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Superb Update…! Lekin koshish kiya karain k jaldi jaldi update dein.

Kosis toh rahti hai but ek toh mobile main story tipe krne main dikkat ati hai or phir time jaldi milta nahi hai 
But always I trai my best

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Thanks to all

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Ye sotry ki bahut dimand hai but main kisi karna ise age nahi pura kar paya hu
Ap sab main se koi agar is story ko age likhna cahtq hai toh jarur likhe
Thanks

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update

Thanks to all 

Agar koi is story ko age likhna. Chata h toh continue  kar skta hai

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No body can write better.....
You only must continue......

Main story ke liye time nahi nikla pa raha hu.
Agar kisi ko plot acha laga toh wo ise age continue kare toh mjhe Khushi hogi.ek online dost mjhe apni ek story likhne ke liye bhut dino se request kar raha h, but main uski bato ko pura nahi kar pa Raha toh wo bola hai ki kkk wo start karega nd likh ke dega main use post kar dunga. But jab main free ho jaoun toh use waha se continue Karu 

To abhi kuch dinomain so likh ke dega toh main uski story ko yaha post karunga. Or kuch nahi ho pa Raha time nahi mil raha

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Isiliye bola hu agar koi likhna chata hai toh continue kare ise


Thanks to all

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Kya karu buddy log time nh mil pata hai story ke liye jab chata hu again start Karu
Kahi busy ho jata hu.
Koi or likhna. Chata h toh age likh do yr

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Pls continue pls pls pls dekho aap kro bhut acha hoga aap idea do me apke hisab se story likh ke dugi aap apake hisab se padh ke dal dena par story badh mat kro pls muze bas aap itna bata dena idea aur aage kese leke jana he me uske hisab se kar lugi phir aap ek bar riview kar lena aapko thik lage to dal dena aapko bhut kam time dena he pls man joa baby

Okk yye toh main kab se bol raha hu mjhe time nhi h koi chaye toh is story ke sath sath meri or story ko age likh skhta hai

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pls update bhai update dedo me help kruga bhai update do

Tum story ko age badao me yahi chata hu alwsys meri sabhi story ko koi age likhe 
Thanks

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Ab story aage agar galti ho to bata dena

Achanak Shalini ke phone par subah 4 baje call aya haiwo phone uthakar dekhti hai to ye sajjad ka call hota hai sajjad kyon randi jyada nind aa rahi hai kyA kahin tujhe disturb to nahin kiya
Shalini boli nahin mere mere maalik ye to Mera farz hai spne apne maalik ki seva karna to har kutiya ka dharm hai stabhi sajjad bolta hai bilkul meri raand  ab tu bahut hoshiyaar hoti chali Jaa Rahi hai ab ek kaam kar jaldi se naha dho kar taiyyar hoke mere room par aajaa aur haan keval ek hi one piece from type pehnkar ana Bina panty bra ke aana Varna Teri gaand faad ke rakh dunga Shalini kaampati Hui aawaz me kucch bol pati usse pehle hi saajjad ne call kaat diya saalini ko kucch samjh me nahin aa raha tha ki aisi kya urgency ho sakti hai  lekin maalik ka order hai janabto padega vo jaldi se ready hone bathroom me gayi aur naha dhokar full make karke ek one pice red dress pehankar ready ho gayi apne papa ko bahana bana diya ki urgent Jana hoga mujhe kyonki dost ki tabiyat kharab hai

Shalini thodi der me saajad ke ghar pahunchati hai to bhitar se awaaz aati hai gate khula hai jaldi aaja lekin bhitar koi bhi nahin hota hai
Tabhi bhitar se awaaj aati hai kahan reh gayi randi mene gaur se dekha to yeh awaaz latrine se as Rahi hai jaise hi me najdik pahuchti jati hun ek alag hi tarah ki smell ati jati hai jisse mujhe ulti ki si shikayat honey lagti hai lekin me kaise bhi  leteine ke darwaje par pahunchati hoon to ekdum shok ho jati hun

Mere side se  full support hai writer hu tum isko age badao jarur

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Yes ab apne style me badao