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Fuddi di Garmi..Luli d Narmi..(fantasy. adultry incest)
#1
Navi story likhan di koshish kar riha.. hope tuhanu sabh nu pasand au.
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#2
All the best
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#3
Kitchen vich bhande dhondi hoyi Simran nu bahar vehre vich baithi usdi sas Dilpreet jo ke apni darani Shamo naal galla kar rahi si, di awaz aundi aa "Simran ni simran, apni chachi layi cha bna ke liyayi"
Simran bhande dhona chhad gas nu on karde hoye "leh ayi mummy ji 2 minute vich"
Shamo jisda poora naam Swaran kaur si Simran deh ghar deh naal wale ghar vich hi rehndi si. Subhah bhave usda changa si par gal gal vich tanhe maran di usdi addat bhaut kharab si.
simran cha bna ke 2 glassa vich pa ke vehre vich aundi hoyi."pairi paini chachi.  Ajj bahut dina baad gera laya sade ghar"
simran deh hatho cha da glass fadhdi hoyi "ni dheeye tainu pata hi ghar deh kama da. kithe vehal milda. ajj bahut chitt kar riha si bhain nu milam da, es layi aa gayi"
Simran apni sas nu glass fadundi hoyi "hanji chachi ji, ghar deh kam teh eve hi hunde, mukde kithe"
teh mud rasoi val tur paindi aa. jive hi simran rasoi vich vardi hain, usnu shamo deh mooho apna naam sunayi dinda teh oh rasoi deh darwaje toh luk ke uhna di gal sunan lag paindi eh.
Shamo dilpreet nu boldi eh "ni bhaine, ki gal eh simran teh Rajveer neh khushkhabari kado sunani aa, sukh naal hun teh viah nu vi 2 saal ho gaye, mere Jeet da viah, rajveer toh saal baad vich hoya, usde vi kuri ho gayi sukh naal 2 mahibe di"
Dilpreet shamo nu vekhdi hoyi bhare mann naal jawab dindi hoyi " ni ki dassa shamo tainu, main teh app bahut kehndi aa ke mainu daadi bna deo. par smajh nahi aundi ke kado mainu apne pote poti da mooh vekhan nu milu, kite injh nah hove mooh vekhe bina hi etho tur pava"
Shamo vi jehdi ke pehlay tana hi marr rahi si, dilpreet di gal naal udas hundi hoyi "koi ni bhaine, rabb teh bharosa rakho, sabh changa hi hou, naale haale ni tu turdi es duniya toh, haale umar ki teri, (mommiya val ishra kardi hoyi) ehna nu vekho, haale vi kase paye. pata ni kinne hi pind deh loki ehna di jhalak layi tarsde hone"
Dilpreet vi usdi gal sun hass paindi eh teh apni darani di bund val ishra kardi hoyi "ni teri eh ghatt,  neh jad vi tere naal sehar jandi aa, edda matka matka turdi ehnu, jive keh rahi hove, ke jatti nu khumari charhi, koi lah devo, pata nahi kinniya deh khade karwa ke aundi eh"
Shamo vi hasdi hoyi "jatti di khumari teh tuhada deor lah dinda eh, (apni bah nu fadishara kardi hoyi) jado edda paunda eh"
Dilpreet vi hasdi hoyi" ni bass kar sharam kariya kar. munde da viah ho gaya teh tainu maskhariya sujh rahiya neh"
Shamo hasdi hoyi "ni munda da viah tahi hoya jeh munda hoya, teh munda vi tuhde deor da edda saari saari raat leh ke hoya"
Shamo teh dilpreet fer maskhariya chhad pind diya galla karan lag payiya, galla ki chugliya hi karan lag paiya jidda ke aam jannaniya kardiya neh.
Rasoi vicho dilpreet jehdi ke luk ke uhna nu vekh teh sun rahi si, oh vi bhande dubara dhoan lag payi.
Bhande dhondi nu usnu shamo di gal yaad aa gayi, teh sochan lag payi "mainu kehndi khuskhabari kado dau, app teh edda leh ke munda jam liya teh hun galla kardi chachi, usnu hun kon dasse ke rajveer di lulli naal teh meri garmi ghatdi ghatt eh, vadh di jiyada eh, saari raat teh ki 1 minute vi poora lah dave mere teh tah khusnaseebi hundi meri, hun jis lulli toh poora chodiya vi ni jah sakda us naal munda ja kuri ki swah jamne neh"
Simran bhande dho ke apne kamre vich chali jandi eh, teh darwaja band kar bed teh lami pai jandi eh, oh bahut udas si , vaar vaar usnu apni kukh sunni hoan da dukh ho riha si, teh rajveer teh gussa vi aa riha si ke usdi lulli kade usdi sunni kukh nu hara vi karu ke nahi, par fer sochdi ke es vich rajveer da vi ki kasoor.
udda vi rajveer usnu bahut pyar karda si, ajj tak usnu ucchi awaz vich vi gal nahi si kiti kade usneh.
ese vele rajveer jehda ke chutti hon karke ajj ghare si ese layi pathe leh ke aya si, kamre vich aunda eh teh simran nu kise doonghi soch vich ke usde kol janda teh usde mathe nu chumde hoye "ki gal janab kithe gwache neh, mere aun da vi pata nahi lagga"
rajveer nu vekh muskraun di koshish kardi hoyi "kuch nahi, bass edda hi pata nahi kehde khiyala vich gwachi si, tuc kado aye"
rajveer vi usde naal hi lame painde hoye "nahi ajj cha nahi dudh peen nu dil karda oh vi taza" kehnde hoye  simran deh mommiya teh hath rakh dinda
Simran vi hasdi hoyi "bass rehan deo, raati pee leo jo peena, es vele nah tang karo" 
Rajveer vi usdi gal sun apna hath simran deh mommiya toh hathunde doye "theek aa raati karwaunda teri tasali" kehnde hoye bed teh lama pai janda teh akha band karde hoye "naale roti ni main khani ajj, masa chutti mildi aa, es layi soan lagga mainu nah uthayi duphere roti layi"
simran vi us val pith kar apniya akha band kardi hoyi "theek aa ji, nahi uthaundi"
akha band kar oh sochan lagdi "raati karwau tasali meri, jisneh karwauni hundi rann di tasalibhala oh raat di wait karde koi"
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#4
Bahut hi vadia .. Plzzz regular rehna , nhi tan ithe har roz hi koi na koi story start krda te bs ek do update baad sab band .. Hope tusi update dinde rahoge
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#5
ghaint start
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#6
Ghaint start congratulations for this story chkk k rkho kmm
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#7
welcome back u have a wonderful story in past pyaar is a misture
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#8
bahut sohne.........bahut wadiya writing hai.......kafi sahi plot hai
......plz continue rakheo
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#9
Kaimmm aa bai
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#10
ਕਿਆ ਬਾਤ ਐ
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#11
Attt g
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#12
akha band kar oh sochan lagdi "raati karwau tasali meri, jisneh karwauni hundi rann di tasalibhala oh raat di wait karde koi, oh teh rann nu bina puchhe hi fad ke saara paa dinde dhur tak.
rann minta kardi reh jandi, agla teh fasa ke tidd dukhan lah dinda. teh ik eh ah jehda kehnda raati tasali karwau. pata jehde lelad laune raati apni 4 inch di lulli naal"
fer simran apna dhiyaan badlaun layi kuch hor sochan lagdi eh.
socha socha vich oh apne college deh vele nu yaad karan lag paindi eh.(Flasback)
Simran Mohali deh nere ik pind vich rehndi hain teh mapiya di ikali ikali dhee si. usde ghar vich mummy sharanjit jehdi ke 40 saala di hain teh bahut hi sohni jatti aa jisde husan deh charche poore pind vich si, jado vi bahar nikaldi si teh 36 size deh mommiya nu jihna nu poori fit bra vich kaid rakhdi eh, bund 35 si bahar nu nikali hoyi ,  teh lakk jatti masa 30 da eh jisnu matka ke chaldi si teh pind waliya deh lann kharhe ho jande neh. Simran da peo Balveer Singh umar 45 saal pind vich changa rasookh rakhda si. karan umar 20 saal 6 foot da jawan simran deh chache da munda eh, jisde maa peo di jado oh chhota hi si, ik accident vich maut ho jandi si.Karan umar vich Simran toh ik saal chotta eh
"jag jah simran, 8 vajj gaye jana ni ajj college" simran di maa sharanjeet uchhi uchhi rasoi vicho aloo deh paronthe banundi hoyi boldi.
simran angdayi leh uthadi hoyi "uth gayi mom, laggi aa tyaar hoan"
simran uth ke sidha bathroom vich varh jandi eh teh brush kardi hoyi sochdi "saali saver vi 5 minta vich ho jandi. banda sohnda baad vich aa sooraj pehlay charh janda"
brush kar simran nahun lagdi eh, nahundi hoyi apne mommiya nu jad chundi eh teh ik momme deh nipple nu hath vich leh halka jiha hilaundi hoyi "karma wala hi hath pau tuhanu, changi ragdayi karu tuhadi,, jidda tuc uddu uddu karde, sare khabh kutar dene begaane neh,  hayee begaana kyun jehda tuhanu hath vich fadu pyar karu, koi apna hi  hou"
ese time fer sharanjit di awaz aundi "ni ki kari jani aa, tera time teh ho gaya jaan da"
simran vi momme nu hilauna chhad nahaundi hoyi " bass aa gayi mom"
naha ke simran kaale rang di bra teh penty paa laindi eh teh upro chitta top teh kaali bund ghutwai jean paa laindi eh. sheeshe vich apne app nu vekhdi hoyi thoda make up kardi eh teh halke rang di lipstick laga laindi eh.
rasoi vich jaa apni mom nu "chheti chheti mainu parontha deo, late ho rahi aa"
sharanjit thode gusse vich usnu parontha teh cha dindi hoyi "tere toh time naal ni jag hunda, hun aram naal kha leh, iko din vich ni tu parh ke afsar lag jana"
sharanjit di gal nu sun simran hasdi hoyi parontha khande hoye "iko din vich nahi lah jana afsar, par jeh edda roz hi ik ik din karke laye hundi rahi fer vi ni ban hona afsar"
sharanjit vi hasde hoye "chal jiyada nah bol, hun aram nal kha ke chali jah"
parontha kha simran apni activa chuk college jehda ke Chandigarh da ik mashoor college eh, val chal paindi eh. college di parking vich activa kharhi kardi nu usnu usdi dost suneeta mil jandi eh.
dove parking vicho jad class val jandiya neh teh apas vich galla karde hoye suneeta simran nu "madam neh bahut tohr kadi aa, ki gal kise layi khass tyaar hoyi lagdi eh"
simran usdi pith teh halka jiha muka mardi hoyi "mera teh pata nahi, par madam tuc teh pakka hi kise layi tyaar hoyi lagdi eh" simran suneeta nu upar toh thale tak vekhdi hoyi boli jisneh es vele tang gulabi rang di pajami teh kurti payi hundi jehdi sleevless hundi. 
suneeta bhave savale rang di si par sareer sohna si, 32 deh momme teh 28 da lakk teh 33 ku di bund jehdi ke usne rajj ke marwayi si apne bhara toh nu matka ke chaldi hoyi hasde hoye kehndi "madam mein kise layi ni tyaar hoyi, main teh sabh layi hi hundi aa, meri bund di madak teh, lakk di lachak teh ate dove santriya teh sabh da barabar da hakk aa, jisda dil karda dekh ke hila lave apne lann nu,  par nangi main apne ghare hi hundi aa,, nahun layi vi teh chudan layi vi"
"kanjari nah hove kise than di, apne hi bhara nu bhainchod bna ditta lucchi neh"

simran usnu cherdi hoyi boli.
suneeta vi hasde hoye "main nahi baniya usnu bhainchod, app hi usneh chod ditta fad ke, teh ban gaya bhainchod"
"rehan deh ni, mein ni sunani teri eh chodan-katha, saali nu sun sun kan pakk gaye, par chud chud tera tidd ni bhariya"
suneeta vi usnu dhukwa utar dindi hoyi "ni jad tu chudi, uddo dassi ke tidd bhar gaya ke nahi, mein teh apne bhara toh hi chud di aa, tu jinna ambi vanngu bina chude pakki jani eh lagda saare sehar deh lann leh vi tera tidd ni bharna"
"shut up kinni vaar kiha, mainu edda nah boliya kar, mainu changa nahi lagda" simran vi hasdi hoyi bol payi, par chudyi di gal karde karde usde momme jarror thode hard hon lag paye si.
jidda hi oh class deh kol pujiya ta sahmne uhna da senior jassa jisda poora naam jaspreet singh hunda, khada si jehda ke simran teh try marda si, simran nu kolo langhdi nu "ik mint gal suni, simran"
simran ruk jandi eh par suneeta class vich varh jandi eh. jaase val vekhdi hoyi "hanji dasso, ki kehna"
jassa vi simran nu upar toh leh thalle tak vekhde hoye teh fir usde mommiya nu niharde hoye "kehna ki aa, ohi jo tainu enni vaar kiha, main tainu pasand karda, dosti karni tere naal" 
simran usnu vekhdi hoyi thode gusse vich "kinni vaar kiha tuhanu, main edda di kudi nahi, main koi dosti nahi karni tuhade naal"
jassa vi hasde hoye "gussa kyun huni aa, jatt da pata nahi tainu lagda, dosti teh karke hi hatna tere naal"
simran khijdi hoyi "jattti da vi pata nahi tuanu fer, jado nah teh nah, Smajh lao meri gal"
jassa simran teh bula nu vekh apne bulla teh jeeb ferde hoye"oh tere vargi patola jatti gussa kardi nahi,  mere varge jatt deh thale lami pai cheeka mardi sohni lagdi"
"ki bakwass karde, mainu bulaun di lod nahi agay toh" bol ke simran class val tur paindi eh, bhave oh jasse nu pasand nahi kardi si, par edda jasse da kuch kuch bolna us nu pehlay changa nahi lagda si, par hun oh vi ehna da swaad lain laggi si.
jassa usdi doldi bund nu vekh sochda "ki patakha ah bbhainchod, saala edda da bomb aa jehda bina chale hi dhamake karda firda. saali da jinna suha rang aa, jine tikhe nain nakash aa unna hi gadar sareer aa, saali deh momme lagda nahi 34 toh ghatt hone, lakk saali da masa 26 da, bund bhainchod vi 33-34 teh hou, nahi sali 34-35 hou, utto bhainchod kapde poore fit paundi eh, eh saali pata ni kyun nahi mandi, jawani poori charhi aa teh ehnu lann ni chahida, ki pata saali ghar deh aand-gwaand ch dindi hove kise nu, aand gwaand ki edda di rann da teh bhara hi kanda kad dinda" jassa class vich vardi hoyi simran nu vekh sochda teh phir apne dosta val tur painda eh jehde sara din canteen vich bairhe kuriya tarde rehnde neh.
Simran class vich varh suneeta deh kole behndi hoyi "ni tere kolo rukiya nahi janda si uthe"
"main ki karna si tuhade dova vich, ki kehnda si" suneeta simran nu cherdi hoyi boldi eh.
simran vi muskraundi hoyi "kehna ki si kanjar neh, ohi jo ik saal toh kehnda eh ke pasand karda"
suneeta maskhari kardi hoyi "ni pasand teh karna hi eh, poora roabdaar teh sohna munda, teh utto tu vi college di sabh toh sunaki kuri eh, tere teh ta saara college marda, bass us kolo darde tere kole ni koi aunda, hor ki kehnda yaar tera"
simran usdi gal sun hasdi hoyi "ni mera koi yaar ni oh, enna sohna lagda teh apna yaar bna leh usnu, dass teh ditta ki kehnda si ke pasand karda, mere vargi jatti kehnda us vargay jatt deh thale lami  payi sohni lagdi eh" simran bol teh jandi eh, fer apni kahi gal naal thoda sharma vi jandi eh.
suneeta usnu ghoor ke (chedkhani wali nazar naal) dekhdi hoyi teh usde patt teh hath mardi hoyi "ni mainu teh dasiya nahi, gal lame pain tak puj gayi,  teh tu kehndi pasand kardi eh"
simran thoda gussa dikhaundi hoyi teh hasdi hoyi "ajj hi bhonkiya kutte neh" 
teh fer suneeta nu sharat naal jawab dindi hoyi "mainu oh pasand nahi, par bhonkiya teh usneh sach hi aa, mere vargi jatti os vargay kise sohne ucche lambe jatt deh thale lami pai cheeka marr marr marwaundi hoyi, swaad laindi hoyi hi sohni lagdi eh"

suneeta vi galla da maja laindi hoyi ale dwale vekh simran deh momme nu thoda jiha dba ke boldi eh "ki gal bada dil karda jatti da lami pain nu, fudi marwaun nu, cheeka maran nu teh ehna amba nu chooswaun nu"
simran usde hath nu pase kardi hoyi "app teh tu luchhi eh, apne bhara toh marwaundi eh,  main ki udda vi kise vaare ni bol sakdi"
suneeta vi hasdi hoyi "teh tu vi ban jah luchi, pai jah apne bhara karan deh thale, chudwa leh apni choot, udda vi tera bhara jatt vi aa, sohna uchha lamba vi aa, chudwa leh cheeka màar maar ke"
simran usnu akha dikhaundi hoyi "mere veer layi edda da bolan di lod nahi, saada rishta bahut saaf teh pak eh"
suneeta vi simran nu gussa hundi vekh chup ho jandi eh teh use vele proffesor class vich aa janda eh.
udar jassa canteen vich apne pakke dost Lovdeep jisnu sare lovi kehnde si kole behnde hoye "baki teh kidhar reh gaye"
lovi vi hasde hoye "tainu pata teh aa yaar mainu oh saale seedal jihe pasand nahi, tere karke uhna naal uth beh layi da,oh ki mainu teh saala koi vi pasand ni college vich, tu apna dass mil aya apni saheli nu"
jassa vi hasde hoye "chal bund marr uhna di, tu kahe teh saaliya naal bol chal band kar dinde, teh rahi saheli di gal, oh saali teh ukhad ukhad boldi"
lovi vi hasde hoye "yaar jeh jiyada aukha eh teh chuk lainde aa time kise din, kar layi reejha pooriya, naale usde naal di ayi aa, teri bhainchod gal jad banu, uddo banu, mera teh jugaad lava deh usdi saheli naal"
jassa jasde hoye "oh hadd karda veer, tainu kado mana kita main, kar leh gal jafo vi dil karda"
Lovi jasse val hairaani naal vekhde hoye "ajj kidda mann gaya bai, ajj maniya teh ajj hi gal kar lainda, ajj ki hune kar lainda, bhainchod kal tu fer nah kar ditti aukha ho jau, chal uth chalde aa uhna di class vich"
jassa hasde hoye "tu veer nah time laya kar, saali fudi di gal hove bhave ladayi di, main ethe hi baitha tu jah aa"
Lovi jassa nu "main aunda 5 minta vich ethe hi rahi" keh ke simran di class val tur painda
udar suneeta teh simran vi class lah ke bahar aa rahiya si teh sahmane lovi nu vekh simran hasde hoye "Leh aa gaya tera ranjha jis layi roz ban-than ke aundi"
suneeta vi hasde hoye "leh aunda teh roz hi aa, bass mere kole aun toh pata nahi kyun sangda, ik tere wala oh jassa, roz hi rok ke khad jamda tainu"
ese time Lovi uhna kole aa simran val vekhde hoye "bhabi ji, ik mint layi main suneeta naal gal karni si" 
simran gusse naal "main koi tuhadi bhabi nahi, agay toh bulana teh naam nal bulayi, nahi teh koi lod nahi bolan di, teh jis naal gal karni os nu puch gal karni us neh ke nahi, mainu ki puchda" kehndi hoyi utho tur paindi eh teh suneeta Lovi val vekhdi hoy uthe hi ruk jandi.
Lovi suneeta di akha vich vekhde hoye "yaar gal karni si tere naal ik suneeta"
suneeta vi lovi di akha vich vekhde hoye "hanji bolo"
Lovi "chal canteen vich chalde aa, coffe pinde hoye gal kar lainde aa"
Suneeta muskra ke " ok theek aa ji"
dove canteen val tur painde neh teh thodi der khadi simran nu suneeta boldi "asi canteen vich jah rahe aa, tu vi chal"
simran suneeta val vekh " ok tuc chalo, main pichhe pichhe aundi aa washroom jah ava" teh washroom val tur paindi eh
lovi suneeta nal canteen val jande hoye "suneeta yaar, main tainu bahut pyar karda, tuhade naal dosti karna chaunda ah"
suneeta usdi gal sun andro andri khush hunde hoye teh muskraunde hoye "ajj kidda pyar ho gaya iko din vich tuhanu"
lovi vi muskraunde hoye "karda teh uddo dah jado pehlay din tainu vekhaiya si, bass kehan toh darda si"
suneeta khush vi muskraundi hoyi man vich sochdi "pyaar meri jutti, chodan nu firda, teh main vi teh ban than ese layi aundi ke tu vekhe, kade ta kole aa bole ke suneeta tainu chodna, main vi bola ke puchda ki khol deh nara, paa deh gaddi kache-pakke rah, jidhar nu pauni"
lovi suneeta nu chup vekh "ki gal boli ni kuch,  gussa ho gayi meri gal sun"
ese vele xoh canteen vich puj jande neh teh jasse deh naal wali table teh beh jande neh. jassa vi hairani naal uhna nu vekh sochda "sala puchan gaya si sidha hi naal leh aya, bahut tez aa bhain da yaar, naal wali disdi nahi oh kithe reh gayi"
suneeta vi kursi teh behndi hoyi ik pal layi jasse nu vekhdi teh fer lovi val vekhde hoye "nahi nahi gussa nahi hoyi, bass eho soch rahi si ke main teh app tainu pasand kardi si, par tu kade buliya hi nahi mainu"
lovi usdi gal sun hasde hoye "main vi kado da kehan nu firda si, bass kehan toh darda si"
suneeta hasdi hoyi "tere vargay darde reh jande teh geo koi hor kha janda"
Lovi vi hasde hoye "ki hoya kehan toh darda si, par kise hor nu kehan vi nahi ditta, madhani teh main hi chaluni aa, geo kadna vi app hi aa teh khana vi app hi aa"
Lovi di duhare arath wali gal sun suneeta sharmaundi hoyi "acha ji, mainu teh lagga mainu koi like nahi karda, ajj pata lagga ke jisnu main like kardi ose neh kise nu geo deh nere nahi aun ditta"
ese vele simran canteen vich aa jandi eh
teh uhna deh kole behan lagdi, Lovi usnu rokde hoye "tuc jasse kole beh jao, asi thoda gal karni si please"
simran pehlay teh lovi val vekhdi teh fer canreen vich vekhdi, koi table khali nah vekh canteen toh bahar jaan da sochdi.
simran deh mann di gal bujhdi hoyi suneeta "bass 5 mint layi ruk jah coffe pee ke chalde aa please"
suneeta di gal sun simran usnu ghoordi eh teh fer jasse deh kole behndi hoyi jehda ke 4-5 ku foot di duri teh baitha si , boldi "jaldi kar, class vi launi aa"
lovi canteen deh counter val mooh kar ucchi deh ke bolda "4 coffee liyayi yaar chheti cheti" teh fer suneeta naal galla karan lagda

simran nu apne naal canteen vich pehli vaar naal baithi nu vekh jassa "ajj teh bhag khul gaye jatt deh"
simran us val vekh thoda gusse naal "suneeta nu mana nahi kar sakdi si, ki ijjat reh jandi usdi ke usdi pakki saheli usdi gal tak nahi sun di"
jassa hasde hoye "fer teh lagda suneeta nu hi kehna paina ke tere naal gal karwa dave, ki pata uadi madad naal hi saade sineh thand pai jave"
simran da usdi gal sun hassa nikal janda "koi lod nahi, main eh gal teh usdi vi nahi manani"
Jassa usdi gal sun hasde hoye jawab dinda "meri vi nahi sunani gal, suneeta di vi nahi" jassa usde mommiya val ishara karde hoye "ehna di hi mann leh fer" 
jasse da ishara smajhdi hoyi simran "tu fer suru ho gaya, naale eh kuch nahi kehnde"
jassa usde mommiya nu vekh fer simran di akha vich vekhde hoye "kyun kehnde nahi eh, ke koi sanu vi fad ke daba dave, pakke hoye santriya da rass kad dave koi"
simran gussa hundi hoyi bhave galla da swad usnu vi aunda si "bakeass band karo, mere naal edda di puthi galla nah kariya kar, kinni vaar kiha"
ese time waiter coffee table teh rakh janda
jassa coffe da ghut bharde hoye "pee leh coffee, thandi ho jani nahi teh"
simran vi coffee chuk pean lagdi eh
jassa mud gal agay vadhaunde hoye "puthiya galla nahi karda ru sidhi ho ke deh de"
simran sehaj subah bol paindi eh "ki" teh fer apni boli gal teh sharminda ho jandi.
jassa vi ehda faida xhukde hoye "ohi jattiye, jo jatt tere kolo mangda, ohi jo tu luko ke rakhdi eh"
simran usdi gal teh gussa hundi hoyi "sharam nahi aundi, ki boli jana"
jassa hasde hoye "dil di gal karda, dil mangda mein tera, tu ki smajhi, kuch galat teh nahi smajhi"
simran di coffee khatam ho jandi eh teh khada hundi huyi "kuch nahi smajhi mein, naale mere toh dur riha kar" keh khadi ho jandi teh suneeta nu bulaunde hoye "chal chaliye, teri coffee nahi lagda ajj mukani aa"

suneeta vi coffee da akhari ghut bhardi hoyi "kyun aukha hoyi jandi eh, khatam ho gayi, chal chaliye" teh lovi nu bye bol simran nal canteen toh bahar val tur paindi eh.
Lovi jasse deh kole behnde hoye "kidda fer hoyi gal bhabi naal"
jassa hasde hoye "kithe hoyi gaand gulaiya usdiya, eh nah bol oh nah bol, saali swaad vi layi jandi galla da par mann fdi kise paase nu nahi, tu dass ki kehndi tere wali"
lovi vi hasde hoye "kehna ki saali nu app agg laggi aa, mann gayi ikale milan layi"
teh dove hasan lagde
simran suneeta nal class val jande hoye "ki gal hoyi fer teri lavi nal, naale pehlay din hi coffe layi mann gayi"
suneeta hasde hoye "kehna ki si ohi pyaar vyaar deh drame, tu coffee nu kehndi, ke pehlay din hi mann gayi coffee layi, puchh ke teh vekhda mein fudi deh deni si pehlay din hi"
simran hasdi hoyi "bahut agg laggi marwaun di"
suneeta hasdi hoyi "agg teh mera bhara thandi kar dinda, eh teh ehnu like kardi,  ese layi deh deni ehnu vi, naale kehra kuch ghass jana fudi da, dho ke fer edda da hi ho jana ehne"
teh dove hasan lagdiya teh class vich puj jandiya neh.
college toh baad simran ghar aa jandi eh
teh ghar vich varde hi "mom ki baniya ajj khan layi, bhukh laggi aa"
sharanjit vi hasde hoye "gobi banayi aa, kapde badal ke kha leh, oh karan vi aa gaya apne collge toh, usnu vi deh dayi roti"
"hanji,  usde naal hi kha laindi aa, udda vi oh kade kade ghar milda oh, oh pata nahi sara din ki karda rehnda"
"eve nah boliya kar munde nu, bahut sau putt aa mera, eh teh khasma khani it ooyiti jagi pata ni ki karda piya, jis karke pehla sara din college vixh teh fer tusiona teh dhake khana rehnda, khasma nu khave edda di pardayi, kinni vaar kiha ke ikala ikala munda saada, ki lod aa enna matha maran di kitaba naal"
simran vi hasde hoye "ahoo ladle teh hi pyaar aunda, main vi teh ikali ikali dhee hi aa tuhadi, mainu kade nahi kehnde ke nah matha mariya kar kitabala naal"
"kure tu baigane ghar jana, kuch parh lau teh kam hi au, teh ajj kal teh munde kehnde vi neh ke kuri parhi likhi hove" sharanjit hasdi hoyi boldi.
simran khijhdi hoyi "bass karo fer ohi leh ke beh gaye, naale tuhanu nahi ki parhi likhi nooh chahidi" 
sharanjit hasde hoye "ni mainu teh anpad vi chal jau, par jidda karan kitaba naal matha marda, lagda nahi usnu anpad pasand au"
teh dove mava dheeya hasan lagdiya
teh andar kamre vicho karan di awaz aundi "apniya hi galla leh ke beh gayiya, mom kado da kiha bhukh laggi aa"
simran apne kamre vich vardi hoyi "eddi bhukh laggi aa teh app ni uth ke kha hundi, ruk jah 2 mint vich aundi aa leh ke"
"jaldi leh aoo didi, mom nu vi kado da kiha"
simran vi apne kamre vicho kapde badaldi hoyi "bass 2 mint karan, leh ayi"
simran ik khula jiha kala top paa laindi eh

teh phulla wali ik tang jahi lower paa rasoi vich jah ke dova layi 2 pleta vich roti paa laindi eh teh karan deh kamre val tur paindi eh.
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#13
Bhut vadia... Waiting for next
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#14
bahut sohna likh rahe ho......swaad aa gya pad ke,........conversation bahut wadiya likhde ho......
keep going......u r awesome.....
keep writing
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#15
great update
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#16
Bahut hi vadiya story shuru kiti hai tusi. Plot vakhra hai baki stories naalo. Conversation bahut vadiya likh rahe ho. Eda hi vadiya likhde raho. dhanwad.
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#17
sirrraaaaa
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#18
kehar karta
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#19
chachi te bhi focus karo
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update waiting
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