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Thriller REVENGE

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Kamra charo taraf mombatti ki roshni me nahaya hua tha. Mombattiya bhi ek vishesh akar me lagai gai thi jaise un mombattiyo ke dwara ek tantra ghera banaya gaya tha.

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Kamra ek tantrik ke mantra uchharan se goonj raha tha. Aur mombattiyo se bane us ghere ke beech ek 24-25 saal ka ek naujavan ladka apka sir jhukae chupchap baitha tha.

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Achanak kamre me neta jaise kapde pehe ek aadmi ka pravesh hua aur wo us ladke ki ye halat dekh us tantrik par baras pada.
Neta: Ae tantrik kya kar rahe ho tum itni der se, mera beta itni der se itni takleef me hai wo aatma mere bete ko maar daalne par amada hai aur tum bus ye mantar pade ja rahe ho kuchh karo nahi to wo mere bete ko maar dalegi. Tujhe jitna paisa chahiye mai dunha par us aatma ko niklao mere bete ke andar se.
Tantrik: Maaf kariyega netajee aise kaam jaldbaazi me nahi hote aur waise bhi wo rooh bahut shaktishaali hai itni asani se kabu me nahi aa rahi. Aur ab tak to mai uska naam bhi nahi jaan paya hu.

Achanak sir jhukae baithe us ladke ne apna chehra uthaya. Apne bete ka chehra dekh us neta ka dil dehel gaya. Us ladke ki aankho ki kaali putliya gayab aur aankhe puri kaali aur un aankho se halka halka khoon ris kar bahar aa raha tha. Achanak wo ladka cheekhte hue bola par uski awaaz mardani ki jagah janani thi yani ek aurat ki awaaz.

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Ladka janana awaaz me: Tu mujhe kaabu karne ki koshish kar raha hai tu mujhe kaabu nahi kar paaega Tantrik is ladke ko to marna hi hoga. Mai ise maar daloongi.
Tantrik: Kaun hai tu naam kya hai tera aur maksad kya hai tera kyu maarna chahti hai tu ise. Kaun hai tu bata apna naam aur is ladke ko maarne ki wajah se bata. Bata chahti kya hai aakhir tu.

Ladka: Tu janna chahta hai mai kaun hu. Mera naam jaanna chahta hai mera maksad kya hai wo jaanna chahta hai. To sun le mera naam hai



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aur mera maksad hai

             
           
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Ye story Wedding Ceremony khatam hone ke baad chalu hogi. Wo story band ho gai thi isliye readers se touch me rehne ke liye ye thread khola tha.
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Bhai shukriya par abhi ye story nahi likhne wala abhi isme time lagega kaafi. Wedding ceremony me kuchh samay ka ban lag gaya tha to apne readers se touch me rehne ke liye ye thread chalu kara tha. Is par updates Wedding ceremony ke baad chalu karunga. Pehla page isiliye pics daalkar book kar liya taki jab is story par kaam chalu karunga tab pehle page se karunga.
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Ye story wedding ceremony ke baad ki hai aur uske baad hi chalu ho paegi.  Ise tab tak aap ek teaser trailer maan le shabana ki story ka.
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Meri ek story A Wedding Ceremony in Village chal rahi hai aur ye story uske aage ki hai to jab wo khatam ho jaegi tab yaha update dena shuru karunga. Tab meri wo story enjoy kare link neeche diya hai.
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Is story abhi just ek teaser trailer hai jo ki already chal rahi ek story A Wedding Ceremony in a Village ke ek charectar Shabana Khan par aadharit aur wo story is platform par abhi running to tab tak wo story read kare jab wo story khatam hogi tab uspar mile response ke aadhar par hi is story ko aage badaya jaega.

Its a sequel of that story to pehle wo story read kare.

A wedding ceremony in a Village (A story of seven female friends and the situation and persons they face and meet in that ceremony, their are seven different stories in one story read it and rate it)
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