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Eh story meri apni nhi aa m xossip ton copy kar ke likh riha ..kyo k punjabi section wich stories di bahut ghaat aa ....vaise tan aapa punjabi kise kamm wich piche nahi haige...Luchpune ch tan bilkul hi nahi ...es lyi mainu changa nahi lagda c k punjabi section ch ene dina baad 1-2 stories da hi update aawe ....so m RANNA CHANCHAL HARIYAN  and eh wali story copy paste karan da faisla kita ...Umeed aa k tusi saare mera eh faisla kabool kro ge

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Hi mera name jashan aa main Nabha da rahn wala Haa. sadi joint family aa.jes ch dada dadi Taiya ji de gher de te mare ghar de rahde c. 
Dada ji AVTAR singh age 90 de nare Hale v chust te tandrust
Dadi ji Gurmail kaur jo kafi Sama pihla gujar gai c
Dad Binder singh age 46 oh ik macanic Han 
mom kamalpreet kaur age 41 sareer ik dam Punjabi jattiyan Vang bharea hoiya ucha lama kad rang saf 
Wadi bhaen daljeet kaur (jeeti) Sohni Kudi gundva sareer age 26
Main jashanpreet singh ucha lama gabru ( jashan) age 25
Choti bhaen parempreet kaur ( param) Age 23
us to choti gurveer kaur ( veera ) age 21
Sb to choti mandeep kaur ( deepi ) age 19

Te hun taiya ji di family 
Taiya ji jatinder singh age 53
Tai amarjeet kaur Patla sareer par saman wada age 50 
munda harveer ( Harry) Age 30 
wadi Kuri inderpreet kaur ( inder ) Age 28 
Choti kuri lovepreet ( lavi) Age 26 

Isde nal dad deiyan 3 bhaena Han ohna bare ohna de kahani ch on te
Baki de chapter kahani de nal nal ape aun GE is kAhani ch sab Tara da sex hove ga par jiyada tar kahani mare te mare ghar deiyan Rana duale hi Rahu gi.je kise nu ghar ch sex pasand Nahi oh is kAhani nu na padio

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Oh kahani jitho tak main yadd aa reha jad main 13-14sala da c os vele sex bare ina pata ni c par phir v har vale kise v kori nu dekh ke lun khra ho janda c. Ih sab suru hoiya college to. 
Os time college ch bus ne tampu hunde san.har roj chuti to bad sada tampu late aunda c. Is lai assi college ch kuch na kuch khal de hunde c. Mare nal kuria te munde dove hunde sn. Kai dina bad asi lukan micha khlan lage te tampu aun te ghar aa jande.
Ise tara kafi din lan ge phir ik din khel de ho jad assi luckan lage ta mare nal maree Class di kuri lokam lai aai.assi poriyan thale bane nike je store ch lok gai. Store chota hon kar ke jaga khatt c assi dove ik doje na juar ke khare c. Ine nu pata ni kida mera hath ohde nal laga ohne kuch na kiha.mainu pata ni ki hoiya main apna hath holi holi ohde pata te phiran laga.hath phirde mainu pata ni ki ho reha c bas ji karda c hath phare java.ago ohne v kuch ni kiha jida ohnu v kuch ho reha hove. 
Holi-2main apne hath ohde pata to di hunde hoi ohde chetra te lai giya te ohe salwar de oto hi hath pheran laga khasa time ida hi kada reha ohne kuch ni kiha. Is to pihla kuch hor hunda darwaja khula te assi out ho ge. Main us val hi dekh reha c te oh mainu dekh ke muskura rahe c is to pihla assi dubara khel de sada tampu aa gia te assi ghraa nu aa gai. Ghar aa ke v mainu ida da lag reha c ki main hale v ohde hath phir reha hova.baki sara din is tra hi lang gea. 
Agle din main college giya ta class ch janto bad madam ai ohne onde hi sabnu khara kita te kiha principal da order aa ki ajj to ik banche te ik munda te ik kori bithan ge.main khush hogiya ki ohde nal bithan da moka milu ga.par ajeha na hoiya mare nalhor nu bitha ta. 
Mainu changa nahi c lag reha par bitha reha te ise tara sara din lang giya phir chuti hoi ta assi khadan lag pai ajj main apne class ch hi luck gia. Thori der bad oh v aa gai. ( ithe hun os kuri da name rimpi aa te jo mare nal ajj bathi c oh nidhi c te ih dove salliyan c oh v pakiyan) te mere kol beth gai te hali assi gala suru hi karan lage c ke jis di vare c oh v aa gia. 
Te jad dubaro khedan lage ta main oper chaat te bane kamre wal jande ne rimpi nu ishraa kita te othe chala gia. Os kamre ch college da purana saman c te koi othe aunda v ni c. Thori der bad oh othe aai te darwaja la ke lukan lai mare kol aa gai.main ik almari de side te c te age kafi saman piya c mainu koi ni dekh sakda c kio ki mere ik pase almari c agee saman te piche kand c rimpi ai te mare nal khar gai ohe jaga hor khat gai. Par main othe jan ke khara c ta ki oh mare nal juar ke khade hoiya v ihe.main os wal dekhea c apna hath os de pata te rakh deta. Us ne kuch ni kiha te sidhe khade rahi main ous de hath phir da reha kadi pata te te kadi chetren te. Ohde citar bhot pole c. Ing karde-2 mera lun khada ho gia te main ohde citra te holi-2 phiran laga jina ku mainu pata c. Os to bad main os nu agge no kodi karan laga. Par oh na hoi te mare val dekhan lagi. Main oh nu kiha hoga

Jashan-rimpi thri je age nu ta chukk. 
Rimpi-nahi main ni hona 
J-kio ki gal hoja( ithe main jasan nu j. Te rimpi nu r. Likha ga) 
R-nahi bas ida hi thik aa 
J-kio chal koi na 
Te main ohde nal chimbar ke ida hi ohde bund te lun gis aunada reha te ohde nal gala karan laga
J-kio rimpi tu class ch mare kol bathi kal nu 
R-tare kol ta nidhi nu bithea madam ne 
J- oh tare hi dost aa apas ch seat badal liyo
R-koi na main puchu gi ohnu. Par ta mainu kio bithuna apne kol
J-kio bas tare nal bithan nu ji karda aa
R-koi kio
J-bas jad tu mare kol bathe gi appa gala kara ge 
R- thik aa phir. Jashan ik gal kaha 
J-kio han kah 
R-koi yarr koi sanu laban ni aaiya cal niche chlea 
J- chal phir 
Osto bad assi niche aa gai ta sab sanu labh rahe c sanu dekh ke kahde tusi kithe c. Main kiha assi ta ithe hi c phir kuch cher bad sada tampu aa gia te assi ghar nu chal pai jad ohda ghar aaia ta oh outer gai te mainu dekh ke hasde hoi apne ghar nu chali gai te main apne khar wal nu aa gia. Ghar aa ke sara din ida hi lang gia te rat nu roti khaa ke sun lai apne kamre ch aa gia assi sare ik hi kamre ch sonde c( main te mareiyan 3 bhaena) assi sare gala kar de soon lage te soon to pihle os lamhe nu yadd karde-2 mainu pata hi ni laga main kad soon gia.

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Update ### 2
Sware didi ne uthaiya te kiha ki gal ajj college ni jana.main utheya te naha ke tiyar ho ke rotu kahke college nu chal piya mare nal rimpi v aa rahi c assi college puhce te thodi der bad class da time ho gia ta assi class ch gai ta rumpi mare nal bathi c 

Assi dove ikathe batth gae te class suru ho gai phir pihle pirod to bad main os nal jud ke beh gia te os de para te hath rakh dita os ne kuch ni kiha ( assi dove class ch last ch bate c ove khannd de lage oh khannd de nal bathi c is kar ke main ki kar reha os nal kise nu pata nahi c lagna) 

Te main osde pata te te kade os de bund te hath pherda reha te oh chup chap bati rahe te pardi rahi nale mare val dekh ke muskura dande ise tara dia harkta kare sada din lang gia te chuti ho gai te sada tampu late aana c is lai assi khelan lag pai lukan micha

Te aaj bari maree aa gai mainu changa na laga par phir v main bari den laga main sab nu jaldi to jaldi labna c ta ki main rimpi nal upar wale kamre ch lukan saka te hoia v ave hi main jaldi nal sab nu labh lea ta hu baei lukan di c ta main rimpi nu upar wal isara kita te up aa gia 

Thodi der bad oh v upar room ch aa gai te assi kal wang ose almari kol luk gae ajj v oh mare agge khadi c te main os nal lag ke os de pata te hath phiran laga pata ni ki swad ounda c ida kar ke ( kio ki os time mainu sex bare kuch v nahi c pata bas osde hath phiran da swad ounda c) 

Os ne kuch ne kiha te sidhi khadi rahi main hate phirda os de bund te hath phiran laga te osde nal cimbad gia te hetha mera lun kal van khada ho ke us de bund c badan laga oh thoda jiha hile te piche dekh ke phir oda hi khadi rahi te mai swad lenda reha main os nu thodi jahi age nu chukan laga par oh na agge nu hoi phir main os nu kiha

J - rimpi thoda jeha agge nu kodi hoja
R - nahi Main ni hona
J - plz hoga 
R - nahi. Tan ki kar na main ida kar ke 
J - pata ni par swad aa riha te mera dil kihda ki tanu thodi jahi kodi kar ke hor swad auga
R - main ni hona jo kuch v aa ida hi rah nahi ta main chali jana
J - chal thika par ih ta das tanu vi kuch ho reha ki nahi

Par oh kuch na boli te mare dubara puchan te thodi jahi sangdi holli jahi boli
R - mainu ni pata chup kar ke khada rah
J - das na 
R - tanu kiha na mainu ni pata 

Us to bad main kuch hor na kiha te os nu thoda jiha kodi tita te oh apne aap thodi jadi kodi ho gai te mai hun os nal bilkul chimbad gia te swad lain laga jis bare mainu kuch v pata nahi c Phir main os nu puchea ki

J - rimpi tu nidhi nu ki kiha ke oh tanu mare kol bithan lai raji ho gai 
R - kuch nahi oh mare paki sahali aa os ne ki kihna aa oh man gai
J - nahi tu kuch ta kiha hona das ve de hun 
R - main os nu kiha ki asi dove ikathe parde aa te ghar v ikathe hi jande ha is lai sanu ikathe batth ke padna hor v asna hoju gai os to bad oh mangi
J - chal thik aa man landa ha par ih ta das ki tanu mare nal rehna mare nal bathna te mare nal ih sab kuch kar na changa lagda aa Us ne kuck na kiha te dubara puchan te bas 

R - han hi kiha 

Is to pihla main os tu hor kuch puch da mainu inj laga ki mainu susu aai aa par main os to pare nhi hoia te os nu ghut ke phar lia te apne lun nu os de bund ch hor dab dita te main hilan lag piyaa te kuch der bad main os nu chad dita te oh darde hoi niche chale gai jad main apne aap nu dakiha ta mare pant agge to gili c te main dar gia ki main ta pint ch hi susu kar ta Te main darda hoiya niche aai te bathroom ch chla gia te apne pant te kacha safe kar ke ahar aai he c ki sade tampu de aun de awwaj aai te assi os ch batth ghar nu aa aae tampu ch na ta rimpi ne mare val dakhea te na hi kuch boli te ahe hal mera c te assi apne apne ghar aa gaee

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Ghar aa ke main apne room ch bag rakiya te bathroom ch cla gia te apnee kapre utar ke nahan lagi te sochan laga ki jo college ch mari pant ch gil-2 c oh mera susu nahi kuch cita-2 c ( os time tak main lun cho nikle mal vare pata ni c) 

Main ih soch da soch da naha lia te ghar wale kapre pa kamre ch ake roti khadi te bad te pake sochan laga mare kamre ch mare nal mariyan bhaena v san te oh v college to aa ke rest kar rahi c. Is tra soch de hoe mari akh lag gi te sam nu mainu didi ne uthaiya te peen nu cha dite 

Cha pi ke main bhar khelan lai ground val tur piya te othe ja ke apne dosta nal khelan laga te hnera hon te ghar nu aa gea apne dosta nal ghar aiya hi c ke light chali gai ( os time invater nawa nawa hi aiya c te sade ghar ni c) 

Main ghar to bhar aa gaki ch dosta kol batth gia te sare gala kar rahe c ki hun ki kariea te mera ik yaar kihdea chalo luckan micha khel de aa sab tear ho gai te sade nal sadi gali diya 3-4 kudiya v san ( us time munde kudi da ikathe kheln te ani rok tok n c sadi gali ch) 

Sade nal ik do munde sade to 2-3 sal vade c oh ve sade nal khelan lage te assi luckan lage ta main ik tutiya jiha ghar c sadi gali ch main ohde ch chla gia te luck gia thodi der bad sade mohale da ik munda te ik kudi othe aai te mare to thodi jahi agge ikathe khad gai ( ih dove mare to vade c) ina nu dekh ke mainu college wali gal chate aa gai te main ohna val dekhan laga ki karde aa.

( munde da name kala te kudi da name joti c) 
Oh dono v mare te rempi vang chambde hoi c te kale ne ohne piche to jafi pai hoi c te agge piche nu hil reha c te os dei chati ( boobs) nu hath ghut reha c te main ohna dova nu dekh reha c par oh mainu nahi dekh sakde c kio ki main bilkul haner ch c
Ohna nu dekh ke mainu v swad aa reha c te mera v lun khad ho gia ine nu kale ne thoda jeha piche hoke apne pajama niche kita kache cho lun baher kad liya te apne hath ohne upro ch joti de salwar de nale te rakh laiine nu joti ne ohde hath phade te kiha 

Joti - kale tanu kine var kiha oto jo marji kari chal par salwar ni lani main
Kala - kio ki hoiya 
Joti - tanu pata odan kina dard hoiya c nale hun is vale koi v aa sakda plz uto uto kar le jo karna 
Kala - changa phir kodi ho te lata khol ke bund bhar nu kad 
Joti ne ove hi kita jida kale ne kiha te kale ne apna lun os de bund ch salwar de oto hi la ke agge piche hon laga te nal-w osdi chati ( boobs) patan laga te thodi der bad akad gia te ohne joti nu ghut ke pgar lia te thodi der bad chad dita joti fata fat otho bhaj gai te kala apne lun nu lakhan laga jad mai dhiyan nal dekhiya ta os de lun cho v ohi cheta-2 nikal reha c te jad main apne pant wal dakhiya ta oh ve gile c. Main os to bach da hoiya bhar niklea ta os ne mainu dekh lea ine ch light aa gai te main bhaj ke apne ghar aake sida bathroom ch bar gia.

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light on te main bhag ke apne ghar aa gia te sida bathroom ch vad gia pant te kacha la ke main dekhiya ta college wang mara kacha phir ganda hoi hoia c lun cho chita-2 chita nil te main shochan laga ki ih ta kale de lun cho v niklea aa. is to pihla main kuch hor soch da bahar to mummy di awaaj aai ine time to ander ki kar rehe bhar aa te roti kha

main susu kar ke hath par tho ke bhar aaia te chup chap roti khadi te apne room ch ja ke pradan laga tode time bad ghar da kam mukake tv dekh ke mariya bheana aaiyan te mainu kiha ki gal hage tak suta ni. main kiha nahi didi bas soun hi laga c main sochiya thoda padai kar la mare pake paper aun wale ne didi ne kiha chal chad sawere paad lai hun soja main kiha ji ok

main bed te lama pae gia te nal hi didi v main upar wal dekh da sochan laga ajj vare te sochde-e mainu pata hi na laga ki tado mari akkh lag gai.sawere didi mainu jaga rahi c te main othea te bathroom ch ja ke naha ke tiyar hoiya te niche roti khan aa gia othe mariyan bheana te dad v c asi roti khadi te sare apne apne raste tur pae 

ajj rimpi mare nal college ni c aai te mera dil nahi c lag reha.class ch bita reha te ida hi choti da sma ho gia te last piriod ch madam aai te kiha ki tuhade papra di list aa gai aa 22 feb to tuhade paper suru ne ih sun ke main thoda jiha dar gia kio ki ajj 10 feb c te sade kol sirf 12 din hi rah gae c main hun apna sara dihan papra re laun de soche kio ke ih sade 8th class de paper c college khatam hon to bad main khar aa ke sab nu daseate roti kha ke padan batth gia te sirf padai wal hi apna sara time lun laga 

ise tara hi din lang de ja rahe c na ta main rimpi nal koi chedkani kar reha c te na hi ground wal ja reha c main ta sirf padai karn ch laga hoiya c te oh din aagia jidan sade paper suru hoi te mai man la ke pepar dite te ise tara sade sare paper khatam ho gai te siir to ik bhout bada bohg halka hoiya.

os din assi pihla wang hi college free time ch khelan lage apna ohe purana game te jad sade lukan de wari aai ta main upar wal nu tur pia te rimpi ne sab to nazar bcha ke oh ve mare nal hi os kamre ch aa gai jad asi kamre ch bare ta mainu phir to ohe din yaad agia te main rimpi nu bah to phad almari to lae gia

os nu apne nal agge khda kar ke piche to os nal cimbed ke os de pata te hath pher ke swad len laga to oh v ajj mare nal agge to jiyada cimbed rahi c main apne hatha ch os de bund nu ghutan laga ( jes tara oden kala joti di bund ghut reha c) inj karde te such de mainu hor swad on laga te main os di pith te hath rakh ke os nu kodi karan laga 

pihla ta oh onj hi khade rahe.mare jor pan te oh thoda jiha agge nu kodi ho gai te main apne khade lun nu us di bund de bich rakh os nal cimbed gia lun jo ki kamre ch onde hi us nal cimbden kar ke pihla hi khada ho chuka c) 

ajj sade dona cho koi kuch ni boliya bas chup chap apne kam lage hoi c main os nu cimbed ke agge piche hunde ho os nu ghut lio te mare hath apne aap hi os de hik te chale gai jis da mainu jara v pata ni laga kio ki main ta os di bund na laga swad lan laga hoiya c 

mainu pata hi na laga kad main os de hik jo ki thodi jihe upar nu othe hoi c jewe os ne apne kamij cj nimbu rkhe hon. main os de hik apne hath ch phad ke ghut n laga pure jor nal te mainu hor swad oun laga " rimpi thodi jahi kasbsai te mere hatha te apne hath rakh ron var ga muh bana ke kahndi aah ki kar reha ae mainu dard honda ae"

main os de dard di koi parwa na kite te oda hi laga reha te apna swad len laga oh tadf de rahi te main tez-2 agge piche hon laga te thodi der ch mare lun cho kuch nikleya main rimpi nu hor ghut lia mare ghutn nal oh sidi khade ho gai te 1-2 mint bad main us nu chadiya ta oh bhaj ke niche chale gai 

main othe hi khada kuch chir pahila aae swad de mud to kalpna karn laga ki ih ki hoia c.kuch chir bad main niche aai te bathroom ch baad gai paant te niker niche kar ke dekhiya ta ajj v os din vang kuch chita-2 c mare kache ch main os nu saf kita te bahar aa gia te rimpi val dakhiya ta oh nive pai bathe c te main v bath gia

asi sare bathe rahe kio ki sare game to aak gai c te gala karan lage main rimpi wal dekh reha c te nal-2 sab na gala kar reha c par rimpi chup bathe c main os nu hale kuch kahan ja puchan hi laga c ki sada tampu aa gia te assi sare ou ch batth ke apne apne ghara nu aa gae.par ik afsos c ki mari rimpi nal koi gal ni hoi kio ki hun sanu pure 2mahine diya chutiya c te main bhout khush c. ise khusi ch main apne ghar aa gia

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update ## 5

ghar aa ke roti khan to bad apne room ch bad te pai gia te schon laag ke is sare masle de jankari bare kis nal gal kite gave.ih gal soch-2 main soon gia. te sam nu didi ne othiya te tea dite pin nu chaa pi ke main grond wal nu tur pia. 

jad main ground ch puja ta kala ground di kannd te batha c os nu dekh ke mainu odan wala seen yaad aa gia te main nive pa ke os kolo langan laga ta kale ne mainu apne wal oun nu kiha. 

jad main dard-2 kale kol punchiya ta kale ne mainu apne kol bithen nu kiha main kale kol bath gia. te kala mera hal chal puchan laga te papra bar v kuch de gala karan to bad jad main kale nu kiha ki main hun chal da aa ta os ne mainu rok lia te kihan laga bihja gala karde aa

j - daso kale veer ki gal kar ne aa ( darde darde main kiha) 

k - onj ta kuch ni main kiha kafi din hoge appa nu mil main sochea chal batth de gala karde aa

j - huuuuu

kuch chir mare wal dekhan to bad kala mare wal dekh ke kihan laga

k - tu os din othe ke kar reha c

j - kuch ni veer main ta othe lukea hoia c

k - achea sirf lukia hi c ki kuch dekiya v c

kale di gal sun pihla ta main dar gia par phir himat jahi kar ke main os nu kiha

j - kale veer kuch-2 ta dekhia c par kuch samag ni laga 

k - acha ki samaj ni laga par mainu ni lagda ki tanu kuch samaj ni aaiya 

j - sachi veer mainu kuch v ni pata lag 

k - chal pihr thik aa te pata kar ke v ki lana aa

j - nahi-2 main pata kar na aa ( mare muh cho apne aap hi nikal gia) 

k - ki pata kar na aa 

j - veer jo odan hoiya c oh sab kuch 

k - mainu ni lagda ki tainu kuch dasan di lor aa par je tu kihna ta phir aaj rat nu jad light jan te khelan laga ge ta othe hi aa je 

os de gal sun ke mainu pihla dar v laga ki mainu jana chida ki nahi par phir main os nu kiha 

j - thik aa kale veer main tainu othe hi milu ga ok

k - ok 
chal phir hun khel ga ke te raat nu mil de aa. us to bad main apne dosta na khelan laga te khelan to bad assi sare ghar aa gai te mainu hun light jan di udik ckuch chir bad light chali gai te main phaj ke gali ch gia te holi-2 sare othe aan lage kala v othe aa gia te assi khelan lage te main ose ghar ch ja ke luck gia te kala v othe hi aa gia par aaj oh ikala c te mainu dekh muskuran laga te mainu aa ke kihda 
k - ha das ki pata karna c

os de ih gal sun mainu sang on lage te main nice pa ke khad gia te os ne mainu dubara puchea ta main kiha 

j - jo tusi os din joti nal nar rahe c os bare puch na c

k - kio tanu ni pata oh ki c
j - main kiha mainu ni pata oh ki c
k - sachi ni pata ki mera fudu kich reha ae
j - sachi ni pata tu das de
k - main ta das du ga par tu kise nu das na dai 
j - nahi das da odan wali gal keda main kise nu dasi aa
k - chal puch ki puchna aa
j - kale pihla ta ih das tu joti na ida kio chimbdea c ( sangde-2 puch hi liya) 
k - oda nal lagan nal swad onda aa ta laga c
j - tusi apne toto kio bhar kae hoi c 
mari ih gal sun ke kal hassan laga te kihda ih nu toto ni lun kihde aa toto ta chote jwaka de hunde aa wadea de lun hunda tare v ta lun hona 
j - mainu ni pata ki aa 
k - chal kad ke dikha aapa hune dekh lande aa ki toto aa ya lun 
main os de gal sun ke ghbra gia par dil ch sochan laga ke mainu je kuch pata kar na ta kale di gal mani pani aa te main darde ho kiha 
j - kale mai kio apne toto bah kada 
k - kala kih da kad ta sahi 
main darde hoe ne apne pant te kacha niche kita mera lun bahar aa gia jo ki aad khada c kale ne mare lun wal dekh ke hiha tu is tu toto kiha da ae oe ih ta hale betha ae jad khda ho gia ta is ne pura lun ban jana aae. mainos de gal sun ke sang gia nale swad v aa riha c te mera lun khada hon laga thodi chir bad mera lun pura khada ho gia te kala os nu dekha laga te kihda oe tera te ine choti umer ch kafi wada ae

j - tera v ta wada e aa jad main os din de kiha c par ik gal das os din tare toto matlab lun cho oh chita-2 ki nkliya c
k - tainu us bar v ni pata 
j - nahi 
k - jao pare kio majak kar reha ae
j - sachi ni pata par tu das de
kuch chir mare wal dikh ke sochan laga te phir kuch chir bad kahan laga
k - os nu muth ja lun da pani kihde 
j - achea par ih nikal da kio aa
k - jad swad aun lagda aae ta ih lun cho nikal da ae.kio tare lun cho ni niklea
main os de gal sun dar gia te phata-2 kiha nahi 
j - nahi main kad swad lita jo mera nikle te mainu ta ih v ni pata ki ih kida nikal da 
kala mari gal sun hasan laga te kihda
k - main tainu das ta dava ki swad kida lai da par te kise nu das dena aa 
j - main chati-2 kiha nahi das de
mari gal sun kala apna pjama niche karan laga te apna lun bahar kad os nu hath ch phar mainu kih da apne lun nu apne hath ch phar ke agge piche kar te dekh phir kina swad aunda .mainus de lun wal dekhiya jo ki mare lun nalo inch k wada hi lag reha c te main apne lun nu phar ke hilan laga ta mainu kuch v ni ho reha c 

main kale nu kiha kale mainu ta koi swad ni aa riha
k - tu soch kise bare jida main joti nal lag ke hil reha c 
kale di gal sun main rimpi bare sochan laga te holi-2 mainu swad on laga te main kale nu dekh ke jida oh kar reha c oda hi karan laga kuch 5 mint bad mainu laga ki mare lun cho kuck niklan laga ae main kale nu kiha 

j - kale bai mainu susu aai aa main is nu bad ch kar laina aa pihla susu kar awa 
mari gal sun kala hassan laga ke kihda 
k - ih susu ni ih ohi swad aa jihde bare tanu dasea c tu bas kari ch jo nikal da aa niklan de 
assi dove apne lun nu hilan lage te phila mare lun cho te phir kale de lun cho muth nikle te main kamban laga te swad nal mariya akha band ho gia te lata kamban lagi mainu laga ki main hun diga. main kannd nal lag ke khad gia te mariya akha hale v band c jad main kuch chir picho apniya akha khol ke kale wal dakiya ta kala apna pjama upar chuk ke apna lun pjame ch pa reha c mainus nu dekh ke phata phat apna kacha lun oper kita te apne pant pa lai kala mare wal dekh ke kihda 

k - kio aiya swad
j - sachi bai bhla hi swad aaiya par ihnu kahde ki aa ( hun mari os nal gal karan da chaka te dar khatam ho gia c) 
k - is nu muth marna kihde aa is nal swad bohut aunda aa
j - kala id hi swad lande aa ki jida tu odan joti nal kar reha c oda v swad aunda aa
k - hass ke kihda tainu sab das du ga par wada kar aapa jo gala kara ge tu os bare kise nal gal ni kare ga 
j - thik aa kale bai main kise nu ni das da par mainu ta das de 
k - aaj hi sab kuch karnaa aa ki kal joga v kuch chadna aa 
os to bad kuch chir bad assi otho bhar aa ke chonk ch bah gae te light aai to apne-2 ghara nu aa gae

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update ## 6

ghar aun to bad bathroom ch ja naha ke roti khadi te apne room ch ja ke bad te pai gia te aaj mare nal jo kuch v hoiya te mainu jo kuch v pata laga os bare sochan laga te soch de hoi ik bar mare sreer ch phir to lehar jahi othan lagi te main apne pjame wal dekhiya ta main dekh ke heran c ki mera lun puri tara khada c 

main phata phat mapne uper khasi liti ( kio ki os time garmi suru hi hoi c) te apne ale dvale dekhiya ta mariya bheana mare nal hi mare room ch sutiya paiya c. hun mara dil muth maran lai kar reha c par main didi ona de hunde room ch kuch kar ni c sakda is lai main oth ke bathroom wal jan laga ta didi ne kiha kithe chla main kiha main bathroom cliya ha 

jaldi nal bathroom ch wadiya te pjama niche kar lun nu fad ke hilan laga te rimpi nal chimden bare sochan laga te mainu kuch hon laga ta main tez-2 hath hilan laga te kuch mint bad mare lun cho pani niklea te main oda hi khad ke sahh lan laga bad ch pjama ote kar bathroom ch pani dol ke apne hath tho ke apne kamre wal nu tur pia te ja ke bad te pagia te apne aie hoe swad bare soch de hoe pata hi ni laga te main kad soun gia 

dusre din to chutiyan c is lai mainu kise ni uthiya te main 10 am utiya te niche aa ke rasooi wal gia te cha nu kiha didi ne mainu cha diti te main tiyar ho ke bhar kelan chla gia te othe ja ke kale nu laban laga par kala othe ni c main niras hoke khel da reha ki chal koi gal ni os nu raat nu mil laun gai te ise tara sara din lang gia te main sam nu ghar aiya te mammy ne mainu chidkiya ki sara din ghro bhar rehae roti ta kha lani c main sorry kiha te hath par tho ke sam de cha na kuch halka pulka khada te light janda intzar karn laga 

light gai to bad main phaj ke bhar gia te kale nu dekhan laga mainu oh kite ni mileate assi khelan lage te main ose ghar ch chla gia ke kala kite othe hi hove par oh othe v ni c main os nu othe udeek da reha par oh na aaiya te main nirash hoke ghar wal nu tur pia kio ki mera dil bilkul v ni c lag reha khelan ch 

jad ghar gia ta sare kihde aaj jaldi aa gia main kise nu kuch ni kiha te bathroom ch chla gia te apne kapre la ke nahun laga jad mera hath mare lun nu laga ta main os nu hilan laga te kuch der bad oh khaxa ho gia de main swad lan laga te jad mera pani niklea ta main naha ke raat wale kapre pake bhar aiya ta light v aa gai c main roti khade te mape room ch ja ke bed te pai giya aaj mera phora v dil ni c lag reha te na mainu aaj muth maran ch ona swad aaiya jo agge aunda c ihe soch da hoia main soun gia 

agle din v ose tara hoi main outiya naha ke roti khadi grund ch gi te kale nu labiya par oh na miliya te raat nu v ni miliya par mai. muth jarur mari par oh swad ni aaiya kio ki main is to age v hor kuch janna chunda c par kuch din mare id hi lang gai te mainu kala ni miliya khar ik raat jad main muth mar ke hatiya c ta main socheiya ke kal nu kale de ghar ja ke pata ta kara ki oh he kithe aa ih sochan to bad main bahar aa ke roti khadi te ihe kuch sochda apne bed te soun gia 

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main sware jad otiya ta time 10 vaj gai c main bathroom chja naha ke rassoi ch ja roti lai kiha ta mummy ne kiha oth gia mera putt de mainu roti diti roti khan to bad main sida kale de ghar gia ta othe os di mummy mili main ohna de pare hath lai te lale bare puchea ta oh kihde kala apne mame ghar gia ajj sam tak aje ga os to bad main khelan chla gia te sam nu ghar vapis aa gia 

te light jan to bad jad main gali ch aaiya ta kalasamne khda c te mainu dekh ke muskuran laga te kihda ki hal bai main kiha tihk aa veer os to bad assi sare khelan lage te main ose ghar ch chla gia te mare piche kala v aa gia te kihda tu ghar gia c koi kam c main kiha bas bade din ho ge c tu miliya ni c main sochea tenu chal ke mil ava ta ki kuch gala kar laiye 
acha ta ah gal aa das phir ki gal karne aa main kiha mainu adan de gal bare sab kuch janna aae 
kala kihda tu hale chotta aae hale na scoh ihna gala bare par main aaj apna paka man bana ke aiya a ki kale to sab kuch pata kar na aa main kale nu kiha koi gal ni veer tu das de kuch ni hunda mari gal sun kala kihda chal thik aa 
kala kihda muth maran bare ta tanu odan das ta c hun tenu os to baad ch sawad kida lena tanu oh dasda aa main os di gal bare gor nal sunan laga oh kihada tenu sab dasda par kise nu dasi na main na ch sir hila ta 

lama jiha saah le ke kala kihda swad lain to phila tanu apne te kudiyan de part te kida sawad liyna aa pata hona chida main os nu kiha mainu kuch ni pata ta oh kihda sab to pihla ta appa jitho susu karde aa os nu lan kihde aa te jitho kudiyan susu kardiya os nu fuddi kihde aa main biche hi boliya ki ohna de lun ni hunda kala mari gal sunke hassan laga te kihda nai ohna de fuddi hundi aa jo apne lun te bilkul alag hundi
te kudiya de mumme honde aa jina to bache dood pinde aa.mainkiha is ch dood kida ounda aa kala kiha da jad kudi bache nu janam dindi aa main kiha oh bache nu janam kida dindi aa mari gal sun kala kihda main tanu das ta reha par tu ave hi bich boli janda aae main chup ho gia 

kala kihada jida tanu dasiya ki apne mundiya kol swad lann lai lun hunda oda hi kudiya kol v swad lai lai ohna di fuddi * bund * muh * te ohna de mumme hunde aa jina nal oh swad landiya ne. 

appa apne lun nu muth mar ke kudi de mun ch pa te kudi di fuddi te bund ch pa ke swad lai sake aa ise tara kudi apne mumme gutya ke mun ch lun nu cung ke fuddi te bund ch lun lake swad landiya ne te fuddi te bund ch lun paa ke thke maran nu chudai kihde aa jida main os din joti nal salwar de upro kar reha c 

jina chir kala bolda reha te main os nu sunda reha bad ch kale nu kiha ih ke kih reha id v swad lita janda kala kihda haa ih sariya gala sunke mera lun khda ho gia c is to pihla assi koi hor gal karde koi sade wal aa reha c te sanu dekh ke kihda main tuhanu kado da labh reha c te assi bahar aa gae te chonk ch aa bith ge hun main jalde to jaldi ghar ja ke muth marna chunda c ta main otho outh ke ghar val nu tur piya ta kala v mare nal oun laga te mainu kihda chl hu ghar chal de aa baki gala kal nu kara ge te assi apne apne ghar nu chal pai 

ghar aa ke main sida. bathroom ch gia te lun nu bahar kad ke jo kuch v kale ne dasaa c os bare soch da hoiya. muth maran laga te jald hi mera pani nikal gia te main sukh da sahh liya te naha ke bahar aiya roti khadi te apne kamre ch ja bed te paai ke aaj bare sochan laga te mainu ni pata laga main kad soch da soch da soun gia.

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dusre din main outiya te naha ke roti khadi te ground val nu tur pia kio ki aaj main buht khush c te main chudai bare janna chunda c kale to. mainu kala ground ch hi mil gia main os nu dekh ke khush ho gia oh ve mare val dekh ke muskuran laga jad main os nu kuch puchan laga ta osne mainu pihla hi kiha appa sam nu gal kara ge hale tu khel lai main os de gal man gia te khelan laga par mera man n c lag reha ise tara sam ho gai te assi ghar aa gae. 

raat nu khelan de time kala kihda aaj khelen da mud ni chla aaj apa thoda jiha ghum ke aunde aa main os degal suni te os nal tur pia ghar to khasi dur aa ke ih sun san jgah te assi dove beth gai os to bad gala karan lage gala-2 ch kala kihda phir kida laga kal ina kuch jan ke main kiha bai swad bhut aaiya ina kuch janan to bad muth mar ke. ooho ta phir kal muth mari chote veer ne main sangde ne kiha ha bai muth ta hun roj mari dia jado to muth maran da pata laga aa

kala mare gal sun ke hasan laga te kihda bai bada tez aa tu te main kiha ida di koi gal ke kale veer par ki main ik gal pucha oh kihda ha ha puch ki gal aa. main kiha bai chudai kida hundi aa ( kio ki mainu hun kale to koi dar ni c lagda sago os nal inj khol ke gala karn da swad ounda c) kala mare val dekh ke kihda te ki kar na main kiha bai dasde jado da te kaldasea main ta sochke hi paresan aa ki chudai kida hundi aa is lai tanu puchea 

kala mare val gor nal dekhda hoiya kihda jad appa apne lun nu kodi di fuddi ch pa ke thake marde aa os nu chudai kihde aa main os de gal bare thiyan nal sunreha c te swad lai reha c os te bad kale ne ale duale dekh ke apna lun pjame cho bahar kadiya te mainu kihda apna lun v bahar kad main sagde hoi apna lun bahar kadi jis nu dekh ke kala kihda oe ih ta aage nalo v mota te lumba ho gia aa lagda muth maran lage ihnu change tara kich da aai te assi dove hassn lage 

assi ki dusre ge lun kani dekh de hoi gala karde hoi muth maran lage te thodi der bad sade luna cho pani nikliya te aasi apne kapre thik kite te apne ghar nu aa gae ghar aa naha ke roti khadi te sun gia os to bad sade dinid hi lagan lage kala mainu chudai bare dasda reha te main swad nal sunda te bad ch assi ik duje nu apna lun dikha-2 ke muth mare rehe par hale tak na ta mai. chudai kite te na deki 

inj hi mara result aa gia te main pass ho gia hun main khusi hoi ki main college jawa ga te rimpi nal chudai da swad lavan ga par inj na ho sakiya te mare papa ne mare pass hon to bad mainu Chandigarh hostal ch paran lai laga ta main te mare gharde bhut dukhi hoi par papa nu koi kuch ni kah sakda is lai mainu apna man marke hostal ch jana pia 

par hostal aa ke mainu bhut faida hoiya ithe aa ke mare dosti robin nal hoi jo ki ik change ghar da c par hostal ch mare nal hi rehda c pihla ta sab thik hi reha par holi-2 sadiya gala sexy gala vadan lagia jida oh madam kine soni aa os madam de mumme kine vade os de bund kine bahar nu aa ida da hi bhut kuch te assi dove ik doje nal changi tara ghul mil gai bad ch os nu mainu ik kita dite padan lai main la lai te ret nu apne room ch beth ke kitab kholi ta mare hosh hi ood ge kio ki kitab chudai di kahaniya di c main bade gor nal story nu pada reha sariya story dever bhabi diyan san.main story padan to bad muth mari te soun lag par mainu need nahi c aa rahi kio ki mainu aaj changi tara chudai bare pata laga c main ihe soch de hoi soun gia.

saware outh ke naha ke tiyar hoiya ke robin nal college val tur piya raste ch oh kihda kida lagi kitab main kiha tanu ih kitho mili .sachi yaar kitab pad ke swad aa gia ki tare kol hor hai ta mainu de davi oh hasan laga te kihde koi gal ni sam nu hor lai lai assi college gae te sam nu main os to kitab lite te room ch beh ke padan laga te padan to bad muth mari te soun gia 

ing hi main os to navi-2 kitab landa reha te pad pad ke muth mar da re ha kio ki sade college ch assi boys hi c. hun book pad-2 ke mari soch badal gai c main hun sadi har madam nu sex ne nazar nal dekhan laga c jad assi hostal to bahar v hounde ta main har kudi ya aunty nu sirhf sex karn de nazar nal hi dekhan laga 

ise tara pade hoe sal v lang gia te main 10th ch hogia ( is time ch mare gharde mainu milan aunde rahe par main ghar ni gia te chutiyan ch ithe hi reh je masti kar da) os time robin ne apne ghar deiyan nu bol ke sade hostel to thodi hi dor college de nal ik room rent te lita assi dove sare time college to bad osde room te hi rah ke masti karde kio ki os de room ch tv te cd player pia c assi film bhut dekh de c 

ise tara ik din robin kihda aaj tu mare kol hi soun javi main kiha nahi yaar wardan ne ni soun dena kihda koi gal ni main gal kar luga te tanu aaj ik navi itam dekada aa. assi rat nu roti khan to bad wardan nal gal kar ke os de room te aaie os ne pihla door te kidkiya band kitiya te cd player ch cd pa tv val dekhan nu kiha jad main tv val dakiya ta mariya akha khuliya hi rah gaiya kio ki tv te ik kudi munda sex kar lage c main bhut gor nal tv dekhan laga te sab to pihla boy ne kudi nu jafi pai phir os de bul chusan laga holi-2 osde kapde kholan laga te main robin val dekhan laga te kiha aah ki aa oh kihda ih chudai di film aa tu bas chup kar ke dekh te swad lai 

os to bad main mud tv dekhan laga hun kudi boy de bul chus rahi c te os de kapde khol rahi c kapde khulan to bad munde ne kudi nu godi chuk ke bed te lami pa ta te us upar chad ke os de bul chusan laga.thodi der bad oh thuda jiha niche ho us de gol-2 maumme chungan laga kudi madhos hoke osde wala ch hath phiran lagi mumme chupan to bad munde ne kudi diya lata kholiya te os de fuddi nu dekh ke us de fuddi te kiss kite te uper muh kar kudi val dekh ke phir to osdi fuddi te muh rakh ke us de fuddi nu apne jib nal chatan laga kudi nu swad aun laga te kuch chir bad fuddi cho kuch chita-2 niklea te kudi ne munde da sir phad ke apne fuddi te ghut lia 

hun munda khda hoiya te kudi de mun kol ja ke khad gia te apne lun nu us de mun ch pun laga kudi v apne muh nu khol ke osde lun de chupe maren lagi jida koi lolipop chus rahi hove thodi der bad munde ne apna lun os de muh cho kadia te os nu bed te lami pa ke os diya lata khol ke apne lun nu osdi fuddi te la ke ik ghassa maria te os da lun kudi di fuddi ch vad gia te oh aaah oooh karan lagi

hun munde ne us de mode fad ke ik jor di ghassa mariya te sara lun osde fuddi ch vad dita kudi ne munde nu apniya baha ch ghutiya te munada hun lun nu tez-2 kudi de fuddi ch ghasse maran laga kudi c swad nal apne bund chuk ke osda sath de rahi c kuch chir bad munde ne kudi nu apne nal ghut lia te os de fuddi ch hi apna pani kad ta te os upro otar ke nal bed te pai gai te sahh lain laga te film band hogi 

film khatam hon to bad jad mainu hosh aai ta main robin wal dekiya oh mainu dekh ke has reha c main aaj pahli bar chudai hundi dekhi c te mera lun phtan nu aaiya hoiya ch jo ke robin ne dekh lia te mainu kihda is nu bahar kad lai te muth mar le pahla appa phir gal karde aa main os di gal man ke lun bahar kadiya te muth maran laga oh mare val bhut gor nal dekh reha c par mainu koi fark ni pia main ta muth maran ch magan c jad mera pani nikliya ta kuch chir bad main robin nu kiha tanu ah kitho mili ta oh kihda jitho marje tu das tanu swad aaiya ki nahi main kiha bhut 

robin kihda swad ta mainu v bhut aaiya par ik gal ni smaj aai main kiha ki oh kihda appa dove iko age de aa par tera lun mare lun nalo mota te lama v aa main kiha mainu ni pata par ih ida da hi aa os to bad assi ik bar hor filam dakhi te phir to muth mar ke soun gae.

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update ### 9 

saware othe te assi college jan lai tiyar hoi te college wal chal pae. par aaj ik gal alag c oh ih ki aaj jo koi v kudi ya aunty dekh nu mil rahi c bas dil kar da c is nu ithe lami pa ke chod dava. par ida hona ni c is lai assi thark phorde hoe college puj gai. sara din college ch bas kal jo film dekhi c oh hi akha samne aa rahi c. ise tara din lang gia te assi phir to aaj robin de room te jake film dekhi te muth mari te soun gae. 

din bas ise tara lang rahe c assi har 2-3 din koi na koi film lake auni te os nu dekh ke swad laina te muth marni. hun dil kise na kise di fuddi maran nu karda c. lun ta har vale hi khada rehda c. ase tar din langde rahe te sade papar aage te assi apna thiyan padai te laga ta kio ki hun sade 10th de papar c. te sade papar suru hoe assi pure dil nal papar dite te. 

ajj sada last papar c te kal nu assi apne-2 ghar nu jana c is lai main robin nu kiha ki bai aaj kio na masti kiti jave oh v man gia te assi sam nu os de room ikathe hoe te navi filma la ke dekhan lage par aaj film kuch alag c. filam ch ik munda te kudi san. phila ta dove apna tv dekh rahe c. par phir dove ik dusre de nade ho ke ik dusre te bul cusan lage. ih dekh di sar hi sade lun khade ho gae. kuch chir bad dove alag hoe te lame-2 saah lain lag pae. phir ik dosre val dekhan lage ta munda kihda didi ajj ta tare bul cuaas ke swad aa gia ( jo assi film de dekh rahe c oh English ch par main ithe os nu punjabi ch likh reha kio ki English ch oh swad ni c ouna likhan da) os de ine gal sun ke mera muh khula hi reh gia te main robin val akha pad-2 ke dekhan laga.

main robin nu puchea ih ki aa oh kihda pihla film puri dekh lai phir puchli jo puchna aa. main chup kar ke tv te chal rahi film dekhan laga. hun munde ne kudi nu sofe te lami pake us de bul chus reha c te apne dova hatha nal os de mumme put reha c. kudi v pura swad lai rahi c te oh de wala ch hath pher rahi c. munde ne kudi T-shirt utari te os de mumme nage ho gae. oh hun kudi de mumme chupan laga te apna ik hat kudi di lower ch pata. 

kudi us nal ho chimbed gai te os da sir apne mummiyan te daban lagi. munde ne outh ke kudi de lower otar diti te os di fuddi te apna muh lja ke fuddi nu chusan laga. kudi nu bhut swad aa reha c te os da pani nikal gia. kudi ne munde nu baha to phad ke upar chuk ke os de bul chusan lagi. phir ik ik kar ke os ne munde de sare kapde khol dite.

kapre kholan to bad kudi ne munde da lun hath ch phadiya. te niche beth ke lun nu apne muh ch pa ke us nu chugan lai. kuch der bad jad munde to na bardast hoiya ta us ne kodi nu phar ke sofe te lami pake os diya lata khol ke. lata vich aake apne lun de tope te thuk laiya te topa fuddi te rakh ik jor nal ghasa maria te lun kudi de fudi ch vadta kudi ne us nu apne nal ghut lia. kuch der bad munde ne kudi diyan lata apne modiyan te rakh ke taz-2 ghase maran laga te kudi v niche to apni bund hila ke swad lai rahi c. munda hun full tez-2 ghase marda hoiya kihda didi main chutan laga aa te kudi kahdi pade mari fuddi ch hi paxe apna pani. kuch der bad munde ne kudi nu ghut lia te os de fuddi ch hi apna pani kadan laga. munde de nal hi kudi di fuddi ne jabab de dita te osda v pani nikal gia ote dove ik dusre de gal ch baha pa ke lame pae rahe osh to bad film khatam hoi.

film khatam hon to bad main ik dam hous ch aiya te jad main niche dekiya ta mera hath apne lun te c te main os nu tez-2 hila raha c kuch der bad mera pani nikal gia te main bed te lama pai gia. kuch der bad jad mari akh khuli ta mai robin val dekhiya oh mainu dekh de muskura reha c. main os nu puchiya ih ki c koi bhean bhai apas ch kida chudai kar sakde ne. robin kihda aaj kal sab hunda aa pihla sirf ih baher le mulak ch hi hunda c. par aaj kal apne mulak ch v hon lag pia aa. main us nu kiha ih ta galat aa. oh hasan laga te kihda ih ta pata ni ki ih galat aa ya sahi par hunda aa. ih sirf bhai bhean ch hi nahi * dever bhabi * bap bati * maa putt * te hor kai restiyan ch v chudai hundi aa. robin de gal sun ke mera sir dukhan laga. os to bad os nemainu bhut kuch dasiya te main sunda reha. bad ch jad mainu apna sir kuch thik lagan laga ta assi ik bar ohi film dubare dekhi de muth mar ke soun gai. bed te pai ta gae c par akha ch neend ni c main ta bas ihe soch reha c ki ih kida ho sakda jo robin ne mainu aaj jo kuch v dasiya aa. main robin val rekhiya ta oh suta pia c main us to kuch puchna c par phir sochiya saware puch la ga te aahi soch de hoi mainu pata hi na laga ki mainu kad neend aagi 

dusre din saware outhde hi naha ke main ready hoiya ta jad robin dekhiya ta oh v naha ke ready ho reha c. osde ready hon to bad main os kol gia te os nu kiha ke tu kah reha c ki apne desh ch v oda hi hunda jida da film ch dakhiya c. oh kihda haa hunda aa. main kiha ki tu kide ajhe nu janda aae jo ida kar de hon. pihla ta oh chup reha phir mare val dekh ke kihda tainu das ta dava par tu kise nu dasi na main kiha nahi das da. robin kihda main apne mame de kudi te munde nu chudai karde dekhiya c. main os nu kiha kida kithe te kive. mare ine swal ik dam sun ke oh hasan laga te bad ch os ne mainu sari gal dasi te main sun ke heran ho gia. id hi gala karde hoe assi roti khan tur pai te roti kha ke aun to bad assi apna saman pack kita ghar nu jan tiyar ho gai te akhri bar jande-2 milke phir milan da vada kae ke apne apne ghar nu tur pai mainu mare papa lain aai c te assi gadi ch bah ke ghar nu tur pae. main gadi turan to bad ithe bitae time bar sochan laga. 

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update ### 10

hostal to jad main ghar aa reha c ta main hostal ch bite 2 sala aa bare soch reha c. main sochan laga ke ithe kini masti kiti kina kuch sikhan nu milia ithe hi aa ke mainu chudai da puren gian miliya. ih sochde hoe ik dam mare dimag ch kal dekhi hoi film chalan lagi te main os bare sochan laga ki ida kida hunda hove ga. nale jo mainu robin ne dasiya oh sach hai ja os ne vase hi kah dita aa. ihe sochda hoiya main baher road val dekhda reha te mainu pata hi na laga ke assi ghar kado poj ge. papa ne gadi roki te bahar nikal ke kiha putt ghar aa gia hun gadi cho nikal aa. main gadi cho bahar aa apne ghar nu dekhan laga jo ki bilkul badliya hoiya c. main papa val dekh ke kiha papa ih kis da ghar aa. papa kihde putt apna hi aa tu pure 2 sal bad aiya aae ta tanu ghar pchan ni aa reha. kio ki tare jan to bad ghar dubara baniya aa. 

main ta bas apne ghar nu hi dekh reha c jo pihla ik purana jiha ghar c hun osde jaga te nawa bilkul kothi tyip ghar c. te ghar baniya v bhut sunder hoiya c. papa kihde putt hun ander v jana ki bahar hi khada rahe ga. main apna saman chuk ke papa de magar tur pia te assi gaat khol ke ander aa gai te ghar de bahar ik gardan baniya hoiya c te mari sari family othe hi bathi c. 

mainu dekh ke mariyan bheana kahan lagia aa gia jashan te mainu dekh ke bhut khus hoiya. main apna bag othe hi rakhiya te ohna val tur pia. sab to pihla main dada ji kol gia te ohna de paari hath lage. ohna ne mare sir te hath fariya te akhan lage aa gia putt tainu dekhan nu bada dil karda c. main kiha tusi appe hi ta mainu apne to dur bhajiya c te na mainu othe milan aae kadi. oh kihde chal koi na gusse kio hunda aae hun tu aa gia hun tanu main kite ni jan dena chal baki ghar diyan nal v mil lae kite kahan dade ne sanu milan hi ni dita. 

ou to bad main taiya tai kol gia te ohna de v paari hath lage ohna ne v mare sir te hath phariya. mera hal chal pucham lage. main kiha main ta thik aa tusi apna daso. tai kahdi sad v vadiya aa je koi kasar hagi c oh tu aa jia aae appe thik hoju ga. tai de gal sun sare hasan lage. osto bad main apne mummy kol gai 

main mummy de paari hath lae. mummy ne mainu phad ke apne gal na la lia te mare mathe te kiss kar kiha aagia mera putt tainu dekhan nu ta mariyan akha tarsiyan piyan c. tenu apne gal nal lon n bada dil karda c. main kiha mata ( mummy nu main mata hi kihda c suru to) lai tera putt aa jia hun jina pyar kar na kar lae hun ni jand tera putt tare to door. main v is pyar lai tarsiya piya c mainu tuhadi bhut yaad aundi c. assi dove ik dusre de gal lage hoe c te sadiya akha cho pani niklan laga c .ih dekh ke papa kihde le putt aaiya bad ch aa ron pihla lag pai. papa di gal sun sb hasan lage mummy ne mare mate te kiss kar ke mainu chdiya te mare muh to mare athru saf kite. hale assi ik dusre de athru saf hi kar rahe c ta mariya bheana boliya aaho assi ta ghar ch haie ni sanu kio milna te muh pher ke khad gia. 

main mummy to par ho ohna val chla gia te ja ke sab to pihla didi de aage ja ke khad gia. oh apna muh fula ke khadi c te nal baki diyan bheana v. main oh na nu dekh ke sorry kiha par koi kuch na boliya main 2-3 bar sorry kiha jad phir v koi na boli ta ghar de kahde aa ki aa sawaer da ta ghar sir te chakiya pia ki veer ne auna te jad oh aa gia ta apne muh fula ke khdiyan ne. jad phir v koi na boli ta main ohna val dekh ke apne kan apne pag uto hi phade. jad phir v koi na boli ta main ohna val dekh ke uthak-bathak karan lai jad niche bithan laga ta mari bheana ik dam phag ke mare kol aaiyan te mainu niche ni bethan dita. mainu phad ke apne gal nal laga ke ron lagiya. mariyan sariyan bheana ikthiyan hi mare gal lagiyan hoiya c. ih dekh sare ghar de bhut khus hoe. main ohna nu chup kariya apne to dur karde hoe kiha ah ki aa sare mainu dekh ke roi hi jande ne lagda mera auna kise nu changa ni laga. main mud ke hostal chla janda ha. mariyan bheana mainu maran lagiyan te kihan lagiyan ik ta tu sanu milan ni aunda c te je aaiya aae ta phir to jan de gal kar reha aae. tu hun ja ke ta dekha tainu kuta gai hun je phir v chla gia ta assi tainu mud ke kadi v bulan ni. sare ghar de ohna de gal sun ke hasan lage. 

main ohna to vakh hoke harry val gia te os de gal lag ke miliya. oh kihda ki hal aa chote vir hor suna kida reha phir hostal ch. main kiha sab vadiya reha vir tu suna tera ki hal aa. oh kihda ider v sab vadiya hi aa. assi ise tara gala karde rahe sare ghar de mainu mare hostal bare puch de rahe. dada ji vich hi kihan lage munde nal gala hi kari javo ge ki is nu koi cha pani roti ruti v khyani aa. uhna de gal sun ke sare mainu kehnde tu andrr chal ke hath muh dho lai assi tare lai kuch khan nu lai ke aunde ha. aaj sara kuch teri pasand da baniya hoiya aa. ih sun mai apna bag chukan jan laga c ta mari sab to choti bhen kehndi veer tu ander chal main tuhda bag lai ke aundi ha. main us de gal sun ander val nu tur pia te baki sare ghar de v mere magar hi ander nu tur pai. 

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update ### 11

main jida hi ghar da dawaja khol ke ander gia ta mariyan akha khuliya hi rah gia. ghar bhut vadiya dhang nal baniya te sajiya hoiya c. ( ghar bare das deva ) ander aunde hi ik vadi jahi lobi jis ch ik pase sofe te samne lcd lagi hovi c. ik pase daining tabal laga c tabal de samne rasooi c. os de nal hi ik chota jiha kamra c pojja room c. osto agge uper jan lai podiyan c. os to agge amne samne 4 room c. lobi de ik kone ch bathroom c. te har kamre nal attach bathroom san. ohna cho ik room mom dad da " ik dada ji da "ik taiya tai da " ik room gest room c. os room to thodi jahi piche hatma storoom c. 

is to bad podiyan chad ke upar kuch line ch te kuch ik dosre de samne 6 room c. jina cho ik mrea" ik harry da " ik room taiya ji diyan kudiyan da" 2 room mariyan bheana de c " ik room gaest room c. akhir ch ik choti jahi lobi c jis ch sofa set pia c te samne diwar te lcd lagi c. sare room to ik pase podi upar nu jandi c te upar v 2 room c. ik ch purana saman c te ik ch kuch kurciyan te mage c te ik bad laga hoiya c. ( ih sab kuch ghar bare mainu didi ne dasiya c te main ghom ke dekiya c. par pihla ghar bare dasna jarori c is lai pihla das ta) 

ander aa ke tai te mummy rasoi val chliyan gaiyan te main othe khda ghar nu dekh reha c ta didi ne kiha ke aa tainu tera room dekha deva ta ki tu fresh ho lave. oh mainu apne nal lake upar nu tur pae. te baki bheana v magar hi aa giyan. assi jad mare room ch gae ta mera room bhut hi vadiya banaiya hoiya c. mari choti bhean ne mera bag bed te rakh deta te bed te hi bath gai. main apne bag kol gia te bag cho apna toliya kadan lag maiyan bheana bed te beth gia c. main toliya le ke bthroom ch gia te muh hath thon laga. jad main bahar aaiya ta dekhiya didi mare kapde almari ch set kar rahe c. main kiha main appe hi kar lane c ohna ne mari gal da koi jabab na dita te apna kam karde rahe. kuch chir main ohna val dekh da reha te ane nu mummy di awaaj aai ki niche aa jo. assi sare niche aa je te sofe te beth gae. mummy cha te pakode lai ke aae. assi sare cha pin lage te gala maran lage. cha pin to bad assi othe he bathe rahe mummy khali cup chak ke rassoi ch rakhan chale gae. oh v vapis sade kol hi aa ke beth gae hun mera sara pariwar mare kol betha c. te mari padai hostal te main othe ki kita mainu koi problem ta ni hoi bare puch rahe c. te main ohna diyan gala da jabab de reha c. assi ida hi gala mar de rahe koi v mare kolo oth ke nahi c jana cahunda. gala karde hoi sanu pata hi na laga ki kina time ho giya. jad dada ji ne kiha ki time ta dekh lo roti tok ni kar na ta sab ne time val dekhiya te kiha ajj ta time da pata hi na i laga kad lang gia. dada ji kihde ahho aaj kanu time pata lagna aa sada putt jo aa gia aa sade ghar di ronak. par tusi ta mare putt nu chimned hi aae jado da aaiya tusi ta ik mint v mare putt nu arram ni karan dita. dada ji de gal sun ke mummy te tai rassoi val chale gai ohna de piche hi didi ohne v chaliyan gaiyan. dada ji kihde putt tu apne room ch ja te thoda rest karle phir naha tho ke roti te milde aa. jad main upar nu jan laga ta mariyan chotiya bheana v mare nal oun lagiyan. dada ji ohna nu kahde is nu hun rest karn do ih hun ithe he aa ke te ni chala jiniya gala karniyan ne bad ch kar liyo. dada ji di gal sun oh v rassoi val tur piyan te main upar val. apne kamre ch aa ke bad te lama pai gia te apne ghar diyan de pyar bare sochan laga ki sare mainu kina pyar karde ne. main safar to te baki time gala kar ke thak gia c is lai mainu pata hi ni laga ki main kad soun gia. 

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update ### 12

mainu laga ki koi mainu hila reha. jad main aakha khol ke dekiya ta mari didi mainu otha rahi c. oh kahde ki hun oth v ja kad tak suta rahe ga main tainu kado di jaga rahi aa. main apniyan akha malde hoiye kiha ki main hune fresh hoke aaiya. oh niche chali gai te main bathroom ch. fresh hon to bad main niche aaiya ta dekiya ki mera sara pariwar dining table te betha c main v ik chair te beth gia. 

mare ik pase mari choti bhean c osde nal os to vaddi bathi c.dosre pase mare to choti te osde nal didi te didi nal dad bathe c. center sit te dada ji bathe c. mare opp. side inder te osde ik pase lavi te dosre pase harry batha c. harry de nal di chair khali c te os to agli te taiya ji bathe c. mummy te tai ji sanu sab nu roti pake de rahe c. 

assi sare ik dosre nal gala kar de hoe roti kha rehe c. mainu vich-2 sab val dekh v reha c. te jad main inder val dekhiya ta main roti khani phul ke os val hi dekhan laga. kio ki najara hi kuch ajiha c. oh roti kha rahe c par table te aage nu chuki hoi c jis kar ke os di T-shirt cho os de mumme baher nu dikh rahe c. main ta roti bhul ke os val hi dekh riha c. mera dihan os time tutiya jad mummy ne kiha ki gal putt sabji swad ni bani jihda roti ni kha reha ohna di gal sun sare mare val dekhan lage. main ohna val dekh ke nive pa lai te chup karke roti khan laga. par hun main vich nu roti khande hoe apni akh uper chuk inder val dek landa te phir nive pake roti khan lag janda. main pura dhiyan rakh reha c ki koi mainu ida karde hoi na dekh lave. ise tara assi sab ne roti khade te thodi der gala kitiyan os to bad mummy ne sab nu dood pin nu dita te kiha dood pie ke apne apne kamre ch ja ke soun jo. baki gala kal nu kar leo. 

aasi sare jawak uper nu aa gae. harry ta mainu bye kar ke apne kamre val chla gia. te main apne kamre val nu. par mariyan bheana v mare piche hi mare kamre ch aa giyan te mare nal mare bad te bath gaiyan. sariya mare nal gala kar reha c. par main ohna diyan gala da haa huu ch hi jabab de reha c. kio ki mera dhiyan ta samne bathi inder te c. kio ki oh oh bathi hi is tara c ki osde T-shirt cho osde mumme dekh rahe c. pata ni mainu ki hoiya main os nu bade gor nal dekh reha c. mari nigha hun os de mummiya to niche nu jan lagi c. main sochan laga ih aa ki aa sohna mukhda patla sarer mote-2 bilkul gol mumme sapat pet. oh chokdi mari bathi c jis kar ke osde pet to bad os de pata te nigha chali gai jo ki bilkul gol c. bathan karn bahar nu nikli hoi bund. jis nu dekh de hi swad oun laga te mera lun khda ho gia. par phir ik dam khiyal aaiya ki ih main ki sochan lag haa. inder ta mari bhean aa mainu ida ni sochna chida. ih kiyal aunde hi main apna dhiyan os to haton lai bakiyan nal gala karn laga te mud os val ni dekhiya. assi gala kar hi rahe c ki mummy ne aa ke kiha ki chlo kudiyo munde nu soun do hun raat bhut ho gai aa tusi v soun jo. jahdi gal karni aa oh saware kar lio. ih kih ke mummy chali gai te sab oth ke jan lage. sariyan mainu gudnight kih ke apne room val chalan lagiya ta inder sab o bad ch ja rahi c. os nu jandi hoi dekh ke mari nigha apne app hi os di hil di bund te chali gai os di bund sachi bhut bahar nikle hoi c. ida lagda c jive kise ne chani vajai hove. main os di hil di bund nu hi dekh da reha jad ta oh mariyan akha to dur nahi hogai. sab de jan to bad main phata phat otheiya room da dawaja band kita te bathroom ch vad gia te apna pujama niche kar ke lun nu fad ke muth maran laga. mut marde hoi mariyan akha band ho gia c. akha band hunde hi inder de mumme te os di hil dd bund mariyan akha samne aa gai te main tez-2 muth maran laga mera jald hi pani nikal gia. kuch der bad jad main sant hoiya ta mainu bilku v changa ni c lag reha jo v main hune kita c. main apne app nu gala kad reha c ki inder mainu kina pyar kardi aa te main os de name te muth mar reha aa. 

ihe sochda hoiya mainbad te aa ke lama pai gia te sochan laga main ida da kio ho gia han. pihla ta main bilkul v ida da nahi c. sochde hoi chate aaiya ki ih sab os film te robin diyan kahiya hoiya galan da asar aa. mainu inder bare ida ni sochna chida oh v ta mari bhean aa. par dil de ik kone ch thoda jiha kuch hor hi chal reha c jis nu dil manan nu hi tiyar nahi c. ise oder bun ch pata hi na laga ki main kad soun gia. 

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update ### 13

saware mainu disi ne uthiya kiha chal fresh ho ke niche aa ja. main utiya te bathroom ch ja ke nahan laga te os to bad room ch aake kapde pa me niche chla gia. niche sare hi bathe c main v ohna nal beth gia. dada ji kahde badi jaldi tiyar ho gia ik ihna nu dekh lai hale tak ni tiyar hoiya. main apneiyan bheana val dekhan laga jo ki hale tak night suit ch hi san. 

ohna val dekh de hoe main cha pin laga. cha pinde hoe mari akh ik var phir to inder de ote hi tik gai. os ne v raat vala hi suit paiya hoiya c te hun v osde mumme dis rehe c. main utho phata phat jana chaunda c. ine nu mummy ne dad taiya ji te harry dada ji nu roti diti te mainu puchiya putt tari v roti pa diya. main kiha mumme nahi hale ni kani. main uthe betha chori-2 inder de mumme dekh da reha te mera lun khda ho gia. jad mera dhiyan apne lun val gia ta mainu bhut bura laga te main jaldi to cha piti te ghro bahar jan laga. 

mummy kihde hun kidar chla roti ta khale. main kiha bad ch khala ga te main ohna val dekhe bgaer bahar chla gia kio ki je main ohna val ghum da ta sab nu mera khda lun dekh jana c. 9 vajan vale c is lai main ground val tur pia. othe dekhiya ta kafi bache khel rahe c. main v othe ja ke beth gia te ohna nu khel de hoe dekhan laga. 

mainu uthe bethe nu hale kuch der hi hoi c ki kise ne mare modhe te hath rak ta. main piche mud ke dekiya ta oh kala c. kala mainu dekh ke kihda ki hal tera tu ta yaar sanu bhul hi gia aa. main uth ke us nal hath milande hoe kiha nahi bai tanu kida bhul ja ge. oh ta dad ne mainu hostal bhej dita c. te kal hi vapis aaiya han. assi dove beth ke gala karan lag pe. gala gala ch kale ne kiha han phir kida rahi hostal life. main kiha vadiya rahi. oh kihda phir koi gal bani kise nal ki nahi. main kiha kithe bai sada college ta sirf boys college hi c. par tu suna tera te joti da kida chal riha. 

mari gal sun ke kala hihda appa v full najare laide aa. nal hun kali joti hi nahi 1-2 hor v ne. os de gal sunke main kiha bai tariyan ta mujan ne ithe ik v ni te tu 3-3 da swad lai reha e. kon-2 oh ta das de. kala kihda swad ta bai pura lai da par hale tainu na ni das sakda han jad time aaiya ta tainu milva dava gaa. rahi swad de gal tainu v dava du ga. main kiha suchi gal bai kar phir koi hila jaldi fuddi maran nu badadil kar da. kala kihda koi na karde aa tera v koi hila. chal aaja ghar chaliye tanu ki cheez dinda aa. bada swad dou oh tainu. 

mai os nal osde ghar chla gia os de ghar nu tala laga c. main kiha tera ghar ta band aa oh kihda sare mame unha kani gae ne main ghare kala hi c. osde gal sun ke main kiha phir ta mouja ne jihnu marji sadle te fuddi marle. 
kala mari gal sun ke hasan laga te kiha bai gal ta tari thikaa par Id ho ni sakda. main kiha kio. kala kihda bai apne sare jugad ite ni hage sare bahar ne te joti v apne massi kol gai hoi aa. maim os de gal sun ke udas hogiya kio ki mainu laga c ki kala hun mare kihan te joti nu bulave ga te main aaj os di fuddi da swad lava ga. kala mera muh dekh ke kihda udas na ho main tainu jo cheez dava ga os nal tare muh te smile aa jani aa. main os de gal sun os val dekhan laga te sochan laga ajahi ki cheez dani aa kale ne. kala apne almari kol gia te ik akhbar chuk lia ya. mainu oh dinda hoiya kihda is nu apne room ch ja ke kholi te koli v jad ikla hove kise de samne na koli. hun is nu apni pant ch pa le. main us to akhbar phdiya ta mainu oh koi kitab lai te main os nu apne T-shirt chuk ke pant de upro belt ch psa liya. os to bad assi kad der gala kar de rehe te main nu hun bhukh lag rahi c is lai main os nu kiha ki hun mainu chlana chida. kala kihda hda mari gal yaad rahi is nu ikale ch hi koli. main han ch sir hilaiya te apne ghar val tur pia. 

ghar puj ke sab to pihla main apne kamre val chla gia kamre ch ja ke main os akhbar ro pihla almari ne uper chupa. bathroom ch thath muh tho ke niche aa gia te mummy nu kiha roti davo. jo ki rasooi ch hi kam kar rahe c ohna nal tai ji v c. mummy ne mainu roti diti main mummy nu puchiya ki baki sab kithe aa. mammy kihde tare dad taiya ji te harry kam te chale gai ne. inder collage gai aa. baki sariya college gaiya ne. harry da sun main kiha mummy oh kad to kam karan laga hale ta os nu padna chida c. mari gal sun mummy kihde oh pad na nahi c chunda is kar ke tare taiya ji ne os nu v apne nal hi kam te laga liya aa. main chup kar ke roti khadi te mummy nu kiha ki main apne room ch chla ha aram karn mainu jagaiyo na. maummy kihde thik aa kar le aram 3 vaje tak os to bad ta phir tani kise ne ni aramkarn dena. main apne rro ch aaiya te andro kundi lagi te almari de upro akhbar chukiya te khol ke dekiya ta os ch ik kitab c. 

main os kitab nu lai ke bet te beth gia te jad main oh khol ke dekhi ta oh ik chudai di kahaniya di kitab c. main os nu dekhan laga os ch kuch photoyan v san. main photoyan dekhan to bad jad story padan laga ta os story da name pad ke hi main hil gia kio ki story da na c main apne bhean chodi. main sochan laga ih mare nal ki ho reha pihla othe filam phir robin diyan gala phir inder nu dekh ke mera lun khda hona te hun kale valo diti ah kitab jis ch bhean bhra dae chudai likhi aa. ki mainu is nu padna chida hai. kuch chir main os dekh da hi reha. akhir mare story padan da dil kita te main os nu pad da re os ch likha c kida oh apne bhean val dekhan laga phir kida os na ched khani karan laga. phir kida os ne os nu chudai lai mana lia te chudai kiti. story pad de hoi mera lun full khda c te mainu swad aa reha c. mainu pata hi na laga kad mai apne lun nu pent cho bhar kad ke muth mar reha c. hun mera pani niklan vala c is lai main kitab nu bad te rahiya te bathroom ch ja ke lun nu tez-2 hilan laga te mera chut gia. main apne app nu saf kar ke bad te aa ke beth gia te story bare sochan laga ki ida v hunda hai. ik gal ta c story pad ke swad bhut aaiya c. kitab nu main bad de gade niche rakh ke bad te pai gia muth mar ke swad aa gia c ose swad ch pata hi na laga ki mainu kad neend aa gai. 

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update ### 14

4 vaje didi ne mainu uthiya te chali gai. main niche aaiya te cha pike ghar to bahar nikal gia. ground ch aa ke othe khel da reha te jad hanera hon laga ta assi apne ghra nu aage. ghar aa ke main apne room ch gia te bathroom ch ja nahan laga. nahan to bad main raat vale kapde pai te niche aa gia. niche dad ohne v aa gae c. mummy te tai ji raat di roti bna rehiya c. sab fresh ho ke dining table te aa ke bath gae. 

aaj phir to mare samne inder hi bati c. aaj v os ne oda da hi T-shirt paiya hoiya c te aaj v os de mume bahar niklan nu tiyar c. main sochan laga " yaar ih ida de kapde kio pandiaa is nu koi rokda kio ni. ihna kapdiyan cho ta is da sara shreer dis da piya aa. te is nu koi maglab ni." 

ine nu mummy ne sab nu roti khan nu diti te main v khan laga. roti khande hoi mari akh bar-2 inder de bahar nu chak de mumeiyan te ja rahi c os de mume dekh de hoi mera lun khada ho gia. hun mare to roti v nahi khadi ja rahi c reh-2 ke mera dil os de aad nange mume dekhan da kar reha c. id hi chori-2 os de mumiyan val dekh de hoi main roti khadi te. assi apne-2 room val chl pai. par aaj phir sariyan mare kamre ch hi aa gia. mare nal bad te bath ke gala karan lagiyan. pihla ta assi gala karde rahe pe phir mera diyan ik dam inder val gia. 

oh apne gode mod ke ohna ote apni thodi rakhi bathi c. is tara bethan nal os diyan lata thodiyan jiha khuliyan hoiyan c. ih najara dekh ke ta mera muh khul hi rah gia. main ik dam sab val dekiya ki koi mainu ta ni dekh reha jad mainu laga ki koi mare val ni dekh da. main phir to os val dekhan laga te sochan laga " ah ki aa is de shreer da ta ik-2 ang gadar aa. us de gol-2 patt patan nal lagi hoi lower bilkul ohde pata nal chimde Hoi c. jo ke os nu hor v dil kicma bana rahi c. pata to thale nu dekhde hoi os de bahar nikli hoi bund nu dekh ke ta mera dil muh ch nu aa gia ik var ta te lun full thumke la reha c. os de bahar nikle bund nu dekh ke ta ida lag da c ki isnu hune bad te lami pa ke chod diya. par apne aap te control karde hoi main os diya latan ch hi dekhi gia " 

kuch der bad jad didi di awaaj mare kana ch pai ta mainu hosh aai. main didi val dekhan laga. didi kah rahi c " chalo hun soune aa mainu lagda jasan nu need aa rahi aa jo ih sadi kise gal da jabab ni de reha. "

didi de gal sun main nive pa lai.te didi ohne bed to uth ke bahar nu chal pia. aaj v inder sab to bad ch bed to uti te bahar nu jan lagi. main problem che to os de hil de bund not dekhan laga te oh apne room val mud gai. main utiyan te apne room da darwaja band kita. phir mainu os kitab de yaad aai te main os nu gade niche to kadiya te hor story padan laga. mera lun jo ki pihla hi khada c hun oh hor v sakht ho gia. main story pada reha te jad story muk gai ta mainu v laga ki mera v pani niklan vala aa. main phaj ke bathroom ch gia te inder de gol pata nu yaad kar ke muth mari te mera chut gia. mainu aaj agge nalo kuch jiyada hi swad aaiya te kuch jiyada hi mera muth nikliya c aaj. main apne aap nu saf kita te bad te aa ke bath gia. 

bed te bathe hoi mera dihan ik var phir to kitab val gia te main phir to kitab chak Ke padan laga.main story pada reha ik to bad ik story padi. story pad de hoi mainu time da pata hi ni laga te main jad ghadi val dakiya ta raat de 3 vaj rahe c main heran c ki ina time ho gia te mainu pata v na laga. main saiyan story padan to bad bed to utiya te bathroom ch chala gia te apne lun nu phad ke muth maran laga. hun mainu padiyan hoiyan story yaad aa rehiyan c. te main inder nu story vali kid di te apne aap nu munda samj reha c. mainu muth maran da ik alag hi swad aa riha c ih soch " ke ki main inder nu chod reha aa. mariyan akha band ho gia c te mainu inj lag reha c ki main sachi he inder nu chod reha aa" mera ih supna odo tuta jad mare lun cho pani nkliya te main aka kholiyan tad mainu yaad aaiya " ki main ta muth hi mar reha c. par mainu laga ki je sochan ch ina swad aaiya ta jad main inder nu chodu ga tad kina swad aau ga " 

hun mare dil ch koi gila nahi c kal vang ki inder mari didi aa. aaj ta oh mainu sirf ik punjabi kudi hi lag rahi c. ki jis nu jina chodiya jave ona khat aa. hun mainu lagan laga c ki main os val kichiya ja reha te main os nu te os de shreer nu fil kar ke chodna chuda aa. main bed te pia ahi sochda reha te mainu pata hi na laga mainu kad need aa gai. 

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saware mainu aaj phir didi ne hi jagaiya jad main ohna val dakhiya ta oh apne college jan lai tiyar c. mainu utha ke oh niche chali gai. main bathroom ch jia naha ke tiyar hoiya te niche aagiya. niche sirf hun mariyan bheana dada ji te mummy te tai ji hi san. dada ji mainu onde nu dekh ke kihde " ki gal putt aaj ina late utiya aae. raati neend ni aai."
main kiha " dada ji bas raat main thoda jiha let suta c. is lai let utiya aa. "
dada ji kihde " chal koi gal ni aaja roti khale "

main chup chap jake kursi te beth gia. mummy ne mainu v roti pa ke diti. baki sab pihla hi roti kha rahe c. sab ne roti khadi te mariyan bheana college nu chliya gaiyan dada ji v bahar nu chale gai dad ohne ta pihla hi kam te ja chuke c. hun ghar ch main mummy te tai ji hi c. main roti khadi te mummy nu kiha " main bahar ja reha aa thodi der tak aa java ga. "

main ghro bahar nikal ke ground val tur pia. othe dekhiya ta bache khel rahe c. kala te 1-2 munde hor ik passe bath ke tass ( plaing card) khad rahe c. main v ohna kol beth gia te ohna nu khel de hoi dekhan laga. Mainu dekh ke kala kihda " aa gia bai assi tanu hi yaad kar rahe c. aaja tass kheliye. "
main kiha " mainu ta ondi ni na mainu pata ki tuzi khel ki rahe oo. "
kala kihda " assi bhabi khel rahe aa ih ta bhut sokhi aa pihla tu sanu khel de dekh le tainu aapi samaj aa ju gi." 
os de gal sun ke main kuch der ohna nu khel de hoi dekh da reha. koi 3-4 bar khelan to bad ohna ne mare v pate band te te main v khelan laga. 1-2 bari khel ke mainu v kuch samaj aa gi te main ohna na khelan lag. assi kafi der ida hi khel de rahe ta ik munda aaia te kale nal jo munde bathe c ohna nu apne nal la gia. hun main te kala dove ikale c. kala mainu dekh ke kihda "chal ghar nu chla de aa othe beth ke gala kara ge." 
assi dove kale de ghar val tur pai.kale de ghar nu aaj phir lock laga c te kale ne lock holiya te assi ghar ander che gai. asi dove kale de kamre ch ja ke beth gai. kala mare val hi dekh reha c. main kiha "ki hoiya ida kio dekh reha aae"
kala kihda " kuch ni main ta tariyan akha de ke soch reha c ki lagda munde ne sari raat kitab padan ch hi laga diti."
kale di gal sun ke main hasan laga te kiha " han bai kitab ta main sari pad lai te oh v raat nu jag ke. kitab pad ke swad bhut aaiya par ik gal ni samaj aai ki oh sab storys ta bhean bhra diyan c ida thodi hunda hona ih ta sirf swad lain lai likhiyan gaiyan storys ne."main ih os nu jan ke kiha c kio ki main hun os de bhav dekhne c. 

mari gal sun pihla ta kala mand-2 muskuran laga te phir kihda " tu kihde duniya ch rehda aae ih sab kuch ta aaj kal chal da aa. ih sab pihla bahar le mulk ch hunda c par aaj kal ih pasie ithe v hunda aa." mainu laga kala minu kuch kihna chunda par sang reha. main v os nu os bare ni puchiya kio ki mainu pata aa jad os nu lage ga oh mainu apne hi das dave ga. 

main kale nu kiha " tainu ih kitab kitho mili kia tare kol hor v ne ajhia kitaba"
kala kihda " oh jahde munde ni c apne nal khel rahe ohna cho ik city ch pada aa oh otho lake aunda. han mare kol paiyan ta hagiyan hor ki tu pad niya ne"
main kiha" han main padniya netu mainu de de main pad ke tainu bapis kar dava ga"

assi ise tar hi os de ghar bathe rahe kadi kuch khel de te kadi tv dekh de kadi gala karan lag jande. jad main ghadi val dakhiya ta 4 baj gai cmainu time da pata hi na chla. main kale to kitaban laiyan te ghar val tur pia.ghar aa ke sab to pihla main apne kamre ch gia te kitaba apne almari de piche rahk ditiya te bathroom ch ja ke muh hath tho ke niche aa gia. niche mummy rassoi ch cha bana rahe c. main kiha roti de do mummy ne mare val dakhiya te kiha " hun tainu roti di pai aa sawer da gia hun aa reha aae. kithe c ine der tak"
main kiha " mummy oh kale de ghar chala gia c oh ikala c ghare te os nal khel de hoi time da pata hi na laga " mari gal sun ke mammy ne bhar jan nu kiha te main bahar aa ke beth gai thodi der bad mummy cha te roti lake aae mare lai main roti khan laga. mummy apni cha le ke samne sofe te beth gai. main kiha " mummy aaj koi v ni dikh reha sab kithe ne"
mummy ne kiha " sab ghar he ne bas apne-2 room ch ne. tai tari suti pai aa te tariyan bheana de papar suru hon vale ne parso to is lai main oh na nu apne-2 room ch beth ke padan nu kiha aa. 

main kiha " thik aa" phir main roti khadi te tv la ke dekhan laga te nal cha v pia laga. ise tara tv dekh de hoi raat ho gai te dad ohne v ghar aa ge mummy te tai raat de roti bana rahiyan c. didi ohne apne room ch pad rahiyan c. harry fresh hoke mare kol aa ke beth gi te tv dekhan laga. harry kihda " hor bai chote ki hal aa tera chutiyan kida lang rahiya ne."
main kiha " vadiya lang rahiya ne. par bai tusi ah padai chad kio diti."
harry kihda " bai aapa nu ni chani lagdi aa padai. par jini lod c ona pad lae hun ta bas kam sik laiye ta jindgi set ho ju gi." harry ine gal kah ke ale duale dekhan laga te holi gahi mare kol ho ke kihan laga " hor phir koi kudi set kiti ki nahi" main os de gal sun us val dekhan laga kio ki is to pihla ajahi koi v gal sade dona ch nahi hoi c. 
main kiha " aah ki kah rahe oo tusi" 
harry kihda " sahi he ta kah reha hun tu vada ho gia te body v changi bani aaje hun ne kise kudi nal gal kare ga ta phir kado kare "

mainos de gal sun ke gang gia te kiha " mainu ni lod kuch v karan de " main sochan laga veer tanu kuch dasa mera dil kina karda mare kise kudi nal gal hove te main os nu pyar kara te os de fuddi mara. 
harry kihda " chal tari marji aa je kise nal hoi ta mainu das davi ta ki bad ch koi panga na hove"
os de gal sun ke main han ch sir hila ta. main os nu kuch puchan hi laga c ke mummy ne kiha ki roti ban gai aa sab n kih ke aa ke roti kha lain main sab nu bulan chala gia. pihla dad nu taiya ji nu dada ji nu harry T pihla hi niche c. main uper aai te apniyan bheana nu roti da kiha te last ch inder nu roti lai bulan chla gia. os da room sab to bad ch ounda c. mariyan sariyan bheana niche ja chukiya c sirf inder nu chad ke. omain os de kamre kol gia ta os da door khula hi c. hale main room ch vadan hi laga c ki main dawaje te hi ruk gia kio ki ander inder apne bed te bund uper nu kar ke srane te kitab rakh ke pad rahi c. 

main os nu dekhan laga oh raat vale kapre pa ke pad rahi c. os de bahar nu nikli hoi bund dekh ke mainu swad oun lga te mera dil kar da c hune java te is da lower inche kar te osde ote pai ke is de chudai kar dava. mera lun khad c te main lower de uto hi os nu hila reha c. kuch der bad jad mainu laga ki je hun main niche na gia ta koi v uper aa sakda. main apne lun nu apne lower ch set kar ke inder de bed kol ja ke kiha " didi niche tuhanu sare roti lai odik rahe aa te tusi ithe ho"
inder ne mare val muh gumake dekiya te kiha " tu chal main hune aaune aa"main niche aa gia te kiha "didi aa rahi aa oh fresh hon lage c." mari gal sun ke sab roti khan lage te main v apne kursi te aa ke beth gia. kuch der bad inder didi niche aai te mari samne vali kursi te beth gai te roti khan lai. par aaj ohna de kapre thik san. mainu badi harani hoi par assi roti kadi te apne-2 room ch chle gae. aal koi v mare room ch nahi aaiya sare apne-2 room ch hi chale gae. 

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