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BECHARA-DIL-KYA-KARE ~ Monika
#1
"bhai, ye Taashipur kon si bus jaayegi?" pratap ne paas me khade ek nav-yuvak se pucha. Us nav-yuvak ne pahle to pratap ko upar se neeche tak ghura phir paas me khadi ek bus ki taraf ishaara kar diya. Pratap ne apna beg uthaya aur bus ki taraf chal diya. Bus lagbhag khali hi thi. Pratap ek window seat par baith gaya. 
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Pichle do dino se ghar me chal rahe drama aur emotional atyachaar ka repeat pratap ke dimaag me ghumne laga.
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Pratap delhi ki ek multi-national company me project manager tha. Kal hi pratap 15 din ki chutti lekar ghar aaya tha. Kaaran tha maa ki kharab tabiyat. Pratap jaise hi ghar pahucha to usne paya ki pita ji drawing room me baithe aaloo ke paraatho ka aanand le rahe hai. "pita ji, maa kaha hai?" pita shree ko yu paraathe khata dekh pratap ne hairaani se pucha. Paraathe kuch jyada hi swadisht the shayad kyuki pita jee ne bina kuch bole hi kitchen ki taraf ungali ghuma di. Pratap jab kitchen me pahucha to ek baar phir hairaan ho gaya. Maa bahut khushi se aaloo ke paraathe bana rahi thi. Thodi der to pratap asamanjas (duvidha) me raha ke aakhir ye maajra kya hai? "maa.........." is se pahle ki pratap kuch puch pata maa ne aaloo ke paraatho se bhari plate uske haath me thama di. Pratap chupchaap wo plate le kar pita ji ke bagal me aakar baith gaya. Ab tak saari kaahani pratap ko samajh aa gayi thi. Maa ne ek baar phir jhutha bahaana bana kar pratap ko ghar bulaya tha. "pita jee mai aap logo ko pahle hi bata chuka hu ke mujhe shaadi nahi karni lekin phir bhi aap log maante kyu nahi?" pratap ne pita ji se kaha. Is se pahle ki pita ji kuch jawab dete maa waha pahuch gayi- "chup kar ke paraathe kha verna ek thappad padega to saari hoshiyaari dhari rah jaayegi". Maa ke is counter-attack ke jawab me pratap sirf itna hi bol paya "lekin maa aapko to maloom hai saari baat!" "ha ha maloom hai hume sab, tujhe shaadi nahi karni to mat kar, teri marji lekin kabhi shakal dekhi hai apni aaine me? Jab tu yaha se gaya tha to laal tamatar jaise chehra tha tera aur ab din raat kaam kar kar ke pichke hue kele jaise dikhne laga hai." maa aaj turant hi jawab diya. Iske baad pure din ke drama aur emotional atyachar ke baad aakhir-kaar maa-pita ji ne pratap ko pita ji ke bachpan ke dost major ram singh ke yaha "taasipur" me apni chuttiya bitaane ke liye raaji kar hi liya.
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#2
"taashipur" utrakhand ke khubsurat parvato ke beech basa ek chhota sa town. Bus apne nishchit samay par taashipur ke liye rawana ho gayi. Bus lagbhag khali hi thi kyuki bus me is samay keval 15-20 log hi the.
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Tashipur ka safar 7-8 ghante ka tha. Pratap baithe baithe ek baar fir apne ateet me kho gaya. Aaj se 10 saal pahle pratap ki job lagi thi delhi ki ek multinational company me. Pratap ke maa-pita jee bahut khush the aur unhone pratap ke liye ladki dekhna bhi shuru kar diya. Ek mahine ki kadi mehnat ke baad maa ko ek ladki pasand aa gayi thi. Pratap ko lekar maa-pita jee ladki dekhne gaye the. "punam" yahi naam tha us ladki ka. Ladki ko khana banana aur ghar ke baaki kaam karne nahi aate the lekin wo dekhne me bahut hi khubsurat thi. Maa-pita jee to pahle se hi raaji the. Pratap ne punam se akele me kuch baat karni chahi to dono ko akela chhod diya gaya. Pratap ne punam se sirf itna hi pucha ki ye shadi uski marji se ho rhi hai ya nahi? Wo kisi aur se pyar to nahi karti? Punam ne jawab me sirf itna hi kaha ki ye shaadi uski marji se ho rahi hai. Punam se baat karne ke baad pratap ne shaadi ke liye haa kar di. 15 din me hi dono ki shaadi bhi ho gayi. Suhaagraat ko punam ne pratap se kaha ki "she needs some time to adjust in new family. Isliye use kuch samay chahiye." pratap ko uski baat sahi lagi. 7 din baad jab pratap ki chhutiya khatam ho gayi to wo vapas delhi chala gaya aur punam apne ghar. Kuch samay baad jab pratap vapas aaya to punam ko lene uske ghar gaya lekin punam ne pratap ko na-mard (impotent) bata kar uske saath jaane se inkaar kar diya aur sath me devorce ki demaand bhi ki. Jabki sachayi to ye thi ke un dono ne kabhi ek dusre ke sath sex kiya hi nahi tha. Is baat ne pratap ke dimaag par gahra prabhaav dala tha. 6 mahine tak case chalne ke baad pratap aur punam ka devorce ho gaya. Punam ne aisa kyu kiya pratap kabhi nahi jaan paya aur na hi usne jaan-ne ki koshis ki. Is ghatna ke baad pratap ke maa-pita jee ne uski dusri shadi karaani chahi lekin pratap ne saaf inkaar kar diya. Pichle 10 saal pratap ne sirf kaam par dhyaan diya. Uske maa pita jee lagataar use maanane ki koshish karte rahe . Kal jab pratap ghar aaya to maa-pita jee pratap ko tashipur major ram singh ke yaha apni chhuttiya bitaane ke liye raaji kar liya. Pratap ache se jaanta tha ki chhuttiya sirf bahana hai. Lekin pratap ne kaafi der sochne ke baad ye tay kiya ki kisi dusre ki vajah se wo apne aap ko saja nahi dega. Pratap ne tay kar liya tha ke agar use ladki pasand aayi to wo shaadi kar lega. 
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"excuse me, can i sit here" is awaaz ke saath hi pratap apne ateet se nikal kar vapas present me aa gaya. Ek 25-26 saal ki videshi ladki pratap ke saamne khadi thi. "yeah sure" pratap ne kaha to wo ladki pratap ke bagal me baith gayi.
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#3
chapter-1 #update-3
"jennifer" us videshi ladki ne pratap ki taraf hath badhate hue kaha. Pratap apne khyalo me khoya hua tha isliye thoda chauk gaya fir sara maajra samajhte hue usne bhi hath badha diya "pratap".
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Iske baad dono me koi baat nahi hui. Pratap parvato ke piche chhupte hue suraj ke shaandar drasya (scene) ko dekh raha tha. Suraj dhal raha tha aur panchi apne ghoslo ki taraf laut rahe the. Pratap in khubsurat najaro me khoya hua tha. Delhi ki bhaag-daud wali jindagi jeene wale pratap ko ye sab swarg jaisa lag raha tha. Pratap is baat se puri tarah anjaan tha ke agle 15 din uski puri zindagi badalne wale hai.
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Pratap lagataar bahar dekh raha tha lekin 'jennifer' ki 2 neeli aankhe lagataar usi par tiki hui thi. Jennifer baar baar uske taraf dekhti aur dhire se muskura deti. Pratap is sab baato se anjaan abhi bhi parvato ke piche chhupte suraj ko dekh raha tha. 
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Shaam ke 6 baj chuke the. Taashipur pahuchne me abhi 2 ghante aur baaki the. Pratap ko safar karne ki adat nahi thi. Bus me safar karne ki to bilkul bhi nahi. Isliye pratap ko thakawat (tiredness) mahsus ho rahi thi. Pratap ne thodi der sone ka socha aur aankhe mund li.
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Bus parichalak ki karkash awaaz se jab pratap ki aankh khuli to "taashipur" aa chuka tha. Pratap ke bagal wali seat khali thi matlab jennifer utar chuki thi. Pratap ne apna bag uthaya aur wo bhi utar gaya.
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Raat ke 8:30 baj rahe the. Pratap ko bhukh lag rahi thi. Pratap kuch khane ki soch kar ek dhaabe ki taraf badha. "hey pratap" kisi ki awaaj sun pratap palta to saamne ek 50-55 saal ke aadmi ko khada paya. "i m major ram singh" us aadmi ne apna parichay diya. Iske baad major ram singh ne apne driver pappu ko pratap ka bag utha kar gaadi me rakhne ko kaha. "uncle aapne mujhe pahchana kaise?" pratap abhi bhi thoda hairat me tha. "mere dost veer singh yani ke aapke papa ne tumhari photo mail kar di thi" major ram singh ne jawab diya. Raaste bhar major ram singh, pratap se kuch na kuch baat karte rahe. Kabhi wo apne army ke dino ke kisso sunaate to kabhi apne farming karne ke shaauk ke baare me batate rahe. 30 minute ke safar baad gaadi major raam singh ke ghar pahuch gayi thi. 
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END OF CHAPTER-1
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#4
chapter-2 (update-4)
Major ram singh ne ghar pahuch kar ek servant se pratap ka samaan guest room me rakhne ko kah diya. Pratap ko drawing room me baitha kar major ram singh andar kisi room me chale gaye. Major ke jaate hi servant chaay-naashta rakh gaya. 
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Major ram singh ka ghar ek bade area me bana tha, is baat ka andaaja pratap ne gate se ghuste hi laga liya tha.
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Drawing room ki saaj sajja bahut hi kalaatmak thi. Kisi ke hath se bani sundar pantings, jinme jyadatar rajastaani striyo (mahilao) ke chehre the. Saanwala rang , lambotar chehre, kajal bhari aankhe aur tikhi naake waale. Pratap ki najre Pure hall par ghumti hui ek jagah aa tiki. Saamne darwaaje par lage neele rang ke phulo ke print waale parde se ek khubsurat chehra pratap ke taraf dekh raha tha.
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"hey naughty girl" kahte hue major ram singh ne drawing room me pravesh kiya. Major ke saath ek 22-23 saal ka ladka bhi tha. Major aur wo ladka pratap ke paas sofe par baith gaye. Iske baad wo khubsurat chehre waali ladki bhi parde ke piche se nikal kar baaki sab logo ke saath sofe par baith gayi.
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"HE is my son 'MAYANK' and she she is my younger daughter CHETNA" major ne apne bachho ka parichay pratap se karwaya aur phir pratap ka parichay apne bachho se.



 (UPDATE-5)



Chaay khatam hone ke baad mayank , pratap ko 1st flore par bane guest room me chhod aaya. Pratap ke rahne ki vyavastha (arrangement) isi room me ki gayi thi. 

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Kamre me aate hi pratap ne pure kamre me najar daali. Kamra bahut hi saleeke se saja hua tha. Bed ke upar ek badi si panting lagi hui thi jisme baarish me bheegti hui ladki ki panting thi. 

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Pratap ne ladki ke chehre ko gaur se dekha to use ye chehra dekha hua laga.

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Din bhar ke safar ke baad pratap thoda thaka hua mahsus kar raha tha. Pratap ne shower lene ki sochi aur towel utha kar kamre se attached bathroom me ghus gaya.

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Nahane ke baad pratap ko kaafi acha mahsus ho raha tha. Pratap ne ghadi par najar daali to 9:30 ho rahe the, matlab dinner ko abhi adha ghanta tha. 

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Chalte hue pratap kamre me bani khidki ke karib aa gaya. Khidki khuli hui thi. Pratap ne bahar jhaanka. Neeche ka lawn pura us khidki se dikhta tha. Pure lawn me lights lagi hui thi. Kaafi der tak pratap aise hi us lawn ko dekhta raha. Phir use kuch yaad aaya to pratap vaapas bed ke taraf muda.

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Bed me pade hue apne pant ki jeb se usne mobile nikala. Vo taashipur pahuch gaya hai ye bataane ke pratap ne papa ko call ki. Call end karne ke baad jab pratap ne time dekha to dinner ko waqt ho chuka tha. 

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Pratap ne apne kapde pahne aur dinner ke liye neeche chal diya. 

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Dinner table par major ram singh pahle se hi baithe hue the. Pratap bhi unke paas jakar baith gaya.

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Thodi hi der me mayank aur chetna bhi aa gaye. Lekin un dono ke sath 30-32 saal ki ek ladki bhi thi.

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"pratap, ye meri badi beti ranuka hai." sabhi ke baithne ke baad major raam singh ne kaha. 

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"RENUKA" to yahi hai wo ladki jiske liye uske mata-pita ne use yaha bheja tha
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#5
Chapter-2 (update-6)
Pratap ne pahli baar renuka ko gaur se dekha. Gora rang , badi badi kajal lagi aankhe, gulaabi honth aur chhoti si naak. Chehre par bahut hi sadha hua paripakva (mature) look. Lagbhag 5"6' lamba bhara hua sharir. Pink colour ka salwaar kurta, ghane kaale lambe baalo ko aakarshak lekin betarteeb joode me lapeta hua. Kul mulakar renuka me ek aadarsh bahu ban-ne ke sabhi bahri lakshan usme the. Pratap ko ye hairaani bhi hui ki abhi tak renuka ne shaadi kyu nahi ki.
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Khaana khaate samay baat karna major ram singh ko pasand nahi tha, isiliye sabhi log bahut hi shaanti se khaana kha rahe the. 
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"beta, tum itna lamba safar karne ke baad kaafi thak gaye hoge. Jao jaakar aaram karo." khaana khaane ke baad major ram singh ne pratap se kaha.
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Pratap abhi bhi ye tay nahi kar pa raha tha ki use dusri shaadi karni chahiye ya nahi. Pratap soch raha tha ki- 'Achaa hua jo major ram singh ne aaj shaadi ke baare me koi baat nahi ki.' iske 2 kaaran the. pahli baat ye ki pratap kaafi thaka hua tha aur dusri baat ye ki wo abhi tay nahi kar paya tha ki dusri shaadi kare ya nahi. 
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Renuka me koi kharabi pratap ko najar nahi aayi. Renuka bilkul vaisi hi ladki thi jaisi har maa apni bahu ke roop me chahti hai. Pratap ne tay kiya ke kal wo renuka se baat karega. 
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Ye saari baate sochte sochte pratap upar apne kamre me aa gaya. Sone se pahle pratap ko ciggrate ki talab mahsoos hui. 
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Ciggrate yahi ek buri aadat ya lat thi pratap ki. Pratap ne apne bag se ciggrate aur lighter nikala aur chhat ki taraf chal diya.
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Chhat par pahuch kar pratap ne ciggrate jalayi aur kash bharne laga. Pratap ko apne peeche kuch halchal mahsus hui to pratap ne peeche mud kar dekha. 
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Piche Chetna khadi thi. "hi" chetna ne kaha. "hi" pratap ne jawab diya.
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"aaj aap kaafi boring mahsus kar rahe hoge na??" chetna ne pucha. "nahi. Aisi koi baat nahi hai. Vaise tum kis claass me ho?" pratap ne baat badhate hue pucha.
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"12th claass" chetna ne jawab diya. " mayank bhaiya kanpur se b.tech kar rahe hai aur renu didi art professor hai" thodi der jab pratap ne kuch aur nahi pucha to chetna ne khud hi bolna start kar diya.
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"last week mera 18 birthday tha. Isiliye mayank bhai aur renu didi aaye hai. Mayank bhaiya to kal chale jaayege but didi abhi kuch din aur rukegi. Maine bhaiya ko bhi rukne ko kaha lekin unke next semester ke exam aane waale hai so unhe jaana padega. Vaise mujhe ye exam bilkul pasand nahi hai phir bhi mai har saal apni claass top karti hu" chetna lagataar bolti ja rahi thi.
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"aapne ghar me lagi pantings to dekhi hogi, wo sab didi ne banayi hai. Unhe panting banana bahut pasand hai. Maine bhi ek do baar try ki lekin mujhse nahi banti ye pantings " chetna non-stop bole ja rahi thi. 
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"lagta hai aapko neend aa rahi hai , ok gud night kal morning me milte hai" itna bol chetna neeche gayi. Pratap bhi apne kamre me aakar so gaya.
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#6
chapter-4 #update-12
Udghatan samaroh khatam hote hote 7 baj gaye the. Renuka ne apni saheli ke sath khub enjoy kiya, lekin ek baat jo renuka ne notice ki wo ye ki pratap is dauran use (renuka) ko ignore karta raha. 
Renuka ne us din kuch aisi hi saari pahni thi-

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Is saari se renuka ka chikna pet aur navel saaf dikh raha tha aur uske cleavage ki jhalak bhi mil rahi thi. Pratap ke alava baaki saare mard is najaare ka bharpoor maja le rahe the.
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"chaliye" party khatam hone par renuka ne pratap se kaha aur phir dono bahar aa gaye. Dono car me baithe aur renuka ne car ko "taashipur" ke raste par aage badha di. 
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"abhi 7 baje hai 11 baje tak hum taashipur pahuch jayege" renuka ne drive karte hue kaha. Car apni speed se aage badh rahi thi aur dono bilkul shaant baithe the. "lagta hai aapko ye art gallery pasand nahi aayi" renuka ne chupi ko todte hue kaha. "aisi koi baat nahi, i enjoyed it" pratap ne chehre par juthi muskurahat laate hue kaha. 
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Iske baad ek baar phir dono chup ho gaye. Lekin shayad upar waale ko ye pasand nahi aaya aur usne baarish kar di. Baarish kaafi tej ho rahi thi. Bahar paani baras raha tha aur car ke andar do dil pathar bane hue the.
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Thodi dur jaakar renuka ne car rok di. Aage raaste par kaafi gaadiya khadi hui thi. "kya hua?" pratap ne pucha. "ye to bahar jakar hi pata chalega" renuka ne jawab diya. "theek hai, aap car me raho mai pata kar ke aata hu" kah kar pratap ne door open kiya aur barsaat me bheegta hua aage badh gaya, ye pata karne ki rasta jaam kyu hai?
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"baarish ke kaaran koi pahad tut kar raaste par gir gaya hai, jiske vajah se rasta jaam hai. Ab rasta kal subah tak hi khul payega" thodi der jab pratap laut kar aaya to usne renuka ko bataya. "shit, ab saari raat yahi rukna padega. Aur aap bahut bheeg gaye ho" renuka ne pratap ki taraf dekhte hue kaha. "ha, lagta hai jukhaam hone wala hai mujhe. Aadat nahi hai na baarish me bheegne ki" pratap ne apne chehre se paani saaf karte hue kaha.
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Renuka ne U turn liya aur gaadi ek baar phir raaste par daudne lagi. "ab hum kaha jaa rahe hai??" pratap ne pucha. "saari raat hum dono is car me to nahi bita sakte na, isiliye raat me kahi rukne ka jugaad to karna padega" renuka ne drive karte hue kaha.
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15 minute baad car ek chote se hotel ke saamne khadi thi. "jaante hai is hotel ki khaasiyat kya hai?" renuka ne kaha. "kya??" pratap ko na chaahte hue bhi puchna pada. "ye hotel yaha ghumne aane walo me bahut famous hai, khaaskar (specially) honeymoon couples me" renuka ne kaha. "aisi kya khaas baat hi isme" pratap ko ab is hotel me interest aane laga tha. Wo to aapko andar chal kar hi pata chalegi. 
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Car se hotel tak aate aate renuka bhi puri tarah bheeg gayi, pratap to pahle se hi bheega hua tha. "2 room chahiye" pratap ne counter par pahuch kar kaha. "sorry sir lekin sirf ek hi room khaali hai" counter par baithe manager ne kaha. "koi baat nahi, ek hi de do" is baar renuka boli thi. Renuka ne couter se room ki keys li aur dono room ki taraf chal diye. Samaan to vaise bhi dono ke paas kuch nahi tha.
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Aage chal kar pratap ne dekha ke ek bade se maidan me lakdi ke 15 cabin jo na jyada bade the aur na hi jyada chote, bane hue the. Renuka unme se ek room (cabin) ki taraf chal di aur pratap bhi uske piche chal diya. Dono is baat se bilkul anjaan the ki ye raat in dono ki jindagi me ek bada tufaan laane waali thi.
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chapter-5 #update-13
Cabin tak aate aate pratap aur renuka dono puri tarah bheeg chuke the. Renuka ki black saari uske zism se chipak gayi thi jiske kaaran uska chikna pet, gahra cleavage aur bhi ache se dikh raha tha. 
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Cabin jyada bada nahi tha. Isme ek bed tha jiska size itna tha ki usme 2 log let sakte lekin dono ko chipak kar letna padta. Matlab saaf tha ki ye bed honeymoon couples ke liye hi the. Bed ke upar ek bada sa poster laga hua tha jisme ek couple ka kissing karte hue scene tha. Poster me ladki ne sirf bikini pahni thi aur ladke ne underwear. Bed ke saamne ek table aur kursi rakhi hui thi. Table par kuch english magazins rakhi thi jinke cover page par hot hot models ki photos thi. Is cabin se juda hua ek baathroom bhi tha jiska darwaaza bed ki baaye taraf tha. Bed ki daayi taraf ek khidki thi, jo ki is waqt band thi. 
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"mai abhi aati hu" kah kar renuka baathroom me ghus gayi. Pratap kursi par baith gaya aur aaj din bhar ki ghatnaao ki baare me sochne laga. Subah renuka ne coffee ke cup ke sath use jagaya. Phir use ek novel me chetna ka likha hua love letter mila. Wo chetna se is baare me baat karne wala tha lekin use renuka ke sath yaha aana pada. Aur phir vapas laut-te waqt ye barish ho gayi aur jiski vajah se rasta jaam ho gaya aur use renuka ke sath is jagah aana pada. Pratap apni soch me duba hua tha tabhi kisi ne door par knock kiya. Pratap ne darwaaja khola to hotel me kaam karne wala ek ladka khana lekar aaya tha. Pratap ne us se khana liya aur phir darwaaja band karke vapas kursi par baith kar apni soch me dub gaya. 
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Pratap phir se din bhar ki ghatnao ke baare me sochne laga. Ek baar phir uska dhyaan tab tuta jab bathroom ka darwaaza khulne ki awaaz aayi. Renuka ek safed rang ka bathing gown pahan kar bahar aayi jo ki uske ghutne se 6" upar tak hi tha. Jiske kaaran renuka ki sudaaul mast jhaanghe pratap ko najar aayi lekin pratap ne ek baar phir renuka ko ignore kiya aur pratap bathroom me chala gaya.
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Thodi der baad jab pratap bahar aaya tha to uske jism par sirf ek towel thi jo uske kamar par lipti hui thi.
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Dono ke beech koi baat nahi hui. Dono chup chaap khana khane lage. Renuka ne ek baar phir notice kiya ki pratap use ignore kar raha tha. Ek khubsurat ladki ko ye kaise bardast ho sakta tha ki koi mard use lagatar ignore karta raha.
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"pratap, is everythis okay?" khaane ke baad renuka ne pucha. "yeah, everything is fine" pratap ne jawab diya. "to phir aap khoye khoye kyu hai, shaam se hi aapko notice kar rahi hu aap lagatar mujhe ignore kiye ja rahe hai? Plz tell me" renuka ne seedhe point par aate hue kaha. "naa...aahi nahi aisa to kuch bhi nahi hai" pratap ki haalat is waqt aisi ho gayi thi jaise kisi chor ko range hatho pakad liya gaya ho. 
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"mr. Pratap mai aapko apne baare me kuch batana chahti hu. School me mere ek boy friend tha 'vicky'. Mai use bahut pyar karti thi. Ek din mai class me apni ek book bhool aayi. School ke gate par pahuch par mujhe yaad aaya to mai vapas class ki taraf chal di. Class ke darwaaje ke paas pahuch kar mere kadam ruk gaye. Kyuki mujhe kuch awaaje classroom se aati hui sunayi di. Vicky, neha se baat kar raha tha. Neha padhayi me hamesha mujhe piche hi rahti thi. Vicky , neha se baat kar raha tha , isme koi badi baat nahi thi. Dono friends the ye mujhe maloom tha lekin dono ki baate sun kar mai andar tak hil gayi. 
Neha- vicky tumhe aur kitna time lagega is kaam ko karne me?
Vicky- jaanu bas is sunday ko kaam ho jaayega, maine renuka ko apne ghar bulaya hai. Wahi mai aur mere 4 dost renuka ke sath sex karege aur mai uski video bhi bana lunga.
Neha- aur uske baad wo video pure taashipur me har koi dekhega. Mai barbaad kar dungi renuka ko. Is renuka ke karan mai beauty contest haar gayi. Is renuka ko mai kahi muh dikhane layak nahi rahne dungi mai." 

Jaante ho pratap is ke baad maine class me jakar vicky ko kayi thappad maare. Aur is din ke baad maine ek baat tay kar li mai kabhi boyfriend nahi banaugi aur na hi kabhi shaadi karugi. Aaj mai wo expose karne waali saari jaan bujh kar pahni thi. Party me saare mard jaha mujhe bukhe kutte ki tarah ghur rahe the lekin ek baar meri taraf dekha bhi nahi. Mujhe usi pal tumse pyaar ho gaya tha pratap---I LOVE YOU"
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chapter-5 #update-14
Renuka ke muh se "I LOVE YOU" sun ke pratap ek jordar jhatka laga. Aaj ka din pratap ke liye jhatko se bharpoor tha. Subah aankh khulte hi use chetna ka love letter mila, jisne use puri tarah hila diya tha. Uske baad renuka ke sath party me jana pada, jaha par renuka ne behad hi sexy sari pahni thi, wo pratap ke liye dusra jhatka tha. Phir baarish ke kaaran rasta jaam ho gaya aur ab renuka ka use "I LOVE YOU" kahna. 
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Pratap ne ab tak apni 35 year ki zindagi me bahut se utaar-chadaav se gujra tha. Pratap ne har tarah ki paristiti (situation) ka saamna puri himmat se kiya tha. Lekin aaj pure din jo bhi uske saath hua tha, usne pratap ko pareshaan kar diya tha. 
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"kya hua?" Kaafi der tak pratap ko chup dekh kar renuka ne pucha. Pratap ne ab tak ye faisala (decision) le liya tha ke wo renuka se khul kar baat karega.
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"renuka, tumhe to maloom hai meri shaadi hui thi" pratap ne bolna shuru kiya. Renuka , pratap ki baat bahut dhyaan se sun ne lagi. "aur shadi ke agle din hi meri wife punam ne mujh par na-mard hone ka aarop laga diya aur court me talaaq ke liye arji de di" pratap ne ek gahri saans li aur phir bolna shuru kiya.
"is ghatna ne mujhe aur mere parivaar ko mentally disturb kar diya, mai nahi chahta tha ki baat be-vajah badhe kyuki maine ek baar punam se baat ki lekin wo nahi maani aur talaaq lene ke liye adi rahi. Jab usne rishta todne ka faisala kar hi liya tha to use manaane me koi fayda nahi tha aur mai ye bhi nahi chahta tha ki hum court me kutte-billi ki tarah lade isliye maine use shaanti se talaaq de diya" pratap ne side table par rakhi pani ki bottle se pani piya aur phir bolna shuru kiya.
"is ghatna ke baad mujhe ladkiyo se nafrat ho gayi thi aur maine ye tay kiya ki mai zindagi me kafi dubaara shadi nahi karuga. Kyuki mujhe lagta tha ki sabhi ladkiya ek si hoti hai, unhe sirf apne "maje" se matlab hoa hai. Aaj jab tumne wo exposing saari pahni to mujhe tumse nafrat ho gayi thi. Mujhe laga tha ki tum bhi un ladkiyo me se ho jo ladko ko sirf apne faayde ke liye istemaal karti hai. Isiliye mai tumhe lagataar ignore karta raha. Lekin tum bhi meri hi tarah gham ki maari aur dhokha khayi hui ho, is baat ne mere dil me tumhari liye jagah bana di" pratap ne kaha.

Pratap ne man me tay kiya ki ab waqt aa gaya hai ki wo renuka ko chetna ke love letter ke baare me batayega. "lekin renuka aaj subah....." pratap ne bolna shuru hi kiya tha ki renuka ne apne hontho par ungali rakh kar pratap ko rukne ka ishara kiya. 
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Is waqt renuka chair par baithi hui thi aur pratap bed ke kinare par taange neeche latka kar. Renuka apni jagah se uthi aur pratap ke dono taraf taange karke pratap ki god par baith gayi aur apne gulaabi honth pratap ke hontho par rakh diye.
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Renuka ki is aa-pratyasit (unexpected) harkat ne pratap ke rom rom ko hila diya. Pratap ke sar ko apne hatho se pakad kar renuka lagataar pratap ke hontho ko chuse ja rahi thi. Pratap ne renuka ko khud se dur hataane ka socha lekin apne hontho par renuka ke soft lips mahsus kar pratap ke sharir me masti chhaane lagi. 
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Pratap wo pyasa tha jisne kabhi bhi is ras ka paan nahi kiya tha. College me pratap ne apna pura dhyaan apni padhayi par laga rakha tha taaki use ek achi job mil jaye. Shadi ke baad jo kuch uske saath hua usne pratap ko mentally itna disturb kar diya tha ki wo kabhi kisi ladki ke karib nahi aa saka tha. 
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Aaj jab use is ras ka maja mila to pratap ka pura zism masti me bhar gaya aur usne apne hath renuka ki peeth par kas diye. Is waqt pratap , chetna ke baare me puri tarah bhool chuka tha. 
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Bahar baras ne in dono ke beech ki deewar bhi gira di thi dono bahut hi junoon ke sath ek dusre ko kiss kar rahe the. Dono hi saalo se pyaase the aur aaj in dono ko pyar ka jharna mil gaya tha jisme dono jee bhar kar bheeg lena chahte the. 
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Kaafi der tak ek dusre ke hontho ka ras pine ke baad dono tab alag hue jab dono ki saanse ukhadne lagi. Renuka pratap ki god se uthi aur table par rakhe music player ko on kar diya. 
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"baho ke darmiya, do pyar mil rahe hai" ek madhyam si awaaz ke sath ye gana bajne laga aur kamre ke garam mahol ko aur garam karne laga. Music on karne ke liye jab renuka jhuki thi to pratap ki najar renuka gol aur ubhari hui gand par padi. Is scene ko dekh pratap ka lund jhatke khaane laga. Pratap ne liye ye sab naya anubhav tha aur uski halat kharab hoti ja rahi thi. Pratap ka dil bahut joro se dhadak raha tha aur uski saanse uske control se bahar ja rahi thi. 
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Music on karne ke baad renuka , pratap ke taraf muh karke khadi ho gayi aur dheere se apna bathing gown khola aur use chair par rakh diya. Is waqt renuka red colour ki bra-panty pahne pratap ke saamne khadi thi. Renuka ki gol aur thos chuchiya (round and hard boobs) lagbhag aadhi bra se bahar jhank rahi thi. Pratap ne ek baat jo notice ki wo ye ki renuka ki body ekdam fit thi. 36 ke chuchiya, 28 ki kamar aur 36 ki gand.Pratap ki najar neeche gayi to usne dekha ki renuka ki jhangho ke beech fasi choti si panty badi mushkil se renuka ki amanat ko dhak pa rahi thi.
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chapter-5 #update-15
Pratap bina palak jhapkaaye lagataar renuka ke zism ko ghure ja raha tha. Room red colour ka halki roshni wala bulb jal raha tha. Laal rang ki roshni me renuka ka zism aur bhi maadak (sexy) lag raha tha. Pratap ne aaj tak kabhi bhi apne aap ko is haalat me nahi paya tha. Kyuki pratap apne dimaag ko hamesha control me rakhta tha. Lekin jab aapke saamne ek behad hi khubsurat ladki sirf bra - panty me khadi ho to aap khud ko control nahi kar sakte. Aur agar phir bhi aap par is baat ka koi farak nahi padta to aap ya to gay hai ya phir aap ek bina feeling waale insaan hai.
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Renuka ka khubsurat zism is waqt pratap ke saamne 90% nanga tha. Renuka ka zism pratap ko bahka raha tha aur sath me bahar hoti baarish mahol ko aur bhi rangeen bana rahi thi.
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Apne khubsurat zism ke darshan karwaane ke baad renuka dheere dheere chalte hue pratap ke saamne jakar khadi ho gayi aur apna daaya haath pratap ki nange seene par rakh kar use piche dhakelne lagi. Pratap ne renuka ka ishara samajhte hue dheere dheere apne peeth ke bal let gaya. Is daauran pratap ki pyaasi najre renuka ke zism par lagi rahi.
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Pratap ko letaane ke baad renuka bed par chhadi aur pratap ke upar let kar apne rasile honth pratap ke hontho par rakh diye. Pratap ko zannat jaisa feel ho raha tha. Renuka ke lips uske lips par the aur uske upar lete hone ke kaaran renuka ke soft boobs aur hard nipple; pratap ke seene me chubh rahe the. Renuka ko kiss karte hue pratap dhere se apna daya hath renuka ki peeth par le gaya aur haule haule renuka ki peeth ki massage jaisa karne laga. 
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Renuka ke peeth par hath firaate hue pratap khud ko bahut hi bhagyasaali (lucky) maan raha tha. Pratap ko lag raha tha ki ye waqt yahi thahar (stop) jaaye aur wo aur renuka isi tarah ek dusre ki baho me pade rahe.
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Renuka ne kiss roki aur apni saaso ko control karne lagi. Renuka apni aankhe band kiye lambi lambi saase le rahi thi. Jaise hi renuka saans leti, uski chuchiya aur bhi teji se pratap ke seene par chubh jaati. Pratap iska pura maja le raha tha. Jab renuka ki saanse control me aa gayi to usne pratap ke taraf dekha aur ek shararti muskaan uske hontho par aa gayi.
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Renuka ne apne sharir ko thoda neeche kiya aur pratap ke gardan (neck) par apne honth rakh diye.
"aaaaahhh" jab renuka neeche ko hui to uska pet pratap ke tight lund se ragadta hua gaya jiske kaaran pratap ke muh se halki si aah nikal gayi.
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Pratap ki gardan ko chumte hue renuka thoda aur neeche hui aur pratap ke seene ko chumne lagi. Seene ko chumte chumte renuka pratap ke baaye nipple tak pahuchi aur usko muh me bhar liya. "oooooooooooooohhhhhhh" is baar ek lambi oooh pratap ke muh se nikli. Pratap ke muh se nikalti siskaariyo ko sun kar renuka ko kiss karne me aur jyada maja aane laga.
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Pratap ke liye ye sab pahla anubhav tha aur use lag raha tha ki renuka ke kiss karte karte hi uska discharge ho jayega. Lekin kisi tarah usne khud ko roka hua tha. 
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Karib 10 minute tak pratap ke seene aur pet ko chumne ke baad renuka ne pratap ki tauliya ko khola aur use nikaalne lagi. Pratap ne neeche se apni gand utha kar renuka ki madad ki. Tauliya nikalte hi pratap ka lund uchalta hua renuka ke saamne aa gaya. (pratap ke saare kapde baarish me bhege hue the isliye pratap ne sirf ek tauliya apne kamar ke charo taraf lapeti hui thi.)
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Pratap ka lund dekh renuka ki aankhe chamak uthi. Jaise ladke girls ki yoni dekhne ke liye utsukta rakhta hai vaise hai ladkiya bhi ladko ke lund dekhne ki utsukta rakhti hai. Renuka ne jhuk kar lund ke top par ek kiss kiya aur phir lund ko haath me pakad kar hilaane lagi. Ab aur control karna pratap ke bas me nahi tha. "aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh" siskari bharte hue pratap ne lund se bauchaar kar di. Jiski kuch bunde pratap ke pet aur seene par giri to kuch renuka ke hath par. 
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Pratap aur renuka ka intzaar karte karte jab bahut der ho gayi to chetna apne papa ke paas gayi. Uske papa ne bataya ki renuka aur pratap dono ke mobile switch off aa rahe hai. "beti pareshaan mat ho kyuki pe news aa rahi hai ki dehradun me bahut tej baarish ho rahi hai, isliye shayad wo dono aaj raat waha ruk kar aayege" chetna ke papa ne kaha. Chetna nirash ho kar apne kamre me aa gayi aur mirror ke saamne khade ho kar khud se baate karne lagi. "pratap, tumne mere letter ko koi jawab nahi diya jaane se pahle lekin maine tumhari aankho me dekha tha aur mujhe tumhari aankho me mere liye pyaar najar aaya tha. I love you pratap, i love you very much. Mai tumhe paane ke liye kuch bhi karne ko taiyaar hu. Ab tum jaldi se vaapas aa jao aur mujhe "i love you too" bol do. Phir hum dono ghanto ek dusre ke hath me hath rakhe ek dusre ki aankho me dekhte rahege." chetna mirror ke saamne se hati aur apne bed par aa gayi aur ek takiye ko khud se chipka kar pratap aur apne baare me sochne lagi.
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Kafi alag kahani ki suruwat... Kahani se judne me thida waqt lga lekin jese jese kahani aage badegi bade aasani se jud sakte h.
Naam se aap lekhika lag rhi h.. bahut kam mahila lekhak hai yha esliye aapka jyda swagat.
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(21-11-2019, 10:16 AM)Jyoti Singh Wrote: Kafi alag kahani ki suruwat... Kahani se judne me thida waqt lga lekin jese jese kahani aage badegi bade aasani se jud sakte h.
Naam se aap lekhika lag rhi h.. bahut kam mahila lekhak hai yha esliye aapka jyda swagat.

Mai eski bat kar rha tha
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Kl ye story ko complete ho jayegi .....but is forum pr utna sath nhi milta jiyna milna chahiye.....ek lekhikha ke liye unke reader's ka sath hona nohot jruri hota hai......is ka muze khed rhega....
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Hmmm

Updates bs kuch hi second Mai....
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chapter-5 #update-16
Pratap ke discharge hone ke baad renuka ne towel se apne hath me lagi virya ki bundo ko saaf karne lagi. Kaafi der tak pratap ko kiss karne aur pratap ke lund se khelne ke baad renuka puri tarah uttejit ho chuki thi. Renuka ki saanse kaafi tej chal rahi thi aur use apne "special part" par gilapan mahsus ho raha tha. Towel se apna hath saaf karne ke baad renuka pratap ke bagal me let gayi. Renuka ka muh bed ke tarah tha aur peeth chhat ki taraf. 
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Thodi der baad jab pratap ne apni aankhe khol kar kamre ka jaayja liya to usne renuka ko apne bagal me leta hua paya. Pratap ke man me renuka ke khubsurat jism se khelne ki ichha jagi lekin pratap ne pahle apne zism par padi virya ki bundo ko saaf karne ka nirnay liya.
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Towel se apna zism saaf karne ke baad pratap ne renuka ke taraf dekha. Renuka bed par apna muh neeche ke taraf kar leti thi. Laal rang ki dim light me pratap ne renuka ki chikni nangi peeth dekhi aur phir pratap ki najar fisalte hue renuka ki peeth se hote hue renuka ki mast gol gand par padi.
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Pratap ko laga jaise koi jannat ki pari uske saamne leti hui ho. Pratap renuka ke side me baith gaya. Pratap joki renuka ke baaye taraf baitha tha use renuka ke baaye boobs ka side view dekhne ko mila joki bed par daba hua tha. 
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Pratap ne apne daaye haath ki aage wali ungali ko renuka ki peeth ki starting point par rakha aur puri peeth par manmaane dhang se ghumaane laga. Jaise koi chota bachha kisi bade se maidaan me aakar bahut khush ho gaya ho aur jis disha me uska man ho us disha me daud raha ho. 
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Pratap ki ungali apni puri peeth par ghumti mahsus kar renuka ki saanse aur bhi tej chalne lagi ya phir uski tej chalti saanso ko sisakna kahe to jyada behtar hoga. 
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Thodi der tak renuka ki peeth se khelne ke pratap ne renuka ke kandhe par apne hath rakhe aur use seedha letaane laga. Renuka turant pratap ka iraada samajh gayi aur seedha let gayi.
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Renuka ke seedha let-te hi uske dono unnat chhaatiya pratap ke saamne thi. Gulaabi nipple wali gol unchuyi chuchiya dekh kar pratap ko ek baar phir apne lund me kadakpan mahsus hua. 
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Pratap ne baaye haath se renuka ki daayi chuchi ko pakda aur halke se masal diya. "aaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh" ek meethi siskaari renuka ke muh se nikli. Pratap ne notice kiya ki renuka ne apni aankhe band ki hui thi. 
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Pratap ka lund puri tarah kadak ho chuka tha. Thodi der renuka ki dono chuchiyo se khelne ke baad pratap ne ye tay kiya ki ab samay aa gaya hai SANGAM ka. Pratap , renuka ke upar let gaya aur lund ko renuka ki chut par tika kar dheere dheere pressure ke sath lund ko zannat me dhakelne laga.
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chapter-6 #update-17
Subah jab pratap ki aankh khuli to usne khud ko us chhote se cabin ke bed par nanga paya. Pratap ke saamne pichli raat ka najara ghoom gaya. Pahle baarish ka hona jiske kaaran rasta jaam ho gaya aur wo dono vapas nahi jaa paye. Phir renuka aur pratap ka yaha aana aur phir jo kuch bhi hua wo bhaavnao me bah kar ya phir ye kahe vasna ke kaaran hua kyuki pratap , renuka ko pyar nahi karta tha. 
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Pratap to chetna ko pasand karta tha. Pichle raat ke baare me soch kar pratap ke man me guilt aane laga. Kal subah hi chetna ne use propose kiya tha aur chetna se dur aakar pratap ko bhi ye ehsaas ho gaya tha ki shayad wo bhi chetna ko apna dil de baitha hai. Lekin ab pratap kaise face kar paayega chetna ko?? Aur renuka..........?? Kya wo us se pyar karti hai .....ya wo bhi bas vasna ke hatho majbur thi?? Pratap ko laga jaise wo kisi bade tufaan me fans gaya hai aur is tufaan se bahar nikal paane ka rasta pratap ko nahi dikh raha tha. Pratap ne socha ab jo hoga wo dekha jaayega, kyuki is pareshaan hone se ye paheli hal hone wali nahi thi.
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Pratap ne aankhe band ki aur 4-5 gahri saanse li. Ab use thoda rahat mahsus hui. Pratap ne pure kamre me dekha lekin use renuka kahi bhi najar nahi aayi. Pratap utha aur bathroom me dekha lekin waha bhi koi nahi tha. Pratap ne time dekha. Subah ke 7 baj rahe the. "shayad chay peene bahar gayi ho" pratap ne khud se kaha aur kapde pahan-ne laga.
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Pratap ne bahar aakar dekha lekin renuka use kahi dikhayi nahi di. Usne 1 coffee ka li aur coffee pite hue renuka ke vapas aane ka intjaar karne laga.
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Coffee khatam hote hote renuka vapas aa gayi. Pratap ne counter pe baithe manager ko ek raat ka rent pay kiya aur phir dono taashipur ke liye nikal pade. 
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Chetna kal raat pratap ka intjaar karte karte kab so gayi use pata nahi chala. Isi vajah aaj thoda der se uthi phir udaas man se school ke liye taiyaar hone lagi. Major uncle yaani chetna ke papa bhi apne farm house ke liye nikal gaye the.
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Jab pratap aur renuka taashipur pahuche to ghar par sirf ek naukar hi tha. Pratap ko thoda mili kyuki wo abhi bhi ye tay nahi kar paya tha ki wo chetna se kya kahega?? Kaise saamna karega uska?? 
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Pratap chupchaap apne room par aakar let gaya aur so gaya kyuki kal raat wo theek se so nahi paya tha. Wahi dusre taraf renuka apne kamre me gayi, apni almira kholi. Usme se ek bag nikala aur us bag ko lekar bahar aa gayi. Car start ki aur chali gayi.
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"aap kab aaye???" chetna school se vapas aa chuki thi aur is waqt pratap ke saamne baithi thi.
"chetna, abhi meri tabiyat sahi nahi hai. Hum baad me baat karege" pratap ne kaha. "kya hua aapki tabiyat ko" chetna ne chintit hote hue pucha. 
"kuch nahi halka bukhar tha" pratap ne jaldi se jawab diya. "aapne dawai li ya nahi??" chetna ne pratap ki aankhe me dekhte hue pucha. "haa le li hai" pratap ne kaha. "theek hai phir aap aaram karo mai shaam ko aaungi phir baat karege" chetna ne kaha aur room se nikal gayi.
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Pratap bistar par leta karwat badalta raha. Shaam ho chuki thi. Chetna aane hi wali hogi. Pratap uth khada hua aur bathroom me gaya hath muh dho kar bahar aaya. Wo chetna ka saamna nahi karna chahta tha. Pratap chupchaap ghar se bahar nikal gaya. Ghar ke paas me hi ek bada sa park tha. Pratap us park ki ek bench par aankhe mund kar baith gaya. Shayad use lag raha tha ki aankhe band kar lene se koi use nahi dekh payega aur wo is tufaan se bahar nikal jaayega. 
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"hey" ek ladki ki meethi si awaaz pratap ke kaano par padi. Pratap ne aankhe kholi; saamne "jennifer" khadi thi. Wahi "jennifer" jo use bus me mili thi.
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Pratap ne bhi use muskuraate hue "hi"kaha. Jennifer usne bagal me baith gayi aur phir dono me baate hone. Jennifer ne pratap ko bataya ki wo south africa ki rahne wali hai. Aur use jab bhi chhutiya milti hai wo ghumne nikal padti hai. Pratap aur jennifer aapas me baate kar rahe the. Wo dono is baat se puri tarah anjaan the ki is waqt 2 aankhe unhi par tiki hui thi.
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--------2 din baad---------
pratap pichle do dino se chetna ko ignore kar raha tha. Aur renuka jyadatar waqt ghar se bahar hi rahti. Is waqt pratap major uncle ke sath garden me baitha chaay pee raha tha. Chay pee kar major uncle apne farm house ke liye nikal gaye. Major uncle ke jaate hi chetna waha aa dhamki. "mai 2 din se dekh rahi hu aap mujhe ignore kar rahe ho" chetna ne aate hi kaha. Chetna se bachne ke liye pratap ne saamne table par pada hua paper utha liya. Paper ke front page par ek breaking news chhapi thi "ek south african tourist ladki jiska naam jennifer hai pichle 38 ghanto se lapata hai" . Pratap ka muh hairani se khula raha gaya. 38 ghante pahle hi to wo jennifer se park me mila tha!!!!!!!!!!
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chapter-6 #updatee-18
"aap meri baat sun bhi rahe hai ya nahi.....???????" pratap se koi jawab na pakar chetna ne pucha.
Pratap joki is waqt paper me chhapi news ko padh kar hairan tha achanak se chaukta hua bola- "kya hua???"
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"kya hua????" chetna ne pratap ki baat dohara di. Iske baad dono ke beech thodi der khamoshi rahi. Chetna lagataar pratap ki aankho me dekh rahi thi jabki chetna ki taraf dekh kar pratap ko baar baar renuka ke saath bitayi wo raat yaad aa jaati, aur us raat ki yaad aate hi pratap ko apne aap par bahut gussa aata. Pratap nischit hi chetna se pyar karta tha aur ab use lag raha tha ki usne chetna ko dhokha diya. Isiliye pratap , chetna ki aankho me nahi dekh paa raha tha.
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"jab se aap vapas aaye hai aap mujhe ignore kar rahe hai!!!!!!" aakhir chetna ne khamoshi todte hue kaha.
Ek baar phir dono ke beech khamoshi chhaa gayi.
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"jaane se pahle maine aapko ek letter diya tha, aapne uska jawab nahi diya" is baar bhi khamoshi chetna ne hi todi. 
"chetna, hum baad me is matter par baat karege. Abhi aap school jao" pratap ko taal-te hue kaha. Jabki sach ye tha ki pratap bhi chetna se pyaar karta tha lekin renuka aur pratap ke beech jo bhi hua tha, us ke kaaran pratap ko dar tha ki kahi renuka bhi us se pyaar na karne lagi ho!!!!! Isiliye chetna se apne pyaar ka ijhaar karne se pahle pratap ek baar renuka se baat karna chahta tha. 
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Pratap ek baar phir paper me chhapi news ko padhne laga ya phir ye kahe ki chetna ki najro ka saamna karne se bachne ke liye pratap news paper padhne ka dhong kar raha tha.
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Chetna , pratap se bahut pyar karti thi aur jab us ne dekha ki pratap uske taraf dhyaan nahi de raha to uski aankho me aansu aa gaye. Is duniya sabse mushkil samay tab hota hai jab aapka premi ya premika aapke saamne ho aur phir bhi wo aap se baat na kar raho ho aur baat na kar paa raha ho. (Lekin ye feelings wahi samjh sakta hai jisne kabhi pyaar kiya ho. Warna baaki logo ko to ye ya to pagalpan lagta hai ya chutiyapa.)
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Chetna ki aankh se nikla aansu seedhe jaakar pratap ke news paper par jaa gira. Pratap ne najar upar ki to use chetna ki aankho me aansu dikhayi diye. Ab aur jyada bardast karna Chetna ke bas me nahi tha wo roti hue apne kamre ke taraf bhaag gayi. 
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Pratap ne jab chetna ki aankho me aansu dekhe to use laga jaise kisi ne uske dil me khanjar chhubha diya ho. Chetna ki inhi "masti aur shaitaani bhari" aankho ko dekh kar pratap us se pyaar karne laga tha aaj uski vajah se chetna ki aankho me aansu the. Pratap ne news paper side me fenka aur wo bhi bhaagte hue chetna ke room par pahucha. 
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Chetna apne bistar pet ke bal lete hue ro rahi thi. "sorry chetna, mera iraada tumhe dukhi karne ka nahi tha" pratap ne kaha. Pratap ki baat sun kar chetna uth kar baith gayi lekin usne pratap se kuch kaha nahi. Pratap ne kaafi der tak chetna ko manane ka prayas kiya lekin chetna nahi maani, usne ek bhi lafj apne labo se nahi nikala.
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Aap kuch bhi sahan kar sakte hai lekin apne lover ka udaas chehra nahi sahan kar sakte. Is samay pratap ke liye chetna ki smile se jyada koi bhi keemti cheej nahi thi. Isi ko to pyaar kahte hai na??
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"jab tab aap humse baat nahi karegi hum isi tarah kaan pakad kar uthak baithak lagaate rahege, aapke aankho me aansoo laane ke liye yahi humari saja hai" pratap ne kaha aur apne kaan pakad liye.
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35 years ka pratap is samay 19 years ki chetna ke saamne kaan pakad kar khada tha. "" Pratap ko is tarah khada dekh chetna ki hasi nikal gayi. Aur chetna ko hasta dekh pratap ka bhi dil khush ho gaya.
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"ab aap khush hai na??" pratap ne pucha. "nahiiii" chetna ne kaha. "lekin kyu???" pratap hairaan tha ki ab kya hua.
"kyuki humne aapse apne pyaar ka ijhaar kar diya hai lekin aapne apne dil ke jajbaat hume nahi bataye" chetna ne kaha.
"hum bhi aapse pyaar karte hai" pratap ne turant jawab diya. 
"aise nahi aaj raat 12 baje mai aapko L.P. le chalugi waha aapko ek lover ki tarah mujhe propose karna hoga" chetna ne kaha.
"raat ke 12 baje???? Aur ye L.P kya hai??" pratap ne pucha.
" L.P matlab lovers point" chetna ne sharmaate hue jawab diya.
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#17
update-19
Chetna ke kamre se nikal kar pratap apne kamre me aa gaya aur chetna school chali gayi. Bistar par lete hue pratap ye soch raha tha ki aaj raat jab chetna se L.P par milega to kya kahega?????? Kaise propose karega use??? Pratap ko in sab cheejo ka koi exprience nahi tha. Tabhi pratap ki najar side table par gayi. Table par wo romantic novel abhi bhi rakha hua tha jisme chetna ne love letter rakha tha.
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Pratap ne wo novel utha liya aur uske beech me daba wo love letter nikaal kar padhne laga. Pratap ne wo na jaane kitni baar padha. "uffff chetna ne to mujhe pura deewana bana diya hai" pratap ne khud se kaha. Pratap ne letter ko mod kar apne takiye ke niche rakh diya. 
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Ab pratap ki najre us romantic novel par thi. Us novel ke cover par kiss karte hue ek ladke-ladki ka photo tha. Pratap ne us novel ko padhne ka nishchay kiya. Pratap us novel ko padh hi raha tha ki tabhi uska phone bajne laga.
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Pratap ne dekha screen par renuka ka naam likh kar aa raha tha. 
"hello"
"hi"
"mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai renuka" pratap ne kaha. 
"theek hai bolo kya bolna hai" renuka ki meethi awaaz pratap ke kaano par padi.
"pahle to ye batao ki tum pichle 2 din se kaha gayab rahti ho???" pratap ne pucha.
"mere kamre me aao, tumhe saare jawab mil jaayege" renuka ne kaha. 
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Pratap hairan pareshan renuka ke kamre me pahucha. Kamre ka darwaaja khula hua tha. Kamre me pahuch kar pratap ne charo taraf dekha lekin ranuka use kahi dikhi. Pratap ki najar khidki ke paas rakhi ek panting par gayi. Panting kapde se dhaki hui thi. Pratap ne aage badh kar us panting se kapda hata diya.
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Panting par najar padhte hi pratap ka gala sukhne laga. Panting ek sex karte hue ek jode ki thi. Panting me jo background tha wo usi kamre ka tha jisme renuka aur pratap ne raat gujaari thi. Panting me daaye taraf sabse neeche " I LOVE YOU PRATAP" likha hua tha. 
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Pratap ne ye kabhi nahi socha tha ki renuka bhi uske pyaar me pad jaayegi. "nahi ye nahi ho sakta, mujhe renuka ko samjhana hoga" pratap ne man me socha. Tabhi pratap ko apne piche kuch aahat sunayi di. Pratap piche muda to saamne renuka khadi thi. Usne blue colour ki bahut pyaari sari pahni hui thi. Renuka ke zism ka anusaar blouse thoda chota tha jis kaaran blouse renuka ke zism se chipka hua tha aur ek khubsurat cleavage bana raha tha. Pratap ki najre renuka ke chehre se hote hue uske sexy cleavage jakar ruk gayi.
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Renuka , pratap ke bahut hi paas khadi ho gayi. "renuka mai us raat ke liye tumse maafi maanga chahta hu"
"dont be sorry pratap, us raat jo bhi hua usme hum dono ki marji thi. That was the best night of my life, pratap. I love you and i know you also love me" renuka ne kaha. Bolte bolte renuka pratap ke ek paas aakar khadi ho gayi thi. 
Renuka ke zism ki khusbu pratap ko madhosh kar rahi thi aur renuka ki garam saanse pratap ko apne face par mahsus ho rahi thi.
"lekin......" pratap ne bolna chaha lekin renuka ne use rok diya. 
"pratap i love you" renuka ne madhoshi bhari awaaz me kaha aur pratap ke gale laga gayi. 
Ek baar phir vaasna pyar par haavi hone lagi aur pratap ne renuka ke hontho par apne honth rakh diye.
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Ek baar phir vaasna pyar par haavi hone lagi aur pratap ne renuka ke hontho par apne honth rakh diye.
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Dono ek dusre ke hontho ko bahut hi passionately kiss kar rahe the. Renuka prem ke vashibhut hokar pratap ko chum rahi thi aur pratap sirf zism ki pyas bujhane ke liye. Pratap ke hath renuka ke blouse ke neeche nangi peeth par ghum rahe the. Us raat dono ne pahli baar kiya tha isiliye sharm ke kaaran khul kar enjoy nahi kar paaye the. Lekin aaj dono ko dekh kar lag raha tha ki aaj agar ye dono pura din aur puri raat  karte rahe phir bhi inki pyaas nahi bujhne wali.
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Renuka ne kiss todi aur pratap ki taraf pyasi najro se dekhne lagi. Renuka ab bas yahi chah rahi thi ke pratap use apni baaho me bhar kar hamesha pyar karta rahe. Pratap ki najre renuka se mili to renuka ne sharma kar najre jhuka li. Lekin pratap ne un aankho ki pyaas ko dekh liya tha. 
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Pratap ne renuka ke kandhe pakad kar use ghuma diya. Ab renuka ki peeth pratap ke saamne thi. Pratap ne renuka ko peeche se apni baaho me bhar liya aur renuka ki chuchiyo ko blouse ke upar se hi masal diya.
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"aaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh" renuka ke muh se sirf ek masti bhari siskari hi nikal payi. Renuka ki chuchiyo par apne hath ka dabav (pressure) badhate hue pratap ne apne honth renuka ki gardan ke pichle hisse par rakh diye.
"Ummmmmmmmmmm" renuka ne dhere se masti bhari awaaz ki.
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Pratap ne bahut pyar se renuka ke baal hataye aur renuka ke kaan ke pichle hisse me chumne laga. Renuka apni aankhe munde is khubsurat pal ka pura luft le rahi thi. Pratap ka hathiyar bhi ab jang ke liye taiyar hone laga tha jiski chubhan renuka ko apni gand par ho rahi thi. Renuka ki gardan, kandhe aur kaan ke piche chumne ke baad pratap ne phir se renuka ka chehra apne taraf kar liya.
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Renuka ne masti ke kaaran apni aankho band ki hui thi aur koi bhi renuka ke chehre ko dekh kar pata sakta tha ki use kitna maza aa raha hoga. Pratap ne thodi der renuka ke chehre ko dekha aur phir apne ghutne ke bal baith gaya.
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Renuka ne aankhe khol kar dekha ki pratap kya kar raha aur bhi vapas apni aankhe band kar li. Ghutne ke bal baithe hone ke kaaran pratap ka chehra is samay renuka ke chikne pet ke saamne tha. 
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Pratap ne apne hath renuka ki nangi kamar ke ird-gird lapet diye aur apne honth renuka ki naabhi par rakh kar chusne laga.
"aaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhnmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm" kamre me sirf renuka ki masti bhari siskaariya hi sunayi de rahi thi.
Renuka ke andar ek tufan uth raha tha jise renuka ne kaafi der se roka hua tha lekin ab renuka ko control karna mushkil ho raha tha. 
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Renuka ne pratap ke baal pakde aur puri zor se pratap ke sar ko apne chikne pet se chipka diya. Renuka ki taange kaamp rahi thi aur pratap ko samajh aa gaya tha ki renuka jhadne waali hai isliye pratap ne aur bhi apni speed badhayi aur puri joro se renuka ko chumne laga.
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#19
Superb narration... par update 6 se direct update 12 hai... beech ka missing hai...
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