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Fantasy Yash - ek suppar hero
#1
Dosto me yas khatri ek new story suru karne jaraha hun jisme thoda bhot megic hoga jyada nahi or 1 hafteme 3 update aayenge es me pic bhi honge or use sirf manoranjhan ke liye estemal hoga eska kisise koi lena dena nahi he
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Mera naam yas khatri he or me ek studant hun me mere 2 dosto ke sath gujrat ke ek chote sahar me rehtahun abhi abhi ham teeno college me admisan liyahe or ham teeno eksath rehte he ek mohalleme.
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Yas khatri
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Me ek middal clas femeli se hun vese to mere gharme bhot log he lekin me yahan akela apne dosto ke sathhi rehtahun unka entro dedeta hun baki jese jese sab aate jayenge vese vese unka intro dunga or me akela kyu rehtahun ye badme pata chalega.
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Ye ek anath he bachpan se hamare gharme hi rehta tha or mere ghar chodne ke baad ye bhi mere sath hi aagaya tha ham dono dost se jyada bhai he.
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Ye bhi mera dost he ye bhi anath he ye 3 saal se hamare sath he ye jyada mere bareme nahi janta lekin dil ka safh he.
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Duniya me har taraf bas paap hi paap fela huva he jahan dekho vahan hatya,balatkar,lut,risvat, beemani yahi sab chal rahahe kalyug har taraf chaya huvahe ese naholme kuch ese log bhi he jo hamesa uparvale ko yaad karte he or kisi masiha ka entejar karte huve apne jhivan ko bita rahe he esehi ek pahadi elaka jo kafhi sunsan he vahan ek aasrah he jiske aaspas parakruti apna sondary liye us aasram ko manmohak banai huve he hartaf haryali ped podhe tarah tarah ke ful or usme se aati huvi bhini bhini manko sant kardene vali khusbo bas aadmi ekbaar yahan aajaye to yahin rehjaye es aasramme ek bhot hi siddh purus rehtehe jinke mukhpe hamesa ek tej or muskuraht hoti he joki bahar ke kubsurat parakrutik sondary kobhi pikha kehneke liye kafhi he aasram ke ek room me baba bethe huve he aaj vo bhot jyada khus the unke aaspas unke 5 sisy bethe huve the or babaki ati prasaan hote huve chehreko dekh rahe the sisyo se raha nahi gaya.
Sisy 1 : kya huva baba aap aaj jyada hi prasann lagrahe he.
Sabi sisuy: bataiye baba.
Baba: putro ab samay nikat aaraha he jab hame jo jimmedari mili the sadiyo se vo ab jaldi hi puri hone vali he.
Sisy3: konsi jimmedari baba.
Baba: ab duniya ko unka masiha milne vala he bhot jald or uski ek amanat prabhu ne hame sonpi he jise use lotana he taki vo duniya ka uddhar karsake.
Sisy2: to kya baba ab dharti parse ab paap ko mitane vale ne janam leliya he?
Baba: janam to uska bhot pehle hi hochuka he ab to vo 18 saal ka bhot jald hojaye ga.
Sisy4: to kya baba hame use dhundna padega.
Baba: nahi bacho vo khud bakhud yahan phonch jayega.
Sisy 5: par kese baba.
Baba: vo uparvale ke jimme he hame uski chinta karneki koi aavasyakta nahi he.
Ese hi thodi or bate karke sablog apne kaamme lagjate he or baba uthke aasram ke paas ek nadi ke paas jake dyan mudrame beth jatehe.
Vahan se kafhi door ek saharme teen ladke ghoom rahe the dekhnese lagtahe kafhi ache dost he teeno hi dekhne me hendsam or desing the vo log ek rood se gujar rahe the achanak unme se ek ki najar rod ke ek taraf jati he jahan ek andhi budhi orat rod cros karrahi thi or ek taraf se ek caar bhot hi tejise uski taraf badh rahi thi vo ladka ye manjhar dekhke buddhi orat ki taraf dod padtahe uske dosto ki najar bhi udhar chali jati he or volog bhi uske piche piche dodne lagte he ladka ekdam se chalang lagake budhi orat ko eksaid khich letahe .
Ladka: maaji aap thik to hena.
Aourat: han beta.
Ladka: manji ese rodpe cros nahi karte kisiko boldeto abhiaapka acsedant hojata.
Aurat: kya karu beta aajke jamane me ko garib ki madad karta he.
Ladka: acha maaji aapko kahan janahe me choddeta hun.
Ladaka: (apne dostose, )tum log adde pohcho me bhi aatahun.
Uske dost nikal jatehe.
Aurat: kya naamhe beta tumhara.
Ladka: yas naamhe mera.
Aurat: bhot acha naam he beta ese hi baate karte huve dono rod ki us taraf phonch jate he.
Yas us budhi aurat ko.
Yas: acha maji me chalta hun.
Aurat: acha beta uparvala tumhe har khusi de.
Yas udharse chalne lagta he 4ya5 kadam chalke use yad aatahe ki kuch pese us orat ko dene chahiye taki uski kuch madad hojaye ye sochke yas piche ghumke.
Yas: maji.....
Lekin vahan koi nahi tha yas sochme padjata he ki vo aurat etni jaldi kahan gayab hogai vo aas paas bhi dekhta he lekin use koi nahi dikhta abhi vo kuch karta usse pehle hi uske mobail pe uske dost ke call aane lage yas ne bhi sar ko jhatke apne dosto ke laas phonch gaya.
(Abse yas ko me likhunga)
Ram: kahan rehgaya tha yaar.
Me: are kuch nahi yar chal ordar diya ya nahi.
Asalme hamlog ek dhabe pe aayethe aaj hamars 12th ka rizhalt tha or ham teno ache nambar se paas huye the esliye ham logo ne bahar ka program banaya tha or es dhabe ka khana bhot hi acha tha or hamlog jidhar rehte he udharse bhot karib tha.
Fir hamlogo ne khana ordar kiya or bate karne lage utneme ek bacha mele fhate kapdo me udhar aaya usko dekhkar hi lagta tha ki vo bhukha he vo logo ke paas jake khana mangne laga lekin sablog use dhukar ke bhaga dete jab meri najar uspe padi to mene use apne paas bulaya.
Me: kya naam he bacha aapka.
Bacha: raju naamhe sahab.
Me: bhuk lagi he.
Raju: han sahab bhot bhuk lagi he.
Me: acha edhar beth tere liye khana mangvata hun.
Raju: nahi sahab aap mujhe khana bandhvade mere sath meri behan bhi he vobhi bhukhi he.
Me: acha vo kahan he.
Raju: yahi khadi vo dekho sahab.
Mene us tarafh dekha vaha ek bachi khadi thi uski bhi halat thik nahi lagrahi thi hamne use bhi apne paas bulake donoko bharpet khana khilaya.
Me: raju tumlog rehte kahan ho .
Raju: hamlog yahin sadak ke kinare sahab ham anath he or hamara koi nahi he.
Me: kuch sochke acha me tumhara rehne ka bando bast kardu or padhne kabhi to tum javoge.
Raju: han sahab mujhe or meri bahenko padhne ka bhot sok he.
Me: raam tum en donoko anath aasram me phoncha do.
Ram donoko leke nikal jata he or me or syam dono ghar ki tarafh nikal jate he.
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Aaj mera b.d. tha mere dost bhot khusthe lekin aaj mera bilkul mood nahi tha aaj ghar ki bhot yaad aarahi thi 5 saal hogaye the mujhe ghar chode lekin aaj najane kyun dil baar baar beth jatahe sabka sochte huve lekin mere dosto ke saamne jahir nahi hone deraha tha lekin ram meri rag rag se vakifh tha usko andaja hogaya tha esliye usne syam ko kuch kamse bahar bejhdiya or mere paas aake beth gaya.
Ram: kya baat he.
Me: kuch nahi kyun.
Ram: aaj bhot udas lagraha he gharki yaad aarahi he.
Me: (fiki hasi ke sath)nahi to tujhe esa kyun lagta he.
Ram: eske do karan he .
Me: or vo kya.
Ram: 1 me tere sath bachpan se hun or teri harek baat me tere bina bole samajh jata hun. 2 or aaj tu chupchap sa he.
Me: han yaar asj najane kyun sabki bhot yaad aarahi he.
Ram: to fhon karle.
Me: nahi hargij nahi unhone khatha ki aajke baad kabhi bhi koi bhi rista nahi hamare bich.
Ram: yar tu jantahe usme unki koi galati nahi thi unko tere khilafh bhadkaya gaya tha or me 100 parsent kehsakta hun jab didi ko ye baat pata chali hogi to vo esmamle ki jadtak phonch ke sachai sabke saamne lai hogi ab tak to vo pachta rahe honge.
Me: chahe jobhi ho me pehal nahi karunga.
Etne me syam aagaya or hamari baat adhuri rehgayi lekin eske baad didi ki bhot jyada yaad aane lagi vo bachpan sehi mera bhot khayal rakhti thi me unke liye sabkuch tha or vo mere liye papa ko biznas se fursat nahi thi or maa jyada tar partiyo me ya koi program me bahar hi rehti thi esliye hamari aapasme bhot banti thi lekin fir ekdam se mujhe mere dosto ka khayal aaya or me sar jhatak ke khada hogaya volog bhi taiyar the to ham nikal gaye jangal ghumne lekin dil aaj bhot udas tha jese tese hamne din nikala or saamko firse hotel aagaye mene aayehi ram or syam ko boldiya.
Me: me aaram karne jaraha hun bhot thak gaya hun to koi bhi mujhe distarb na kare me apna khana room mehi khalunga.
Bolke room me aagaya lekin aaj dil ghabhra raha tha ek man hota fhone karlu lekin dustmra man kehta nahi socha sojata hun lekin karvate badalta raha nind nahi aayi aakhir kaar thakke room se bahar nikla or hotelse bhi chalte chalte jangalme phonch gaya or tahelte tahelte foll ke paas jake peth gaya me upar betha tha.

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will there be a snow white and the huntsman sequel

bhot hi behtarin najara tha dilko sukun miljaye esa jahan foll ka pani girraha tha vahan se rivar jesa tha dekhte dekhte kitna time nikal gaya pata nahi andhera hogaya tha ab acha bi lagraha tha esliye firse hotel ke liye nikalne ka sochke khada huva or khada hotehi.
Me: aaahh.
Esa laga jese per me kuch chubha ho ďekha to ek sanp bhot speed me udharse niklgaya usne mere per pe katliya tha or sayad bhot zehrila saap tha kyunki mujhe chakkarse aane lage or me chakar khake foll me girgaya.
Edhar ek ĺadki gharme sofhe pe bethe huve ekdamse .
Ladki: yyyaassss.
Aurat: kya huva beta .
Ladki: maa maa karke orat se lipat ke rone lagti he.
Aurat: kya huva he beta.
Ladki: maa yas ko kuch huvahe ma mere yas ko kuch huvahe.
Aurat: kuch nahi huva he beta.
Lekin ladki rote rote hi sojati he.
Vahin ek gharme ek ladki bistar pe leti huvi thi uska chehra bilkul murjhaya huva tha or badan bhi ekdam sukhke kante jesa hogaya tha or uske bajume ek aurat bethi huvi thi dekhnese lagtahe ladki ki maa ho us ladki ki hospital ke eqvipement lage huve the ladki jese koma me ho vese padi huvi thi or uski maa uske chehre ko dekhrahi thi ke ekdamse ladki ki aankhose aansu behne lagte he or hart beet badh jati he jisse pure kamreme maseen ki aavaj gunjne lagti he beep beep beep. Aurat jaldi se nurs ko bulati he nurs ladki ki condition dekhke ek injection laga deti he thodi derme ladki sant hojati he or beep ki aavaj bhi bandh hojati he yesab halat dekhke aurat ki aankhome aasun aajate he.
Aurat (manme)ye sab tumhari vajahse huva he yas me tumhe jinda nahi chidungi meri bachi ki es halat ke jimmedar tum ho ekbaar mujhe pata chale tum kahan chupke bethe ho fir tumhe batati hun til til ke marna kise kehte he.
Edhar me foll se niche girke sidha behte pani me girta hun or paani ke sath behtehuve jaraha tha.
Ab thodi der ke liye story tard party ki jubani.
Yas behte pani ke sath kafhi aage nikal chuka tha or kafhi aage jake ek ped ke tane ke sath yas ka sarir atak jatahe na jane kitni der pani me hogayi thi bhor honeko aayi thi utneme do aadmi joki sadhu jese dikhrahe the vo snnan karne ke liye aatehe subha ki sab kriya niptake jesehi snan ke liye pani me jatehe vese hi ek ki najar yas pe jati he.
Aadmi1 : vo dekho udhar koi he.
Aadmi:han lagta he behos hame uski madad karni chahiye dono jake yas ko pakad ke bahar nikal tehe kinare pe jake dekhtehe ki yas ki sans bhot dhimi chalrahi he or badan bhi nila pada huva he.
Aadmi 2: lagtahe jehar ka asar he.
Utneme aadmi ek ki najar yas ke per pe jati he jahan sanp ke dasne ke nisan the.
Aadmi 1 : vo dekho dans ke nisan he ese jaldi se guruji ke paas lechalte he vohi ese thik kar sakte he.
Fir dono yasko uthake aasram me lejate he.
Aadmi 1 : guruji dekhye ese sanp ne kanta he.
Guruji : yas ko dekhte he fir yas ko andar laneko bolte he or use andar lejake ghans Ki chatai pe
pe sula detehe or fir guruji kuch jadi buti pisske sanp ke dans pe lagate he fir apne sisyo se.
Guruji: eske kapde gile hogaye he ese nikal ke kambal odha do.
Sisy jesehi yas ke kapde nikal tehe vese hi guruji chink jate he .
Aaj ke liye etna hi dosto
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Jese hi yas ka sart nikala guruji chonk gaye kyun ki yas ki chest pe left me ek tatto ka nisan tha.

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Ye nisan dekhkar guruji samajh gaye ki yahi he masiha.
Guruji: ye vahi he.
Sisy1 : kon guruji.
Guruji: masiha burai ka kaal.
Sisy2 : lekin eski halat to bhot kharab he lagta nahi ki ye jinda bach payega.
Guruji: nahi ese kuch nahi hoga hona hota to ye kabka margaya hota.
Fir guruji udharse chale jate he or thodi derbaad jab kutiya me vapas aatehe tab unke hathme ek anguthi thi.

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Jo bhot hi adbhut or bhot purani lagrahi thi.
Sisy 2 : ye kya he guruji.
Guruji: ye eski amanat he jo hamare paas sadiyo se thi ye muje mere guru ne dithi or unko unke guru ne ese hi sadiyo bad ye anguthi hamare paas pohchi lekin ab ye eske sahi malik tak phonch jayegi or me apne kartavy se mukt hojaunga.
Edhar mere dono dost subha 10am mere room pe jate he to room bahar se lock tha jisse ye log hotel ke staf se puchte he jisse pata chaltahe yas kal saamse hotel ke bahar gaya he abhi tak nahi lota jisse sunke dono paresan hojate he or yas ki khoj me nikal jate he hotel ke bahar ye log sabko has ki pic dikha kar puch rahe the lekin yas ki koi khabar nahi milti..
Edhar pisach lok me
Ek havan kund jalraha tha or uske aage ek bhot badi murti rakhhi huvi thi jo kale kalar ki thi or uska chehra bhot hi khatarnak tha lal aankemhe muhmese 2 dant bahar ko nikle huve ekdam daravni murti uske paas ek saks betha punja karraha tha ye tha bhairaj pisaco ka raja sakti sali or krur ye saktiya pane ke liye setan ka aahvan karraha tha kyuki ese pari lok pe hamla karke unki rajkumari ke sath sadi karni thi jisse use bhot sari sakti yan mile jisse ye pure bramhand pe raj karsake esne 1martaba parilok pe hamla kiya lekin har ka samna karna pada tab uske guru ne salah di setan ki punja karke saktiyan mangne ki or parilok pe najar rakhne ke liye apne guptcharo ko bejhdiya taki rajkumari parilok ke bahar jaye or ye unhe agva karke unse sadi karsake.
Edhar guruji vo anguthi yas ko pehna dete he jisse yas ke sarir me halchal hone lagti he or snguthi se tej prakas nikalne lagta he jo puri kutiya me fel jatahe thodi der baad jab prakas kam hota he to ģuruji or unke sisyo ki najar yas pe padty he jisse guruji ke chehrepe ek muskan aajati he or unke dono sisyo ke chehre pe aschary .
Kyunki yas ka sarir pehlese jyada gathila hogaya tha or jehar ki vajahse jo nela tha vo ab nahi tha or vo anguthi bhi badal gayi thi.

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Guruji: ab ese saktiya to milgayi he lekin eska sarir abhi kamjor he esliye abhi thode din ye esehi nesudh avastha me rahega ab tumlog jake poonja ki taiyari karo tabtsk me snan karke aata hun bolke teeno nikal jate he.
Edhar ram or syam yas ko samtak khojte rehte he lekin unhe kuch pata nahi chalta jiske baad ye log security officer me jakar fir karvate he security officer bhi eskaamme lagjati he or aaspas me jitne bhi gunde mavali the unse puchtach karne lagti he.
Edhar yas ko behosi ki halat me sapna aatahe jisme ek aadmi jo sadhu jesa dikhraha tha or chehra ekdam ruhani tha unke samne khada tha..
Yas: he guruvar aap kon he or me kahan hun.
Guru: vats me tumhara guru hun or tum abhi ek swapn me ho.
Yas: mere guru lekin mene to aapko aajtak nahi dekha or aap mere swapn me kese?
Guru: vats ye hamari pehli mulakat he asalme tumhara janm lok kalyan ke liye huva he tumhara janm bhot bade udesy ke sath huva he tumhe burai ka naas karna he or sansar ki hifajat karni he or pure sansar me pyar felana he.
Yas: me lekin me kese guruvar.
Guru: tum kyun nahi ye socho tumhe upar vale ne ek bhot naram dil diya he tumse kisiki taklifh dekhi nahi jati kyun ki upàr valene tumhe chunahe or me tumhe abyas karaunga or gyan bhi dunga fir guru yasko anguthi ke bareme batate he or yebhi ke uska sarir abhi kamjor he esliye abhi vo behos he fir yas ko guru alag alag tarahke ladneke tariko ke bareme batate he or yas ki siksa suru karte he .
Aaj 5 din hogaye the yas ko gayab huve lekin uske bareme koi bhi khabar nahi thi.
Ram or syam dono hi lage huve the yas ko dhundh neme lekin uska koi pata nahi chalpa raha tha ŕam ab ek call karta he.
Ram: hello yas 5 din se gayab he.
Ladki: kya or ye baat tum mujhe ab bata rahe ho.
Ram: yas ne bola tha jabtak jarurat na pade tabtak tumhe contect na karu.
Ladki: acha tumlog kahsn ho abhi or kya huva tha.
Fir ram use puri baat batata he jisse sunkar.
Ladki: acha me edhar dekhti hun koi dusman ya kisine kidnep karliya ho..
Or call kat karke ladki kisiko call karke apne cabin me bulati he.
5 minit me ek hatta katta aadmi uske samne khada tha sar jhukake.
Ladki: boss 5 rinse lapata he harjagah dundho koi bhi gunda chota ho ya bada sabko uthake puchtach karo.
Aadmi; ok mem .
Ladki; or han boss ki pehchan chupi rehni chahiye.
Aadmi: ok medam bolke nikal jata he.
Aadmi ke janeke baad ladki manme.
Ladki: kahan ho tum yas tum ese nahi jasakte abhi to mene apne pyar ka ijhar bhi nahi kiya.
Edhar yas ki taraf
5 dinme hi yas ki bodi ekdam solid hogayi thi lekin abhi tak use hos nahi aaya tha or sapne me uski trening chal tmrahi thi ladai ki or gyan bhi derahe the guru.
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