwan Ch A. Bhawen Ajjey Tak Dono Maa Puttar De Damagh Wich Koi Ghalt Wichar Nai C, Par Phir V Fitrat Te Jibbilat De Kuj Apney Dastoor Te Taqazey Hondey Ne, Pata Nai Kiss Taqazey De Tehat Par Parveen Bajwa Ne Apni Zuban Hor V Apney Putt De Mooh Vich Waar Ditti Te Ohdey Saooo Putt Ne Hor Josh Te Hor Pyar Wich Apni Maa Di Zuban Te Hothan Nu Chunghan Te Chattan Lag Paya. “Annha Ki Mangey Do Akhan” Parveen Bajwa Di Zuban Jehri Peerh Naal Sarh Rahi Si Ohdey Wastey Ohdey Puttar Da Zuban Choosna Kisey Marham Tu Ghat Nai Si. Pareen Bajwa Ne Wi Wapas Apney Putt De Hothan Nu Chusan Lag Pai. Altaf Bajwa Wastey Eh Response Kissey Nashey Tu Wadh Sabat Hoya Te Oh Kissey Hor Ee Dunia Wich Pohanch Gya. 5 Mint De Andar Andar Qudrat Ne Maa Te Puttar Nu Pyar, Mohabbat Te Lazzat Da Oh Rang Te Oh Sawad Chakha Ditta Si Keh Oh Kaddi Khawab Ch Vi Tasawwar Nai Kar Sakdey Si.

Parveen Bajwa Ne Apna Oh Hath Jehra Apney Didh Te Rakhya Hoya Si, Apna Balance Karn Lai Chukia Te Apney Put De Ik Bajoo Te Rakh Ditta. Ohney Bajoo Nu Ghutt K Phar Lay Ate Apney Putt Di Zuban Choosan Lag Payee. Ajay Tak Jo Ho Rahya C Oh Achanak C Te Aihdey Wich Ohna Dona Di Koi Soch Ya Salah Shamil Nai C Balkeh Eh Te Daramai Te Hadsati Tour Te Ho Rahya C. Maa Apney Dard Da Ilaj Karwa Rahi C, Te Putt Eh Faraz Khoob Nibha Rahya C. Oh Te Apni Maa Naal Inna Pyar Karda C K Koi Ohdi Jaan Kadh Lawey Par Ohdi Maa Nu Koi Takleef Na Howey.

Altaf Bajwa Nu Zuban Choosdian Koi 7 Mint Ho Gaye Si. Parveen Bajwa Di Zuban Da Dard Bilkul Khatam Ho Gaya Si Oh Apney Puttar De Mooh Wich Mooh Paa K Madhosh Jahi Hoi Payee Si, Te Apney Ik Hath Naal Apney Puttar Da Ik Pathar Wang Majboot Bajoo Nu Ghut Rahi Si. Achanak Parveen De Zehan Vich Ik Jhmaka Jeha Loya. Ohdey Zehan Ne Tin Sawal Keetey.

1: Merey Puttar Da Ik Bajoo Merey Sir De Thalley?

2: Merey Putt Da Dooja Bajoo Mery Uppar Waley Modhey Te?

3: Merey Putt Da Teeja Bajoo Merey Hath Wich Aa?

Ik Hor Jhamaka Hoya, Bajoo Te Do Hundey Ne Har Ik De. Eh Teeja Kithoo Aa Gya, Ohney Apney Putt Da Teeja Bajoo Zor Naal Ghut K Vekhya, Bajoo Inna Mota C Jinni Ik Jawan Bandey Di Kalai Hondi Wa. Par Ohdey Puttar Da Eh Bajoo Bohat Garam C. Parveen Ne Kuj Sochdey Hoya Hath Bajoo Na Ragardian Hoya Poora Pichey Nu Lai Gai, Ohnu Apni Zindagee Da Hairat Da Sb Tu Wadha Jhatka Lagya, Ohdey Hath Wich Ohdey Jawan Putt De Tattey Si. Altaf Bajwa Nu Jaddon Apney Tattian Te Apni Maa Da Hath Mehsoos Hoya. Dono Maa Putt Ne Ik Doojey Di Zuban Choosni Band Kar Ditti.

5 Second Guzar Gaye. Poorey Bagh Wich Sannata Chaa Gya, Dono Maa Putt Jiwen Pathar De Do But Ban Gaye Hon. Parveen Bajwa Pichley 5 Mint To Apney Puttar Da 10 Inch Lamma Te Kalai Jinna Mota Lull Apni Hath Naal Eh Samajjh K Daba Rahi C Keh Eh Ohdey Puttar Da Bajoo Aa.

Ik Jhatkey Naal Parveen Apne Puttar Di Jholi Wicho Pichey Hati, Te Ik Jhatkey Naal Ohda Puttar Altaf Bajwa Uth K Khara Ho Gya. Parveen Bajwa Kujh Kehndi Ohda Puttar Nass K Bairi De Thalley Chala Gya. Ohney Cheti Naal Chadar Chuk K Apney Lakk Naal Banhi, Apni Maa Di Sir Di Chadar, Te Bairi Di Shakh Naal Chimri Apni Maa Di Shalwar Nu Wakh Kar K, Shalwar Nalu Sarey Kandey Lah K, Dono Cheejan Le Ke Apni Maa Wall Nasya, Ohdey Jaan Tak Ohdi Maa Pathian Wali Palli Naal Apnian Nangian Lattan Dhakk Chuki Si.

Parveen Nu Pata C K Jo Hoya Hadsati Taur Te Hoya. Oh Bohat Samajhdar Aurat C, Oh Apney Sohney Putt Ne Sharminda Nai C Karna Chaundi. Oh Bilkul Noram Boli

Parveen: Puttar Menu Rehrey Te Charha K Haveli Le Chall. Apney Payo De Wapis Aan To Pehlan, Haveli Le Ja K Mere Sarey Kandey Kadh De.

Altaf: Jee Ammi Jaa (Altaf Di Halat Inj Ee See Jiwen Kisey Ne Ohnu Bohat Goorhi Neend To Jaga K Khara Kar Ditta Howey. Oh Apney Ik Hath Wich Apni Maa Di Shalwar Te Doojey Hath Vich Apni Sohni Maa Di Chadar Le K Hakka Bakka khara C, Jb K  Ohdi Maa De Gullabi Bullan Uttey Bohat Shararti Te Qatal  Muskan C.
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Ajj raat update as javey gi bai.
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(21-03-2020, 02:50 PM)doonknightz Wrote:  bahut sohna likh rahe ho.....enna detail wich......i really loving it......swaad aa gy pad ke.....pls continue rakhyo......
tuhade kol sacchi badi amazing writing skill hai ......so good
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Dar Haqeeqat Altaf Bohat Saoo Put C, Hun Tak Jo V Hoya C Oh Bilkul Ghair Iradi Taur Te Ho Gya C. Asal Ch Oh Apney Aap Te Bohat Sharminda C, Apni Maa Di Zuban Choosan Naal Ohda Lunn Inj Aakar K Khara Ho Gya C, Ohnu Eh Gall Khadi Jandi C, Ki Sochdi Howey Gi Ohdi Maa. Par Doojey Pasey Ohdi Maa Da Normal Muskrawna Ohnu Hor V Pareshan Kar Reha C. Ohdey Kolu Apni Maa De Samney Khara Hona Bohat Mushkal Ho Gya C. Ohda Dill Kar Reha C Keh Oh Othon Nass Jawey.

Altaf: Ammi Jaan Tussi Eh Kaprey Pharo, Me Rehra Le K Aaunda Waa. (Oh Kaprey Maa De Lagey Rakh K Rehrey Wall Tur Painda A.)

Parveen: Acha Putt Theek Aa (Parveen Apney Shareef Put Di Halat Samajh Chuki C, Ohnu V Apney Aap Te Sharam Jehi Aa Rahi C, Par Iss Gall Vich Ehda V Koi Qasoor Nai C, Sb Kuj Normal C Par Ik Gall Ohnu Normal Nai C Lag Rahi, Oh C Ohdey Gabhur Jawan Puttar Da Khotey Warga Mota Lull. Hayee Rabba Ehda Lull Idda Wada We, Kinj Ho Gya? Kiddan Laindi Honi Ehdi Ghar Walieh Soch K Ohdey Andar Ik Agg Jai Lag Jandi A, Idda Wadda Te Mota Lun Aohney Kadi Nai Si Vekhia. Ohney Apni Soch Nu Lagam Ditti, Jazbat Nu Dantia, Te Bari Ookhi Ho K Apni Shalwar Charai, Te Khari Ho Gai, Ohdey Moch Wala Pair Bohat Dard Kar Reha C, Oh Doojey Pair Te Bhar Paa K Bohat Mushkil Naal Khari C K Altaf Rehra Najdeek Le K Aa Gya. Ohney Barey Pyar Naal Apni Maa Nu Sahara De K Rehrey De Uttey Wakhi Bhar Pathia De Uttey Ee Lita Dita. Te Khota Rehra Haveli Nu Tor Ditta.

Altaf Di Himmat Nai Ho Rai C, Apni Maa Naal Gal Karan Di, Oh Sharam Naal Laal Peela Hoi Ja Reha C, Ohdey Mooh Cho Ik Mithi Te Payari Jahi Khushbo Aa Rahi C Jiwen Ohney Koi Mitha Banarsi Paan Khada Howey. Eh Khusbo Ohdi Maa Di Zuban Te Hothan De Rass Di C, Jinu Ohney Amrat Samajh K Rajj Rajj K Peeta C. Ik Passey Sawad Di Lehar Ohdey Loon Loon Wich Doar Gai Te Naal Ee Ohnu Phir Tu Sharam Da Bukhar Hon Lag Paya. Par Oh Shant C, Q K Ik Te Ohdi Maa Ne Bilkul Ghussa Nai C Keeta Te Dooja Jo V Hoya C Oh Achanak Hoya C.

Parveen Eh Sari Soorat E Hall Nu Na Sirf Enjoy Kar Rahi C Balke Oh Soch Rahi C Ke Kinj Oh Apney Sohney Putt Nu Normal Raka Sakey. Oh Bohat Samajhdar Aurat C, Ohdey Damagh Wich Kuj Ho Ee Chal Reha C, Par Sb Tu Pehley Oh Apney Putt Ne Normal Karna Chaundi C

Parveen: Ve Puttar ! Apney Pyo Nu Call Kar K Ohdey Kolu Puch Bai Kithey Wa. Te Putt Mera Khayal Aa K Aapan Ghar Nu Chalye Hun Sidhey, Meri Tabeat Kharab Wa Te Naley Menu Bohat Dard Ho Rahya Pair Vich Te Jithey Kandey Chubhey C Othey Bohat Dard Ho Rahya Wa. Ghar Vich Kuryan Merey Kandey Vi Kadh Dain Gyan Te Naley Merey Pair Ch Malish V Kar Dain Gyan.

Altaf: Han G Ammi Jan Eh Gall Theek Aa Ohdi Jaan Vich Jaan Aa Gai. Aapan Ghar Ee Chaldey Wan Altaf Bolya, Te Naley Nusrat Te Waseem College Chon Aan Waley Aa. (Parveen Ne Note Keeta K Iss Gall Te Altaf Bohat Khush C K Apni Maa De Chitran Choo Kandey Ohnu Nai Kadhney Pain Ge. Oh Samajh Gai C Keh Ohdey Puttar Ch Bahli Sharam Te Naley Oh Apni Maa Tu Darda V Bohat C Q Keh Parveen Bajwa Tu Sarey Ghar Waley Dardey Si Kyu K Parveen Bari Asool Pasand Aurat Si Te Ghalat Gall Te Jhaar K Rakh Dindi Si) Altaf Apney Da Number Mila K Phone Apni Maa Nu Phara Dainda A, Phone Te Parveen Apney Ghar Waley Sultan Nu Dasdi A K Ohdi Tabeat Kharab Aa Te Oh Dono Maa Put Pathey Le Ke Ghar Nu Chaley Wa. Sultan Bajwa Ne Koi Etraz Na Keeta Te Dono Maa Put Pind Pohach Gaye. Altaf Ne Pehley Apni Maa Nu Ghar Chadya, Barey Pyar Nal Mohda La K Apni Maa Nu Ghar De Andar Le Ja K Ohna De Bedroom Ch Chadd Dainda Wa Te Cheti Murr K Aan Da Keh K Pathey Le K Siddha Haveli Walley Khota Rehra Le K Chal Painda. Inni Dair Nu Nusrat Te Waseem College Tu Murr Aandey Ne Te Jaddon Apni Maa Da Hal Vekhdey Ne Te Pareshan Ho Jandey Ne.

Parveen Waseem Nu Kehndi Aa Keh Oh Tandoor Tu Roti Le Aawey Te Fridge Chu Salan Garam Karey. Waseem Bajar Nu Tur Painda Te Parveen Nusrat Nu Dasdi Aa K Oh Kandian Wali Tehni Te Dig Payee C, Oh Nusrat Nu Asal Gall Nai Dasdi Bus Inna Ee Dasdi A Te Nusrat Nu Kehdi A Keh O Chitran Te Pattan Ch Tuttey Kandey Kadh Devey Te Naley Pair Ch Tel La Deway.
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Nusrat Ne Jadon Sooi Te Chimti Di Nok Nall Tuttey Kandey Kadhey Te Parveen Bohat Tarap Rahi C Par Ohney Sabar Keeta. Nusrat Ne Saryon Da Tail Moch Waley Pair Wich Laa Ditta. Inni Dair Nu Waseem Rotian Le Aaya Te Dono Bhain Bharawan Ne Lunch Karan Lag Paye.

Parveen Nu Sukoon Jeha Mil Gaya C. Oh Akhan Band Kar Ke Aram Karn Lag Payee Te Ohdi Soch Phir Apney Putt De Lull Waley Chali Gaye, Hayee Rabba, Kidda Mota Lull A Altaf Da Kisey Manji De Seroo Wang Mota, Khota Kissey Than Da. Me Te Bajoo Ee Samajh K Phari Rakhya, Naley Sakht Kina C Pathar Wango, Uffffffffffffff Altaf Di Ghar Wali Kiddi Khush Naseeb Aa. Parveen Doongi Soch Wich Eh Gallan Sochi Ja Rahi Si. Ohdey Ghar Waley Sultan Bajwey Da Lunn Wi Wadhya Si Par Altaf Warga Te Nai C. Je Kaddi Altaf Da Lunn Nanga Kar K Vekh Lawwan Te Kina Sawad Aaoo. Sachi Bohat Wadda Lunn A Altaf Da. Parr Kiddan Diakh Paoo Gi Altaf Te Kuryan Tu V Bohta Sharmeela Te Naley Ohda Saga Putt C, Bohat Mushkal Kamm C. Par Parveen Kuj Na Kuj Plan Kar Rahi Si.

Nusrat Te Waseem Me Khana Kha Lya C Te Oh V Kuj Aram Karn Layee Ooper Apney Apney Room Wich Chaley Jandey Ne.

Nusrat Apni Wadhi Baji Tu Choti C Do Saal Te Apney Bhara Waseem Kolon Ik Saal Wadhai Si. Nusrat 17 Salan Di Kanwai Kuri Si 2nd Year Di Student Si Uchi Lammi Gori Chitti, Sakhat, Bharwen Te Nokelay Nipplan Waley Mummey, Moti Gol Matol Bund Picho Ubhri Hoyee Te Nazuk Te Lachkeli Kamar, Sohney Angrejan Warge Nain Naqash, Sachi Bohat Sohni Jawani C.
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Waseem Sb Pain Bharawan Kolon Nikka Te Ladla Puttar C Parveen Te Sultan Bajwa Da. Athlete Kisey Sports Man Warga Jisam Te Muchan Maria Marin Hun Phutt Rahia Si.

Altaf Bohat Kashmakash Da Shikar C. Ik Passey Oh Apney Maa De Hussan Te Maa Kolu Mili Qurbat De Nashey Wich Choor C Te Doojey Passey Ohda Zameer Ohnu Malamat Kar Reha C. Oh Ik Muslman C Te Ohdey Dhram Wich Maa Ne Nanga Vekhna Bohat Wadda Gunnah C. Ohnu Iss Gall Di Bahli Sharam C Keh Be Dhayani De Wich Pata Nai Kiwen Ohda Lunn Akar Gya C, Te Ohdi Maa Ne Ohda Lunn Nu Pharya Wi Si, Ghutia Vi Si, Te Gussa Vi Nai Hoi. Oh Kamm V Kar Rahya C Te Ajeeb Jahi Jung V Lar Rahya C. Ohney Jadon Ik War Phir Sochya K Kidan Ohney Apni Maa Nu Apnian Bahwan Ch Chukia, Kiddan Kandian Wali Tehni De Nall Apni Maa Di Shalwar Lah Ditti, Kiddan Maa De Sexy Te Moti Bund Te Chuttar Vekhey, Kina Mast Ho K Maa De Hoth, Zuban Choos Choos K Nachor Ditti, Ohnu Sb Yaad Aa Rahya C K Ohdi Parri Wargi Sohni Maa Ne Vi Mohabbat Vich Mast Ho K Ohdey Bull Choosey C. Eh Sochanian Sochdian Altaf De Lull Akar Gya Te Chadrey Nu Tamboo Bna Ditta. Lull Inna Zor Naal Jhatkey Mar Reha C Keh Altaf Nu Kamm Chadd K Manji Te Behna Pya. Ohda Lull Ohdi Sharm Te Bazi Le Gya C. Oh Vekhna Chahda Si Keh Ohdi Maa Da Ki Response Howey Ga Hun Jadd Oh Ghar Jawey Ga. Ohnu Ikk Gall Di Tassali Si Keh Ohney Kuj Vi Jaan Bujh K Nai Si Keeta. Ohney Te Jo Wi Keeta C Apni Jaan Tu Wadh Pyari Maa Di Takleef Nu Khata Karan Lai Keeta C. Eh Soch K Ohnu Kaafi Tassali Ho Gai. Ohney Cheti Cheti Kam Naberia. Te Hath Mooh Dohon Lag Paya. Pata Nai Kyon Ohda Dill Kar Reha Si Bai Oh Udd K Apni Maa Kol Jawey Te Puchey Bai Hun Te Takleef Nai Ho Rahi A.
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Parveen Vi Apney Bed Te Chadar Andar Akhan Band Kar K Kissey Lammi Soch Vich Dubbi Hoi Si. Oh V Kashmakash Vich Si Keh Ohda Puttar Ki Sochda Hona. Ohdey Samney Ajj Di Hoi Sari Kahani Ik Film Wang Chal Rahi C. Ik Passey Te Oh Apney Janwan Putt Dian Garam Sahwan, Tapdey Hoth Te Kambdi Jeebh Da Att Nasha Te Sawad Nu Ajey Tak Apney Hothan, Te Zuban Utey Mehsoos Kar Rahi Si. Dooja Oh Eh Soch Soch K Pagal Hoi Ja Rai C Keh Ohney Ghato Ghat 2 Mint Apney Putt Da Lull Ghtt Ka Phari Rakhia Si Te Muthian Bhardi Rahi Si. Te Eh Soch Soch K Ohdi Phuddi Pharki Ja Rahi Si. Parveen Bajwa Nu Bus Ik Ee Fikar C Keh Ohda Puttar Ohdey Barey Ki Sochda Howey Ga. Ohney Apney Puttar De Hoth V Choosey San Te Ohda Mota Akarya Hoya Lull Vi Apney Hathan Wich Pharya Si. Kidrey Ohda Puttar Ohnu Ghalat Na Samajh Rahya Howey. Par Oh Ki Kardi Ohnu Ohdey Puttar Ne Att Sakoon Ditta Si, Ohney Kinni Fikar Te Mohabbat Naal Apni Maa Da Dukh Wandia Si. Sachi Gall Te Eh Si Keh Ohdey Puttar Ne Jinney Nashey Wich Ohdey Bull Te Juban Choosey San Oh Pagal Ho Gai Si. Ohda Ghar Wala Ik Jut Si, Ohney Kaddi Ohdey Mooh Ch Mooh Paa K Pyar Nai Si Kita, Oh Te Bus Gallant E Bullan De Uttey Ee Pyar Karda Si. Iddan Zunba Nai Si Chughi. Ohney Mehsoos Keeta K Ohda Puttar Ohnu Ohdey Ghar Waley Tu Wadh Pyar Karda A. Chalo Jo V Si, Oh Bohat Khush Si. Oh Apney Putt Nu Iss Pyar Da Jawab Dena Chahndi Si Te Iss Lai Ohnu Sb Tu Pehlan Apney Sharmeeley Puttar Di Sharam, Jhaka Te Darr Khatam Karna Si Oh Iss Layee Kujh Plan Kar Chuki Si. Ohnu Hun Apney Puttar De Ghar Aan Di Udeek Si. Oh Apney Puttar Da Mohabbat Di Zuban Nal Shukaria Ada Karna Chahndi Si. Eh Sochdey Sochdey Ohdi Akh Lag Gai.

Sham Di Azan Hoi Te Sultan Bajwa Vi Havelly Aa Gya Ohney Tractor Khara Keeta Dono Pyo Puttar Ghar Aa Gaye.

Ghar Aundia Altaf Bajwa Ne Apne Payo Sultan Bajwa Nu Ajj Di Vapri Sari Kahani Dassi Par Puri Detail Vich Nai Gya, Bus Eh Ee Dasya K Odhi Maa Da Pair Tilak Gya C Te Oh Kandian Wali Tehni Te Diggi Si Te Ohdey Pari Wich Moch Aa Gai Si.

Ghar De Andar Parveen Bajwa Sutti Pai Si, Nusrat Bajwa Te Waseem Bajwa Dono Bjhain Bhara Kitchen Wich Khaney Di Tayyari Kar Rahe Si.

Ghar Aa K Sultan Bajwa Siddha Apney Kamrey Wich Chala Gya Jithey Ohdi Pyari Ghar Wali Pair Di Moch Nal Sutti Payee Si. Altaf Bajwa Te Darr De Marey Siddha Uppar Apney Kamrey Wich Turr Gya. Ohnu Darr Si Keh Ohdi Maa Kidhrey Ohdey Payo Nu Eh Naa Dass Devey Keh Me Apni Di Zuban Te Bull Choosey San Te Naley Apney Lull Khara Keeta Si.
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Sultan Bajwa Apney Room Vich Gya, Parveen De Kol Baitha, Ohnu Jagaya Ohda Haal Chal Puchya Te 5 Mint Baad Uth Gya Eh Keh K Chala Gya Keh Oh Naha K Roti Khawey Ga Te Us Ton Baad Lambaar De Derey Te Panchayat Si Koi Uthey Jawey Ga.

Sultan Bajwa Washroom Wich Chala Gya Te Parveen Bajwa De Dill Wich Jiwen Churri Phir Gai, Jiss Bandey Te Sari Umar Jaan Chirki Ohney Ohnu Inj Normal Deel Keeta Si. Ohnu Eh Reh Reh K Khayal Aai Ja Reha Si Keh Ohda Putt Ohnu Ohdey Ghar Waley Tu Wadh Payar Karda Wa. Naal Ee Ohnu Eh Khayal Aaya Keh Ohda Putt Kithey Wa. Oh Ajey Tak Aaya Kyu Nahi. Ohnu Pareshani Ho Gai. Oh Dar Rai Si Keh Ohda Putt Darda Te Sharmanda Bhanwen Ghar Ee Na Awey Kidrey Bahro Bahar Apney Sohrian Te Na Turr Gya Howey. Oh Dukhi Jai Ho Gai. Oh Apney Puttar Nu Vekhna Chah Rahi Si. Oh Apney Puttar Nu Dasna Char Rahi Si Keh Oh Apney Putt Naal Naraj Ya Gussa Nai Aa. Oh Apney Puttar Te Sadqey Wari Hona Chahndi Si.

Sultan Bajwa Naha Dho K, Roti Kha K Bahar Chala Gya, Waseem Ne Altaf Bajwa Nu Roti Da Puchya Te Altaf Ne Jama Ee Mana Kar Ditta. Ohney Kahya Keh Ohney Dudh Chungh Lya Si Majh Da Te Ohnu Bhukh Nai A. Asal Vich Oh Ajey Wi Darr Rahya Si Keh Oh Apni Maa Naal Kiwen Akh Milaoo, Ohnu Apney Payo Da Vi Jhaka Si. Bus Oh Apni Maa Te Pyo Dona Kolu Darri Janda Si.

Waseem Ne Thaley Aa K Nusrat Nu Dasya Te Ohney Kahya K Tu Apney Room Wich Ja Me Ammi Nu Roti De K Aani Aa. Nusrat Bajwa Ne Apni Maa Di Roti Payee Tte Kamrey Wich Turr Gai.

Parveen Ne Jadd Vekhya Keh Ohdi Dhee Roti Le K Aai A Ohney Cheti Naal Puchya, Ve Putt Altaf Kithey Wa, Oh Ajey Ghar Kyu Nai Aaya?

Nusrat Ne Dassya Keh Altaf Te Apney Kamrey Vich Chala Gya Si, Kissey Nal Gall Vi Nai Keetti Te Roti Vi Nai Khadi. Parveen Nu Bohat Dukh Lagya K Ohda Puttar Ohda Hall Puchan Vi Nai Aaya. Ohda Dukh Dohra Ho Gya, Ik Te Ohdey Ghar Waley Ne Ohnu Ink Nai Si Puchya Jiwen Puchna Chahi Da Si, Te Dooja Ohdey Puttar Ne V Ohda Hall Nai Puchya. Ohney Nusrat Nu Dukhi Dill Naal Mana Kar Ditta. Ohda Dill Bujh Gya Ohdi Bhukh Marr Gai. Nusrat Chup Kar K Murr Gai. Darwajey Wich Jaa K Ruki Te Puchya, Ammi Jaan Me Tuhadey Pair Nu Malish Kar Dewan? Parveen Ne Mana Kar Ditta, Puttar Tu Jaa K So Jaa Tera Abba Aaye Ga Te Oh Kar Dewey Ga.

Parveen Nu Sari Samajh Aa Gai. Ohnu Pata Si Keh Ohda Puttar Darr Rehya Wa. Oh Soch Rahi Si Keh Oh Kiwen Apney Putt Da Darr Lahwey.

Nusrat Apney Kamrey Wich Chali Gai, Phir Ohnu Koi Khayal Aaya, Oh Sidhi Altaf Bhai De Room Wich Chali Gai. Altaf Chup Kar K Laitia Hoya Si. Nusrat Ne Altaf Nu Dassya K Ammi Bohat Pareshan Wa Teri Paron, Teri Fikar Kar Rahi Si, Te Terey Roti Naa Khan Da Sun K Aap Vi Roti Nai Khadi. Nusrat Ne Apney Bhara Nu Tarla Keeta K Please Tussi Jao Te Ammi Nu Roti Khawao.

Nusrat Eh Gall Kar K Apney Room Nu Muri. Altaf Ne Puchya Nusrat Abba Kithey Wa. Nusrat Boli Keh Oh Te Roti Kha K Lambardar De Derey Tu Chala Gya Wa Panchayat Si Othey Koi.

Altaf Da Dill Tarap Gya, Ohnu Bohat Dukjh Lagya. Ohnu Apni Maa Naal Bohat Pyar Si, Jadon Ohnu Pata Lagya Keh Ohda Payo Gharo Bahar Ja Chukia A, Ohnu Tassali Ho Gai Keh Ohdi Maa Ne Ohdey Payo Nu Kujh Nai Dasya. Naal Ee Ohnu Apney Aap Te Maan Jeha Ho Gya Keh Ajj Me Roti Nai Khadi Te Ohdi Maa Ne Vi Nahi Khadi. Oh Tarap Uthya, Te Jutti Vi Na Payee Te Thaley Chala Gya, Oh Siddha Kitchen Wich Gya, Khana Garam Keeta Te Apni Maa De Room Vich Chala Gya.

Parveen Bajwa Bohat Udaas Jahi Ho K Chatt Nu Vekhi Ja Rahi Si Te Dukhi Jahi Ho K Sochi Ja Rahi Si. Ohnu Qadman Di Awaz Apney Kamrey Wall Anudi Japi. Ohdey Dill Ne Aakhya Ni Parveen Tera Jigar Da Tota Aa Gya Ee.

Ohnu Apni Akhan Te Yaqeen Na Aaya, Ohney Vekhya Ohda Putt Hath Wich Roti Wala Chaba, Te Dudh Da Glass Phar K Darwajey Wich Khara Si.

Altaf: Ammi Jaan !

Parveen: Jee Meria Putra ! Maa Sadqey Jawey Tu Kithey Chala Gya Si Apni Maa Nu Chadd K (Apney Puttar De Chehrey Wall Wekhdi A, Te Apney Puttar De Mukh Tea Khan Wich Pyar Te Mohabbat Da Summandar Si, Masoomiat Si, Be-Chargi Si, Darr Te Khoaf Si, Hayya Te Sharam Si.

Parveen Kolon Bardasht Nai Ho Sakya Te Oh dumb nap siskarian lain lag payee
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Altaf Di End Ho Chuki Si, Oh Jazbat, Khushi, Mohabbat Te Khaloos Wich Pagal Jeha Ho K Apni Maa Dian Bahwan Wich Sama Gya. Ohdi Maa Ne Apney Seeney Uttey Laitey Hoye Putt Nu Apnian Bahwan Wich Ghut Lya.

Altaf Ne Wi Apni Maa De Dono Passey Apney Bajoo Phaila Dittey Te Apna Sir Apney Maa De Ik Modhey Utey Tika K Maa Di Mohabbat De Summandar Wich Dub Gya, Sakoon, Shanti Te Sukh De Uchey Ambar Wich Inj Udh Rahya Si Jiwen Kali Ghata Ch Mast Ho K Koi Awara Panchi Hawa Ch Tarr Rahya Honda. Dono Maa Put Koi V Harkat Kityon Baghair Madhoshi De Aalam Wich Apni Mohabbat Ik Doojey Te Nichawar Kar Rahe Si. Inj Lag Rahia Si Keh Altaf Nu Jis Aurat Nal Ishq Hoya A Oh Ohdi Maa Si Naa Keh Ohdi Biwi, Te Parveen Nu Inj Lag Rahya Si K 4 Bachey Paida Karn Tu Baad Jiss Mard Naal Ishq Hoya A Oh Ohda Puttar Si Na Keh Ohda Khasam.

Kafi Der Baad Jadon Maa Te Puttar Da Dill Ik Doojey Paroon Saaf Ho Gya Te Altaf Ne Apna Sir Chukya Te Apni Maa De Chehrey Ne Apney Dono Hathan Wich Pharh K Bolya,

Altaf: Ammi Tussi Mere Tu Naraz Te Nahi.

Parveen: Rabb Di Sonh Me Naraz Nai Wan, Menu Te Maan A Keh Menu Rabb Ne Inna Khayal Rakhan Wala Puttar Ditta A. Parveen Ne Vi Apney Dono Hathan Wich Apney Putt Da Chehra Phar Laya Te Muskra K Boli, Puttar Ajj Jo Vi Hoya Bhul Bhulekhey Te Na Chahundian Hoyan Hoya. Jo Vi Hoya Menu Bohat Change Lagya, Tu Jo V Keeta Apni Maa De Aram Lai Keeta. Me Sadqey Wari Jawan Me Apney Putt Tu Kadi Vi Naraz Nai Ho Sakdi.

Altaf Inna Khush Hoya Keh Ohda Chehra Khill Uthya, Ohney Apni Maa Da Math Chum Laya, Te Parveen Ne V Apney Puttar Da Matha Chum Laya

Altaf: Chalo Ammi Jaan Roti Khao

Parveen: Puttar Tu Kha Lai Roti?

Altaf: Me Kiwen Kha Sakda Wan Jadd Tak Meri Maa Bhukhi Howey

Parveen: Chal Phir Dono Khayeey. Puttar J Tu Na Aunda, Rabb Di Sonh Mere Andar Ik Burki Vi Nai Si Langhni.

Parveen Te Altaf Bed Te Beh K Amney Samney Beh Jandey Ne Te Alfat Ik Nawala Bana K Apni Maa De Mooh Kol Le Janda A, Parveen Apna Mooh Kholdi A, Jadon Altaf Nawala Moonh Ch Pa K Hath Pichey Karan Lagda A, Parveen Altaf Da Hath Phar K Ohdin Unglian Te Chummi Le Laindi A.

Phir Parveen Ik Nawal Apney Puttar De Mooh Wich Paandi A, Te Altaf Vi Apni Maa Da Hath Chum Lainda A. Dono Maa Puttar Bohat Mohabbat Nal Ik Doojey De Moonh Wich Nawaley Pandey Ne Te Har Nawaley Te Ik Doojey Dian Unglan Chum Laindey Ne. Khana Kha K Altaf Bartan Side Table Te Rakhda A Te Phir Bed Te Beh Jaanda A.

Parveen Seeee Seeee Kar Rahi Si. Ik Te Ohdi Zuban Ajj Dand Thalley Aa K Piss Gai Si, Te Roti Khan Nal Zuban Te Mirchan Lar Gayan Si,

Altaf: Ammi Jee Ki Hoya Tussi Seeee See Kyo Kar Rahe O

Parveen: Puttar Meri Zuban Te Pehley Ee Pissi Hoi Si Ajj Dand Thalley Aa K, Hun Salan Khada A Te Mirchan Larri Jandian Ne. Seeeee Seeeeee

Altaf: Ammi Jee Me Gurr Le K Awan Kitchen Vichu?

Parveen: Nai Putt Gurr Naal Nai Aram Auna

Altaf: Phir Ki Karyey Ammi Jaan

Parveen: Oh ………. Oh .. Oh Je Tenu Koi Masla Na Hovey Te……… Oh

Altaf: Ammi Jaan Tussi Hukam Karo, Meri Jaan Vi Hazar A Tussi Dasso Te Sahi.

Parveen: Putt……. Nai Put ,, Menu Sang Aaundi Aa, Me Kiwen Dassan

Altaf: Ammi G Tuhanu Meri Qasam Tussi Dasso Te Sahi, Methon Tuhadi Takleef Nai Dekhi Jandi
Parveen: Putt Oh Jiddan Ajj Meri Zuban Dand Thaley Aa K Pissi Si Bagh Wich Te Meri Zuban Nu Apni Zuban Naal Takor Keeti Si……. Put Menu Bohat Aram Aa Gya Si, Putt Tu Na, Tu Na Putt, Tu Unj Ee Kar De Thori Jinni Takor, Te Putt Ik Gall Sun, Put Tu Mere Ton Darya Na Kar Inna, Aaaho, Parvenn Ne Inney Pyar, Naaz Te Ada Naal Sharma Sharma K, Te Moonh Thaley Nu Kar K Eh Gall Keeti Se Keh Altaf De Loon Loon Wich Sawad Te Nashey Lehar Jahi Dor Gai.

Altaf: Oh Oh… Oh …… Te Theek A Par Nahi, …… Haan ……Nai Ammi Jaan Bus Oh…. Altaf Darwajey Wall Waikhan Lag Paya
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Parveen Samajh Gai K Altaf Di Pareshani Kee A. Asal Ch Dil Naal Dil Nu Rah Hondi A, Dono Maa Puttar Change Tarah Jaan Chukey Si K Nasha Dona Nu Charhya Hoya A Te Agg V Dono Passey Laggi Hoyee A, Bus Iko Kandh Wichkar Aa Rahi Si Te Oh Kandh Si Rishtey Di, Dharam Di, Sharam Di, Hayya Di, Parampara Di. Parveen Nu Pata Si Keh Ohney Eh Rah Aap Ee Siddha Karna A, Baqi Ohnu Pata Si K Aurat De Hussan Da Nasha Ki Cheez A Te Aurat De Hussan Te Pyar Di Taqat Ki Chaeez A.

Parveen: Put Tu Bahro Vekh K Aa K Gate Di Kundi Laggi Hoi A, Te Naley Bachey So Gaye Ne Keh Jagdey Ne

Altaf: Acha Ammi Jee

Oh Bijli Wango Bahar Gate Wall Ja K Vekhda A, Kunda Laguya Hoys Si, Oh Nass K Ooper Janda A, Nusrat Te Waseen De Kamrey Dian Battian Bujh Chukia Si.

Altaf Jadd Wapis Apni Maa De Kamrey Wich Jamda A Te Ohnu Hairat Da Ik Jhatka Lagda A, Ohdi Pyari Maa Bed Te Nai Si. Parveen Altaf De Bahar Jandian Ee Ik Latt Te Bhar Paa K Mushkal Naal Dressing Table Kol Gai Si, Ohney Apni Chadar Bed Uttey Eel Ah Ditti Si, Sheeshey Samney Aa K Apney Waal Khol Dittey Se Parveen Ne, Te Surkh Rang Di Halki Jahi Surkhi Apney Bullan Te La Lai Si, Tea Khan Wich Kajjal Pa Laya Sit E Sheeshey Wall Kand Kar K Dressing Table Di Shelf Uthey Char K Beh Gai C, Ohney Apnian Lattan Innian K Khol Dityan Si Keh Ohda Putt Sokha Ho K Ohdey Samney Kharr Sakey.

Jaddon Altaf Darwajey Andar Aaya Te Ohdey Qadam Ruk Gaye Te Oh Jazbat, Josh Te Hairat Naal Apni Maa Nu Vekhda Ee Reh Gya. Ohdi Hoor Wargi Maa, Patley Jaye Lown De Suit Wich Apnian Reshmi Zulfa Khol K Dressing Table Di Shelf Te Apnian Lattan Chorian Kar K Baithi Si. Ohdi Maa De Lammey Reshmi Kaley Waal Ohdian Gol Matol Chatian De Dono Passey Kali Ghata Wangu Chaye Paye Si. Ohdi Maa De Motey Sakhat Te Ubhrey Hoye Mummey Walan De Wichon Inj Ubhrey Paye Si Jiwen Kaley Badlan De Wichoo Pahar Dian Chotian Sir Kadh Rahyan Howan. Ohdi Maa De Bullan Te Masoom Jahi Shararti Muskan Si.

Parveen: (Sharmandey Hoyan) Putt Oh Asal Vich Bed Te Tuhanu Mushkal Honi Si Meri Jeebh Di Takor Karn Lagya, Aithey Jara Change Tarah Takor Ho Jaye Gi.

Altaf: Jee…..Jeeeee… Ammi Jaan Theek Ee Aa. Bus Theek A Koi Gall Nai Jiddan Meri Ammi Nu Change Lagey. Te Oh Dharkdey Dill Te Kamdey Te Pharkdey Hothan Naal Agey Nu Wadhya.

Parveen: Altaf Puttar……………!

Altaf: G Ammi Jaan………..! Apni Maa Dian Akhan Vich Vekhda Hoya

Parveen: (Akhan Thalley Nu Kar K, Sharma K, Nikka Jeha Muskrat K) Puttar Oh……Oh Naa…….Oh Tussi………Oh Tu Na Darwajey Di Wi Kundi Laa De Putt

Pata Nai Kyu Altaf Nu Yakdam Ik Nasha Jeha Charh Gya, Pata Nai Eh Gall Ohdi Maa Ne Kuj Iss Ada Naal Kahi Si Keh Ohdey Tann Mann Wich Sawad Di Ik Bijli Jahi Doar Gai See. Oh Cheti Naal Kundi Laa K Murda A, Te Parveen Dian Akhan Hairangi Naal Chorian Ho Jandian Ne, Par Oh Kuj V Apney Putt Nu Mehsoos Nai Hon Dindi. Altaf De Chadar Da Agla Hissa Inj Ho Gya Se Keh Jiwn Chadar Wich Koi Danda Si Jehra Chadar Wich 90 Digree Te Tamboo Banai Khara Si. Altaf Nu Shayad Pata Nai Si Keh Ohda Lull Inna Akar Chukia Si Ohdi Dhuni Nal Ja Lagya Si…………………….
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Thanks Rebel Jutt
assi te likhna tuhadey kolu sikhya
Tussi ustaad o jee
motivate Karan da bohat shukaria
Bus Thora jeha Punjabi words ch faraq a. Eh farq chardhey te lehndey Punjab da a. I think so
Plz keep guiiding
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I don't know whether the readers who have replied here are reading your story properly or not. But I have read all the updates. As I promised that I will give honest and genuine feedback. So here I am giving my few cents on the story.

1) Mother son incest is your choice. But the scene of Parveen and Altaf interaction is not realistic. Parveen is a mother , atleast more mature , so how come she so easily fall on her son.

2) The details of the story are commendable but they fall flat when the premise of the story is predictable. Like how many times the readers have read incest stories where due to accident or any other incident mom-son or bro-sis come close to each other. Means there is nothing creative in the plot. 

3) This is just my feedback and my point of view. Well I love the urdu words and detailed explanation in some parts. I just want you to improve the plot on coming updates and make it more realistic or believable.

4) Don't take it personally , it is just my opinion. Take it as a healthy criticism
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1. Kaka Teri approach ee inni bakwas as keh Punjabi forum te tu angreji jhari ja reha???? Teri sense amreeka naal bohat mildi jehra apna kamm kadhan layee pak-india nu larawn de chakar vich rehnda.
2. Tu dujian di gall karda me kehna tu Meri story aap parhi ee nai. Iss layee k story ch kitrey wi Parveen apney putt te digi ee nai.
3. Incest hamesha accidentally ee Honda a. Kisey aam kurri wango maa pain nu pata k chodya nai ja sakta.. Kaka A4 size de 30 pages likh dittey sirf plot vich te koi sex vex shuru nai Hoya haley iss tu wadh ki creativity ho sakdi?????
4. Jo kujh v ho rahya story Wich eh natural aur 90% sach wa. Eh Meri apni Sachi Kahani wa chawaley jahyey.
5. Eh kahani bohat lambi wa. Jinni tu parhi oh ok din di aa. Uddon Meri Umar 19 saal si te hunn 37 saal wa tu soch keh Kahani kithey to jaoo go.
6. B.P filman wekh k muth Karan walyan layee na te me likh rahya te naa ee ohna di choise layee me ik Sachi Kahani ch koi rangbazi karni. Eh kahani ohna layee jo adab naal Pyar kardey. Jehrey romance suspense sabar te thehrao rakhdey apni tabeat wi h. Jehrey lafzan di jaltrang te jazbat de paichan tu waqif haige.
7. Ghapa ghap te fatafat thoka thaki nu like Karan Waley readers tu maafi chahunda wa.
8. Mera taaluq Punjab - Pakistan tu waa iss layee Urdu alfaz me jaan bujh k nai paa reha balkeh menu sardaran wali Punjabi jehri aaundi oh maximum warat rehaa me.
9. Teri criticism di menu parwah nai. Iss layee k tusi Khair naal kafi negative soch rakhdey o. Tussi te eh v keh rahey o forum te k ikk ee writer different id tu likh reha te naaley comments vee fake was. Jama ee bachgana soch wa Teri. Aithey sb free ch likh rahe wa koi paid writers nai k koi inni sir khapai Karey. 8 ghantey lagdey ik update layee. Samjhey o Mr. Wolf? Tu te yaar koi 9th da student lagda menu. 
10. Me jiss writer tu inspire waa oh rebel jutt a. He oh menu koi Salah dain te most welcome. Me Khud I'm professor, writer te poet was iss layee me janda sb de level nu.


Namaskar  sb nu request Kar reha k eh ik Sachi Kahani a. Me bohat mushkal time manage kar reha wan. Agar hu kissey ne bachgana comments dittey te me Kahani ithey ee rok deni.
Wasdey raho bananaSad
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Ok g 
Thanks All
Bus eh ee attitude chahi da menu readers da.
Aagey ja k eh Kahani att hot hon wali a
Bus jald bazi ch nai parhni
Time kadh k parhna Meri story nu
Ik ik lafz da swad mehsoos Karo ge.
Phir apni gall repeat karna chahnda wa k fantasy te sexual sensation di peak story reading vich Hondi a new Kar koi likhan Wala howey te. Amma Abbey tu chori washroom ch ja k much marran walyan nu Meri Salah wa k oh xxx porn clip vekhan ja k.
I am again thankful you all ❤️ for encouraging ?
Ajj raat agli update Miley gi.
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Altaf kundi laa k apni maa parveen wall nu wadhya te ohney mehsoos keeta k ohdi maa dian najran ohdi chadar te ne. altaf ik dam ruk gya. Ohney apni apni maa wall takya, oh chadar wich vekh rahi te naley muskrat rahi si. Altaf ne thalley vekhya te ohdi sitti gum ho gai, oh sharam naal pani pani ho gya. Ohnu kujh samajh na aaya te ohdey mooh chon achanak apney aap nu gaal nikal gai, “oo teri maa nu lunn, eh ki ho gya” te oh cheti naal apna mooh ghuma k apni maa walley kand kar k khara ho janda.  Parveen samajh jandi a keh mere putt nu phir sharam da dora pe gya a. oh v thori jahi kachi ho gai. Par ohney jaldi apney aap nu sambhalia, oh iss game nu inni jaldi khatam nai karna chahndi si. Ohney thanda saah bharya te apney mann wich boli “parveen tenu eh pahll khan lai bohat sabar karna paina; aakhir sayaney aakhdey ne bai sabar da phall mitha Honda wa”
Parveen : “puttar ki hoya? Tu moonh kyo pher laya? Ki gall darr gya apni maa kolu?
Altaf: “ nai ammi jan oh menu washroom aa gya,
Parveen: “ koi gall na, pher koi hoya? Jaa nass k kar aa puttar. Par cheti murna, me baithi baithi thak na jawan kidhrey
Altaf: “Acha Ammi Jaan” ohdey saah wich saah aa gya te oh kundi khol k bahar waihrey wich baney washroom wich nass gya. Parveen ohdey jann tu baad sochan lag pai. Aakhar oh ik maa c, te maa vi eh jahi jidha poorey khandan wich roab daba si. Ohney apney bachyan di tarbiyyat bohat --- mahol wich keeti si. Te naaley oh khud wi ik shareef aurat si. Oh B.A tak parhi hoyee si. College wich apni sahelian naal mazaq di had tak bohat kuch bokya bakya si par kadi kissey munday naal touch tak nai si keeta. Ohdi seal ohdey ghar waley Sultan Bajwa ne ee tori si. Te sultan bajwa to ilawa kissey bandey bashar ne ohnu hath nai si laya. Ohnu apney rawwaye te be had sharam aai. Ohney apney hussan da jalwa wikha k pagal kar chhadya si. Ohnu apney aap tu ghinn aan lagi pai. Ohney iss khel nu aithey ee khatam karan da sochya par naal ee ohdi oh fantasy bol payee jehri k ohdi jindagi di ikko ikk kasak si, tammana si, chahat si khawab si, ik agg si.
Oh fantasay te kassak si wadha, lamma te mota lunn. Eh shoaq ohnu 14 saal di umar ch ee pe gya si jaddon ohney apni saheli de bag wicho ik sexy rasala chori kar k parhya si. Os ik sexy novel si jidhey wich hero da lunn ik foot lamma te 5 inch mota si. Phir us to baad jadd oh apney mohalley wich nangey chotey mundian dian nikkian nikkian lullian wekhdi te ohnu bohat mayoosi te hairangi hondi te oh sochdi k ikk foot da lunn kiddan da hona? Phir us ton baad parveen jaddon 15 salan di ho gai te ohdey payo ne ikk khota le aanda pathey dhon layee. Ik din parveen ne dopehar wailey jaddon sarey ghar waley pakhey laa k suttey hoye si ohney wekhya k ohna da khota chappar thaley apne 2 foot lamma te bohat mota lunn kadh k khara wa. Agley tin saal tak parveen chori chori us motey lun nu vekh vekh k hairan v hondi sit e apney mann vich kalpana wi kardi si bai je motey te wadhey lun nu wekhan da inna sawad aanda te andar lain da ki najara hoye ga.
Ik din ohney apni haveli ch sutey apney payo da lun v vekhya. Sawery sawery parveen jadon dudh wali balti le ke haveli chali gai sit e ohda paya sutta hoya si, ohdi chadar hati hoyee se pattan kolun te ohdey payo da lunn full khara si. Parveen ne mayoosi hoye. Lun sirf 5 inch da si patla jeha. 18 saal di umar ch parveen da wayah ho gya si Sultan Bajwa naal. Ohdey andar bara chaa si wayah da bohat garmi si, oh rabb aggey duwa mangdi si bai ohdey ghar waley da lun khotey warga howey par ohdi qismat inni change sabat na hoi.
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Sultan bajwa da lun 7 inch lamma te 3 inch mota si, bohat sakht te dam dar si. Pehli raat ee sultan ne apni fatah de jhandey gad dittey si. Parveen nu thanda te kar ditta si par…………. Oh agg, oh fantasy, oh tarap, oh kassak unj ee baqi si. Oh chahndi si bai ohdi phuddi paat jandi , ohdian cheekan nikaldia, oh behosh ho jandi, ohdi phuddi nu tankey lagdey par inj da kujh wi na hoya, peer v hoi, khoon wi nikalya par phudi inj naa pati jiwen patni chahi di si. Eh iko ee waja se ke jehra parveen apney ee sagey putt te marr mitti si. Ohnu sb rishtey natey bhul gaye si. Oh apni fantasy layee kisey wi had tak jaan lai tyar si par oh ik samajhdar aurat si, oh kuj long term plan kar rahi si…….
Altaf washroom ch ja k apney aap ne kosan lag paya. Cheti naal tin char lotey pani de bhar k apney akrey hoyee lulley te paye. Te naal panj satt galan apney aap nu kadhyan. Oh pachta reha si k kaash eh inni jaldi khara na Honda te ohnu apni maa naal thoda jeha pyar karn da moqa mill janda. Altaf bhanwen eh gal samajh gya si keh ohdi maa nu wi change lagda par oh apna maan te waqar gawana nai si chahnda. Oh bus bahaney bahaney naal apni maa da sawad lena chahnda si. Oh koi wi eh jai harkat kar k apni maa dian najran ch digna nai si chahnda.
Asal wich altaf de naal wi ik bohat wadhi problem si. Altaf jadon 15 saal da si ohnu pata lag chukia si keh ohda lunn apney haan de mundian nalu bohat wadha wa. Kai dost te eh keh k  ohda hosla wadhandey si keh jehri aurat ne ik wari tera lun le lya oh teri ghulam ban jawey gi, par kujh darandey si keh putt tenu idda wadha lun kisey aurat ne apni phuddi ch paan ee nai dena, bai kisey ne phudi parwani  apni tery kolu?
Altaf ne apna shak door karan lai ik wari apney khet wich majdoori karn aai ik shadi shuda aurat nu 1000 rupey de k phudi den lai tyar kar lya si. Oh ohnu amroodan waley bagh andar le gya. Oh ajey apni Shalwar lah rahi si. Altaf ne apni chadar khol k qameej da larr chukia te us aurat di cheek nikal gai. Ohney bijli wangu apni Shalwar charhai te 1000 rupey da note sutt k turr pai. Ohney bolya ,” na baba na, me apni phudi nai parwani 1000 de lalach ch. Me nai kardi bai. Toba toba hayee. Rabba vekh te sahi banda ve k khota wa. Idda wada lun toba toba toba. Altaf ohnu tarley panda reh gya par oh na murri. Altaf us din to pareshan rehan lag pya. Ohney koi wi hor tajruba karana munasab na samajhya. Bus ohnu ikko ee umeed si te oh si odhi shadi, te ohdi hon wali biwi. Oh din raat eh ee duwa mangda si bai ya rabb meri ghar wali mere iss babbar sher nu pasand kar lawey. Kidrey oh wi darr k menu chadd na jawey. Ohney shart rakh ditti k me shadi kissey majboot jussey wali aurat naal karani, smart slim te patli kurri naal me bilkul wayah nai karan. Aakhar kar ik door de rishtey dar jehrey k 50 meel door si ohna de pind tu othey ik rishta pasand keeta gya. Shugufta Bajwa jehri k qad kaath te jussey wich Altaf di maa parveen nal bohat mildi juldi si. Bus rang thora jeha sanwala te nain naqsh wakh si baqi samjho te parveen di copy ee si. Parveen te shugufta ch bas koi 19-20 da ee farq si. Shugufta di umar 30 saal si. Par altaf nu iss gall te koi etraaz nai si. Oh te khud chahnda si k ohdi ghar wali majboot te mature howey ohnu eh pakka pata si bai ohda lunn koi aam kurri nai si le sakdi.
Aakhar kar koi ikk maheena pehlon  ohdi shadi hoi si. Shugufta bohat pyar karan wali kurri sabat hoi par oh ee hoya jidda Atlaf nu darr si. Pichley 28 din ho gaye si wayah nu parr ohda te shugufta ne ohnu phudi nai si ditti. Oh altaf nu apney pattan wich ghasa k faragh kardi se, ya muth maar k ya phir choopa la k. topi v andar nai karn ditti si. Oh eh kehndi si k koi aurat idda wadha lunn apney andar nai le sakdi. je koi le k wikha dewey te me mann jaoon waran mena talaq manjoor. Oh eh samajhdi si keh idda wadha lun lain tu baad aurat zinda ee nai reh sakdi.
Dona ne kai wari salah keeti k ghar walyan nu dass diye par eh gall altaf te sshugufta dona nu ee manjoor nai si. Oh bohat sharam kha rahey si iss gall tu. Shugufta te altaf sachi wich ee bohat pareshan si.
Altaf ne koi 5 mint betha reha washroom wich te apney lulley te pani panda reha. Jad lun sukar gya te altaf apni maa de room wich gya.
Jadd oh andar wadya te oh hairan ho gya keh ohdi maa dressing table tu uth k bed te ja chuki si. Oh bed di dhoo naal sir laa k baithi hoi si. Te sir te chadar lai hoi si. Chehrey te ik sakoon si.
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Altaf hairan jeha ho k bed lagey khar gya. Ohnu koi gall nai aa rahi si. Iss ton pehlan keh altaf koi sharmindagi da izhar karda parveen boli “ kundi laa de te puttar aa ja beh jaa merey kol” parveen ne bed te naal pai side chair te baithan da ishara keeta.
Altaf ne darwajey di kundi charhai te chup kar k kursi te beh gya.
Parveen: puttar oh menu dressing table di daraz wicho ik dawai labh gayee si mooh de chalyan di. Me oh la lai a te menu hun bohat aram a. tu fikar na kar hun putt me theek ho jana ik do dinna ch.
Altaf: “eh te bohat change hoya ammi jaan.  Rabb tuhanu jaldi sehat dewey. Me bohat pareshan wa tuhadey layee”
Parveen: “ma sadqey jawey” tu sada wasda reh putt, menu terey te maan a. tenu pata me sab bachian tu wadh tenu pyar kardi waa. Tu meri jaan da tota wan. Rabb tenu tatti hawa na lawey kaddi.
Altaf: “Rab tuhanu wi meray sah lawey. Tery pairan ch te meri jannat aa”.
Parveen: “Puttar menu ik gall te dass”
Altaf: “Jee Ammi jaan. Zurur Pucho ki gall aa”.
Parveen: “Puttar tu apney wayyah tu khush te hain naa?”
Altaf: “ G ammi jaan me khush wan. Shugufta bohat change kurri wa. Ammi tussi kah layee tention laindey o. bus sub kujh theek aa par…………….par bus sub theek aa.”
Parveen: puttar me maa wan teri, tu kujh dass na dass, par me jandi waa keh tuhadey dona wichkar koi gall jarur aa. Puttar tu menu dass me dass teri marji.
Altaf: “ Ammi menu sang aaundi wa” me kiddan dassan?
Parveen: “ we putt maa tu kahdi sang. Me tera ki nai vekhia? Ya tuma ki nai vekhia. Tu khul k gall kar. Me jarur ehda koi hall kaddoon gi.
Altaf: (kujh der chupp reha ohney mehsoos keeta k ohdi maa ohdey chehrey nu takki jandi aa.) Ammi jaan oh, oh tuhanu te pata wa na ke mera oh……….. oh…….. bohat………. . nai methu nai dass hunda.
Parveen: aidhar aa mere kol beh jaa. Aa ja aa ja sang na mere kolu. Maa sadqey, mere putt nu koi masla jarur wa mera dill kehnda. Tu merey kol aa ke beh. Parveen bed de centre ch khisak jandi te altaf layee  jagah banandi aa. Altaf nu kujh himmat honi aa. Oh uth k apni maa de naal lag k beh jandi bed de headboard naal dhoo laa k.
Parveen ik baju ohdey dawaley lapait k altaf da sir apney mohdey te rakhdi a te boli, chal putt j tenu iddan bohti sang aandi te tu mere kann wich dass de. Dass de putt ki masla wa.
Altaf: apna  mooh apni maa de kann kol le janda. Par ohdey kolu kujjh bolya nai janda. Ohdey sahwan di tatti hawwar parveen ne apney kann wich mehsoos hundi. Ohda jawan putt, ohdey mohdey te sir rakh k apna moonh apni maa de kann naal la k baitha hunda. Kann parveen da bohat sensitive button si. (kai auratan nu kann tu kiss karyey te oh mint ch garm ho jandian ne) parveen de saah uthal pathal hon lag paye. Altaf ne jo kehna si oh te bhull gaya par oh apni maa de hussan ch madhosh jarur ho gya. Ohdi maa de jism di sohni te pakeeza khushboo te halkey jahey make up di sense ohnu pagal kar gai si. Parveen ne mehsoos keeta k munda ik te sharmeela bohat wa te utton att da garam wa. Parveen ne apney doojey hath naal altaf da sir apney mohdey tu chukia te apna moonh altaf de kann naal la ditta.
Parveen: “we putt kyon darri jana mere kolu. Me kehra tenu koi danda maar daina. Tenu jamya apni kokh wichu. Merey hathan wichu ajey teri chee di smell aandi. Kanjra kyu dari jana apni maa kolu? Menu ik mint layee apni saheli samajh le. Chal saheli nai te ik mint layee menu apni biwi samajh le. Kanjra je kar menu kujh dasse ga te me kujh hall kadhu gi tere kissey masley da. Dass je tenu shugufta nai pasand te kissey hor kurri naal tera wayah kara dayan? Mery naal kar la wayaah? Te apney bull ghut k altaf de kann nal kann la k nimma nimma hassa hassi.
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